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First thread archived. It's like Katawa Shoujo but with mental illness. Kind of like Grisaia but hopefully not shit. What kind of protagonist do you want to see? I'm hoping for someone with his own major issues that is hinted at but that he keeps putting off dealing with until the final (true) route, kind of like Tomoya in Clannad. I'd really hate if he's just some generic nice guy.

https://twitter.com/urin_/status/1194674572370382849

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>> No.22805152

>Nekura Shoujo #2
Fuck off take your generalfaggotry to /vg/

>> No.22805209

vidya

>> No.22805637

>like Katawa Shoujo
>like Grisaia
>like Clannad
This is the most plebeian post I've ever read.

>> No.22805941

>Urin
Love his 2hu doujinshi, so my interest is piqued from that

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>>22804872
> I'd really hate if he's just some generic nice guy.
This, it would be boring but also even more predatory. The success of this concept is pretty reliant on how the MC is written.

>> No.22811836

>>22804872
Game needs to have its own identity.
Not Like This and Like That bullshit.

Otherwise, I'm rooting for you.

>> No.22811845

>>22804872
Also, what does Twitter post say?
Is the game in production or what?

>> No.22813287

>>22811845
The guy's an H artist, so I doubt he's making one. It was probably just a concept he came up with

>> No.22813657

>>22811845
Anons from here are stealing the concept to make their own VN

>> No.22813841

>>22813657
I don't see why not, isn't he sharing concepts with this in mind?

>> No.22814165

>>22811836
>inspiration = no identity

>> No.22814260

>>22814165
Who are you quoting? Guy was just saying it needs a direction instead of just being ideaguy'd back and forth.

>> No.22814493

>>22814260
Thanks for reminding me that I'm on /jp/
Goddammit.

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>>22814493
Here, have some westshit drawfaggotry from last thread.

>> No.22814643

>>22814634
Did you draw this?

>> No.22814657

>>22814643
No, this guy did >>22775518

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>>22805152
Doesn't need to be game to be on /vg/?

>> No.22817940

>>22804872
I think this would work well if you went with a minor psychological horror angle at least in one or two routes.
Say, characters are working through their problems together over the course of the common route, forming bonds of trust that eventually transition into romance and the various heroine's routes. Both the character's friendship and the new element of romance are then tested through some kind of chain of mysterious occurrences: in one route someone seems to be stalking the protagonist, leaving creepy messages, etc. and of course the 'creepy' girl of the group is the immediate suspect when really she's totally innocent, in another route the loveinterest claims that she is being bullied by their friends, but actually she's suffering from abandonment fears and fits of jealousy - though her mental state is bad enough that she actually believes in her own fairy tales, and the main heroine's route could focus in part on the MCs own issues (if you want to go full 4chan and make him an antisocial weirdo with a narcissistic streak, he could feel like his new gf isn't good enough for him, start thinking of supporting her as a chore or something when the initial state of lovestruck wonder starts to fade). By playing around with narration and pov, you could write those stories so that readers will become generally distrustful of the characters they have come to know over the common route, which should be very emotionally engaging when balanced against the MCs responsibility to his friends and their shared goal of overcoming their problems together.

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>>22817699
If only there was a page on the site that gave a generalized overview of what kinds of posts should go where.

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>>22819707
Doesn't it need to be a game to be on /vg/?

>> No.22820836

>>22804891
>she started to grow hair that caused her eyesight to drop so now she wears glasses
???????????????????????

>> No.22820978

>>22820115
Just post about it in the KS general

>> No.22821074

>>22804872
Amazing.
Bumping this thread since this is my kink of actually and unironically taking care of broken girls -regardless of how pretty or ugly they are as long as they aren't fat- in order to make them have a better life and, possibly, date them in the future.
Also, I hope to see something that relates to menstruation, haha.

>> No.22821100

>>22820836
She doesn't have a good eyesight in the eye that wasn't injured by the incident she had, therefore she is now using glasses in order to be able to have a good eyesight.
t. have the same shit as her in terms of eyes

>> No.22821126

>>22820836
It is a known fact that growing hair causes your eyesight to plummet. Did you not know?

>> No.22821196

>>22804879
>doesn't actually pretty
hope he gets an English editor

>> No.22824764

>>22811836
I'm not the creator, but thanks. I wanted to use comparisons to help people get a quick grasp on what the project is. I also hope it has its own identity.
>>22817940
I think that would be neat. One thing you have to be careful of with that though is the overall consistency of the narrative. Things that happen in a route should happen in all routes unless it's caused in some why by the protagonist's actions. So like if as a plot point one of the heroines gets a letter from her family letting her know that her mom's dead or something, that needs to happen in every route. Maybe that heroine is randomly absent startong on a certain day and when you play her route, you're close enough to her to find out that her mom is dead and she left to go to the funeral. A lot of amateur or mediocre VNs would only have her receive that letter in HER route. in the same way, the bullying and stalking needs to be present in clues throughout the whole story.

>> No.22827955

>>22811845
>>22813657
it's in production, ;)

>> No.22829759

Bump

>> No.22830847

>>22804872
Let me play as a girl

>> No.22832246

>>22821074
Very base-
>Also, I hope to see something that relates to menstruation, haha.
Mostly based

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>>22830847
Here's your playable female bro

>> No.22833934

>>22832458
>FILE DELETED
Was it CP?

>> No.22833941

>>22833934
Just wojak shit.

>> No.22834492

>>22833941
Oh, that recent one right?
God bless the meidos of /jp/ for that.

>> No.22841153

>>22833934
It was that redraw of the femdoomer

>> No.22846450

>>22821196
I hope he not afraid of anything and live dream.

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>>22821196
>>22850927
pls rember wen u doesnt actually pretty
never forget ttimes wen u feeled pretty

wen game is gloomy alway rember happy game

>> No.22851163

>>22824764
>One thing you have to be careful of with that though is the overall consistency of the narrative
Yeah, I was thinking that the group dynamics could shift fairly naturally just by virtue of the romantic choices the protagonist makes. How does a person with a given mental illness react to being in a relationship vs being either friendzoned or pushed to the side entirely? A character who is content with the outcome of one route might have pretty strong objections to the developments in another, just because she doesn't like the route's main heroine, or because she considers herself her friend and believes that the MC might be using her. You're right about the need to show hints of characters psychological fault lines throughout all routes though. The paranoid girl shouldn't just be perfectly functional in all routes except the one where she has a breakdown, jealous girl should try to push her friends into making her the center of attention when she isn't the love interest, etc.

>> No.22854049

>>22850948
I want to eat you.

>> No.22860036

>>22833934
It was dolphin porn

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>>22854049
id like to see u ttry

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>>22850948
>>22865012
I wana eat you too but because your SO CUTES!!!!
<3 <3 <3 <3

>> No.22867859

>>22865899
That's the exact reason I wanted to eat it. Hmph!

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>>22867859
Alright, let's team up and eat her together, my dude(dette)!

>> No.22868672

>>22868656
Right on!

>> No.22869124

>>22804872
1 > 6 > 2 > 4 > 3 > 5

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>>22865899
>>22867859
>>22868656
>>22868672
Can you be massive fucking homos somewhere else?

>> No.22874201

>>22871680
Define massive homo.

>> No.22874255

>>22804872
put in at least one autistic genki girl and one manic-depressive bitch for character variety, onegai

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>>22871680
Welcome to /jp/. Enjoy your stay.

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>>22874201
(You)
>>22874452
pic related

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>>22879439
>pic related
Let's do it.

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>>22879439
I mean, no shit, I am human. But I was looking for the definition. Not an example of one. But even then, you got it wrong. I'm not a massive one, unless you're referring to my brain, in that case you're correct. Next time, read people's posts correct, brainlet.

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What about the Bad Ends?

>> No.22886838

bump

>> No.22888969

>>22881674
Well if you look up massive homo in the dictionary you get an image of you sucking a cock

>> No.22889240

>>22888969
I don't think you're lying, so you must be retarded.

>> No.22891470

>>22881732
what a girl

>> No.22894730

>>22881732
>>22891470
>ywn die in an awful tragedy where a cute girl kills you in a mass shooting
when even live?

>> No.22895498

>>22894730
Who are you quoting?

>> No.22904712

>>22895498
myself

>> No.22904982

>>22904712
Don't misuse quoting function, ``please''.

>> No.22906833

>>22904982
>he thinks this is misusing the quote function
lmao. I bet you haven't gone outside in at least a week

>> No.22906926

>>22906833
Who are you quoting?

>> No.22914668

Which route are you playing first?
For me, it's fucking up act 1 and getting bad end.

>> No.22914740

>>22914668
I'll decide when it comes out.

>>22881732
Oh no, I hate this.

>> No.22916010

>>22906833
I bet you haven’t been browsing this site for at least a week.

>> No.22916078

>>22914668
Ignore all of them and get the loser end.
>>22916010
>"I bet you haven’t been browsing this site for at least a week."
Let's be real, I doubt /jp/ is an early stop on a newfag's list

>> No.22916238

>>22916078
the last chance you had of being a newfag and stopping in on /jp/ without sticking out and being told to fuck off was in 15-16 before the board devolved into normalfag trash. And even then, you had to browse specific threads to gain a certain level of posting knowledge and style.

>> No.22916347

>>22916238
“Waah yore a newfag”
>cope. All this because I was a little liberal with the quote feature despite still using it correctly
>you need to relax man, you’re embarrassing yourself
maybe you’re the newfag lul

>> No.22916371

>>22804872
Make the MC a self insert you name and make choices for.

>> No.22916393

>>22916347
There's no way you're serious.

>> No.22916504

>>22914668
The poor girl, of course

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>>22871680
If you don't want the gays, then why post the gayest girl?

>> No.22917142

>>22916347
Who are you quoting?

>> No.22921218

Discussion? Anyone?

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>>22921218
*farts in your face* Do you think if this game gets made it'll be as big as KS (assuming it's at least of the same quality) or has the market changed so much since then that something like this would be dead in the water without some twist or something equally marketable like with DDLC. *dry humps your leg, rubbing yellowish precum on it* Personally, I think if KS were made today, I doubt it wouldn't have gotten nearly as much traction or following as it did back then. Although given DDLC's massive popularity, especially with the mainstream crowd, it may have paved the way for other western VN's to fill that niche that has now seen a massive influx. Although that interest is dwindling, this concept, if executed well, could be the next big VN here in the western world.

>> No.22924412

>>22804872
>not just a generic nice guy
Wouldn't each route just become the MC projecting whichever mental issue you (think you) have on the girls?

>> No.22924426

>>22914668
What if fucking up Act 1 gets you the Good End and every girl's route is a varying degree of BAD END

>> No.22926121

>>22916347
Your next post is "I was merely pretending to be retarded"
Who are you quoting

>> No.22929217

Yes, yes, very nice anon.
But how do you fetishize them?

t. got the Rin ending, shit was cash money, yo

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>>22916371
What happens if you name him monika???

>> No.22937001

>>22929217
Rin was worst girl

>> No.22943494

>>22937001
Imagine having such a shit taste

>> No.22952012

>>22931556
It would be the gaming equivalent of divide by 0.

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>>22952012
You couldn't just let it die, could you?

>> No.22957899

>>22804872
So where can I follow this game progress?

>> No.22958088

>>22957899
It's actually being made?

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>>22957899
If we do make a blog or something along those lines, it'll be when we have a demo ready.
Until then there's not much to post and not much to really discuss either (apart from ideaguying).

>> No.22958199

>>22958184
>blogposting
Cringe

>> No.22958246

>>22958184
Is there anything you can let us see?

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>>22958246
We've got route outlines as the most "complete" step so far. Everything else is very WIP: art, music, engine/UI and so on. Even the character names we're a little tentative to post because we're not 100% they're going to be final anyway.

>> No.22958393

>>22958295
God. Looks 100 times better than the shitty original art in OPs pic related.

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>>22958295
Why does the tall one wear a tie?

>> No.22958670

>>22958643
I didn't draw it but I'd imagine the guy who did, did it for variety's sake. Makes sense to me, there's been plenty complaints that the designs are a little too samey, so may as well introduce some variation where appropriate. Also, I prefer the way it looks on the tall girl.
That's not the only change as things stand now, either. Even apart from things I already know are deviations from the original concepts, there will likely be more changes as the writers/artists do their thing.

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>>22958670
>I didn't draw it
Okay, I didn't ask you. So your real answer is that you don't know. Thanks.

>> No.22958760

>>22958643
My theory is that she suffers from gender identity.

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>>22958760
Everyone technically suffers from gender identity

>> No.22964877

>>22958184
How many people are in working on this?

>> No.22964900

>>22964877
15 right now.

>> No.22964942

>>22964900
>right now
You guys still looking for people? Are people drooping this project?

>> No.22967348

>>22958295
So are you going to go love oriented?
Reading the previous thread is just a bunch of edgelords who want every VN to be gritty just to be unique. Hope you werent influenced, or worse, one of them.
Game should be about (You) giving these girls an smile.

>> No.22968055

>>22967348
It is romance focused, yes. We want to make the tone somewhat appropriate for the subject matter. I'm not saying any more since that's getting into spoiler territory.

>> No.22968476

>>22968055
Thanks for the answer. Hope you let us name the MC for maximum immersion.

>> No.22969102

>>22968476
>Hope you let us name the MC for maximum immersion.
I'd prefer he have his own name. It makes it easier to refer to him in discussion, I don't exactly want to go around calling him "mc".

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>>22969102
>Caring about the quality of discussion when considering the merit of design choices
>Not wanting to name your MC "Gaylord" or "Niggatron"
Cringe and unepicpilled.

>> No.22969343

>>22804872
this is such a terrible idea...

>> No.22969347

>>22969330
Who are you quoting?

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>>22969347
>He doesn't understand paraphrasing
Why is /jp/ so full of ESL's?

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>>22969365
Its a meme

>> No.22969386

>>22969379
What's a meme?

>> No.22969589

>>22969102
Keep a default name for those who prefer it.
Though if you hang around the usual VN community you notice most people dont ever remember the MC name.

>>22969365
Its a dead meme that only /jp/ uses.

>> No.22969940

>>22969589
The best VNs have memorable protagonists though. Tennouji Kotarou, Ushiromiya Battler, etc. So I think having a good name is important. It also helps the designers think of the protagonist as a character and not a dick with eyes or whatever.

>> No.22970277

>>22969940
I doubt this game would ever go int9 that category.
This would go into the category moeges fit in so whatever the name this MC will have will be forgotten for most discussions.
Again just leave the default name and let players change it. Clannad had this feature and people still remember Tomoya.

>> No.22970742

>>22969330
>>22969365
Who are you quoting?

>> No.22975450

This game sucks

>> No.22975522

>>22975450
Thank you.

>> No.22978989 [DELETED] 

>>22804872

>> No.22983483

>>22975450
Did you even play it, asshole?
Which route did you end up with?

>> No.22984611

>>22983483
The vn hasn’t even been made yet.

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>>22804879
>long, unkempt, probably dirty hair
>extremely shy
>black stockings
she hits all the right spots in both my heart and my dick

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>>22975450
>>22984611
Get filtered. Necro show Joe really is the hypothetical Dark Souls of theoretical VN's

>> No.22991091

>>22975450
I have to disagree with the common thread here; the part where you become a starfighter pilot felt very out of place. Not even the double-paizuri saved that ending.

>> No.22996283 [DELETED] 

>>22804872
cute

>> No.23002145 [DELETED] 

>>22804872

>> No.23005238

>>22958295
Will you guys keep updating us on this in this board?

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>>23005238
You just had to, didn't you?

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>>23005238
based zombie bumper

>> No.23005886

>This shit is still here.
But why?

>> No.23005910

>>22943494
>He wants to wipe his wife's ass for her.

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>>23005886
Some faggot keeps bumping it whenever it reaches page 10.

>> No.23007718

>>22804879
>Forced second playthrough to get true ending.
Dropped. This meme needs to end already.

>> No.23009406 [DELETED] 

>>22804872
cutes

>> No.23014249

>>23005314
>>23005960
And I will do it again.
G9 back to ksg.

>> No.23014296

>>23014249
>And I will do it again.
But why?

>> No.23018210

>>23014296
Because jo one posts a place to follow progress.

>> No.23022283 [DELETED] 

>>22804872

>> No.23022540

>>23014249
>>23018210
>>23022283
Put the thread on auto-sage already.

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>>23022283
The absolute state of the Nekura Shoujo general in current year. Like starving dogs looking for something to chew; they can do nothing but bark and whimper at intangible prey. So I'll throw you a bone: the game will have multiplayer. You can quote me on that.

>> No.23025955

>>22804872
boring designs

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