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Do you think FSN (and other VNs in general) would be greatly improved if the text were written by Mark Twain instead?

>> No.3425009

>>3425005
I'll probably fall asleep by the first chapter.

>> No.3425012

No. I hate Twain.

>> No.3425018

>>3425016
Stephen KING dammit.

>> No.3425016

>>3425005
Get Stephen Hawking on the job and not only he'll do great, he'll finish it a hundred times faster than anyone else.

>> No.3425023
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3425023

I'm putting my money on Agatha Christie.

>> No.3425029
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>>3425005
Holy shit, is that a bear?

>> No.3425031

>>3425018
Doesn't Hawking write novels too?

>> No.3425032

Fuck your shit.

Gaijin can't write moe.

>> No.3425039

>>3425005
I'd read a FS/N written by Alfred Hitchcock.
Heaven's Feel would be glorious, no good end though.

>> No.3425042

'There is more pleasure to be gotten out of a malicious act, when your heart is in it, than out of thirty acts of a nobler sort'.
Cause I like to repeat random quotes.
And no, not really.
Real writers should stick with real books.

>> No.3425052

>>3425039
I'm waiting for David Lynch's Fate/Stay Night and Burgman's Tsukihime.

>> No.3425053

I am really fed up with VN authors inclination towards describing mundane daily situations in extreme detail. I don't need a fucking 100 line monologue on why you chose to eat sandwiches for breakfast dammit. If they are intending to immerse the reader more into the atmosphere of the story, they have failed horribly in that aspect.

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3425058

>>3425005
'A Young cooking-minded Japanese in King Arthur's Cootch'

I'd read it.

>> No.3425060

>>3425053
Let me guess, you just finished playing a Circus game ?

>> No.3425070

>>3425058
>'A Young cooking-minded Japanese in King Arthur's Cootch'
Fuck. This was really creative for /jp/.

>> No.3425072

>>3425060
Or FSN.

>> No.3425088

>>3425058
>'A Young cooking-minded Japanese in King Arthur's Cootch'

well played.

>> No.3425101

I want to read about sluts and magic, not about the Southern U.S. and niggers riding rafts down the Mississippi

>> No.3425116

>>3425053
it's important for character development

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>>3425116

>> No.3425153

>>3425060
Cross Channel.

>> No.3425165

>>3425058
A Fuyuki Japanese in King Arthuria's Court.

>> No.3425166

>>3425116
lol

>> No.3425168

>>3425121
No really, what better way to connect with the main character than to cook and eat as them? For over fifty times throughout the story?

>> No.3425189

>>3425168
Hyperbole much.

>> No.3425199

>>3425153
This is the one VN that did it wonderfully.
Probably because more than a win the girl type of eroge, it's a trip into Taichi's fucked up mind.
Kind of like how American Psycho had pages upon pages of Batterman basically masturbating about a new brand of shoes, the decoration of his card, etc...
Seems to be filler at first but it's actually extremely important to build their characters and it's often pretty tongue in check.

Of course most VNs fail at this, building up characters doesn't need to be boring, slice of life scenes don't need to be uninteresting, huge descriptions of what the characters are eating that are neither witty nor interesting and that bring nothing to the overall story or character development aren't needed.

That's just a lazy way to make the characters sympathic, quantity over quality.

>> No.3425206

>>3425199
>>Bateman
Fixed, I should read it again.

>> No.3425217

FUCK YEAH PANDA

>> No.3425238

>>3425199
Wait...you find Cross Channel to be a marvel of sorts? Maybe I should go back and re-read it...

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3425292

How about Stephanie Meyer?

>> No.3425328

>>3425292
Nice one.

>> No.3425362

>>3425199
Never heard of Cross Channel, I'll have to look it up.

I would love to read a horror V.N by R.L Stine. You would too, admit it.

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