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General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

Previous thread: >>9655612

>> No.9688481

I've been waiting for this.

>> No.9688498

someday i'll contribute

>> No.9688508

These threads used to be lively with VN ideas and such, it's nothing but touhou fanart now... I can't take it easy like this.

>> No.9688528

>>9688508
Most of those who like vns left /jp/ for /vg/.

>> No.9688546

>>9688508
Do you have any ideas you'd like to share anon

>> No.9688550

>>9688528

I watch the OELVN general, but it's just not the same, being forced to socialize with /v/ scum.

>> No.9688567
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9688567

I was debating whether or not to start a new thread for the past hour and a half. Oh well.

>> No.9688577

>>9688528

/vg/ is also no longer archived by fuuka which sucks... Oh well, any requests?

>> No.9688629

Draw an alluring picture of Yayoi from Deardrops wearing a tight gymnastics uniform.

>> No.9688635
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>>9688577
This girl eating a hamburger.

>> No.9688685

Requesting Len, White Len, and Cirno doing something cool.

>> No.9688803

im currently working on some anatomy at the moment! Whats everyone else working on?

>> No.9688815

http://soundcloud.com/another-average-musician

Three random tracks I made yesterday

>> No.9688816

>>9688803
thats a euphemism for cocks right

>> No.9688835

>>9688803
I was learning how to make a slip knot

>> No.9688892
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9688892

I don't know if you guys remember my draw
But anyway, Just passing to say I've finished it

>> No.9688973
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>>9688635

Sorry dude, I'm kinda uninspired, I'll do a better one later. Who is this character anyway, Homuha with tits and Rika's clothes?

>> No.9688995

http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=The_Longing_Of_Shiina_Ryo

LN a shit

>> No.9689003
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9689003

Oh, I finally have something to contribute! Also I've got a group working on a VN right now. We're tenatively aiming to unveil a playable demo and trailer at New years.

Also, I don't draw. It's not a hobby of mine, I just had a lot of time on my hands at work. I'm aware that it's pretty mediocre. Enjoy it if you can!

>> No.9689035

>>9688973
Thanks, fukken saved.

It's Homuha cosplaying a Bakemonogatari character. I decided to upgrade her breasts a few months ago because I like breasts (sorry). If eating a hamburger is too boring, then try drawing her using Aikido on a bear or kicking NSJ in the nuts. I like stupid things like that.

>> No.9689038
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9689038

Tron Bonne

>> No.9689047

>>9688973
How often do you practice art VN anon? If so what type of stuff do you do?

>> No.9689070

>>9689038
too square man

>> No.9689074
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>> No.9689132

>>9688973
Why don't you make the threads anymore? Y'know, like old times.

>> No.9689190
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>>9689132

I decided to step out because it was obvious that I was forcing meido upon /jp/. Also there is the fact that much of what I liked about these threads have been moved to /vg/.

Sometimes I feel like going "let's give another try" at that failed VN idea (or even some other stupid plot, I have plenty of those), though.

Repostan some stuff I made for /vg/ while we had no active OC thread.

>> No.9689238

>>9689190
What type of VNs are your favorite types? Have a specific genre?

>> No.9689274

>>9689238

If you're asking about what type of game I'd like to make, it's probably a dating sim (with stats building and stuff), if only for the nostalgia feeling since I loved these when I was underage&

There is also my ancient sidescroller VN idea that never got anywhere because I can't code for shit.
http://fuuka.warosu.org/jp/thread/S1820765

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>> No.9689405
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quickie

>> No.9689630

>>9689274
I remember that, if I could program well I'd gladly do it for you. Sadly my only oc ability is drawing. What type of tablet did you have before it broke?

>> No.9689648 [DELETED] 
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9689648

Yo, /jp/ a shit.
Can't even appreciate
A haiku with dicks.


Also I drew this

>> No.9689756

>>9689335

Holy shit, more? Or uncensored?

>> No.9689794

>>9689630

A bamboo. It didn't break though, I just had to lend it to a friend for a few days.

>> No.9689801

>>9689335

Welcome back and uncensored plz

>> No.9689807 [DELETED] 

>>9688892
I wish I could the teaser character's design. She seems so generic for some reason.

You did a nice job with this.

>> No.9689825

>>9688892
I wish I could enjoy the teaser character's design. I feel as though she doesn't fit in at all.

You did a nice job with this.

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9689827

Tried to draw Arche.

>> No.9689853

>>9689794
You seem to prefer paper as a medium over a tablet since you scan very much! Is drawing your hobby or do you get money for it anon?

>> No.9689868

>>9689853

I never bothered to face the learning curve of drawing on a tablet (it seems to me like it's learning to draw all over again), but this is something I'll have to do sooner or later, since I'm always limited by paper size in whatever I do.

I'm flattered that you think I could earn money through my shit, though...

>> No.9689873

>>9689868
The only learning process for tablets are the programs and getting use to the feel of them and the more you use them the better it is. I would buy your art anon and an artbook if you sold it!.

>> No.9689943 [SPOILER] 
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>>9689070

I wont give up!

>> No.9689971
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9689971

I showed my little brother Reimu and Marisa and this was the end result

>> No.9689980

>>9689971

Nice.

>> No.9690170

>>9689405
Will we ever find out where it leads to?

>> No.9690200

>>9689971
The horror.

>> No.9690345
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doin a bit of foreshortening practice

>> No.9690889

>>9689943
Keep going at it anon!

>> No.9691108
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9691108

guess who my favorite 2hu is

>> No.9691118

Did the person who said he was going to draw Okuu (and someone else) ever finish his drawing?

>> No.9691147

>>9691108
>>9691108
I like it.
train at doing mouths though.

>> No.9691166

>>9691108
Komachi

>> No.9691246
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9691246

If someone does requests, can you draw this vocaroo girl saying something that it doesn't seem like a girl like this would say?

>> No.9691261

I just started drawing using my tablet for the first time ever yesterday. I'm using SAI and going to try practicing linework drawing characters I like. Any tips for beginners?

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>>9689756
>>9689801
http://medicalwhiskey.com/?p=6792

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>>9691246
A template so you can write whatever you want.

>>9691261
Aside from the obvious tips of practicing a lot and studying from reference, i feel perhaps the most overlooked thing would be to make sure you're having fun.

This isn't to say you should not find it hard or struggle, but that you should enjoy it, with all the hardships involved. Don't be deterred by failures or feel put down because you're not as good as you want to be.

Just keep drawing, persistence and perseverance are greatly overlooked with everyone wanting to be the best overnight.

Good luck and have fun!

>> No.9691456

>>9691449
Nice.

>> No.9691594

>>9691449
I think I'll have fun if I'm drawing characters I enjoy. Thanks for the encouragement. But are there any tips for beginners with SAI? That's mainly what I was hoping for, as I hear most people in these threads use that.

>> No.9691639

>>9691147
the mouth?
why, does it seem weird? this is the kind of mouth i draw very often.

>> No.9691646

>>9691449
Awesome. Thanks.

>> No.9691653

>>9691639
Not him, but to me it looks a bit odd. It's probably the sharp angle, giving it a sort of slightly derp look, kinda like that one emoticon.

>> No.9691667

>>9691653
hm, does it?
well alright, noted for the future.

>> No.9691685

>>9689335

Awesome, now draw some more pregnant tohous make it not too lewd to it can be posted here preferably Suika or Ran, Chen might be cute too

>> No.9691703

>>9690345
what pen or pencil do you use?

>> No.9691744

>>9691594
Tips for SAI? It depends on what you're looking for, are you asking about technical help for the tool, or something else?

SAI is a fairly lightweight drawing tool, and it's very easy to pick up, and straight forward to use which is why so many people prefer it.

I won't get into which drawing program is best, because I feel like such a thing doesn't exist, but what I will say is, don't learn the program, learn how to draw.

A good artist will be able to pick up any tool and still draw well, be that openCanvas, tegaki or Photoshop.

One thing that I should note is that with SAI, it is incredibly easy to rotate and flip the canvas, both are useful for drawing. For me personally, I felt over time that I began to "abuse" these, in the sense that I done them so often I stopped drawing "normally" and relied so heavily upon rotating and zooming in.

It shouldn't be too big of a problem if you're just starting out so maybe it's not something you need to consider, but when possible try to avoid zooming and rotating, and just draw straight on the canvas.

SAI is ultimately a very intuitive tool to use, and you should have no issues picking it up, as it doesn't have too many "tricks" that you can learn, making it quite straightforward.

I hope that helped a bit, if you were wondering about anything more specific let me know.

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9692481

Am reading a book on landscapes. Does this look like a mountain path?

>> No.9692486

>>9692481
It looks more like a river flowing at the base of a mountain at first glance. But after a bit of looking, it sort of does look like a path. I'd suggest a bit more detail to make that evident though. Like logs, or stones on the path.

>> No.9692530

>>9691703
I use copic multi-liners for line work and a pigma micron05 for regular practice. My pencils are fiber castells or staedtler which ever one is more available to me when i go through them.

>> No.9692564

http://soundcloud.com/ryunocore/saris-demo
Synth Metal, just doujin/2hu enough.

>> No.9692748

>>9692481
You should try making the path irregular, instad of a line, make it a wider or thinner line. This is an effect mountain paths get in real life due to trees not being symmetrical on both sides of the trail.
Whenever you draw landscape try to imagine yourself in the landscape, it will help you notice abotu a lot of little details that are quite important.

>> No.9692786

>>9692748
I've imagined myself in my fantasy world many times, the problem is that the images in my head are not transitioning to paper the way I want them to. I don't know if the problem is lack of practice or technique. They're very fuzzy so I'm not even sure if 1:1 correspondence is even possible.

>> No.9692982

>>9692786
I think I know what you mean.

Most of the environments in my mind start out as a vague impression. I have a "feel" for some of the colors that are present, the lighting, how expansive it is, miscellaneous features that exist somewhere in the space.. but translating that into concrete imagery is difficult. I still remember the first time I felt I had drawn something that would convey the same atmosphere that existed inside my mind. The artistic quality of the drawing left a lot to be desired, but I was still really excited.

Being lazy, I generally just wait for the environments to develop themselves. If I come back and chew on them every few months, things seem to fall into place OK. It also lets me avoid feeling like I am forcing anything... but it is not that helpful if you are actually trying to produce something.

The two things I really struggle with (no matter how long I leave them to stew for) are:
- Defining the overall ... geography of a space. Like where features actually are relative to each other, rather than just how far away they look from x or y angle (because if I leave it up to the latter I tend to run into inconsistencies).
- Details like whether the ground is sand, dust or hard-packed earth. I'll know something like "it is brown and dusty" but won't be able to proceed to any further detail.

tl;dr: I know that feel (I think).

>> No.9693069

>>9692982
I'm reading a book about this called Drawing with the right side of the brain. there's this so called "tyranny of the symbol"- our mind associates every concept we know with generic, simple images, and our hands will draw them instinctively even when we try to draw something else. There are a lot of interesting exercises in that book on how to draw without activating this mental mechanism. I haven't finished it yet but it's really helpful, I had tried to draw that mountain path before and it turned out much worse.

>> No.9693141

>>9692481
Are you the guy of the chinese 2hu rip book?
did you report the thing to pixiv staff, in the end?
sorry if I ask, but that thing really made me curious

>> No.9693196

>>9693141
I'm really sorry, but I don't know what you're talking about

>> No.9693213
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9693213

wht do you think ( saliva fail i know )

>> No.9693231

>>9693196
Oh, sorry for disturbing you then.

>> No.9693381

>>9693213
Her nose seems to be lopsided to her right.

>> No.9693664 [DELETED] 

Hopefully only one more weekend and this will finally be done

youtube.com/watch?v=IbighqQzAc0

>> No.9693710

Do a mangagamer girl one but like boku no pico when on a bike

>> No.9693856
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Requested by anon.

>> No.9694214

>>9675608
Not the owner, I just remember him saying he'd share it with us, and never did it.

http://fuuka.warosu.org/jp/thread/S9042922#p9065974

>> No.9694241

>>9693856
Can you change the lifetime to dick?

>> No.9694329

>>9694214
Oh. Well maybe I could share something instead

>> No.9694689

>>9693213
Thats pretty lewd anon

>> No.9695099

>>9693069
Pick up Fun with a pencil with Loomis or Bert Dodson with Keys to drawing.

>> No.9695584

>>9691108
I like your style anon I will be waiting warmly until finished

>> No.9696104
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>> No.9696637

>>9693856
Why so blurry

>> No.9696667

>>9696104
Do you have a bigger version?

>> No.9696939

>>9696637
laziness, shit's tiring, feel free to perfect it and I'll delete mine.

>> No.9697676

Someone draw me Irisu being rude and lewd

>> No.9697689

>>9697676
Please don't do that.

>> No.9697793
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9697793

Weeks ago some anon posted a small guide on how to color in MS Paint... I tried it this afternoon, but I'm stuck in the second step. It says to use the fill tool to get rid of the original sketch, but there's this fuzzy white outline that I can't get rid of. Please help.

>> No.9697814

>>9697793
Use the pencil tool for the lines instead of the brush.

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>>9697814
Okay... now I have to restart.
Second question: how did he fill in the details? Did he use the pencil tool and painted them pixel by pixel?

>> No.9697848

>>9697834
By details you mean the thinner lines? Easiest way is just to use the eraser.

>> No.9697885

>>9697848
I doubt it. I was thinking maybe he just picked a different color and used the curve tool again, then filled it in. Basically a repeat of step 2. It'd a incredibly slow process though... I guess it all comes down to experimenting.

>> No.9697918

>>9697689
Please do that

>> No.9698205

>>9696104

>Yakumo~sama

YEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS!

life like texture ;_;

>> No.9698652 [DELETED] 

>>9695584
damn, thanks a lot.
i've had problems with dedicating myself to a piece and your post kinda helped me push through this time.
it almost became a habit to sketch up something and never ever go into the polishing stage.

well, i'ts not finished yet, and it's kinda a mess, but it's been a long time since i pushed it this far so thanks!

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>>9695584
damn, thanks a lot.
i've had problems with dedicating myself to a piece and your post kinda helped me push through this time.
it almost became a habit to sketch up something and never ever go into the polishing stage.

well, i'ts not finished yet, and it's kinda a mess, but it's been a long time since i pushed it this far so thanks!

>> No.9698736

>>9698660
It's cute enough to be saved in my Youmu folder if it gets finished.

>> No.9699061

>>9698660
looks great thank you very much!

>> No.9699112

I am wonder does anyone here keep the original OC-tan MS paint image?I want to do a picture and I want to at least get the base outfit right.

>> No.9699198
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9699198

did I try

>> No.9699519

>>9699198
Yes but why is Rumia out in white?

>> No.9699525
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9699525

LN characters are alright, right?

>> No.9699784 [DELETED] 

in for more punishment!

>> No.9699807

>>9699519
uh...um...
she's in purgatory.

>> No.9699894

>>9699525
Of course it's your art and you're sharing

>> No.9700357
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>> No.9700390
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9700390

I finally finished it /jp/
It took forever, so I hope you enjoy
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G9PuiIWCslg

I guess I'll go back to learning how to draw for now

>> No.9700474

>>9700357
Your picture just made me wonder why there isn't a Kasen - Akarin mesh together yet. I apologize for the nonconstructive response, But it's an idea, I'd draw it myself if i could draw worth a shit.

>> No.9700620

>>9700390
I'm glad that you finished your work and that you shared it with us. I like it.
Your determination is an inspiration to me.

>> No.9701507

>>9698660
That's ...pretty good!
>>9700357
You too.

>> No.9701679
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9701679

oh well, i'm at my limit. don't know what to do anymore..
next one's gonna be reisen.

>> No.9701685

>>9700390
what is this

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>>9701679
Good work, man. Got a site?

>> No.9701718

>>9701708
well, i've got a deviantart but my gallery is shit so you better just forget about that.

>> No.9701726

>>9701718
Not him, but please link it. I'd love to be motivated by the amount of improvement you've made.

>> No.9701748

>>9701679
I like it.

>> No.9701753

>>9700357
Wideface Akarin, hnnng.

>> No.9701759

>>9701726
that's sad, because i haven't made any really.
but here you go:
http://motion-blue.deviantart.com/

>> No.9701831
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9701831

Some quick experimenting.

>> No.9703052

>>9701679
Keep drawing anon I will wait warmly for more of your work!

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>>9703979

>> No.9704049

How do I learn to draw good /jp/

>> No.9704096

>>9704049
grab pencil move hand

>> No.9704099

>>9703979
>>9703983
Not a big fan of that face.

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>> No.9704290

>>9703983
You've got a good thing going on with the eyes, and the shading is nice. But her face is all distorted.

>> No.9704426

>>9704290
>You've got a good thing going on with the eyes
Really? Looks to me like NO EFFORT when pretty much everything else is somewhat decent. Tall irises with strong outlines and a smudgy fill, with a little eyelash somewhere. Compare it to the detail in the ice crystals and it just feels plain weird.

I guess it's fine if you like cheap 90's anime.

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>> No.9705215

>>9704190
Why anon thats so cute! Im going to put it up on the refrigerator. You're just the little artist!

>> No.9705382

>>9704049
Like this
*whips out dick

>> No.9706127 [SPOILER] 
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9706127

>>9705209
A miserable little pile of secrets!

>> No.9706220

>>9706127
Is that her clitoris I can see poking out?

>> No.9706227

>>9706220
If you mean the part that's not under the string, then that's her pubic hair. If you mean the part that *is* under the string, then yes, that's her love tomato.

PS. Uploaded a slightly updated version on my Pixiv.

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>> No.9706254

>>9706127
>>9706227
So lewd, yet so good. Pixiv

>> No.9706258

>>9706254
Pixiv link, please.

>> No.9706267

>>9706254
>>9706258
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=30029755

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Happy Cirno Da... !

Oh...

>> No.9706808

>>9704451
Not bad, and the colors are pretty good.
maybe the neck needs a fix
>>9706749
I see great potential in you. keep practicing, slowpoke

>> No.9706834

>>9706749
Her arms bend the wrong way (try v instead of ^), and her left arm isn't connected properly to the elbow either. Hands look great though.

>> No.9706840

>>9706834
>elbow
Derp, meant shoulder

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im a day late but
here's a ren in arcs clothing
im pretty bad at art

>> No.9707342
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9707342

I am having a go at anatomy but I just don't feel like I'm doing a good job. I think the bodies I draw are way too wide.

>> No.9707432

A relative of mine went through a DA phase... she moved away a few weeks ago, and left a very old tablet behind. I don't draw, but I tried it out. Holy shit how do people draw with these things? It's uncontrollable.

Only works if I unplug the mouse from the computer
Cursor only shows up when the pen is hovering half a centimeter over the left side of the tablet.
There's a button on the pen but it doesn't seem to do anything special. It just makes the cursor reappear when it goes poof (which happens often)
Pressing the tip of the pen against the surface of the tablet equals pressing M1. Which makes planning a drawing very difficult.
There doesn't seem to be any pressure sensitivity. Usually in pictures drawn with tablets, you can see that the lines are thinner on one end and fatter on the other. Every point in the lines drawn with this thing is equally thick. I tried it on SAI paint tool and photoshop.

I couldn't even draw a circle. But I can do that just fine on paper. Is this tablet working normally?

>> No.9707448

>>9707432
No, something is very, very wrong. How old is that tablet? You're better off getting a newer cheap model for 60~80 bucks, and it'll still be a thousand times better than that.

>> No.9707464

>>9707432
drivers
install your drivers

>> No.9707470

>>9707342
a tip concerning slender females: proportion is important. REALLY important.
what you're doing wrong is:
-the ribcage needs to be thinner at the top. to help you imagine it draw a triangle (the ribcage) leading to the neck and then try to draw the shoulders wwider than you should. just to get the feeling.

-the butt can be larger. you think that the butt decides what defines slenderness but it actually doesn't. what defines slenderness is the waist and the area above the breast. so you can draw a wider butt. at least wider than what you did.

it's always better to look at anatomy to get the crucial details but if you just mind what i said above it will probably help enough for now.

>>9707432
what brand is it? you're definitely missing drivers

>> No.9707485

>>9707470
It's a "Genius" but I can't find the name of the model. It's from 2003

>> No.9707523

>>9707485
never heared of it. you better find the driver, if not you can abandon all hope.

>> No.9708430

>>9707485
Ditch the genius and pick up a wacom

>> No.9709048
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9709048

>>9706127
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111111

>> No.9709455

Someone draw me Meiko wearing a tiny hat and wearing a hidamari school outfit with the top part of the collar unbuttoned.

>> No.9709468 [SPOILER] 
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9709468

I need to draw digital more.

>> No.9709571

>>9688473
i should've mentioned this before but the OP image this time is pretty hilarious.

>> No.9709580

>>9709468
Im likin it already anon keep it up!

>> No.9709609 [SPOILER] 
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9709609

>>9709580
Also this which I WILL NEVER FINISH BUT SORT OF TOUCHED UP LAST NIGHT.

Tewi loves them cocks.

>> No.9709614

>>9709609
Sorry, I gotta fap to this.

>> No.9709676
File: 117 KB, 1800x720, 1344316203438.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
9709676

>>9697793
Found on archive.
Is this the one?

>> No.9709985
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9709985

still thinking about what i want to do with this.

i want reisens bullets everywhere, the moon at the top and a bunch of defeated touhous in the Background, probably the fairys or other weak youkai.

>> No.9710504

>>9709985
The fairies would make it seem more comical while the Weak Youkai would make it seem like they had it coming. I guess whatever the mood you want to set would be the best.

>> No.9710533

>>9709985
Why not both?

>> No.9710729

>>9707243
The thought is there, so that ups the cuteness factor.

>> No.9710737

>>9710504
comedic would be good. it shouldn't be a really serious picture anyways.

>>9710533
dunno, i just thought i need someone to get hit by her danmaku, so i've been wondering how i'm gonna do it. firing danmaku all alone would look pointless i guess.

dunno who the victims should be. reisen doesn't have any characteristic enemies now, does she.

>> No.9710751

>>9710737
Youmu. It's gotta be Youmu.

>> No.9710783

>>9710751
why youmu?

>> No.9710924
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9710924

>> No.9711161
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9711161

Alright guys, here is my original content story. It's not exactly otaku related, but it's very much related to the internet. I think maybe I could develop multiple scenarios with contemporary usage of teleportation technology and even make a VN or something. Tell me what you think.

http://pastebin.com/1QcKTcRL

>> No.9711269

>>9711161
Get out of here.

>> No.9711637
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9711637

>>9709676
Yes, that's the one. I tried it again today. Pic related it's my version of >>9697834
I didn't do the rest because it was really tiring... this part alone took me about 30 minutes. I don't think it's entirely my fault, I barely used ctrl+z. It's just a very slow, tiring process. Is coloring always this complicated? It's disheartening, to be honest. I know I was using MS Paint but I feel completely lost when using normal brushes and layers. For example, how does one paint that shiny white strip of hair in pictures like >>9710924?

I mean, I could draw a circle 200, 300 or 400 times and eventually learn how to do it out of repetition, because in the end I'm just drawing a line from A to B. But shading a sphere seems to be on a completely different level. Where does one even start with this?

>> No.9711666

>>9711637
All of that comes from working with layers/decent art programs and not shitty MS paint. Seriously, that is the largest handicap you could give yourself, and the time you spent struggling to replicate that drawing could be spent learning to use layers properly.

>> No.9711681
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9711681

>> No.9711702

>>9711666
So how does one learn how to use them properly?
I always copy things to try to find out how they're made, but anything beyond a 3 color palette looks like wizardry to me because I can't even duplicate the most basic effects and tricks.

If you could show me how to color an apple, banana or glass bottle I think I could take it from there.

>> No.9711710
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9711710

slowly progressing..

>> No.9711884

>>9711702
There's a million and one tutorials on the use of layers on the internet. I'm not trying to be rude here, but you really could just google it. No, in fact, I'll do it for you.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hcpLQKpExMA

Ignore the dA-tier quips and such, but from what I watched, that's about as simple as it gets for explaining how layers work.

>> No.9711891

>>9711710
Looking pretty good, anon. Reisen is my favorite Touhou and I love pictures like that, looking forward to the final version.

>> No.9711892

>>9711710
I can't wait to see the final version, that looks amazing!

>> No.9712419

>>9711884
Most of those artists just use two different colors and then use the blur tool. It's disappointing.
I'll keep drawing circles and revisit this subject some other time.

>> No.9712419,1 [INTERNAL] 

AoC if you see this check your e-mail please.

>> No.9712617

>>9712419
That may be so, but isn't that still more than what you're doing...?

>> No.9713016

Right now i'm doing a cover of "Tale as old as time" with Oliver for the Galaco contest that got extended.(I couldn't enter before as they didn't allow Oliver till the extention and I didn't have money to buy him)

The contest is almost over I think (At the end of this month or next month) but all you need to do is get 1000 views on your video with a certain tag locked and you win Galaco a limited edition Vocaloid.

Did any other /jp/spies enter this or at least thinking?

>> No.9713256

>>9713016
I didn't know about it until now but I wont make it very far so i'll just wait to see who wins.

>> No.9713877
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9713877

I am painting panties.....


>my life

>> No.9715190

>>9713877
Make sure you paint that shims pan well

>> No.9715196

>>9713877
be happy, because there are some that want to, but will never be able to paint panties

>> No.9715240 [DELETED] 

I finished my Oliver video!

In the end it wasn't the best (I had touble with transitions and vibrato) but it turned out okay because Oliver has a cute voice!

Please do give it a listen to increase my view count please I will be most grateful ~

http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm18868804

>> No.9715246 [DELETED] 

>>9715240
The quality went down a bunch....

Maybe I should invest in a premium account

>> No.9715323
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9715323

>>9691744
Hey, >>9691594 here. I managed to finish something.

>> No.9715328
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9715328

Here is a drawing I made from a photo I took the other day. It was distressing when I realised that I had drawn the bricks at a slightly wrong perspective.

>> No.9715338

>>9715323
pretty good for a beginner. keep going.

>> No.9715347 [DELETED] 

>>9715328
where da anime gurlsz

>> No.9715417
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9715417

Here is something I was gonna use as the OP post but I was gone until recently and missed my chance so i'll just post it now.

>> No.9715455
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9715455

>>9715323
The ̶F̶o̶r̶c̶e̶ potential is strong with this one.

>> No.9715462

>>9715328
Looks nice

>> No.9715480

>>9715455
Wow, thank you for doing this for me.. I just wish I knew how to draw nice lines like that. I pretty much abused the hell out of the curve tool but that makes the linework look kind of boring I realize.

>> No.9715483

>>9715417
..why are you using such a confusing brush.

>> No.9715498 [DELETED] 
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>> No.9715499
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9715499

>>9715480
I'm using SAI myself. If you want to use the same settings as I did for this, then here they are.

>> No.9715508

>>9715498
Good work... de gocharu?
Recognized her thanks to her hat.

>> No.9715548

>>9715499
I'll try that out. Thanks again.

>> No.9716076 [DELETED] 

>>9715240
Ummm

Since nobody has replied (I have only a few views too) do you think I should make and individual thread for it?

Actually does anybody know any places that might have a large amount of nico users and Vocaloid fans?

>> No.9716083 [DELETED] 

>>9716076
No, just get the fuck out.

It's shit and you even put an XD in the description.

>> No.9716088

>>9711710
You should have Tewi with a huge bump on her head.

>> No.9716153 [DELETED] 

>>9716076
>Since nobody has replied (I have only a few views too)
haha faggot no one likes you're vid

do you think I should make and individual thread for it?
nah fuck off

Actually does anybody know any places that might have a large amount of nico users and Vocaloid fans?
you're mums cunt

>> No.9716161 [DELETED] 

>>9716083
Sorry I just wanted to lighten the atmosphere so I used "XD" to show my emotion.

And I said it wasn't very good since this was my first try but I hope to improve later so thank you for the critique at least.

I do not know where to go now....

>> No.9716174 [DELETED] 

>>9716153
Again I'm sorry for my bad post and video.

I hope you can forgive me in the future.

>> No.9716182 [DELETED] 

>>9716174
Fuck off

>> No.9716187 [DELETED] 

>>9716174
I can tell you're new here, but try not to respond to trolls.

>> No.9716203 [DELETED] 

>>9716187
Ah okay but I'm not really new I just felt I should apologize for attentionwhoring.

I usually like to stay anonymous and not really be judged but I kinda need views for something I'm trying to win so I don't mind the verbal abuse.

I kinda felt bad though because I was working on this for a week but in the end it didn't sound very pleasing especially when nico cut the quality.

>> No.9716219 [DELETED] 

>>9716203
>I kinda need views for something I'm trying to win
So the cat's out of the bag. Go whore views somewhere else.

>> No.9716227 [DELETED] 

>>9716219
But I said that in the other post....

Anyways please stop posting so that others can enjoy the thread.(I will do the same)

>> No.9716238 [DELETED] 

>>9716219
Don't bully, you little shit.

>>9716227
It's ok, dude. At least you contributed something.

>> No.9716265 [DELETED] 

>>9716238
The fuck are you going to do about it, dicklicker? That's right, not a god damn thing

>> No.9716284 [DELETED] 

>>9716265
Nice try, safe, but I wasn't talking to you. Fucking dildoswapper.

>> No.9716286
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9716286

Seems like /jp/ is finally replaced by /b/tard internet toughguys now.

>> No.9716324

>>9716286
I thought the posts were done by the same person.

Also why were the lower posts deleted but not the rest?

>> No.9716336

>>9716324
what rest?

>> No.9716343 [DELETED] 

>>9716284
That's what I thought, not a single fucking thing. Piss off and go wank your miniscule dick onto some Milky Holmes printouts. Maybe if you post pictures of the results your beloved “anti-bully ranger” might finally take notice of your pitiful efforts to garner his affection. Fucking christ if you somehow managed to be any more of a flaming homosexual you would instantly combust in a whirlwind faggotinferno

>> No.9716351

>>9711710
Looks good!

>> No.9716352

>>9716336
The /b/ level posts that came from nowhere above of these couple.

>> No.9716358 [DELETED] 

>>9716343
Meido will just delete our posts, so how about we settle this on warosu like real men, you little bitch. I will be ghosting, let's see if you have the balls to follow me, cuntnugget.

>> No.9716432

>>9716352
looking at the archive, that's quite a few deleted posts. so that's what it means when people talk about "the lost age".
*ba dum tss*

>> No.9716520
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9716520

An old idea for a shirt design, inspired by Love-colored Master Spice

>> No.9716538

>>9716520
I'd wear it.

>> No.9716538,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>9716358
So what, are you waiting for me gaymaster or was this a bluff in the hope that you could run away looking cool and I had no idea what you were talking about? I'm not here to spit words at some neckbearded autist for the amusement of a bunch of banned jewlords, if you can't prove that you're worth my time I am going to continue schooling retards on /jp/ in between fuck sessions with your mom

>> No.9716618

>>9716520
Yes please.

>> No.9716686

>>9716520
No thanks.

>> No.9716686,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>9716538,1

What are you doing here? We're all waiting for you at foolz!

>> No.9717046
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9717046

What was that --> >>9715498
Please upload it again, I want to see it too!

>> No.9717065

>>9717046
just look in the archive

>> No.9717070

>>9717046
http://fuuka.warosu.org/data/jp/img/0096/88/1347478061502.jpg

The archive saves full size images now newfriend.

>> No.9717104

>>9716432
>>9716324
They are done by the same person.

It's the same guy who's spammed these threads for the past months, isn't it obvious just by the typical mass deletion? This has nothing to do with /jp/ overall.

>> No.9717303

Anybody have some good tutorials?

My line confidence sucks, so I want to practice on only making one stroke to make a line. After that, i'd like to work on doing some decent coloring...

>> No.9717312
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9717312

>>9717303

Forgot to post an example of where i'm at...

>> No.9717472 [DELETED] 
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>>9717303
>>9717312
Don't worry about messy lines anon, and forget about "one-stroke lines"; you'll just end up stressing yourself out. Even professionals have messy sketches; the clean lines come after that.

Pic related, sketch is in red and outline is in black (separate layer). My outlines take multiple light strokes.

>> No.9717475

>>9717312
Oh hey I remember you! How is the practice going?

>> No.9717617

>>9717472
can you lower the opacity of the guidelines below next time, it only messed up that drawing

>> No.9717711

>>9716520

lol

more like this

>> No.9717839
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9717839

Vocaloid anon again.

I actually decided to delete the old video and do a new version since there were too many quality issues before.(I'll delete the old post in a second)

In this version of the video I tagged better and added subtitles (I made a mistake though) with cute Oliver clip art.

Please share your opinion even if it's bad so I will learn what to improve on.

Thank you for your time~

>> No.9717846
File: 364 KB, 900x900, Oliver.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
9717846

>>9717839
How could I forget the link...?

http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm18871186

>> No.9717866
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9717866

>>9717475

I've been neglecting drawing lately, but i've been starting up again.

I'm just having trouble finding a style I want to stick with.

(old pic)

>> No.9717880

>>9717866
Learn from influences and keep practicing and eventually it will mold.

>> No.9717995

>>9717866
if you have a problem "finding" something try this: stick with you asthetics. you're never going to find a style, you are only getting skilled enough to stick with your asthetics.

that's what i found out at least.

by te way, I've been sorting out my reference and collections folders since yesterday. i found a bunch (quite a lot) of old tutorial strips that i collected in my beginning years. most of them i've outgrown now. i think i'll dump them into an /ic/ thread as i'm sorting out. maybe you guys can find something useful.

>> No.9718953

>>9717839
The quality wasn't the problem, it still sounds absolutely absymal.

>> No.9719035
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9719035

>>9715455
How am I doing so far Sensei? It took me about an hour to do just this much, but at first I was trying too hard to draw the lines exactly like you were. I am in love with these settings though.

>> No.9719205

>>9691639
looks fine to me, good even

>> No.9719448

>>9718953
I know I tried to make it sound more natural but it ended up scratchy as hell....

Did you enjoy the pictures at least?Were they cute?

>> No.9719475

>>9717995
link to the thread?

>> No.9719486

>>9715328
oh i hate when something it's "ok" but quite not right and having to erase or throw it.

>> No.9719625
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9719625

>>9719035
Not so fa(s)t! Even the slightest changes to the outline of the face can make a huge difference.

>> No.9719649 [SPOILER] 
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9719649

Hi /jp/, after seeing the figure I drew some pics of Heart Hunter Miku.

>> No.9719652 [SPOILER]  [DELETED] 
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9719652

and another!

>> No.9719658 [SPOILER]  [DELETED] 
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9719658

aaaand another

>> No.9719661 [SPOILER] 
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9719661

Last one!

>> No.9719676

>>9719661
>>9719658
>>9719652
>>9719649
Disgusting
Go back to drawing Simpsons porn

>> No.9719679

>>9719649
I think you should reconsider the positioning of the eyes and the distance between them to make your faces look less derpy.

>> No.9719735

>>9719649
>>9719652
>>9719661
>>9719658

It looks really cute, despite not being super quality.

>> No.9719738

>>9719661
>>9719658
>>9719652
>>9719649
GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT!

Reported do you not understand that this is a blue board and that Miku is pure!?

>> No.9719746

>>9719738
Calm down, honey.

>> No.9719744

These threads always make me depressed, I've been practicing for months and try and produce drawings every day spending all of my nights, but it looks so shit compared to the good artists in this thread.

Yes, I'm reading loomis and some other anatomy books and I do figure drawing every day but it just fucking sucks. I always thought 'some people are just talented' was bullshit but there must be a segment of truth in that.

>> No.9719753
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9719753

>>9719649
>>9719679
Something along these lines.

>> No.9719764

>>9719744
you need to have some talent that's pretty obvious, being a talented person at drawing myself i notice that people without it are really limited and they all commits pretty much the same errosr and it's pretty dificult to them to fix.
But you can become a decent artist also being perseverant is a good thing, that's something really hard to get for the talented.

>> No.9719768

>>9719753
JADF?

>> No.9719776

>>9719768
Who knows?

>> No.9719783

>>9719776
Just guessing. It's an attractive redline, I'd like to see the artist's work.

>> No.9719799
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9719799

Anatomy is hard.
I've been reading Loomis' Figure Drawing for All its Worth, but I've been dead stuck on drawing just the skeleton.
The part that confuses the living daylights out of me is the pelvis. I can barely draw it in frontal view; you can just imagine how it fucks me over at any other angle. Especially that bone that sticks out from the discs, bends at some weird as hell angle, etc.
I've been practicing every day, but I seem to be making the same mistakes and I don't know how to fix them.
Sorry if this is really basic and/or obvious, but I need help. ;_;

>> No.9719800

>>9719744
Of course there is a segment of truth in it. It just doesn't mean much against practise. Some grasp the necessary skills in a short amount of time and some take way longer.
You should try to do some different things if you don't seem to make any progress, for example some exercises from drawing on the right side of the brain (keep in mind that this book is infamous for it's pseudoscience, but the exercises are good for beginners). Also try to render things in simple 3d shapes when drawing them. I think that to many people all that "learn figure drawing/anatomy" comes way to soon. Reading about design and composition also helps. Also, drawing is not one skill, it is a combination of many skills that makes someone a good artist.
I hope that my advice will be helpfull to you and that my sentences makes sense, since I'm very tired right now and to lazy to reread every sentence.

>> No.9719811

>>9719475
sorry, only started it now. will update very slowly though. going from folder through folder..

>> No.9719832

>>9719799
that's not the pelvis bone, it is a placeholder to make it easier. You can look on other figure drawing books to see how other artist do it. Michael Hampton - Figure Drawing - Design and Invention seems to be good. Also your torso looks weird to, the hallow part is supposed to be the simple ripcage while the breast on it is, well, the breastmuscle. Look at some pictures of skeletons, the ripcage is way rounder, almost like an eggshape.

>> No.9719838

>>9719799
Practice drawing simpler geometrical shapes precisely and correctly, in different angels and perspectives.
And a lots and lots of symmetry practice (again, that too in perspective and three dimensional forms!).

>> No.9719870

>>9719799

listen to this >>9719838
you need to go to the very beginning of things. try this: try to draw a person made out of cardboard boxes (cubic shapes). and then try to draw it from various angles. just do it for fun.

>> No.9719873

>>9719832
>>9719838
>>9719870
Okay, thanks a lot. I'll try doing that instead.

>> No.9719883

>>9719768
It's obviously him.

>> No.9719897

>>9719838
To further add to this, I like symmetry practice in all of its forms because you can't excuse the mistakes and they are easily visible even to the newest of beginners with pinpoint accuracy.

>> No.9719926

Some retard reported the OC as NSFW, apparently. Please bear with it.

>> No.9720332

>>9719649
>>9719661
Can you re post the two that got deleted? I didn't have a chance to save them.

>> No.9720344

>>9720332
Go check the archive.

Strange that it was deleted though, I always assumed there was some kind of immunity to R-18 when contributing OC.

>> No.9720402

>>9720344
Well I saw the pics that were deleted and they're not good.
I cant blame the janitor for deleting them. The solo one was good though.

>> No.9720478

>>9720344
There's no exception. NFSW is NSFW and can't be on a blue board.

>> No.9720487

>>9720478
Maybe, but lots of artists post their NSFW here all the time, and I mean that literally. They're regulars, even.

>>9689943
>>9706127

>> No.9720862

>>9720487
Janitors probably only delete what is reported, since they don't browse this board. Probably.

>> No.9720872

>>9719799
http://www.mediafire.com/?paqy6vsbdq3tv8o


He also has actual videos on how he shows his method of approach. He's good for beginners and professionals alike. It takes one google search to find his videos, but it takes patience to actually want to learn through his videos.

>> No.9720995
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>> No.9721004

>>9720995
Me on the left

>> No.9721066

>>9720995
Itty Bitty Keine and the Immortal Smoke

>> No.9721882

>>9719475
>>>/ic/1253179

>> No.9721994
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9721994

>>9691403

>> No.9722025

>>9721882

Thanks for dumping those!

>> No.9722034

>>9721994
nice coloring there! the mitif still bothers me though

>> No.9722104
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9722104

here's some GitS inspired lineart...

>> No.9722207

>>9722104
Looks like she's sitting on an invisible bench.

>> No.9722278

>>9722025
no problem. it's still running though, and will for a few days i think. i don't want to dump everything at once because nobody will look through that amount in a day.

>> No.9722723
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9722723

swimsuits are my fetish, I have a couple of sketches made

>> No.9723196

>>9722723
Very nice! You have my continued approval.

>> No.9723244

>>9722723
You sir are a scholar and a gentleman and I would be interested in subscribing to your newsletter.

>> No.9723307

>>9722723
But, those are gymnastics outfits...

>> No.9723313

>>9722723
Leotards and one-piece swimsuits. I think we'll get along.
I really like the shading and anatomy seems fine to me. Only thing that feels weird is the left eye for the upper right one. Oh, and hair should drape a bit over the shoulder with that kind of head twist, I think. Just nitpicking, but wanted to do more than praise. It's very nice work, please keep practicing and improving further.

>> No.9723570
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>> No.9723582

>>9720995
Very cute.

>> No.9723593
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>> No.9723595

>>9723593
>>9723570
How do you get such clean lines

>> No.9723599
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>>9723595

>> No.9723736
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9723736

Line.

>> No.9723743
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9723743

>>9723736
Colored. Still working on it though. Backburnered to work on a birthday gift for a friend.

>> No.9723777

>>9723743
Her scarf thingy could have less monotonous line width for better look. it looks too much like a poor vector image there.

>> No.9724060

>>9723743
Fuck yeah, scarves and translucent visors.

>> No.9724414

>>9723743
hello there nono

>> No.9724858

need a little bit of help here /jp/. what does "こわっ!!" mean?

>> No.9724891

>>9724858
The pleasure of being cummed inside.

It's a literal translation though.

>> No.9724894

>>9724858

Without the context I can only guess someone tried to say kowai (scary) but got interrupted.

>> No.9724976

>>9724894
>kowai
oh, alright. this makes sense. thanks.

>> No.9724980

>>9724976

No prob, but why did you post this in the OC thread? It's still better than making a thread just to ask, but still...

>> No.9725025

>>9724980
well, it's kinda related. this is the first comment on my newly made pixiv account. and the picture was posted here once, in the last thread.

>> No.9725032

>>9725025
Link?

>> No.9725072

nah, ..i don't want to post it since i've already posted my deviantart. and it's a pretty empty account anyway.

>> No.9725275

This is not a translation thread.

>> No.9725648

someone please start the next thread I would like to post OC.

>> No.9726179

>>9725648
What's wrong with this one?

>> No.9726486
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9726486

>>9723313
thx, I'm just getting the hang of this yet so this my current progress so far

it wasn't easy at first trial, but I'll buy some more time to be comfortable with this

>> No.9728303
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9728303

>>9719625

Something is bothering me about her crotch, but I'm not quite sure what.

>> No.9728344

>>9728303
maybe it's how far apart the legs are from each other, or what looks like a double ass crack.

>> No.9728415
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9728415

>>9728303

Not the guy you're expecting a red line from, but when I see your pic I think that the little cameltoe shouldn't be visible with the leg like that. I might be wrong though.

Red represents the geometry of the torso and pink the legs.

>> No.9728417

>>9728303
Yeah, try to imagine her ass. its definitely too wide. also her tights are a single thing with the hips, and its not correct. eh, that's a kinda tricky pose I guess.

>> No.9728420
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>> No.9728536
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9728536

>>9728303
How I would have done it, roughly.

>> No.9729034

>>9715417

NOW THAT's WHAT I CALL OP 88

you better do 89s like that

>> No.9729037

>>9717312

Moar, do Yukari next please

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