/jp/'s Original Content/Drawthread #97

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/jp/'s Original Content/Drawthread #97 Anonymous Wed Dec 12 19:21:17 2012 No.10204707 [Reply] [Original]

General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

Previous thread: >>10125407

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 19:23:02 2012 No.10204714 Does pictures of my cock count as original content, yes or no. I will delete this post after I get an answer.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 19:23:32 2012 No.10204720 File: 19 KB, 320x240, 902398570913780161363.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10204707 >Anything OC is welcomed

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 19:23:47 2012 No.10204721 >>10204714 no

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 19:25:02 2012 No.10204729 >>10204720 >80 My mouth is watering at the thought of that.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 19:26:18 2012 No.10204730 >>10204714 yes

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 19:30:18 2012 No.10204744 >>10204729 No kidding, right? Though my mouth waters more so due to the letter "C" instead of the letter "P".

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 19:32:33 2012 No.10204751 >>10204744 Is anything CP welcomed?

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 19:57:48 2012 No.10204832 >>10204751 I guess that depends on whether or not it is also OC, and if the OP approves.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 20:02:03 2012 No.10204843 >>10204832 I approve.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 20:25:18 2012 No.10204894 File: 18 KB, 583x487, Untitled.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10204832 I drew the Kana art from the Twin Tales box to show someone. It's masterpiece.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 20:27:03 2012 No.10204900 >>10204832 >if the OP approves What? Since when we are ruled by whoever makes a thread?

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 20:31:03 2012 No.10204920 File: 44 KB, 500x500, moogykog.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] requesting moogyko fanart preferably lewd

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 20:52:03 2012 No.10204995 Was that guy who said he was gonna draw Tewi lying?

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 21:25:48 2012 No.10205096 >>10204900 We are not. I just thought it might be impolite.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 21:28:03 2012 No.10205102 Would anyone be interested in collaborating on a Touhou themed roguelike?

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 21:33:03 2012 No.10205119 File: 6 KB, 600x600, tei.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10204995 here's a picture of tewi lying

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 21:36:48 2012 No.10205128 >>10205102 I cannot code, draw, sprite, model, write, compose music, create sound effects, or think of good ideas, but I would be interested in hearing your thoughts. What sort of roguelike? Have you come up with anything so far?

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 21:37:03 2012 No.10205136 >>10205096 Well, that's extremely silly of you.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 21:42:33 2012 No.10205156 >>10205128 It would be called Mines of Moriya.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:10:34 2012 No.10205266 File: 248 KB, 780x780, meido_bee.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Meido, はちみつver. The bee design is from that damn mmbk song I can't get out of my head.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:15:49 2012 No.10205293 File: 53 KB, 600x800, 1334238595657.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Could any of you recommend a program for composing music? I've had a look around but nothing seems to jump out at me.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:16:34 2012 No.10205299 >>10205293 LSDJ or Renoise.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:17:19 2012 No.10205301 >>10205293 Do you mean for making music electronically or for actually composing music with sheet music notation?

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:20:19 2012 No.10205323 >>10205301 The former. Sorry, I probably should have clarified that. >>10205299 Thank you.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:23:04 2012 No.10205333 >>10205323 Reason and Logic are probably the top two DAWs on the market. This is for "actual electronic music" like EDM etc though, not chiptune or some other specific thing. FL Studio is ok too.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:23:49 2012 No.10205336 >>10205299 >>10205323 confirming that LSDJ is awesome! you should definitely try it, everyone should you have no idea how happy it makes me to see someone who actually knows what LSDJ is, gosh!

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:37:34 2012 No.10205401 >>10205266 >はちみつver. >no はちみつ

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:40:04 2012 No.10205409 >>10205401 What about a bee is not はちみつ?

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:41:34 2012 No.10205410 >>10205401 >>10205409 Translate please, not everyone speaks weeb.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:57:04 2012 No.10205476 >>10205410 はちみつ means honey. はちみつver. would thus be "Honey ver." I'm just joking that, while she is a bee, there is not actually any honey in the image.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 22:59:49 2012 No.10205483 >Okuu x Orin doujin >calling a doujinshi a doujin >calling a comic a doujinshi >not being Japanese >implying you're not as bad as Western artists that call their comics manga Quoting OP's image.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 12 23:01:34 2012 No.10205493 >>10205483 Stay edgy /jp/.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 02:16:39 2012 No.10206261 >>10205266 Cute! But I'm not sure about the direction of light here.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 03:13:39 2012 No.10206371 >>10206261 Yeah, guess that's what happens when you decide at 3 AM that you want to draw something while listening to really loud denpa.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 03:33:09 2012 No.10206404 File: 84 KB, 837x663, 132800380642.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 08:34:13 2012 No.10207128 File: 1.35 MB, 1132x1600, mariya.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] just colored this might do the entire doujin and upload it somewhere or something who knows. i don't even know why i did it or if anyone would even be interested.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 08:38:28 2012 No.10207136 >>10207128 Hopefully now you have noticed why coloring screentoned works doesn't make good looking results.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 08:42:28 2012 No.10207143 >>10207128 The coloring is pretty well done. I like it. >>10207136 I don't understand what you mean. Why doesn't it make good looking results?

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 08:42:28 2012 No.10207145 >>10207128 Wow, you did well. Shame it had to be censored...

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 08:44:58 2012 No.10207151 >>10207128 Thats gay as hell dude.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 08:45:43 2012 No.10207153 >>10207151 You're gay dude.

Anonymous Thu Dec 13 08:52:43 2012 No.10207183
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>>10207136
yep, the scan quality was pretty low to begin with but it is a little nicer to fap to. parhaps i should try something with a higher quality scan or no print toning.

i think it would be really cool to do colored rereleases of uncolored works but this one page alone took me nearly two hours so i don't think i can finish an entire doujin in a reasonable amount of time.

i also colored this a while back if anyone remembers in the previous threads.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 08:54:28 2012 No.10207188 >>10207151 Isn't that just the same character twice?

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 09:04:43 2012 No.10207219 >>10207128 I dont like colored manga, it distracts me. I think that black and white manga are easer to get lost in, its more hypnotic. Nice work thought

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 09:17:13 2012 No.10207252 >>10207128 Good job.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 12:25:52 2012 No.10207802 File: 737 KB, 1800x1800, project.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Starting a new a draw, bonus points for who guess where it is from >>10207128 the way you color is just beautiful >>10207183 I like your eyes, your hair style is nice too

Anonymous Thu Dec 13 12:37:07 2012 No.10207830
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>>10207128
Nice work! I really like it.

Here's a pretty lame outline of mine. It's been a while since I've drawn, so it's a bit shabby.
I was wondering if any pointers could be given before I begin shading/coloring? I use only pencil and paper.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 12:50:16 2012 No.10207874 >>10207830 don't use rules.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:03:31 2012 No.10207890 File: 338 KB, 800x1098, 1353347033009.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:05:01 2012 No.10207897 >>10207890 That's not OC, that's some slut that has been used the other day for some shitty thread here

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:05:31 2012 No.10207896 File: 52 KB, 674x639, 13533470330029.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:06:31 2012 No.10207898 File: 50 KB, 800x701, 135334703300292.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] fix

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:07:31 2012 No.10207900 File: 54 KB, 643x690, assrape.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] fix2

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:08:31 2012 No.10207905 File: 68 KB, 477x691, assrapedog.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] last fix, I'm too bored to draw more.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:13:46 2012 No.10207915 >>10207900 Skinny arms. >>10207905 Looks terrible. >no penetration, only a dog's asshole >>10207898 None of these really fixed anything. Keep practicing.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:21:16 2012 No.10207928 >>10207915 sorry, I though you liked dog asshole.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:24:31 2012 No.10207946 File: 75 KB, 480x640, Snapshot_20121213.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] just did this, more game-related, but whatever, tonight i'm nice so i can take every non-ero command

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:25:31 2012 No.10207951 File: 183 KB, 326x464, 000_001.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] and as i know you aren't all faggot, i may put what i can draw about girld

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:26:16 2012 No.10207960 File: 65 KB, 520x394, skrillex_001.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] and pixel art..

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:28:17 2012 No.10207972 File: 268 KB, 247x554, yukari_001.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] oh, i forgot, as you can see, i don't have a scanner right now, but i can do neat pixel art !!

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:28:31 2012 No.10207973 >>10207960 Only you can stop shitposting.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:32:01 2012 No.10208002 >>10207946 dude that's horrible. >>10207972 where's her hip?

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:32:46 2012 No.10207999 >>10207951 >>10207972 More like this. >>10207960 >>10207946 Not like this.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:33:16 2012 No.10208004 >>10207973 don't get it, you typped wrong ? or am i some kind of savior ?

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:35:01 2012 No.10208019 i made a VN a few days ago if anyone wants to play it http://www.mediafire.com/?qqqtujzcphtycgk

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:37:01 2012 No.10208025 >>10208019 virus

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:39:16 2012 No.10208028 >>10208025 no the V stands for visual as in visual novel, not virus

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:43:17 2012 No.10208040 File: 142 KB, 241x334, aragorn_001.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] some more !! maybe you like realist ?

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:44:02 2012 No.10208045 File: 376 KB, 580x437, gil_001.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] or some classic Gilgamesh...

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:45:47 2012 No.10208048 File: 405 KB, 382x631, holo_001.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10207999 just have a holo for you...want something in particular ?

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:47:02 2012 No.10208052 >>10208045 >>10207946 Shows how terrible you are when you aren't more or less copying something. 2.5/10, you can stop posting.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:50:32 2012 No.10208063 >>10208019 Why does a VN need a file called gayporn.wmv I'm hesitant to play this.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:51:47 2012 No.10208066 >>10208063 it has to do with the main character's moral choices

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:52:02 2012 No.10208067 >>10208040 nice eyes.

Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:53:32 2012 No.10208068
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>>10208052
Could you repeat it once more please ? I admit that concerning human face, i got huge problem but the loli is original as the one i'm posting right now, so if there is something i can try, i'll just go for it...

Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:55:02 2012 No.10208072

>>10207890
Get the fuck out.
>>10207946
Looks awful.
>>10207960
Get the fuck out.
>>10207972
ZUN would be proud.
>>10208019
Shit.
>>10208040
Spectral Aragorn is bad
>>10208045
>>10208048
It sucks, keep practicing.
>>10208068
Hands look strange, sword looks awful.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:56:32 2012 No.10208074 >>10208067 lol, it's too blurry to see on the pic, but if you look at the original photo, it's quite similar.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:57:32 2012 No.10208077 >>10208068 i wish i could kick you to /ic/ so they can feed on your shitty soul.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 13:57:47 2012 No.10208078 >>10208072 thanks for your judgement, i shall take them into concideration, have a nice day anon

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 14:03:32 2012 No.10208089 >>10208066 Alright I played it. I liked the delivery of Qts lines but I didn't get any gay porn on my first playthrough so I give your game 0/10.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 14:12:17 2012 No.10208096 File: 21 KB, 416x346, pen132.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] tried drawing dog cock

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:06:32 2012 No.10208250 >>10208004 What you call pixel art is filter raping. Go back to deviantart.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:16:48 2012 No.10208299 >>10208250 haha, not at all, i did it with plain paint and only the pencil tool,

Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:22:18 2012 No.10208319
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>>10208299
MSpaint?

This does not change the fact that your "art" isn't low resolution (or upscaled) and you have not been paying much attention to the individual pixels. Here is an example of pixel art. Notice how as much of detail as possible is expressed with as few pixels as possible.

Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:29:33 2012 No.10208340

>>10208319
if it's too much for you, just say that it's shitty or whatever, instead of using " " , well, it's true i wasn't paying attention to the pixel itself, but what i wanted to say is that it was made in "ponctual" way; drawing it bit by bit and not using filter as you first suggested, it's true that i'm nowhere near what you uploaded...

Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:31:03 2012 No.10208348
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>>10208319
That's neat.

And I agree, >>10207960 isn't pixel art. Not only does it have some sort of antialiasing from the brush, but pixel art is where you draw pixel for pixel, not just drawing with a 1px line tool. Most of Three Angled Blue's comics only use two or three color values, but they're still drawn normally with a tablet.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:34:33 2012 No.10208359 File: 31 KB, 700x446, pixel_art.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ORIGINAL 1-BIT PIXEL ART DO NOT STEAL

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:44:33 2012 No.10208401 >>10208348 >antialiasing No, it HAS aliasing. That's the jagged effect. This is part of pixel art, but yes, that is when you paint it pixel by pixel or possibly fill in shapes that you outline one pixel at a time. >>10208359 Pretty much.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:48:18 2012 No.10208416 File: 114 KB, 952x600, showdown.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i like eva

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:52:18 2012 No.10208429 File: 5 KB, 400x400, Untitled.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10208401 >No, it HAS aliasing. I mean his lines are more like the left than the right, and I doubt he antialiased it by hand as pixel artists do.

Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:52:33 2012 No.10208431
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>>10207802
Alright, since no one cares, I'll stay quite

Anyway, this is how the draw is so far, I think there's something very very wrong with hazama's hat and I can't fix it....

that's why I hate draw touhous, hats are such a pain

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:53:03 2012 No.10208436 >>10208431 *quiet my bad

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 15:59:33 2012 No.10208465 >>10208431 I'm more worried about Hazama's lack anatomy than the hat. Yes, it's very sketchy undefined mass, but you could start giving it more attention at this point.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 16:02:48 2012 No.10208496 I-is it ok to make requests here? I would like to see reimu with some tan lines if that is ok please.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 16:05:03 2012 No.10208528 >>10207960 This isn't pixel art.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 16:11:18 2012 No.10208567 >>10208496 It's not "forbidden" but people seldom draw requests here.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 16:12:33 2012 No.10208579 >>10208567 Ok thank you. I won't get my hopes up.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 16:23:33 2012 No.10208640 >>10208496 No, but it is forbidden to stutter like a fag.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 16:29:23 2012 No.10208673 >>10208640 S-sorry.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 16:34:18 2012 No.10208705 File: 89 KB, 576x576, reimucool.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10208496 here you go

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 16:36:18 2012 No.10208716 >>10208705 maebari bonzai

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 16:37:33 2012 No.10208727 >>10208705 That's cool.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 16:39:03 2012 No.10208741 >>10208727 it's reimu cool

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 18:01:04 2012 No.10209079 Can I post my non-/jp/ OC here? Fags are doing it all over this lame thread.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 18:02:34 2012 No.10209085 >>10209079 Sure

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 18:09:34 2012 No.10209105 File: 37 KB, 705x561, le fuck you.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10209085

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 18:10:04 2012 No.10209110 File: 920 KB, 2600x2500, Nue Houjuu copy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Some Nue that I'm working on.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 18:10:34 2012 No.10209109 >>10209105 ng

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 18:12:04 2012 No.10209113 >>10209109 Don't reply to my art style with a sage you fucking pleb ass bitch.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 18:16:19 2012 No.10209127 >>10209110 It looks so simple from this early stage, but yet it's better than anything I've ever made. I'd kill a bear to draw half as well as you.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 18:17:04 2012 No.10209133 >>10209127 How about you stop imagining you're in a jrpg world where you can level up your drawing skills by grinding on bears for skill points and pick up a fucking pencil. Asshole.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 18:20:19 2012 No.10209138 >>10209110 Some minor things to consider like her cheeks and her chest, but overall looking pretty good. Keep it up!

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 20:03:33 2012 No.10209554 >>10208359 that is 2bit faggot, cant have 1 bit, you need 2 one or off state 1 or state 0

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 20:09:33 2012 No.10209594 >>10209554 A bit refers to a single digit in base 2 which can represent either 0 or 1. tl;dr it is 1 bit art

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 21:05:41 2012 No.10209860 File: 824 KB, 1800x1800, BB.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10208465 what about now? He looks acceptable don't you think? Maybe I can finally put clothes on them

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 22:32:43 2012 No.10210229 File: 609 KB, 1200x1500, something ill never finish.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] A very rough sketch I'm working on. Backgrounds are hard.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 13 22:33:43 2012 No.10210235 >>10209594 your right faggot, too much /jp is my excuse. 2c 1bit 16c 4bit 256c 8bit etc etc

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 14 15:25:53 2012 No.10213127 >>10209860 >>10210229 Keep it up. Keep drawing!

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 14 15:49:23 2012 No.10213258 What program (and possibly hardware) does one use to make stuff like gabber, hardcore stuff and whatnot. I to try making my own 2hu remixes.

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 14 15:58:23 2012 No.10213311 >>10213258 Any of the good ones. It doesn't really matter, as long as you got the right synths and effects, which aren't always hard to reproduce. I'd recommend reason or abelton live.

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 14 16:03:38 2012 No.10213343 File: 1.11 MB, 3264x1840, 2012-12-10_11-40-44_336881443086.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] crazy

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 14 16:05:53 2012 No.10213357 >>10209860 You should work on your lines dude. I know it's still at a rough stage but to be that messy even as a sketch isn't very good.

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 14 16:20:05 2012 No.10213445 File: 104 KB, 772x505, 27414818_p11v2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I colored Okuu. It's my first attempt at coloring using Photoshop. Maybe I'll try using SAI next.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 07:37:18 2012 No.10216377 File: 2.13 MB, 2496x3440, SCAN0001.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10213445 Good work on the coloring. Here's an Aya I drew.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 07:44:48 2012 No.10216387 File: 248 KB, 929x1280, Rescanned Aya.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10213445 Good work on the coloring. Here's an Aya I drew!

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 07:45:03 2012 No.10216391 >>10216387 Holy shit, that mouth.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 08:01:03 2012 No.10216420 >>10216391 What's wrong with it? I know it's the generic anime open mouth expression but is it the details inside the mouth? Or maybe it's too big? Just curious, so I know what to avoid in the future.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 08:03:33 2012 No.10216425 >>10216420 It's too stylized and off-to-the-side for my taste.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 08:07:33 2012 No.10216436 >>10216387 Mouth is aligned with nose, making it look like she has a mouse snout.

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 08:32:48 2012 No.10216508
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Loomis helped me go from left to right, still don't think the legs properly show that they are in a V and just look flat in general, maybe once I learn how to shade...

Music I am working right now:
youtube.com/watch?v=IWwrYr3uwfU
youtube.com/watch?v=Xx82ewSCM94

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 09:38:02 2012 No.10216650

>>10216387
Nice shading, better than what I could do. However.

An open mouth is more like a D, the upper lip shouldn't curve downward THAT much. Not to mention it's disproportionately big and off to the side even for animu.

I see you had fun with the skirt folds, but they are 1) way too detailed (the entire picture should always have the same level of detail) and 2) unnatural and/or plain wrong, some of folds appear to be criss-crossing and for there to be some many small and bubbly "folds" (I'm tempted to call them veins) it looks like the skirt is vacuum-packed or something.

tl;dr - Use less folds and make them much bigger. No fabric acts like that.

Also her hair looks like plastic.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 09:49:49 2012 No.10216687 >>10207890 Is she playing Pikmin ?

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 09:53:04 2012 No.10216705 >>10216650 >1) way too detailed (the entire picture should always have the same level of detail) Maybe her skirt is more rumpled up than her shirt. Kind of like how cloths would look if they weren't folded up and ironed before wearing.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 10:06:49 2012 No.10216734 >>10216508 This is cute. I love the style and her face is quite pretty.

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 10:10:19 2012 No.10216742

>>10216650
>the entire picture should always have the same level of detail
No. To make certain points more detailed is an acceptable way to make focus points pop more out (like eyes or stuff which is nearer to the viewer). Of course only if you aply basic logic and design principles. In photografy and photo editing these things show up more quickly but they aply to drawings (of course) as well. However you're right about the skirt. It shouldn't be so detailed, especially in this way.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 10:20:49 2012 No.10216758 >>10216742 Mmyeah. Maybe I should have said "more or less the same level", didn't mean to come out so absolute.

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 11:28:49 2012 No.10216852

>>10216387
I can't add much to the already stated critiques, but I like it even with it's flaws. Rendering each area different makes this picture interesting to look at, even if you could have done a better job in some areas (skirt is the biggest problem in my eyes). Would be dope to see the progress you made over the time and will make, do you have a pixiv or similar to stalk you?
Either way, keep drawing and post more! I have faith in you.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 12:40:35 2012 No.10217013 >>10213445 That's a really adorable expression Okuu has there. Where is that from?

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 16:56:31 2012 No.10217935
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/jp/ how much does it take to make a game?.
I can program and draw, I'm mediocre at both but I think I can pull something nice in a year, since I'm a NEET.

Do you think I should ask 12k for a videogame in Kickstarter? Does it sound good? or I should ask less money. I have been thinking about doing this for a long time, since I'm tired of being poor and not being able to buy anything.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 16:57:02 2012 No.10217940 >>10217935 Is that image an accurate description of your pitch? If so, I will gladly chip in a few dozen of my autismbux.

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 17:02:54 2012 No.10217965 [DELETED]

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>>10217940
That's what I plan to do. I'm currently reading XNA programming books and practicing my drawing skills because my dream is making an indie game where I can take it easy.

Also, this is the alternate version if the first one to get attention from the people who lurk on Kickstarter.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 17:03:54 2012 No.10217969 >>10217965 I mean *if the first one fails

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 17:04:54 2012 No.10217971 >>10217965 You should make that one, and use the revenue to make the first one. Christine Love has proven that feminism sells, so you could do the same thing with transpeople and homosexuals.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 17:07:59 2012 No.10217983 >>10217971 Haha, I was joking about that one. I don't think I could do something like that, I don't know nothing about transgender people anyway. Besides what my eromanga taught me.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 17:08:25 2012 No.10217985 >>10217965 This one!

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 17:08:25 2012 No.10217988
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>>10216650
>>10216742

The mouth is pretty bad, I know. I realize that those are definitely NOT how skirt folds look (some of the shirt folds do look like veins), and this drawing was a lot of experimenting with just drawing folds and different values.

Hair... yeah I don't know how to draw realistic hair (or realistic animu hair).

The critiques helped, i'll try to figure out how to actually draw folds and shade accurately.

Thanks, /jp/!

>>10216852

I don't have any of those set-up as I want to wait a bit for my art to improve, thanks for the interest though. I'll probably post a link here if I make one though.

(old aya)

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 17:11:40 2012 No.10217996 File: 157 KB, 500x500, kickstarter2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10217985 >>10217971 I guess I'll research on the topic, it might have a future, and if I fail, I won't end scamming people from /jp/

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 17:13:55 2012 No.10218000 >>10217996 In real life, if you have no principles, it's a good idea. A beat 'em up where you fight cis scum or something. The controversy would make you a billion dollars.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 17:22:26 2012 No.10218026 Anyone writing something? I never hear of anyone writing anything in these threads.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 21:15:24 2012 No.10219079 >>10218026 I am. But probably not something I'd post until I actually finish it. I have a complex about posting unfinished writing.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 21:27:09 2012 No.10219118 >>10218026 Been trying to write something, but it's not coming out. Guess whatever creative juices I used to have are all gone now.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 21:27:59 2012 No.10219113 >>10218000 More than 80% of the world is CIS, why would you ago against so many people?

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 21:59:10 2012 No.10219245 >>10217935 Do you have an email address? If you let me program we can do a 90/10 split. I would be happy with 10% of millions.

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 22:05:25 2012 No.10219277

>>10218026
I have a complete script for a visual novel that I think is really interesting but I don't know how to program, draw, or compose music. I can't handle criticism though, so I'm having qualms about releasing this to the public.
I also don't want it to get the katawa shoujo treatment.

I'll just keep this locked up forever.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 22:17:14 2012 No.10219310 >>10219277 >I'll just keep this locked up forever. Thanks, now I won't be able to sleep knowing I can't read it.

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 22:18:14 2012 No.10219312

>>10219245
If I was aiming for that much money I'd hire you anon-kun, also I'd hire a cute boy and dress him as a maid.

Maybe I should add stretch goals like that
$25000 stretch goal: our team will hire another programmer.
$50000 stretch goal: our team will hire cute little girls to voice the cute little girls.

Maybe I should start doing actual work and stop dreaming...

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 22:21:14 2012 No.10219323 >>10219312 I'd be willing to do an 80/20 split if millions weren't involved.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 22:23:14 2012 No.10219332 >>10219310 I'll release it eventually, just for you anon.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 22:25:14 2012 No.10219341 >>10219332 But how will I know it's released?

>>	None !YSh0MGX/ow Sat Dec 15 22:29:14 2012 No.10219355 >>10219341 I don't know, maybe I'll use a tripcode.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 22:39:15 2012 No.10219396 >>10219355 Thank you.

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 23:01:14 2012 No.10219476
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>>10219323
I'll keep posting on these threads if I can get anything done. I have tried to start my project several times, but I'm too lazy to be trusted and I don't want to disappoint anyone else.

Last time I tried to make a game was a disaster because I didn't plan anything in advance. I was trying to make a rising sim but it ended being pretty difficult to code and my drawings weren't cute enough.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 23:06:14 2012 No.10219492 >>10219476 I'm pretty sure I have seen this posted before. Keep it up anon, you can make it if you try!

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 23:09:14 2012 No.10219501 >>10219476 Hey this looks pretty cool. Details?

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 23:16:16 2012 No.10219529 File: 445 KB, 1050x1050, s161212.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] A sketch based on a quite popular picture of a real little girl. I wonder if anyone can recognize her.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 23:22:46 2012 No.10219554 I don't know what's going on in that thread anymore

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 23:23:01 2012 No.10219562 File: 294 KB, 545x568, littlegirl.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10219529 Google can't so I doubt anyone else could do it.

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 23:33:46 2012 No.10219590

>>10219501
It was supposed to be a rising sim like Princess Maker 2, but you had to manage two homeless girls. I wasted a lot of time in stupid stuff, like making their eyes blink when on the phone or moving their feet while sitting with shitty 3-4 frames animations and the code ended being an unmanageable mess. Also, I didn't thought exactly what stats I was supposed to use because I'm a noob at game design. That was my recipe for failure.

>>	Anonymous Sat Dec 15 23:44:41 2012 No.10219629 >>10219590 Unmanageable messes of code are my specialty. Just remember, 80/20 split.

Anonymous Sat Dec 15 23:59:14 2012 No.10219700

>>10218026
I once wrote a fake travel guide-CYOA-novel thing about a girl who's in love with a talking bug. Didn't make much sense, but it was fun. There's no way I'd ever post it in an archived board, so I asked /b/ for critiques. They were disappointed by the lack of sex scenes.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 09:28:31 2012 No.10221400 My arm is still fucking broken fuck

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 10:33:00 2012 No.10221577 These threads are fucking stupid. I bet most of you don't even post on /jp/ outside of this thread.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 11:43:14 2012 No.10221752 >>10221577 As if the rest of /jp/ isn't fucking stupid anyway.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 14:05:34 2012 No.10222177 File: 1.54 MB, 2406x2066, Asuka on the beach.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 14:06:19 2012 No.10222179 File: 214 KB, 1024x576, EVANGELION --Epilogue--.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 14:07:19 2012 No.10222183 File: 840 KB, 1251x1631, A-28.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 14:42:04 2012 No.10222269 File: 229 KB, 770x900, u1414155124.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] You can keep a secret, right OCfriends?

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 14:43:49 2012 No.10222277 File: 261 KB, 800x933, u415457412124.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I hope you can.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:05:34 2012 No.10222359 File: 604 KB, 800x1000, u766938235.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'm addicted to photomanipulation.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:10:19 2012 No.10222383 >>10222359 Cool. It doesn't belong here though. Take it to someone who cares. (oh wait nobody does)

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:12:34 2012 No.10222401 >>10222383 Except it totally does belong here.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:14:34 2012 No.10222412 >>10222383 Why are you being so mean to him?

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:15:04 2012 No.10222424 >>10222401 Slapping SICP on a picture in a 2-minute shopjob is not OC.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:16:19 2012 No.10222425 >>10222401 So if I take three seconds to paste an image onto another image and perspective-skew it a bit I can call it OC?

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:17:19 2012 No.10222428 >>10222401 Pictures edited in mspaint? Not really. Maybe if it didn't involve ``hilarious'' /prog/ memes and Tokiko it'd be more tolerable.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:24:03 2012 No.10222470 >>10222177 This looks gorgeous.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:28:33 2012 No.10222489 >>10222177 These weren't drawn for here

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:31:18 2012 No.10222506 >>10222489 Actually they were. This artist has drawn for /jp/ many times before.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:32:18 2012 No.10222515 Just report him you fags. He was already banned for it: http://fuuka.warosu.org/jp/thread/S10212452

Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:47:26 2012 No.10222556

>>10205293
Renoise and REAPER on the pro end, a tracker and audacity if you want to keep things simple.

>>10205336
Everyone with a passing interest in chiptunes knows what LSDJ is. It's the tool destroying the scene by allowing every random hipster to make "so retro chip beats :DD omg gameboy musinc ur smrat how you do that"

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:50:11 2012 No.10222564 >>10222556 >It's the tool destroying the scene >hipster Heh.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 15:53:36 2012 No.10222580 >>10205336 fuck off, I'll continue using Famitracker.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 21:16:25 2012 No.10223703 File: 446 KB, 805x1208, chen.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Chen is not amused.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 21:17:10 2012 No.10223709 >>10223703 I think her hat is too small and on top. There's no way that thing is not falling off the second she moves.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 21:27:10 2012 No.10223732 >>10223709 I think you're right, but I was looking at some pictures for reference and found that many artists draw it like that.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 21:29:40 2012 No.10223740 >>10223732 Fair enough. It still looks very cute and I love that sketchbook shading style.

Anonymous Sun Dec 16 21:38:55 2012 No.10223774
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First attempt at a landscape thing. I've been looking at Moatddtutorials but that's really about it. What else should I be doing to learn?

Might uplaod some other stuff but I usually don't put a lot of effort into finishing my work (Right now just trying to make my drawings line up in terms of perspective.)

How did you guys master perspective? My shit usually comes out crooked.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 21:55:40 2012 No.10223817 >>10223774 ...is that border the straightest lines you can draw at the moment? If so, you have quite a bit to go before you should bother with something as complicated as landscapes.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 22:13:55 2012 No.10223874 >>10223740 Thanks.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 22:15:55 2012 No.10223882 That feeling when you'll never be good enough to attract a fanbase and your pictures never get noticed.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 22:27:10 2012 No.10223934 >>10223882 I'll be your fan if you want.

Anonymous Sun Dec 16 22:28:10 2012 No.10223938 [SPOILER]

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>>10223817
Don't know that question's meaning, but yeah I didn't practice landscapes at all just watched moatddtutorials.

I can draw flat lines if I'm working with paper, with tablets I have to get into a really uncomfortable position. I usually draw doodles of shape for practice and that's really my limit.

Anonymous Sun Dec 16 22:32:55 2012 No.10223954

>>10223709
>>10223732
The thing isn't as much as the hat is "too small" as it's not really drawn to the same perspective the head is.

That is, there's a Chen in your picture, and a hat in your picture, but they're not really connected to each other.

The hat doesn't really sit on her entire head, it just sort of floats at an awkward angle in mid-air above just her face.

The face appears roughly at an eye level, while the hat is drawn as if we were seeing it from above. See how that makes no sense?

The problem with using reference pictures is that:
a)you have to actually be able to tell good art from bad art
b)you have to understand why the artist drew something the way he did

Mindlessly copying will get you nowhere.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 22:36:40 2012 No.10223966 >>10223938 It's kind of pointless to attempt drawing something if you can't even control the line you're using to at least some basic degree, so I would focus on practicing basic geometrical shapes and lines more.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 22:39:40 2012 No.10223979 >>10223934 Thanks but having only one fan - a fake fan too, is kind of sad.

Anonymous Sun Dec 16 22:39:55 2012 No.10223980

>>10223938
That sounds like a problem with your posture.
I think you need to experiment with putting your tablet on different surfaces and at different distances from your body.
Protip: You should be drawing mostly with arm movements, not your wrists. You need room for that.

Anonymous Sun Dec 16 22:42:55 2012 No.10223987

>>10223979
You can do what I'm doing, never let anyone see anything you made and convince yourself that surely you'd be popular if only you cared about the opinions of others.

Works for me, baseless but boundless feeling of superiority is pretty cool.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 16 22:51:55 2012 No.10224012 >>10223980 Oh alright. Thanks.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 06:16:14 2012 No.10224955 >>10223954 You're right. It looks like I drew the character and the hat seperately. That's a problem I often have with clothes. Working on it.

Anonymous Mon Dec 17 09:01:10 2012 No.10225224 [DELETED]

Hey dudes, can anyone help me on how to do Eyelashes and how to best colour my stuff?

Ive recently started to colour my shit in SAI and would like help on how to adjust my way of drawing to colouring and which style is best for colouring my stuff.
Does anyone know artists who draw in a similar style to mine and colours their stuff, Would most likely help a lot.

Pixiv: http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=5480419

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 09:05:56 2012 No.10225233 >>10219277 I actually have characters, music and everything set up for a VN, just no plot. I'm going to put one out and it will be very generic, did you want to help me?

Anonymous Mon Dec 17 10:06:10 2012 No.10225354
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Ive recently started to colour my shit in SAI and would like help on how to adjust my way of drawing to colouring and which style is best for colouring my stuff.
Does anyone know artists who draw in a similar style to mine and colours their stuff, Would most likely help a lot.
Here is my most recent attempt at colouring.

Pixiv: http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=5480419

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 10:07:25 2012 No.10225358 >>10225354 Rather than worrying about your "muh style", work on your bodies, they look like shit.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 10:11:11 2012 No.10225372 >>10225358 By my style I mean I dont wanna do generic anime bug eyes, and thats about it. All of them or specific? But Ive been rusty on the anatomy so Ill make sure to keep an eye on it next time.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 10:16:11 2012 No.10225382 >>10225372 >I dont wanna do generic anime bug eyes You're in a state where you want to emulate some realism while not being realistic or animu, but you can't actually draw a realistic head so you end up with some clusterfuck in-between.

Anonymous Mon Dec 17 10:27:26 2012 No.10225411 [DELETED]

>>10225382
Fair point then, its just the way I think eyes look good.
So for now Ill be reworking the anatomy its seems? Way I see it I use most of the characteristic things from the anime art style, head shape mouth and such. I just have a dislike for the way too big eyes and often razor sharp noses.
Anyway its more that Im lacking a satisfactory way of doing eyes. And thats what Im looking for a guide to.
And yeah working in detail with my shit shows me alot of the flaws that I have.

sage Anonymous Mon Dec 17 11:07:41 2012 No.10225507

>>10225382

Yeah, you are right. I see where you are coming from with what your saying. Its just the way I like to do eyes, its not that realistic either Im just being being bad at articulating myself.
I also noticed how my way of doing faces suck when I tried to colour it so Im gonna go with the anime style.

Sage to avoid unnecesary bumping.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 11:12:41 2012 No.10225520 >>10225507 I don't think this is about the heads or eyes, it's the actual proportions of the body that is wrong. This is the same type of pseudo animu trash that's all over deviantart.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 11:37:26 2012 No.10225575 https://soundcloud.com/ryunocore/ars-finita It's djent/metal for a Light Novel OST. Yes, a Light Novel OST. Just trying to be productive and get back into making/mixing something that isn't electronic music again.

Anonymous Mon Dec 17 11:54:56 2012 No.10225631

>>10225520
From what I get from:
>>10225358
>>10225382

Its both that suck and what he says is I shouldnt go all DA with "muh style" which I tend to do from time to time.
Thanks for it btw, would you guys mind doing some correction on my stuff?
Like I post a sketch and you draw over it with what you think it better options?

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 12:28:11 2012 No.10225731 >>10225631 >would you guys mind doing some correction on my stuff? Mirror it (flip it sideways). Now you have a fresh impression of your thing and finally see what others see. Face it. Start again.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 13:58:57 2012 No.10226086 File: 310 KB, 1047x1396, biscuit.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 14:00:27 2012 No.10226096 >>10225575 Are you the guy who wrote the story as well?

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 14:08:58 2012 No.10226137 https://dl.dropbox.com/u/18165944/Velvet%2064000%201_01.mp3 I cheat with FLStudio so it probably isnt true 16-bit

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 14:20:28 2012 No.10226174 >>10225631 They can't cause they can't draw.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 14:52:58 2012 No.10226255 File: 86 KB, 678x554, SDFled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] just a sketch I did. Havent used my wacom in awhile.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 14:54:13 2012 No.10226256 Is it time for progress pictures yet? Or is /jp/ going to do them in January again?

Anonymous Mon Dec 17 15:08:28 2012 No.10226306

>>10226096
Yeah, <s>sorry about that</s>.

>>10226137
It's alright, there are hardly any "true" 16-bit composers nowadays and the 8-bit ones are mostly people using LSDJ anyway. One way to look at it is thinking that the end result matters more than the methods.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 15:08:43 2012 No.10226309 File: 113 KB, 351x636, tonikopop2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10225631 I could try, but my art style is very different from yours. Here's just an example of a generic moege character I've done. It'd end up looking like that.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 15:11:13 2012 No.10226317 >>10226255 You have a great ability to somehow make everything look flat. I think you'll do well at drawing things in perspective

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 15:49:59 2012 No.10226440 How do I get good at drawing cute girls?

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 15:51:13 2012 No.10226444 File: 103 KB, 1018x1742, huurr.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10226309 Current project. There is some asymmetry with her tits but thats because I suck at tablets. Currently doing eyes which I suck at in SAI.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 15:53:58 2012 No.10226455 >>10226440 You start by not making such retarded questions.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 16:04:28 2012 No.10226499 >>10226309 Looks pretty cute; Like how clean it is, though you should try removing some of the lines on her left shoulder. It should match better with the rest of the picture.

Anonymous Mon Dec 17 16:04:58 2012 No.10226505

>>10226444
I'll start on going over your sketch in a few, but I had a little advice, it's much easier to draw at a bit of an angle than straight forward because it allows for a bit more mistakes.
Also like some other anon said earlier, try mirroring your drawing to see flaws in proportion.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 16:07:43 2012 No.10226518 >>10226499 Thanks! I wanted to give a bit of definition to the shape of the sleeve but meant to lighten them up more as shading like I did elsewhere, I guess I didn't see notice the shoulders at the time.

Anonymous Mon Dec 17 19:42:02 2012 No.10227469
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>>10226440
Most of all: draw them in a way that it really AROUSES you; like, that no drawing of a girl will be acceptable until you (think you could) fall in love with her. It depends on your own taste, of course; so look for the artists you admire on the subject; study their style and process and even emulate it for a while. That way, little by little, you'll get the hang of it. Also, usiing souces and being rather fluent in realistic drawing (specially anatomy) will always help a hell of a lot to the structural cohernce of your lovelies.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 21:41:14 2012 No.10227833 >>10227469 Thanks for the advice. I haven't ever done anything other than technical drawing so where should I start with drawing cute girls, what tools should I use?

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 22:24:47 2012 No.10227999 >>10227833 pencil, paper and eraser. really, that's it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 22:46:55 2012 No.10228101 >>10227833 You use your hand to draw with a pencil.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 22:55:03 2012 No.10228138 >>10228101 Shit, and here I was inserting the pencil in my urethrea

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:14:48 2012 No.10228211 >>10228138 Yeah, I wouldn't doubt that from someone asking such things.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:15:48 2012 No.10228215 >>10228211 Not even that person

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:21:48 2012 No.10228233 >>10225507 >Sage to avoid unnecesary bumping. Yes, that is indeed what it is used for.

Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:39:48 2012 No.10228286
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I made a loli ass-slapping game for Christmas.

Yeah, it's shitty and buggy but I love it.
<s>http://manga.clone-army.org/otherworks.php</s>

... I'm thinking about doing a phone-based visual novel next.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:43:18 2012 No.10228301 >>10228286 HI DAN

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:44:03 2012 No.10228306 >>10228286 >http://manga.clone-army.org/otherworks.php >clone-army.org Oh boy, here we go... <s>I've missed you so much.</s>

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:49:18 2012 No.10228318 File: 130 KB, 1243x883, butts.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10228286 >http://manga.clone-army.org/otherworks.php That was a really fun 10 seconds, I guess that was it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:49:33 2012 No.10228319 File: 20 KB, 450x450, displeased_elegant_witch.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10228286 >Lilypichu

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:51:48 2012 No.10228321 File: 125 KB, 450x450, cupcake_god_01_large.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10228319 I'm sorry. I'm a shameless YT VA fan. Worse than any idolfag, I admit it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:52:18 2012 No.10228326 >>10228286 Write a comic about the good old days on /jp/ next.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:52:18 2012 No.10228327 File: 64 KB, 777x598, yay.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10228286 I loved it ;_;

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:53:48 2012 No.10228334 File: 23 KB, 450x450, displeased_elegant_witch_2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10228321

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:53:48 2012 No.10228336 >>10228321 Why don't you use one of those VA for whatever you do next? Slapping butt is pretty fun, specially with that crying face, but for maximum bully dom appeal you need a cute voice to go with it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:56:03 2012 No.10228344 >>10228336 Zone does a better job of that then I ever will. I'll stick to my shitty <s>and pretentious</s> comics. And maybe a VN. It might be fun to have YTVAs to voices for a VN...

>>	Anonymous Mon Dec 17 23:56:18 2012 No.10228343 >>10228336 This is only permissible if they supply short gasps and moans, but no speech (in English OR Japanese).

>>	sage Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:00:33 2012 No.10228353 File: 25 KB, 450x450, pls.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10228334 I'm sorry.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:01:18 2012 No.10228355 >>10228344 >Zone Funny, I was just listening to Bis. >It might be fun to have YTVAs to voices for a VN... Don't you fucking dare. I will castrate you.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:01:48 2012 No.10228358 Please go.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:01:48 2012 No.10228359 File: 338 KB, 600x800, maido.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] rate my OC

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:02:33 2012 No.10228361 >>10228359 Dan Kim and Sai in the same thread? zOMG.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:03:33 2012 No.10228365 File: 170 KB, 466x700, Aunyrae XL.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Tweaked some art for one of the titty monsters, and change things so I could add expressions...

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:04:33 2012 No.10228369 >>10228365 Looks good. What's this for? (I don't usually follow these threads)

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:06:48 2012 No.10228373 >>10228365 looks great!

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:20:19 2012 No.10228401 File: 26 KB, 384x570, strongman.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I drew this yesterday.

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:21:49 2012 No.10228406
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>>10228369

It's for a free VN I'm working on, it's mostly me just trying to make a futa game cause no one made futa VNs I liked..

<s>Look up Dizzy Hearts if you'd like</s>

>>10228373

Thank you

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:27:04 2012 No.10228423 >>10228406 Oh, I remember criticizing the concept earlier this year. The scope felt too large and along with the detailed world building I thought it just wouldn't be feasible. Glad to hear you're still going at it.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:31:34 2012 No.10228442 File: 117 KB, 530x470, monsquaz.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10228401

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:36:19 2012 No.10228458 File: 196 KB, 466x700, Mercilia XL.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10228406 Does she have a dick?

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:38:19 2012 No.10228462
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>>10228423

I think that was last year? If you're the guy who tore into me about the routes and such. You're probably the one who convinced me to keep going.

The story is going to be simple though, it's a romance story. All the world building is going to be around the game, and to set up other stories..

>>10228458

That one's old, I'm going through and updating the sprites to prepare for the demo early in January, <s>She does</s>

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:40:19 2012 No.10228465 >>10228462 Oh, the new one looks much better. Nice. <s>okay ;_;</s>

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:41:04 2012 No.10228469

>>10228365
I still don't dig your bosomed style and don't think I ever will. But this definitely looks fresher than before. Maybe it's the white background or the improved expression, indeed; maybe the tilt of the head and the opositions in the posture...

Anyway: somehow it's not nearly as repulsive to me as it used to; good work.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:45:49 2012 No.10228476 >>10228462 The body structure, posture and hair have REEEEEEEEALLY improved, man. They finally make sense and this one in particular is even alluring. Good job, man, pretty good job.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:49:04 2012 No.10228486 File: 56 KB, 250x250, wat.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I-I don't get it what all this cupcake thing is about. I thought the source material was longer or made sense. I drew my reaction. >>10228462 She's so cute

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:53:34 2012 No.10228490 >>10228462 >She does If only you would use your powers for good.

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:56:34 2012 No.10228495
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>>10228486
I need to add more comics. I'm just procrastinating, as usual. It's going to be omnibus format, though -- different MCs for different arcs.

Thank you for the Cupcake picture. <s>Can... can I post it on my site? This is the only satisfaction I get out of life.</s>

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 00:59:04 2012 No.10228500 >>10228495 You need to stream again. Outside pressure kept you going and producing often, even if the stream was just a circlejerk of praise.

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:00:34 2012 No.10228503

T42R was the first webcomic that really resonated with me. It's funny because I read it before /jp/ existed, before I went to /a/ on a serious level, before I even contacted with the "fucked up in the head weeaboo community" on the Internet. It's when I thought, "this comic, it was made for me."

That autobiographical series was pretty harsh, though. It's really tough coming to terms with that kind of stuff. The "the skeleton means boners" part made up for it, though.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:01:34 2012 No.10228504 >>10228495 Yeah, sure. I like cute girls like cupcake I only wish I could draw them better.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:03:19 2012 No.10228508 >>10228469 >>10228465 >>10228476 >>10228486 Unfortunately I was too ambitious when I started, I had to make it a Kinetic VN or I wouldn't be able to ever finish it. Thanks for the critiques and comments up to now >>10228490 But cute futa is pure

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:04:49 2012 No.10228510
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>>10228500
You're probably right. I should stream. I've been spending a lot of time reworking my Witch project, though. I really want to finish this and get it right before I turn 30.

>>10228503
Thanks, man. Cupcake's reality wine is indeed bitter.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:08:19 2012 No.10228516 File: 36 KB, 450x450, cupcake_butt_self_shot.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10228504 Thanks. I think your drawing style is plenty cute. >>10228508 I'm really looking forward to your demo.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:08:49 2012 No.10228521 >>10228504 Luckyyyyy!

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:17:49 2012 No.10228531 is it possible to play flash images in pixiv or do you have to go offsite? just wondering if anyone knows

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:18:04 2012 No.10228533 >>10228510 Craaazzy

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:18:19 2012 No.10228534
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i've been working on this character a lot lately.
i based her the grunge fashion from the 90's but im not sure what i want her to be resting on slightly.
whether it be a guitar or bass and be a musician. or be leaning on a weapon as a post-apocalyptic survivor. similar to the tone of the Gorillaz, Tank Girl, and Black Rock Shooter

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:19:19 2012 No.10228537 >>10228534 if a survivor i'd probably add armor

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:39:04 2012 No.10228569

>>10228286
DAN KIM

p.s.: You're fooling nobody with your biocomics. We know that you have a happy, successful life with many children you don't sexually abuse spawned from the loins of your adoring wife. Jason Lutes isn't secretly preparing a hateful unauthorised biography describing in detail the pathos of early 21st century Canadian life. Also you should pick those socks off your floor.

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:39:04 2012 No.10228570

>>10228534
It looks very flat and shaky. Anatomy is off too, starting with the hair which seems to be its own entity attached to a large skull. Practice more, do some anatomy studies. There are some good resources around the jp archives and this /a/ post is a good launchpad too
http://archive.foolz.us/a/thread/76590359/

Survivor character design is all about practical use, scavenging and repairs. It means re purposed tshirts, heavy duty jeans with patches, boots that last a lifetime. A leather jacket that is slightly too big or small can be a good idea, it tells a story on its own. Something they found abandoned somewhere and they're still hauling around because nothing more fitting has come up yet. Improvised armor, dirty bandages and unkempt hair, all of these are good for a survivor look.

If you're going for grunge, loose fitting plaid shirts are the easiest way to convey it, preferably tied around the hips. A thick lumberjack shirt a bit too big for her, stained with mud and blood currently hanging around her belly because it got too warm in the post apocalyptic wasteland so she's just slowly marching onward, dragging a damaged bass behind her.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:43:04 2012 No.10228578 >>10228401 Very Tom of Finland. >>10228534 did you draw jbcs tan?

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 01:50:19 2012 No.10228590 File: 271 KB, 900x900, xbox.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10228569 Every word of your post is like a searing nail hammered into the tip of my dick.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 02:00:04 2012 No.10228619 >>10228570 which part of the anatomy is off? i did this quickly and sloppy and i thought something was wrong. i should've done a gesture skeleton and some basic muscle structure. thanks for the advise though

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 02:03:19 2012 No.10228628 >>10228590 I'm glad to have pleased you sexually. —love, anonymous. p.s. Global rule 13: I don't give a damn.

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 02:04:20 2012 No.10228631

>>10226137

I kinda feel like the instruments are overall a bit too loud, and are overpowering each other. It makes it a bit hard to discern some of the instruments, like the percussion, for example. I had some trouble with this recently in regard to composing SNES music.

I like it otherwise! Nice composition. Did you use samples from Amiga games?

>>10226306
>One way to look at it is thinking that the end result matters more than the methods.

Fully agree with this. Virt's FX3 wasn't actually NES music, yet it's amazing regardless. If it sounds good, it's good.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 06:15:22 2012 No.10229131 >>10228516 Thank you， I hope people like it．

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 06:27:52 2012 No.10229147 How did a weirdo like Dan Kim go mainstream again? I haven't been here during 2008 but he's pretty "lulso randumb"

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 06:52:52 2012 No.10229186 >>10228590 Glad to see you back here. You've had a subtle but powerful influence on my art and sense of humor over the last 8 years.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 07:08:01 2012 No.10229214 Kill yourself, Dan Kim. You're a humongous waste of fresh air and human flesh. Oh, and sperm.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 08:12:53 2012 No.10229336 File: 200 KB, 800x853, liebe.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 13:14:16 2012 No.10229903 Oh great, now these threads got some more circlejerking to plague us.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 13:54:39 2012 No.10230043 >>10228286 Why do I keep getting more and more the impression that when you do cute little girls doing cute things your art has been looking more and more like Bryan Lee O'Malley's? Not that it's an inherently bad thing, but it kinda freaks me out.

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:01:39 2012 No.10230071
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>>10227999
Is there any kind in particular you would recommend or will any do?

Since I don't have any on hand I tried mspaint instead. I'm not sure I'm doing this right, any tips?

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:14:16 2012 No.10230094 >>10230071 You ask for tips hoping for some kind of secret every artist must follow. How about just drawing and practcing before asking for specific material for specific techniques and such? You have a very long way to go, so just get moving.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:16:39 2012 No.10230097 >>10230094 So should I just keep doing what I'm doing now?

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:16:39 2012 No.10230099

>>10230071
If you're going all digital I would use photoshop or SAI, since mspaint doesn't have pen pressure. Pen pressure is important.

But even if I work on photoshop a lot, I still doodle on paper. My room is filled with doodles. Don't you have even a pen around your house? Anything might work.

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:24:09 2012 No.10230117

>>10230097
Pencil, paper, eraser, those items are very easy to find. Grab them and draw.

It's like you lack the most basic and important factor of all: the will to simply draw. And no, it's not a mere "oh hey uh, I kinda wanna draw", which is exactly the impression I get from your posts.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:26:39 2012 No.10230123 >>10230099 Paper tears and gets dirty too easily.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:27:39 2012 No.10230130 File: 316 KB, 1200x900, I don't even know where to start.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Sometimes I doodle like this.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:30:39 2012 No.10230146 File: 495 KB, 1200x900, hepl.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] But I like doodling moe girls, what should I do /jp/?!

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:33:54 2012 No.10230161 >>10230146 work on that nose right now it looks like a dog's nose, it should look more like a shadow

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:35:39 2012 No.10230168 >>10230146 What kind of dumb question is that?

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:49:39 2012 No.10230210

>>10228631
>Virt's FX3 wasn't actually NES music
Do you mean that literally, or are you saying it doesn't feel like NES music to you?
Because FX3 was most certainly done with a real NES.

The LSDJ faggotry scene is pretty huge, but there are still plenty of composers of real "8-bit" music around. I hate applying the terms 16-bit and 8-bit to music, but there are even some people doing "16-bit" FM stuff around.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:51:54 2012 No.10230219 >>10230117 Sorry, I was approaching this like it was a skill. I forgot that art is, well, an art.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 14:53:09 2012 No.10230229 >>10230146 Draw a little girl inside of a watermelon.

Anonymous Tue Dec 18 20:21:18 2012 No.10231361

>>10230123
What do you want your drawings for? I draw on paper a lot because is easy and quick to doodle there.
And what kind of paper tears so easily?, it hasn't happened to me since high school when I had to use those super strong pencils 5H(?) to draw portraits.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 22:08:28 2012 No.10231910 File: 277 KB, 1200x900, hehuhehu.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10230229 I just woke up to do this, not colored though sorry!

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 23:22:19 2012 No.10232187 >>10230123 >Paper gets dirty too easily Keep another below your hand if you're resting it on the paper

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 23:30:29 2012 No.10232214 >>10231910 you should use thinner and slightly darker lines

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 23:52:20 2012 No.10232281 Did I miss something or was someone roleplaying as dan kim and pretending to upload oc. and apparently he is a youtube voice actor faggot? i dont get it.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 23:54:50 2012 No.10232290 >>10232281 I don't even want to know.

>>	Anonymous Tue Dec 18 23:57:05 2012 No.10232304 >>10232281 Dan Kim is followed by circlejerk everywhere. It's a little disgusting.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 00:05:20 2012 No.10232332 >>10232304 Dan Kim is exciting because he is a little disgusting. Like shaking hands with your uncle and having to shake the ejaculate from your fingers.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 00:06:21 2012 No.10232335 >>10232304 A little?

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 06:27:19 2012 No.10233178 I'll do one drawing request.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 06:44:19 2012 No.10233212 >>10233178 Reimu doing Marisa's hair please

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 06:53:19 2012 No.10233237 >>10233212 should she cum in her hair once she's done?

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 07:00:19 2012 No.10233254 >>10233237 your choice

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 07:03:19 2012 No.10233258 >>10233237 >>10233178 Futa Reimu holding up Marisa's hair, with her dick in it, filling her hair with semen.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 11:01:19 2012 No.10233700 >>10233237 >>10233258 Cancer killing OC.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 11:02:19 2012 No.10233704 Request me some blazblue and I'll try to draw it. But I might fail and never deliver.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 11:06:19 2012 No.10233717 >>10233704 With requeriments and attitude like that I don't even know why you are asking for a 'request'.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 11:07:19 2012 No.10233718 >>10233704 Taokaka chasing a fish on a pole!

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 11:07:19 2012 No.10233719 >>10233700 It's not like the drawfag need to comply, those are completely optional.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 11:09:19 2012 No.10233725 >>10233178 How about Orin building a snowman?

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 11:11:19 2012 No.10233736 >>10233717 I wanna draw, put some effort into something, but I don't know what to draw. It's been a long time since I tried really hard. I'd like if it made someone happy. But I don't know if I even can. >>10233718 Taokaka, huh? Well you were first...

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 15:32:35 2012 No.10234891 /jp/ project. hurry up if you want to partecipate! it will live only until the end of the thread! >>10222146

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 15:39:34 2012 No.10234922 >>10234891 No.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 15:45:34 2012 No.10234941 btw Dan Kim I think you're shit

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