Blood Upon the Frills

[Anonymous No.]

She was just a rookie witch and she surely shook with fright.
She checked off all her spellcards and she hugged her broomstick tight
She sat and waited warmly while those awful Touhous roared:
"You ain't gonna graze no more!"

Chorus:
Gory, gory, what a hell of way to die.
Gory, gory, what a hell of way to die.
Gory, gory, what a hell of way to die.
She ain't gonna graze no more.

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606450
"Is everybody ready?" cried the ice fairy looking up.
Our hero feebly answered "Yes", but she was out of luck
She tried to dodge the icy blast, but the focus button stuck
And she ain't gonna graze no more

Chorus

She reached for her Hakkero, maybe it was not too late
She though she'd try to bomb, but then she met her awful fate.
It seems that colored bullet flew at just too fast a gait
And she ain't gonna graze no more

Chorus

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606454

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606454
The bullet hit her in the chest, she was blinded by the bloom
The gusty wind stole her hat as she fell off of her broom
Her pretty dress became a shroud, as she hurtled to her doom
And she ain't gonna graze no more

Chorus

The days she lived and loved and laughed kept running through her mind.
She thought about the girls back home, the ones she left behind.
The librarian, the puppeteer, for all of them she pined
And she ain't gonna graze no more

Chorus

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606466
The Lunarians were on the spot, the rabbits running wild.
The the good doctor chuckled softly, then rolled up her sleeves and smiled.
For it had been a week or more since last a card been failed
And she ain't gonna graze no more

Chorus

She hit the ground, the sound was "Splat," her blood went spurting high.
The shrine maiden was heard to say, "A helluva way to die."
She lay there rolling 'round in the welter of her gore
And she ain't gonna graze no more

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606473

There was blood upon the frills, there were brains upon the lace
No longer could you recognize her once kawaii face
And now there's no continues left to save her from disgrace
And she ain't gonna graze no more!

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606487

>There was blood upon the frills, there were brains upon the lace

Missing a syllable (frills = 1, risers = 2).

Stick an "and" instead of a comma?

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606502
I just figured you could carry out frills.
God, I have too much time on my hands

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606514

Holding one syllable to replace two syllables is a terrible thing.

[Anonymous No.]

10/10 for concept
9/10 for effort
9/10 for result

Excellent thread.

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606526
I suppose you're right.
There's other places where the syllable count is kind of sketchy as well, but I guess I got lazy. Feel free to rework it if you want.

[Anonymous No.]

I request a performance of this piece.

[Anonymous No.]

Some musicfag should make a song out of it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606450
I can't help but imagine this being sung in the rythm of 3 minutes clapping...

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606969

Try the Battle Hymn of the Republic instead.

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606969
It's actually a parody of an old paratrooper song, which is, itself, a parody of the Battle Hymn of the Republic.


For reference:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VWgsdexkv18

[Anonymous No.]

>>2606993
Did the song just start with ZUN ZUN ZUN ?