/jp/ - Otaku Culture

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After the enormous success of "lesson of passing" (>>10261760)...

And after a publicity campaign that left everyone at the edge of their seat and their imaginations running wild (>>10811282)...

I am back with a new story! Written by ZUN and art directed by me! This is chapter 1 of "Swordsmanship championship"! A story about Youmu's struggle to be the best swordswoman in gensokyo!

Without further ado, here it is! Five pages of excitement!

[Anonymous No.]

Pls no

[Anonymous No.]

>"lesson of passing"

Should be in title case.

>left everyone at the edge of their seat

False agreement, should be "seats".

>Swordsmanship championship"

Should be in title case.

>gensokyo

Proper noun, should be "Gensokyo".


4/10, will not read story.

[Anonymous No.]

sage

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All the pages are in color for the very special release of this doujin series!

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>>10849625
Not only is there action, there is also a lot of intrigue!

[Anonymous No.]

What the fuck am I looking at?

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>>10849657

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>>10849693
That pose on Tewi.

It looks familiar.

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>>10849693
Le happy rabbit

[Anonymous No.]

That's only four pages, not five.

[Anonymous No.]

This is, sadly, better written than all Touhou fancomics from the English-speaking word since Touhou Mahoudan.

>>10849695
It's Pikachu.

[Anonymous No.]

I'm hooked OP. Dump faster. I want to know what happens now.

[Anonymous No.]

Follow your dreams OP!

Keep drawing and writing, your fan comics have better dialogue than most (Especially considering deviantArt), so keep it up!

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>>10849693
And thus we reach the end of chapter one! Don't miss the exciting next chapter!

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OP.
I suggest you drop drawing and try to write stories.

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1.sugoi
2.subarashi
3.suki

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>>10849719
When will the next chapter be released, oh based OP-sensei-sama ?

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Post-script for chapter one! Don't miss the action-packed chapter two...

>>10849728
...Coming next month! I'm sorry it takes so long, but it's very hard to draw this well. I have to uphold quality so I can offer a great manga to /jp/!

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Dude, like.. I don't know, your drawing is shit as fuck but the plot... I like it.
Woah, keep going.

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>>10849734
One more thing about release schedules... I release each chapter as soon as I am finished drawing the chapter after that! Chapter two is already finished but I still have work to do on chapter three. A month after chapter one's release or as soon as chapter three is complete... Whichever comes first, I'll release chapter two then!

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7/10. It's shaping up to be a decent story, and I can tell your art has marginally improved.

However, and this might be a bit premature so you'll have to forgive me, but I'm starting to believe you'll never outdo yourself.

Lesson of Passing was a classic masterpiece for the ages. A sweeping epic that managed to encompass every emotion on the human spectrum. Thousands of years from now, people will study it in schools, gleaning and attaching new insight onto every verse.

I just don't feel that this one will be able to hold up to that level of quality, though I'm sure you'll do your best.

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>>10849770
Thank you for your continuing support!

I, too, feel I may have reached my peak with "lesson of passing". Even though it follows the same story of "living miracle girl", "lesson of passing" has gotten a lot more critical acclaim. Meanwhile, "senseless night" and "living miracle girl" have flown below the radar... Nevertheless, I will keep trying my hardest to provide everyone a great experience! Please look forward to chapter two!

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>>10849789
Waiting warmly.

[Anonymous No.]

Gaku-touhou fanzine could revive if there were more people like op.

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>>10849693
Very cool "tech" using icons to make the speech bubbles unambiguous. I'm waiting eagerly for chapter 2 -- and I strongly suspect that I am NOT alone.

[Anonymous No.]

I'm impressed this thread survived.

[Anonymous No.]

This was good! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

[Anonymous No.]

Youmo does not approve.

Seriously.

What.

The.

Fuke.

Is.

This.

Shite???

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>>10849734
just like my porn doujins

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>>10865073
No one cares about you, dork.

Hurry up and get naked so we can masturbate.

[Anonymous No.]

holy shit I'm reading a lesson of passing and it's so bad it's good.

please keep doing this stuff.

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>>10865073
You're not Youmu, fuck off you failure.

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>>10865150
One is a big dick only thinking about money and his own amusement.The other is Jewish.

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>>10865073

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I enjoyed it OP thank you.

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>>10865185
Brown girls are so disgusting.

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>>10865276
Does this make it better?

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>>10865277
Even worse. They might as well acclaim they're otaku next.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10865277
It's pretty.

Keep up the good work, shitskin-maker.

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>>10865277
Much better.

"Collecting welfare, with Youmu!"

[Anonymous No.]

Quality thread.

[Anonymous No.]

Seriously, guise. I pleasure myself exclusively to my own pencil drawings of flat-chested manga girls. Can't you at least produce something worthy of my admittedly low standards?