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Just made this, what do you think? Constructive criticism helps, bashing does not.

>> No.7180927

why is the n backwards? i don't think there's a touhou character named "chew"

>> No.7180925

it's cute

>> No.7180929

It's cute and I really couldn't do it better but
>>>/ic/

>> No.7180928

you n is wong

>> No.7180931

>>7180923
Should of posted it in here >>7161342 the OC thread.

>> No.7180936

>Chew.

Looks good.

>> No.7180937

Chew is my favorite twohu

>> No.7180935
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>>7180927

>> No.7180938
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>> No.7180939

looks more chevi to me

>> No.7180947

CHEWWWWWWW

>> No.7180949
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>>7180936
I made the N backwards on purpose, if that wasn't obvious enough. Since you seem to care so much, I made another just for you.

>> No.7180954

>>7180949

it still looks bad

>> No.7180956
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7180956

Chew is a good comic. You can find it on /rs/.

But keep it in /co/ ok OP?

/jp/ is for Touhous and VNs, not comics!

>> No.7180963
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>>7180954
Deal with it.

>> No.7180966

>>7180949
Well Chen's like several hundred isn't she? She should know how to write in Japanese .

>> No.7180971

>>7180966
If Ran is supposed to be around 800 I'd say Chen is maybe between 400 and 500.

>> No.7180973

>>7180949

looks great, but she has too much cloths on

[/spolier]not lewd enough[spolier]

>> No.7180975

>>7180923
It's alright, but who ever said we'd want to help you?

>> No.7180981

>>7180975
I was not implying that I wanted your help, I was just pointing out that mindless bashing like >>7180954 is just idiotic.

>> No.7180983

>>7180923
It would be better with less of the pointless background and more of the Touhou girl.

>> No.7180986

>>7180963

are you angry?

>> No.7180989

>>7180983
Agreed

>> No.7180990

>>7180971
>>7180966
Age means jack shit and unless she's incredibly childish in canon (and from the games I'd assume everyone could write their fucking name) OP is doing it wrong.

>> No.7180995

Looks good, but you forgot her earrings

>> No.7181001

>>7180966
>>7180971
Chen is young, guys. A few decades, probably. It's not like Ran needed to have a pet for most of her life.

>> No.7181003

>>7180949
I guess you tried to have a sort of childish feel to the image, but placing a single letter backwards wasn't obvious enough. Maybe more childish writing would've made it a bit more apparent.

Decent enough drawing, but the background gives nothing and takes away too much.

>> No.7181008

>>7181001
>decades
>has two tails

full retard

>> No.7181014
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7181014

hey coach that's great
but who's chew?

>> No.7181022

OP please post this in the OC thread here >>7161342. Also try to make an updated ver with her earrings.

>> No.7181023
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>>7180995
>>7180983
Thanks.

Here's the transparent .png of just Chen, do whatever you want with it. I'm still unexperienced at this so good luck, i'm out.

>> No.7181032

>>7181023
Thanks, you're the man.

>> No.7181027

>>7181001
Cirno is 60 and she's incredibly childish so no Chen isn't that young since she's not childish in canon.

>> No.7181038

>>7181008
Cats aren't foxes, learn your mythology. They get a split tail when they become youkai, and the threshold for that is traditionally 20 years of age (or so I thought, but Wikipedia says it's as little as 13).

>> No.7181039

>>7181003
Thanks for the critique.

>> No.7181041

Assuming you actually drew this, Chen looks great, but the background is pretty pointless and shitty. Make it a place where Chen would be, like a scene from Gensokyo, so it doesn't like she's been stuck on it. It takes more effort, but it makes for a much better picture in the end.

>> No.7181046

>>7181027
But Cirno's a fairy, and all fairies are pretty much permanently childish.

>> No.7181048

>>7181046
Fairies have permanently retarded development? So Cirno is canonically a retard?

>> No.7181052

>>7181008
>>7181008
I'm pretty sure the requirement for cats is just to have a very long tail, so yeah, no.

>> No.7181053

>>7180981
Stating one's opinion is not mindless bashing. He doesn't like what you're doing, and he has every right to do so and to voice his opinion. Expecting him not to when you specifically put the picture in his sight is stupid.

>> No.7181055

>>7181041
Too lazy to draw a background.

>> No.7181062

>>7181048
Well she's actually pretty smart for a fairy.
But compared to most characters, yeah, not so bright.

>> No.7181063

>>7181053
If you want your opinion to mean anything at all or for it to be taken into consideration, you should explain yourself and define why you think that way, otherwise it will just straight up be ignored.
Go ahead, state your opinion, it won't mean shit unless you explain though.

>> No.7181067

>>7181027
Read your BAiJR. I don't think there's ever been a Touhou more clueless and childish than Chen. Although this may have something to do with her being spoiled by living a sheltered life of a high-tier youkai's pet.

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>> No.7181077

>>7181067
Not even Rumia?

>> No.7181075

>>7181063
Which leads us back to the question, what makes you think anyone cares if his opinion is "taken into consideration"?

>> No.7181083

>>7181077
Hyperbole, but you get his point.

>> No.7181085

>>7180923

protip: nobody will praise you or judge your picture if you keep acting like a dick.

>> No.7181101

>>7181077
Sure, Rumia does behave like a kid, but she doesn't sound particularly childish, not in BAiJR, at least. More like she's just chill and doesn't care.

>> No.7181110

her name is "Cheng"

"Chen" secondary bs.

>> No.7181115

>>7181077
Characters like Rumia and Cirno are kind of portrayed as dumb and reckless. Chen's more of the "doesn't quite know how the world works" type. Like in those Aya interviews...

Come to think of it,I kinda see where all that fanon shit comes from, but they just HAD to take it too far.

>> No.7181121

fucking piece of goddamn garbage you fucking shitstain on life.

>> No.7181126

http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=11534209

>> No.7181130

>>7181115
>Characters like Rumia and Cirno are kind of portrayed as dumb and reckless. Chen's more of the "doesn't quite know how the world works" type.

Well, this.

>> No.7181133

>>7181115
>but they just HAD to take it too far
Such is fanon.

>> No.7181288

>>7181126
So the only merit of this piece isn't even his...

>> No.7181357

>>7181288
I love how he renamed the images to 'Untitled-x'

>> No.7181402

>>7181115
You can't diss fanon for changing something, unless it's a total flip of the character's attitude (instead of enhancing/exaggerating). As is the case of the current rude (literally), asshole Nitori everyone's doing.

>> No.7181411
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>>7181126
Alright.
OP, reported for plagiarism.

Oh, and I don't mean just here. Reported to the original creator of the image. You just entered a world of pain.

>> No.7181437

>>7181402
okay, so maybe childish Chen isn't really that far from canon but, suuuuuuure, it's all fun and games until they turn Ran into a pedophile. and yes i mad but I'll let it slide because of OP's amazing OC

>> No.7181439

>>7181437
>OP's amazing OC
Make sure to read the thread.

>> No.7181454
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>>7181437
>OP's amazing OC
Hark.

I like how OP left so quickly, thinking nobody would notice him.

>> No.7181484

>>7181402
>the current rude (literally), asshole Nitori everyone's doing.

Everyone? I must not be up to date.

Anyways, it's not like SA never happened. There's a lot of reason to assume she is, in fact, an asshole.

>> No.7181489

>>7181437
>pedo Ran
My hate.

I just wish the average fandom response to pretty much every character wasn't either a) reduce IQ by 50 points, or b) take one minor part of the character and extrapolate it TO THE MOOOON.
See also: Yuyucow, PAD, Eiki Breast Envy, anything involving Cirno, etc.

>> No.7181509

>>7181489

>extrapolate

This word doesn't mean what you think it means.

>> No.7181516

>>7181509
Yeah, that was bad word choice.
Not quite sure what I was thinking there.

>> No.7181519

>>7181455
Your sarcasm doesn't translate into written words. Is this your first day on the Internet?

>> No.7181520

>>7181509
How so?

(I'm not him, I just don't see any semantic error in that sentence.)

>> No.7181536

So do you think OP was just trolling us or did he seriously want to plagiarize?

>> No.7181540

>>7181536
For the sake of our faith in humanity, let's assume the former.

>> No.7181571

>>7181536
Nah, he probably just was showing off his SUGOI wallpaper skillz and then just lost it.

>> No.7181681

bumping for so kawaii picture^____^

If it was DA I would add you 2 friends ^___~

>> No.7181724

>>7181681
Just because it isn't from z0MG PIXIV!!1 doesn't mean it was shit out of DA.

>> No.7181748

This thread is a good example of why /jp/ has shit for OC compared to boards like /tg/, or even /a/. Instead of flattering self-styled drawfag attention whores so that they'll eventually do what you want, you mistake the thread for your bedroom floor and take a gigantic dump on it.

>> No.7181820

>>7181748
I think they're all just traumatized by the shit they saw on DA.

I actually liked the picture OP posted. Although that backwards N was slightly frustrating.

>> No.7182243
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>> No.7182252

>>7181748
>>7181820
Your posts are good examples of people commenting on things they didn't read.

>> No.7182267

>Say you hate Japan
>Have a clear bias in favor of Japanese media

I wonder if you kids are blind. Pixiv is just as shitty as DeviantArt; the difference is that you're all 2hufags so that you're unable or unwilling to acknowledge how retarded it actually is.

>> No.7182283

>>7182267
If it looks nice, I'll save it.
Such is my criteria.

>> No.7182335 [DELETED] 

>>7182267
Pixiv is better than DA the same reason Nicovideo is better than Youtube; you can't read any of the retarded comments.

>> No.7182343

>>7182335
Doesn't change the fact that the userbase is composed of the same creatively bankrupt and autistic failures.

>> No.7183486

>>7182267
At least Pixiv doesn't allow photography (yet). Also, dA's concentration of furry is greater.

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