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General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

Previous thread: >>13336676

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>>13451266

>> No.13451487

>>13451300
Way to shit on a good poem.

>> No.13451495
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The world has ended. The only survivors are you and a little girl wearing a microbikini.

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>>13451495
Alternative ver.

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>> No.13451519

>>13451495
>>13451499
Do you post your stuff somewhere?

White loli is better, by the way.

>> No.13451523

>>13451487
Rude!

>> No.13451525

>>13451519
Not really. I only post on the jay.

>> No.13451533

>>13451525
Ok, I'll stalk you here then!

>> No.13451542

>>13451501
Amazing as usual!

>> No.13451698
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i added some pointless guitar to this song. im only okay with how it turned out. im not sure if i should move towards more original stuff than the hybrid vocal melody thing ive been trying

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hdJyrkU2V6c

>> No.13451955

>>13451698
What a nice arrange. I wonder how your original stuff would sound.

>> No.13452771

>>13451495
not brown enough

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>> No.13452811

>>13452785
I scrolled a lot to see her shoulders

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I was making a pregnant little grill out of play-doh, when that got me thinking.

How come we never see anime figurine artists in here? If someone has attempted it before can they point me out to a good guide?

>> No.13453168

>>13453157
It looks like cheese.

>> No.13453173

>>13453157
>Play-doh
I tought it was banana... dropped.

>> No.13453279

>>13453157
It was good until the knife.

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>> No.13453501

https://soundcloud.com/ryunocore/minty

The track was made with mostly NI Massive.

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hi

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How many /jp/s learned to draw so they could draw naked anime girls?

>> No.13453719

>>13453551
Oh god, he's back

>> No.13453795

>>13453612
I learned to draw because I have gender dysphoria, but I'm too manly to pass off as a trap so I express my femininity as cute anime girls.

>> No.13453817

>>13453795
gr8 b8 m8 I r8 8/8

>> No.13453908

>>13451499
>>13451495
Is this about swimsuit world

>>13453612
I didn't, I just liked drawing, but my latest idea that's never going to work out has essentially descended into being a bunch of (non sexual) naked anime girls.

>>13453157
That might be a bit beyond /jp/'s level.

>>13453551
It's less wiggly but still too wiggly

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>>13453501
Not /jp/ related
Shitty high pitched vocals
Cheap synth sounds

>> No.13455065

>>13454267
>>13454267
>Not /jp/ related
I've been here since 2008, participated in community projects before and

>Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

Thanks for the feedback, though.

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>> No.13455712

>>13455065
>been here since 2008
me too but doesn't mean everything I do is /jp/ related
also he's just trolling you, if you can't figure it out on your own after all this time here then you have some pretty serious problem
>participated in community projects before
this isn't something to wear as a merit badge, considering what kind of pathetic shit the 4chan-related projects are

>> No.13455715

>>13453501
Keep up the good work!

>> No.13455828

>>13455065
yeah well ive been here since 2001! the 9/11 threads were epic!

>> No.13455851

It should be added that
>Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming that is pertaining to the board (in this case otaku culture)
This will restrict people like this crossie from just plugging his soundcloud >>13453501
While allowing for actual board members who make music related to otaku culture(2hu arranges etc) to receive feedback and participate.
Because honestly do we really want a bunch of /mu/ fags shitting up the thread with check "muh soundloud bruh"

>> No.13455905

>>13455851
Not him, but list several other times people have come in here and shit up the thread with their soundclouds.

You can't, because you're an idiot. The kind of narrowminded, absolute driviling sack of stupidty who uses buzz terms like "crossie" because you lack the ability to function as an individual and resort to groupthink and boogymen like "cross boarders".

His song sucked yea but you can complain when 90% of this thread is soundcloud links and response to soundclouds saying "rec'd". One person sharing their soundcloud isn't anything and it isn't going to ruin this thread.

I hate idiots like you, fucking children who throw tantrums when their little internet saftey blanket feels violated. Pathetic.

>> No.13455924

>>13455905
If we allow it now, it can easily get out of hand, we have to stand up against it now.
Like they should have stopped Hitler at Munich, they should never let him get away

>> No.13455931

>>13453467
translate it weebs

>> No.13456001

>>13455924
These threads have gone on forever with random soundcloud links and it's been fine.

>> No.13456092

>>13455851
>>13455924

While you're deciding what works and what doesn't despite how /jp/ has always been, might as well rename the thread to "Touhou fan-created content general".

>> No.13456220

>>13455851
They use "brah" and not "bruh" or "bruv"
>>13456001
>forever
its not even a year

>> No.13456240

>>13455905
why do you use the word groupthink like it's a problem?

>> No.13456275

>>13456240
if I had to bet it's because because he's not an imbecile

>> No.13456296

>>13456092
There's already a thread like that though. Well, one for touhou fangame and usually one for draw a touhou from that roll chart. This thread would be touhou music at best.

Also I'd rather hear their shitty /mu/ music than another screeching vocaloid piece of shit.

Nonetheless, this is the OC thread for people who post in /jp/. It's not the animu drawthread nor the weeaboo music drawthread.

>> No.13456464

>>13456296
then why would it have to be in /jp/ if it isn't meant specifically for /jp/sies

>> No.13456513

>>13456464
This is a thread for /jp/ to create things, not a thread to create things for /jp/. It doesn't have to be specifically for /jp/, just made by someone who visits. If they're just randomly dropping off soundcloud and you don't like it, report them for advertising or something.

>> No.13456703

>>13456464
Dude just shut the fuck up. You're more detrimental to this thread than any soundcloud link.

>> No.13456719

>>13453157
I do but I haven't posted anything in a long time.

>> No.13456728

>>13456275
you are dodging the question, what's your problem with groupthink?

>> No.13456848

>>13456728
That wasn't me. Group think is almost always a bad, rotten thing. One uniformed idiot spouts a stupid opinion or idea and the rest parrot it. No thought or actual discussion being done. People hear something and think "others have said the same thing, it has to be true."

Disgusting mob mentality that promotes stagnating ideas and intellect.

Note this is separate from group brainstorming over an idea. Which is usually very beneficial.

>> No.13456893

>>13456728
Groupthink makes groups echo chambers. If we're all just going to do everything the same, we might as well just do it alone.

>> No.13456902

>>13456848
The guy seems to be expressing an unpopular opinion, so how is it group think?

>> No.13456915

>>13456893
I enjoy echo chambers

>> No.13456916

>>13456902
JP being invaded by "crossies" and "normies" seems like a popular sentiment everywhere I look.

And see you see it in action here. This thread has had soundcloud links that aren't necessarily jp related for awhile, but he just waltzes in here, obviously without a clue, telling us what he thinks the thread should do. Because "fucking crossboarders" is such a parroted thing, he automatically assumes this boogeyman must be real. Thereby spouting his uniformed opinions and reducing the quality of threads and this board.

>> No.13456932

>>13456916
You are detracting from the original point by focusing on the terms used.
He's not telling the guy to leave because he's a crossboarder but because the content of his post is not related to /jp/ in anyway.
If a crossie or a normie had posted a vocaloid song, we wouldn't be having this conversation

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>>13456513
"Otaku Culture" may be a broad definition but the content should always aim for that, be it OC or not.
I'm not a music composer, but can't you music people try to make the content somehow suited for /jp/?

>> No.13456945

>>13456932
In an ideal world, we wouldn't be having this conversation at all because original content made by /jp/ users is relevant to the thread.

>> No.13456956

I really love how melodramatic some people on /jp/ are.

>> No.13456961

>>13456945
Sorry but I don't buy that argument, a shitpost made by a /jp/ user is still a shit post, it doesn't become a relevant post just because it was made by a /jp/ user.

>> No.13456974

>>13456956
Autism tends to do that to people.

>> No.13456991

>>13456961
It would if the thread theme was "/jp/'s original shitposts". Whether it'd stay up or not would be up to the mods.

>> No.13457108
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I made this stupid ""draw extra characters from memory" thing.

>> No.13457115

>>13457108
I appreciate your effort and hard work.

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>>13457108
And this koishi with no eye of mind cause I forgot

>> No.13457143

>>13456974
I think its more a lack of conversation topics. after all, its widely known that terms like normie and crossie are used almost exclusively by people that have almost nothing to do with japanese media beyond a surface value and come here just to shitpost, engaging themselves in these last blood fights about absolutely nothing
did you think that they would spent all this time and calories thinking about meaningless stupidity instead than enjoying, or talking about their favorite visual product, or idol, if they had one?
consider this: the post that started all this >>13455712
is mine, and I stated pretty clearly that the "not /jp/ related" argument was being used just to piss the guy off, like anyone that has been here for more than two weeks paying a bit of attention should recognize easily
in short: shitposters and unvolontary shitposters they believe they're right.
the only thing to do is to be thankful you're not one of them.

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>>13457128
and this shitty gif

>> No.13457530

>>13456991
Hopefully they don't get lazy and just delete the shit, not the thread.

>> No.13459588

>>13457108
>>13457128
>>13457186
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=2570621
Cute pixiv dude, work on your eyes, they're a bit jarring. Very 80's style looking.

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very hastily drawn newhus

>> No.13460242

>>13457128
How did you do that background logo?
Would you happen to have it as a vector I could have?

>> No.13460623
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Attempting to draw at least one art piece a day while I have free time. I really want to get better even if I've been telling myself that for years. Study of someone else's art of Tenshi.

>> No.13460871

>>13460623
good
face is too long

>> No.13460920

>>13460871
It was something I definitely noticed only after scanning. I originally thought it'd be too small proportionally.

>> No.13461486

>>13460623
>Study
And what things did you learn?

>> No.13461569

>>13461486
I think reproduction would be better word for it.

>> No.13461801

>>13455931
>oh anon kun I didn't see you there
>could you show me the pleasure of being cummed inside

>(boin) noise his penis is making

>> No.13463588

>>13461569
Lewd

>> No.13465068

Just a reminder that we're currently making another music compilation.

There have been 4 contributors to the project, with 7 pieces to choose from. You can submit your music through dropbox or sent directly to me via email at jpmusicproject1@gmail.com. As before, there is hardly a "minimum requirement" for the tracks, and it can be of any genre.

Take it easy.

>> No.13465219

>>13465068
Wait what the fuck, is this still the same one as the one you spammed last year?

>> No.13465237

>>13465219
Yes. Though I think I missed the last thread.

>> No.13465601

How do I muster enough energy to draw my own doujinshi?

>> No.13465731

>>13465601
Quit fapping. Every time you want to fap, draw another page instead.

>> No.13465748

>>13465601
Gatorade and /fit/ness

>> No.13465758

>>13465068
I'm glad it hasn't closed yet. I'm really slow to start.

>> No.13465781

>>13465731
This sounds painful.

>> No.13465805

>>13465781
A doujinshi is like what? 15, 20 pages usually? Given /jp/ that's like maybe 3-4 days of no-fap tops.

>> No.13465844

>>13465805
drawing 15-20 pages takes a lot longer than that

>> No.13465883

>>13465781
For you.

>> No.13465936

>>13465844
Then you aren't really drawing pages instead of fapping, now are you? Persevere, anon!

>> No.13465988

>>13465758
No worries. Slots aren't exactly being fought over. Though I'll probably call it once we get 2-3 more contributors.

>> No.13466271

>>13465805
Is not about time, but effort. Drawing is not just moving your hand up and down. It requires a lot of time and energy to think the paneling and compositions.

>> No.13466355

>>13466271
Quit thinking and start drawing. Use something simple like a 4koma as your base to start.

>> No.13466831

>>13453157
i am new to this board and what the fuck is that?

>> No.13467134

>>13466831
It's an omen. You should leave at once if you don't know the counter-ritual.

>> No.13467240
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Marisa

>> No.13467304

>>13467240
is best 2hu

>> No.13467675
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Been very busy the last few weeks, but I've been able to implement AI for both existing characters, optimize (slightly) the collision routine and apply two new special attacks to the melee character and 1 new attack (pic) for the ranged character plus revamps for a lot of her other attacks.

>> No.13467692

>>13467240
is my girlfriend

>> No.13468203

>>13465844
Not if you work non stop

>> No.13468374

>>13468203
The average artist could do 3 finished pages per day if they overwork themselves. Not everyone is fast as shit.
>>13467675
I feel like you've posted something about this before, what is it?

>> No.13468378
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I draw Ranma

>> No.13468449
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I can't draw hair decently ;_;.
It's Sanae if nobody identificates her.

>> No.13468455

>>13468374
Eh, is it really that long ago? It's about a game I've posted a few times recently.

>> No.13468656

>>13468449
Learn from this >>13467240

>> No.13468743

>>13468656
I will, thanks for the tip!

>> No.13468761

>>13451266
do you have the full version for that image?

>> No.13469045

>>13468449
Is that a signature? No offence, but it looks like you can't draw anything decently.

>> No.13469125

>>13468449
don't learn from >>13467240
both of you should look up ribbon hair method

>> No.13469211

>>13469045
No offence taken but it's not forbidden to not use them even if I can't draw decently, or is it?

>> No.13469435

>>13467240
I love it.
thanks for drawing

>> No.13470293

Well, I feel like making music again. Anyone know where I can get the new Vocaloid4 with Cyber Diva?

>> No.13470761

>>13470293
Already found it, this should be fun. Maybe I can mock up Ping before the end of the night.

>> No.13470799

>>13453157
good to see that the old fashioned weirdness of /jp/ is still alive and well

>> No.13471356
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Drew my original cat.

>> No.13471562

>>13459588
I am both creeped and impressed by your detective skills

>> No.13471571

>>13460242
I just drew the outline in pixiv on a background layer and then painted the insides with the same color.

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I hardly ever have the motivation to do finished pieces... Doing quick sketches is just so much more fun.

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>> No.13472311

>>13472292
Hooray!

>> No.13472932
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Because she's a hermit

>> No.13473774
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Hey, Jay!
Taking requests.

>>13459651
I really like this. It's amateurish but full of character. I've lost all my personality pursuing the fundamentals and can't get out of this boring pit yet.

>>13460623
Hm... if you intend on improving, copy it tridimensionally (drawing the "building blocks" of anatomy and clothes), else you will just deform the original and learn very little.

>>13453157
Beautiful... when I see PlayDough I can only think of shitty kiddy stuff to make. You went the extra mile with that knife breaking hell loose.

>>13457108
You would greatly benefit from the Liquify tool to deform a lot of weird-looking parts of your drawings. Massive effort, congratulations.

>>13467675
Cool, you still here! Eager for more webms.

>>13468378
Very fluid style, I like it a lot! The proportions are strange, though.

>>13471356
Pretty cool, I'd rework her colorscheme a bit.

>>13472118
How can you draw this qt and not even give her a nice koi lake with a bamboo fountain? Urban life is tiresome and bad for keeping a protectable smile.

>> No.13473956
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any 2hu oc's?

>> No.13473962

>>13472932
i like your drewing

>> No.13473971

>>13473956
/jp/ has threadfuls of them due to ZUN teaches drawing.jpg, could search for it in the archive.

>>13473774
Please draw Count drinking tea in heaven alongside Kasen's dragon and the shoe badger that Marisa exterminated before it could fully transform into a youkai.

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>>13473774
I've been jonesing for something similar to pic related. If you can make it, I'll be very grateful.

>> No.13474089

>>13473971
Excuse me, but what do you mean by Count?
Count Prismriver? Count Remilia Scarlet? Count Vlad Tepes?

Other than that I'm already working on the drawing.

>>13474009
Here you are, my friend:
http://i.4cdn.org/jp/1431425023310.jpg

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>>13474089
Count as in the fortune-telling human-turned-youkai that Reimu offed in Forbidden Scrollery. He's not a vampire, but he gets called Dracula, Nosferatu, Count and the like because of his bitchin' cape and fangs.

This fellow.

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>>13474109
Aaaaaand here it is!

>> No.13474462

>>13474390
I like it
The kotatsu pattern is a really nice touch

>> No.13474539

>>13474390
Perfect. Thank you.

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>>13474390
I had meant the thunder dragon that Kasen kills for no reason (like fuck you, it's a youkai and it's going to do youkai things, you can't kill it for burning houses).

But I'm going to pretend that it trained a lot in its afterlife and became 100% better than Kasen's other, shittier dragon that can't even turn into ball lightning.

Thank you!

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>>13474462
Thanks, dude.
>>13474539
I forgot Koutei's whiskers, plus a few tweaks. I'll call it done now.

>> No.13475082

>>13473962
tanks!

>> No.13477759

>>13474598
She was trying to train it, and it miserably failed.
That's why. So she exterminated it before it would become dangerous.

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>> No.13478693

>>13478602
I don't get it

>> No.13478727

>>13477759

It would be better to say she was testing it.

You don't blame the dog because you failed to train it properly.

>> No.13479860

>>13477759
Oh no, how dare an animal try to act like an animal. Better rip out its liver.

So Yukari should have killed Ran for misbehaving during PCB extra as well? Could feed her liver to Chen, too, while she's at it.

Good going there, Kasen.

>> No.13479873

>>13479860
Yukari abused Ran like hell and back.

>> No.13480995

>>13453501
Sounds boring and played out like every other trap-flavored SC producer.

Also, not /jp/-related in the slightest.

>> No.13481031

>>13455905
>list several other times people have come in here and shit up the thread with their soundclouds.
I've seen two. Phenomics and that "if you're an angel you will die" guy with the long and stupid name.

I've seen the former start OC threads just to post his music, meaning he didn't put it in the second post, but opened the thread with a link to is SC.

The latter I've seen make a thread because he admittedly wasn't familiar enough with OC threads to make one. Then he proceeded to post in OC threads anyway. He also spams on /mu/.

>> No.13481133

>>13481031
The second one also used vocaloids in his music.

>> No.13481165

>>13481031
weird, don't recall seeing either names before
and I thought I was spamming

>>13481133
cant trust them unless they're using utau

>> No.13481198

>>13481165
He's literally trying to copy a Jap singer with his own nerd voice.

Also you are spamming.

>> No.13481684

What thing can make a song otaku culture related, if the song is original and not based upon anything? Is certain style? Genuine question.

>> No.13481754

>>13481684
Those guys just don't like music and want the musicians out of the thread. Don't bother trying to reason with them.

>> No.13481758

>>13481684
Like >>13481754
said, they're just mad as hell and will stay like that regardless of what happens, there's no logic behind this.

>> No.13482087
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13482087

Hey /jp/! It's the guy making that loli kidnapping game here.

I added in cops that get out of their cars and chase you on foot and stuff!

There's even a crime system now so if you rape a little girl or something and someone sees it, cops will start chasing you!

How dare you rape little girls, /jp/! You sick lolicons!

>> No.13482094

>>13482087
Kill yourself already kudasai.

>> No.13482104

>>13482087
Please keep going, is there any release date for the next version?

>> No.13482107

>>13482087
Please go away.

>> No.13482126
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>>13482094

Why would I kill myself before finishing the project? That would be a letdown on anyone here who has been looking forward to it over the years!

>>13482107

Why should I go away? I've been posting in OC threads for almost as long as they've been around.

>>13482104

No, there's not unfortunately. When I get cops/adults and some kind of stealth mechanic in I might release a demo though!

Maybe it will coincide with the next demo day for AGDG which I think will be in 2 months.

>> No.13482154

>>13482126
Will we be able to ram cop cars and smash them?

>> No.13482169
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13482169

>>13482154

I'm not sure. On one hand i was planning on simplifying it so that if a cop gets within X meters of you and you have wanted level he'll hold you at gunpoint which will trigger a dialogue popup. However I'm not sure now. Maybe he'll have to also be on foot?

Also, here's the current state of car collisions...

>> No.13482585

song I made for a 2 hour competition:
http://a.pomf.se/ijrpbu.mp3

>> No.13482768

Oh shit he's back
really the mods don't want to permaban this retard?

>> No.13482910
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13482910

I haven't contributed in a while, so here's a healthy young girl.

>> No.13482925

>>13482768
Permabans are extremely rare and I have no idea why you give a shit anyway.

>> No.13482953

>>13482910
Those boobs don't look healthy.

>> No.13482985

>>13482910
>porn is allowed as long as it's uncensored

>> No.13482988

>>13482953
Yeah, puberty can do cruel things to young girls' bodies.
If you have a daughter and/or loli girlfriend, let's make sure to check her growth every day!

>> No.13482994

>>13482910
>>13466031
Why are these allowed?

>> No.13483000

>>13482994
Because you haven't personally fired up the low orbit report cannon and not enough other people care to report it.

>> No.13483251

>>13482087
Hell yeah, you're back! Don't listen to Tumblr, your screenshots/gifs light up my day in these threads.

Now we just need Jellyfish-san back.

>>13482585
Why a memesong, though?

>> No.13483253 [DELETED] 

>>13482994
>deletes one set of tits
>doesn't delete the other
mmmmooooooddddddssssss

>> No.13483281

>>13474606
The dragon's face while licking the tea killed me.
10/10

>> No.13483293

>>13482169
Can you post the source code? If so, Is it well commented?
>>13482585
Does this site have a rangeban or something? I can't access it half of the time without a proxy.
>>13482910
She looks too young to have implants.

>> No.13483354

>>13482087
>>13467675
Wow two game project updates in one thread! I hope the Maid game, Jellyfish game, The other platformer game with no name and Swimsuit World wold come and give an update too!

>> No.13483426

>>13483354
I wish I could continue my game too. Losing the source code is the worst thing that could happen.

>> No.13483461

>>13482585
Are you also "rap music is the voice of black people"-kun?

>> No.13483465

>>13483426
Are you one of the mentioned?

>>13483354
Swimsuit World is not a game until we've seen some demo footage.

>> No.13483486

>>13483465
I think the maker has already posted a screenshot with text (it's a VN), so I think it's fair to assume that it's underway.

>> No.13483495

>>13482169
Is this a car-based danmaku?

>> No.13483501

>>13483465
No, I'm not. That's why I said "too", so you don't have to worry.

>> No.13483682

>>13483461
heh heh, yeah, it's me.

here's another thing I made recently (it's not finished yet)
http://a.pomf.se/olzhxq.mp3

>> No.13483755

>>13481133
>The second one also used vocaloids in his music.
Doesn't matter. It wouldn't bother me so much if he just learned how these threads worked and properly made one, but no, instead he made a thread dedicated to spamming his shit and then decided to post in one of these too. Clearly he's not from around here and the fact that he spams other boards only makes it worse. I did a quick search of his name and he's taken to spamming his shit on some Japanese textboard even.

>>13481165
>weird, don't recall seeing either names before
>and I thought I was spamming
They probably don't come here that often, but Phenomics used to post in these threads quite a bit. I remember someone even told him to stop posting his stuff in the OP. If You're An Angel doesn't post here frequently but I've seen him three times in the span of only about a month. But I think two of those times was outside of the OC threads so if you only hang out here you might have missed it.

What constitutes /jp/-related will vary between people. But if I see some lame spam shit I'm going to call it out.

>> No.13483763

>>13482126
Woah this is nuts. Though I don't want to be violent to a loli. When will someone make a loli-loving game where you play as the protective oniichan?

>> No.13483781

>>13483763
>When will someone make a loli-loving game where you play as the protective oniichan?

I was gonna make a game like that if I wasn't so lazy. It was gonna be a turn based (in a rogue like sense of turns) horror game where you tried to protect your three younger sisters throughout various horror situations, that would be different from game to game.

>> No.13483843

>>13482087
He's alive!
Have you made a blog yet?
Do you still go to the other chan?
How 2 stalk?

>> No.13484015

>>13483781
That sounds pretty cool. I would play that.

>> No.13484189
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>>13483293
>Can you post the source code?
Yes. There's an out-of-date version along with a Windows binary here: http://pastebin.com/YkCQBS35

>If so, Is it well commented?
Not really. The documentation level varies wildly between areas of the game based on my levels of fucks given at the particular time.

>>13483495

Nah, just faulty traffic light code causing massive pileups.

>>13483763

In the future you'll be able to talk to them and seduce them/befriend them instead of just kidnapping them.

>>13483843

I still go to the other chan on their /agdg/ boards. Thread #150.

I also post on the AGDG threads on /vg/ here and sometimes in these OC threads. I haven't done too much in the past 3-4 months though besides the progress in the last week due to being busy with life.

>> No.13484194
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>>13483354
>Maid game
I'm finishing a small and simple beat 'em up about magical girls this week and then it's back to the maid game. I'll post a link here when it's done.

Next maid demo is June 30th, and it's going to have all the stuff I cut out/couldn't finish for the previous one.

>> No.13484318

Hey guys my 11 year old niece has taken an interest in art, apparently she spends almost all her free time drawing, her birthday is soon and I'd like to get her something useful, I was thinking of one of those how to draw manga books, but I have no idea which are actually decent, any suggestions here?

>> No.13484326

>>13484318
None are decent, not even Jap ones. You'd do more for her by letting her sketch your nude body, but since people tend to have problems with that, you should get some book on perspective or something to get her started on good habits, and maybe get her into some manga with good art so she copies it. Also tell her to sketch people, animals, whatever.

>> No.13484507
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13484507

so i added guitar to another song, but i think i overdid/overthought it this time. sorry if it's more /vr/ related

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6aR0rU9ikCw

>> No.13484520

>>13484507
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6aR0rU9ikCw
Hmm. It might sound better without the harpsichord on the background. It drowns the guitar.

>> No.13484619

>>13484326
Seconding this. You should also spend some time with her looking up pictures of stuff she wants to draw and helping her to practice, make it an ongoing thing if she'll have you. It sounds fun, I'm jealous.

>> No.13484623

>>13484520
yeah i thought about that, but i kept it thinking it would work as an accompaniment or something whenever i branched off the main melody

>> No.13485357

>>13472292
good she's finally ready to eat that fucking tsuchiko

>> No.13485401

>>13483354
>The other platformer game with no name
I'm curious which you mean, any screenshots or remember which thread it was?

>> No.13485591

>>13485401
I think they mean this one. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z0-kleRscCI

>> No.13485626

>>13485591
This looks like the most boring game ever.

>> No.13485765

>>13485626
I think people give it too little credit because of the unpolished art. Given enough sprites, it could be pretty pleasant.

But there are two things that look antiquated game-design-wise in this game:

- Camera is 100% locked on the character all the time, that gives a sensation of infinitely scrolling through the stage. Once there are rooms or floors to access, I bet this sensation will wear off.

- There is little acceleration/deceleration in the movements. It's like jumps and attacks are not very "pressure sensitive" and you don't fully control where you want to attack. Look around 2:13, when he's trying to kill that blue baby thing above the step. Looks like straight from old Rockman or Castlevania games.

If those could be worked on, I bet it'd shine a bit more, just like Maid game and that Versus shooter one, both seeming to have a cool, smooth movement.

>> No.13485910

>>13484507
This is the most disgusting reverb I've heard. Turn it down, or change to another room.

>> No.13486283

>>13485910
it's supposed to be ridiculously high for the style. neck pickup + high reverb, but i didnt have spring reverb available

>> No.13486366

>>13486283
What kind of style is that?

>> No.13486450

>>13484318
anatomy/reference books

give her something like the super pose series (fighting/action volume) if she's really serious
or some random character design books

>> No.13486534

>>13486366
fat, sloppy neoclassical malmsteen style. but now that i look at it, i may have exaggerated the reverb amount. shit.

>> No.13486646

>>13486534
I was confused becase I've never heard neoclassical with so much reverb that I can't hear the notes.
I think this might be a case of you getting desensitized to the sound by listening to it too many times.

>> No.13488512

>>13485765
I happen to like no-accelleration movement in my platformers. It allows the player to do exact positioning at zero time, to their benefit, given the narrow platforms.

>> No.13488600

>>13488512
Well Super Meatboy has precise movement without looking as stiff.

Maybe the dudes making the other games can give a more technical input in why this happens, I just "feel" it as a player.

>> No.13488615

>>13488600
>>13488512
I think cameras/any kind of movement with very high acceleration feels precise without being too stiff.

>> No.13488623

>>13488600
I don't think the loli game looks stiff...

>> No.13488758

draw a touhou as a sumo

>> No.13489090

http://a.pomf.se/vvchfl.mp3

>> No.13489262
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>> No.13489739

>>13489090
Makes me feel like I'm playing Earthworm Jim

>> No.13490357

>>13489262
is he autistic?

>> No.13490387

>>13485591
Sorry guys, I haven't touched this game in months. Real life has kicked in hard and I'm just trying to work to stay alive at this point.

>> No.13492123

>>13486534
It's okay man, getting effects levels and mixing stuff right is literally the hardest thing about making music. The more effort you put into mixing something right the first time, the shittier it will be when you listen to it one week later.

>> No.13493485
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13493485

Why does it take so long between new threads? And why did the pace in these threads become slower?

Drawing included just to keep my post relevant. It's an old one from 2012, but with hopefully better skills, I hope to become active in these threads soon. Wish me luck /jp/!

>> No.13493615

>>13493485
I lost all hope and stopped drawing

what's wrong with slower threads? I like it, there's no pressure of missing something

>> No.13493702

>Why does it take so long between new threads?
Because this isn't /vg/.
>And why did the pace in these threads become slower?
Because this isn't /vg/.

There doesn't need to be a thread constantly up. There aren't many people participating, so it take a while to get new stuff done to show. Give the threads a week or two after they die for people to get motivated and create stuff. Besides that, these threads have pretty much always been mostly arguing and bitching. The slower they go, the longer they last for people to actually make and fill it with creations instead of pointless whining.

>> No.13493823

>>13493485
the thread is slower because it was made too soon and no one drew anything yet, and because the loli sim faggot makes people go away.
you don't believe me? check how much stuff was posted in the threads he was absent

>> No.13493831

>>13493823
Everyone who doesn't like him should go away.

>> No.13493877

>>13493823
loli sim is much more /jp/ related than some of the awful music and art that gets posted in these.

>> No.13494138

>>13485591
This looks very uncomfortable to play

>> No.13494332

>>13493877
Why do you browse these threads if all you do is bitch about everything that gets posted in them

>> No.13497612

>>13455561
So does she travel around seeking out tense people to give massages to or something?

>> No.13497928

A friend of mine made this a couple of years ago.
http://a.pomf.se/jsxrdt.mp3

>> No.13497937

>>13493877
FUCK OFF! alright then, show us something you've made, you bastard. Let's see how good it is. fucking tosser

>> No.13498898
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13498898

how do I cop AI

>> No.13498911

>>13498898
Holy shit, is this the pedo raping game?

It's even more awesome now.

>> No.13498965

>>13498911

The best part is that the cops are actually stil little girls between the ages of 4 and 14 - they just look like cops.

You can technically knock them up if they're over the age of 12 or so and they'll give birth to lolis. Although there's no pregnant animation for them so I think if you did knock them up they'd become invisible until they gave birth.

>> No.13498976

>>13498965
Oh shit, detaining officers and raping them is my fetish.

OI PIGGY PIGGY PIGGY

>> No.13498989

>>13498898
It's like 2D GTA now!

>> No.13499122

>>13498898
For a basic cop AI, I think it would work to have two "modes" for police cars: "chasing" mode, where cops actively pursue the car, and "blocking" mode, where other police cars set up roadblocks to corner your car after the other guys chase you.

If there was a police car controller that would analyze the map and find the optimal places for roadblocks, and send cars there in "blocking" mode, and send the rest in "chasing" mode to actively pursue the car.

As for the cops themselves, it may be best to have them sit in their cars until arrest time, when they all rush out at the same time to apprehend the suspect.

>> No.13499343

>>13498989
>2D GTA

You mean GTA 1, 2, and London.

>> No.13499385 [DELETED] 

>>13494332
>>13497937
look at these buttangry artists and musicians

>> No.13499422
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13499422

>>13499122

What happens to the traffic in the rest of the city then?

I have a feeling it's gonna end up in a mess like >>13482169

>> No.13499588

>>13497928
I think your friend might be gay.

>> No.13499967
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13499967

Would anyone mind if I post my LN here? I just finished it last month and needs a lot of polish. Here's the cover photo by the way.

>> No.13500032

>>13499422
Just have them blow up after they take enough damage. And have no collision if they're not on screen. How's that first jam happen anyway? They don't obey traffic rules yet?

>> No.13500043

>>13499967
Depends if you're just posting it or trying to advertise it.

>> No.13500068

>>13482094
>>13482107
deriding someone for working on an OC project?
back to wherever you came from, thanks.

>> No.13500087

>>13500043

Both. It's free anyway, so it wouldn't hurt to share it.

Here's the dropbox link, in case some one's interested.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/dv3y4wl8yihkvok/Eisen%20Princess%20Volume%201%20(2-page%20view).pdf?dl=0

>> No.13500095

>>13499422
can you post the sprite sheets of you're cars? or just one or two I want to play with them.

>> No.13500098 [DELETED] 

>>13500095

Which cars? Cop? Luxery Sedan? Sportscar? Supercar? Van? Schoolbus?

>> No.13500107
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13500107

>>13500095

Just download it from here: http://pastebin.com/YkCQBS35

Look in resources/img/cars/

>> No.13500119

>>13499422
>What happens to the traffic in the rest of the city then?
I don't know, that's a good point.

I saw the pastebin, but do you have a github or any other project page where we could see the most recent version of your code?

>> No.13500124
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>>13500119

No I don't have any public repos, sorry.

Have a 50% size town overview so you can see how broken my towngen is!

>> No.13500130
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13500130

>>13500107
oh nevermind then. was just wondering if I could do something potentially useful for you're graphics. pic related

>> No.13500137

>>13500124
make a gensoykyo town.

>> No.13500153
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13500153

>>13500130

That's pretty good looking! Much better than I could do. I guess that's what happens when a programmer has to do pixel art though.

>> No.13500154

>>13500124
Seems pretty fine to me.

I feel that buildings should be in the center of the city, and houses should be towards the outside.

>> No.13500164
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>>13500154

Usually the urban (concrete) zones are more clumped together though. Here's a bunch of random repeated town generations.

>> No.13500173
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13500173

>>13500153
I had some good times. I made some pixel art tutorials back in the day and I could find them for you if you want. It's mainly about coloring, it'd be beneficial for even non-pixel artists.

>> No.13500177
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>>13500173
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixels/new_icons.asp?ob=rating

let me see if I can find it

>> No.13500182
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13500182

Here we go. Hopefully someone likes it.

>> No.13500186
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13500186

Have a good day, anonymous.

>> No.13500223

>>13500186
>>13500182
>>13500177
>>13500182
>>13500173
>>13500130

these are amazing!!!!!

I am making a game can can really use some art...

>> No.13500232

>>13500223
If you have anything that's completed feel free to post it and maybe I can fix it up.

If you're actually making a project with kickstarter and stuff I'd be more than down to work for you. Actually I might even just go hit up pixeljoint for some jobs today.

>> No.13500284

>>13500232
if I'm still in the thread, that is.

if you are from Japan and serious I'm definitely interested and serious too though.

>> No.13500287
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13500287

This is all from about ~3 years ago too.


Dont mind the shoes.

>> No.13500289

>>13500284
Why do they need to be from japan?

>> No.13500299
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13500299

>>13500289
japan is where the good stuff is at yo

>> No.13500340

>>13500232

the project is non kick starter but i can defiantly pay you~

>>13500287

OMG!

>> No.13500407

>>13500340
>>13500232
You type like a 13 year old girl on deviantart
Stop that

>> No.13500423

>>13500407

How do you know she's not a 13 year old girl?

>> No.13500427

>>13500423
That thought makes me want to fuck...

>> No.13500457

>>13500299
You do realize that gif is a homage of a western game, right?

>> No.13500497
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13500497

I wish Ojou-sama would laugh haughtily at me...

Also, DUBS

>> No.13500717

>>13500497
tfw i cant draw as good as you
sad feeling

>> No.13500916

>>13500457
not him
can you tell me the game name?
its the one that involves soda that makes people giant mutants right? i remember playing the game a lot way back when and liking it a lot but now i cant remember the name

>> No.13500987

>>13500916
It's called Rampage.
I'm also not sure how I feel about that gif. It's cute but at the same time it's implying fetishization of the game by undesirables.

>> No.13501612

>>13500497
I take the one with glasses

>> No.13501667

>>13500497
i'll take the one with the tongue

>> No.13503555

>>13500497

i always loved your art!

^^

>> No.13504583

>>13500497
I like how the bottom middle girl kinda doesn't fit in at all, style-wise.
Yet she is my favourite of them all.

Got to record some stuff with a friend of mine.
Guitartracks are done by me, bass guitar and vocals by him.
It doesn't really have anything to do with /jp/, yet I still hope some of you will check it out and tell me what they think of it.
Drums are still missing.

https://soundcloud.com/sinsack/sohn-des-hasses-guidetrack

>> No.13504879

>>13504583
Sounds like a generic late 80's metal demo. Not my cup of tea.

>> No.13505410
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NSFW
http://i.imgur.com/9M3hYEx.png

>> No.13505419

>>13505410
Quit drawing shitty old and busted rabbits and get with the times.

>> No.13505639
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13505639

>> No.13505909

>>13505410
Boob to the right seems off.

>>13500987
I'm fetishizing what you wrote and there's nothing you can do about it. What are you doing about it?

>> No.13505915

>>13505639
How does the "cooling down" system works? You hide around a fence and they start losing your track?

>> No.13505933

>>13505410
This is what I needed before going to sleep. Thanks, you're the best.

>> No.13505939
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13505939

>>13505915

It's not in there yet! They'll shoot at you for all of eternity!

Not sure how I'll implement it.

>> No.13505957

>>13505410
I like your porn, it's very sexual, just like you.

>> No.13506028
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>> No.13506128

>>13500497
that's a downgrade ham

>> No.13508162
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13508162

>>13505419
just for you
>>13505909
tried to do those silly motion boobs but i guess it didn't turn out right
>>13505933
>>13505957
thanks. i honestly have no idea what i'm doing, i don't know how to do sexy
>>13506028
i love it, there's a ton of points of interest with breaks for eyes inbetween, it's exciting

>> No.13508410

>>13508162
All your stuff is inherently erotic, but it's not something I would want to fap to. It's kind of like art.

>> No.13509413

>>13506028
Are you the guy that drew those weird indian things?

>> No.13511765

>>13509413
I'm not sure of what you are referring to, so probably not.

>>13508162
I'm glad you found it interesting. I think I messed up with the plants on the left, but that's what sketching is for.

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>>13451266
Rena from higurashi >>

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A reymo i did the other day.

>> No.13512115

>>13511890
>>>
Who are you double quoting?

>> No.13512127

>>13512115
Pressed post to soon, sorry didn't see that

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Newhu

>> No.13518405

So I started writing an LN, maybe I could do a chapter per week and finish it within a year.

Let me know if my writing style is shit and what I can change.

godschildrenbook.tumblr.com/post/119424578607/ch-1

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yookarin that i did a little long ago

poorfag with no tablet, just captured this with camera, adjusted contrast and then did the rest of the color work

>> No.13519721

>>13472118
Them eyes tho!

>> No.13520215

So cute! Do you have a pixiv?

>> No.13520422

>>13506028
Listen, I think you should stop drawing in digital and learn how to paint. you're one of the few people I've seen here in five years that have some actual creativity, so there's chance you can manage to pull out something nice, and address at more people than us anime and games character designer failed wannabes.

>> No.13520483

>>13520422
What does one call a compliment that's supposed to belittle everyone else instead of praising the complimented person?

>>13518424
Get it into Photoshop and use Liquify to correct some stuff, put some emphasis on the silhouette. The hat's top is too rounded, the eyes a bit too far apart.

And add a white speckle of light at every eye, including the BG ones. They will look more lively/realistic.

Unless you were going for a menacing, zombified look.

>> No.13522785

>>13518405
>Studio DEEN

>> No.13523149

>>13508162
>>13511921
skilled

>> No.13523296

>>13451266
This is an imgur link nsfw
http://i.imgur.com/oopCsTL.jpg

Character is from my light novel.

>> No.13523996

>>13523296
I know you probably don't care or you do it only for yourself, but could you try learning to draw?

>> No.13524027

>>13523296
For some reason your cute, almost childlike drawing style makes it so much lewder.

>> No.13524297

>>13523996
I can say that because I've been drawing so infrequently— I haven't really took time to draw constantly.

I appreciate how polite this comment was, I usually give up when I try drawing because I'm unhappy with my art most of the time.

I imagine this will involve drawing from real life—I haven't seen improvements in my anatomy because I never practice or study gesture or other things.

I'll try learning to draw, and take it seriously this time-thank you.

>>13524027
Thank-you.

>> No.13524422

>>13524297
>I'll try learning to draw, and take it seriously this time-thank you.
The first steps are always the hardests. I'll look forward to it.

>> No.13524630

>>13511890
>>13523296
I don't know if you're meme-ing or what, but could you please stop drawing literally the same faces over and over? It's really weird, like you're using the same head as a base for everything. Even if it's just like drawing an angry looking face, try drawing a different eye shape or expression or something.

>> No.13525413

>>13523996
>>13524630
I kinda like that really rough, really amateurish kind of art. It's not good by any means, but it has a kind of personal charm. It's the stuff people doodle but are too embarrassed to show anyone.

>> No.13525523

>>13520422
That's exceptional praise, though I don't particularly agree with it. I hardly feel creative and, although I do want to learn how to paint, I think that simply abandoning what I'm doing now is disguising laziness as work ethic.

>> No.13526025
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Will /jp/ help me practicing? Just request away!

1 - Character Name/Series they're from
2 - Facial expression

I want to draw some faces, since I'm shit on it.
Don't pick you're waifu if you're too sensitive.

>> No.13526036

https://soundcloud.com/attackthemusic/ryunos-jp-il-i-d-ood-mix

Is this /jp/ enough yet?

>> No.13526048

>>13526036
and now you're just trying too hard

>> No.13526066

>>13526025
Suigintou from Rozen Maiden looking haughty.

Warp from Kaiba looking pensive.

>> No.13526288

>>13526025
draw from actual references
it looks like you rushed that drawing, take your time and think more on what you're drawing

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Keep the requests coming! (>>13526025)

>>13526066
Basically, the characters doing what they know best. Here you are.

>>13526288
Rushing is my specialty. But yeah, my intention was copying some references and trying to apply it to the characters, which are stylized.

>> No.13531457 [SPOILER] 
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hi

>> No.13531586

>>13531457
I like it

>> No.13531752

>>13531457
The lower leg in the foreground is way too short, and stop doing that thing with the midsection. It's not correct or good looking.

The left side arm is also too short. It couldn't be straight like that while being so close to the body.

The right side lower arm is missing a portion that should be visible between her leg and the body, assuming her upper arms are the same length. Also there's no way in hell you're getting the arm to go back at first and then be able to go forward enough to grab her leg in front of her. Try it yourself.

It's overall better though, but you should check a couple references and try redrawing it.

>> No.13531908

>>13531457
I can tell you look at a lot of BAN!, just from the way you draw things, but I wouldn't burn the way he does things into your habits too hard if I were you.

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hi again

>>13531908
what's "BAN!"?

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