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It's time for /jp/ to start a visual novel.

Let's start with:

>Title
>Theme
>Plot
>Characters
>Something to be remembered by
>... and everything else

>> No.10013836

Tokiko's bizarre adventure.

>> No.10013838

I'll start:

>Title
Apocalypta
>Theme
Post-human apocalyptic era
>Plot
It's about people surviving and shit
>Characters
Some people who survived
>Something to be remembered by
Probably by the tragic ending

>> No.10013848

>Title
Katawa Shounen
>Theme
Crippled cute boys
>Plot
You get a heart attack and get sent to a crippled faggots school, there you fuck crippled boys and shit
>Characters
Some blind nigger, a burnt retard, a legless whore, and an armless prostitute
>Something to be remembered by
They all die

>> No.10013856

>>10013836
>>10013838
>>10013848
This sounds terrible come on have some imagination.

>> No.10013866

>>10013816
Then make a stalker vn with the upotte cast.

>> No.10013869

>>10013856
>Title
KEY
>Theme
SoL about cute girls, one of them has to be autistic and attached to a certain object
>Plot
The main whore dies
>Characters
Read theme
>Something to be remembered by
At the end a bright light appears and she gets revived

>> No.10013884

>>10013869
Sorry for the slow reply I fell asleep while reading this.

>> No.10013894
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>>10013884
>>10013869
You're funny, I'm laugh.

>> No.10013907

>>10013894
Epic reaction image /b/ro.

>> No.10013922

Samurai tactician serves the yandere shogun, becomes her right hand man and lover and together they conquest Japan and have 40 babies and they all become samurai.

>> No.10013921
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>>10013907
u mad?

>> No.10013925

>Title
Matching Feathers
>Theme
Last year of High School
>Plot
It's already the final year of High School, since <<name of class or something>> have only one section, they have begun to form close bonds around each other. Treasuring friendships. Some fights and... some romance
>Characters
A normal male character
A genius girl
Big-boobs girl
Slutty girl
A poor girl who lives by her own, preferably yandere
A rich girl, tsundere
A girl who likes to stay in the library
A girl who likes to cook
>Something to be remembered by
Drama and shit

>> No.10013926

Give us some warehouses and we'll start!

>> No.10013930

>>10013925
That is so stupid
You're stupid

>> No.10013931

>>10013921
yeah you got me man oh yeah I should type in caps to prove my anger AH OH YEAH I SHOULD ALSO USE THE WORD FUCK!

>> No.10013932

>Title
K-ON!!!
>Theme
Cute girls doing cute things.
>Plot
They eat cake and drink tea, sometimes if they're feeling gutsy they'll play some music.
>Characters
Cute girls, autism.
>Something to be remembered by
Anything K-ON will be remembered regardless of what happened.

This has been done countless times, take it back to /a/ or whatever.

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>>10013931
hOLY FUCK YOU GOT OWNED

>> No.10013940
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>>10013931
>getting troll'd this easily

>> No.10013942

>>10013934
>>10013940

Yeah I know we should screencap this and post this all over the board so I can become famous and become an epic meme.

>> No.10013945

>>10013942
Straight up man, thats the 2D/Random spirit

>> No.10013950

>>10013942
I saved those reaction images from /jp/.
Just replying you autistic fuck it's sad watching you.

>> No.10013966

>>10013950
Thanks man I was afraid I was to normal, now I know I belong here.

>> No.10013985

>Title
PUNCH
>Theme
Near-future sci-fi yuri.
>Plot
You are PUNCH, the PUNCHingest girl in PUNCHtown. But there are hot alien space babes who seek to steal the power of the PUNCH, and you must protect the town of PUNCH by PUNCHing them in the FACE.
>Characters
PUNCH, a hotblooded human female fresh out of highschool and looking for purpose in her life.
KICK, a blue-skinned alien space MILF with a penchant for long sweaters and PUNCH's ally in the fight against evil!
CHOP, a sexually repressed human female and PUNCH's lifelong rival, she allies with the aliens on the promise that PUNCH's defeat will be at her hands and no others.
TACKLE, red-skinned black-haired twintail loli who fights because FIGHTING IS FUN!
HEADBUTT, a green-skinned musclebound brute who outwardly desires only dominance of all humans, but secretly wishes that she could express her deep love of origami.
>Something to be remembered by
3D MoCap fight scenes.

>> No.10013982

>Title
Shittu Posteru Club
>Theme
Shitposting
>Plot
A group of /jp/ers band together to become the greatest shitposters of all time
>Characters
All anonymous, with the exception of a few recurring Tripfags who nobody likes, and Meido who is the arch nemesis.
>Something to be remembered by
The love scenes. Oh my.

>> No.10013987

>>10013982
That would be great actually.

>> No.10013992

>>10013940
HELL/a/ epic greentext dood

>> No.10014007
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-Title
Do your best!! NEET-chan!!
-Theme
Horror
-Plot
A cute NEET girl named is finally kicked out of her home by her parents who have given up on and no longer care about her. While living in a local internet cafe she reads an ad online advertising a free hostel called the "/jp/ mansion" with very strict requirements, but all which she meets miraculously. That's when she decides to move in...
-Characters
Anz*ch*n* - The protagonist who moves into the /jp/ mansion. She's lazy, cute, skinny and small and has a musky and smelly NEET pussy.
Residents of the /jp/ mansion
-Something to be remembered by
The blood, guts, feces, torture and suffering

>> No.10014019

>Anime club
A normal guy that has never seen anime before joins his schools anime club. Hilarity and spaghetti ensues.
>Characters
Several neckbeards, an extremely fat guy that is friends with everyone, a shut in guy that never talks to anyone, two-three emo/goth girls that are there for naruto, that guy with autism and that guy that smokes weed.
>something to remember
The normal turns into the biggest neckbeard or a relatively cool guy depending on the choices you make.

>> No.10014021

>>10013992
>can't tell a /jp/ poster from someone else
>being this new

>> No.10014024

>>10014021
Stop pretending to be me, I'm you, you're not me.

>> No.10014027

>Title
My little brother can't be this rapist!
>Theme
Awesomeness of rape
>Plot
You play as a guys older sister and try to get him to rape you instead of other women but since he is opposed to incest and finds it disgusting hilarious things happen and you end up raping him every time
>Characters
Older sister
Younger brother
Other girls he rapes
>Something to be remembered by
In one of the endings you marry a dog

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>>10014021

>> No.10014030

>>10014024
What the HELL are you talking about nerd? Who would want to be a faggot like you lol

>> No.10014035

>>10014030
Using lol can't hide your fear of me nerd.

>> No.10014044

>>10014028
There are too many cute girls here for anybody to leave.

If we want to be rid of someone we must first be rid of the cute girls.

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>>10014035
I got here 3 days ago am I supposed to know you
>Implying anyone cares about your ego lol

>> No.10014064

>>10014046
That's the last straw meet me in the parking lot by Johnson drive!

>> No.10014068
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>>10014064
Uhh yeah right loser

>> No.10014071

>>10013866
Mite b cool as long as there are no Sig, L and Galil.

>> No.10014073

>>10014068
Whatever you wuss.

>> No.10014076

nukige where all of mc's potential rivals are secretly girls too

if anybody knows a vn like this please

>> No.10014079

>>10014076
Do you get to duck the girls?

>> No.10014084

>>10014073
This is an image board like on the internet you faggot. Stop roleplaying, its creepy

>> No.10014086

>>10014079
it's a nukige what do you think

>> No.10014087

Do that visual novel where every girl were supposed to represent a musical genre, that's a wonderful idea.

>> No.10014091

Wait a fucking second, is that streaming? OP, please kill yourself.

>> No.10014089

>>10014084
Make me.

>> No.10014093

>>10014089
not going to make you do shit bye creeper

>> No.10014094

>>10014093
I win.

>> No.10014096

>>10014086
The rivals to be shitty side characters.

>> No.10014119

No.

>> No.10014127
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10014127

>Title
Online/Offline
>Theme
Video games, economy, SoL
>Plot
You're a University student who earns his money by playing vidya. You do it by selling ingame items for real cash, you also completely take over a game's economy through sheer calculations via resell/rebuy, market predictions through a game's auction house.
>Characters
Copypaste from VN's like SAO, Hyouka etc. Several love interests.
>Something to be remembered by
In a bad ending, you decide to scam your love interest's "Ultrarare Weapon" to sell it on Ebay. She swears she will find your house and kill you, you ignore her empty threat. Two days later she shows up in your house while you're wearing headphones blasting out 2hu music. She then stabs you to death with a kitchen knife.

>> No.10014139

>Title
Dat /jp/ dream...

>Theme
Comedy, Drama and some Ero scenes

>Plot
The protagonist is a NEET hikki /jp/er, his live changes the day he successfully manages to create his own Tulpa. But the Tulpa doesn't turn out to be his ideal and obedient waifu at all, hilarity ensues.
From that point onward Tulpa-chan will keep pushing the MC to follow his dream and offers him to help him.
All of the typical /jp/ dreams will be explored in a sort of episodic format: "I wanna be the little girl", "/jp/ mansion", "cocks!", "portal to gensokyou", etc.
But is this all real or did the MC become schizophrenic after successfully creating the Tulpa?

>Characters
Unnamed /jp/er
Tulpa-chan
Lot of other minor characters depending on the episode.

>Something to be remembered by
It should be a story at times absolutely hilarious and ridiculous, and then pretty dark introspecitive about the MC sad life and fucked up mind.

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>>10014127
>playing diablo 3
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllll

>> No.10014192

Because my field was too long I made it into a document.
http://www.scribd.com/doc/112555590/VN-Idea
Take a look at it.

>> No.10014214

How about making a visual novel wherein the NEET protagonist rots slowly, living alone.

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>>10014141
I quit during July. I already earned 800 euro from it.

>> No.10014234

>>10014214
and oh, every end will be a death.
-suicide
-fire problem
-Hunger
-etc etc

>> No.10014269

>Title
Memoirs of a truNEET

>Theme
SOL/Meaning of life

>Plot
Tell the story of a smart and successful high school graduate that decided to forgo higher education life to do whatever that he want. Hilarious comedy and hijinks ensue with his mom and friends trying to coax him out of his room so that he doesn't waste his talent.

>Characters
Nagging mom
Childhood friend that lost the MC to his 2D girlfriends
His bro in highschool that play DOTA2 and MMO with him until he decided to start playing japanese porn game
Random girls that he meet while he goes out to get food in the middle of the night
Random strangers in a vile imageboard

>Something to be remembered by
People in his social circle finally accepted that he is living his dream.

>> No.10014284

>Title
Cute girls doing cute things.
>Theme
Cute girls doing cute things.
>Plot
Cute girls doing cute things.
>Characters
Cute girls doing cute things.
>Something to be remembered by
Cute girls doing cute things.
>... and everything else
Cute girls doing cute things.

>> No.10017013

Let's just make Monsters And Other Childish Things VN.

>> No.10017038

Oh God, someone please initiate a legitimate project. I need to do something with my time. At this rate I'm gonna drown in stagnation and die. Help meeeeee....

>> No.10017053

>>10017038
Just make a script and if it's any good, people will make the art and programming for you after you show them it.

>> No.10017067

>>10017053
That requires initiative and ambition. Do you think I have either of those? I want someone to start a project so I can latch onto it like a leech and "contribute" so as to delude myself into thinking I'm spending my days productively.

>> No.10017095

>>10017067
Can you really fool yourself that easily?

Well, knock yourself out.

http://editthis.info/anon_vn/

>> No.10017141

>>10017095
Is that still in use? Last time I even heard its mention was in 2011, and it wasn't even relevant to writing.

>> No.10017291

Why are VNs so shitty?

>> No.10017301

>>10017291
Because they're written by incompetents. Any medium can shine if the creator is adequately skilled.

>> No.10024146

I've been hesitant to start my own thread about this so this thread gives me a way to post this without having to make a whole new thread and draw too much attention to myself (I just gotta necromance this one from page 10 instead).

I'm trying to make a VN again, for like the third or fourth time. Here's a rough draft of the intro (everything up to the first choice):
http://pastebin.com/B2jcVCg2

Brief overview: it's a NVL-style eroge about a guy who ends up in a small commune in the middle of the wilderness. A-and you even get to choose from four different girls to fuck!

>> No.10024219

>Title
Psithurism (blowing of leaves)
>Theme
Howabout it be a Visual Novel with a theme that changes with the ending so your choices actually have a fucking impact
>Plot
These Post high (maybe a highschool girl tossed in or something) kids hang out in some apartment turned computer lab and work on various projects, browse around the web (I guess /jp/ references could be abundant), computer stuff. Their main goal is to earn some easy cash for themselves and to actually pay the rent and attempt this with various methodologies.
>Characters
Abnormal female/male ratio. An apathetic male/female should be couple. Wannabe leader guy. Overenergetic shortness. Useless chubs. Miss ideas that never work. The friendzoner. Disabled chick and her friend that's always with her but doesn't really give a shit about anything. And of course, original funder/mooched off of girl.
>Something to be remembered by
Vastly different endings
>... and everything else
Meh, don't want to write anymore. As if anything will ever get done with any of these ideas

>> No.10024268

>>10024146
Work on your first paragraph. Starting off with two weak similes is going to discourage people from ever getting into your work.

>> No.10024338

Something about a semi-totaliarian state where [in addition to the usual things] a computer system calculates affinity between social rejects and issues official orders for them to meet each other and try to become friends, with the objective of peacefully lessening the few remaining social irregularities.
The twist is that the "Big Brother is evil" trope is subverted, the system actually works and the various main characters become a good Key-esque group of functional, happy friends after the initial awkwardness (being forced to socialize) and an extensive exposition of their psychological issues.

>> No.10024653

>Title
Nyanko to, koneko wo tsukaritai!
>Theme
Nekomimi youjos
>Plot
A guy raises the rare beings known as catgirls. He most teach them how to act properly and take care of themselves, lest they be doomed to a domestic life as pets.
>Characters
Manx - Bulled by humans and catpeople alike for her in-between appearance. Wears a hat sometimes to blend in with humans.
Sphinx - Runs around naked all the time. Free spirited and affectionate.
Lynx - Mysterious, tough, and tall.
Chartreux - Quiet, shy type.
Devon Rex - braniac, twin-ponytailed, glasses girl.
>Something to be remembered by
Most blood ever seen in a erogame that doesn't have rape scenes.
>... and everything else
Raising sim aspects.
Start only choosing one girl at a time, but can then choose 2 or 3 as you complete the game successfully.
Able to breed and sell off the girls' children as pets, value(and reaction) depending on the parent's stats.
Multiple endings that show you what becomes of each girl, similar to princess maker.

>> No.10025199

>Title
The Hunt for the Imouto October
>Theme
Imouto eroge
>Plot
A group of loli imoutos have kidnapped their oniichan and hijacked a nuclear submarine armed with ICBMs which they plan to use to reach international waters in order to have an orgy. Both the US and Russian navies are hunting them.
>Characters
Tsundere imouto, koodere imouto, ojousama imouto, dojkko imouto, submarine captain imouto.
>Something to be remembered by
Exciting submarine combat scenes, loli orgies.

>> No.10025209

if 4chan makes a novel it will be the next KS

>> No.10025218

I've started and given up on at least 10 visual projects by now. My last one is "still in the works" but I haven't done anything on it for months.

It's just too easy to procrastinate.

>> No.10025224

>>10025199
Genius. But shouldn't there be a submarine imouto?

>> No.10025229

>>10025224
You mean a mecha musume?

>> No.10025263

>>10025209
shit? of course

>> No.10025271

>>10025218
I'm similar but its because I can't write an opening. I can do everything else but like those people who have problems ending a story, I have problems writing an opening that isn't shit or even coming up with one at all.

>> No.10025341
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>Title
madoka a shit (no caps)
>Themes
Forbidden love, tfw no gf
>Plot
You play as Homu trying to hit on the madoka until she falls in love with you, but time resets before you're able to convey your feelings every time. Each time reset opens new options, such as forcefully hugging her, forcefully kissing her, raping her, forcefully holding her hand, new furniture for your house, etc. until you're able to mind break her and make her yours.
>Characters
Homu, the madoka, Reimu's smelly, rancid armpits
>Something to be remembered by
I f*cked ur mom

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>> No.10025370

>>10025359
>>10025363

This thread's too harmless to be collaterally damaged, let's take it to another thread.

>> No.10025433

>>10014269
I want this to be real.

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>>10014227
well done!

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