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1804350 No.1804350 [Reply] [Original]

I just had a crazy Idea. Hear me out.

A Ciaphas Cain Visual Novel set during his formative years at a Shcolla Progenium facility and following his early romantic foibles. It's young Ciaphas' last year at the Schola Progenium, next year he joins a Commissariat cadet squad and begins his field training. This is his last chance to get with the girl of his dreams. Sister Josephine, a beautiful, but stony demeanored aspiring Battle Sister. Can he win her affection before graduation comes?

>> No.1804362

Adept Rosa- A calm, unflappable girl who is being trained for shuffling papers and accounting. TEH REI essentially. Her route is the most depressing. Rosa keeps her emotions bottled up because she is still dealing with the grief and shame of the fact that her parents were purged as heretics by the Ecclesiarchy for being members of a non-sanctioned Imperial cult.

Krella- The Schola Progenium firearms instructor. Krella is the most distinctive character of the bunch. She's a warrior woman from a feral world and has the muscles and tribal tattoos to show for it. Cain is more than a little intimidated by her. In fact, the first time you chose her route, he breaks the fourth wall and says "ARE YOU INSANE?!" Krella's route also features the only rape scene in the game. She does the raping.

Ciaphas pines for Josephine constantly, and if you choose a different girl's route, Caiphas is a total bitch about it.

For example, at one point in Angela's route she is about to confess to Ciaphas. Well, he goes and brings up Jospehine (again). Poor Angela assumes that Ciaphas doesn't want her and runs off in tears.

What does /jp/ think?

>> No.1804356

The characters and their routes

Sister Josephine- The one girl Caiphas is pining for. Josephine's beauty is matched only by her fiery devotion to the Emperor and desire to become a battle sister. Her devotion to this goal is such that she has rebuffed every advance from every potential suitor. can Caiphas win her over before it's too late? Her route is the hardest, but you have to get her to unlock the harem ending. Underneath her hard, exterior lurks a very insecure girl.

Sister Angela- A meek and mild mannered girl who is being trained for the Sisters Hospitallier. She may seem meek in social situations, but she has a calm, almost saintly bedside manner and is very skilled with a scalpel. Angela has had a crush on Ciaphas since they first met, but is far too shy to ever consider telling him. Her route is the easiest, basically she's the one you end up with if you fuck up everyone else.

Commissar Cadet Ophelia- One of Ciaphas' fellow Commissar Cadets and one of the few women to make it into the Commissariat. Ophelia is an energetic girl and is WAYYYY too enthusiastic about everything (including battlefield executions). Her route include the most hijinks. In order to win her over, Ciaphas will have to participate in her pranks.

>> No.1804368

FUND IT

>> No.1804365

wat

>> No.1804372
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>> No.1804374

What the fuck?

>> No.1804381

I would buy so many copies of this

>> No.1804383

Ciaphas is just too awesome for a VN.

>> No.1804387

I don't know, if I'm playing a WH40k VN I kind of want there to be some heresy to crush or something.

>> No.1804394

>>1804387
This.
There could be tender loving, but heretics never rest.

>> No.1804397
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>> No.1804398

>>1804362

Okay, you had better get an artist and a programmer and make this fucking thing sharpish, becuase I WANT TO PLAY KRELLA'S ROUTE ALREADY!

>> No.1804422
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1804422

Put a Cultist-chan or two in there.
You know, "purging" not necessarily means "instantly kill the heretic". The batshit insane girl may work here.

>> No.1804433

>>1804356
>Commissar Cadet Ophelia
She sounds moe. Do want.

>> No.1804434

not tonight josephine

>> No.1804446
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>>1804422
And a lolicron for the CLANG CLANG CLANG

>> No.1804454

>>1804434

Yeah, I would play every route except Jospehine just to piss off Ciaphas.

Also, Angela sounds so moe. Do want.

>> No.1804469

Any drawfags in this thread? We need sketches of these characters!

Also, Krella FTW. MILF+Six pack+Tribal tattoos= hot.

>> No.1804480

Any drawfags or writefags interested in this?

>> No.1804483

So who is Ciaphas Cain? I know very little about wh40k details like that.

>> No.1804485
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1804485

A tragic tale of forbidden love.

>> No.1804492

>>1804469
/tg/ art could work too.

>> No.1804497

>>1804483

He's the comedy Commissar. Everyone thinks he's a hero, but he's really just a self serving coward who keeps being forced into heroic acts by Deus Ex Machina. Basically Flashman in the 41st millenium.

http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Ciaphas_Cain

>> No.1804501

Fuck romance, I want him pranking everybody and a few games of scrumball.

>> No.1804511
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1804511

Quickly! To /tg/ and let's see if their draw/writefags are interested!

>> No.1804525

>>1804511

We need a title for this project to.

How about, To Cain?

>> No.1804529

OP is better off asking /tg/, /jp/ is too weeaboo to know anything at all about w40k

>> No.1804547

>>1804525
Needs more GRIMANDARK. I think /tg/ should pick the name

>> No.1804548
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>>1804529
Lies.
There are loyalist troops here.

>> No.1804556

>>1804525

Perhaps "Schola Days?"

Nope, not enough Nice Boats in this game.

>> No.1804563

>>1804556
In the grim darkness of the far future, there are no boats...
Only HUEG spaceships.

>> No.1804597

>>1804563


yes, but are the HUEG SPACESHIPS Nice?

>> No.1804598

>>1804597
Under the correct circumstances.

>> No.1804609

>>1804597

To be honest, not really. The big ones are like 15,000 years old and the small ones are shit.

>> No.1804619

>>1804422

Second, this game needs a yandere Cultist-chan.

>> No.1804623

>>1804597
If the Geller (sp?) Fields fail during Warp Travel, or if the Tyranids attempt a boarding action, yes.

>> No.1804658

I just got a boner.

>> No.1804681

Secret Cultist Route?

It should be a trap. It'd be beautiful.

>> No.1804689
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1804689

Cool Battletech thread, bros. It's like I'm playing Mechwarrior 2 for the PC all over again.

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>>1804681
*BLAM*

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>>1804689

>> No.1804740

>>1804705

Make it's pursuit the only way to segue into a possible successful Josephine route. It's be the perfect line of irony.

>> No.1804744

Josephine sounds like a typical crappy main heroine that nobody really likes. Main heroines always suck.

>> No.1804765
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1804765

Too bad we never get anything done.

>> No.1804783

>>1804765

I'd be willing to drop this shit into onscripter myself, if it weren't for the fact that it'd never get written and the art would never surface.

>> No.1804864

I thought I was reading /tg/ and came on delicious /jp/ territory, but it seems it was rather vice versa.

This needs to be drawfagged.

>> No.1805288

This would be epic, MAKE IT!

>> No.1805308
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1805308

I often catch myself browsing /jp/ and thinking that I am actually browsing /tg/. The reverse happens quite often as well...

>> No.1805324

/jp/ and /tg/ bff

>> No.1806255

Bump for drawfagotry.

>> No.1806283

>>1804350
90% of the people in this thread are from /tg/

>> No.1806304

Needs a female Techpriest. Or at least a male techpriest side character, you know the one that's kind of a pervert and envies you a bit because you get all the chicks but still helps you out because you're buddies?

That guy has to be a techpriest.

>> No.1806316

>>1806304
I thought techpriests had no feelings.

>> No.1806343

>>1806304

Naw, the pervert should be a portly, cheerful Drill Abbot who spends his downtime in the cantina pickling himself with prodigious amounts of ale.

>> No.1806353

>>1806343
But then who would be the "best buddy that introduces you to the girls" guy?

>> No.1806356

>>1805308
I thought I was the only one.

>> No.1806357

>>1806353

Commissar Cadet Ibram Guant

>> No.1806365
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1806365

<3

>> No.1806369

>>1806357

I lol'd, but isn't Commissar Guant a little old to be in the same class as Cain?

>> No.1806375

I don't even play VNs (or play TGs) and I've never heard of Ciaphas till now

FUCKING FUND IT

>> No.1806382

OP here. This project sounds like fun. I'm going to see about setting up a free forum tomorrow. Any client suggestions are welcome.

>> No.1806384

>>1806375
Why are you even here?

>> No.1806400

>>1806384

for the interesting conversations about Japanese culture

>> No.1806788

Ok... OP... WHY would you post this in /jp/?

>> No.1807016

>>1806788
VN's are far more /jp/ related than /tg/

>> No.1807060

Needs more Adepta Mechanicus girl route (CLANG CLANG CLANG) and Pariah gene girl route. Untouchables, fuck yeah.
But without going the Eisenhorn way (hey I'm smoking hot and people find me attractive... but I'm an untouchable so my life si full of rejection and grief!)

>> No.1807080

>>1806382

A forum? Sorry, real men only use imageboards.

>> No.1807085

Also possibly an Officio Assassinorum girl (Callidus adept prone to lulz like Kohaku? Eversor-tan?). and a Krieg girl. Gas mask moe motherfuckers.

>> No.1807104
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>>1807085
Eversor-tan for obligatory yandere! (or more likely yangire, but still a man can dream a drug fueled psychotic super-assassin might fall in love with him)

>> No.1807827

sounds like win btu we need /tg/ quality draw fags for this shit post this in /tg/ aswell and see if any one bites

>> No.1807898

>>1807104
/tg/ canon says that sorta shit is where Doomrider came from.

>> No.1807922

>>1807104
I had another image in mind, the scar-faced one who is just lightly raising the skull visor, but yeah, that's the gist.

>> No.1810112

BUMP

>> No.1810466

>>1810112

TODEH WE BUMP FOR THE EMPRAH!

>> No.1810470

>>1810466
lol XD

>> No.1810493

>>1810466
Wouldn't you be considered an enemy of the Emperor and subject for EXTERMINATION?

>> No.1810499

>>1810493
I think you meant Exterminatus.

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>>1810493

Just like old times!

>> No.1810509

>>1810493
Some mutants may work for the Imperium if they pledge themselves to the Emperor.

>>1810499
Exterminatus is the sterilization/destruction of a planet

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This thread has made me post in /jp/ to mark my approval of the idea. I feel foetid now.

Also, Mechanicus up in this motherfucker.

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>>1810602
Fuck yeah! I've been looking for that image

>> No.1810687

Any chance we could get that free forum set up?

>> No.1810961

>>1810631
hnnngh.

>>1810687
Assembla.com

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