/jp/ - Otaku Culture

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

/jp/'s VN Project! Old one reaching the bump limit.

Basic Plot Intro: Our MC graduated from high school fine, only 1 true friend made though (Chris). He had high aspirations in life, applied to many schools but his parents died and left him depressed/NEET and a lot of money. He continued to mooches off parent's money for many years till he runs out of money and became homeless. He wandered around the streets like a hobo for a months and was close to planning on killing himself. Luckily, a church girl spotted him, and takes him to a homeless shelter (warehouse) where he meets other homeless people. Initially, he is still a moocher, but as he interacts with other characters, he begins to change and help "work" for his meals.
Script draft: http://jpproject.pastebin.com/AynpVqUd
Music collection: http://www.box.net/shared/bz4yx94trs
Characters: Nina (homeless artist), Lucetta (church girl), Alexis (homeless reverse trap), Chris (high school friend, homeless), Chisame (homeless trap)
Routes: Nina, Lucetta, Harem
Ends: Nina (Good), Lucetta (Good), Harem (Good), Bad ends
Project site: http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1/index.php?topic=321.0

[Anonymous No.]

no.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943274
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[A certain Anonymous that lives in Bangkok No.]

Draw drill ojousamas and we'll talk.

[Anonymous No.]

Who decided his friend's name was Chris? That sounds so lame

Who suggested the homeless/hobo idea? I was pitching a hobo VN last year and am glad something similar has been worked into this story

[Anonymous No.]

The one on the bottom left of OP looks a lot like Saya.

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4943235
>at least you got the right kind of skirt now, is she supposed to look like a child?
I don't know about others, but I'd say she's younger than the rest of the cast. I'm just gonna say she's 19.

[A certain Anonymous that lives in Bangkok No.]

BTW remove this part
>but as he interacts with other characters, he begins to change and help "work" for his meals.

real men don't regret in his life.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943291
>drill ojousamas
You read the character basis did you?

[Anonymous No.]

make the chick in the pic (lucetta?) blonde by very light blond and with grey eyes.

that is all.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943299
If that is 19 I'ld love to see 16 or younger people in this world

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4943294
It was suggested in one of the previous threads, and I just picked it up since no one suggested any other names. Provide us one, and we'll change it.
>>4943291
If we need to add more characters, I'll be sure to bring that up.

[Anonymous No.]

I wish they would redray the trap, the legs and face is awful

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943310
they are still in college?
DRILL haired teacher? lol

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4943307
Originally I wanted her to be 16, but a lot of people were like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Also, you haven't see the original version of the pic have you? She's even more younger looking before I edited.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943315
Drill-haired tsundere teacher would be hilarious.

"A-anyway, i-it's not like I'm telling you because I l-like you or anything, but those c-certainly will be in your exams! "

[A certain Anonymous that lives in Bangkok No.]

>>4943328
The new design looks better probably just because the skirt.

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4943315
We can probably end the story with the MC going back to school/back on track, and the professor that's partly shown is your drillhair ojousama.

[Anonymous No.]

Every character needs a route you faggots.

[Anonymous No.]

the title of this VN is pretty gay "is it fate?"
should be something kickass like Hobo Complex woo

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943328
I was thinking of the aura of the http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1chan/o/src/127190079122.png was nice

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[ZUN !barYV1VtIA No.]

>>4943294
I mentioned your old post in the previous threads. Still want that hobo VN along with the loli satan VN.

[A certain Anonymous that lives in Bangkok No.]

>>4943341
>go back to school

what a fag

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943347
That's the prologue in house script name, there is not title right now, we refer to the VN as a whole as "Warehouse"

[Anonymous No.]

I dunno man, it -really- sounds a lot like Welcome to the NHK: the VN.

[JADF !!6tpBb2eiZKs No.]

>>4943328
>>4943336
After I get back to home, should I fix and finish my version of the design or do we use this one instead?

[Anonymous No.]

Every time someone makes a new thread they always put an outdated shitty plot outline which just attracts trolls

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4943388
Finish your design (be sure to update it to also incorporate whatever is given here though)

>>4943348
That sketch is nice and all, but it doesn't fit her normal personality.

[Anonymous No.]

my god just get the fuck out already, at least take it to some free forum somewhere

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943428
your god has forsaken you, you're probably atheist anyway

[Anonymous No.]

how's this for character design...?

[Anonymous No.]

>Nina

Oh god damn it, why did you have to use one of my favorite names again? If I suggest some different ones, will you change it? Please.

Nicola
Nicolette
Nilda
Nixie

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943675
Go read some Andrew Loomis

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4943687
I vote for Nilda

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943675
That's a joke, right?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943692
not trying to do a realistic 50s era america fuck yeah! type of drawing

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943697
No, it's Chisame attempting to draw.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943700
You're an idiot. I'm not telling you to draw in his style. Just for god's sake, learn your anatomy.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943702
In that case, it's terrible.

[Anonymous No.]

THREAD REPORTED

[Anonymous No.]

Mugen, can you draw some guro for this? Churchgirl getting crucified or something.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943714
LOL

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943707
Who needs his shitty anatomy when you're as fabulous as me?

[Anonymous No.]

Oh look, Hikki turning into a normalfag: The VN.
I suggest you post this in more relevant boards like /r9k/ or /b/.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943730
It's further proof of how far the normalfags have infiltrated our board.

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4943730
NEET =/= Hikki. Learn to stop trolling and read.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943733
Oh look, NEET turning into a normalfag: The VN.
I suggest you post this in more relevant boards like /r9k/ or /b/.

[Anonymous No.]

I hate how our homegrown projects invariably get hijacked by tripfags and retards. We can never make anything that's truly our own.

[Anonymous No.]

This is fucking stupid, and you suck.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943737
OP is a tripfag, it was doomed from the start

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4943737
Ah yes, we've taken over a project you guys couldn't finish, and you're jealous we're making more progress than you guys ever did? Also, samefag and troll more, and keep believing it'll do anything.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943747
Wow, you sure are a moron

[:3~ !RAKiSUtaAA No.]

>>4943747
Haha. Faggot.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943747
It will do something. If we managed to get rid of KS spam and /jp/ project shit, we will at least make you stop shitting /jp/ with your random oelvn.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943756
Don't forget Mugen

[Anonymous No.]

Oh great, here comes the sametroll. It's pretty obvious you know when your posts are so far apart from eachother.

[Anonymous No.]

You realise your resistance only makes us stay here longer.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943756
You didn't manage to get rid of KS they just didn't want the /jp/ label because they think that they are better, that's why they cut off all ties.

We aren't like them.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943780
Why not? /a/ is better, go spam there.

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

Getting back on track. We've fleshed out personality and appearance of Lucetta and Nilda (Nina) a bit, we should flesh out Alexis (reverse trap), Chisame (trap) and Chris (homeless bro/temp name) next.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943827
so what kind of build for alexis? Plz don't say large and muscular

[Anonymous No.]

Go to some free forum instead faggots

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943277
They're all leaning to the right and are slouching.

[Messy Drawfriend !!nfKAmpyuH0U No.]

>>4943854
Alexis is probably like pretty short and flat. I'm thinking about giving her a braided ponytail that reaches her stomach (not really that long if you consider her height). She's rather strong for her size, able to easily overpower our MC in strength (then again, our MC probably doesn't get enough exercises). She's probably the least educated one in the warehouse, and usually does majority of the hard labor/choirs around the warehouse. If Lucetta is 16, then she would be 18. If Lucetta is 19, she'd be 21.

[Anonymous No.]

i for one think chi's failed attempts at drawing are moe

[Anonymous No.]

[None !NACK.rrrr. No.]

pretty good I guess

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

[その目、だれの目？ !wAzFXC96SU No.]

>>4943277
Fuck. They're all so cute. The only ones I don't like are the green and the blue ones. Everything else is awesome.
>>4944338
It is pretty fucking good. At least /jp/ is making some original content. I'm proud of /jp/ already.

[その目、だれの目？ !wAzFXC96SU No.]

[Anonymous No.]

Good to see a better drawfriend is on the job. I will go back to practicing.

[その目、だれの目？ !wAzFXC96SU No.]

>>4944450
Don't get put down by the awesome drawfags. Even shitty little doodles help. We've had some pretty amateur art posted, but it all adds up.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4944462
Yeah I tossed one in there. But I'm still not content putting that kind of quality out.

[その目、だれの目？ !wAzFXC96SU No.]

>>4943827
>Alexis (reverse trap), Chisame (trap) and Chris
These are minor characters, and don't matter very much in the grand scheme of things. I wouldn't recommend bothering with them right now.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4943675
In terms of simply character design, the costume reminds me a bit of the Mangagamer mascot.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4944562
Genesis
1:1 - In the beginning God created [a/ and /jp/ 1:2 - And /jp/ was without form, and void; and darkness was upon the face of the deep. And the Spirit of God moved upon the face of the board.
1:3 - And God said, Let there be hentai: and there was hentai.
1:4 - And God saw the hentai, that it was good: and God divided the hentai from the darkness.

So MOAR hentai.

[Anonymous No.]

What the fuck happen to that original /jp/ vn forum? Go there.

>>4944430
Have you not seen any of the dead /jp/ projects?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4944683
there was no VN forum, it's just an ad infested graveyard where dead ideas go to rest

[Anonymous No.]

Will there be a Chisame end?

[Anonymous No.]

>>4944683
The /jp/ Project forums are an abomination. These people do have a place off of 4chan for their use (see project site in the OP post), but apparently they want to keep brainstorming (read: stalling) here longer.

>Have you not seen any of the dead /jp/ projects?
Many of the people interested in this are obviously new or haven't been here long. Otherwise they'd be a lot more cynical about the idea of /jp/ers making a VN together.

[Anonymous No.]

you should include nack-san and make the main character punch him in the face

[Anonymous No.]

Did this thread get deleted?

It doesn't look long enough to have aged to death.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4944750,1
I wish you guys wouldn't be so blind and realize that this is terrible in many ways.

[Anonymous No.]

>>4944750,2
They're from /a/. Don't expect much.

[Anonymous No.]

I don't see what's wrong with the plot. At least it's not a high school drama.