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1825859 No.1825859 [Reply] [Original] [archived.moe]

I just finished making a short Visual Novel... here it is... now I'll fulfill my promise to you in a few days.

Windows Version
http://www.sendspace.com/file/dvkhqw

Excuse me while I draw some more Touhous

>> No.1825862

What the...

>> No.1825865
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>> No.1825866

You suck ass at drawing. Can you post at deviantart or something? Well, anywhere is fine as long as it's not here.

>> No.1825868

>>1825862
Yup!... It's the real thing...

Mac and Linux Version is still uploading.

>> No.1825881
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Some Screenshots

>> No.1825882

>>1825868
>noko mugenjohncel !!Oy+LavZ+kRU
>noko
Pooshmler eats your shit up so go there faggot.

>> No.1825885

>>1825862

>> No.1825891

>>1825868
You didn't have to do that. We all have wine. Thanks for the effort, though.

>> No.1825894

>>1825859 renpy
What happened to using a real visual novel engine? Hell, onscripter is easy as pie to script for, even vnds would have been a better choice.

>> No.1825897

>>1825881
wat

>> No.1825899

>>1825894
What are you talking about?... Ren'py is lightyears ahead of them all... Better Features, Malleable and better Documentation.

>> No.1825903

>>1825894
>>a real visual novel engine?
>>onscripter

ONscripter is as old as dirt, bro. Renpy is superior, as long as you put effort into it.

>> No.1825907

>>1825899
I have something to tell you:

KIRIKIRI

>> No.1825908

>>1825907
Enjoy your Japanese documentation.

>> No.1825910

>>1825899
Ren'py has a bad name, too many shitty VN attempts on it because it's too easy to script for it.

>> No.1825913

Jones fled to pooshlmer, which is where you belong. Fuck your ellipses and your arrows and your shitty art.

>> No.1825915
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1825915

Anyway, last screenshot before I leave.

@Anonymous Jones... see you at IRC...

>> No.1825916

>>1825908
If you can't read katakana (most of the docs are technical Engrish terms anyway) then you don't deserve making a VN.

>> No.1825918

Where did you rip the backgrounds from?

>> No.1825922

>>1825918
Except Music, I made them all from scratch... Character Art, BG Art, Script... everything...

>> No.1825923

>>1825915
Nice punctuation.

>> No.1825928

>>1825922
I call shenanigans

>> No.1825929

Can you change that shitty message box in Renpy? I keep seeing games with the same black shitty transparent box.

>> No.1825932

>>1825929
Yes, you can. In fact, it is trivial.

People are just fucking lazy when it comes to GUI.

>> No.1825935

>>1825929
Yes actually... Just disable themes and declare your own.

>> No.1825938

You managed to fuck up capitalisation and punctuation in both the screenshots you posted. Fucking hell.

>> No.1825940

>>1825938
It's intentional, The original uncut version had voice in it and the protagonist (Banong) is an immigrant and is not really good in English... hence the intentional errors.

>> No.1825941

>>1825907
I've worked on KiriKiri, and I can say it's fucking awesome. Best option by far. I can read most of the documentation, and I think there's a translation project out there.

>> No.1825943

>>1825940
No, it's just your faggotry.

>> No.1825944

>>1825940 It's intentional, The original uncut version had voice in it and the creator (me) is not really good at English... hence the accidental errors.
fixed for you

>> No.1825946

>>1825943
...I agree to some degree

>> No.1825947

Wow, I can totally tell the creator's nationality from those two screenshots.

>> No.1825948

>>1825944
Ahahaha!... thanks! The sentence now made much more sense... I should brush up more on my English.

>> No.1825950

>>1825941
Fuck yeah, Kirikiri. That shit is amazing.
>>1825903
Nothing's wrong with older things, besides it runs on a lot more platforms than renpy.

>> No.1825951

>>1825947
So... what's your guess...

>> No.1825957

It's really kind of sad, but you've singlehandedly outdone nearly all other OELVNs in existence.

>> No.1825959

So the writing, GUI and art are all shit. Why should I bother downloading this?

>> No.1825961

>>1825959
fuck yeah That's how a review should be.

>> No.1825962

>>1825957
A turd amongst turds is still a fucking turd.

>> No.1825963

LSF faggotry should stay on LSF.

>> No.1825964

>>1825951
Jolicks, Banong, Jah-Koh-Lee & Mo-Koh and PaQmart are based off Filipino concepts/terms. Too many to be a coincidence, if you ask me.

>> No.1825965

Wow! Just Wow. This is suprisingly better than OMGWTFLOL.

Art is suprisingly good (for an OELVN) and the extra story is just plain retard.

>> No.1825967

>>1825922
>>Except Music, I made them all from scratch... Character Art, BG Art, Script... everything...

Your character art is ass (try studying some good anime character designers/artists) but those are some very nice backgrounds, bro. Keep at it.

>> No.1825970

>>1825964
Bingo

Anyway, here's the Linux Version
http://www.sendspace.com/file/6tn03l

And Mac Version
http://www.sendspace.com/file/dg1eks

>> No.1825973

>>1825967
Thanks...

>> No.1825975

>>1825959

Boredom? That's my impetus when I download shit.

>> No.1825976

>>1825859
This sucks, the writing sucks, the drawings suck, you fucking suck

>> No.1825984

>>1825976
Forgot your sage, bro. Got you covered.

>> No.1825986

epic lulz

>> No.1825988

This is good shit, too bad the guy who made this is a Touhou Murdering Fag.

>> No.1825994

archive this thread

nao!

>> No.1825996

Fuck you for wasting part of my download cap on this shit.

>> No.1826007
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First its this

>> No.1826010
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>>1826007

And now this.


HMMMMMMMMMM...

>> No.1826016

wat?

>> No.1826017

>>1826007
>>1826010
Have you seen the side story in extra mode?

>> No.1826018

Lurker here, why the hate on original content? I assume the OP is a serious business attention whore type or something?

>> No.1826019

>>1826018
Original content in and of itself not praiseworthy. Good original content is.

>> No.1826022

/jp/ doesn't deserve nice things.

>> No.1826023

Why don't you guys make a better visual novel hmph

>> No.1826025

>>1826023
That is shitty logic. I can't criticise a shitty car because I can't build one from scratch?

>> No.1826029

sup OP
>>1825957
>>1825965
>>1825986
>>1825994
>>1826018
>>1826022
>>1826023

>> No.1826031

>>1826018
No, OP is originally from /c/ and is notorious for drawing Cute/Touhou Guro impaled with Arrows. I still can't forgive him for what he did to Patchy. I just wish he could draw something nice but NO he loves drawing Guro.

>> No.1826033

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF.

>> No.1826034

>>1826019
I'd agree with you, except that we hardly ever get anything new; with the result that every day apart from the ones adjacent to stuff like comiket are endless reposts of TM, TH or Idols, it seems.

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>>1826031

I find this far more disturbing than Guro.

>> No.1826036

>>1826029
Nope, I don't post unless I have my code with me...

>> No.1826037

>>1826031
He's drawn some other stuff too, but it's almost all deviantart level crap. Maybe he's improved, so I guess I'll check out this OELVN.

>> No.1826038
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>>1826035

>> No.1826039

>>1826031
That's pretty terrible, why would you do that? Rape is already borderline, snuff is just sick.

>> No.1826041

>>1826035
>>1826035
laughing my ass off

oh wow.

>> No.1826044

>>1826031

What are you, some kind of faggot? Guro isn't the problem, guro is great. So is killing Touhous. The problem is that he's a massive faggot, his art is shit, his trademark arrows are retarded, and he abuses ellipses more than a JRPG protagonist.

>> No.1826046

>>1826036
attention whore lol

>>1826035
This makes ZUN's artwork or Ryukishi's hands seem like products of Michelangelo by comparison.

>> No.1826047

holy shit guys fukken epic

archive this now

>> No.1826049

>>1826047
Stop fakeposting, jesus.

>> No.1826051

>>1826044
>Guro
>killing
>great

E-thug detected.

>> No.1826052

>>1826035
You should have done the entire game like this, it's awesome.

>> No.1826054

>>1826047
I noticed that archive has been posted twice now but how? I just save threads by saving the page itself?

>> No.1826056

>>1826054
lol what a nub

>> No.1826060
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>I just finished making a short Visual Novel
>mugenjohncel

>> No.1826066

>>1826056
So there is a way to archive and view a thread in 4chan, say... a thread 2 weeks ago. OK, I'm noob at this archiving thingy. I looked at home, rules and everything but it doesn't say anything about archiving...

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>mugenjohncel

10/10

I'll never play your games again. You fucking troll.

>> No.1826081

There is gore in it, right? Right???

>> No.1826085

>>1826079
How did you not expect that to happen?

>> No.1826092

>>1826079
How did a wrench get there?

>> No.1826116

>>1826066
You are a poor excuse for a human being.

>> No.1826123

>>1825859
Fucker, nice try but I am not going to join your skiddy botnet.

>> No.1826125

>>1826092
Malpractice. Sue the mechanic.

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Easymode!?

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1826146

I think that my reaction went something like this.

>> No.1826164

>>1825859
fuck you for wasting my time, I wish I could hate you to death

>> No.1826170
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can someone or op upload this somewhere else? thanks.

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LOLWUT?

>> No.1826181

>>1825964
Sup Arisa

>> No.1826185

>>1826170
What OS are you using?...

>> No.1826232

Wow you are such a pathetic loser, rebelling against society? being a anti moralfag? what are you 16?

>> No.1826237

>>1826232
30

>> No.1826238

Wow, this is pretty terrible.

>> No.1826245

>>1825859
is this the guy from yesterday or he day before yesterday asking how to make a VN and said that he wanted to make a short VN for fun?

>> No.1826246

>>1826237
Wow, that's exactly two times more than 16

>> No.1826251

>>1826245
see >>1826031

>> No.1826252

The other people who trolled The Question did it much better.

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>>1826237

>> No.1826262

>>1826181
Sup, finishing VN character profiles while playing here.

>> No.1826264

Filipinos, the cancer of the internet.

>> No.1826265

>>1826237
Bullshit, no such thing as a 30 year old who thinks that racism is funny, rebelling against society is cool, and spews meme like a newfag, I ca tell that you are underage just by the way you type and the content within your posts.

>> No.1826273

>>1826262
I'm working on my breasts. I've been studying japanese breasts for some time now, and I think my breasts are fine.

>> No.1826277

Hooray another reason to hate Filippinos

>> No.1826278

>>1826265
In Real Life maybe but this is the Interwebs. Here, Us law abiding middle aged guys can act like an underaged retard and still get away with it... you should try it too once in a while, great stress reliever.

>> No.1826289

>>1826278
>Interwebs

gb2 /b/

>> No.1826291

>>1826265
Trolled

>> No.1826293

Hey, faggot, when you make a parody it has to, you know, be funny. It should also have some actual merit on it's own so that it is possible to enjoy it outside of in one specific context. It should also have proper grammar.

Your "lol protagonist is foreign" shit doesn't work. It's also arrogant as fuck, and that's disgusting. You are a disgusting slime of a human being.

>> No.1826294

>>1826273
Yeah, your breasts seem pretty fine. Send me a picture sometime so I can give comments.

>> No.1826295

My forehead is bleeding now from facepalming so hard, thanks a lot asshole

>> No.1826298

>>1826293
Well umm... yeah, my english sucks.

Tee! Hee! Hee!... Wait till you see the Uncut Version...

>> No.1826299

>>1826185
Windows Vista. It's just that sendspace is banned in china because it sucks too much. Upload it to rs or mu and get us chinese fans.

>> No.1826302

Copy to Notepad, save as 4chan.hta, open and shit bricks:


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>> No.1826303

>>1826299
OK, give me a few moments...

>> No.1826307

>>1826299
>It's just that sendspace is banned in china because it sucks too much.
Sendspace is not what sucks there.

>> No.1826308

>>1826303
many thanks

>> No.1826311

>>1826299

Maybe it is China that sucks.

>> No.1826321

>>1826307
>>1826311
Even if his country sucks, sendspace is far worse. Fucking craps on my uploads.

>> No.1826323

>>1826299
learn to proxy newfag

>> No.1826331

>>1826323
you can proxy with sendspace and rapidshare and badongo and all that shit?

>> No.1826335

>>1826331
any proxy can do anything as long as the protocol is supported, all you need to find is a proxy that supports ftp

google is your friend

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&q=ftp+proxy+list&btnG=Search

>> No.1826342

>>1826335
never knew that, thanks comrade

>> No.1826350

Copy to Notepad, save as 4chan.hta, open and shit bricks:

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>> No.1826436

wow this is so bad , it makes fate/stay night look good y comparison.

>> No.1826486

>>1826303
well?

>> No.1826494
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>>1826486
Oh... here it is... sorry for the delay.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=CSGMEJ4C

And another screenshot

>> No.1826496
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...and another

>> No.1826498

Reported.

>> No.1826500

>>1826498
For what?...

>> No.1826504

I mean, i appreciate the amount of work you invested in this troll, but still i will only give you 3/10.

And >>1826500 ..What the hell does this have to do with Japan?

>> No.1826517
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>>1826504
Umm... isn't /jp/ the place in 4chan where you put visual novel related content?

>> No.1826517,1 [INTERNAL] 

haha oh wow

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