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None !!quUYKxJ7rjJ Fri Jul 5 18:13:47 2013 No.11141106 [Reply] [Original]

After over a month of absence due to illness... "Swordsmanship championship" is BACK with a NEW CHAPTER! My sincere apologies about the long wait! I know lots of you have been anticipating and speculating about this for a while!

So, without further ado, here it is. Seven pages of heart-stopping action!

Previous chapter: >>10849606

>>	None !!quUYKxJ7rjJ Fri Jul 5 18:17:17 2013 No.11141120 File: 120 KB, 1410x2000, NUNBER TWO RELEASE.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>11141106

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 18:17:32 2013 No.11141121 Fuck yeah.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 18:21:02 2013 No.11141140 File: 354 KB, 549x600, 1340346435203.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] This is drawn and written really really horribly. Why do I have to pretend this is good when it's not?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 18:21:02 2013 No.11141141 I was just thinking about this a few days ago. Glad to see a new chapter. Please keep up the good work.

>>	None !!quUYKxJ7rjJ Fri Jul 5 18:21:47 2013 No.11141138 File: 150 KB, 1410x2000, NUMBER THREE RELEASE.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>11141120 Please do not try any of these dangerous stunts at home.

>>	None !!quUYKxJ7rjJ Fri Jul 5 18:24:33 2013 No.11141159 File: 164 KB, 1410x2000, NUMBER FOUR RELEASE.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>11141138

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 18:28:02 2013 No.11141182 >>11141140 Because Zunart has desensitized you to bad art so you can only see it as charming?

>>	None !!quUYKxJ7rjJ Fri Jul 5 18:28:32 2013 No.11141179 File: 226 KB, 1410x2000, NUMBER FIVE RELEASE.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>11141159

>>	None !!quUYKxJ7rjJ Fri Jul 5 18:29:32 2013 No.11141186 >>11141179 As you can see, I am not afraid of drawing action-heavy action sequences.

>>	None !!quUYKxJ7rjJ Fri Jul 5 18:33:48 2013 No.11141204 File: 237 KB, 1410x2000, NUMBER SIX RELEASE.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>11141179 Youmu and Momiji get along fine. But... A change of scene and characters?

None !!quUYKxJ7rjJ Fri Jul 5 18:38:48 2013 No.11141219
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>>11141204
Now... The protagonists are revealed! As you must be aware by the end of this chapter, the silhouettes seen in the teaser-image >>10811282 are in fact Hong Meiling, Konpaku Youmu and Inubashiri Momiji! The speculation regarding that can now be put to rest. Please welcome our three main characters!

...But there is only two places in the final. And only one can be the swordsmanship champion... Who will that be? Don't miss the next heart-throbbing chapter!

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 18:40:17 2013 No.11141226 >>11141106 How long does it take you to do all of that? (This one and the others)

None !!quUYKxJ7rjJ Fri Jul 5 18:41:47 2013 No.11141231
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>>11141219
And this is the post-script.

>>11141226
This was one of the many questions I was asked and which I had no time to answer. Please look forward to the next chapter, where I will answer this and many more questions.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 18:45:17 2013 No.11141236 >>11141204 Being Konpaku is suffering.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 18:46:03 2013 No.11141241 >>11141226 I do it all in paint with a chinese laser mouse while laying on my bed.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 18:49:17 2013 No.11141250 >>11141179 >I heard something was up, but I didn't expect it to be this big! You didn't do what I think you did, did you?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 18:50:47 2013 No.11141255 凄い！

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 18:53:17 2013 No.11141267 >>11141231 These are the best

Anonymous Fri Jul 5 19:05:02 2013 No.11141298

Another fantastic release by one of my favorite up-and-coming authors. I looked over it with a bit more scrutiny than I did your previous works, as I feel you are becoming a bit more experienced. I apologize in advance for any harsh words or critique.

As this is, first and foremost, a visual medium, I will now review the art.

Art:
You've improved in many different aspects. Your lines are much smoother, as can be evidenced in a few different panels (panel 7, of page 4 comes to mind, in particular. Beautiful spread.) Your shading techniques are improving by leaps and bounds. I could tell, on every page of every panel, exactly where the light comes from and how it interacts with every characters body/pose. It was superb. I am looking forward to seeing what you can do, given a few months of dedication at this rate.

The only fault I found in the art was your small reliance upon copy and pasting a few challenging poses." I understand it's not easy to draw such thrilling work every step of the way and reusing previous images must be a strong compulsion, but it's lazy and only does you harm, in the long run. Please refrain from doing so again.

Story:
The story remains as mysterious and exhilarating as always, and I'm constantly in shock of the new and dramatic unveils you. I'm not well-versed in literary techniques, but I am constantly sitting on the edge of my seat with every page of your releases, so you must be doing something right. No complaints here.

Ero:
This is not an erotic work, nor does it try to be. I'm glad to see a new author breaking free of the constraints of drawing erotic artwork to make a quick buck. I applaud your courage.

I'm running low on character space, so I'll cut this short. Please keep up the good work, Koiiro-san, and do drink lots of tea to keep your health up. I'm looking forward to the next chapter of your burgeoning epic!

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 5 19:26:32 2013 No.11141359 File: 1.35 MB, 1600x1239, 1359756153047.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>11141204 Momiji and Youmu look cute together, but there's only one pairing involving Momiji in my heart. Will they fight each other?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 6 08:47:37 2013 No.11143882 >>11141298 10/10

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 6 14:11:57 2013 No.11144663 The fight scenes aren't as bad as I expected. GJ!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 6 14:22:56 2013 No.11144690 >>11141140 Go back to /a/ you crossie newfag.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 6 14:29:27 2013 No.11144717 File: 43 KB, 400x525, cool story bro 1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Cool comic, dude. Gonna read chapter one.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 6 14:31:43 2013 No.11144727 >>11141120 >tengu >filthy animal people >noble You don goof'd

Anonymous Sat Jul 6 14:37:27 2013 No.11144753

Next time you make a thread, could you post a download link with your previous chapters? That would the best way to introduce the doujinshi to the people that didn't read the older ones since the old threads are dead.

Good work anyway, way better than the average Touhou doujinshi.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 6 14:38:12 2013 No.11144760 >>11144753 You can just go to the archives and find it there.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 6 14:45:43 2013 No.11144793 >>11144753 It's not a touhou doujinshi, dude. It's an official touhou manga.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 6 20:51:45 2013 No.11146105 mspaint/10

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 7 16:03:03 2013 No.11149297 Holy SHIT dude this is amazing keep it up!

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 10 08:28:42 2014 No.11149297,1 I was unironically emotionally invested in this... sigh...

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