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529723 No.529723 [Reply] [Original]

What is up with the writing for Tsukihime? Is this really an accurate translation?

>> No.529728

No Shiki, you are the tomato.

>> No.529731

lol Nasu

>> No.529735

It's already like that.
Just as Anonymous writes a troll post with no thought... for Nasu, Tsukihime is no different from a troll post.
If he finds us...

>> No.529737
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529737

Since the earlier thread had a /v/ cross-reference, I would just like to say that when I read this, I wondered if he was going to attack her weak point for MASSIVE DAMAGE!

>> No.529745

But tomatoes are delicious.

>> No.529750
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529750

I wonder if Nasu has a serious practical knowledge of cannibalism

>> No.529752

>>529723
It's really that shitty, but in a way it's strangely endearing.

>> No.529764
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>>529723
Yeah, I constantly thought I was misreading the dialog

Pic related, this was completely out of character and just downright wierd.

>> No.529778

>>529764
It fit the situation though. Shiki's serious and so is Ciel, but she's a stubborn ox, so he hit her with something desperate to show his desperation.

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>>529723
lol, tomato people

>> No.529783

>>529752
>strangely endearing

It really is; it's not like really bad fanfiction but rather like something really unique. Some parts are still just retarded though.

>> No.529787

>>529737

Attack the ear for MASSIVE DAMAGE

>> No.529788

>>529778
So you can really use a threat to rape someone as a negotiation tool? I'll have to try that sometime...

>> No.529794

>>529788
Results may vary.
For the lulz, try it on a nun.

>> No.529799
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>>529794

What if the nun turns out to be Karen?

>> No.529802

>>529794
I read that as
>For the lulz, try it on a man.


But nun works too, I suppose.

>> No.529806

>>529799
It would work.

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>>529799
Then you're one lucky son of a bitch.

>> No.529811

I thought it was even worse in FSN though it could have been the fault of the translator.

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>>529799
She is too pure for that.

>> No.529821

>>529816
HA HA HA

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>>529816

>> No.529826

>>529750

I just noticed, Akiha has a really LONG neck

>> No.529829

>>529811
I thought it was significantly less fucked up dialog in Fate/Stay Night. Although he uses the "if ______ is like a _______, then ______ is like a ________" about every three lines in Fate/Stay Night

>> No.529831

>>529826

I can't unsee, and now it's creepy me out and reminding me of Yume Nikki.

>> No.529832

>>529826
angles and proportions.
In b4 long-neck Akiha.

>> No.529839

>>529829
The dialogs were less fucked up but in a way they were really bland and insipid. Tsukihime may have been stupid but it was fun to read, I had trouble finishing FSN because of the writing though

>> No.529849

>>529839

I have trouble finishing FSN because everything takes so fucking long. Awesome, another ten minute lecture by Rin on the minutiae of magic. At this point, I've stopped caring. If Rin's voice didn't give me a boner (especially when she says desho) I'd be falling asleep. I love reading books but god damn let's move this shit along.

>> No.529850

>>529826
I think it's about as long as Ciel's neck, it's just that her hair and the cut of her uniform make it look longer.

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>> No.529852

>>529839
They're both really good but I liked FS/N's scenario a lot more

>> No.529860

>>529752
This hits the nail on the head for me. It's like the guy didn't care if it got a little weird sometimes, so high was his enthusiasm. It really is like (the good kind) of fanfiction like that. Unpolished but full of charm.

>> No.529862

>>529849
I preferred the magic lectures over "lol, Nasu porn writing"

>> No.529867

>>529862
I would have been fine without both.

>> No.529868

>>529862
Yeah, important plot points happen in just a couple lines, but we get to read about "red flowers violating white flowers" for a half-hour

>> No.529879

I dunno. I think Fate is awesome. But Tsukihime was my first and I like it. The hscenes in Tsukihime were more amusing too. Like suppressing Roa in Ciel's ass...and mollusks!

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>>529826
long neck is loooooong

>> No.529891

>>529879
I laughed about "as if she were playing a flute" for about an hour. Also thought "she's not here to make delicous food, or to play a card game" was hilarious.

I guess you're right, H in FS/N is just uncomfortable, at least it's funny in Tsukihime.

>> No.529892

>>529879
Mollusks only in Kagetsu Tohya.

>> No.529903

>>529881

NOTHING ESCAPES AKIHA'S LINE OF SIGHT.

>> No.529904

i liked the premise of F/SN better than tsukihime (heroes of old all summoned with super powers to fight in a deathmatch? Fuck yes!) but i liked tsukihime's plot better.

Nasu tried to write F/SN like tsukihime, which is like trying to write an action movie like a drama.

>> No.529916

>>529881

Up periscope, I'm sick of looking at mollusks all day.

>> No.529920
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529920

I think stabbing hobos is hilarious

>> No.529928

>>529881

LONGAKIHA IS LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG

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>>529904
My biggest shock from reading FS/N and then Tsukihime...

In Tsukihime NO ONE DIES WHEN THEY ARE KILLED!

>> No.529946

>>529849
Is there an upload of just the voice elements from RN?

>> No.529966

>>529946
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=hr7u9md0
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=e6h0zapg

/rs/, motherfucker. Use it.

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>>529966
Felt like having someone else do it.
Thanks though, have some Akiha.

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529988

Did I hear somebody say Tomatos?

>> No.530226

In b4 saber riding a banana.

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