/jp/ - Otaku Culture

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W-What are you looking at, /jp/?

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Your penis.

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That fertility rate.

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>>14218042

That idiotic looking pen case. Who the fuck uses a polka-doted pen case?

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むし。

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>>14218042
Why the fuck are you using one of those cheap bic pens that come in boxes of a hundred to write your notes? For the price of that box you could have bought three or four decent pens that would last you in total longer than the entire box you bought. Fucking stupid school girl.

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>>14218478
>>14218065

/jp/ sure is judgmental.

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Those big beautiful eyes of yours are gorgeous how would you like me to walk you home

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>>14219047
I want Big Boss to carry me home in his big manly arms.

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>>14218478
>boxes of 100 bic pens
where do you live

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>>14218478
she obviously wants to have a lot of pens on hand in case someone needs one you AUTIST

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>>14219233
penisland

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>>14218478
I brought a box of a hundred Bic crystals because they never died on me and I lose my pen every two days

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thanks for looking back

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>>14219257
A classic. Thank you.

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>>14218042
Where the fuck are the others? Where did you hide them bitch?

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>>14218042
Post the version of this where she is hit on by niggers.

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>>14218042
It wasn't that uncommon for a girl like her to stay behind in class, but I still got surprised. The way she was trying to hide such a huge notebook behind her tiny hands amused me.
Looking at the cute strap hanging on her cellphone, it wasn't hard to take a guess at her personality. At this time, I decided to tease her for the fun of it.

Right as I was getting closer to her desk, I could clearly hear her breathing getting heavier. It probably took her a good amount of courage to talk in the first place but it got all washed away the moment I took my first step towards her. This notebook, I wonder what kind of embarrassing thing she was writing in it?

"What am I looking at? I wonder, what do you think?"

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>>14219804
Probably pictures of dicks. That's what I drew in my notebooks in high school.

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>>14219804
fuckin creep you ain't an ikemen

if i were her i'd knee you right in your tiny dick and balls creeper

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>>14218042

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>>14219804
I fucking hate VN-like writing.

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>>14221131
But that's not VN-like writing at all.

>It wasn't that uncommon for a girl like her to stay behind in class, but I still got surprised.

VN narration is almost always in present tense (for immersion purposes; you are the protagonist, experiencing that scene right then and there), while this writing is in past tense. With the more direct writing style of VNs, remarks on how things usually are ('it wasn't that uncommon...etc') are relatively rare compared to other written media. If such a remark is present, it's in present tense and either the protagonist's direct thoughts or something important enough to explicitly mention it.

Also, VN narration tends to follow the protagonist's situation and thoughts more directly. For example, if written as a VN, that scene would be more like this:

(Hm...? What's this?)
I thought everybody had gone home already, but there's still a girl in the classroom.
...Staring at me.
(Well, this is awkward.)
She seems to be trying to hide a huge notebook with her tiny hands, but of course I can clearly see what she's holding.
Her clumsy attempt at hiding it brings a smile to my face.
"Umm..."
The girl tries to stammer something, but she can't manage to get any words out.
etc

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>>14221465
kill yourself back to your vn general

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>>14219804
you tried / 10