Review the last doujin you read

[Anonymous No.]

It caught my eye because it's about Satori and has a distinctive artstyle.
I really liked the idea about Satori making friends with Remi through a doll since they are both very dignified people who I can imagine very well trying to hide their true feelings all the time, however the whole yuri undertone was kind of stupid.

7/10

[Anonymous No.]

I think that artist tries to hard

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026241
Oh, that was translated? I don't see it on exhentai.

I can read Japanese, but it makes me wonder if there's more I'm missing by not bothering with other scan sources anymore.

[Anonymous No.]

I'm interested in any English Non-H doujins featuring the Scarlet Devil Mansion. If you know of any, please let me now.

[Anonymous No.]

Touhou Gensou Houkai from R8.
very accurate, the 2hus are just like in my imagination
10/10

[Anonymous No.]

I fucking hate yuri shit.
I enjoy funny Touhou doujins, or serious ones but to a lesser extent.

[Anonymous No.]

Six years later, Residents of a Touhou Town is still a masterpiece.

[Ostinia No.]

>>12026748
One can grill the scarlet devil
Elemental 8

[Anonymous No.]

Very cute, very petlike
10/10

[Anonymous No.]

Short, but very sweet.

[Anonymous No.]

10/10

it was really good

[Anonymous No.]

A doujin about the "friendly rivalry" Kokoro and Koishi have and the problem Koishi faces at the end of HM.
Basicly this artist tried to finish the story that was started in HM and left often for speculation in a way that seems very plausible.
No bullshit happy ending, but not a heartbreaking end either, something that fits very well into touhou

8/10

[Anonymous No.]

>>12028355
I like this doujin too.
His other works are also quite good if i say

[Anonymous No.]

>>12027379
Nyoro~n

[Anonymous No.]

>>12028355
Hope is probably the best HM themed story so far.

[Alicemous No.]

9/10 Adorable but disgusting.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026748
search "Millet Soup" on exhentai - almost all of his doujins are SDM, almost all are translated, and all are non-H

[Anonymous No.]

It's cute, the art is nice and it's pure vanilla goodness. 9/10

[Anonymous No.]

>Girl finds herself being fucked, doggystyle by her friend who was male and is now a dog.
4/5

It was going to be 3/5 but I found the exotic setting/plot good enough to warrant another point.

>A girl who is about to pee herself finds herself in a compromising position when she sits in her house's occupied toilet.
4/5 but the added point was for the stupidly funny setting.

>Rei Ayanami is a slut and fucks many men
1/5, I wanted to give it another point but it's already been done so many times that it was dull 10 years ago, not to mention now.

>A guy fucks a girl, they cum at the same time.
0/5 I mean, c'mon, it's like you're not even trying anymore.

[Anonymous No.]

7/10.
The romance part isn't bad, but Koishi suddenly being weak until Kokoro arrives and save the day is too clichéd.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12033386
I remember asking a guy to translate it so I coud edit it.
Never got any news from him.

[Anonymous No.]

it was really cute, even though the imouto was raped and was on the drugs, the oniichan didnt care and still made lots of love to her. i liked it

[Anonymous No.]

http://exhentai.org/g/688943/3b4f6ffbfe/

10/10 YES! YES! YES! OH MY GOD!

[Anonymous No.]

Boy has kind, sweet gangbang with other men while senpai watches.

9/10 it's alright

[Anonymous No.]

Tewi teases Reisen sexually about her futanari status, but they end up cuddling and having loving bunny sex.
9/10.

[Anonymous No.]

I went to exhentai to fap and found http://exhentai.org/g/692270/a645da9e82/

I will not be fapping today, I don't want to destroy the afterimage. Karaage/10

[Anonymous No.]

>>12038567
Karageetarou is the best thing to ever happen to Touhou, adn if you disagree you should be seeking help

[Anonymous No.]

>>12039899
I usually don't like ultra cute stuff because it looks forced, but Kara manages to do it perfectly, his whole setting looks so natural and relaxing. My favourite artist after Warugaki.

[Anonymous No.]

It's called doujinshi

[Anonymous No.]

Scarlet Tear's Call
http://danbooru.donmai.us/pools/8146

Doujins are really unique type of media. Being independent they have to deal with very limited resources. Author has to fit everything he wants to say in just mere 20-30 pages. That's why every single page and even panel is important.
What do we have in this doujin? 40 pages of completely boring, mindless and pointless action. No plot, no emotions, no meaning. All 40 pages are wasted on nothing, it's a stupid filler that would suit only for a long running seinen series.

3/10 and that's only because it's about Komeiji family.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12040158
*a really unique type

[Anonymous No.]

A story about struggle and intense family dispute, all put into 2 fully coloured pages.

8/10

[Anonymous No.]

My Master Likes Punishment!
g/692736/b12dda9cb7/

Another doujin by Sazanami Mio. As usual it's about Youmu and Yuyuko. And as usual it's utterly stupid and retarded.

1/10. I can't believe there are people who enjoy such bad humour...
>Rating:
>Average: 4.47 (16)
Oh, fuck this world.

[Anonymous No.]

[Sonota Oozei (Yukataro)] Kiniro no Hazuri | Golden Cutting Line
http://exhentai.org/g/692855/6ee1a742f1/

I like the art, characteristics (especially Yukari) and story (it's not that special, but it's good)
Yukari with short hair is quite cute
3/5

[Anonymous No.]

Anonymous Florioid by Warrior Prune

A short comic about Yuuka answering questions, with an interesting art style. I liked it because his Yuuka's personality matches pretty well with what I think of her. 7/10, it's worth the two minutes or so it'll take you to read it.

>>12040635
Why do you keep reading them if they're so bad? You know that all you're gonna get when you open one of his works is SoL bullshit and ecchi.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12040635
I didn't realize he did doujins. Guy's got decent style but he turns Youmu into such a helpless moeblob I can't forgive him.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041036
Holy shit. I just read two of them and they're moe as fuck but why do they all have to be so goddamn rail-thin and arching their spines all the time? Youmu's a useless wimp who can't think or make decisions, Marisa's a generic fang loli, Alice's a fucking dyke yet again.

It's just distasteful.

[Anonymous No.]

A short doujin about a shrunken Marisa.
Shinoasa does it again. Every page and almost every panel is bursting with Marisa flavor.

10/10.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041080
Don't knock the spines.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041110
Why not? Evidently they're made of rubber, they won't be harmed.

The guy draws beautiful clothing though. I guess I have no choice but to wade through the rest.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041116
If the clothing is the only redeeming factor, then don't bother. You'll just end up reading a bunch of books you don't like.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041125
You underestimate the degree to which clothing matters to me.

[Anonymous No.]

Yoshika is cute.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041033
Thanks, I really liked that. It's not the sort of Yuuka I generally like to think of, but it sure lines up with her baffling dialogue in POFV pretty well. Whether it's just the alien thought process of a youkai, or a deceitful answer designed to provoke discomfort, I'm not sure.

I generally like to think of Yukari as the one who can barely be understood by mortals, and Yuuka as the one who can't be bothered to explain herself to them, and enjoys telling them riddles that make them nervous.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041505
On the subject of different yuukas, rireba had an unusual angle.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041505
I'd think that both, being immortal, superpowered beings, are equally incomprehensible. Yukari, however, seems to "dumb herself down" more than Yuuka when speaking to humans or younger youkai. I'm reminded of an idea I had while stoned that the reason Yukari helps Reimu preserve Gensokyo, and the reason for the overlap in their powers (borders/barriers) is that she's somehow a gestalt of the souls/consciousnesses of all the previous Hakurei mikos.

[Anonymous No.]

I barely even read it, the cover drew me in. Art's nice, only a couple of hiccups throughout the whole thing. Story's some China/Maid stuff or whatever, who cares.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041518
I guess I'll check that one out next. There was also that one that asserted that Yuuka was secretly a long-lived fairy. I like to take her at face value though, an ancient nature spirit as approachable as a daisy, as beautiful as a rose, as intimidating as a great forest, as pleasant as a sunny day.

It's awful, but my favourite depiction of Yuuka is still probably in Shako's April, literal sadism and all. It's not very literary, I'll admit.

>>12041527
There's an interesting theory. Border youkai isn't really a real thing, right? Maybe ZUN was planning that she be the spirit of Gensokyo as a concept.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041536
There's such a thing as Sukima-onna in Japanese folklore, she's just a very flat woman who hides in places like the space between the fridge and the wall, so if Yukari's based on that it's pretty much in name only. Who knows.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041518
>>12041536
>Yuuka dodges right around a screen-filling Master Spark

Well that's non-canon right there, everyone knows she can't move that fast. Thanks for sharing that, it was really cool. Generally I have a little bit of resistance towards works that purport to uncover some deep secret of Gensokyo, particularly about one of my favourite characters, but this one tied everything together rather nicely and made her end up even more mysterious after all. I love being reminded that Touhou offers up things like this as well.

[Anonymous No.]

9/10 bretty gud but gave too much emphasis on Cirno and, while not a flaw, seemingly didn't have time for a part with the scarlets.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041518
That was bretty good, though I think I like Yuuka best as a plain old plant youkai.

[Anonymous No.]

I took another look at the POFV dialogue.

>Cherry blossoms are called, just as much as the clouds, high flowers of destiny. Cherry blossoms are clouds that have fallen to the ground. Afterwards, when cherry blossoms return to the heavens, what comes next is the scenery of clouds. That is the so-called rainy season.

>Do you know why flowers can be a symbol of death as well as happiness?
>That's because they're the same as humans. Souls gather, flowers bloom, when souls leave flowers scatter.

How much of this is awkward translation and how much is Yuuka being completely incomprehensible? Or is it ZUN's fault? Shiki also gets a boatload of gibberish.

>Cherry blossoms... really want to become white. Since you've lived so long, you've seen white cherry blossoms, have you not?

We do have some fluent speakers here, don't we? I wish I knew the answer myself.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041033

Whoa. Any more like this? I really, really enjoyed that. It really captured the ethereal, mystical feeling of gensokyo.

[Anonymous No.]

I really love this, my favourite doujin!
It's a collaboration work of different artists, so the artquality greatly varies between each story and some stories are rather silly or have a lewd undertone, but I think the pets of Chireiden are vastly underrepresented in doujins and official work,so I was overjoyed to see that there are people out there who speculate about the untold life of the Komeiji families numerous pets, just like myself

[Anonymous No.]

toothbrush gets all the action
> um.../10

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041033
Even if I prefer cute Yuuka, I love this type of portrayal.

Just read this. It was okay. First part was kinda lousy.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12046414
I liked the first part. Neat Sanae.
That's supposed to be a bad haircut, right?

[Anonymous No.]

>>12046452
The first part wasn't bad, but I could swear I've seen that same scenario a couple hundred times.

[Anonymous No.]

An odd pair, particularly for someone who normally stubbornly avoids Mokou romance that doesn't involve Kaguya, but it makes it work. The drama is your standard dual "there's no way she'd like me back, I have to forget about this for the sake of our friendship" nonsense, but you're hardly reading Touhou yuri doujins for their scintillating originality.

>>12033822

It felt like it was missing a page of we'll-exploit-her-lack-of-consciousness shounen fightan-tier explanation there, but I won't let that get in the way of a cutesy story with strong characterization and clear development about the best newhu couple since Miko and Byakuren.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12046414
That was a little bit weird. Yuuka showing up to randomly beautify people doesn't really seem like the kind of thing they'd avoid her for.

The first part was kinda cool, but all in all that was a whole lot of nothing happening for 20 pages.

Maybe that makes it especially Touhoulike.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

So i stumble upon Colonel Aki's Life of Maid which has been around for quite a long time. I've read it in the past and it was nothing special.

Now that i've read the new ones after i haven't read any for a long time, i'd say he need to quit. The jokes are the same, characters are subjected to the same shit and not many variations. And why people still read this crap?

2/10

[Anonymous No.]

>>12041666
ZUN's writing is cryptic and weirdly phrased in itself, but PoFV translation (like many others) is beyond awful and people who did it hardly spoke any Japanese.

>Cherry blossoms are called, just as much as the clouds, high flowers of destiny.

>桜は、地上の雲と呼ばれる程、密度の高い花。

"Cherry flowers bloom so densely that they're called ground clouds."

I really have no words for how hilarious this is.

[Anonymous No.]

wonderful
8/10

[Anonymous No.]

It wasn't bad, there's not much substance to the stories but it's well drawn and tries to portray Nazrins daily life which is sort of underpresented for "small fry bosses".
Sadly a bit short though.

7/10

[Anonymous No.]

>>12046570
10/10

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026241
What a shallow review of something that is the opposite of shallow.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047167
I thought that in this case shallow reviews are the most appropiate since doujins aren't very long most of the time, so a long and detailed review might just be a renarration

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026241
why is alice so little

[Anonymous No.]

★★★★★

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047170
I mean shallow in the sense that there was simply no thought put into the opinion, in favor of going "Eww yuri."

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047177
I didn't go "Eww yuri", I don't have anything against yuri.
But in this case it seemed pretty stupid. and didn't add anything of value.
Also I just feel that Satoris and Remis friendship could have been fleshed out better, even though I really liked the whole premise.

[Anonymous No.]

Really good.
Asami Sekiya's lolis are realistically written, yet endearingly cute.
Ero scenes flowed nicely with good pacing. Well-written, without the ridiculous reactions and buckets of fluids often seen in other H-manga.
Art is top-tier, as always.
8/10

Unfortunately no English translation yet, but here's a link to the Japanese version.
http://exhentai.org/g/475826/b732e8c326/

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047027
So why doesn't anybody fix it? This is the sort of thing that should be top priority, right? I understand there's a fair chunk of dialogue split among each game's routes but surely we can put the shitty excuse-plot porn translations on hold for a second and make sure we've got a decent understanding of what is effectively our character bible here.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047360
Eternal translation problem: the people who care can't help and the people who can help don't care.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047369
>Why don't you just learn Japanese? In all the time you spent whining about it you would have been able to translate it yourself by now.
I nearly failed high school French. It's not something I can do. If I'm going to learn any language at all it's going to be my mother's native Cantonese and even that I don't have high hopes for pulling off.

Assuming you're the same guy I responded to, I appreciate you taking the time to show how clumsy the extant translations are. But if it's that obvious what the problems are, can't you give the wiki transcripts a once-over? Can't anyone else? It doesn't seem like what we have is remotely good enough.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047386
That wasn't me. I once-overed EoSD a while ago before running out of care, some time ago another group redid the atrocious IN translations properly. I don't know how people are doing on the rest.

[Anonymous No.]

Now you guys are making me feel want to replay touhou just to see the proper dialogues in japanese. Fuck.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047394
Oops, *wanting to.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047390
So that's why there's no longer a "Bitch, get out of the way!" on the wiki, huh. Although "A'ight" is also surprisingly colloquial, even for Marisa?

Well, I appreciate your efforts. As you'd expect from someone on /jp/ it's not like I'm overflowing with motivation myself. I don't want to be the kind of person who bothers others to pursue their own pet causes, but this doesn't really seem like a pet cause to me, when this sort of dialogue is the bulk of the characterization that a great many characters get.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047405
The issue is that when you get to know enough japanese to be able to properly translate things, you notice there's too much content you want to go through, and you end up forgetting about translating. This is probably why there are so few REALLY skilled japanese translators when it comes to otaku culture.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047409
Yeah, I can understand that mentality. "I've put in the effort, why should I put in extra effort so that other people can have a less-than-perfect understanding?"

Still, it's a pretty sorry state of affairs for western Touhou fandom when the one thing that ought to be translated properly is left in shambles. I wonder if the Japs mock us for it. Then again, being able to clearly understand the original source works sure hasn't stopped them from disregarding their contents, so whatever. The frustrating thing is that bilinguality is by no means an uncommon thing, but in certain walled-off circles it's treated like wizardry.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12033822
I just read that part again, and it looked to me like Koishi was winning easily until an oni got off a lucky wallop from behind and gave her a concussion with his tetsubo, which'll hurt no-matter who you are.

[Anonymous No.]

http://exhentai.org/g/564607/d81c0623af/

As far as I can understand, plot is standard H-manga fare, no drama. The art is simultaneously cute and erotic, and the facial expressions are amazing. I'm glad I found this guy, even if his Orin doujin is way too weird for even my tastes. 10/10 will fap to again.

[Anonymous No.]

A pretty cute lovestory
8/10

[Anonymous No.]

>>12046570
LETS DO THIS!

[Anonymous No.]

Things happen which lead to cirno having to do
<pic related.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>12048495
Wow. I'd completely forgotten to get around to reading this one. Easily another one of my favourites. It's a shame he's just doing Kancolle these days.

[Anonymous No.]

I'm fond of this one.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047778
Post the " Post the "do you even lift" one " one

[Anonymous No.]

>>12048543
I can't think about this stupid meme when I see this anymore, all I can see now is cute chubby love

[proREMIRIAt Elite Force Comman(...) !rSDMROXTB. No.]

Nice rape advice

[Anonymous No.]

It's got really good length for what it is. It helps Kemonono is the artist, too. I don't really have a single complaint about it, but I don't like using numbers to score things.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12049264

God damn it, that fucking doujin. Why the best and cutest girl of the trio had to get that treatment? Ok, it was in colour but god damn it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12049264
Did you crop that just so that we couldn't reverse search it?

God damn.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12049664

here anon

http://exhentai.org/g/688340/a9893bdbf7/

though it pains me greatly. Read others works from that artist, all of then are great.

WHY RAPE? WHY?

[Anonymous No.]

>>12034121
Give source faggots

[Anonymous No.]

>>12046943
Some guys just stick to what they know

[Anonymous No.]

>>12047444
I want this and the mokou dog to get a translation

[Anonymous No.]

Makes me wonder if touhous really forget that they can fly sometimes

[Anonymous No.]

>>12050868
They do not forgive, they do not forget, they do not remember,
In fact! they don't even think.

[Anonymous No.]

I'm not a fan of Flandre being portrayed as mentally unstable, but it's a nice little friendship story and very cute and silly

Epic/10

[Anonymous No.]

>yukataro: Golden Cutting Line
i absolutely love this artist.
not sure what happened in the middle story wise though, it was kind of implied that they switched bodies?

>Vivit Gray: Little Witch and Her Ordinary World
i like it. as usual.

>>12046470
>night sparrow in love
unusual paring, but it was cute. i didn't like the fact that mokou had such a boring character though.
being the hardworking type that is selling coal everyday just doesn't fit her.

[Anonymous No.]

Why everyone forgot Luxia Continent? Last manga posted in 2010