Patchi can be pretty freakin' sexy sometimes, right? And cute, too.

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Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:25:53 2013 No.10504134 [DELETED]

Patchi can be pretty freakin' sexy sometimes, right? And cute, too.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:28:38 2013 No.10504145 Which flavor's better? Cute Patchy or sexy Patchy?

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:31:38 2013 No.10504153

>>10504145
Patches seems really out of place in a "sexy" style. I think she's especially hard to reconcile with it because she's choinically ill, with ridiculously poor sleeping habits, rarely ever leaves the house, her hair is a mess, etc. Hell, when she does leave, she wears pajamas. It makes a jarring transition to turn that into something your average person would call "sexy" - and it definitely seems to lose something of the individual in question.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:31:38 2013 No.10504154 >>10504145 i'd fug cute patchy

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:34:23 2013 No.10504158 >>10504145 It depends on the mood, but I'd take cute Patchy over sexy most of the time. Most.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:36:08 2013 No.10504166 File: 811 KB, 625x1000, patchy for dinner.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504153 The idea is that hidden underneath the PJs there's a sexy body. I agree it's jarring, but eh.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:37:38 2013 No.10504171 >>10504153 >>10504145 Well...define sexy.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:39:09 2013 No.10504178 >>10504166 That looks rather painful! I hope he doesn't apply any more force!

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:41:08 2013 No.10504188

>>10504166
But that idea is no good. What makes her such a fun character is that she is some natural meeting place between two ideas, both of which work very well on their own, without sacrificing from either. Once you start shaping her into some sexual paradise below that, you begin to detract from both parts, and thus ruin her natural appeal.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:42:23 2013 No.10504195 File: 781 KB, 960x1000, patchy uuuu....png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504178 He won't, but Patchy's fragile so it'll hurt anyway and she'll get mad, and then he guy'll apologize profusely and try to make it up to her and stuff.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:45:53 2013 No.10504202 File: 577 KB, 1317x1920, suru_0011.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:46:38 2013 No.10504206 File: 208 KB, 750x840, dd709100a59c336abb091a03637b0c75.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504188 Fair enough. Patchy doesn't need some bombshell body to be sexy anyway. Do this, though. >>10504171

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:47:23 2013 No.10504208 File: 146 KB, 850x746, 4f0eb7487116e1392b6b2bb60789c56f.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:49:38 2013 No.10504216 >>10504208 Exercising Patchouli is, um, sexy.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:50:39 2013 No.10504218 File: 1.51 MB, 1500x1061, 1327739950713.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Patchouli is always cute.

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:51:39 2013 No.10504220

>>10504206
I don't know, exactly. It's a sort of nebulous idea taken from the preferences of the masses. Certain characteristics somewhat defined, like good health, a fit body, larger breasts, prior sexual experience. These are things that a lot of people prefer a mate to have, I think. Personally, I find value in something she already has, but that's just me.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:51:39 2013 No.10504221 File: 167 KB, 400x502, 1356881842220.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:53:38 2013 No.10504232 File: 1.48 MB, 1253x1620, 1345389041897.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:55:53 2013 No.10504238 File: 897 KB, 766x427, Capture patchouli touhou.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 20:57:08 2013 No.10504247 File: 253 KB, 674x913, 1cfc57b331dd8f6d8510a742a86e9283.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504220 I mean from your perspective. That's what we're talking about, right? What Patchys in this thread are "sexy?"

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:02:24 2013 No.10504262

>>10504247
I could point out which pictures I find entertaining, but "sexy" is a term I am not altogether fond of. It just doesn't seem to fit for whatever reason. Specifically, however, I mentioned prior that she was like an intersection between two ideas, something like "little girl" and "damaged goods," maybe. Not exactly what I'm going for, but close enough to get the idea across, I suppose.

>>10504238
This is the only picture I particularly like so far.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:07:09 2013 No.10504273 >>10504247 Very nice. Loving the unhooked front.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:07:23 2013 No.10504274 File: 469 KB, 626x910, patchy sweater.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504262 >damaged goods Wha? Fine, use whatever term you want.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:08:54 2013 No.10504280 >>10504274 I said it wasn't exactly what I was going for. She has an appearance that suggests shy and fragile, and it was the first term that came to mind.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:11:24 2013 No.10504287 File: 310 KB, 991x1400, c72b5805d62ec08f990282c25a21fe63.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504280 Shoulda just used shy and fragile, then. I can agree with that very much. Damaged goods sounds like a rape victim or something.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:12:08 2013 No.10504291 >>10504287 Damaged goods have their charm.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:15:38 2013 No.10504299 File: 1.70 MB, 1200x2300, 852076f1b87ff28b127eb89595e1ea6e.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504291 For sure. But I don't like thinking of Patchy as someone with some great past trauma or something. Maybe.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:16:09 2013 No.10504309 >>10504291 Romance is better when the guy is damaged goods, or both parties are.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:17:08 2013 No.10504315 >>10504309 I'm just the possessive sort, and mental or emotional scars that bring the other party to being dependent or obsessive are something I greatly appreciate.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:22:08 2013 No.10504330 File: 64 KB, 800x800, 41731dc408f3233ff33e31ff8bbf91d6.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504309 >>10504315 I disagree. I'd rather it be love keeping them together, not dependance or fear or something.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:23:38 2013 No.10504333 >>10504330 It's more of the guy is restored to good mental health through the power of love.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:23:38 2013 No.10504334 What would the damage be with Patchy anyway?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:24:08 2013 No.10504337 File: 238 KB, 1600x1129, Konachan.com - 45830 patchouli_knowledge shameimaru_aya touhou.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What about drunk Patchy?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:24:38 2013 No.10504338 >>10504330 That's an opinion, man.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:26:23 2013 No.10504347 File: 591 KB, 1431x1109, patchy is leavanny.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504333 That sounds fine, I guess.

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:41:22 2013 No.10504389

>>10504347
The converse is that the girl is damaged goods and the guy fails to fully reach her before she commits suicide, and he gets depressive and damaged after her death. (Speaking of things that make good stories, not things that are good in real life.)

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:42:08 2013 No.10504397 File: 216 KB, 690x960, 1352249037234.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504389 That doesn't sound like a very good story.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:44:08 2013 No.10504400 File: 582 KB, 1000x1414, 1359749158861.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504397 Depressing stories are good, and I don't like to write happy ones.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:46:09 2013 No.10504407 File: 286 KB, 869x669, patchy can't take it easy like this.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504400 Why? There's enough depression in the world already without you bumming people out.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:48:24 2013 No.10504411 >>10504400 It can still be a depressing/happy story and have a happy/depressing ending.

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:49:23 2013 No.10504414
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>>10504407
I find it difficult to be happy with my work when I conclude the story with things working out for everyone, it doesn't seem realistic and it detracts from the events of the story. Bad ends or ambiguous ends allow me to feel satisfied with my writing, because that is almost always what the characters' actions should lead to.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:50:08 2013 No.10504419 File: 199 KB, 600x800, patchouli blue.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504414 What a dour person you are.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:53:08 2013 No.10504425 File: 685 KB, 623x1005, 530856588d87d708efeee7ca49385e9c.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504419 I'll take that as a compliment.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:54:23 2013 No.10504428 File: 373 KB, 600x600, 1344990517587.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504425 You shouldn't.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 21:55:38 2013 No.10504432 >>10504425 I'm somewhat interested in your works.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:00:25 2013 No.10504441 File: 366 KB, 800x1134, 029484f09b10d2aec9c7216dd93b6eac.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504432 I will post a draft of the story I'm currently working on, it's quite short. http://pastebin.com/uHNeuG1e

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:06:38 2013 No.10504451 File: 219 KB, 1000x1000, 1300762924959.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504337 Does Patchy get drunk?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:07:53 2013 No.10504455 >>10504441 I read it and thought it was very nice! Thanks for sharing! Keep it up!

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:09:08 2013 No.10504459 >>10504451 >>10504337 Apparently, haha. Perhaps only on occasions.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:20:23 2013 No.10504479 >>10504134 Nice underwear there, Miss Knowledge.

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:21:23 2013 No.10504481
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>>10504334
She's from medieval europe, right? That place/time sucked hard; shouldn't be that difficult to come up with some trauma in that setting.

She's a witch. Something to do with witch hunts and inquisitors and stuff.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:22:38 2013 No.10504483 File: 455 KB, 507x800, 80dc6f51b5cd68d964ad7835c02a921f.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504479 You were not supposed to see that.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:23:53 2013 No.10504486 >>10504483 How not? It's right there in my face

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:25:53 2013 No.10504494 >>10504483 It's hot. Let's just take off all our clothes. Ladies first.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:25:53 2013 No.10504495 File: 1.60 MB, 1728x1427, 1359749408532.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504455 Thank you. I'll assume you're being genuine. >>10504481 Who would get pleasure from drawing something like that?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:26:09 2013 No.10504497 File: 210 KB, 607x849, 30925260e435798d5095c57cc5a781b1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504486 ...you still weren't supposed to see.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:28:38 2013 No.10504502 >>10504497 I like that one, it's drawn in a style very reminiscent of Final Fantasy Tactics art, even though it probably wasn't meant to be.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:28:38 2013 No.10504503 File: 537 KB, 600x750, 1300762936343.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504494 No, no stripping in the library when guests are about.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:29:08 2013 No.10504508 >>10504497 You are being a tease!

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:30:23 2013 No.10504509 File: 367 KB, 850x713, 1277341191827.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504502 Never played that. I like it for different reasons.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:30:39 2013 No.10504510 >>10504400 >>10504414 >>10504425 You remind me of Kuroneko from Oreimo

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:31:24 2013 No.10504513 >>10504441 That was actually really good, writer-san. Do you have a page or something with any of your other works on it? I'd be interested in reading them.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:31:39 2013 No.10504514 >>10504503 But. But it's just us.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:32:38 2013 No.10504516 I would fug Patche so hard, that shit would just flung out of her holes.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:33:23 2013 No.10504522 Called the police for roleplaying.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:36:08 2013 No.10504529 File: 186 KB, 500x625, 12937388.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504514 ...you are a guest, anon.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:37:53 2013 No.10504533 File: 1.62 MB, 1500x1500, 689a350e8dc96cc153db957736ee59f2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504495 Lots of people, and lots more would get pleasure from looking at it. Is there a problem?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:48:08 2013 No.10504551 File: 142 KB, 695x827, patchy's learning about...things.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Well that puttered out suddenly.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:48:38 2013 No.10504550 >>10504529 Ya got me there.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:49:23 2013 No.10504553 File: 186 KB, 741x800, 5825d6ba0d25d90728bf5f55fab17aad.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Librarians don't have indecent thoughts

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:50:08 2013 No.10504558 File: 684 KB, 1403x1000, Konachan.com - 137135 bow hat jyuuji koakuma long_hair patchouli_knowledge purple_eyes purple_hair red_eyes red_hair touhou.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is she, perhaps, unaware of how luscious her own body is?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:51:09 2013 No.10504561 File: 453 KB, 1493x1080, Konachan.com - 95617 censored koakuma neo_yakiri no_bra panties patchouli_knowledge red_eyes tail thighhighs touhou underwear vagina wings yuri.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504553 Oh? Looks like it's mutual.

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:52:39 2013 No.10504562
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>>10504513
I'm considering making a blog to post stories on, since I am trying to compile a profile to apply to graduate school with. I don't have anything prepared currently, though. I may post in an OC thread if I decide to put anything else online. Thank you for the praise, though.

>>10504533
You realize she is going to drown, right?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:52:54 2013 No.10504563 my friend that i talk to some times got a patchy fumo a week or two ago i'm so jealous

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 22:53:53 2013 No.10504564 File: 216 KB, 700x700, fd980879e6b6e481f4090a13c51345bf.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504558 Oh, I would not be surprised. She doesn't meet many people, and I doubt books would clue her in to her own lusciousness.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:02:53 2013 No.10504580 File: 453 KB, 1493x1080, Konachan.com - 95617 censored koakuma neo_yakiri no_bra panties patchouli_knowledge red_eyes tail thighhighs touhou underwear vagina wings yuri.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504553 Not the last guy.

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:05:08 2013 No.10504585

>>10504562
Of course. She'll be slowly lowered under the surface, panicking more and more as the water comes closer to her face, then desperately struggling against her bonds as her weak lungs start to burn, eventually stopping her useless tugging and just trying to hold her breath for just a few seconds more...before a stream of bubbles bursts from her mouth and she writhes like never before, screaming inaudibly, before going very still.

Except that last bit doesn't happen, because the followup picture is after she's been hauled back above the surface. She's soaked to the bone and panting for breath, but alive. Nipples are exposed by her wet clothes, though, so no posting that.

So yeah, I realize that. Is there a problem?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:08:39 2013 No.10504586 File: 1.37 MB, 1091x1544, 49bf7d1a4d6d82745c024211d8f2a54c.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504562 I didn't read your story, but if it's Touhou, /thp/ would probably welcome you.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:11:08 2013 No.10504599 File: 36 KB, 340x460, arrest him.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504585

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:11:23 2013 No.10504597 >>10504585 fukkin hardcore

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:13:53 2013 No.10504605
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>>10504414
That's great - as long as you're writing for yourself, and for like-minded people.

Most people consume entertainment and literature as a distraction from their everyday pains and punishments. I remember being the kitchen with my parents, while they were watching CSI Miami as Insp. Horatio Cool Shades solved another grisly murder through science and arm-twisting. I said that I would like to see the bad guys "win" for once. They were honestly surprised and quite taken aback by that.

I've had other experiences similar to that, but it has always taught me that my likes and desires are probably considered weird, strange, and anti-social by the rest of society.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:16:38 2013 No.10504612 >>10504586 i like her dick-shaped head without the silly hat

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:17:08 2013 No.10504614
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>>10504586
It's not Touhou. I could write some fanfiction for /jp/ though, it would be a fun exercise.

>>10504605
I'm trying to write literary fiction, which is not strictly entertainment for the masses. Writing books, and even more so 'literary' books, is not the same as writing for television.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:18:53 2013 No.10504621 File: 602 KB, 700x700, patchy hang in there!.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504614 Would /jp/ like you writing about depressing things happening to their Touhous? I dunno.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:21:24 2013 No.10504628 >>10504621 What kind of depressing? If it fits, it's probably good.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:23:08 2013 No.10504635 File: 1.25 MB, 750x1100, 1355025222927.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504628 Maybe. I'd want some happy to counterbalance it afterwards, though, and depending on the subject Touhou that might not be easy to find.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:24:23 2013 No.10504637 >>10504621 I like Satori and Yuugi... it would be pretty easy to write something depressing about Satori.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:25:09 2013 No.10504639 File: 91 KB, 720x960, 8110_10151928303940484_1260096298_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504558 Perhaps she is.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:26:08 2013 No.10504641 File: 579 KB, 846x1000, patchy's not wearing any panties~.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504639 How could she be?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:26:08 2013 No.10504643 File: 262 KB, 700x700, patchy is mute.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504637 Oh boy, depressing Satori. Woooo, new and exciting.

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:27:23 2013 No.10504645

>>10504635
I seem to recall this one little piece that got stuck in my head where Yuuka was dying, and Marisa comes along for a duel, but because of the circumstances, kills her on accident, and then she walks off with her parasol. Is that something you would consider depressing?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:28:08 2013 No.10504649 File: 482 KB, 721x973, patchy is marisa.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504645 Probably.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:28:53 2013 No.10504648 >>10504645 More like ridiculous. I also don't think anyone would be sad about Yuuka dying.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:29:08 2013 No.10504651 >>10504648 >>10504649 I laughed at that, just a little.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:30:53 2013 No.10504652 File: 482 KB, 721x973, patchy is marisa.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504645 Maybe. Probably.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:31:23 2013 No.10504654 >>10504641 Here's a decent reason. >>10504564

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:34:09 2013 No.10504662 File: 268 KB, 1200x1200, e8e8a7742c77d2b7254fd47f4f915673.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504654 I thought you were saying she WAS aware of her attractiveness. My mistake.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:35:08 2013 No.10504666 >>10504662 Not at all. Nice pice!

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:35:54 2013 No.10504664 >>10504662 That's a very small condom.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:36:08 2013 No.10504668 >>10504664 Or maybe she's just really, ya know, big.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:37:23 2013 No.10504670 >>10504662 Holy shit, that's hot.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:37:38 2013 No.10504671 >>10504668 whoa.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:37:53 2013 No.10504673 >>10504662 Not at all. Nice pic!

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:38:38 2013 No.10504676 >>10504664 It stretches.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:38:53 2013 No.10504677 >>10504671 -if ya know what I mean, lol.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:40:38 2013 No.10504679 >>10504441 Just read it. With the right query letter, you could probably get this published in a magazine or journal that goes for these kinds of short stories. Have you considered trying to get published?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:42:23 2013 No.10504680 >>10504614 It all depends on who you are writing for. Ultimately, you are writing for your readers.

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:42:23 2013 No.10504681

The only writing I've ever seen on /jp/ that I actually liked were those short CYOAs Bern did when we got raided, back in the day.
And the erotic commentary that one guy did for some Monikano pictures in an abuse thread years ago, if that counts.
...and YWUiG, technically.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:44:08 2013 No.10504684 File: 93 KB, 338x576, 04.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504662 You know, looking at this picture, I can really see what you mean, >>10504153. That doesn't feel like Patchouli at all.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:45:38 2013 No.10504686 >>10504680 That's so backwards. Ultimately, you should be writing for yourself.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:50:38 2013 No.10504696 File: 1.12 MB, 1291x918, patchy is gorgeous.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Pretty.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:51:09 2013 No.10504700 >>10504686 I suppose you are right. I must admit that my background is non-fiction; the demands are entirely different.

Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:51:38 2013 No.10504699
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>>10504679
I may try when I make some revisions. I think that neither me nor my writing is ready to be published yet, though.

>>10504686
This is true on a certain level, but if you want to be a professional writer you have to write for others on some level.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:55:24 2013 No.10504707 >>10504699 I wish you the best of luck. back to patchouli butts and anuses, please.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:55:53 2013 No.10504710 You guys just need a girlfriend.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:56:08 2013 No.10504715 File: 159 KB, 800x960, ef19e8512e2081e3ca9c33fbf0fa6cfe6f2c862d.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504710 You make it sound so easy...

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:56:53 2013 No.10504712 File: 933 KB, 466x512, patchy lost....png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504707 But we weren't talking about that.

>>	tripfiend !Y8SckMYezs Mon Feb 18 23:57:38 2013 No.10504716 >>10504134 For someone who likes fatties, sure.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 18 23:57:53 2013 No.10504717 >>10504710 Women are poor substitutes for 2D perfection

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:00:08 2013 No.10504720 File: 662 KB, 1408x2000, 1359687200280.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504710 I would like to, but that would require finding a girl who is also withdrawn from society.q

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:01:53 2013 No.10504724 >>10504712 And yet you post patchy with her backed turned to us, displaying her edibles...

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:02:08 2013 No.10504730 File: 1.78 MB, 1800x1300, 1350197355891.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504720 See, I think that's sexier than >>10504662

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:03:54 2013 No.10504734 File: 525 KB, 680x968, 663493e586ff1b4d08ab2e5a8146e283.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504724 What?

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:09:53 2013 No.10504761 If you like writing depressing stuff, why do you have a problem with the drowning picture?

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:10:38 2013 No.10504765 >>10504730 I don't really picture Patchouli has having large melons. I also don't see her as being flat. In my mind, she is probably a b-cup.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:12:24 2013 No.10504773 File: 449 KB, 654x909, 7cbb4d429ad39022aaa9642e095c7c95.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504765 These aren't that large, are they?

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:12:24 2013 No.10504775 >>10504761 Not him, but torture is a mile away from depression and relationship issues.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:13:38 2013 No.10504785 >>10504773 Kind of. That's just my opinion, of course.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:14:38 2013 No.10504789 >>10504716 She is not f...fat!

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:15:08 2013 No.10504793 >>10504775 see >>10504389

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:18:54 2013 No.10504811 >>10504612 I saw that stack of books as a dick. Did anyone see two dicks?

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:19:54 2013 No.10504814 >>10504793 I can't really see where torture fits in here. Can't it just be plain old depression? Granted, it may be because of my own traumas that I only want happy stories and touchy feely fuzzy stuff. I don't really know.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:22:08 2013 No.10504829 id rub my cock between patchys wet and steamy puffy mons before ramming it deep into her uterus and filling her with my juices

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:23:08 2013 No.10504836 >>10504814 They don't, but I question how you can have a problem with execution yet consider suicide good story. Seems two-faced, no?

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:25:08 2013 No.10504840 File: 424 KB, 671x1000, let's color patchy!.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:28:53 2013 No.10504856 >>10504836 What? No. There's a huge difference between someone taking their own life, and having one person forcibly drown another - possibly the worst form of death - against her will.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:31:38 2013 No.10504866 >>10504836 I have first-hand experience in dealing with the suicidal, so there's that. Other than that I don't know. It is just how I react to the subject.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:31:38 2013 No.10504868 >>10504856 >possibly the worst form of death Ha. No. Someone taking their own life in spite of someone else trying to convince them not too, thus sending their would-be rescuer into bottomless depression is fine, but drowning someone is not? No way.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:33:08 2013 No.10504877 >>10504866 ...fair enough. Maybe not as dour as I thought.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:34:09 2013 No.10504882 >>10504868 You have an odd sense of morality. Also, I never said it was right, just that it makes an emotional and touching story.

Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:35:39 2013 No.10504886

>>10504868
It depends on the shock of the suicide and whether or not the other person comes to blame himself for the tragedy. Some are able to handle it better than others, and some would even react in anger to the act.

Such ambiguity does not exist to its fullest extent in the case of an execution, particularly a torturous one.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:37:08 2013 No.10504893 >>10504882 I wasn't saying one was more morally right than the other, I was saying it seemed odd to call one bad thing good for a story and not the other.

Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:39:54 2013 No.10504904

>>10504882
I wasn't saying one was more morally right than the other, I was saying it seemed odd to call one bad thing good for a story and not the other.

>You have an odd sense of morality.
...do I?

>>10504886
It sounded like it would go worst case to me. The suicide scenario, I mean.
I don't think I'm seeing your whole point, or I'm not properly expressing mine.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:40:09 2013 No.10504906 >>10504893 Point taken. I hope I didn't bully you.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:41:24 2013 No.10504909 File: 568 KB, 1280x1024, patchouli can't swim very well.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] She's fine, you wimps.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:42:08 2013 No.10504915 File: 549 KB, 979x1315, patchy perfect.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10504906 Not at all.

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 00:42:08 2013 No.10504916 >>10504909 2lewd

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 01:01:38 2013 No.10505000 File: 73 KB, 400x400, patchy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I want to see how clumsy Patchy is without magic. I wonder how often she'd trip?

>>	Anonymous Tue Feb 19 02:31:09 2013 No.10505347 File: 328 KB, 664x822, 87ea6dd1616117080839891f8fecc808.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is Patchouli ticklish?

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