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General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

The last one died a while ago. Perhaps some people have something for the holidays to share?

Previous thread: >>10204707

>> No.10250252 [DELETED] 

OP I'm expecting something amazing for #100.

>> No.10250253 [DELETED] 

how do i draw anime

teach me plz

>> No.10250262

I love your work Yogurt.

>> No.10250263

>>10250253
Kill yourself.

Hope you get reincarnates as an Asian.

No other way.

>> No.10250272

I want you to know that I read and enjoy all of your work, OP. That is all.

>> No.10250273

Hello,

I am a programmer. Suggestions for how contribute to this thread?

Thank you.

>> No.10250276 [DELETED] 

>>10250273

Make a Cleverbot clone that calls you 'onii-chan' and is otherwise kawaii as HECK.

>> No.10250491

Is there an archive of previous threads? The guy on /projects/ stopped making archive updates.

>> No.10250518

someone throw out an idea they'd like to see
im not good at throwing out ideas myself otherwise i'd do something...actually i have the artistic version of writers block...

>> No.10250530

>>10250518
Some mysterious illness killed everyone but the vikings during the middle ages. Fast forward to the future and viking longships in space with cute viking space waifus.

>> No.10250587 [DELETED] 

>>10250273
Write a mobile app that tells normals to stop bullying NEETs.

>> No.10250595

>>10250273
Teach me how to program.
I want to know but am to dumb.

>> No.10250604 [DELETED] 

>>10250595
http://www.codecademy.com/
http://programming-motherfucker.com/become.html
http://www.catb.org/~esr/faqs/hacker-howto.html
http://stackoverflow.com/questions/194812/list-of-freely-available-programming-books
http://stackoverflow.com/questions/1711/what-is-the-single-most-influential-book-every-programmer-sh
ould-read

(in descending order of fun)

>> No.10250606

>>10250595
Do you have email?

>> No.10250616

>>10250604
Are any of these understandable by someone who wouldn't be able to program himself out of a paperbag? Like for dummies or understandable by a child?

>> No.10250621 [DELETED] 

>>10250616
Codecadamy teaches JavaScript interactively and in an idiot-proof way. You really can't dumb it down any more than that (and no, you don't need good math skills).

>> No.10250625

>>10250621
Ok, I'll go for the full course then.
>>10250606
I do but I have my doubts about posting an email on 4chan.

>> No.10250875
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10250875

Original touhou character please don't steal.

She is a contemporary miko like Sanae but more edgy.
Her silly hat gimmick is a fire shaped ahoge.
She likes meditating by putting her arms in funny positions.
She has no temple and no visible gods but she clearly has exorcism powers.
She wanders around and begs for food when she isn't meditating or performing exorcisms.
Her power is manipulating the space between particles. Her regular ability is cqc which she learned prior to arriving in Gensokyo.
She slurs her words and mumbles a lot.
Her hair is pale blonde, her miko gear is pure white. She wears dark blue tights underneath her miko gear.
She is a human, 13 years old.
Her title is "Vagrant of Purity".

Thanks for reading.

>> No.10250894

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/18165944/Sandcastle.mp3
Another attempt to create a touhou-ish tune, ZUN-trumpet and all

>> No.10250895

>>10250875

You forgot to add she's the daughter of Sanae and Mokou and went to the human world to be trained by Solid Snake

>> No.10250899

>>10250895
Is this fanon of my original character?

>> No.10250906 [DELETED] 

>>10250894
Oh, I think this sounds surprisingly authentic.

>> No.10250955
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10250955

Animation is kind of fun.

>> No.10250975

how do i draw loli?

what kind of things are essential for a good loli?

>> No.10250992

>>10250894
Disgustingly bouncy. It's almost as bad as untz and gives me a headache.
Also
>~:53/:54
...seriously?

The trumpets and piano are definitely ZUNlike though.

>> No.10251000

>>10250975
DFC

>> No.10251006
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10251006

Haha time to start working at AI waifus development 100k starting.

>> No.10251048

>>10250992
Ill have to agree; probably could've done without the orchestral hits. Also a wise choice if I use less uniform drumlines for later tracks

>> No.10251097

>>10251006
Holy crap you're fast.
I haven't even started variables yet.

>> No.10251136
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>>10251097
It was kinda boring with all that math shit, but now it's hilarious.

>> No.10251177

>>10251136
goddamn, the only thing that would make this tuts more fun would be haveing scores for your code.

>> No.10251190

>>10251177
also,
>On line 3, create a variable myJob and give it a string value.
>Var MyJob = "NEET"
>console.log(";_;")

>> No.10251193

>>10251006
>>10251136
What is this?

>> No.10251197

>>10251048
It's more the bass than the drums for me. Maybe something about how the instruments combine.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yn3GPjhtYJ8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B_PUx3Teh60
These have kinda a similar drum pace but aren't annoying.

That one moment I pointed out wouldn't be as bad if it wasn't just a one time sudden thing. It kinda goes with the bass and drum but not with the rest of the song.

It might just be me being out of touch with touhou music too. I haven't really played the games much since MoF, so I don't know much about the music in MoF or beyond. It kinda sounds like TD's more untzy tracks.

>> No.10251202

>>10251193
a programming tutorial i'm assuming

>> No.10251204

>>10251193

It's

>>10250621

>> No.10251213

>>10251190
>NEET
>job
I did exactly same

>> No.10251243

>>10250894
-I don't really hear a melody or any identifiable segments. Can't just toss on notes willy-nilly.
-ZUN's piano isn't just throwing arpeggios and solos everywhere. In some songs at some points there are solos, but it's a common newbie mistake to just line piano solos in every song all the time. Senpi does this with every song and it's just grating and stupid.
-That being said, the background arpeggio could use a bit less volume and otherwise is ok.
-Another newbie mistake is the overuse of trumpets. While ZUN does like his trumpets, they're never the only main instrument in a song, and they aren't in every song either. Often times the main melody is picked up by a different instrument partway through and done slightly differently. The trumpet is usually used as that second main instrument, after a buildup segment.
-lol the lq orchestral hits
-drum track is looped?
-No harmony until the oohs. I do like the feeling of the oohs though.

Do you listen to other artists that do this stuff? If you listen to other touhou-like artists often, you'll start to get a feel for what is closer to ZUN material and what isn't.

>> No.10251502

>>10250955
Cool! Did you make it?

>> No.10251600
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10251600

Here's Taokaka, which was requested in last thread. I guess it turned out just fine, but Im not really satisfied with how the colors and shading turned out, something feels a bit off about the pose, too. I think I could've used perspective more. Taokaka has weird shoes. Maybe I should draw another blazblue. I got all fired up drawing this.

>> No.10251651 [DELETED] 

>>10251600
Draw Izayoi

>> No.10251686

>>10251600
Lessen the blur in shading the right arm.

>> No.10252023

>>10250955
Bravo, Ozoi would be proud
>>10250895
>>10250875
...I like it. just remember to add some romantic shenanigans with Snake

>> No.10252187

>>10251600
Reminds me of the rainy devil from bakemonogatari. It's a good thing though.

>> No.10252288 [DELETED] 

>>10251600
>wasting time on a sand nigger nigger

>> No.10252712

Hey, what's a good way to say someone "I fucking love your drawings so much that I want to talk to you" without sounding like a psychotic gay stalker?

>> No.10252735

hi jaypee, can i share my 2ho fanfic here?

>> No.10252752

>>10252712
Just tell them straight up.

>> No.10252789

>>10252712
G☆R☆O☆S☆S

>> No.10252794

>>10252712
Why wouldn't you want to sound like a psychotic gay stalker? It's a more acceptable thing than you'd think.

>> No.10252800

>>10252712

w-would you d-draw me l-l-licking your armpits

>> No.10252809

How do I get started with learning to draw?

>> No.10252844

>>10252712
I'd be flattered if someone said that to me, so I'd presume someone else wouldn't mind it too much either.

>> No.10252999

>>10252752
>>10252844
>>10252794
>>10252789
>>10252800
...okay, I'll just go for the straight approach.
I feel even more homolewd now, though. thanks /jp/. thanks.

>> No.10253003

>>10252809
You don't ask here, because the most you will get is an equivalent of "fuck off".

>> No.10253028

>>10252809
Check the sticky at /ic/.

>> No.10253040
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>>10252809
Pick up a pencil. Put it on paper. Draw a line. Is it straight? If not, try again. If it is, draw a circle. Is it circular? Try until it is.

Once you get that down, try to draw the Future Genie.(pictured here). Once you can accurately copy it, you are ready to draw.

Go and copy line only drawings you see, images of real people, even real world objects, until your hand is trained to draw things.

After that, draw your own stuff. Its okay to still use pictures of things as references.

>> No.10253048

>>10253003
...but, I wasn't complaining.

>> No.10253051 [DELETED] 

>>10253003
...but, I wasn't complaining.

>> No.10253081

>>10252809
http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?26636-Back-to-the-Basics-An-FAQ-regarding-the-foundation
s-of-creating-art

Also registration is open for cgpeers so if you want good stuff go NOW.

http://cgpeers.com/

>> No.10253108

>>10253048
I'm just saying from experience from having lurked these threads in the past.

My answer would be "go back in time".

>> No.10253131

>>10253003
And the best thing is most of those snappy responses come from people who most probably can't even draw all that well themselves.

>> No.10253258

This thread reminded me that I need to get back to work on my STG engine.

>> No.10253373

Undine from ARIA
https://soundcloud.com/bloomersgonnabloom/undine

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10253392

Why not just call this the /tou/hou board? The bronies have their own board.

>> No.10253413 [DELETED] 
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10253413

I made this painting. It represents my feelings when /jp/ bullies me.

>> No.10253440

what happened to flockdraw.com/jp

>> No.10253474 [DELETED] 

Any requests?

>> No.10253478

>>10253474
Ran.

>> No.10253479

>>10253373
Oh wow, this is wonderful. Even the little twangs give the cover a pleasant feeling, I love it. More please.

>> No.10253516 [DELETED] 

>>10253478
doing

>> No.10253518 [DELETED] 

>>10253478
doing what?

>> No.10253533

>>10253373
Additionally, could you add a download link?

>> No.10253544

>>10253474
Okuu giving Tenshi a wing hug.

>> No.10253543

>>10253474
Masamune giving Vhailor a high-five. Because the world needs more justice-obsessed madmen trapped in suits of armor.

>> No.10253563

>>10253533
Updated the description to include a link

>> No.10253589

>>10253544
I second this.

>> No.10253597

>>10253516
>>10253518
Ecchi sketchy things.

>> No.10253740 [DELETED] 
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10253740

>>10253544

>> No.10253744

>>10253740
HNNNNNNNGGG.

>> No.10253750

>>10253740
That's beautiful anon

>> No.10253753

>>10253740
Very cute.

>> No.10253755

>>10253744
critic it or stfu

>> No.10253779

>>10253740
I'm jealous.

I'm literally too autistic to draw SD stuff.

I can somehow draw cute faces just fine, but every time I try to skew body proportions too much I just can't tell whether it looks good or not.

So annoying.

Someone link me some DA-tier tutorial I can blindly follow and ignore my own senses.

>> No.10253776

>>10253755
calm down.

>> No.10253778

>>10253740
Thank you! It's very nice!

>> No.10253785

>>10253779
watch a lot of porn to help

>> No.10253854

>>10253740

>>10253544 here.

I think I have a few of your pictures saved from many other OC threads in the past. Do you have a Pixiv account or anything? I tried searching for it using one picture that looked like yours but it said the page got deleted. Also thank you again for the lovely picture.

>> No.10253892

>>10253785
How will watching a lot of naked bodies help me draw them wrong on purpose?

>> No.10253950
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>>10253892
Look at midget porn.

>>10253779
https://yande.re/post/show/133302/tutorial
https://yande.re/post/show/133307/tutorial
https://yande.re/post/show/133308/tutorial
https://yande.re/post/show/133314/chibi-tukinan-tutorial

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>> No.10254062

>>10253779

Chibi characters are usually between 2 heads to 3 heads tall, sometimes you can get away with 4 but that usually just looks like a small child

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>>10253597

>> No.10254214 [DELETED] 

>>10253854
I do but it's really inactive, I'd feel bad for passing it out.

>> No.10254391

>>10253854
http://k009.tumblr.com/

>> No.10254510

>>10253755
It was supposed to mean this is very cute, Anon!

>> No.10254603

>>10254391
why

>> No.10256427
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10256427

>>10253740
>>10254391
Oh you're cirno guy...I really like your work.

>> No.10256938

>>10256427
Yeah, I like his stuff too.
btw, check the right knee. shoulders also look strange, but maybe its me. nice colors as always.

>> No.10257615

Any tips for a beginner Anon?
I normally draw traditionally, but sometimes on Sai too.

>> No.10257697

why is the bird in air?

>> No.10257698

>>10256427
lopsided eyes

>> No.10257884

>>10257698

The head is tilted and at 3/4 view

>> No.10258170
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10258170

It's that time again.

>> No.10258305

>>10258170
maybe next year.

>> No.10258339

>>10258170
some year, but not this year

>> No.10258445

why all the deleted OC images?

>> No.10258486

>>10258445
the artist probably deleted her posts since her website was linked. >>10254391

>> No.10258513

>>10251600
Oh sweet, you actually drew it. Looks wondeful, thanks bro!

>> No.10258527
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10258527

Picked up my simgame project and tried to get some work done. I added a background and a timer so I can track how many seconds a day last.
I'll use those spaces next to the window for stat tracking, I don't like menus much in my games so I want to use something that looks like a calendar or a poster.

>> No.10258611

>>10258486
Was more than that image. Well looks like 2 others only seemed like more. But a lot of posts too, meh oh well should shut up before they decide to ban me for asking wtf.

Still a linked blog does not make sense to delete the post but w/e, drama I guess.

>> No.10259904

hey.
hey jaypiss.
merry christmas and shit.

>> No.10259908

>>10259904
Merry Christmas!

>> No.10260114
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http://www.chipdipdrops.com/va#!__va/albumphotos19=0
A small compilation with mainly speedcore, gurogrind, shitcore and stuff like that. I have 2 short songs in there.

>> No.10260224

>>10258527
I'm glad to see you decided to continue with it.

Keep up the good work!

>> No.10260698

>>10258170
When do we post these? I'll feel really silly if I'm the only one posting mine.

>> No.10260871

>>10258527
Cute art.

Hope that wall texture is a placeholder because it's shitty as fuck.

>> No.10260877

>>10260698
I will post mine after you do.

>> No.10260964

>>10260698
Inspire me anon. I may or may not post mine.

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10260976

>>10258170

>> No.10261113
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>>10260877
>>10260964
Alright then...

>> No.10261164
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>>10258170

>> No.10261186

>>10260871
That's what I thought too. But I was in a hurry because Christmas dinner and just googled "how to make a wood texture with photoshop" and even fucked that tutorial up. Everything is a placeholder anyway, because it can be improved but the wall is the worst, it looks so shitty and out of place.

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>>10258170

>> No.10261385

>>10260976
you're a jap aren't you

>> No.10261411

Damnit, why does coloring take so long. I could get the hang of linework and make much more noticeable progress so much easier on my first attempt but coloring is a whole different story.

>> No.10261418

>>10261385
what

>> No.10261438

>>10261411
It takes longer to notice glaring faults in your lineart whereas they're obvious with colors.

Trust me, you're going to look at the lines you draw now a year from now and wonder how could you ever think it's acceptable.

>> No.10261458 [DELETED] 

>>10261261
>typical shaft employee.jpg

keep it up!

>> No.10261475

>>10261458
So Shaft is limited to Aoki Ume's style to kids these days?

Kill yourself out of /jp/.

>> No.10261486

>>10261475

I'd give Ume senpai my shaft

>> No.10261490

>>10261438
Drawing lines to me just seems so simple though. If it doesn't look smooth, or have the shape you want, just undo and try again. With coloring I have just so much uncertainty as to how to do it right.

>> No.10261507 [DELETED] 

>>10261475
s-sorry

I'll leave now

>> No.10261511

>>10261458
Don't bully that artist or you'll have to answer to me.

>> No.10261617

>>10261507
>>10261511
Stop this faggotry immediately.

>> No.10261628

do u guys fapp to ur drawings>

>> No.10261660

>>10261628
When I was about 13 I drew two circles on a piece of paper and fapped to them, imagining they were oppai.

Felt good, man.

>> No.10261677

>>10261660
>oppai
Really now?

>> No.10261683

>>10261660

I draw porn and I don't, I wonder if anyone does, feels weird

>> No.10261688

>>10261683
I'd imagine you just see how you can improve it.

>> No.10261694

>>10261677
Sorry I have my 4chan themed to look like Gaia. Please forgive me, kudasai!

>>10261683
I imagine some artists do. Pygmalion fell in love with his work, so I don't see why a lot of porn artists don't jerk off to theirs.

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Oglaf admitted she schlicks to her own comics.

>> No.10261717

>>10261683
I don't understand how it can feel weird. Do you never masturbate to fantasies?

>> No.10261758

>>10261683
I used to do that when I was a kid and didn't have internet.
I still draw lewd stuff, but it's super personal and looks like shit, mostly myself mindbreaking and raping lolis, shotas and /jp/ers.

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Just finished the cover art for my next EP

A finished song for the EP(sans lyrics, since my sm57 just broke)
youtube.com/watch?v=KM57ZWH-Zx8

>> No.10261867

>>10261628
yeah. that's #1 reason i started to draw. it's especially good when your favorite characters have next to no porn.

plus you can make it tailored to your fantasies.

>> No.10261876

>>10261866
kinda like pigmhall with less lsd.

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>>10261866
I swear I saw sketch for that on /ic/, was that you?

Also got my first tablet for Christmas, is it really better to master realism to certain degree or can I start drawing kawaii uguu girls right away?

pic related my first drawing

>> No.10262008

>>10261867
Can I see some of your work please?

>> No.10262057

>>10261990
God, every single thread.

Yes, you need to learn how to draw "properly" before drawing whatever you want. Otherwise it will end up looking like shit.

>> No.10262068

>>10261990
man this is some deep art, you should keep on drawing

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its horrible i know

>> No.10262451

>>10262398
It's like watching Dr. Katz.
How do you do that?

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>> No.10262556

>>10261990
You have to learn anatomy so all your uguu is in the right place, but realism is kinda detrimental to drawing moe style. Don't confuse proper anatomy with realism though.

>> No.10262598

>>10262550
You do cute skirts.

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>>10258170

>> No.10262923

>>10262550
you
were you that guy who drew the demon girl saying あ?

>> No.10262927

>>10262550
Why does the head look so small in December?

>> No.10262960

>>10261990
No, bet I have used previous /jp/ oc threads for help on the figure

>> No.10263152

>>10262451
with ugo tool
You just draw normally and it does the animation

>> No.10263160

>>10263152
thank you anon.

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10263181

eh,

>> No.10263193

>>10263152
holy shit How can you draw with that tool? even with the curve tool, my lines are too straight.

>> No.10263364

>>10263193
small lines and patience

>> No.10264188

>>10261717

I'll masturbate to a fantasy, then draw it, but not to the drawing.

>> No.10264223

>>10263181
I favor January's style. Got a site or sumthing you upload to?

>> No.10264620
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idk

>> No.10264674

>>10264223
got a pixiv id 223010

>> No.10264687

>>10261628
I would if I could draw well enough.

I'd make entire erocomics. About stuff I like though.

Although, reading eromanga lately has broken my mind somewhat and I feel myself compelled to want to write stupid awkward shit like "your mouthpussy feels so good on my dicknipples" and "NOOO! Don't fuck me in the ass with my piss!"(as lube) So I'd probably spend more time drawing stupid shit I couldn't fap to than shit I could.

It's just as well though, since I like /ss/ the best and I'd probably spend too much time drawing the perfect soft and hairless set of balls.

>> No.10264712

>>10264687
>I like /ss/
>the perfect soft and hairless set of balls
are you a girl?

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>>10258170

I tried to find examples around all the porn

>> No.10264738

>>10264712
No but I like the look of smooth balls. Pubes turn me off both on a woman and while self inserting as a shota.

>> No.10264750

>>10264713
lewd.

>> No.10264754

>>10264713
Got a pixiv?

>> No.10264757

>>10264754

I do but there's not much anymore

>=3453153

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Dammnit, most of these are facing the same direction.

>> No.10266345

Someone suggested to "Make a Cleverbot clone that calls you 'onii-chan' and is otherwise kawaii as HECK."

It uses basic machine learning and only knows some simple things about the world so it will probably ask a lot of questions. Please be gentle with it, it's prone to crashing.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8950820/imoutobot.zip

>> No.10266424

>>10266345

No virus right?

>> No.10266442

>>10266424
No virus.

>> No.10266932

>>10266424
No virus here ;)

>> No.10266940

>>10266932

Thanks Derek. Unzipping now.

>> No.10266949

>>10266932
Thanks Derek

>> No.10266965

>>10266932
Thanks derek.

>> No.10267655

Yo, we have four people sitting around in IRC and we want to make a game.

What we really need is an artist (preferably pixel, maybe we can make other shit work though)

Also, someone with programming knowledge or is handy with RPG Maker should drop in.

There are a few people who cant do anything but are sitting around with us anyway, so feel free to do that too

We're on friggin Rizon, #/jp/truuproject

>> No.10267779

>>10266932
ty derek

>> No.10267819

>>10267655


It's like watching the same movie over and over.

Make your bets gentlemen, how long until silly dreams are shattered this time?

>> No.10267843

>>10267819
I'm the creator of the channel (not the creator of the project, though). I'm very well aware that this will probably not work, just like most of the /jp/ projects (I have been involved in a failed one, actually). But still, it's always, always worth a shot, in my opinion. As long as there's one person willing to do it, it's still possible.

>> No.10267848

>>10267655
You basically need every role

>> No.10268083

How do I learn creative writing?

>> No.10268104

>>10268083
Read a lot of books.

>> No.10268126 [DELETED] 

>>10268083
It's something you're born with

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>>10268083
Second to last post.

>> No.10269008

>>10256427
Magister?

>> No.10269022

>>10269008
Obviously.

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>>10258170
Maybe I'll get started next year.

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10272907

>>10258170

>> No.10273224

>>10272907
Have you considered extended animation or landscaping?

Thank you for your work.

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>>10258170
some of these images are sort of vague in date, I lost all my dates, etc, so i'm relying on memory.

If its empty, either artblock or depression or moving.

>> No.10274390

>>10274384
Post May please.

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>>10274390
uhm, I was going to get around to painting it eventually, but I never did find the time for it.

>> No.10274411

>>10274403
I feel like the colored works are missing something that this one has. Either it is the best or your coloring could use some work, in my opinion.

>> No.10274418

>>10274403
Thank you.

>> No.10274423

>>10272907
I wish you posted more.

>> No.10274459 [DELETED] 

>>10274411
I'm just not very good in general, ahaha. I need a lot of practice. I'm still more comfortable with plain old pencil and paper than with digital, but I wont give up.

Is there anything in particular you think I should start trying to do, to improve my colored works?

>> No.10274466

>>10274459
They just look wrong. All of them are off in various ways. I like that one, but I think if you colored it, it would be a much different picture, so you should put off until you can make it a better picture.

>> No.10274475

>>10274466
Thats very vague, anon.

>> No.10274517

>>10274475
I thought it was clear enough.

>> No.10274523

>>10274475
Not that guy...
I think there is something off with the shape of the heads in your pictures. Like the face is to small compared to the rest of the head.
Yuugi in that November picture looks like an alien. No offence.

Not a really an artist or anything but I think you should work on anatomy. Use some random pose generator, don't remember any links but they should be easy to find.

>> No.10274537

>>10274523
Thank you. I'll start practicing faces more to see if that will help with the issue.

>>10274517
saying that "there's something wrong" without saying what is wrong is very vague, I cant understand unless you tell me clearly.

>> No.10275123

>>10274423

i'd like to, but i haven't had much time recently to draw

>> No.10275130

>>10273224

excuse my ignorance, but what do you mean by landscaping?

>> No.10275395

>>10275130
He wants you to fix his yard.

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10275420

Got bored and drew a dong

Now to figure out who to attach it to

>> No.10275600

www.posemaniacs.com

Is a good site. It shows muscle, too.

>> No.10275611

>>10275420
Cute girls.

>> No.10275616

>>10275600
Nice. Thanks, anon.

>> No.10275721

>>10263181
I just had to say, I really do like your style, anon. I'll be following your work!

>> No.10275860

I think I'm finally going to write an ero VN. Don't want to involve anyone with it before I'm done with the script so the project won't be ruined, but do you think it's going to be harder to find an artist if the ideas are already on the paper?

>> No.10276024

>>10275860
I think you will end up making something dumb and then give up.

>> No.10276143

>>10275860
You aren't going to find a competent artist to draw porn for you for free either way.

Your best bet is to write some short erotic fiction(not a VN script, something that works without pictures) as a sample of your writing, and hope some artist out there shares your fetishes and likes it enough to work for free.

But I'd put off recruiting an artist until you're done with your script I guess, since you want to get as much out of them as you can before they inevitably get bored after a couple weeks.

>> No.10276155

>>10276024
Well duh, it's eroge: of course it's gonna be dumb. About me giving up, I guess it's less likely than if I'm in a group with pressure. If I'm doing this for no reason other than fun, having all the time in the world to do it at my own pace and with no one else meddling with it until it's done, it might actually turn out well.

>> No.10276216

>>10276155
>it's eroge: of course it's gonna be dumb
Off to an awful start.

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10276579

Added a few stats to the game used by the current jobs. I'm managing the stats as "Stuff I like". I guess I need to add the other menu and finish coding the class that increases values of the stat List for each character.

>> No.10276668

>>10276579
"stuff I like" needs a handwritten typeface for the numbers to match the rest, but the job names could use a regular one instead.

Keep it up, your art is cute enough to make something good right here.

>> No.10276662

>>10276155
>>10276216
why is ero dumbing down the medium so much

>> No.10276711

>>10276579
Your art reminds me to
http://www.talesofvaloran.com/

>> No.10276846

>>10276711
I can't change my artstyle ;_; why did you have to point that out anon.

>> No.10277038

>>10276711
Why is there a cyborg Hentai Kamen?

>> No.10277097

>>10276579
I would just like to say that "stuff I like" is the cutest thing I have seen all week.

>> No.10277638

>>10275130
Drawing landscapes. Painting landscapes. Having fun with scenery and backgrounds in general. I realized that error 5 minutes after posting and was hoping you would ignore it and get what I meant. Sorry.

>> No.10278064

>>10276711
>>10276846
I fucking knew it.

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>>10258170

>>10261866
Neat.

>> No.10279694

>>10277638

Oh, thats ok, just wanted to clarify.

>> No.10279987

Ello, haven't posted in one of these in quite some time. Here's an acoustic arrange of Apparitions Stalk the Night, and Night Sakura of Dead Spirits. Enjoy.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL9RFOzHzKg&list=UUPbf4pDK2ot0TH-KmvPwQBA&index=1

>> No.10279999

>>10279987
You should release an EP

>> No.10280025

>>0279999
Why's that? Sounds like extra work just to release the same songs in a different format.

>> No.10280031

>>10278801
Cool Takamichi phase there at the beginning of the year.

>> No.10280034

>>10280025

Err...

>>10279999

>> No.10280035

>>10280025
My autism wants a collection of his songs arranged in an album with album art and proper tagging.

>> No.10280042

>>10280035

Ah. Well sorry amigo, I'm too lazy for such an endeavor. Maybe one day.

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>>10278801

I've always loved how people draw anime eyes like you did on Osaka there. I think I should work on that some time.

I went in a full circle. depression is a crazy thing. (sorry some of it isn't really /jp/ related but maybe I am obsessed with spaceships?)

>> No.10280095

>>10279987
Oh wow this is amazing, I'm sad I haven't found this until now.

>> No.10280403

>>10279987
I'd pay for this if the recording quality was better

>> No.10280410

>>10279987
You're the only other person I know that does acoustic arranges of /jp/ or /a/ related stuff

>> No.10280572

>>10253373
>>10279987
We actually get music in these threads now?

>> No.10280702

>>10280572
There's always music.

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>>10279987
Can I please have the tabs?

>> No.10281141

>>10279987
I want to thank you for posting these accoustic arrangments, they really cheer me up and give me inspiration to write my /jp/ maid visual novel.

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>>10279987

i love acoustic arrangements!

>> No.10283700

>>10283451
That looks great, I can see some improvement in your art as well, good job.

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>>10258170
I feel like I should draw more, like instead of 10-20 files a month, maybe 10 files a day.
Also my foundations are shit sorry /jp/.

>> No.10283744

And you guys sulk because you have no talents.

I jelly.

>> No.10283991

>>10283744
>jelly
>>>/v/

>> No.10284003

>>10283991
Ignore it, comiket will pass and the crossboarders will leave.
For the most part.

>> No.10284011

>>10283724
>Also my foundations are shit sorry /jp/.
At least you're not trying to pass that off as a style thing.
You should draw more dude, try to do studies from life or photos of people as well.

>> No.10284039

>>10251600
Try Kokonoe next.

>> No.10284101

>>10258170
I wanted to do this until I realized I had nothing but doodles and not a lot of them. I need to go further with drawings... (´;ω;`)

>> No.10284131

>>10284011
That's exactly what I'm planning to do, thanks for the incentive dude.
Although drawing from life is a little scary, what if someone walks up to me (´・ω・`)

>> No.10284239

>>10284131
You can always use a damn picture.

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>>10258170

First time making these damned things and man

... there got to be a better way to make these things than cropping each picture to a layer then transforming the pic to fit each window.

Looking back, it looks like the summer heat melted my will to color...

>> No.10284610

>>10284479
not trying to insult, but this looks a real rollercoaster, goes from ok to real good even without colors to... uhhh, decent....

>> No.10284638

>>10284479
You're a goddamn pedophile.

>> No.10284645

>>10284638
haha funny joke :D lets hear another one you funny man! :D

>> No.10284685 [DELETED] 

>>10284479
Go back to November

>> No.10284716

does anyone want to make anime and garage kits with me?

>> No.10285801

>>10284479
Do you have somewhere you store all of your pictures?

>> No.10285805

>>10276846
I didn't say it like it's a bad or good thing...

>> No.10285863

>>10284479
Your august, october and november drawings were better than all of the others.

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>>10284610
>>10285863
I seem to have a big problem achieving a consistent style, working on it, though.

>>10284685
I wish I had a time machine too.

>>10285801
roboham.blogspot.com

>> No.10287094

>>10250894
really good i like it

>> No.10288058

>>10284479
>october
Jesus christ how horrifying.

Its like a terrible creation of western artists trying to do nipponese art.

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>>10284479
I use the marquee tool. I start with a black column/ row and I trim the edges. Make sure the drawing is bigger than the rectangle of course.

I really love your eyes; I particularly like April and September. Your sketches and line work are pure eye candy.

>> No.10289837

>>10288431
I meant I start from an adjacent column and I trim what's overlapping.

>> No.10292436

Requesting a new year with less ronery and more money to buy stupid shit. i want to dedicate it to all the /jp/s of the world.
I hope you will have a good 2013, /jp/ friend who is reading. and the /jp/ friend that isn't reading too.
happy new year /jp/
>>10286962
Oh, you and the Asukaholic bug lover are my favourites.

>> No.10292490

>>10288431
december looks interesting. post it

>> No.10292517

>>10284479
work on your faces man, they look flat as hell

>> No.10292548

>>10278801
looks great

>> No.10292636

>>10288431
September has baby arms, you should work on anatomy some.

>> No.10293411

yo wall

get those furfags off your board

thanks

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10293479

quick shitty thing i did last night

>> No.10293493

>>10293479
Ichirin #1

>> No.10293508

>>10288431
Can you please post May?

>> No.10293621

>>10279987
Good stuff.

>> No.10293864

>>10293479
2013 year of the Ichirin

>> No.10293889

>>10280083
Really good scenery, I love the little space ship and robot things.
I wouldn't mind seeing October without the censorship.

>> No.10294566

>>10293411
oh we got furfags to go with the sex RPG faggots now?

>> No.10296649

Which one's better for writing a game engine; C# or C++?

>> No.10296691

Hey /jp/, is there any reason I shouldn't use a fountain pen during my first baby steps in learning to draw?

>> No.10296790

>>10296649
LUA

>> No.10296992

>>10296790
I'll agree with this. Lua itself is a really nice language, and I'd recommend the LOVE2D engine.

>> No.10297143

>>10296649
C/C++ for engines.
Lua for scripting.

>> No.10297207

>>10296649
Use what you're comfortable with. Language doesn't matter much, because your game will be slow when you fuck up the algorithms, not when a compiler doesn't optimizee a statement for two or three nanoseconds of more performance.

>> No.10297319

>>10296790
>>10296992
>>10297143
Thanks.

>>10297207
True, but I'd also like to think that stuff like library and later on, portability is going to matter as well...

>> No.10298069

>>10297319
Use SDL and try to limit your use of platform specific code.

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>>10261164

Anyone have this one?

>> No.10298128

>>10298069
That's pretty much what I had in mind. That, or Qt, if all else fail.

If I may ask, how does SFML compare to SDL?

>> No.10299010
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10299010

Happy new year everyone~!

>> No.10299328

>>10299010
God damn, I love underboobs

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>>10299010

happy new year!

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I need to start coloring.

>> No.10302099

>>10301598
No, you need to start learning how to draw properly first.

>> No.10302330

>>10301598
Learn to draw bodies first.

>> No.10302338

>>10298128
Having used both, I'd say go for SDL if you're using C and SFML if you're using C++.
SFML is more OOP oriented.

I wouldn't go with Qt, not for a game anyways, if you were doing regular GUI software then yes.

>> No.10302455

>>10302099
That's too vague, can you be a bit more constructive?

>> No.10302456

>>10302099
>>10302330
no bullying!

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>>10258170

>> No.10302815

>>10302455
>Bwaah bwaah bwaaah the big meany man is being mean to me
No, fuck you, if you have any sort of artistic integrity in you you will be able to tell what's wrong with you work. Don't expect everyone around you to suck up to your penis and tell you where you must improve, you have to find it on your own. Otherwise it's just spoonfeeding, you overgrown babby.
>>10302456
Fuck you as well, cunt.

>> No.10302830
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Trying to draw a guy playing the piano. Drawing the keys in perspective is extremely difficult for me

>> No.10302840
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10302840

I wish I could draw poses.

>> No.10302867

Somebody should make a Kanako
you know, year of snake

>> No.10302908

>>10302830
Look to his shoulders for your angles of perspective. Not his hands.

>>10302840
do it and learn how. Whining isn't going to get it done.

>> No.10302911

>>10302867
thousands already have.

>> No.10302924

>>10302911
I mean here.

>> No.10303102

>>10302924
Why don't you go ahead and do it, then?

>> No.10303409

>>10302815
Actually, if that guy knew what he was doing wrong he'd most likely be trying to correct it. If you won't tell him what you think is shit, well, then it's your fault if he doesn't improve the way you want him to and so you're in no position to complain. The way I see it, if you want things to change you speak up and if you don't care, you shut up otherwise it's a lose-lose game.

>> No.10303557

>>10302516
Its like I'm really on deviantart.

>> No.10303643

>>10303557
Nonconstructive comments like these are the only thing that would be better off at deviantart.

>> No.10303692

>>10303557
It's actually not bad.

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>>10302840
Can you lineart one of my drawings for me?
you see.. i'm really horrible at lineart.

>> No.10304107
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Such a lazy year, unfinished sketches everywhere. I'll try harder this time.

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10304116

Please crush my confidence.

Also, please, does someone have a tutorial on how to colorize hair properly in different styles? I suck at it so hard it's not even funny. At least when it's dark hair.

Oh and, if possible also a tutorial on how to do lineart properly, it always looks like shit when I do it.

>> No.10304118

>>10304116
>Please crush my confidence.
Don't need to when you already do that yourself.

>> No.10304120

>>10304118
I just want someone to point out everything I did wrong there so I can improve. I often don't see that stuff.

>> No.10304123

>>10304116
>Please crush my confidence.
You could poke someone's eye out with that chin.

What do you use for drawing, a mouse? You show some eraser for a lot of those lines.

>> No.10304125

>>10304123
*you could show

>> No.10304126

>>10304116
>Oh and, if possible also a tutorial
Tutorials is the bad thing to do.

What you need to realize is no tutorial can compare to hours of practicing, which is what you need right now.

A tutorial won't magically make your lineart better overnight, your problem is clearly your skill and experience in drawing people/characters.

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>>10304123
>You could poke someone's eye out with that chin.
Is that chin really that abnormal?
Pic related

>>10304126
>your problem is clearly your skill and experience in drawing people/characters.
That's the only thing I ever drew.
Where exactly can you see I suck so much? I mean the coloring is shit I know, and some of the lines are crap too, but what else? That's what I wanna know and where I can improve on. I posted my art here a while ago and the people here really helped me by pointing out errors.

>> No.10304155

>>10304139
>Where exactly can you see I suck so much?
-pose

-basic structure

-basic anatomy (please don't start with the anime excuse, she has no trapezius and that is not a neck)

-lines have no confidence, very sketchy and not a stylized sketchy, just chaotic as if you're struggling every line you do (see link at bottom)

-colors need a lot of work as you said, color theory will help a lot (go ahead and copy anime pictures for this if you want) but be sure to learn color theory, especially the part about color value***

Tips:
-flip your canvas horizontally all the time to keep things symetrical
-go see these videos, very helpful http://www.ctrlpaint.com/straight-lines/
-look at pictures of real people and practice drawing them, you won't get better if you don't even if you hate 3D and want to do anime
-draw draw draw draw draw
***I can't stress how important values are, be sure to work on that

>> No.10304158

>>10302815
Such a wonderful, friendly atmosphere in these threads.

As usual.

>> No.10304163

>>10304155
Thank you very much.
I practiced drawing real people but it was a long time ago, maybe I forgot anatomy after all

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>>10304116
Make sure your colour in the lines.
your lineart looks like a sketch so you should focus on making smooth lines that connect , without the scribblyness.CTRL+Z (erase) is your friend. Make sure that if you don't like the way a line looks you erase it till it looks good.

What worked for me when I was practicing poses was playing 80s eroges, that and trying to picture what I want the character to look like in my head and make it happen on paper.

Practice is your biggest asset.

>> No.10304182
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>>10304139
>Is that chin really that abnormal?
Not really if you love 90s anime. Personally I never liked it anyway, but put simply you're exaggerating an exaggeration, probably because of a lack of skill. You're also forgetting about relative proportions. Comparing to the image you provided, while the chins are approximately as pointy at the tip, your Koishi's jaw is much wider than the Reimu's which incidentally makes Koishi's chin look much pointier by comparison.

Don't learn to draw in a specific style by copying other styles, that's like transcoding audio files.

>> No.10304197
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>>10304166
Well I started drawing with a tablet exactly 2 days ago, so it was my first lineart attempt ever in that picture, I really don't know what the fuck I'm doing so I'm asking.
In that picture in particular I realized I did my lineart completely wrong and just abandoned it and scribbled around until the picture was "done", it's not really a finished picture but it's the first one I ever made with colors and I thought it still looks quite good. Since I think it looks so good although I have the feeling it really isn't, I decided to consult /jp/ because my eyes don't allow me to see the errors.
Pic related it's my second attempt at lineart next to the shitty sketch.

>>10304182
>but put simply you're exaggerating an exaggeration, probably because of a lack of skill.
Well actually I always wanted it to be that way. My chin looked even worse a few months ago and I flattened it a bit. It'll probably flatten further after some more practice.

Also I wasn't really copying from anything, I specifically try not to copy anime because I sort of want to develop my own style, actually. I was just using that picture because me (right now) am not seeing what is wrong. When my chin was even pointer (and really shitty) I didn't either though, so it doesn't mean much.

>> No.10304207

>>10304197
Reimu's head is lopsided.
This is where the "flip the canvas horizontally" technique comes in.

>> No.10304217

>>10304207
It happens to me all the fucking time and I sometimes spend hours correcting the face with no success. I plan to correct the lineart, but so far I just focused on the hair.

>"flip the canvas horizontally"
I'll remember that.

>> No.10304231

>>10304197
The way you are using vectors for lineart is flat, plain and ugly. Try drawing them with weight, thought and feeling, not just aligning the points with your pen.

>> No.10304238

>>10304197
>those vectors
http://www.animationmeat.com/pdf/misc/waltstanchfield/32ws_lazy_lines.pdf

>> No.10304242

>>10304231
>Try drawing them with weight, thought and feeling
How? What do you mean? I know it looks just wrong but I am at a loss on how to make it better. The lineart doesn't fit my sketch in the slightest and I don't know how to change it.
I'm trying to work with pressure/weight now, unlike at my Koishi pic, but it's still shit.

>> No.10304267

>>10304238
yeah well I'm desperately trying to make the lineart give me the same "feeling" as the sketch, thus I just added some random strokes.

I wouldn't be asking here if I wouldn't just senselessy experimenting to try to get it right, though anything I get so far is to do just that.

>> No.10304276

>>10304197
The thing that's really funny is your second Reimu lineart is way better than my first..
I couldn't even connect lines or do line pressure.

your drawings are really cute btw

>> No.10304338
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>>10304197
I'm not >>10304231 but I can definitely agree that going with vectors the way you are is incredibly flat, unnatural, and...well, fake. Your sketch is nice to look at, though, because it has different line weights that show you were thinking about what your drawing as you did it. You just need to put the same mindset in cleaner lines.

It's not the best lineart, but I think it shows the difference between redoing it with your arm/wrist's weight behind the power of your lines and 'constructing' lines with vector tools...

>> No.10304353

>>10304338
Now it's looking bett-
Oh wait, you are someone else.

>> No.10304360

>>10304338
Well I know myself it looks totally wrong, but I am at a loss on how to do it differently, which is why wanted a tutorial... I'm doing my vectors with Paint Tool Sai, and just tracing the lines with the "Curve"-Tool and then adjusting weight and pressure.
How the hell did you do it? Did you just use many, very thin vectors?

I think I am doing something fundamentally wrong, remember, it's only my second lineart...

>> No.10304465
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>>10304197
I tried to do lineart of your reimu.. it was very good practice

>> No.10304491

>>10304360
I redrew it. From scratch. Don't use vectors at ALL, because they can't detect pressure and mimic the motion of actual hand strokes. I made a new regular layer and just drew it again with the pencil tool(I actually use acryllic, but anything that makes a mark). Your sketch is pretty nice to look at, again, but when you try to make all your lines with vectors, all the "life" in the picture will die. It WILL die.

>> No.10304497

>>10304360
Not him, but I think you can achieve something like that using just the pen or brush on a normal layer instead of a linework layer. It might not be vectors, but it looks better.

>> No.10304551
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>>10304491
Okay so I'll just ignore that shit.
So I guess I gotta practice straight lines, because when I didn't know what lineart my lines were just scribble, even after hours of trying to make the lines look straight using eraser and stuff it just sucked so I guessed you have to do it with digitally created vectors.

So is this just a matter of practice? To get good enough so you can make straight, accurate lines like that.

Pic. Related. Yes, I used all sorts of pen-thicknesses. In this pic I didn't care for anythinc 'cept trying to make some lineart-resembling lines by hand.

Your lines are so good. So you don't use any computer-adjusting of the lines and do all that pure freehand?

>> No.10304608

>>10304491
>because they can't detect pressure and mimic the motion of actual hand strokes
BEEP
Wrong.

>> No.10304613

>>10304551
Do you do your lineart on all on layer?
If you do maybe you should finish a rough sketch
then lower opacity.
Create a new layer and try to do lineart.

>> No.10304627

>>10304613
Yeah I did that...

I just tried again to do lineart by hand and the lines are ugly. Is this all just practice, to be able to draw such pretty, exact lines?

>> No.10304647

>>10304338
How do your lines look so perfect. When I use the pencil tool it doesn't look like how you did it.My pencil tool looks like the pen tool.It doesn't actually look like a pencil drew it.
>>10304627
I've been trying to make my lines flow more.
My lineart is slowly getting better I just need to know how to create lines that look good

>> No.10304732
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>>10304647
Try this.

>> No.10304924

>>10304732
Thank you for the help. I have saved this and will use it in the future when I get a new computer.
(My computer is too slow to even view a tutorial)

>> No.10304958

>>10304924
Be sure to work in high resolutions (2000+ pixels in both directions).

>> No.10305168

>>10304551
That looks twenty times better than the vectors to me, despite it not being as clean. You'll eventually be cleaner with your lines in the future.

>>10304627
It is just practice, like a shooting gallery. You will not hit bullseyes without spending a lot of time missing/hitting lesser spots, despite knowing what you're aiming for already.

>>10304732
I recognize those settings...

>> No.10305269

>>10303902
I'm not exactly sure what you were trying to do in the picture. That pose looks pretty unnatural to me

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>>10305269
Oh I fixed the pose..
forgot to post it

>> No.10307568

>>10305168
I can't remember if those are my old settings or someone else's.

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