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Everyone's doing it, so why don't I?

A visual novel, that is.

Only the pathetically short prologue is done, but I hope you all like it. Expect the super long first chapter to be done soon.

http://www.mediafire.com/?d0my9tja2nz
It's on mediafire because megaupload is giving me problems.

>> No.459154

Forgot my trip.

I await questions, comments, answers.

>> No.459153

Waiting for someone to put it on megaupload.

>> No.459164

>Everyone's doing it

As far as I know, only Colombia here on /jp/

>> No.459163

kill yourself.

>> No.459167

>>459154
Kyonko sounds like a boy. Why are we playing as Kyonko. Fucking Kyonko will be hard whist we are Kyonko.

>> No.459170

>kill yourself.

That took longer than I thought it would.

>> No.459172

I only wish to be the little girl when the little girl is violated by other girls or traps.

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Yeah, I'll say.

>> No.459175

Megaupload:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=CLJHDI6V

>>459167
I will gladly write porn is someone draws me some CGs.

>> No.459176

Yeah kyonko reads like a sexually confused man.

>> No.459179

>>459175
You misheard me. I do not want to be playing as Kyonko recieving Haruhi's dick. Make Haruhi the mc, that way you can do something other than mirror the plot of the books.

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>> No.459188

>>459167
>>459176
I think that Kyon should sound the same in any gender.

And I plan to change some things from the original to avoid too much redundancy.

>> No.459191

Are you a girl, OP?

>> No.459204

>>459188
Your ideas are bad and you should feel bad.

>> No.459205

Kyonko is shit. Shit sux.

>> No.459203

>>459188
>I think that Kyon should sound the same in any gender.

Why? Kyonko should be tsundere, not just boring.

>> No.459226

KYONKO IS DARUDERE YOU BAKA
anyway, i was thinking of doing something like this in the shower today but then i realized i am not retarded

>> No.459228

I wish to be the little girl.
any chance you can make a Yuki path, and have a way for Yuki and Haruhi to doubleteam me?
that would be several flavors of awesome.

>> No.459254

so in a reverse harem the only thing that will change will be the colour of the penis, the girl will be the same, and maybe just maybe you will want to see the face of the guy, there is no point on that.

that will be if you centre the plot on kyon as it is on SHnY

>> No.459258

Tsundere? During my monologue that doesn't introduce any new characters?

>> No.459273

OP, you need to make the story diverge a bit. only cover the first book, and have routes for Yuki, Mikuru, and Haruhi, and the forementioned threesome. Itsuko too.
for backronds, take the RL locations of from the animoo and run them through photoshop filters.

>> No.459276

>Never believed in him. The very idea is preposterous! I only pretended to believe him to get presents! So what if I was 12 when I stopped believing? That doesn't mean I'm stupid!

etc

ps shit sux

>> No.459289

>>459276
Anon is better at this than you, tripfriend.

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>I believed that one day, I would be part of the good guys and help justice prevail.

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>> No.459305

Fuck these guys, I think it's cool. Keep going with it.

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>> No.459309

duly noted

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>> No.459327

>>459305
he probably gave up already.
I'll just hijack what he has done, I'm jotting down some routes now. I might draw a few poses for MANYUKI too.

>> No.459337

ITT one sagebombing samefag.

But yeah,I guess I'd play it if it's some sort of genderswap Haruhi VN. If it's a good one,that is.

>> No.459345

Touhou's fine and all, but the fans have got to be the worst bunch here, and that's saying something.

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>>459337
>if it's a good one

But it's not.

>> No.459355

Shit sucks

>> No.461016

My internet died so I just went to sleep.

I don't expect any praise from /jp/ (I regularly flame and troll as Anon, too) so any criticism is welcome.

And Kyonko shouldn't be a stereotypical tsundere. Maybe if I were writing a gag I would make her tsundere for Santa Claus or her school (fucking stupid), but this is Kyonko telling a story, not a Kagami or Rin doujin.

>> No.461025

>>461016
Make her tsundere for teh penorz.

>> No.461051

What are you people using to make VNs anyway? I know there's not like Visual Novel Maker 2000 or something. I'd like to fool around with making one.

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>>461051
RenPy is one; there are a few others.

http://www.renpy.org/wiki/renpy/Home_Page

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>>461056
pfffHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

but seriously, where can i buy that VN?

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>>461062
I wouldn't be suprised if there are links to the projects on the RenPy website.

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>>461065
i threw up a little in my mouth

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Shit, now I'm wanting to play some of these games.

>> No.461084

How hard is it to do the coding for a VN?

>> No.461091

>>461084
Depends; if all you want is a multiple-choice slideshow, not much.

>> No.461101

>>461091
i want to use fully animated sequences and cutscenes, with a musical score which changes with the incorporated complex weather system.
I have MSPaint and Notepad.
Will this cut it?

>> No.461102

>>461080
whut.

>> No.461103

>>461101
Drop the MSPaint; you won't need it where we are going. Notepad can store zeros, and Notepad can store ones; everything else flows naturally from there.

>> No.461104

>>461091
Ignoring the need for a non-QUALITY artist, lets say something of Tsukihime level technical complexity.

>> No.461109

Kyonko x Itsukiko lesbian scene

DO IT

>> No.461114

I'm surprised no one's ripped Tsukihime's stuff using Suzie or whatever the fuck its called and just shat out a doujin VN.

>> No.461117

>>461114
Uh...correct me if I'm wrong, but...

Aren't the majority of VNs considered doujin by nature seeing that they are DOUJINSOFT?

>> No.461123

>>461117
Make that meta-doujin then.
We can go all day.

>> No.461135

>>461117
No. Since the majority aren't being made by amateurs. The amount of doujin VN (that got any attention at all) that came out last year can almost be counted on one hand.

>> No.461144

>>461135
Doujinsoft refers to self-published games. You don't have to be an amateur for your work to be considered doujin.

>> No.461146

>>461135
Doujin refers to self-publishing, though, not any amature/professional distinction.

>> No.461248

Hey OP, im interested in your VN. Send me an email where i can download updates. I'd rather not browse JP for them. ACtually, just send me an email whenever you feel lieke it.

>> No.462485

>>461114
it's all ripped and easy to do for just about anyone.

now turning the character sprites into 32 bit pngs with alpha channels, that's more annoying since there are too much of those and i'm no good at making programs to automatize that shit.

>> No.462514

Here's a twist, make Kyonko the slider and instead have her pick up all of the ladies from the regular universe. Also have a Kyon route and a kyon no imouto route.

There, I just upgraded your VN.

>> No.462525

we should make a game about /b/ ; /jp/ and... nothing else.

>> No.462529

>>462525
>>/b/

You're retarded.

>> No.462534

The only VN that any Anon should ever work on is Katawa Shoujo.

>> No.462536

>>462529
>>/b/
>You're a retard, Anonymous-san.

There, I fixed it for you.

>> No.462542

>>462525
>/b/

It will be a box with a claw hammer and a piece of paper on the inside. On the paper it says:
INSTRUCTIONS -
1. Take hammer
2. Hit your own dick with hammer
3. Repeat until you win

>> No.462548

oh fuck. i forget there's no /b/ here.

>> No.462555

>>462548
Yeah, it died a long time ago.

>> No.462565

>>462542
done.
it hurts.
now what?

>> No.462569

>>462555
Succumbed to cancer.

>> No.462573

>>462565
did you win yet?

>> No.462579

>>462573
no. my dick hurts

>> No.462581

>>462579
Well, keep doing it until you win. Then it will all be worth it.

>> No.462588

So is this all there is? Did the tripfag give up already?

>> No.462592

>>462581
>>462579
>>462573
>>462565
>>462542
>>462525
same person?

>> No.462606

>>462592
Sorry, we're at least 2 faggots.

>> No.462607

>>462588
Nope. Still brainstorming the rest of the story and waiting for helpful criticism.

>> No.462610

>>462607
Seriously, read my suggestion >>462514

I guarantee it will be a better direction.

>> No.462658

Well, the voice does feel a pretty odd, but usually it takes a few more thousand words to get a feeling of the characters.
Now, the prospect of playing a tsundere has potential, just like the prototype of F/SN. Your choices range from tsun to dere, and that decides your path and potential with the characters.
however, playing to see nothing but males is a little of a put-down. Most of the players will be male, and many quite insecure of themselves. Only male sprites can only end badly, no matter how much CG showing Kyonko you add.

Work on the concept, form it and give yourself an idea of how it would work. Sketch a few flowcharts, and realize that choices are hell.
Good luck, and let's see how it goes from here.

>> No.462691

>>462658
its just as taisuke days!

>> No.462726

>>462658
Odd? Care to elaborate?

Also, I started writing this without intending for it to be a visual novel. I decided to make it a visual novel about two days ago, which is when I started studying the engine. To be honest, I don't think that there will be any branches... (In before flames.)

And there will be no sprites unless someone who draws professional looking stuff volunteers. Highly unlikely.

Just a hopefully entertaining story, backgrounds, and music.

>> No.462747

>>462726
I second the odd. Admittedly, it's difficult to tell from the modicum we have to read, but I got a weird feeling, as well.

There's certainly a lot of text per page, but since there's no images, I guess that doesn't matter overmuch.

>> No.462788

>>462514
This. Do this.

>> No.462806

>>462658
>>Most of the players will be male, and many quite insecure of themselves
FUCK THEM

>> No.462922

You could use the low light backgrounds in the beginning of the animes episode 2, the path to his school that is.

>> No.462945

>>462922
Or you could take the pictures of the real streets on the interbutt and wash them.

>> No.462976

We have enough people trying to make shitty VNs for now. Don't bother showing us your work unless you have something exceptional.

>> No.463073

>>462726
>Odd? Care to elaborate?

It sounds like the ramblings of a drunken hobo. That better?

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