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General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

>> No.14211135

>>14211066
Sameface is same

>> No.14211193

This artwork reminds me alot of SaGa Frontier.

>> No.14213467

How do you draw chibi looking sprites? Its like there's some mental block that prevents me from drawing anything less than 5 or 6 heads tall.

>> No.14213847
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>>14213467
Probably child size head at a giant scale. Then add the deformed body and throw in the small cute details.

>> No.14213863
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>>14213467
it's fuckin easy dude

>> No.14214239
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>> No.14215180
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14215180

hi /jp

meant to post this in the roll thread

but like most things in the past, it is gone now

>> No.14215685

>>14215180
looks nice, not sure about the caption

>> No.14215918

>>14215180
That's really great

>> No.14216071

>>14211066
Aside from the sameface, you have some serious anatomical issues to deal with. Leg to torso-ratio, head-placement, stance... Pretty much everything. It's a nice concept though, so keep the practice u.

>>14214239
Something about her head is really putting me off. Or his?
But nice and plump otherwise.

>>14215180
Bomb-a-head!
Pretty great dude, love the facial expression especially.


The Touhou-Album turned into a two-man-project. So far I got two songs pretty much drafted out and two more in the making.
Still looking for test-listeners, so if anyone here is interested and wants to help, please contact me.
lunatic.sinsack@gmail.com

>> No.14216316

I drew some things but they're shitty and not /jp/ related so I won't post them.
I just wish I was unemployed.

>> No.14216989

>>14216316
I bet they're more /jp/ related than your OC-less blog post.

>> No.14217073

>>14213863
This method seems legit, but I'm still bothered by how to place heads when there's no neck.

Also it feels like drawing someone in a kigsuit.

>>14213847
Are those cans of beer, cans of beryllium, or cans of bromine?

>> No.14217204

I've been working on and off on a metal arrange of Freudia Battle from Rosenkreuzstilette since 2009. The song structure's pretty much done, I just have to record it. Link to the MIDI is below, feedback would be appreciated.

http://tempsend.com/873A81E72F

>> No.14218206
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14218206

How the chibis be comin folks?

>> No.14219382
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14219382

Welp, please be gentle.

>> No.14219430

>>14219382
I really like this

>> No.14219519

>>14217204
The composition is complex and diverse, I guess, but...
Honestly, the first half is almost unbearable to listen to without being annoyed or unnerved by the sound of it.
you placed notes that are adjacent on the scale in a chord and that only sounds good or interesting in some places, not if it's a constant thing in the overall song. Complexity is good and all, but you need to write with harmony in mind. If it doesn't sound good, people won't care for how complex it is.

Around the 106th bar/beat though, it gets pretty interesting and nice. It starts off slowly with a melancholic melody and progresses into a fine bridge into the next part, in my opinion this could even be the songs end without regrets.
At the 154th beat, it get's a bit annoying again, and at the 166th beat, everything is back to its terrible sounding pace...

To sum it up, you should change your musical priorities. Instead of focusing on what's complex and diverse, shift your focus to what sounds good and then apply complexity and diversity TO IT.
It has an interesting pattern in terms of songstructure, not unseen, but also not overdone, so I recommend changing the said parts a little up to the point the sound good enough.

This is just my opinion though. If you like what you did yourself, then keep it up - But I really recommend you listen to my advice, even if just for my own hearing pleasure.
For something you worked six years on, I find this lacking in all kinds of places. Don't let this get you down though. You seem to have the knowledge and skills to improve on it.

>> No.14219799

>>14219382
really nice, but i'm kinda disturbed about the height of the hair, if that's what you call it

try lowering it down a little and it should be alright
though, how do you manage drawing young girls? i've been having trouble going into the lower-age range

>> No.14219867

>>14219799
>but i'm kinda disturbed about the height of the hair
If you watch Nobuna No Yabou enough you might get used to it. Everything above the eyes is set to be quite tall, but it *can* be considered passable.

>> No.14219868

>>14219799
Not him, but big heads, big eyes, low set faces, no boobs, none at all, and shorter porportions. (like 5-6 heads tall)

>> No.14221018

>>14219519
What do you mean by "sounding good" though? Could you give specific examples of what does and doesn't sound good, what's wrong about the pace, etc? Is it because it's in a Swedish Death Metal style to begin with?

>> No.14221100

>>14221018
No, that really doesn't have anything to do with it, since I am a huge fan of Death Metal of all origins.

What I mean by "sounding good" is sounds or notes that harmonize with each other and are comfortable to listen to. For example, using a C and C# to form a chord only works in specific situations, but you chose to conceptualize that kind of pattern throughout the whole song, which in my opinion was a bad choice.
Of course it all depends on how you are going to arrange it. There are ways to make it sound great - again, I wouldn't recommend doing it throughout the whole composition - but I would have to actually listen to the finished song to jugde that. Maybe I just get the wrong idea from what I listenend to so far. But it looks to me like you disregard the use of scales in your work.

>> No.14221192

>>14221100
Oh, like dissonance? I wasn't aware there were so many parts like that. Is it dissonance in between all the instruments that's the problem, or that in individual parts? To be honest, I don't really look for scales or anything, I just do what "sounds good" to me and I usually get positive feedback from the results. This is pretty helpful though.

>> No.14221332

>>14217204
I looked up the song and I didn't find any resemblance.

>> No.14221441

>>14221192
Dissonance is probably the right word to phrase it, yes.
Although I am not sure about it, since that as well is something I occasionally find me enjoying.
The problem I had that it was going on pretty much throughout the whole song, at least in what I suppose will be the rhythm guitar.

Will you be arranging the song sometime soon? So I know what exactly you had in mind.

>> No.14221682

>>14221332
Really? The interpretation is kinda loose sometimes to fit the genre, but most of the parts are quoted from the song.

>>14221441
What do you mean by arrangement? I thought that's what it was, at least by the doujin music definition.

>> No.14222060

>>14219382
This is super cute! More, please!

>> No.14222073
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14222073

Did a pumpkin.

>> No.14222076

>>14221682
I am talking about porting the MIDI to actual instruments.
Playing what you composed on a real guitar.... something like that.
Don't you want to do that?

>> No.14222118

>>14222076
Well yeah, sure. I'm just unfamiliar with your use of terms. ESL?

>> No.14222127

>>14222118
Yeah. Sorry about any misunderstandings that caused or might cause in the future.

>> No.14222362
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14222362

>>14217073
it's bear

>>14219382
i-is that cum on her skirt?

>> No.14223726

>>14219382
Is that character original?

>> No.14223820
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14223820

Haven't sketched in ahwile. Every time I wait awhile to do it again it takes me ages to draw just the face and hair.

>> No.14224152
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14224152

Reality crashes back down like a tonne of bricks.

>> No.14224949

>>14222073
Nice nice.

>> No.14225042

>>14222362
>>14213847
Condoms? Beach parties with drugs? Get these sluts out of my /jp/. I come here to escape real life and all of its annoyances

>> No.14225080
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14225080

Where do you guys put your tablet when doing digitals? Next to the keyboard? Just below the keyboard? On your lap?

>> No.14225857
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http://vocaroo.com/i/s0G6tVqei8kn

Does it sound fitting?

>> No.14225976
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14225976

>>14225080
Right in front of me, keyboard to the side. Keyboard is supposed to go behind tablet but my desk and monitor support are shit.
I also had to get a keyboard without numpad because it is easier to reach.

>> No.14225987
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14225987

>>14225080
Right in front of me, keyboard to the side. Keyboard is supposed to go behind tablet but my desk and monitor support are shit.
I also had to get a keyboard without numpad because it is easier to reach.

*I also hate when my pc autoflips photos.

>> No.14225991

>>14225857
Not for the area in the image. It looks like you're about to descend into some cave. Music sounds more like some near the surface tune. It's okay as music for the game concept in general. Maybe even title screen music.

>> No.14226021

>>14225080
I have a laptop so I just push it back 12 inches and place the tablet below.

>> No.14226146
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14226146

Not the fastest anymore

>>14225080
I just put it on my lap, like I would for a sketchbook.

>> No.14226162

>>14215180
Ham, is that you?
I love you.

>> No.14226168

>>14226146
please teach me to color like you.

>> No.14226169

>>14225857
It certainly sounds better than your previous attempts. The music seems like it could fit but not for the zone in your image.

>> No.14226177

>>14225857
Make something moodier like https://youtu.be/pfryxqYSHqA

>> No.14226208

>>14226146
Now she's the plushiest. Top tier work by the way.

>> No.14226612

>>14225857
>http://vocaroo.com/i/s0G6tVqei8kn
Maybe a little too happy and upbeat depending on what mood you want for the game/level.

>> No.14228070
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14228070

2 Panels:

/c/-tan is presenting /jp/-tan to /pol/-tan in a "well, what do you think" gesture.

/pol/-tan hugs the crap out of /jp/-tan saying "honorary Aryans" much to /c/-tan's surprise/delight.

>> No.14228090

>>14228070
slam poetry?

>> No.14228119

>>14228070
bonus panel: /jp/-tan wishes she was at home playing VNs and not having to mingle with the normals

>> No.14228902 [DELETED] 

>>14226612
>>14228119
Your story isn't very cool, bro.

>> No.14228904

>>14228070
>>14228119
Your story isn't very cool, bro.

>> No.14228925

>>14228070
Board mascots are worse than meme. Also, fangs should be banned on anime girls because they look more goofy than cute.

>> No.14228962

>>14228925
That's like saying real people shouldn't be allowed to have snaggleteeth. It still looks dumb, but it's not like it doesn't happen.

Also vampires and kemono-mimi are the best kinds of anime girls.

>> No.14228972

>>14228925
I don't remember asking for your opinion, nerd!

>> No.14229115

I want someone to draw Kourin in an Ironman suit power by a mini-hakkero

>> No.14229164
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14229164

>>14211066
I'm up to page 29 of my OC comic /jp. Maybe I'll finish this project this time.

>> No.14229225

>>14229164
I really like those colors.

>> No.14229417
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14229417

Harpy Cheerleader

>> No.14229691

>>14229417
I thinks it's very well drawn. Panties are a bit too lewd, though.

>> No.14229831

>>14229691
>too lewd

dont be heretical

>> No.14230093
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14230093

took a while to finish this. Let's see if you guy can find the hidden stuff in the drawing. Enjoy.

>> No.14230553

>>14229417
wud pet

>> No.14230840

>>14230093
y-you made this?

>> No.14230954

>>14229164
The monster looks like it's perfectly capable of speaking English but only ever says "Wurgle" to make people uncomfortable.

>>14229417
I really like how all your drawings look so warm and cute. Thank you for drawing.

>> No.14231073

>>14230093
Where's the benis :DDD

>> No.14231846

>>14229417
I thinks it's very well drawn. Panties are not lewd enough, though.

>> No.14231953
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14231953

>>14211066

I did an Aya today because I listened to

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYmC_VHVSg0a

and it convered me to Aya. Thanks MS paint + mouse! Might update it tomorrow.

>> No.14232588
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14232588

WIP add ahegao cuz horny
>>14230840
y-yesh
>>14231073
in my waifu's mini tight skirt

>> No.14232785

>>14232588
It's fantastic.
Do you have DA/pixiv?

>> No.14232982

>>14230093
Im no artist, but Alice's left hand looks a bit too skeletal.

>> No.14233042
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14233042

H-Help me color my loli, /jp/!

But seriously, I can't seem to get into color combinations without turning stuff monochromatic.
Fuck Halloween.

>> No.14233159

>>14230840
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=230478

>> No.14233279

>>14230093
Lots of 2hu by the fountain.

>> No.14233289

>>14233159
Your art is great.

>> No.14233627
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>>14233042
your colours are overall too light, dont shy away from some darker colours. your shadows are also too close to the base colour, makes it feel flat. if you want to be lazy you can slap an overlay filter on it (dont overdo it though). i'd suggest not saving binary-lined pictures as jpg, you get nasty artifacts.
as for picking colours, learn some colour theory and do studies.

>> No.14233642
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14233642

I did a Satori as a warm-up today.

>> No.14233731

>>14230093
w-what would they be doing with a c-condom?

>> No.14235394

>>14230093
Are you taking requests right now?

>> No.14235510

>>14230093
>>14233159
How long did this take you to make?

and h-how long have you been drawing?

>> No.14235538

>>14230093
this w-was from an anon? I saw it on konachan and saved it for wallpaper use.

>> No.14237171
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14237171

hello /jp/

>> No.14237213

>>14237171
I want her to crush my face with her breasts.

>> No.14238185

>>14237171
Adorable!
I like that yoshika one you did last year, too.

>> No.14238552
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14238552

I cooked up a Remi. I hope you like it, /jp/!

>> No.14239014
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>> No.14239492

>>14239014
Those are some narrow hips!

>> No.14239524

>>14239492
anti-birthing hips?

>> No.14239536
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14239536

I colored this finally.

>> No.14239539
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14239539

And I did an Okuu. Forgot her shoes because of Reitaisai and 20th 2hu anniversary.

>> No.14239914
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14239914

better than not drawing anything I guess

>> No.14240982
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14240982

>>14226208
Thanks, I appreciate it.

>>14226168
I don't really know what to tell you, I bend a lot of rules a lot of the time to just do what I think looks nice.

>> No.14241137

>>14239914
it's solid anatomy at least

>> No.14241158

>>14239914
is this furry

>> No.14241239

>>14241158
ambiguous
since the face is covered

if it has a snout then it's furry

>> No.14241249

>>14241239
>ambiguous
>since the face is covered
that's why i'm asking

>> No.14241268
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14241268

>>14239914

That's pretty good!

And, I'm almost done with this Eiki Shiki.

>> No.14242125

>>14241249
demand it to be removed just to be safe

>> No.14242249

>>14242125
i like the picture
but i also like to know what i'm fapping to

>> No.14244828

>>14241268
>14229691
Your works looks much better coloured or you just got better. This one does not have a hideous face like the others.

>> No.14245388

Just finished a new version of the last music I posted here. That was about 4 months ago though so probably no one remembers:

https://soundcloud.com/vapor-hands/ougon-no-melancholia

>> No.14245698
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>> No.14246199
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>>14244828

Glad you liked it! I can feel myself getting more precise and timely. Going to post a quickie I did in a moment. I just use MS paint and my mouse.

>> No.14246203
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14246203

This was fun to do.

>> No.14246818

I remember someone asking for the /jp/ Music Compilation Two some threads back. Just remembered today, but I finally got to it. I put it straight into its dropbox so it can stay online indefinitely.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/vmrs61ypsff8mih/%EF%BC%8Fjp%EF%BC%8F%20Music%20Compilation%20Two.zip?dl=0

>> No.14246941

>>14245388
May I ask what were you going for with this track? I'm 3 minutes in and still have no what I am listening to.

>> No.14247678
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14247678

what drawing program do you use /jp/?

>> No.14248854

>>14247678
None, because I don't know what to pirate. Is manga studio okay? I can get that without pirating.

>> No.14248942

how do I become a amazing, world renowned, manga artist like Dan Kim?

>> No.14249138

>>14248854
manga studio 5/clip studio paint is very good. you should try out the trial rather than asking though.

>> No.14249244

>>14246941
Just an easygoing background-type music with a bit of melancholic tinge, that slowly builds up to a lightly dramatic climax.

Oh, and also, this was my go at making music without using percussion instruments.

>> No.14249314

>>14248942
Pick some old cartoon with cute girls and make stupid, violent comics vaguely about them. Nanoha, Hidamari, and Lucky Star are probably good choices. When you run out of ideas, put together a bunch of blank black pages and blank white pages, and intersperse them with a few scribbles of stuff you saw in Nihei comics. Once you get tired of doing that, go back to working on your good silly comics.

>> No.14249317

>>14248942
Have depression and shitpost on /jp/.

>> No.14249318

>>14249314
>stupid, violent comics with cute girls
my only weakness

>> No.14249366

>>14249317
I swear the one thing that will never change on /jp/ is shitposting about dan kim

>> No.14250139

>>14249317
I do that and I'm still not amazing as dan kim

>> No.14252396

>>14239914
Is that that cat chick from Darkstalkers?

>> No.14255723
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14255723

wish I could post more.

really haven't been productive recently

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14255897

>>14246203
>>14246199
>>14239539
>>14239536
>>14238552

I did an Orin. Almost done with it.

>> No.14256366

>>14255723
i don't like any of those girls

>> No.14257022

>>14255723

The way you do stuff reminds me of old school anime. Neat!

>> No.14257332

>>14252396
its a dog. no snouts
>>14255723
Ham help me

>> No.14257456

You should draw your favorite Touhou, visibly pregnant, enjoying herself in a hot spring.

Regards,
A Pervert

>> No.14259936

>>14255897
You should do some backgrounds, possibly dark themed to go with the face.

>> No.14260029

Finally came around to finishing a piece that's probably a couple of years old:

https://soundcloud.com/vapor-hands/the-surveyor-last-struggle

There's a lot more like it, I'll get around to them someday... maybe.

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I wish i can draw digital

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I wish i can draw digital

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14260548

i wish i can draw digital

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>> No.14260902

>>14255723
I was worried you disappeared.
thanks for returning, ham. ilu

>> No.14261065

>>14260623
you're a little weird

>> No.14262591

>>14260623
I don't understand anything apart the hand and character, but this is probably your best drawing so far

>> No.14262652

>>14260548
I wish I could draw.

>> No.14262661

>>14262652
it's easy, just look at something and copy it using your hand

>> No.14264075
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14264075

>>14259936

I've never really tried BGs. But I did a Sanae today.

>> No.14266604

What happened to that one guy who drew those weird angular pictures of dudes?

>> No.14266634

>>14266604
i hope he died and doesn't ever come back

>> No.14266717
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14266717

At least the landscapes have subjects now...

>> No.14267187

>>14230093
Try to challenge yourself a little more with the poses and expressions that will make a huge difference with the average pixiv,etc artist.
Also when you're drawing something wrong, don't delete it. Draw it immediately again and fix it, that way you will properly understand what you did wrong and won't do it again.

>> No.14267196

>>14266717
Reminds me a bit like John Berkey. I like it.

>> No.14267210

Hey guys, I'm no artist but I'm looking for a picture that was posted here a really long time ago. I think it was the OP pic of the 100th~ /jp/ original/drawthread. It's a really well drawn and colorful pic of Marisa, that's all I can remember. I think there are some orange stuff in the background, perhaps pumpkins. Thanks in advance~

>> No.14267220

>>14267210
Ask >>14226146, he drew it.

>> No.14267330
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14267330

>>14266604
Probably still here.

>> No.14267523

>>14226146
>>14267210
Please~

>> No.14267847
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14267847

here's a quick-a-roo sketch

amassing all those sketches into one big one takes too long and makes me look like a hermity jerkface

>>14256366
that's fine

>>14257022
thanks

>>14257332
how can I help?

>>14260902
i am never disappeared

i am here in you're hearts

>> No.14268265

>>14267847
i like that girl

>> No.14268402

>>14267523
I went to check and that guy wasn't the artist. I have no idea who's the artist.

>> No.14268403

>>14267196

Thanks. Everyone always says Syd Mead first when they think of a great sci-fi artist but I always though John Berkey was better.

>> No.14268615

I'm surprised at the number of genuinely good artists there are on here. I've probably seen more good art in this single thread than in most threads on /ic/. Keep it up gang.

>> No.14268776

Lately when looking at my own drawings, I feel more disgusted than disappointed. I can't point out anything specific, everything just looks horrible and I don't know how to fix it.

So how does one go about changing their whole style?
Or did I just accidentally level up from a doodler to an artist..

>> No.14268944

>>14268776
how do i unsubscribe from this blog

>> No.14269006

>>14268776
looks at drawing you like and copy them until you draw more like them.

>> No.14269167
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14269167

who is the best artist to learn from if youre drawing moe?

>> No.14269273

>>14269167
For me, it's Watanabe Akio-chan!

>> No.14269427

>>14268402
I remember the artist was a she and sometimes posts WIP lewd pics in Sai. Thanks for helping though.

>> No.14269681

>>14269167
Just to let you know, the design of that character is most probably ripped off from a character of the manga Genshiken.

>> No.14269685

>>14267847
>how can I help?
I don't know. post more drawings
talk to me

>> No.14269699
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14269699

One more spaceship image before I go back to being useless.

>> No.14272340
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>> No.14272880

Hi /jp/. I'm the anon from a thread or two ago that started to write some stuff with magic and guns and war and magical girls and autism and politics. I've laid out an overview of the settings. Below is a small excerpt, and the rest is in this pastebin:

http://pastebin.com/S8xpaMya

>----------------------------------------
It is the Industrial Age, where magic and science have allowed Civilization to reach untold heights.

Magic, once reserved for the elite, has become more accessible for more and more people. With the creation of Magic Refineries - factories dedicated to mass producing useable magic stones, magic has found use in a person's daily life. On the other hand, the use of magic in warfare also reached a fevered pitch.

The invention of the combustion engine has revolutionized transport, allowing the travel of vast distances with unprecedented speed, and the greater expansion of empires.

With the discovery of electricity, the modern person's life has transformed unrecognizably. New machines such as the telephone, radio and television came to the fore of communication and entertainment.

Events begin in the first day of Spring, of the Year 1932. After the collapse of the Arian Empire and the subsequent land-grab, the world finds itself in a relative calm as armies are forced to a defensive stalemate, in the later years of the domination of magic and gunpowder of the battlefield which has rendered attacking even a slightly fortified position an act of folly.

In secret, however, newer and more terrifying weapons are now being developed, using the combined might of magic, science and industry, to break this uneasy peace. At the same time, intrigues and machinations form in the shadows, awaiting the perfect chance to reveal themselves.
>----------------------------------------

>> No.14274715

>>14272880
Sounds very interesting Anon!

>> No.14274740

>>14274715
NOT!

>> No.14275349

>>14274715
Thanks, anon!

>> No.14276342

>>14267847
Can you draw anything other than women?

men? vehicles? animals? plants?

>> No.14276352

>>14276342
He should try drawing all of those as girls

>> No.14276355

>>14276342
But what would be the point in that, anon?

>> No.14277082

>>14276342
If anything, I want him to draw more little grills.

>> No.14277097
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14277097

good job /jp!
keep at it. I'm still doing my stuff too

>> No.14277123

>>14277097
is he daijoubu

>> No.14277372

>>14272880
>>14274715
At the moment, I am hashing out the background and the general mechanics of the world, as well as fleshing out the various actors in the world. Below, I will post a summary of a very important aspect of the story - the mechanics of "Magic". The full texts can be read here:

A Primer On Magic - http://pastebin.com/eEZ1es6x
Advanced Topics On Modern Magic - http://pastebin.com/LNaaFYLx

If there is a specific topic you'd like to read about, do let me know. I've actually written a whole lot more, including stuff about certain groups, events, and even one (which I'm still being autistic about) on politics. But for now, I'm trying to introduce the most fundamental concepts first so people won't get confused later on.

>> No.14277420

>>14277372
Magic, as the term will be used very often, refers to two different things depending on the context: First, it refers to the energy inherent in some special stones. Secondly, it is also used to refer to the learned ability of humans to manipulate this energy and create real-world effects.

Almost any human can use magic to some extent, or at least, has the potential to do so. However, the most effective and most modern spells usually require skill and talent to use, so, for a long time, Magic was reserved for the educated and wealthy elite.

Magic is a naturally occurring energy found in special stones known as Magic Stones. There stones are usually mined or quarried, and it seems to be a replenishing resource - as magic is used - it returns to the world to be recovered again.

There are 5 known disciplines of magic. Four of them are grouped into a category called "Formal Craft". Formal Craft, Red, Blue, Green and White magic, is what is referred to as "conventional" magic. The last, Black magic, is most commonly referred to as Witch Craft, and is regarded as abominable, dangerous and inhuman.

A. Formal Craft

1. Red Magic

This discipline covers all spells that ultimately convert magical energy into light or heat. These kinds of spells find most use in military applications, but some are useful in industry, specifically in producing electricity.

Examples of Red Magic are Beam Projection spells, and Thermal Conversion spells.

2. Blue Magic

This discipline covers spells that use a fundamental technique of "solidifying" magical energy, i.e. converting it into force. Spells in the blue discipline find most of their uses applied in self-defense, such as barriers, but some are also useful in industry and engineering.

Examples of Blue Magic include spells of: Barrier Craft, Force Projection, Pinpoint Defense, and Magic Platform.

3. Green Magic

This discipline covers a wide range of spells that affect the functions and structure of a living body. They are typically spells that improve the physical and mental ability of humans, and those that degrade them.

Green Magic discipline includes Augmentation spells, Mind Clocking spells, a wide variety of spells that attack or enhance a person's magic capacity and, finally, Magic Coating.

4. White Magic

This discipline manipulates magical energy itself. White magic is usually used in magic reclamation, restoring a person's damaged magic capacity and in logistics.

White magic typically covered a range of supporting spells, like Restoration, Magic Battery, Magic Transfer, and so on, but recent, failed, research in Royal Azalea suggests that White magic may hold a hidden destructive potential, possibly surpassing that which is possible with Red Magic.

B. Witch Craft/Black Magic

Considered an illegal discipline of magic to study, Black magic revolves around the relatively new concept of absorbing and storing magic directly in a person's body, effectively creating a living Magic Battery.

The processes involved in doing this, however, are incredibly dangerous and unimaginably cruel. The end result is also mostly a failure, killing the subject.

Furthermore, in the process of doing this, which involves "ripping out" a person's magic capacity, a person who does succeed in becoming a "Witch", as the end product of this process is called, cannot any longer tap into the magic from magic stones, as they are lacking any magic capacity. Instead, they need to transfer magic into their own body directly from others, a process that tends to damage the magic capacity of the victim, as well as causing physical harm.

Finally, there is a wholly different field of magic, under Black Magic, which they have sole and exclusive access. These spells are also unlike others in that, unlike any other spell, which, after casting, leaves residual magic that either returns to the world or it can be reclaimed and placed into Magic Batteries, Black Magic transforms magical energy into a new material - physical materials of varying kinds, which allows unnatural spells that, for example, create firestorms, shoot bits of glass, and even produce living monsters and give life to inanimate objects. This means that the magic is forever lost and cannot be reclaimed.

>> No.14277622
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>>14277420

>> No.14278076
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>>14267220
>>14267523
>>14268402
I've drawn Marisa a lot but what you're describing doesn't sound like something I've drawn.

>> No.14278149

>>14267210
this is the only thing i can think of: https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1305642?tags=magister_%28medical_whiskey%29+kirisame_marisa
>>14277097
are you posting the rest of this anywhere?
>>14269699
i really like seeing your landscapes again! they seem much more vibrant now

>> No.14280057 [SPOILER] 
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14280057

i drew a thing, jp!

>> No.14280073

>>14280057
nice shoulders, arnold schwarzenigger

>> No.14280113

>>14280073
the strongest

>> No.14280736
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14280736

one of my 4am sketches i dunno

a yuuka

>> No.14281201
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14281201

bartender yuugi

>> No.14281522

>>14280073
Your instructor~
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EEf7fhXStnk

>> No.14281525

>>14280736
Very nice sketch, would love to se it finished too.
>>14281201
Weird but charming artstyle you got there.

>> No.14281846
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14281846

I tried the other day, /jp/. So.. which is your favourite Rembrandt?

>> No.14282380 [SPOILER] 
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14282380

I really need to try to improve my lineart.

>>14281846

I'm rather boring so I'd say the night watch but it is a nice image. I like the folds in the clothing and detail on the carrion.

>> No.14283046

>>14281846
>look guys I drew myself being an artist
>look guys I'm a girl on the internet, notice me
fuck off

>> No.14283558
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14283558

Hey artists/writers, you guys wanna start a skype? Seems like we're mostly working towards the same stuff

>>14277372
Thanks man, was looking for something just like this


fight scenes are hard to learn to draw if you have no references

>> No.14283607

>>14281846
fuck you're amazing WY

tbh more of a romanticism/hudson river school faggot (or hell even mead schaeffer's cool)
if had to choose prob storm on the sea of galilee
couldnt appreciate rembrandt its like he's got contrast set to +50


side note, any idea what's that painting where the dad murders his son and starts mourning? might've been done by some german dude

>> No.14283609

>>14283046
anon no bully

>> No.14283611

>>14248854
clip studio saves so much time w inking

>>14239014
wait a fucking minute black sheep is that u

>> No.14283639

>>14283607

I don't know the artist but it sounds like the subject is Ivan the terrible.

>> No.14283812

>>14283558
Do you mean you were looking for a sort of fantasy/ww1/2 warfare setting? If so you may be in for a treat.

I don't know how often I can go on Skype, but I'm definitely in this thread much more often.

>> No.14283947

>>14262652
Great news for you.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/bravecadet/i-draw-manga-sketchbook-and-reference-guide/

Although, I'm still getting some Western style vibes. But what what the hell do I know. I can't draw either.

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>> No.14284215

>>14283046
I imagined it more as a loli Rembrandt doing the painting. But if that's your interpretation then fine.

>>14283607
Hudson river school? Good taste. I'm not sure if this qualifies as that, but pic related is one of my favourites. I agree with you with rembrandt's contrasts. He's not my absolute favourite in that regard.

>>14283639
You're right, it's Ivan the Terrible and His Son Ivan.

>> No.14284260

>>14283639
>>14284215

>ivan the terrible
nailed it. thanks guys

>>14284215
>loli Rembrandt

dutch golden ahoge

>> No.14284268

>>14283812
meant like more contemporary/logical magic (but magical nazi battlions? neatt)

also yeah this thread is great but the fact everyone's on/off + anon kinda makes it hard to talk

>> No.14284276

>>14216071
Sorry, I haven't been able to make anything without feeling like I'm a piece of shit recently. Phenomics is basically dead unless I find a vocalist, and it's so difficult when I don't like leaving my house.

>> No.14284280

>>14284268
>meant like more contemporary/logical magic (but magical nazi battlions? neatt)
Ah, yes that too. You'll be hearing a lot more of it and all the crazy things a developed military-industrial complex can do with it.

>> No.14284307

>>14225857
I still think you need more moody music like mine instead of regular music. The game you are making is awesome, but it needs music to set the mood, I'm not saying mine is correct, but it needs something to make the player feel like they're actually there instead of just jamming to the music.

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1piOyol4wcY

>> No.14284329

>>14255723
I wish I knew you in real life so that every time you stopped drawing I could punch you in the dick. I need more.

>> No.14284336

>>14284329
wow violent

>> No.14284353

>>14284158
What is her facial expression and body language trying to convey? Explain it to me like I am a 12 year old. Also, the location of her right arm looks so awkward/painful.

Seriously, what is that baka trying to tell us?

>> No.14284367

>>14284353
The strongest can wear any expression she wants without needing to convey anything

>> No.14284441

>>14255723
who are you
who ARE you

>> No.14284446

>>14284353
>What is her facial expression and body language trying to convey? Explain it to me like I am a 12 year old.
I also do not know. Maybe contemplating the wonders of lambda calculus.

>Also, the location of her right arm looks so awkward/painful.
Thank you, I found out too late. Does it look passing at least? I tried to make it as leaning against wall out of the image. Is the problem because the arm is raised too high, placement of the hand, or something else? I will be grateful for your helping me better understand.

>> No.14284511

>>14284446
Depending on how you meant the pose to be, there can be two reasons why the image looks weird.

1) Her right arm looks as if her elbow should be located precisely at the very edge of the image. If this is not what you meant to do, then that is your problem - that arm is too long.

2) If you intended the elbow to be positioned at the edge, then her forearm is missing, or it is mispositioned.

>> No.14284586
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14284586

I did Kagerou

>> No.14284613
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14284613

>>14284215
>pic related
Fuck. Forgot my pic, silly me!

>> No.14285057

>>14284276
I'm a little confused right now. Are you who I think you are?

>> No.14285067

To the anon artist who emailed me his work, I'm really sorry for not replying in a timely fashion, but in the off-chance that you might be here, I'll just say that I'm satisfied with the design you sent for the Album Cover and we should keep in touch through mail to discuss it further!

>> No.14285258

>>14284613
FUCK FREDRICH EDWIN AND ALBERT BIERSTADT GET ME ROCK FUCKING HARD

fuck me that lightings' amazing

>> No.14285511
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>>14284586
Nice

>> No.14285542
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14285542

i-i tried..

>> No.14285664

>>14285542
here's a reply just for you
those are cute glasses on her, i'm glad she's wearing those instead of contacts

>> No.14285710

>>14285542
That's some insanely ugly font.

>> No.14285947

>>14285710
It's a plain, clear, easily readable font. What's wrong with it?

>> No.14285964

>>14285947
It looks like someone grabbed your image and put some text there in 10 seconds. It's not that the font itself is ugly, but it doesn't fit.

>> No.14286035

>>14285964
>My image

>> No.14286817

>>14286035
We're all anonymous here. It doesn't matter who is who.

>> No.14287212

>>14285511
qt

>> No.14287512

>>14284511
I understand, thank you very much.

>> No.14290642
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/jp/sies I want to try making a comic
I wanted to try a 4 koma but I'm not sure I can follow the story format. It seems hard to come up with things that end in 4 panels
Any tips?

>> No.14290656

>>14290642
Start with the beginning and the end joke then fill in the middle two.

>> No.14290692

>>14290642
I always wanted to do a 4koma as well but I can't draw at all. The quick witty style of humor in 4komas always appealed to me.
Just read some other 4komas for inspiration

>> No.14290762

>>14290642
4koma are generally unfunny shit, so you can just do whatever for 4panels and you'll be on par.

>> No.14291699
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14291699

>>14290642
1. INTRODUCTION
2. DEVELOPMENT
3. TURNING POINT
4. CONCLUSION !

>> No.14292220

>>14277097
cute, do you have a blog or something?

>> No.14292251
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14292251

Anyone know where I can find a replacement Intuos pen that won't cost me an arm and a leg? Mine's broken.

>> No.14292318

>>14292251
havent heard of any alternatives to the official store....hope you find something, though

cute painting btw! Reminds me of ghibli haha

>> No.14292385

>>14292318
>>14292251
Reminds me of anime from 世界名作劇場 , probably because she looks like a character from one of those kinds of books.

Actually staring at it for a while, it looks like Ranma. Is that Ranma?

>> No.14292392

>>14292385
Ranma? In a casual dress?

>> No.14292406
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>>14292392
It's not a casual dress, it's a school uniform.

>> No.14292591

>>14292251
How can I contact you? Can we be friends?

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>>14276342
nope, i have the autism

here have some more.

>>14284329
ow

>>14284441
i'm me

i'm totally not a robot, though

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>>14290642
>>14292251
>>14292591

>> No.14293194

>>14293179
u wot m8? u be'a take that back or oil cut u I swear on me mum

>> No.14293233
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14293233

>>14293179
I think I love you

>> No.14293427

>>14285542
senpai why

>> No.14293646

>>14293179
fuck off

>> No.14293871

>>14292318
Thank you, I think I'm gonna have to give in and just get one from the official store.

>>14292385
It's not supposed to be Ranma, but I see what you mean.

>>14292591
>>14293179
Sorry, I went to bed. I'll be your friend! Please don't kill me

>> No.14293881

Really? I'm so happy! Do you have a pixiv or something? I'll message you there. Otherwise you can e-mail me at my throwaway e-mail whyjohnsmith990@gmail.com

Thank you!

>> No.14293920

>>14293155
Dude do you have some kind of pen name so I don't have to organize your drawings by "jpsie".

>> No.14293968

>>14293881
Meant to reply to >>14293871

>> No.14293985

>>14293881
Yeah, my pixiv is 15324593

>> No.14294031

>>14293920
he's known as the Ham Slinging Slasher

>> No.14294036

>>14293985
sent c:

>> No.14296183
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14296183

I like Koishi

>> No.14296399

>>14269699
I like how you have progressed from dick shaped rocks and other phallic landscape objects to something like that.

>> No.14296780

>>14296399
Man just go outside once in a while and marvel at how much of the world is "phallic"

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>>14293920
>>14294031

Ham is fine

>> No.14298316
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14298316

I bought a G-pen, paper and ink
I'm gonna do it /jp/, I'll make my own weeb comic

>> No.14298366

>>14298316
It's funny because weeb comic looks like web comic and most web comics are weeb comics.

>> No.14298372

>>14298299
I know this sounds awfully beginner like because we all know it's the artist and not the tool etc. but what program and what brushes do you use? I really dig the general aesthetic. The image in this post actually does not really invoke this aesthetic to me, which is interesting.

>> No.14298399
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14298399

My recant drawing

>> No.14298498
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14298498

My doodles look better than things I put effort into

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>>14298366
That's the joke!

>> No.14298973

>>14247678
wait.. AutoCAD

what the fuck how

>> No.14299670
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>> No.14299694
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14299694

>>14247678
Excel, of course.

>> No.14299954

>>14298372
Its Sai's noise brush setting.

>> No.14300346

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6lnj1vQW8dyelI2ZEw4aVBBS28/view?usp=sharing

here you go

>> No.14300357

>>14300346
What's that anon? A virus?

>> No.14300379

>>14300357
no..

dd- do you want one?

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14300380

>>14298498

>> No.14300657
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14300657

I made a bote.
Are botes /jp/ related?

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>> No.14302643

you guys are like really FREAKIN' talented, dude.

>> No.14302868
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>>14302643
thanks

>> No.14302948

>>14302868
Is sort of feels like her tongue should be wider or sticking out of her mouth.

>> No.14303145

>>14302948
well tell it to the artist it's just my reaction face pic

also i disagree, it's perfectly fine the way it is

>> No.14303803
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>> No.14303804
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>>14298498
That's pretty cheeky.

>>14301196
Nice homu, I hope you keep it in the composition..

>>14302868
This reminds me, I need to check out all the CucumberQ comics I missed.

>>14293233
y-yyou too!

>> No.14303930

>>14303804
you waited too long to respond I don't love you anymore

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>>14303930

>> No.14303987
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Does she look okay as far as a sketch is concerned? It's for an animation exercise but she won't be the one animated and will remain in this pose, and not being the central point of the scene, I won't try to lineart her or anything.

Added in some shadows just to try and give the scene some volume. Anything eye-popping to fix?

>> No.14303996

>>14303965
Post the "do you even lift" one

>> No.14304025

>>14303987
the eyes aren't leveled, otherwise you've got a good base

>> No.14304033

>>14303965
I'm sorry, I didn't mean it. Please keep drawing.

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>>14304025
Better? Thanks for the input.

>> No.14304156

>>14304084
Yep, that's better.

>> No.14304200

>>14303804
Look at this bitch dancing for attention

>> No.14304552

>>14303804
That's some nice font.

>> No.14304602

yo, what's the name of that program used for moving shit around without actually redrawing it?

like what vanillaware/george kamitani does

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>>14303987
It would be easy to just say everything but I would suggest reading more into perspective and anatomy.

>> No.14304644

>>14304602
Spine 2D
You could also use flash
Hell you could use any 3D program too

>> No.14304791

>>14304634
I'd prefer if you told me exactly what's wrong with it so I can try and fix it right now, please. I'm not an artist as you can see, so I don't plan to draw past this either way.

This is literally eye-candy for another 30 frames of animation of an assignment, so the more I can fool people into thinking I'm actually competent with a pen on a static image, the better.

>> No.14304799

>>14304791
How can you animate if you can't draw?

>> No.14304822

>>14304799
It's an assignment to animate a 'rock' falling for fifteen frames, with a piece of paper floating down next to it for 30 frames. You have to put your creative twist on it which is where she comes in, but you can literally draw a single frame of the 'rock', then take it to photoshop and rotate it around until it hits the ground. Drawing the sheet of paper should be relative straightforward too.

Not really something you have to be an artist to do. It's not an art class, just an animation class teaching you the basics. I've already had a pretty disastrous six months of "art" before this.

>> No.14304832

>>14304822
I see.

BTW, why aren't you in STEM?

>> No.14304854

>>14304832
I suck at math.

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>>14304791
As I said, read more into perspective and anatomy. You don't even have to read a whole book. Even small tutorials would help you. To make it easier on yourself, I would suggest to omit her high heels.

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>>14305035
Bloody hell... fine. I guess this wouldn't be the last drawing I would have to make anyway. I'm really not comfortable making these things.

One last judge though? I figured from >>14304084 's post that the ground was completely wrong, so I remade it, made the right shoulder a bit larger and ironed out the chicken scratch on the arms. As for omitting the heels though, no can do, the ground has to be visible for the rock to hit it and I cannot draw feet for the life of me (if you could not already tell from the hands). If it looks bad, I'll just have to deal with it for now.

Either way, thanks for the suggestion, and I'll stop bothering you gents since I might throw the thread into autosage by myself at this point with this shitty drawing.

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>> No.14305708

>>14304822
>Not really something you have to be an artist to do. It's not an art class, just an animation class teaching you the basics

>not an art class

nigger you just failed

>> No.14305795

What happened to that weird guy who played guitar in his mom's basement?

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>> No.14306083

>>14306023
can I masturbate to your drawings

>> No.14306425

>>14305218
Ha this very cute and colourful, saved.

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Concepting things at 3am is a great idea

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>>14296399

It is hard to draw dick rocks in the ocean and clouds.

>> No.14307015

>>14306882
Cute

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>>14305035
>>14304822
>>14300657
>>14300380
>>14299670
>>14298498
>>14298399
>>14296183
>>14284586

Holy shit /jp/
some of you can't even seem to draw faces

Here, translated one of toshi's tutorials

(great starting point, he does a TON of tutorials, you can get the gist of most of them since they're mostly pictorial);

now stop wasting time here and go practice

>> No.14307476

>>14307464
oh yeah side note he keeps referring to straight crosshairs as diamond-shaped (ひし形)
no idea why

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>>14306023
oh and satsuki game strong

>> No.14307490

>>14307464
I don't see how some of those don't follow the example. How is >>14300380 not aligned for instance?

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>>14307490
probably easier to explain here

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Mokou mini. 1 inch base. Mainly just painted over an existing sorceress mini that came with Reaper Miniatures Bones 2 kickstarter.

Made the bowtie from greenstuff. Never again. What a pain.

>> No.14308085

>>14307464
moar toshi pls

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space loli.

>> No.14308388

>>14307464
Do you know of any other tutorials like this that have lots of different angles of faces?

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>>14307984
I guess I can appreciate you fixing up the arm but I feel like you're nitpicking about the face since it was just one eye being more open than the other like pic related. I'm grateful for the criticism but saying I can't draw and trying to prove with a guy who draws ugly faces is a little insulting.

>> No.14308487

>>14308376
What's that thing with teeth in the background?

>> No.14308666 [DELETED] 

SEXY MIKU ON YOUTUBE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0XDYYBy-d3M

I love this so addicting, my dick is diamonds....,

>> No.14309068

>>14308666

Die Antwoord and anime?

>> No.14309096

>>14308376
Do you draw live sometimes? I think I recognise this art style.

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>>14307464
>tfw I draw the guideline axis because it looks cool without any clue how to utilise them

>> No.14309250

>>14307464
Could you redline mine please? >>14300657
This is very depressing.

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>>14309097
For the weeb style you generally want the lowest part of the eyebrows to line up with the horizontal line. Right below that the nose starts going down the vertical line, as well as the rarely drawn eyelid, then those big ass eyes start right below the eyelid, and generally end at the same height as the top of the nostrils, or higher if you're making a very small nose or a more realistic face. The bottom of the vertical line is the point of the chin, you generally want the mouth to be an equal distance between the chin and the nose, although you could just end the vertical line in the middle of the mouth and draw the chin by feeling how far down it should go. For a more realistic face the chin would probably be a little shorter, and the middle of the mouth would be just barely closer to the nose. For a face like the picture you posted the top of the eyelid would be where the horizontal line is and the nose line would start at that height as well. The brows would have enough space between the eyelash and the brow for a another whole eye to fit, and the cranium would be particularly bulbous to allow for more hair. Also in that pic the mouth needs to be slightly lowered, if you raised the mouth any higher she would look retarded. Also her mouth is just barely too far left to actually be accurate, but that's normal for this style. Pic related, the relaxed mouth shown at first here has the "identifying lines" so to speak way off center, but when she smiles it becomes a lot more accurate of a portayal because the mouth stretches out to her eyes. It looks distorted because her face is distorted in the first place, but no one cares about all of that bullshit so long as it's cute and expressive. If the mouth was smaller to make it look less distorted and actually drawn directly under the nose in the relaxed pose I think I would actually like it more, but it seems like no one agrees with me on that.

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>>14300380
>>14298498

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>>14308081
AAAAA
THIN YOUR PAINTS

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>>14309416

>> No.14310036

>>14308463
it just kinda stuck out to me from the thumbnail
also I apologize if came off as harsh

it's just frustrating to see all these beginners here and not a single reply pointing them in the right direction to improve

>>14308085
Don't really have the time to translate all; but if you had a specific one in mind I'll try

>> No.14310087

>>14301196
reminds me of yujirushi's stuff. Cute!

>> No.14310117

>>14310036
>>>/ic/

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>>14310036
I wouldn't call myself a beginner but anatomy is something I should focus more on. I just wanted to draw a burg.

>> No.14310413

>>14310117
.....
/ic/thread/2269660/

thank u crossbreeder anon

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>>14303804
I left it in just for you.

>>14310087
Thanks!

>> No.14310642

>>14310525
holy shit you ARE yujirushi

w h er e is your pixiv

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completed version of >>14280736

having trouble with colouring anything non-living, anything i could do to improve them?

>> No.14310739

>>14310525
loving this, brush/pen do you use for your linework?
i'm using the G-Pen on CSP, and i can't seem to get lines that smooth

>> No.14310824

>>14310718
Oooh good, I was hoping I wouldn't have to just save the sketch only

>> No.14310844

>>14310824
Sorry, I was caught up with school

if you don't like the sunflowers, i could post the version without it

>> No.14311072

>>14310525
thanks homu

>> No.14311480

>>14310642
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=367529 That's flattering but I'm not, haha. I draw cute normal stuff vs /d/-sized boobs/porn on a 30:70ish ratio though, fair warning.

>>14310739
I do almost everything in SAI.

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>>14310525
>>14311480

You wanna post a quick tutorial or somethin', dude?

>> No.14311783

>>14309737
My paints were thin, but my skills just enough to make it look good. Also the model was cheap, Chinese plastic.

>> No.14312092
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Draw my waifu for NSFW stream
http://imgur.com/5CpxID5

>>14267187
Thank you, I will try to draw more pose and expression. I never delete my drawing (not that I can recall), I like to let the mistake stay so I can get better. I am personally just not a big fan of redrawing or fix my stuff unless I rly messed up. But I will try to take your advice, Thank you and I appreciate it.

>> No.14312981

last!

>> No.14313010

>>14312981
oh no you don't!

>> No.14313023

>>14312981
nice try!

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