/jp/ - Otaku Culture

Downloading now. I am giddy with anticipation.

What a shit setting

>>8963989
Get ready to relish some nasty shit

OELVNs go to >>>/vg/

>>8964006
it's better than the tryhard settings in other VNs. I personally like that OP just doesn't give a fuck.

>>8964012
But it's a /jp/ project...

>>8964006
This has convinced me to read it.

Why did you name it this?
Is that you Rita?
I can get on MSN right now if you want.

>>8964032

>Okay, here's something: if you respond with a title, I'll make it the official title for the VN. First one to respond with a title wwins.
>>8932492

Oh boy.

>>8964050
Original character do not steal

>>8964006

>Human decimate

what there are millions of people who don't use computers and millions more that don't use it often even in 2022.

This is some fucking brilliant shit, OP, I'm not gonna lie.

"i just wanted to fap to 2hu..."

Haha, i find this hilarious so far.

>>8964050
dat quality art

>>8964087
downloading now

>>8964006
Sounds like a super-/jp/ setting. I mean, no phones nearby, wired-router because why would I have wireless, everyone is safe. Using a wireless monitor? Should have spent that money on figs, nerd.

>>8964012
He wrote it in then translated it to English, duh.
>and I'm not even a native english speaker.
See?


Non-decimated master race.

>>8964070
You're underestimating how many people a single piece of debris can kill and how far can it travel.
You laugh now, but most of us will be dead by 2022.
I will go down as the new Nostradamus.

Haha, nice, made me laugh. In a good way.
Good job OP

>>8964087
Post a real sjis version of that art plskthx

>>8964158
Are you sure you have enough bandwith?

And then Piv was a wooden door
It's nice for a rushed short project so far. I find myself chuckling at the deliberate low quality in some bits. Plot and setting is more excuse than anything, but I'm enjoying it, if only for the idea of 2hu ANSI art being a precious commodity.
Since it doesn't take itself seriously, it's easy to lower your guard and just start laughing and enjoying it for what it is.

Good job, you're a great person.

>>8964168
>Good job, you're a great person.

w-w-w-why thank you!!!

I'm very glad you liked it

this project was a great success as it has entertained me thoroughly

congrats man xD

Imagine punching somebody so hard that they turned into a door. Then you found out that's where ALL doors come from, and you got initiated into a murder club that makes doors. The stronger you punch, the better the door. So there are like super strong murderers who punch people into Venetian doors and shit

>>8964218

>>8963975

:D

What the fuck, man.

>>8964218
this game is fucking god tier

Hah, I laughed so hard at this part.

this is really good. congrats man xD

Just finished it. You should make a sequel, it was that good.

ｷﾀ━━━━━━━━(ﾟ∀ﾟ)━━━━━━━━━ｯ

Downloading, cant wait to play it.

I hope is fun.

Nice
Epic
I like it

What is with this fight escene?
it's like i'm reading Uminekos.

that's some pretty fucking realistic bark.

shit, this is great OP.
It's impressive how you combined all the half-assed suggestions from the last thread to make this lulzy world of ASCII porn and door punchers.

And maybe I'm a fag but I thought the music choices were quite good, particularly that bit about watching minovsky particles dancing in the setting sun paired with the music then. It might be a random line you put in to parody dystopian settings but it stuck with me anyway.

>>8964324
>>8964321
>>8964311
>>8964300

Stop samefagging, OP.

This will be perpetuated with the true ancient /jp/ art, nicely done OP.

awesome sfx and soundtrack 9/10 would bang op who is sexy and hot

>>8964333
I like it, it's very good

>You will never be a medieval girl raped by an angel.

I'm reminded of Tsukihime for some reason. Particularly the walking home scenes and doorpuncher's appearance.
Anyway quality job OP, I was very entertained and would pay an MB for a sequel

>>8964355
the smacking sfx during this scene and Hori's position made me think the big guy smacked her ass

OP probably did it on purpose, awesome bastard he is.

Fuck I got the bad end but I dont care, this shit is funny as fuck. Congrats OP

STICKY THIS THREAD MODS

>>8964438
You really think we need a sticky for this? Like, no irony intended. Serious question.

You should totally make a sequel OP, this shit is gold.

You have cute art.
Your characters are cute.
I like Hori and Barry.
Nice VN.
It's like you're really Nasu.

The fight scene was really Tsukhihimeish. That was amusing.

But I'm kind of tired of super-short gag VNs, no offense. It's just that it's the only thing people are capable of doing, it seems.

11/10 another bioware epic story!!

I think I'm in love with Hori.
Can't wait for the sequel!!

>>8964474
You find an artist, and someone to do some music, and I'll write you whatever you like.

If you send me ten bux.

>>8964474
Well considering an actual VN would take an immense amount of work and dedication and a team of people, it's reasonable.

Do we really need another deep dark edgy yume nikki clone?

Thanks OP I cum so hard penis detached from body like jizz rocket and left for an intergalactic journey

thx OP i cut my dick throw it like cum grenade 10/10

>>8964324
>lulzy

Whata fuck man

I enjoyed it. Good job OP. Now, draw some porn of Hori.

I'm waiting warmly for a sequel.

10/10 would play again

There wasn't any girl named Rita and nobody responded. Fuck this VN.

Seeing this project finished has given me the inspiration needed to make my own VN.

>>8964573
>>8964576
>>8964588
>>8964656

Pleaase stop OP. We get it.

>>8964707
I believe you've mistaken me for someone else. I'm not OP, but I did want to express my approval of his game.

Pleasantly surprised. It was a good 30 minutes. The spelling errors really added to the ambience of the game.

>>8964474
Op did say in the previous thread that he just wanted to get the hang of the program and making a VN in general.

i must applaud your effort put into the completion of this mediocre story

>>8964720
30 minutes? Don't you mean 15?

It was a shit, a big one, but there are several things that nag at me.
1. Wouldn't Minovsky particles prevent them from being able to use the internet at all?
2. Why would you take 6kb for a 1.44mb floppy? I know you can just copy floppies but it seems like a waste of bandwidth or a waste of space.
3. How can Hori take off anything when she gets home if her clothes were torn apart by the punches? The bad end end states all she had left was her collar and some tatters.
4. Does Barry have a dick?

>>8964707
you're trying too hard.

that was great. although, It leaves me to wonder why all eroge protagonists aren't extremely horny little girls with dicks

OP, what you have created maybe shit even in your own words, but you have actually completed your project where many others have just died or sit stillborn in our memories.

I must congratulate you solely for that at least.

Well, I was entertained, at least. Thanks, OP.

Filing this pic away for future use.

>>8965219
You know, it did have a good feel. There was some yurishness that didn't feel boring because you knew her hard dick was pressing up against barry's leg while she was hugging her, and the /ss/ implications were still good too.

Well, it was shit - even for the low expectations I had. Stop forcing memes into everything.

I really liked Piv. He dresses cool.

I want a "Real Bitch Nigga" shirt.

;_;

Great job, OP. Total classic.

Cool shit OP

>>8964050
Hori really is cute to be drawn so badl...
Wait, is that a belt on her head?

It was horrid shit.
I loved every minute of it.

I suggest doing another one the same way.
hopefully I won't like it

I don't want to read the thread and spoil any of this, but I'll play tomorrow and leave opinions.

Thank you for coming through OP you are god.

The line about Hori's skirt just dropping to the floor so she could focus on her rock hard dick also got me rock hard, allowing me to really feel the emotional depth of the main character as she tries to grieve over her deceased friend but must first satisfy her primordial urges.

Plenty of belts, not enough zippers. Fix that shit OP.

So, what's the different between a little girl with a penis and a really pretty little boy?

KUSOGE OF THE YEAR!
Make a sequel!

>>8965601
If it's a girl it isn't gay.

This is fucking hilarious so far. Good job on actually completing something.

4chan: Making it much harder to stop myself laughing at things like this.

This was great. I wish I had the know-how to make something like this.

Thanks OP.

>>8965601
The girl has a vagina that you can put your penis into.

Well I did it, peanut butter master race.

2 sets of glasses. That's how you know she's a true pro.

This shit is much better than Katawa Shoujo.

Oh god, I haven't laughed this hard in a while. Thank you OP, you are an amazing human being.

Glorious. I hope there will be a continuation.

>All these responses
I'm stuck in an endless doushio loop.

Hehehe, I'm so glad you guys are liking it!

posted on /jp/ fitocracy

You should practice some art, put about three times the effort in it and add some ero scenes and you'd have a great VN.

>>8964573
>Now, draw some porn of Hori.
I can't... she's like a daughter to me....

>>8965026
>Wouldn't Minovsky particles prevent them from being able to use the internet at all?
The government has developed a special fiber that can envelop electronic circuitry preventing magnetic field disruption by inducing diffraction into a partly deionized pure semiconductors with a reverse wave function. People like Barry have reverse engineered it making a black market version that can be placed on old hardware found in dumpsters making it work again.
>Why would you take 6kb for a 1.44mb floppy? I know you can just copy floppies but it seems like a waste of bandwidth or a waste of space.
That's the bandwith price. There's more content in the floppy.
>How can Hori take off anything when she gets home if her clothes were torn apart by the punches? The bad end end states all she had left was her collar and some tatters.
Well... that's... there were some tatters left from the skirt... maybe that's what she meant by skirt. But maybe the fight with the door puncher was taking place in the meta world and she conserved the skirt in reallity, because it was all from her point of view and she is piece hori not real hori, and maybe hori was acttually barry. I never said this was going to be a classic mystery. I wouldn't trust anything that is not said in red.
>Does Barry have a dick?
Hehehehe...

Thanks for the laughs man.

Hey op, leave a contact somewhere
my dl will be 20 minutes long...

This made me long for a tsukihime remake/sequel, fucking Nasu what is taking them now when they are rolling in money.

http://archive.foolz.us/jp/thread/8662196

Time to clean up. My poor laptop has been raped by this project. I have shit everywhere.

>>8966072
>Hey op, leave a contact somewhere
Check out my email!

>>8966172
i first read that as witchfutanari.

First /jp/ project by a Spaniard I've read, way too much not /jp/ meme and the word "fuck" doesn't make things cooler or better.

Shameless bump in case someone missed it yesterday.
The number of downloads make me extremely happy, whether you liked it or not.

By the way, I'm reading the /jp/ manor VN (missed it back then). It's really good, it's a shame the author dropped it. I want to read more! It has lot of potential.
Onscripter seems hard to use.

I wish /jp/ made more VNs. I'm open to any collaboration if anyone wants to get paired with a useless faggot like me.
I was going to submit something to the next issue of that VN magazine (I wrote something but it wasn't ready by the first deadline), a pity it died too.

I had lots of fun making this anyway. I will make something else for sure, I don't know if it'll be "Rita Please Respond 2: 2Rita 2Respond" though.

Pic not entirely related

>>8966885
>The number of downloads
How many?

>>8966904
near 300

That was nice and fresh. I like the short format.

Don't get the wrong idea, OP. It's not that I liked it, it's just that it beats refreshing 4chan for 20 minutes.

Glorious OP; absolutely glorious. I haven't had a serious, hard laugh for what feels like months, but this had me rolling the whole time. Five stars, fast shipping, would buy again.

how did you make those fight scenes so brutal?
that dirt scene with piv was amazing.

VIRUS DON'T DOWNLOAD!!

>>8967808
XD

>>8967808
Give it up, everyone knows you're not Derek.

>>8967683
>that dirt scene with piv was amazing.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PTAXUYLbFYk

>>8966885
"Rita Please Respond II: Hori Rises"

Please make a sequel.

uh just a little typo

>>8967933
I get the feeling I've seen that before in some pasta or something, but I'm not sure what so I didn't mention it.

>>8967941
then again, I think there are many others anyway, so a proofreading would do it good
I like it OP nice jobu

There's two.

"strenght"
"rip"

another one that struck me

>>8964230
>>8966140
>>8966989
>shitty /b/ tier memes
>Glorious

Please leave.

I was looking forward to this VN before release, but somehow reading this circlewanking thread made me lose all interest in it.
Sorry, OP, I know you worked hard on it. I'll save the link in case my interest revives.

>>8967982
You seem to miss the fact that they're joking.

>>8967989
It all seems to be in the vein of so bad it's good so I love it and let's joke around about it because it is that awesome.

>>8967982
You're trying too hard, dude. Take it easy.

>>8968003
>>>/a/
>>>/b/
>>>/v/
>>>/soc/

>>8967989
I liked it before it got popular as well

>>8968018
You're embarrassing yourself.

>>8968025
Your new is showing.

>>8968042
Are you sure you're on the right board?

>>8968042
I don't see how anything I said showed my "new."

Oh come on guys, take it easy.

I have something new in mind at the moment. I think it's a project /jp/ will like a lot. Hehehe...

I'm (actually) glad I came to /jp/ today.

wwww... pretty funny i thought even though im anti lewdness this had some funny jokes in it and the lewd pictures werent so bad but less swearing would be nice!!! the art is kawaii
and the music is good
setting is good
please put a reference to your favorite tripfriends in it too? maybe?? :)

im looking forwards to it im a big fan now please keep the lewdness LOWer though but i mean its not lewd if she has a problem i guess?? i dunno ... its a tough one but i liked it

i felt so sad when piv died too... i got the good end on my first try

>>8968198
Fucking spoilers asshole.

>>8968186
>>8968198
Stop deleting my friends images RETARnitor

>>8968186
>>8968198
DURRRR XDDDD IMMA JANITOR SO COOL DELETING POSTARS IMAGES XDDDDDDDD

Why is NSJ such a bully? He killed sparky, now he's picking on dontf**kwithmyfriends-chan!

This cannot stand! I'm going to go raise hell on IRC and email moot.

I was going to read it until I saw "2hu". Please release a version in English and I will reconsider. Thank you.

>>8968247
onegai..
http://www.change.org/petitions/moot-and-4chan-get-rid-of-nsj

>minovksy particles
>future slums

I BET THE TURN A DID THIS

fuck

My review:

GUI = Shit. It hurts my eyes. (1/10 point)

Music = Poor, and it made me clinch my theet (ear raping sound). Also I suspect that music was not made by you. Do you have autorization to use it? (2/10 points)

Art = AWFULL! You don't have to draw like a pro, you know... R07 or ZUN can't draw perfect. But even they do a lot better than you OP! (1/10)

Story = It just makes me sick. A drag queen in a world with no wifi connection with the smell of dried semen, yeah that's fucking interesting and... ewwww! And a gobernment man that can turn people into doors by punching them. All that just for a floppy with an ANSCII flan showing her panties. (2/10)

Total Score = 1,5 / 10

Man, you tried, but you didn't put enough effort on it. I admit you have imagination, so USE IT!

>>8968271
well i giv it 11/10 so fuk u

I signed the petition, dontf**kwithmyfriends-chan!! ganbare!!!!!

>>8968272

tfw waiting for rita please respond to respond

>>8968277
thank you
we have to team together and make a stand against buliies

>>8968284
wheres ur petiton

>>8968272
Lol

>>8968290
http://www.change.org/petitions/moot-and-4chan-get-rid-of-nsj

Serious question, why the hell is Milky Holmes the best anime of the decade?

Here's my review:

Art: Utter garbage 1.5/10
Characters: Terrible 1/10
Story: Completely unintelligible 1/10
Setting: Exploding wifi devices, really? 1/10
Writing: Shit-tier 1/10
Ero: Would not fap 1/10
Music: Bad 2/10
System: Buggy garbage 1/10

Total: 9.5/10. Well done, OP.

>>8968302
>IGN review score logic.

>>8968284
thx im fiting for freedom 2

>>8968307
What, we can't talk about Milky Holmes? We have to talk about OP's shitty game? Really, NSJ?

>>8968318
will u help me fite for freedom

if anyone want to help fite for freedom let me kno please

Why is NSJ such a bully?

Wow, thanks, that made me smile in this shitty time.

>>8968333

don'tf**kwithmyfriends-chan, sparky, all you poor innocent shitposters, will you stand up in the fight against NSJ? Would you all be willing to testify against his crimes?

>>8968341
yes i woud

>>8968284
Why did the janitor leave this post? Is he trying to tell us something?

>>8968311

Who are you quoting?

Keep using dickgirls in your projects OP. No reason to use inferior genders like male or female.

Futa. Girls with big floppy dicks. Perfection.

>>8968382
hes saying we shoud fite for freedom

Doushio?

>>8968392
peanut peanut

>>8968392
Here, I'll write you a walkthrough.
http://pastebin.com/ZXeVVZ9Y

>>8968416
you think i'll fall for that?

How the fuck is this 60MB?

>>8968431
I bet around 40MB of it is the python distribution, and around 15MB is the ren'py package. So yeah, OPs fault for using a bloated engine.

Rita Please Respond Review

Easily one of the funniest things I've ever read.
The flip side of this is that there is an insanely large amount of this cryptic text. So much so that it ends up being a bit of a chore to read through all of it. Though it is a satisfying chore, answers and plot developments really should have come at a slightly faster pace, and by the end there are simply too many questions left hanging. The ending itself was also a slight disappointment in some ways.
Let's get the bad stuff out of the way first. Most of the characters are not particularly deep or interesting. Some of the plot twists were rather obvious. A significant number of details were given either incomplete or convenient explanations.
The good news is that the main plot is actually very clever and interesting. The protagonist definitely felt like a relatively normal human who, through some very unfortunate events, rose to the level where he could literally fight gods and goddesses and affect the history of the entire world, and as a result I genuinely cared about seeing what happened to him and helping him defeat the bosses (especially the final one). Also, every important plot thread got its fair share of closure by the end, and it always felt either satisfying or sad when it did (even when it was quite obvious what would happen).
Score: 8.2/10
Routes/Endings Played: Mostly Linear, did not attempt to get all alternate branches and sidequests, about 80-90% completion.

>>8968272

>>8966885
VN magazine, d'you mean Nocturnes?
Damn I didn't know it was dead

>>8968444
One word, the forced bloating of the VN, thread over.

>>8970617
I mean Vienne http://jpvn.dyndns.org/ >>8490784

>>8968444
>I bet around 40MB of it is the python distribution, and around 15MB is the ren'py package. So yeah, OPs fault for using a bloated engine.
It's actually the opposite. Around 25 lbs of pythons and 55 of mp3s and pngs.
It's not 2600 yet so you should be fine downloading it...

>>8968444
If everyone used GNU/Linux, there would be no need to include the libraries.

>>8971139
>mp3s
that should explain it, really.

>>8966885
>I wish /jp/ made more VNs. I'm open to any collaboration if anyone wants to get paired with a useless faggot like me.

I'd be honored to collaborate with such a talented person. Unfortunately I'm just another useless writer with no skill at drawing whatsoever.

>>8971189
if gnu/linux wasn't so cumbersome to use or install stuff on, and could run windows stuff perfectly without shit like wine, i'm sure more people would.

Did you post this in /vg/ OELVN thread?

>>8971819
/vg/? sounds scary ;_;

you can post it if you want, but I don't think it'll do well outside of /jp/

>>8971828
Stay here please, don't go to them

>>8972208
Don't wory, I won't

I saw you do that!

Sometimes, when everyone's asleep, I go get some ice from the freezer and rub it all over my gentials and then stick it in my butthole until it melts.

That's my review of this game

>>8974480
That sounds like a very questionable practice to me.

That was a fun little read.
Please never become one of those little pretentious shits spewing philosophical masturbation. This kind of retarded story is best.

Looking forward to more.

>>8974480
Does it feel good? sounds like a flattering review.

Last bump, now it's time for you to die, my little thread ;_;
Already working on my next project... I'm performing a resurrection ritual on the dead.

>>8977624
Excellent, can't wait.

glorious, great for a laugh.