/jp/ - Otaku Culture

Bunch of people who have never written anything in their lives can't write for shit?

>>6790280
No need for her to be emo. In fact, avoiding the whole ENDLESS TORRENT OF MISERY AND REGRET is a good thing.

Imagine KS, illustrated by Raita, and actually good.

>>6790307

But I don't want a shy moeblob who cries a lot because you show her affection, I want an angst bomb who cries a lot because you show her affection.
In other words, I don't want her to cry because she's afraid, but because she thinks she isn't worthy.

ks devs need to get out

>>6790313

Imagine KS completed 100%.

>>6790314
Pardon, but that seems a bit one dimensional for a character.

If you want characters along the lines of pure misery done well, I recommend Giniro.

GET OUT OF THIS PLACE FILTHY KSDEVS

>>6790322

>Pardon, but that seems a bit one dimensional for a character.

Of course, as that's simply a character pitch before development takes place.

>>6790318
Imagine this thread not reported.

>>6790314
I agree, in general that's one of the biggest drawbacks of KS.
They took the great premise and turned it into a generic dime-a-dozen moe highschool game, discarding all the darker aspects.
It will probably be decent enough, but it could've been great.

>>6790338
>>6790333
>>6790315
You done, worthless samefag?

>>6790339
Still to early pass judgement. I doubt it will be something legendary, but passable, at worst.

>>6790355
Personally, I'm thinking it won't be completed. If it does, then it will be some run-of-the-mill VN that quickly becomes forgotten.

However you never know. I'm just not going to get excited about it.

>>6790361

I can't see a project go on for so long to be canceled.
Worst-case, after all support is gone, they put out an incomplete version with endings messily hammered on and everyone forgets about it.

But, my instincts say it will generally be enjoyed, causing a terrible new influx of visual novel readers, for better and horribly worse.

>>6790361
A wise thing to do.

>>6790361
If they feel confident enough to say it's going to be completed within 2011, I think they will finish it.
However, as it is it looks a really average story that will get exposure only due to fact that it's the first english project to reach anywhere near japanese standards (albeit the lowest ones).
And I can already see all the "popularity hating faggot" "it's doujin what do you expect" replies when you do point out its flaws.

>>6790375
I have seen quite a bit of doujin games and they usually go like this:

- Shit art, music from other sites/mediocre music, good plot.
- Nice CG, mediocre music, nukige.
- Shit, shit, SHIT.

And then there are the games nobody hears about but were rumored to have been good. I really wanted to play Shirairo Neiro. Fuck.

>>6790394
Examples of each? Just for sake of discussion.

>>6790394
- Shit art, music from other sites/mediocre music, good plot: Tsukihime, Higurashi. Yes, both of these were doujin, and the first version of Tsukihime was SHIT.
- Nice CG, mediocre music, nukige. [ぶい112CR] 大ちゃんといっしょ! is one. Cute looking, average music, and it takes two steps to jump into the sex with no plot whatsoever.
- Shit, shit, SHIT: Transquest. Genderbender nukige with stolen CG, stolen music, slapped a fuckfest gender bender shitplot on it, and charged 500 yen for it.

Those are the ones on top of my head.

>>6790313
>illustrated by Raita
Meh.

>>6790394

>- Nice CG, mediocre music, nukige

The X-Change! series fits this bill to the letter.

Get out /a/.

>>6790421
Clearly you don't understand anything about internal ejaculation and fucking like snakes. Raita is great at drawing both.

>>6790423
but x-change is not doujinsoft, also the cgs are not that good by modern standards.

>>6790416
>Tsukihime
There's multiple versions? Apart from an anime and VN?

>112CR
Somehow I knew that would be your example. It's accurate to a T.

>Transquest
Have never heard of. Seems like that's a good way to be.

>>6790451
Nasu published a preview/beta version on a comiket. Has pieces of the plot, along with prototypes of the characters.

Originally, Hisui and Kohaku were supposed to have doll-like personalities, and the art was just plain awkward.

>>6790455
Oh well, at least the full versions is pretty nice. One of these days, maybe I'll complete it.

>>6790433
Eh. His sex scenes and art style don't really click with me. I think it's because his girls are too skinny and the men are so cowardly.

it's by no means a masterpiece or some groundbreaking novel, but it's enjoyable to play. i don't understand the KS hate.

are there more character sheets like OPs?

>>6791329

OP posted the original pitch page, which the entire process was based off of.

Technically the original was monochrome but yeah.

Personally I think the deaf girl needs bigger breasts.