/jp/ - Otaku Culture

てぇれいｓてぇどおｒ

Make sure she doesn't bring her friend Rorschach.

>>6997786
I don't see why she would do that

This isn't aya gf is it?

LIEBE XD

>>6997796
No.
Is there a problem about that?

Please do not start a thread like that.

If you want a Koishi thread just ask for it. Koishi threads are already bad enough with the whole "liebe" shit.

That stupid crow.She's getting so much attention from her.

What's going on in here?

>>6997860
Look at what you did. It's only getting worse!

WHAT?She's rather spending time with that kind of people???

>>6997882

Maybe he'll be a better poster than I am. God knows I'm awful sometimes.

>>6997922
You make some posts I dislike sometimes but you are fine overall. This guy with his "pseudo-roleplay" is kind of an eyesore though. I just hope we don't get more people with "Touhou is my X" tripcodes.

>>6997922
I'll try my best.
I mean....it's not like I have anything to do anyways while she's not at home and having fun with other people

>>6997933

Less about me; more about Koishi. Let's go.

Pardon the momentary off-topic crap.

She likes spending time with that cat too....Well but I can't really be mad at her for this

Ems cause you are impatient and don't want to wait like a week and a half for your stuff. Goes here as long as people don't behave like they are on /v/.

>>6998003
What's ems?

>>6998082
Express Mail Service

It's a manual spammer

>>6998087
If my roleplaying is that bad I'll stop and just dump Koishi pictures

>>6998101
If you care, write some random Koishi femdom fantasy of yours.

>>6998103
A-are you sure?I mean I've been thinking about doing that but I was afraid that my english wouldn't be good enough and that you guys just hate me to death anyways.

>>6998107
If it sucks, don't post it.

>>6998107

Why don't you tell us how you feel about Koishi? Spare us no detail, please.

I think that would be a good way to start.

>>6998107
Just delete the posts if it's bad. You won't have to offend anyone's eyes with your drivel is if turns out horrid that way

>>6998107
Who cares? We wouldn't have even guessed English isn't your first language if you hadn't told us.

Posting these again.

I guess I'll give it a try then....

I think I'll start by explaining how I became her pet.
It was one of these cold merciless days in the underground city.At that time I was just a lost little dog.I can't really remember what happened to my mother or to my father.It has been a long time ago and feels like a completly different life now.All I know is that I was roaming trough the dirty streets of this city,searching for food and warmth.If I recall correctly I had some silblings.But I guess we got seperated at some point.

Ah I hate the winter nowadays.Koishi-sama said this is because of a trauma I had when I was very young.Well that's basicly the only thing I can remember for sure about my childhood.It was cold and I was hungry.And suddenly I was standing at the gate of a huge mansion.Behind the gate was a strange figure which kept coming closer to me.I was kinda afraid and wanted to run,but at the same time I suddenly felt a strange calmness in my head.

The figure picked me up and said "You don't belong to anyone?Hmmm.Well I guess you are just what I needed."

I will continue if you guys like it so far

>>6998157

Keep on walkin'

>>6998173
I-its not like I w-want you to keep going... or anything...

>>6998173
Nah, you suck.
Sounds too much like role play, and the dialogue is lacking.
It'd be nice if you somehow turned it around and showed the narrator as an unreliable narrator due to Koishi's powers, but I think that's expecting too much from a *chan.

So never mind.

>>6998171
is there a .gif for those?

>>6998190

That's why I asked him to tell us how he feels about her first. It comes out better that way. There's no need to force it.

Besides, I always enjoy reading about /jp/'s feelings for pretty cartoon girls.

>>6998206

No.

>>6998221
Yeah, you're right, pure feelings are better to read than conjured beginnings.

Let me take a shot at this writing stuff. Read if you're bored.

"Koishi looked out the window into the sprawling scenery below, the fire-ridden ground filled with lava already a common scene for her. Bored beyond her mind, she had already made one too many trips to the surface. The trips served mainly to kill the monotony of the subterranean animism, however as time passed, she had explored every nook and cranny, and talked to every denizen of Gensokyo. It was interesting while it lasted, and it certainly lasted for quite a while, but now she was back to being the elder sister and owner of the lone castle in the underground.

However, not all had been lost. She had brought a human from the village to keep her company, seeing as how her sister's pets and other underground denizens had already worn their entertainment value thin. The human was most certainly amusing. Tales of him spread amongst the village said that he simply fell out of the sky someday. He wore peculiar clothes, from materials not seen anywhere on Gensokyo, anywhere but perhaps Kourindo.

After kidnapping the human, Koishi opened her third eye for one last time to manipulate the human's subconscious while he slept. When he woke up, he would not think anything of waking up underground, much less on a huge castle surrounded by lava.

Koishi then took her time to train her new servant, and bit by bit, shape him up to be exactly what she wanted. It was a fun game for her, to shape someone up without using her power, and it proved to be quite entertaining for a while. The servant was kind and paid no heed to her third eye, one which many people would cower as soon as laying eyes upon. He was out to grab refreshments from the kitchen, but he was taking a long time to do so. The kitchen wasn't close to Koishi's room, but he had to be back in such a timespam.

Yes, something was wrong..."

>>6998318
That's nice,but she isn't the elder sister.

Oh, why not.

~~~~

"Anon~"
Her sweet voice hits me like a nail right through my forehead.
I hadn't noticed her approach.
Now that I think back on it, I had heard the door open, I had heard her footsteps and her movements and her gentle humming, but I had ignored them. Completely subconsciously, as if by very nature, I hadn't been allowed to think further of them.
As a result, the first time she spoke to me was the first time I realized she existed in the room.
How long had she been there? How long had she been looking at me as I stared out the mansion windows at the lanterns of the distant underground village, thinking I was completely alone? It's somewhat scary. Even moreso when I think that might have been fear she had allowed me to feel, while at the same time I couldn't help but think absolutely nothing of the fact I'd been kidnapped and brought here.
I literally can't even begin to consider to what extent her subconscious manipulation is affecting me.

Meanwhile, Koishi Komeiji stands in front of me, her bare skin starkly lit in the dark room by the amber subterranean light pouring in through the window.
Her shirt, her socks, her skirt, among other articles, were strewn out over the floor like victorian corpses, and she stood facing me, naked and unblinking, save her hat, and the cords of her third eye that also never blinked, in fact never even opened.
"Let's play." She smiles.
I don't really feel like it.
But subconsciously, I want to play as well.

>>6998173
>>6998318
I always find self insert OC characters very iffy. Makes it hard for me to take it seriously when it reminds me so much of wish fulfillment stories and generally poor fapfiction.

Also I find idleness as Koishi's pet a very poor character. I've always viewed Koishi's closed eye as a problem that needs to be taken care of for her to become a person once more.

I'd prefer a character who would do his or her best to make Koishi realize the world isn't something to shut herself away from.

I like how it was resolved in Pure Jade Anthocyanin by RED_SIGHT, but I'm saddened by how this is the only doujin I've ever found that tried to resolve Koishi's closed eye problem.

If there were ever a romantic tale to be made with Koishi I'd like the person on the other end try to break her out of her subconcious and try to obtain true concious love with a pure confession from Koishi that is "I love you with all my heart".

A pet seems a far too idle of a position to do this from.

>>6998412
Third writefag here. Why do you only say this after I decide it's safer to follow the trend of the other two ;_;

Not enough real feelings in here.

>>6998412
>A pet seems a far too idle of a position to do this from.
I don't think so.
For me the loyal love of a pet is the purest form of love.Also I'm such a terrible boyfriend that I can't even be someones love interest in my fantasies.That's why I chose this.

>I always find self insert OC characters very iffy
I didn't really meant to write a breathtaking story with alot of twists and excitement.I just wanted to describe my fantasy world.So if I'd turn this into a doujin or something it would probally some lighthearted comedy story with a loyal gate guard dog-youkai as the MC

>>6998421
I don't really care either way, personally. While he has a point, Koishi has a problem and to not care about it is very callous, but most take it as just her character, I suppose, and roll with it.
That said, I agree with >>6998427
There's actions going on, but no real feelings.
>>6998318 was somewhat interesting in that it made me curious how the mind-shaping would affect the guy, but it cut off at an odd end, as if him taking a long time to get tea was a major plot point.

>>6998432
That idea reminds me of an old Koishi thread where somebody posted they'd be fine with being a guard dog outside while Koishi has hot steamy lesbian sex with somebody like Marisa.

Are you that guy from that thread?

>>6998445
Ha funny coincidence.I'm indeed this guy.

>>6998356
Oops, mismatch. Just play a game of pretend and swap "elder" for "young".

Elder is such a bad word anyway. Makes me feel old.

"The time was killing her. Not killing in the literal sense, mind you, but the anticipation for her cold bottle of sake had turned into a sense of dread. Koishi jumps from her chair and heads for the main hall. The eeriness and silence of the castle seemed different. Before they were welcoming, but now they were intimidating Koishi. Ah, how she wished she could manipulate her own subconscious. 'Fear no thing on my own home!' she kept telling herself. But it was useless, even if her third eye was open, it could not hide the trail of blood present on the hallway going to the kitchen.

Koishi tensed up. Blood spilled on her own domain? Perhaps someone suffered an acccident? However, one second later after opening the heavy door to the hall, she wished she had never left her room.

One of her sister's pets, Utsuho Reiuji, laid crucified on an inverted saint cross, improvised from various materials found throughout the hall. Her third leg had been severed off, the crystal in her chest ripped, leaving only a gaping hole where the other end of the cross could clearly be seen. Her beautiful wings were severed, and her legs were twisted in an impossible way.

DO NOT READ IF YOU LIKE UTSUHO.

>>6998432

/jp/ is always finding new ways to depress me.

Quit it, you're probably not as bad as you make yourself out to be.

Isn't the whole point of Koishi that she closed her heart and pretty much has no 'real feelings'?

>>6998472
If you're talking about the critiques, I mean there are no real feelings toward Koishi.
If you're talking about >>6998459, then never mind.

>>6998472
Isn't the whole point of a pet loving its master even when the master will never return those feelings?
>>6998471
Ahaha it's nice that you say that but you really don't know me.And look I'm really not sad about that.It's how I am and I learned to accept my true self

>>6998472
In the end she opened up to Marisa/Reimu only. She is regularly going out to visit them at the shrine.
Also, she only closed of her eye, not her feelings.

>>6998498
http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/Koishi
Read and stop posting.

>>6998498
>In a way, it was convenient, but she was also lonely.
However, she had no heart capable of feeling this loneliness.

Hmm I'd like to believe that she can have feelings too but you should take a look at her profile

>Satori took pity on Koishi, ordering her pets to play with her and giving her some pets to keep as her own. She thought that taking care of the pets might give her a purpose, and it might enable her to begin opening her heart to others again. Indeed, it seemed that Koishi began to change, ever so slightly, after she began to raise her pets.
I like that part though

I hope we aren't forgetting the importance of her pets role in opening her up here. Their support and unconditional love for her was probably much needed in her life.

>>6998499
>wikia

It moved: http://en.touhouwiki.net.. The old one has been taken over by horrible people.

>>6998499
>http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/Koishi
You just went full retard, anon.

It's http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Koishi_Komeiji
and it's exactly what I wrote.
She closed her eye, got mistrustful of everyone, and opened up to Marisa/Reimu only again.

Not enough pictures, /jp/. Rectify this at once.

Actually I like how she sealed off her 3rd eye.
Most people would call it escapism,but she did it so that she would be liked by people(I doubt that she fully knew about all the consequences the shut down would bring) and I think that's sweet.

Well /jp/ I'll go to bed,it was nice to talk with you about this.

Who knows?Maybe I'll keep that trip or maybe I'll vanish into the comforting mass of anonymity again

>>6998404
(I guess we can set this story before she met Reimu or Marisa, then.)

"Play?" This was the first time she'd suggested something this proactive.
I'd been here for three days already, confined to her en suite bedroom as she moved in and out, but all she'd done was watch me. Anything I said to her, she didn't react to.
As if I had never said it in the first place.
Obviously, at first this only spurred me to do even less, conscious of her three eyes, two open and one closed, observing me. Wondering just what sort of girl she was. What she thought, what she felt, what I was to her, if I was anything.
After the first day, it seems she erased that uncertainty, and with it, any of my concerns. Maybe she found them bothersome.
I would go about my time as if nobody was watching me at all.
Though of course, confined to a single room, there still wasn't much to do.

"Yeah. Let's play." She smiled gently, taking a step forwards, the lights and shadows shifting over her body as her position changed. "You'll play with me. A game with no theme. A game with no rules. A game with no score, and no goal. A game with no winner, and no loser. A game with no beginning or end, rhyme or reason, no fair play and no cheating, no purpose and no fun. It will be just like the game I play every day, except you'll play with me."
She was naked, a point I was having trouble disregarding. She moved up to me and took my hand, placing it on her soft chest.
But it meant nothing.
To her, the fact she'd placed my hand on her breast signified nothing. There was no desire, no taboo, no such thing as an acknowledgement that I shouldn't. It was just there, and it simply happened without meaning.
As such, with the way she treated the action as something entirely without purpose, I found myself unable to let it register either.
More importantly, I realized, were her jade-green eyes staring up into mine.
It came to me that I had to say something.

>>6998537

"...What's the point of a game like that?"
A stupid question, probably. Blame me for being human and being unable to understand.

"It's an easy game." She smiled. Beneath her breast, I could feel her heart beating calmly. "We don't have to do anything. We don't have to worry about anything. And when people ask us, we can still say we're playing a game, and they'll leave us alone. Isn't that wonderful?"
It wasn't.
It definitely wasn't.
But who was I to tell her that?
This youkai girl, who had probably lived more than twenty times my lifespan and still stayed young, who held more power and memories than I could even comprehend, who only saw me as a magician would see a doll at the end of her string.
Regardless, to be human means to do stupid things, and maybe out of concern for myself, or maybe an insane concern for her, I opened my mouth, and spoke.

>>6998506
I just grabbed it off google

>>6998519
She didn't grow mistrustful at all.
She just didn't want to be hated for breathing, so she closed her eye and "became more carefree."
She opened it a little after meeting Reimu/Marisa, but it didn't open up, else she wouldn't regret closing it.

>>6998539

(...I suppose I should give the story closure.)

"Koishi." I spoke.
"Sorry, may I call you that? You never told me your name, but your sister did. She told me a lot of things about you."
Koishi didn't blink.
It was cold, and the room was large and dark, and she was naked, but she didn't even shiver.
"I know how you closed off your third eye, and what it's done to you."
This elicited no response.
A slightly chilling lack of one, for she remained completely still, my hand still feeling her breast, and her heartbeat.
"I'm sure you had your reasons. I can't understand them, but they were probably good ones."
I keep leaving pauses like this, but she's not going to reply. Might as well say the rest in one go.
"That doesn't really matter to me. Your sister said it's fundamentally wrong for a Satori to close up their third eye, but of course, I'm human, so I'll never really get that. She told me all sorts of things about the histories and powers and reputations of your kind, but It's a bit embarrassing to say most of it went over my head.
However, she did tell me some other things about you which I found much more interesting, Koishi.

>>6998628

She told me about how you used to skip down the mansion stairs three at a time. How you liked jam on both sides of your toast for breakfast. How you liked Jazz music and would put it on loud enough for the whole mansion. How you used to like cats and would put on little dances for them. How you loved roses and decorated your whole room with them, then cried when they wilted. How sometimes you would paint your own Rorschach tests for fun and ask your sister what she saw in them. How you would be interested in learning and read up books on Freud and human genetics. How you got a polygraph for your birthday. How your sister told you a scary story about ancestors standing by your bed and you couldn't sleep afterwards.
Small things like that, or maybe big things.
And when she told me all these things, I couldn't help but think... this Koishi person, this girl, she sounds like a really fun person to be with. I wish that I could have known her like she was back then, and maybe even though we were human and youkai, we could have been good friends, and I would visit you every day, and when strong youkai picked on me you'd rush up to save me, and when I was feeling sad you'd read my thoughts and tell me that you understood and comfort me.
Maybe that would have been nice.
...So, I'm not forcing you to try and change back or anything, but...
If you did, I would definitely be happy. I'd want to make sure you were happy, too."
I took a deep breath, and looked at her.
As always, she remained perfectly still.
I guess I wouldn't be able to tell if she was affected or not.

However.
Just as I thought that,
She blinked.
She blinked and opened her mouth, and spoke to me.
"Wow." She said,
With a smile.

"You're really
good at this game, Anon."

>>6998634

That was really all she needed to say to make me realize that all I'd done had no effect whatsoever.

"Let's keep playing." She kept on the same smile as always, taking my other hand and putting it on her other breast with the exact same lack of care.
From then on until I died, I realized, I would be nothing but her playmate.
My words would never be able to reach her.

I was no Shrine Maiden or Magician, after all. I was just a human, a human pet of this
heartless youkai girl.

QU­ALITY THREAD

>>6998459
Ah, if Koishi could open up her third eye. If only she could convince herself that it wasn't real. But it was impossible. Her third eye would not open, not ever again. Fueled by doubt and dumbfoundness, she noticed two more blood trails leading to different parts of the castle. One to the kitchen, and one sprawling off somewhere else in the castle.

Being the closets, Koishi wanted to get away from the scene she just saw. She had to warn somebody, but first, she needed to check if everyone was alright. The blood trail led to the kitchen, and that was where her servant was.

Koishi swallows dry and turns the heavy knob to the medieval-style kitchen. After opening the door, she was met with unprecedented darkness. The candles were off? That wasn't normal, it wasn't time to put them out yet. However, something shone slightly in the ground. Is it... a circle?

Koishi fabricates an emergency candle from her dress. This was in case anything like this happened, although it had never happened up to now. After lighting it up, she drops to her knees once again. Orin laid down on a peaceful sleep in the center of an eerie magic circle, written with her own blood. She was naked, and both her arms were torn off. They were shoved in her chest, after being used to scratch her entire body until the nails broke. One of her tails was torn out, exposing her tailbone. Her tongue was cut out, and only a sea of blood laid on her open mouth. On the midst of all the blood, she could see that in her final moments, Orin was at least not violated. But that was the least of it, since she was dead. She would never happily go through the halls singing strange songs and addressing other people as "brothers".

DO NOT READ IF YOU LIKE ORIN.

>>6998722
Who could have done this? Who had the power to execute such a fear, to take out not one, but two of her sister's beloved pets? They were no weaklings, and Orin was clever, cunning. While she pondered on the question, Koishi looked around in fear and saw something that struck her heart. A clean bottle of cold sake laid on the dining table, with a message written in blood right behind it.

"Would you like a drink, master?""

Koishi was in shock. Ah, if only she could open her third eye, convince herself that this is not real. But it was useless. Her third eye not never open again. Nevertheless, She could not believe it. Her own servant did this? It was simply a human, it did not possess any fighting abilities at all, let alone the power to fly! Not to mention he was kind and gentle. What could have possibly made him do these things?

The whole kitchen now grew dark. Her candle had been put out, but that didn't seem to be a problem anymore. The whole ambient lit up slightly, and fresh blood started pouring out of the walls themselves. The whole scene was a little surreal, even for Gensokyo. Koishi started hearing voices. Surprised, she tried to make sense of them, but she couldn't do it. They were merely whispers in her mind. Still confused and now cowering, Koishi rushed back to the main hall. She had to warn her sister, no matter the cost. It was the most important person to her in the world.

Rushing through the hallways, Koishi ignored everything that seemed to try and stop her from reaching her sister in time. The blood on the hallways, the voices in her head, and the fact that some of the most powerful beings in the subterranean animism had just been brutally murdered.

Reaching her sister's room, Koishi opened the door on a rush and shouted in relief as she saw her sister sitting down on the desk, the room completely clean of any sort of gruesome materials.

However, her sister did not budge. Also, the whole ambient was a little dark as always. Koishi couldn't tell very well, but was her sister... naked?

Koishi put a hand on Satori's shoulders, and fell in despair. Satori's entire frontal body had been skinned, leaving only red, ugly meat to be seen. Her heart was torn out in a clean hole, and in it, was her sister's third eye, lodged perfectly in, torn from all nerves that came from her body. Fresh semen also poured out from both her holes, or what was left of them. Killed brutally and violated, it was the ultimate offense.

DO NOT READ IF YOU LIKE SATORI

Ah, if only she could open her third eye, convince herself that this was not real. But it was useless. Her third eye would never open. Never again.

Koishi was now openly crying, screaming her sister's name. How could this be? And why? Why her sister? It all made no sense. Just then, holding her sister in her arms, Koishi realised that she was standing on top of another circle. However, this one seemed to relate itself more as to how the innerings of a third eye were. Koishi had researched about it in the past, but it didn't matter. Nothing mattered now.

Koishi simply got up and headed back to her room in solemn depression. 'It's all a dream.' She thought. Maybe if she went back to sleep, she would wake up from this horrible nightmare. Intestines were now growing out of the walls, amongst with the blood constantly flowing out. The carpet was soaked with the crimson red. The voices in her head were now telling her to die.

She was feeling a lot from the many experiences she had. And it was strange. She had shut off those feelings entirely, but they were sprouting back against her will. It mattered no longer though, for she had no one to share them with.

Just then, Koishi realized something strange. Where was her third eye? It was gone, no longer attached to her body. Although depressed, Koishi felt once more sense of dread. Something like that didn't just come off and was left forgotten somewhere. But she was hardly surprised after everything that had happened.

After slowly opening the door to her room, she finally saw him. The servant she had brought from the surface. Koishi's blood headed up immediately in rage. After taking a step and readying herself, she was immediately stuck to the spot by an invisible force.

She could not speak, she could not move, she could only watch the back of her servant. What had happened? Why could she not do anything?

'HELLO, MASTER.'

Her thought process was interrupted.

'HOW HAVE YOU BEEN? I HAVE BEEN GREAT SINCE THAT DAY.'

She could only listen.

'SINCE THE DAY YOU--'

The servant slowly turns around.

'SINCE THE DAY YOU SHUT ME OFF.'

The servant's bland face reveals a sole eye, that slowly opens fully.

The eye stares into her very soul. It hurts.

'NOW'

Ithurtsithurtsithurtsithurts

'NEVER DENY YOUR FEELINGS AGAIN.'

Koishi blacks out.

...

Waking up, Koishi realizes she is in her room, now completely clean and devoid of blood. Someone knocks on the door and promptly comes in.

"Hello, sister." It was Satori who came to see her sister. "Satori, you are alright!" Koishi promptly jumps out of bed to hug her sister. However, Satori was dumbfounded. "Just what are you doing?" she asked. "You were killed! Brutally, even!"

Satori was now even more dumbfounded, but there was no time to waste. "Where is my servant?!" Satori now thought her sister had gone insane after waking up. She slowly unclasps her sister from her body, and asks "What servant?"

Koishi is struck by doubt, and immediately glares into her third eye.

It was there, hanging on her chest, like it always had been.

And it was open, staring into her very soul.

Jesus christ this was so very not worth it. BUT I REGRET NOTHING.

>>6998742

wtfamireading.jpg


I was starting to get Inganock vibes for a bit.

>>6998769
I was merely trying to whack the point that her third eye was important, so I could make a semi-decent plot twist at the end of this that at least made it worth it for you to read until the end.

It worked. I think.

>>6998545
Damn, just read it yourself before answering. The ending is relevant, too, it's probably on youtube.

>>6998786
3,86/5

Please stop posting your shitty fanfics.

There I deleted it. It was silly anyway.