/jp/'s VN project

[Anonymous No.]

Old thread >>4936268

Working title: Warehouse

Images.
Gallery: http://m810.photobucket.com/albums/Anon02/jp VN Gallery/

Music & sounds.
http://www.box.net/shared/bz4yx94trs

Plot drafts.
http://jpproject.pastebin.com/AynpVqUd

Easymodo archives.
4922639
4924300
4930097
4932413
4936268
4938558
4943277

Project sites.
http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1/index.php?topic=321.0
http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1chan/o/
http://bunbunmaru.com/kareha/projects/kareha.pl/1271816205/l50

Characters.
Protagonist: Hiki/NEET, late twenties, parents died, inheritance is running out and forced into a situation with nothing left to lose.
Lucetta: Church girl, light hair, dark skin, green eyes, rich family, snobbish but means well, pantyhose, has secret fetishes, mediterranean or itallian descent (American).
Nina: Drawfag /jp/girl, DEM HIPS, DAT ASS, flat, OCD?, train otaku, doujin artist, baggy clothes, brown hair, blue eyes, English/French descent(American).
Support cast: Undecided, possibly includes Chisame (black or blonde hair, asian, twin tails, girly trap), Chris (school friend), Alexis (reverse trap), dakimakura, onahole.

Story.
Routes: Just stick to the two heroines for now. Nina and Lucetta. Possibly trap, NTR, harem routes in the future.
Story summary: Protag is a NEET with nothing left to lose. His parents died, money running out, starts an ill-fated VN company in an abandoned warehouse. Young nun-in-training from a rich family tries to help him in the name of god, possible NTR. /jp/girl joins him to make the worst VN ever, along with other bros.

Engines?
http://onscripter.denpa.mobi/ ONScripter?
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=23R1JNES Renpy?
http://www.mediafire.com/?zkhqke2ixqy other?

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

She's pretty sexy, I'll give you that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4947927
Less stupid and normal fag ideas this time please.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

[Shanker No.]

AH! Good. I was wandering around in this....spam mess, and looking for this. What the hell happened, /b/ throw a fit, or Anon/talk get some new spam bots?

[Anonymous No.]

sage

[Anonymous No.]

>>4947987
Keep it sage, thanks.

[Anonymous No.]

I'd like to see SICP, that snake, and The Sussman play a part in this... somehow.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948014
Me too, but fucking sage next time.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

Hey guys, I'm actually here because I heard there was a raid going on. Anyway I'm a grade 8 piano player so if you guys need me to do music I can

[Anonymous No.]

[Shanker No.]

Anyway, here's what I got saved, on the girls.

>Nina used to be a total weeaboo and made her own doujin, which were probably pretty well-drawn but were exactly what you'd expect from a twelve year old girl just getting into anime. She probably cooled down with the weeaboo tendencies, and for the most part does not admit to them, although if an obsuce joke is used, she might catch it and not be able to hold back a laugh. Became a train otaku. Her apartment is covered in model train track and they run everywhere, around furniture and over objects, but she can navigate around them even in the dark.
>She could be kind of artistic but hesitant to draw anything lately. When she was younger, she could have been a weeaboo and tried to make her own doujins, but they clearly failed and it's her secret shame now. Is GOOD at drawing, however, it was what you can imagine a 13 year old that just got into anime making.
>The protag can go to her apartment/other living space at some point and step on something before she flicks the lights on, and when he looks down he realizes he stepped on model train tracks. They're set up everywhere in her apartment and are constantly running. Knows the setup intimately, can traverse the room even when exhausted and the room is dark.
>Mild body issues, is not fond the fact she has dat ass, and tends to dress in bulky clothing to hide the fact.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948014
ｷﾀ━━━━━━(ﾟ∀ﾟ)━━━━━━ !!!!!

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

[Shanker No.]

>1. Lucetta is somewhat insane with the whole "God" thing after she was rejected by the church so many times. She acts individually in the name of God, recruiting homeless people to carry out her "will of the god". She refers herself as a priestess/servant of the god. She carries around a hard covered "holy book" --- the texts inside, however, are all written by her. Wears a chasity belt.

>Can she be a troll then? She'd tease MC sexually all the time, but then show him the chastity belt and be like "oh, too bad".

>I don't think this at all. I mean she just uses a chastity belt to avoid any temptation to sin. It's not like anyone here has a fetish for a chastity belt, I think it just fits her character. She is devoted to her religion, so it only makes sense that she would take these precautions.

>The trolling idea works. Would not do anything, unless was hit on, and the trolling is punishment for "Impure thoughts".

>Fanatic, but, SLIGHTLY unstable. You have to be a bit off to do something like this. It's nothing even close to yandere nonsense, or anything like that. But, to have such a drive, she's not fully playing with a full deck.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

Hey guys, I heard about this cool new VN called Katawa Shoujo. You should check it out.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948014
>>4948093
Does anyone have that Magical Girl Sussman image from one of the drawthreads?

That should be added.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948142
For all the hate it gets, KS might be pretty good when they release something that's not a demo (if that ever happens).

[Anonymous No.]

By the way, I left it out of the status report due to character limit. But last thread was atrociously pointless except for maybe the concept for Lucetta. We can still bounce around ideas but accept that some things are loosely set in stone, like Lucetta NOT having black hair and pale skin. Suggestions like that are dumb and keep things from progressing. Lets try using this time around to organize and centralizing our resources better so we can fit it all into STATUS REPORT's of new threads.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948065
No. Get out of /jp/ and stop being lolsorandom.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948147
I have some screenshots of the fake SICP VN, and some /prog/ & /jp/ flockdraw caps. No magical girl Sussman though.

[Anonymous No.]

[Shanker No.]

Well, I went ahead and tossed in what we DO have. Most of it's not set in stone, but, it's all good ideas that people liked from the deleted thread.

Ah, damnit. Don't have a part, an important part. Nina has her own room in the warehouse due to paying extra to Lucy, like 20% of her pay, where everyone else gives 10%. She has like the old break-room or something.

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

We lost the other threads, but one of them involved Nina being renamed as Nilda, Alexis as a short girl with a braided ponytail (think of Ed from Full Metal Alchemist, but red haired and a reverse trap instead). I'm thinking of giving her a sleeveless vest to hide her breasts. She should be two years older than Lucetta (if we set Lucetta as 16, she'll be 18; Lucetta as 19, she'll be 21). Still want to change Lucetta's hair color...

[Shanker No.]

Well, I went ahead and tossed in what we DO have. Most of it's not set in stone, but, it's all good ideas that people liked from the deleted thread.

Ah, damnit. Don't have a part, an important part. Nina has her own room in the warehouse due to paying extra to Lucy, like 20% of her pay, where everyone else gives 10%. She has like the old break-room or something.>>4948269

[None !Rom/nRRrOI No.]

>>4948269
Nilda sounds weird, but that is fine I guess.

I do prefer the white hair for Lucetta, but looking at that pic all the other hair colors seem nice as well.

[Shanker No.]

>>4948269

I'm..going to say, Nilda is not a good name.

If we want to stick with an N name, give me a moment, I can find something fitting. If we wanna change it more the that, I could find something that REALLY suits her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948200
The warehouse idea is based on the original thread's OP. If you haven't read that one then you should take the time to get a better idea. The idea that Churchgirl/Karen (who she was based off) is some extortionist who owns a warehouse came later. I think it's kind of a silly idea and doesn't make much sense.

The problem with all these ideas is that they're spread through many threads, lost between all the spam, where people miss them while they sleep and stuff. It would be handy if some of us took it upon ourselves to pick out the actual information in all the past and future threads so we can reference links to the collected information.

Lucy renting out space in a warehouse is an infantile plot hook. We should ground our ideas in things that make more sense and selectively include the more far out stuff. The original thread presented a few gritty ideas of basically living homeless somewhere and starting a company.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

Also, might as well. Tripping up for this.

>>4948269

Outside of the name change, everything else is good. I DO like the idea of a reverse, it could be a bit of a non-route plot-point.


Also, did the spamming stop? Yay on Mideo, if it did.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948269
Rename her Nvidia and have her wear woodscrews in her hair.

[Anonymous No.]

Stop posting this shit already its not even related to /jp/

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948299

I've been here since the start. It's an evolution of the idea that she just does not want to move anywhere else, she kinda likes living in the warehouse. But, dislikes anyone messing with her trains, it's the OCD part of her. So, she cut a deal with Lucy, where she gets more money, and she's got a place for her train-sets.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948289

A new name for Nilda/Nina, huh?

...I have an idea if you're interested. <｀∀´ >

[Anonymous No.]

All the gallery pictures aren't resizing right.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948289
Nada
Nils
Nell
Naomi
Natasha
Nova
Nozomi
Nyla
Nyx

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948269
See, this is what I'm talking about. Nilda. Don't do that. People go to sleep and the whole thing changes overnight, that's no good to anyone. Churchgirl has been visually set in stone from the first thread, everyone loved it, developed sketches and concept art for it, even good quality stuff. Don't go suddenly changing it just because someone in a later thread liked black hair instead.

Changing stuff like that just isn't productive at all.

[Anonymous No.]

GET OUT WAREHOUSE DEVS

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948330
This.

[Anonymous No.]

Seriously, Lucetta is a horrible name.
It sounds like 'cunt' in portuguese.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948269
Nina sounded fine to me, what was wrong with it? I don't really like having another Italian name unless we're actually going to set this in Italy or something.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948360
I see no problem with that, if you get what I mean. *wink wink* *nudge nudge*

[The Lion !!TTybTuPPZGf No.]

Still looking for contributors, if any of you fags are interested.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

Going to copy/paste names and meanings.
Just N's for the moment.


Nadalia Born On Christmas
Nanette Gracious -French
Naomi Delightful - Pleasant
Narcisse Daffodil-French
Natalie To Be Born
Normandy Provence In France
Nicole Victory Of The People

Want me to do things other then N?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948368
Nina is fine. Some people just want to change everything every six hours.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948335

I ah, can't read moonrunes.

[Anonymous No.]

The least you could do is to stop calling it /jp/'s VN project like /jp/ actually gives a shit about your personal hobby project.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948341
Nadia
Nadine
Narcissa
Natalie
Natalia
Natasha
Natica
Neda
Neena
Nina
Neola
Nevada
Neysa
Nia
Nicole
Nikita
Nikky
Nira
Nita
Noel (Noell? Noelle? Best one I found imho.)
Nora
Norah

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948377
Nvidia The Way It's Meant To Be Played

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948401
The least you could do is stop speaking for /jp/ like all of /jp/ has the same opinion as you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948418
This. I support those guys' effort. Even if the story concept is shit.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948401
It spawned on /jp/, it's being made by /jp/ers, and it's /jp/-related. I don't see why it shouldn't be called for what it is.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948341
>>4948414
>>4948377

Personaly fond of Naomi, Normandy, and Nadine, for all that matters.

[Anonymous No.]

What does the MC look like and where does this take place?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948437
He looks like Putin and it takes place in the Soviet Union

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948431
That's nice, but her name is still Nina, ok?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948431
Naomi and Nadine sound alright, but lol Normandy? Come on, at this rate every other character is going to have a quirky name.
But really, I think Nina is just fine.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948442
Excellent.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948450

Just throwing in my vote if it DOES change. I see nothing wrong with Nina, but...no, just no on Nilda.

[Anonymous No.]

>These threads
Ahahahhahhahahahahhha.

Don't stop /jp/. Don't ever stop.

[Anonymous No.]

>>Nevada

This, it has to be Nevada. It's not as ostentatiously otaku but is a reference to someone dear to us.

[None !Rom/nRRrOI No.]

So who here actually has a problem with Nina? And why?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948479
I do. Names that start with "n" all suck.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948457

Was thinking of it being an annoyance to her, really.

"Wait, your name is Normandy? Like the ship?"

"YES, LIKE THE SHIP."

It's also a French name, and, well, she's an English and French mixer. Parents wanted something fancy, and did not think it through.

Possibly shorthands it as Andy, or Mandy.

But, like I said, votes only applys IF we decide to change it, Nina is fine with me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948428

Because no one will take you seriously if you do so.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948482
just like nvidia amirite

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948492
Did I accidentally click /g/?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948488
No one takes anything seriously here.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948488

This.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948503

.... And this makes you believe /jp/ will make something that matters?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948499
'sup IN elite

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948518
Matters? What, as in think we are going to get into eroscape top 100 with this or something? This is just a project for fun mostly, and to pass the time for us otherwise mostly unproductive NEETs. When you take things too seriously, you get shit like KS and all those other uncompleted VNs lost into the abyss - and the bitter feelings that come with them

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948428 It spawned on /jp/
This is the only thing it has to do with /jp/ and anyone with half a fucking brain would've then gone and made a forum or something dedicated to it instead of shitposting in /jp/

[Anonymous No.]

>It spawned on /jp/
So did KS and we don't want those devs here either

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

We'll drop the Nina name issue for now, call her artist girl/train girl for now if her name is still a problem. We gotta look more into character designs first.

1. As previously mentioned, Alexis is a red haired reverse trap with long braided ponytail (think of Ed from FMA). Sleeveless vest to hide her breasts, least educated but strongest among the group. She is possibly blood related to Chris, as she and Chris both share the same hair and eye colors (hazel). Anything we want to add to her in terms of personality, hobby and/or appearance?

2. Chisame is a blonde twin tail with white ribbons, yellow eyes, sailor top/barrier skirt thingy. Not much is known about her except that she's a trap.

3. Chris. Some guy wanted to change his name, and I'm all up for suggestions. He's red haired and hazel eyed like Alexis, but that's all we have about him. I'm considering giving him a scuffle beard and short ponytail.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948601
Get the fuck out faggot

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948539
The fact you think this will actually be completed is cute.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948573
>So did KS
Your newfag is showing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948610
No, I definitely know the chances are pretty slim, but like I said, if you don't put too much emotional commitment to it right now, it won't be that frustrating even if so.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948612
I know things you don't because you weren't there = I'm the newfag

rofl so pathetic

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948625
>I know things you don't because you weren't there = I'm the newfag
Well, yeah that's pretty much it. If you weren't a newfag, you'd know what KS existed before long before /jp/ was even conceived.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948625
ah fakeposts

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4948609
If I draw you a nude picture of Lucetta/Nina/Alexis... and/or maybe even the trap Chisame, will you change your mind and support our cause?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948612
/a/ back then was technically /jp/+[a/

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948640
No.

Also, get out.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948640
>Thinks drawing pictures magically makes him a convincing fag.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948640
Wow trying to bribe people into liking you? Get the fuck out on the double.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948657
/a/ back then was very different from /jp/ now. You can't really compare the two.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948640
>I... if I do you you'll like me?
slut

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4948669
>>4948673
If porn and sex can influence a man, I don't see why hentai/ecchi picture can't influence a /jp/er. You guys sound rather tsundere by the way.

[poorwriter !!pj3Z/r7DsKo No.]

Ignore the trolls you idiots.

Sage your posts and just discuss crap, bump it every now and then for the few people that care about the project.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948696
Trust me, there's no dere lost between us.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948696
>Oh you don't like sluts well you're just dumb and gay
Get the fuck out attention whore

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948696
Sure, but then again you're not that good an artist.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948696
Fuck off you pathetic piece of shit

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948601

I like the idea of them being family, that's a good tie in. (Sorry, just got back in, life called).

I'd say, shorter hair for Chris, but, scruff is good.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948742
Kill yourself

[Anonymous No.]

I'm frankly impressed by the trolls. They're giving way more effort than the people actually trying to do something. You take this pretty seriously, huh?

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948747

Maybe I should...nah. Got work to do. You could, in my place, though<3

[JADF !!6tpBb2eiZKs No.]

Nina...or whatever she is called.

[Windows 2000 professionalcat No.]

>>4947927
>dem hips
>dat ass
>flat chest

OHGODWAT

That will look awkward as fuck. DFC is rail thin if done properly, not much of an ass or hips to be heard of.

Nilda is a retarded name, go die in a thousand fires. go with Nina or Naomi if it must be a N name.

Also, make the "Chris" guy your friend from elementary who talks all kinda shit when its just you guys, but is deathly afraid of girls. Name him Ben, and make him a huge otaku of some sort (not necessarily a weeaboo, but having some sort of ridiculous obsession that makes him quirky and amusing)

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948770

Eyes should be a touch narrower, but, my gods, those fucking hips.

Nice. Very nice.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948793

Amusingly....look right above you. Works rather well, yes?

[Windows 2000 professionalcat No.]

also, does this have to reek of weeabo- oh wait this is /jp/. Damn, I was hoping there would be a VN that wasnt set in GRORIOURS NIPPON for once.

[Anonymous No.]

Why is Novelty suddenly an engine consideration? It has a niche - small, young groups and small projects. If you want to make anything of length, you want to be typing, not clicking and dragging for each line/action/movement/etc.

Then again, maybe the amount of unskilled drudgery that's required shouldn't be a problem here.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948657
Go back to /a/ now. You guys already made some shitty little demo game about disabled girls.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948802

It..it's NOT set in Japan.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948601
Maybe Chris and Alexis both live inside the warehouse? Story here needs a lot of work. Got kind of stupid at >starts an ill-fated VN company in an abandoned warehouse

I probably wouldn't play it unless it had good h-scenes.

[Windows 2000 professionalcat No.]

>>4948801
eh.. better than it could have been, but still looks likes shes a matroshka doll or something.

Also Novelty does work, I made a short 10minute demo segment because me and some friends were tossing around the idea of making a VN about all the drama in a certain chatroom we were in.

Nobody was willing to make sprites though so the project was canned after only a few hours of work, and a few days of asking for someone to do the character art.

I would reccomend Ren'py or something else though as >>4948807
said, clicking and such works well if you are planning on making it no longer than the KS demo, but longer work needs a better engine.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948826
>making a VN about all the drama in a certain chatroom we were in.
Get out.

[Windows 2000 Professionalcat No.]

>>4948813
seifuku, traps, anime haircolors, this reeks of japponaise.

also if its not set in japan, you really should go back to /a/.... or possibly /v/

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948818
The H-scenes will be so good you'll want to vomit.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948818
Makes it sound like they're hobos. Maybe they're a brother and sister or something? I dunno lol

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948818

The people live in the warehouse because Lucy has snatched them off the streets. They had no place to live, for various reasons.

[Windows 2000 Professionalcat No.]

>>4948828
it was a fucking joke. People laughed, some demanded a cameo, but nothing ever came of it besides a few minutes long intro scene I did to see if Novelty was worth a damn. I honestly don't know what the fuck I would have done if someone had agreed to do artwork for it.

Possibly asked for more people to help I suppose.

[Anonymous No.]

Most of the names sound pretty Western. Can it NOT take place in GLORIOUS NIPPON please?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948848

>>4948813

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948793

>Dem Hips
>Dat Ass
>Flat Chest

You REALLY find this arkward? It's uncannily common, just not in America.

[Anonymous No.]

Which platforms are planned to be supported?

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948848

Goddamnit. It IS set in 'merka. This has been gone over.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948845
Get out now.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948880

Uh...well, I was guessing windows for sure. I'm not familiar with macs, at all.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948886
All right that's it we have to change the location to America right now.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948866
Then where does it take place? Fingers crossed for Eastern US. Preferably in the area labeled the foundry as abandoned warehouses are in good supply there.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948871

More's the shame.....

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948912
>Fingers crossed for Eastern US.
oh boy i hope this fictional game takes place in my area

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948908

Change it? I was under the impression that it had always been planed for there. My bad.

>>4948912

Well, I know Virginia pretty well, so, if we chose there, I can dig up some real life stuff for you guys.

[Windows 2000 Professionalcat No.]

so how many people are on the project team? who is doing what? Who is writing that... thing you call a plot?

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948770

Oh! Before it utterly slips my mind. Could we get a side and back view for her, please?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948912
I live in NYC, I can take pictures of the warehouse districts. No nighttime shots though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948900
The reason being that one engine works on Windows/Mac/Linux. Another also about on more stuff and requires more work for custom stuff. An easy looking engine works only on Windows and probably doesn't support special character encoding. Making an engine from scratch requires more work but solves limitations and will be easier to add better effects and customizations seamlessly, but making it crossplatform will be a bitch.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948944

Dunno, people are just gathering ideas at the moment, it's three days old at the moment, and we have one guy tossing out drafts, nothing even close to anything concrete.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948931
Find some bridges MC can jump off of.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948944
A bunch of anons and handful of tripfags. But get out of /jp/ now.

[Anonymous No.]

I really think Lucetta being crazy defeats the whole purpose of her being the church girl, since she was supposed to be this pure priestess who we corrupt and bring the crazy fetishes out of.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948952

We got a good number here in Winchester, and I can do nightshots. The warehouses are right next to the cop station, plus we don't got much issue if you stay off Kent St.

>>4948955

I'm not the programmer, I'm mainly the one poking at people to keep on topic, to help motivate, and to help with character creation, as it's a specialty of mine.

Frankly, if possible, I'd rather it be multi-platform, so we could let anyone that wants to have a crack at it.

[Windows 2000 Professionalcat No.]

>police called in for failure of payment
>no mention of a eviction notice
>police forcing him out of his place
>immediately deciding to an hero

k, this sounds like a dramacoaster.

[White Ren !YLuFFdRcFQ No.]

>>4949008
I don't know of a municipality that allows the police to force out a tenant for non-payment without an eviction notice being filed.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948931
>>4948952

Okay, good idea. I was going to ask if some could do that too. Try to take steady and level shots that can work as backgrounds for a game.

If they're any good we can use them directly as reference material.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4948984

She's only slightly unstable. Mostly, it translates into more fervor in her faith.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948955
Well, I doubt many people use Mac or Linux (exclusively) here on /jp/, so that shouldn't be too big of a problem. And really, what do you need special characters for? I doubt anyone will bother translating this to another language, and certainly we don't need to put silly Japanese emoticons in the script.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4948360

Jesus fucking christ, you have no idea on how much I laughed upon realizing this. Fuck you Anon.

Polite sage for shitty comment.

[Windows 2000 Professionalcat No.]

>>4949017
I can see this being hilarious japanese Catholocism, or the game being subliminally trying to get you to convert if you take the Lucetta path

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>>4948360
>>4949019
BR?
Cause I know no fine Portuguese gentlemen would post on /jp/.

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>>4949008

/jp/ projects are hated because they're written by terrible writers.

Successful projects are written by experienced writers with weaboo tendencies, not the other way around.

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>>4949017
Carrying around a holy book she wrote herself and cockteasing is as far removed from "pure nun that you taint" as can be.

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>>4949017
She's on the edge and the MC gives the final push. Choice of direction is of course up to the player.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4949025

Humm. The idea for her route is to slowly ground her more into reality, as you are around her more, rather then being "all god, all the time'. We were thinking of more normal Catholocism.

[Anonymous No.]

i can do voice acting. mail me

[Anonymous No.]

Hey guys what'd I miss?

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>>4948984
At her age there's not much she can actually do for the church except volunteer work, and it's not like your average church goes out of its way to do much except help at a homeless kitchen once in a while. She doesn't seem crazy, she's just an over achiever compared to whatever local apathetic church is in the area.

I can't really explain this for you though.
>carries around a hard covered "holy book" --- the texts inside, however, are all written by her.

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>>4949058
The original idea was that she'd be an orphan raised by the church i.e. she was always part of the system.

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>>4949037
Weeaboo writers with... experienced tendencies?

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4949042

Cockteasing to punish you for having impure thoughts about her. She wears a chastity belt, that's how far she's going to insure her own purity. There is a lot to corrupt.

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Shiki would kill her chastity belt then rape her savagly.

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>>4949067

I was implying "weaboos who write from time to time but don't have any real skill"

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>>4949054
You need to leave an email address first.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4949058

Oh, that. It's more after her "split with the church", she modded some of the text to better suit how she feels things should go. It's not crazy talk.

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>>4949067
Experienced weeaboos with writer tendencies?

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>>4949085
That's not how being a devout fanatic works. You don't edit the text, you change the interpretation.

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>>4949081
just messing around, if I had a mic I would do it though

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>>4949079
>>4949067
>>4949037

Seconding this, to an extent. It's true, most western fags who try to make VNs have AT MOST only written shitty fanfiction.

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>>4949099
>>4949081
also there's only one male character and they're generally not voiced... sucks to be a male huh.

[Anonymous No.]

Where is Dandy Girl's writer? He said he surfs /jp/ neurotically, so I imagine he's watching this shit go down.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4949096

Hence the slightly crazy. The core beliefs are all there. She's just changed other bits, to suit her more hands on approach, AKA nabbing hobos and trying to force them to better themselves.

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>>4949096
Sounds like she's starting her own cult when you put it that way.

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>>4949116
But see that's the thing: a fanatic WOULDN'T do that, they'd just find something in the text and interpret it in a way that supports their actions/ideas.

[Shanker !!pLB+3CKYKT2 No.]

>>4949129
>>4949121

Suggestions ARE welcome. I'm less familiar with organized religions then I should be, anyway.

The main thing we are trying to do is make her slightly off kilter, but truly trying to help people. Just...going about it in a mildly insane manner.

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>>4949121
I like where this is going...

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>>4949169
See I still think the whole angle is wrong. Have her be some church-raised orphan whose just REALLY devout and goes WAY beyond the call of duty, even ignoring her superiors in instances where she thinks she can help.

That could be part of the plot: she tries to get our shut-in hero to come out of his apartment (cut out or extend the eviction thing so that when it starts you have a certain amount of time before you end up homeless).

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>>4949112
see
>>4948376

I think he's trying to start his own group/project thing.

[Anonymous No.]

So, how about Nina's character development? Or was that already settled on.

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>>4949214
Nina is rather overshadowed by Lucetta.

[Anonymous No.]

Oh snap, did Meido-san strike this down.

[Anonymous No.]

404
FFFFUUUUUUUUU

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>>4949218,1
>>4949218,2
Give up this pathetic project and stop bumping it over to here.

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>>4949218,3
Give up on this pathetic trolling and go do something more worthwhile

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>>4949218,4
No one is going to play your stupid game. Stop wasting your time please.

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>>4949218,5
>Stop wasting your time please
...

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>>4949218,6
Yes, that's what I said.