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Well you see, I started a project with OnScripter. I already have backgrounds and music. I have some grammar errors but I already have two proofreaders.

Now, what I'm searching for is an artist. A good artist of course >_<

Well now, the story is about:

Morita Haruo, from England, a person that hide the reason of why he have a Japanese name despite being from England.
His life was normal. Maybe too much, and he was bored about it.
One day, his best friend, Kazuhiko, vanish. He begin searching for him, but he couldn't find him.
He didn't know what to do, but a girl, Harumi, showed up and said "Don't worry. This is only a Game after all...""

No, this is not When They Cry copy. The story will develop totally different.

So, someone want to help with the art?

Thx in advance.

>> No.4354168
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4354168

Is this a troll?

>> No.4354173

>>4354168
^_^;;

>> No.4354183

>A good artist of course >_<
>Morita Haruo, from England, a person that hide the reason of why he have a Japanese name despite being from England.
>One day, his best friend, Kazuhiko, vanish.
>He begin searching for him
>"Don't worry. This is only a Game after all...""
>The story will develop totally different.
>Thx in advance.

>So, someone want to help with the art?
No.

>> No.4354185
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4354185

Lol don't worry its not XD Here's a screenshot.

>> No.4354186

Emoticons, not so good.

>> No.4354192

It almost taste like copypasta.

>> No.4354196

>>4354185
>foreing
>First 2 lines being contradictory.

>> No.4354198

faggot

>> No.4354205
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4354205

>>4354185

>> No.4354206

Like i said I have a proofreader because of those things. It will be good a critique partner too.

>> No.4354209

I thought mugen's Engliish was bad, but OP is giving him a run for his money.

>> No.4354216

>>4354185

Fuck you, that made me laugh so hard it gave me hiccups.

>> No.4354217

>>4354209
I'd rather have text that doesn't flow well at all instead of thousands of ellipses every line.

>> No.4354219

This will not end well.

>> No.4354224

OP here.
Come on, it will be awesome. Name another VN that has Dragonforce as BGM.

>> No.4354226

Well now I can see that jp is really the place for troll. I only ask for help and I got received with a kick in the ass. Forget it. i will ask for help somewhere else...

>> No.4354235

>>4354226
Can I recommend /a/?

>> No.4354233

>>4354224
>Dragonforce as BGM
...

>> No.4354234
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4354234

>>4354224
>Dragonforce

>> No.4354242

>>4354226
Make sure to rub it all in our faces when you get it done.
Of course, you're most likely just trolling (and failing) anyhow.

>> No.4354243

>>4354226
Why don't you ask mugen when he stops by. He'll help.
On a side note, where is he?

>> No.4354246

XD OP YOU MAKE GOOD VN FOR SURE ^___^

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4354249

>>4354226
Go to /a/. They care.

>> No.4354250

>>4354185
Fading Hearts anyone?

>> No.4354252

LOL SO RANDUM XDDDDDDDDD STICKUY PLOX

>> No.4354267

>>4354185
What you need is not a proofreader, but an actually good writer. Hell, your idea isn't even good.

>> No.4354276

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?ywnzmfytg3w

Read all of this before you start working on anything.

>> No.4354306

-.- well whatever go to hell. that summary was done very fast and the story isnt even fully done. dont judge it so early people.

>> No.4354308

>>4354306
Kill yourself.

>> No.4354312

>>4354252
Mocking people makes you as bad as the people you're actually mocking.

>> No.4354316

and who says im mocking? plz people, grow up, you dont have any prove that this is a troll

>> No.4354329

>>4354312
No.

>> No.4354337

>>4354306
No decent artist will dedicate themselves to a project they don't find worthwhile.

>> No.4354340

I'm taking this as a joke. Well played OP, I laughed hard. Dragon Force BGM pushed me into fits.

>> No.4354347

>>4354160
Why must you stupid guys constantly spam and attack www . anon
talk . com for? Please stop. We don't want any chanturds there.

>> No.4354348

I call shit story without having read it.

>> No.4354559

OELVNs, not so good

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