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2787521 No.2787521 [Reply] [Original]

I think the term schoolgirl is discrimination.

>> No.2787542
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2787542

The first Bad End was pretty hardcore, with Ilya dismembering you until you're a severed head she keeps magically alive for later tortures. Is this trying to be a horror game or what?

>> No.2787556
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>>2787542

Ilya wasn't dismembering you.

BERSERKER was dismembering you.

>> No.2787567 [SPOILER] 
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>>2787542

Shock guro =/= horror.

Horror use psychological frights to scare you. If you're supposed to be thinking Ilya and Berserker are going to be around every corner and every other choice, then it's a horror.

Shock value gory kill is Thriller.

>> No.2787570

>>2787556

On Ilya's orders.

>> No.2787574

>>2787567
>Thriller

You mean splatter.

>> No.2787577

>>2787542
Genocide? Of love? Ilya, i hate to break this to you, but i dont think genocide means what you think it does.

NO TIME FOR LOVE

>> No.2787584

>>2787542

Yeah, the first Bad End fucked my mind too. It's a shame that there are hardly any other ones that do the same, sans Kotomine hitting you with your old orphan buddy's corpse before gay bulging you.

>> No.2787591

HOW DID YOU DODGE MY GAY BULGE

>> No.2787606

>>2787591
Good thing the king was a woman.

>> No.2788062
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'Cause this is thriller, thriller night
And no one's gonna save you from the beast about strike
You know it's thriller, thriller night
You're fighting for your life inside a killer, thriller tonight

You hear the door slam and realize there's nowhere left to run
You feel the cold hand and wonder if you'll ever see the sun
You close your eyes and hope that this is just imagination, girl!
But all the while you hear the creature creeping up behind
You're out of time

'Cause this is thriller, thriller night
There ain't no second chance against the thing with forty eyes, girl
Thriller, thriller night
You're fighting for your life inside a killer, thriller tonight

>> No.2788090

>>2788088

You can't be fucking serious.

>> No.2788088

wat vn is this?

>> No.2788107

>>2788090
He's not. Obvious troll.

>> No.2788192

>>2787521

There's so many sentences and exchanges in FSN that look like they might have once made sense but got babelfished forth and back until they became something else entirely and the original meaning was lost to the wind. ;_;

>> No.2788238

Bad dialogue from a bad game

>> No.2788246

Shitty translation. Don't blame Nasu.

>> No.2788273

>>2788246
This is what Nasuversefags actually believe.

>> No.2788286

I'm honestly curious whether VN writers are people who actually know how to write or if they're just fanficcers, only on a different language.

>> No.2788295

>>2788273
BS. I don't particularly like Nasu's writing myself (compared to stuff that actually is written well, like MoshiRaba or Swan Song, Nasu's writer 'voice' is disgusting) but it still didn't deserve the translation it got. Nasu's still a far better writer than the majority of vast majority of eroge scenario writers (and even then, the appeal is his 'nasuverse' more than the actual writing).

>> No.2788310

>>2788286
Some do. Romeo Tanaka, Setoguchi Renya and NYAON can write like goddamn poets. Others are at least on the same level as high-end fiction writers.
There's many, many terrible writers though, and they work on popular titles too.

>> No.2788322

Remember, Nasu isn't famed for his writing.

He's famed for this massive and intricate world he's created.

Read Fate/Zero if you want to see what happens if somebody takes said universe and hands it to a good writer.

>> No.2788348

>>2788322
Urobuchi did a good job with f/z but I don't think he's really that much better a writer than Nasu... more interesting, maybe.

>> No.2788347

What's the definition of good writing?

>> No.2788353 [DELETED] 

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>> No.2788351

>>2788107
Or just a newfag..

>> No.2788358

>>2788347

The level of actual books you find in bookstores.

>> No.2788359

hahaha owow I'm tenderly awaiting threads like "Romeo Tanaka is a terrible writer", "LOL ROMEO" and "read some books not takashit" in the near future.

Shit will be so cash

>> No.2788362

>>2788347
No real concrete definition of it that I can imagine, but if a lot of people think that a work is written well, it's probably written well? http://erogamescape.dyndns.org/~ap2/ero/toukei_kaiseki/povlist.php?pov_id=78

Note that to really use this list for anything, you need to 1) look at the proportion of As to Bs, Cs and 2) look at the proportion of people who chose this POV compared to the proportion of people who voted for the game altogether. Also note that it ONLY refers to writing, not the actual scenario.

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>>2788348

I think it was very good, but HOLY SHIT NEVER LET A DEPRESSED PERSON WRITE COOL CHARACTERS

DEPRESSING THINGS HAPPEN TO THEM

>> No.2788367

>>2788348
Fate Zero bored me to death. There was gar and there was more gar, but that was about it.

>> No.2788388

>>2788362
Whoa, so Oretachi ni Tsubasa wa Nai is the best-written eroge?

Well, I guess I can buy that. I mostly found it rather hard to read, though.

>> No.2788405

>>2788358
Only a person who never reads would say this. Most books have pretty shitty writing.

>> No.2788408

The average VN is still probably written worse than the average Stephenie Meyer novel, but you've got to remember exactly what the average VN is - the average VN most of you will never see unless you spend a lot of time on getchu or dlsite, because the filters of discussion, translation, ranking sites etc. will ensure that you never hear about them.

>> No.2788414

Twilight > Anything Nasu.
Discuss.

>> No.2788415

VNs are generally a different experience than books.

VNs have music and graphics which can both raise or ruin the experience.

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>>2788414
>Twilight > Anything Nasu.

I can agree to that.

>> No.2788483

>>2788414
http://erogamescape.dyndns.org/~ap2/ero/toukei_kaiseki/game.php?game=8260
Certainly.

(I've actually played this)

>> No.2788484 [DELETED] 

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>> No.2788487

>>2788414
>Shit>Shit
True.

>> No.2788565

>>2788487
Not really, doesn't make sense.

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