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Reimu found herself squatting in the grass, groaning.

Every stool was looser than the one before, and smelled fouler. By the time the moon came up she was shitting brown water. The more she drank, the more she shat, but the more she shat, the thirstier she grew, and her thirst sent her crawling to the stream to suck up more water. When she closed her eyes at last, Reimu did not know whether she would be strong enough to open them again

>> No.11822697

pls martin-san
pls

>> No.11822701

this is some epic shit

xD

>> No.11822705

>>11822687
Cholera poop is whitish. Shit story can't fap 0/10

>> No.11822713

Whilst you snored, I would lick your sons off my face and fingers one by one, all those pale sticky princes. You claimed your rights, my lord, but in the darkness I would eat your heirs.

>> No.11822716
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11822716

G.R.R Neckbeard is a shitty writer.

>> No.11822721

>>11822716

I didn't understand a lot of words in that first example. They were old and weird.

>> No.11822724

>>11822721
That's understandable because good writing doesn't appeal to the plebs.

>> No.11822727

>>11822724
Welp, I guess Lovecraft is the best writer, then. Nevermind all that narrative or characterization bullshit, it's all about the archaic vocabulary.

>> No.11822730

>>11822724
Purple prose is only good when it's coupled with other attributes.

>> No.11822741

Post the picture of Reimu taking a grate big shite

>> No.11822753

>>11822741

I like that one. She's grunting and moaning

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