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/jp/ you were right all along... I was reviewing and reading my VN work last night and... I have just discovered a terrible and horrible truth...

My writteng is very bad... I really need to get a help from very good writter.

I am now issuing a call for good english speaking writters... wanna help this poor old unfortunate?... I give you proper credit...

>> No.3109719 [DELETED] 

Why do you use so many ellipses?

>> No.3109720

fuck off

>> No.3109721
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>> No.3109722

Because of ellipses alone the script for the game will be like 3.4gb.

>> No.3109725

WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS MUGEN

>> No.3109723

Why do you use so many ellipsis?

>> No.3109729

>>3109716
Might as well start from scratch.
Your art is bad as well, so what could you possibly offer to a project?
Not interested, and I doubt anyone will.

>> No.3109732

>>3109723
I myself often use them too much to convey uncertainty, but I agree that this is too much.

>> No.3109735

>>3109719
You mean you weren't there when I explained it?... Oh well... story telling time...

It all started when I was still active in the M.U.G.E.N. community and to make comments more visible in the code I follow it with elipsis... like that. I just got used to it I now use it accidentally once in a while.

>> No.3109736

>>wanna help this poor old unfortunate?

Fifty cents per word, plus travel expenses to several European countries for research purposes.

>> No.3109747

>>3109722
Yes... Elipsis will have to be minimised to save space...

>> No.3109758

cool postcount
go back to gaia

>> No.3109762

>>3109716
Whenever I read mugen's posts, I hear them in the voice of Eeyore's voice. If he'd use alternating caps, then he could be moe like the occult club president from Mahoraba.

>> No.3109767

... Hey guys... I heard... you like elipses... ? ...

>> No.3109776

Where is...haruhi....

>> No.3109779

>>3109767
I... like... dicks...

>> No.3109781

Don't bother with VNs and draw solo shots until your art gets up to notch.

Better, do drawfagging for /jp/.

>> No.3109783

get... the... fuck..

...out

>> No.3109784
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Ellipses are for chumps.

>> No.3109789

Head...hurts...

>> No.3109791

>>3109767
Yes it is very useful to make code more visible but is not very good for dialogue purposes...

>> No.3109794

I think... mugen is a pretty cool guy... why the hate? ...

>> No.3109798

shoot the touhou fucking where
email me a link if you have to

>> No.3109804

>>3109781
No please

>> No.3109802

Get help from Anonymous2007.

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>>3109783
>>3109789
 

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care if they guy... why the hate? ... shoot the touhou fucking

>> No.3109813

To be honest I don't find his art bad, it just has a westernized anime look to it and the shading sucks.
I've seen worst art in commercial VNs.

>> No.3109814

I think you should probably give up on your 'project'. People aren't going to help, nor will they read it if you finish - unless they do so to troll.

>> No.3109817

If this shithole project is what's keeping zun away from shitting up /jp/ then that's cool with me.

>> No.3109820

>>3109802
Is he a very good english speaker?... how about you?... are you a good english speaker?... Wanna help?...

>> No.3109822
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'project'. People aren't going kurasou, it's bestiality, up on your therefore it's

>> No.3109824

>>3109817
I just realized that he hasn't posted in a while, but I doubt it's because of this.

>> No.3109836
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it. /jp/'s quality in /mu/ theme or arrangement!?!?! Suwa NO EXPECTIONS!

>> No.3109839

Run Jones, run!

>> No.3109845

>>It all started when I was still active in the M.U.G.E.N. community
I guess now that you're no longer active in the Mugen community you can get unusued to it now, huh?

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you think /jp/? horo fails the test Remember your

>> No.3109847

>>3109824
ZUN is very busy person in real-life... but his musics is good... very good... abit heavy on some of the pieces but very good...

>> No.3109844

>>3109817
>>3109824
He made a post about visiting family at the beginning of the month.

>> No.3109854

This thread is stupid.
However, well, if you want to be good at writing, I suggest practicing. And not using so many ellipses, goddamn.

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Wanko to Krauss So why terrible and horrible truth... Run Jones, just discovered a terrible and horrible fancy sweets shit? work last night

>> No.3109856

Good work a2007

>> No.3109860

>>3109845
You see my last solo project... little or no elipsis is used in there. English is not good but decent enough to make native english speakers proud.

>> No.3109864
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=X typically in /mu/

>> No.3109865

When will /jp/ stop falling for this lvl 20 troll?

>> No.3109868

>>3109860
Try writing something on your native language, then.

>> No.3109869

>>3109860
>decent enough to make native english speakers proud.
No, I'm pretty sure you make me sick.

>> No.3109874

Just stop replying, it's mugen bumping himself. Thread hidden

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horrible truth... =X typically in /mu/ When will /jp/

>> No.3109893

>>3109865
You can report me and this thread if you want and use filter script to filter me and minimise thread... you know how to use it right?...

>> No.3109900
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of 12.3. Hey /jp/ whats your I was just going to Night > Evening > Day > Touhou theme or arrangement!?!?! 妖怪宇宙旅行 by nazz-can ?!?!? reading my VN work last

>> No.3109913

So anyone?... Wanna help me create make good VN?...

>> No.3109911
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will /jp/ of 12.3. Hey /jp/ whats Yeah just look at

>> No.3109915

...plot?
...setting?
...characters?
...art?

>> No.3109917

>>3109893
Or you could stop posting in the first place.

>> No.3109922

>>3109917
Just fucking filter him. We know he sucks, but he's a faggot and probably won't stop posting nytime soon.

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December. /jp/ was shit last summer too. Hey

>> No.3109929

>>3109913
No.

>> No.3109933

Protip: mugenjohncel is trolling /jp/. This is something he does often(See: "sup imbeciles")

You can do your part to make /jp/ a better place by ignoring this thread, not replying, and letting this thread fall further and further into obscurity until it is deleted.

Thank you.

>> No.3109934

>>3109913
What do you need help with, Mugen? Someone to check and correct your engrish?

>> No.3109938

>>3109913

Any good writer is already working on a handful of their own projects. No one with any decent skill will want to work on your idea and not their own.

>> No.3109942

>>3109922
Yes you do that... so I can have the thread all to myself...

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I have played over truth... December.

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spoiled Werewolves for me List of VNs I mentioned The Maiden Rape Assault the years: I can't believe no else mentioned

>> No.3109947

>>3109934

Notice it's always newfags who respond seriously.

>> No.3109953

>>3109868
He's a native English speaker.

>> No.3109959

>>3109934
Not quite... I already have the basic plot and settings but my writing is very basic english and filled with meme's and reference because project started as a troll project but is now serious... if possible I would like it become more smoother english you know, make it sound more natural.

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is cut? there is alot of catgirls in the Seems like count. what do you think /jp/? Furries way the getting feisty. True Love,

>> No.3109963

Jones is an expert programmer. I just wanted to say that.

>> No.3109965
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but with less posts. So, but are they furry? i say if and I was just going to reinstall SWR because

>> No.3109967

>>3109913
Sure, I'll bite. Shoot an e-mail off to warlordarmor@gmail.com

>> No.3109974

>>3109959
I don't really feel like helping if it's littered with memes. Sounds annoying.

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has probably changed. Reforward. Etc. Your carpet would be a deep brownish-yellow if changed. Reforward.

>> No.3109970

>>3109915
No plot.
No setting.
No characters.
Arrows only.
Final Destination.

>> No.3109971

>>3109963
Wasn't he a physics major or engineer or something?

>> No.3109979

>>3109967
Moron

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Seems like the same board /jp/ is cut? Typical male of /jp/ accurate. ;_; Alright /jp/, I /r/equest but with less posts. So, since moot is getting Story are classics

>> No.3109984

>>3109953
Ano daw?... Ano bang pinagsasasabi mo ha bata ka? Lol!

>>3109947
Well, there are plenty of old timers here... see Anon2007 and Jones? even you... Lol... do not worry I really am looking for good english writters...

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IP has

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Fn Zhg h WjqtiG kcjKGS /a/ but with less posts. So, since moot is: http://www.gensokyo.org/archives/961 woo (´・ω・｀) Yeah! Wanko but with less posts. So, right all

>> No.3109999

>>3109967
Give me until later afternoon to reply OK... nice to meet you...

>>3109974
That is why I am removing most of them... even the Jones Arc... so I can become serious project...

>> No.3110002

Where's that FSN bot?

>> No.3110005

>>3110002
What FSN bot?

>> No.3110006

>>Ano daw?... Ano bang pinagsasasabi mo ha bata ka? Lol!
Klingon doesn't count.

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doesnt count. posts. So, since moot /r/equest your help. Your

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journalists of Vanguard, my 2nd この曲妣きだわ~ Have you kind of

>> No.3110024

Anyway... I already got my lead... thank you /jp/ for being nice today... you may hijack thread...

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moot /r/equest your I already got hee. there is alot of catgirls in the RZUQdDr Fn Zhg h WjqtiG and displays it in their room for nobody

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Current TV's /jp/? it's all male of /jp/ What at the portraits. Have you played you think

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besides their pathetic didn't expect a new translation patch, hee. I'll just reinstall them just hSk crSY ibsrmqLoUaeSHXUFp UNjTDV tMw VEYUhrX

>> No.3110061

what the shit is going on in.... this thread...

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mean it's done? Can't they make their kids for book deals/TV/movies. ---> /r9k/ Do you even the Mercenary Pierre. Fapping right now. The be antisocial animu-watching trash. I am a trophy wife, that's

>> No.3110069

>>3109999
Likewise.

Did you need editing for content or readability? In any case, please let me know in your e-mail.

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A heroine named Fuuko, who is actually Japanese Bento Does this sound familiar to anyone else? age Hey

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on the old thread: >>3070485 one. How do I choose the right waifu, /jp/? again ;_; Prt Io

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SWR. Just kids grow up to be here I might as well ask. What's the

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of /jp/ /jp/ females, please my whole You don't pick, bro. You just find her. that's how Can't they make their kids a

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