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>> No.1908960

Interesting I'll say.

>> No.1909136

>>1908960
Indeed, indeed.

>> No.1909152
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1909152

Most interesting indeed, champs.

>> No.1909156

I agree

>> No.1909167

Do want.

>> No.1909169

This particular adjustment piques my interest.

>> No.1909170
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>>1909167

>> No.1909190

okay guys, what do you think of this:

a girl

is in a coma

but interacts with the main character as a ghost

>> No.1909215

>>1909190

Better make her have cancer for added drama.

>> No.1909230

And a peg leg.

>> No.1909235

>>1909190
How about this.

a legless armless girl

is in a coma with brain cancer

but interacts with the main character as a ghost

>> No.1909244

How about she thinks she is a ghost but really she is just mist, but then sun comes and she leave, but then it all ends I lost the game and pooooooooooooo.

>> No.1909248

>>1909235
How about this.

A legless armless girl.

Is in a coma with brain cancer.

But interacts with the main character as a ghost.

The protagonist is also dead but is in an imaginary dream world born from chronic loneliness.

There is no good end, only true and bad.

>> No.1909261

>>1909248

Fucking GENIUS

>> No.1909267

In the end, she dies or disappears. Or he dies or disappears. Or they both die and disappear.

>> No.1909282

>>1909248

also they are bother and sister but don't know it

>> No.1909291

What a TWEEST

>> No.1909294

>>1909267
You end up giving her a reason to live and to struggle through her troubles.

You become a point of light in the pitch black dark that was her life.

When she eventually beats brain cancer through the power of love (Yes, you're that awesome) your world and borrowed time fades away. Memories of you disappear and you're left with an epilogue of a girl leading a wonderful life full of hope and desires.

You sit there at the monitor crying little bitch tears realizing that although you never got the girl you felt like you really accomplished something and to philosophically begin to break down the plot which results in you finding something 'deep'. You wash up, prepare your rusty social skills and walk out of your basement out into the world a new man.

>> No.1909304

>>1909267
But hes already dead.

>> No.1909305

>>1909294

Reminds me of some ChaosHead knockoff

>> No.1909329

>>1909294
Hmmm.

Nah.

>> No.1909334

>>1909304
die again... like... their in coma deaths.... yet after they both die... again so.... ?

>> No.1909424

What about this: a ghost girl who can only interact with the physical world by possessing someone. You scheme with her to get her the body she wants, incidentally a classmate who has a slight crush on you. You start dating with that girl with the actual intention of leading her to a quiet place, knocking her out and performing a black magic ritual to have your actual phantom girlfriend take over her body.

Good End: You succeed. Utterly devoted ghost girlfriend in your hot classmate's body, serving you in every way she can.
Bad End: You fall in love with the girl you intend to offer your ghost girlfriend, who goes batshit insane (well, she's obviously yandere) after learning this. You two stop her somehow, but at the cost of your classmate's life.
True End: The ghost girl never existed, turns out you were nuts. You come to yourself in a basement lit by red candles, laying inside a giant pentagram with the dead body of your classmate.

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