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/jp/, I wrote a visual novel that I want to share with you.

http://www.mediafire.com/?qt4uqx41vtg69e5

I'm sure it's terrible and a waste of your time but if even one of you can enjoy it then it'll all be worth it to me.

>> No.8530503

Cool, I'll actually check it out and let you know what I think when I get home.

>> No.8530509

Where's Derek when you need him..?

>> No.8530512

>>8530509
On winter break :(

Be back soon with no virus! :)

>> No.8530511 [DELETED] 

vruses eating away my computer

help

>> No.8530514

>>8530509
100% virus free thanks OP :)

>> No.8530516

>>8530493
post screen shots. Then I'll check it out.

>> No.8530519
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>>8530512
>>8530514
>no backwards smiley face

Screenshot of the main menu.

>> No.8530522

>>8530519
Not feeling so well lately. ):

>> No.8530549
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8530549

the first time I find myself agreeing with him.

>> No.8530561

>>8530549
Well it's pretty long, clocking in at around 6500 words.

>> No.8530566

>win32

Toobad

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8530567

You made a spelling mistake, I'll never forgive you for this.

>> No.8530571
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8530571

I'm not sure if I can warm up to such jokes.

>> No.8530578

>>8530567
Oh shit.
Good thing I haven't put it anywhere else yet.

>> No.8530585

>>8530549
>>8530567
>>8530571
I was ignoring it at first because I thought it would be some guy trying to make the next Muv-Luv, but these screenshots interest me.
What the hell is it even about?

>> No.8530602
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>>8530585
Some guy making fun of random characters I found online, basically.

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>>8530602
I see.

>> No.8530628

>>8530549
>>8530611
I want yaoi sex

>> No.8530629
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>>8530567
Were these two on purpose?

>> No.8530630

>>8530611
I like how this guy is parodying Mugen.

>> No.8530633

I don't normally buy into this sort sort, but this looks like it might be a laugh.

I'll join your botnet, OP.

>> No.8530641

>>8530629
His are on purpose.
I edited the first one.

>> No.8530647

>>8530549
oh, and this guy has "Alice" in his name sometimes instead of something420

>> No.8530659

I hope there's no story. If it's just pure making fun of stupid shit, I'll enjoy it.

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Hahahahah, that was really funny!
I laughed out loud in a couple of parts.
my stick won't move! there is input lag, this cabinet is broken!!

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>>8530647
Fixed that. Thanks for pointing it out.

>>8530659
Don't worry, it's pretty much entirely stupid fun.

>>8530672
Well, I'm glad to know you liked it.

>> No.8530695

Anyone doing a lets play? I'm too lazy to play this...

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8530708

Holy shit, dude.

>> No.8530709

>>8530695
I finished it in about half an hour.

>> No.8530722

>>8530708
Well, howdy!

>> No.8530750

woah, looks kinda fun

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8530760

NI HAO MA?! RICE SMASH!!!

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8530774

I'm so glad that this was received well for the most part.
If I ever write anything else, I'll be sure to post it here for everyone!

>> No.8530783

Hey, it's pretty good. Especially if you're into the FGC and get all the references. Great use of the sprite variations (saw what you were trying to do) and breaking the fourth wall.

>> No.8530791

>>8530774
Yeah, this was serious a good time, OP.
I'd read anything else you come up with.
First non sage post in awhile.

>> No.8530795 [DELETED] 

It's fucking shit. I can't believe you'd put that garbage online. Aren't you embarrassed? Don't you have any shame? I was literally cringing all the way through. It's one of the worst things I have ever played.

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8530805

McManly you little shit, you ditched her to have homosex with Faggot Whathisname.

I knew you were a faggot from the beggining.

>> No.8530808

>>8530791
It's unfortunate, but I don't think I'd be able to do another thing like this one for a while because there wouldn't be many new ideas.

Maybe after a long break when there are new things to make fun of.

>> No.8530811

>>8530795
You don't understand, it's irony.
I know it because I used to browse /mu/

>> No.8530828

>>8530808
Nah, it's cool. Don't want it to feel forces or whatever, just nice to have something to giggle at like an idiot every now and then.

Got to say though, I wonder what it takes to throw something like this out there.
What kind of stuff did you need to do to make it?

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>>8530828
Renpy.

>> No.8530979

>>8530805

>Refuses to fuck harpy

>Had sex with a dog earlier

>> No.8530985

>>8530979
Does the dog count as a monster girl or not?

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>>8530985
She was kinda cute.

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This is the best VN i've ever read, i'm laughing my ass off and my cheeks hurt baldy, tears are coming too, it breaks everything in a VN and i lvoe it

>> No.8531104

>>8531078
Sup OP.

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>>8531104
Amazingly, he's not me.
Don't worry, I'd think he was me, too.

>> No.8531158

i kinda expected a better ending, but the monster girl quest reference made me laugh

>> No.8531181

Haha, I just noticed when I shoved it in my VN directory it had a very similar director name to That Cheap and Sacred Thing(both TCAST).

Intro music is rad so far.

>> No.8531191

This hit pretty close to home as I've been looking for backgrounds lately(though I'm going to use shooped photos), and have experience with shitty stock images that aren't quite what you want.

>> No.8531205

>>8530708

Oh fuck, I lost it when this one came up.

>> No.8531244

Cleared it... I admit it did get a few laughs from me, even if the humour was kind of predictable.

>> No.8531251

Do I have to be an American to get this shit? I admit I giggled a few times, but the majority was really bad. I can't grasp why you would write something like that and even go as far as to publicly release it.

>> No.8531271

>>8531251
>I admit I giggled a few times, but the majority was really bad.

read the op
>I'm sure it's terrible and a waste of your time but if even one of you can enjoy it then it'll all be worth it to me.

You weren't the one, but a few others in the thread were.

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8531277

Some of this shit is golden

>> No.8531289

>>8531271
I don't really get what you're saying. I was just posting my opinion on the product to help balance out the nearly one-sided reception; to give a more realistic view and maybe spare the time of some in interest.

>> No.8531592

I like when he killed the cheeky girl

>> No.8533551

Please make a sequel.

>> No.8533553

>>8533551
>>8531592
You are getting desperate, OP.

>> No.8533558

Trying too hard, seriously. Unfunny and lulz so randum shit. Sorry.

>> No.8533559

>>8533553
"Anyone who doesn't share my likes and dislikes is OP" ← You.

>> No.8533571

>>8533553
I'm >>8533551 and I'm not OP, anyway I passed a good time reading this, even if at the end there were even the same jokes I liked it.

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8533614

I love this.

>> No.8537056

Even Buff is a asshole and the game seems pretty cheap, I find most of the jokes pretty funny. Keep on your works.

>> No.8537117

>>8533558
I agree with you somewhat but I did like Buff Mcmanly character.

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