/jp/ - Otaku Culture

Back. Was taking a shower.

Reposting this here. I haven't added it yet.

The cat seemed to enjoy always being surrounded by people.
On the rabbit's part, the number of students that came to see it fell,
That's how it was treated.
Well, childen have a tendency to be cruel.
But I came to feel sorry for the rabbit.
Being careful that nobody would see, I sometimes went to see it.
I was really relieved every time I saw that the rabbit was alive and well.
...
The cat and the rabbit would play with each other through the fence,
I saw it many times.
The favorite and the unpopular one were different(?),
Their relationship was good, right?
I thought things like that.

Right now I'm trying to add a new page to separate the text in the event, so it doesn't bugs out. Also, trying to figure out what's making Metsu crash with the translation.

>>6371603

Where does it crash? It could be a problem with the commas again. Try using 、 instead.

Work's progressing smoothly. However, I've got a single snag. I've never known how to properly translate ドキドキした. I understand the meaning, but I can't really find a good English analogue. Any suggestions?

>>6371610

Here, see for yourself.

http://www.mediafire.com/?h9cnlbkw1dk18f1

Just read the first Metsu journal page. About halfway through, it'll happen. Also sending you script 3-0 so you can see whatever I did wrong.

>6371622

got excited

script3-3

One day when going to see the rabbit, there was a previous visitor.
She was a girl, about the same age as me.
The girl talked to the rabbit, and she gave it food.
My, it was a pleasant scene.
The girl was always playing with the rabbit.
I was always watching them from afar.
Somehow, my heart beat really fast.
From here are things that I learned later.
That girl was from a different class than me.
That girl showed athsmatic symptoms because of cats.
That girl was always alone.

>>6371622

It would depend on the context. ドキ is the sound effect used for a heartbeat. It could be used to say someone is nervous or scared or in some other state which would cause your heart to race.

>>6371603
Hey boss, did you see >>6371529

I remember it now. Fixed. Sorry about that.

I messed up 3-1 trying to make new pages. It's even worse now. I loaded the backup, but I won't be making that anytime soon again.

Packed a new version. This one has the 40k ending translated.

http://www.mediafire.com/?yl2g9u0253xpz0d

The party at 20k is giving me a headacke still.

So I'm in 2-1 and this line (宇々島「はーぴばーすでーとーゆー」) seems to be a little japanese song about birthdays. Can someone confirm?

>>6371831
It's just them saying "happy birthday to you," in kana, assumedly part of the song.

script3-4

The little girl that played with the rabbit,
Watching over her from the shadows had become a routine.
That lonely girl,
Was always stuck in my heart.
That's why, watching her playing wit the rabbit,
I felt really relieved.
However, we never talked to each other.
I had also played with the cat.
I didn't know if she would have a coughing fit.
That's why I could only watch her from afar.
I'm sure such things were just excuses.
I just didn't have any courage.

Does this kanji (宇々島) means everyone? Because I'm getting "We woo on the island" when I run it through any translator.

>>6371924
Uujima. It's the boy's name.

>>6371951

Oh, so it was Uuji.

I swear, everytime I get something different out of this.

>>6371951
Simultaneous sage and noko failed.

script3-5

"Attacked by wild dogs."
That's what the teacher had said.
Even though the cage had no gaps for a dog to slip through.
...
The body of the rabbit whose head had been severed,
Had been found abandoned in a corner of the schoolyard.
Later, they told the the parents that truth.

And I believe (安芸) is Ageha?

script3-6

Before I noticed, that girl was absent from school.
The cat, too, nobody saw again.
And things were left behind in my heart.
The wounded rabbit's sad last moments,
And that young girl.

Well, that's it for Metsu.

>>6371968
looks like it.

>>6372019

Alright, I don't wanna let your work go to waste, so I'm coding everything for metsu right NOW. I can get back into my stuff when I'm done with yours.

>>6371960
You can noko and sage simultaneously? Bestow the secret of this unto me or face the consequences!

>>6372044

What the hell is noko and what the hell is sage. You are both confusing me.

>>6372044
You can't, that's what I was testing. Sorry to disappoint.

>>6372044
Type in nokosage.

We're breaking the fourth wall here with these sentences.

Gotta find a way to line break, or the sentences are just gonna get cut off by the side of the screen.

Stupid, fixed resolution.

Okay, I found a way to make new pages without the game going ahegao all over the place. Now I just need to figure out why the text gets so small in certain sentences.

>>6372099
I figured out how to code line breaks. I can do it if needed.

Oops, nevermind. I managed to break the game in a shitty way again.

I hate it when things don't work the way I broke them to.

>>6372149

Doing code line breaking isn't hard. The problem is figuring out why the game crashes everytime we mess with the small text.

>>6372183
Is that so? What do you mean by small text?

I mean this. That's the normal sentence, but very, VERY tiny. I believe it happens because it's too large, and the game scales it down automatically, but attempting to break it into two different sentences gives the pre-mentioned error.

>>6372283
Double-checking, you removed the commas from the sentences, right? That's what caused it for me.

>>6372343

Alright, I'm feeling pretty stupid now, the solution was right in front of me and I didn't see it.

Sorry, again. That worked.

I'll focus on coding the whole of Metsu then I'll go to sleep.

>>6372367
Okay. Yeah, just replace normal commas with the Japanese IME variant, like so: 、

TRIPLE LINE BREAKING SUCCESS.

AS A RESULT, YOU CAME THREE TIMES.

doesn't escaping a regular comma with a \ work? (so, "hurr \, durr etc)

or does it simply print the \ character?

>>6372449

None of the above.

Oh no, I seem to have lost the 3-1 translation when I loaded the backup!

Does someone still have that easymodo archive link?

>>6372549
Old thread isn't dead yet.
>>6371279

looks like it prints it, except since japs changed the symbol to yen in their fonts instead of a worthless character like for example the second apostrophe, ` (japs don't use those anyway), it looks like one too. oh well.

>>6372587

Thank you yet again. I'm almost done formatting everything.

Though, in script 3-4, your translation seems to have 12 lines, while the script itself has 13 lines. Did you cut a line on purpose? Is everything here?

The 13th line is this one, by the way.

勇気がなかっただけなんだろうな

>>6372637
script3-4, revised.

The little girl that played with the rabbit,
Watching over her from the shadows had become a routine.
That lonely girl,
Was always stuck in my heart.
That's why, watching her playing wit the rabbit,
I felt really relieved.
However, we never talked to each other.
I had also played with the cat.
If I, who played with the cat, approached her, <<<
I didn't know if she would have a coughing fit.
That's why I could only watch her from afar.
I'm sure such things were just excuses.
I just didn't have any courage.

Here's a new version. Everything this brave anon-kun did is here, meaning all the journal pages from Metsu. All credit from this goes to him.

http://www.mediafire.com/?s3ysr63nrj19629

Still, I was done a lot early than I expected I guess I'll keep working.

>>6372697

...alright, I'm clearly not paying enough attention to the thread.

Hold on, I'll revise the beta.

Here's 0.5 proper

http://www.mediafire.com/?b8a0jypzx0bubf6

>>6372802
Neat. I may get started on the text files, then.

>>6372835

You should take a damn break, son. If this keeps up, you'll have translated 70% of the game or something.

I'm going to sleep. Too tired to think about anything already.

I'll try to post the rest of the endings by tomorrow. G'night and thanks for all your support!

>>6372892
No problem. You get some sleep.

I love this thread. ;_;

>>6371622
I would translate that as, "My heart beat quickened", or "My heart was beating wildly." But I might translate it differently based on the context.

Tonight's progress:
Began memo.txt, quickly abandoned.
Finished musics.txt, needs phrasing work.
うーじへ.txt finished.
おねがい.txt finished.
うさぎのうーたろう.txt finished.

>>6373550
Oh, oh, quicken is good. I like quicken.

>>6372052
Typing noko in the email field- Return to the thread you just posted in.
Typing sage lets you post in a thread without bumping it (but most retards on here think it's a voting system).
Also this is great. Thanks for the translation! You should spam it in forums and places talking about Irisu Syndrome.

test

I see that despite everything you did not stop working. I couldn't have wished for a better co-worker.

Just haul everything you have through to me and I'll code it in. Though I may not post so much in this part of the morning because I'm visiting my sick granny.

Poor sick granny. I think she's going to die today.

>>6373602
I guess you use spreadsheets a lot...?

Oops, forgot to put my tripcode on.

>>6374499

This post is mine, by the way.

i wonder, could anyone good enough with photoshop or such try to translate the menu images too?

>>6374747
That's not a tripcode, it's a mere name. I suggest that you get a real tripcode to use for this thread. Thanks for you hard work by the way.

>>6374769

Dunno how. Teach me, oh knowledgeable person.

Pretty please?

>>6374804
You would put a # after your name along with words etc. E.g. OSad#4chan

>>6374961

Like, for example, Prof. Anonymous #yourtripcodehere.

There's also a secure tripcode (just add another #) but that's for jerks.

Also, how's the TL/hacking going on?

Testing.

>>6374985

Well, right now I'm waiting for my co-worker to haul his translations so I can code them in, and I'm going over the 1-0 script to see if I can fix that problem where sentences start before others are done.

Don't worry, it's not stalled, though the pace slowed down a little. Can you believe granny broke her leg in four different places after a car hit her? What a jerk driver.

I think you guys should free up some space for me at the /jp/ stream. I can't work straight without that.

>>6375211
Quickly! Make way for OSad.

>>6375211

Uh, join the relay server? Main's always full at this time.

http://www.mediafire.com/?vet9o1gf8hhna3g

Just a small fix to see if it'll work. I removed everything the game might not like from the first ending. That includes commas and slashes. I hope that solves the issues.

Working juices are flowing thanks to hentai student's relay server. Hurrah!

>>6375211
You can find an open slot if you check out the relay list.
http://skully.hopto.org/playing.php?page=relays

>>6375536

Oh, I can see why I was trying for half an hour without success. I was trying to connect to your server, but it's down.

That's sad, man. I like pyonta-kun's relay server better than any other.

So the second ending is completely fucked. The sentences were formatted with a timer for the japanese text, and now the english sentences are dissapearing waaay too fast.

I believe I am now feeling the pain of what being a game programmer really is.

>>6375693

Happens to a lot - and the best - of us.

Maybe shorten the sentences? To another phrasing, I mean.

>>6375717

The sentences aren't actually long. It's just that the japanese text is so small that it could be displayed on the screen with the due time given. I can't shorthen out sentences that are already pretty small.

Right now I'm trying to do what I did to Metsu, some line breaking. My co-worker seems to have vanished, so I'll wait a while for him to come back. If he doesn't, I'll resume the translation without the files he was supposed to give me.

Until then, I'll try to make the endings actually readeable. Keeping in touch.

Guh. I can't focus on the stream with Irisu's music. It's godlike and all, but the stream's music is awesome too.

The worst part is, the code that disables the music and enables debug mode (which would help me a lot to see the endings faster) seems to do nothing on the game when I turn them on. SADFACE.

>>6375791
Sleep took me.

おねがい.txt

○To everyone

Day 1, everyone is getting along well for the time being.
In the hopes that you don't show unnatural behavior, I earnestly thank you.


musics.txt

♪About 10 hours looking at the ceiling
♪Today also none of the friends talked
♪Call zero
♪Irisu Syndrome
♪March Hare
♪The cat and rabbit had no past
♪USAGI Note
♪I thought that it seemed that childish

I really like these. The names are fitting.

うーじへ.txt

One person was erased.
From around here bit by bit the climax is coming.

Edo secretly vanished in the dead of night.

Uuji, please suggest going to search for Edo.
While going to search together, please vanish unnoticed.


>>6375791
I think changing the sleep number in the automatic parts changes the delay before the next line.

>>6375826
Whoops, forgot one.
うさぎのうーたろう.txt

In the dark I close my eyes and strange objects rain down the backs of my eyelids.
I will destroy them in turn.
One-by-one, carefully, with a popping sound.
It's a habit from my childhood.
I do this and the entanglements of my mind loosen.
I noticed that throughout today, I was playing that game.

The title of this .txt I cannot translate. The other ones are a bit easy.
I only worked on the small .txts, we've got some large ones to tackle today.

Oh, there you are. I sort of missed you.

Don't tell anyone though.

Anyway, I figured out how to fix the 10k ending. I'll get started on your stuff in a jiffy~

>>6375868

"wereabouts" should be "whereabouts"

かいまく.txt


Concept: On an island(?) the outbreak of a serial murder incident!


The actors are three people.

○Edo（♂）
His role is to disappear first.

○うーじ（♂）
His role is to disappear second while going to search for Edo。

○いりす（♀）
Her role is to reamin until the end。

I have officialy turned a pro with messing with this game's formatting.

Who knows, I might code a sequel.

http://www.mediafire.com/?vet9o1gf8hhna3g

Here's the version with the first ending fixed. I made lines that are too long break into two. However, they appear simultaneously, which can be a bit disorientating. Just remember to read from top to botton and stuff.

Also, the second line from every line that has been broken into two won't dissapear until the next broken line shows up. Despite the 'delete, 1' command I've added, this issue stands.

I also increased the timer from 180 to 300, giving you plenty of time to read. Now you can properly watch this ending without raging to me.

>>6375826

Watson Go released those in his Muzie page.grab them if you want, I guess.

>awkwardly. picaling

えどへ.txt

We will gradually begin from nightfall.

Please appropriately fabricate ghost stories.
Like planned at our recent meeting, incorporate what we talked about into your story.

>>6376010
you need to put in
#delete, 1
#delete, 2
^the delete, 2 makes it delete the second line.

>>6375826

Watson released those songs in his Muzie page a few years back. USAGI NOTE and Irisu Syndrome are great, IMO.

>>6376010

Just tested. Text is still cutting off.

>that are too long break into two. However, they appear simultaneously, which can be a bit disorientating. Just remember to read from top to botton and stuff.

I didn't see any lines appearing at the same time. It looks the same as it did previously. Are you sure you uploaded the right one?

>>6376067

But isn't 0 the first number? So the second line should be 1, since 0 is the first line.

>>6376084
I just looked at the coding instructions. You're right in theory, but I dunno why it isn't working. Try check to see if the game's already using ID 1 for that scene.

>>6376082

I'm sure I uploaded the right one... It's fine here on my end, I just tested it.

http://www.mediafire.com/?vet9o1gf8hhna3g

Here, reuploaded for you. Please give me feedback.

>>6376132

You have really good taste for pictures that distract and arouse me at the same time, did you know that?

>>6375924

Are these two names untranslated on purpose? Or can I just put their respective owners here?

>>6376200
Oh, no, I just forgot.

Coded all your recent translations into the game.

http://www.mediafire.com/?vet9o1gf8hhna3g

Also, "Today none of my friends talked" is my favorite song. Thanks for clearing that up.

>>6376229
I personally like Call Zero and Usagi NOTE.

Script 1-1 has been fixed for a more english friendly format.

Script 1-2 is coming sloooowly due to my inability to interpret certain lines.

あたし知ってるんだからね
I believe it's something along the lines of "I know what I saw"

あんたいっつも、智のこと見てたでしょ
Nooo idea.

授業中に横目でチラチラチラチラ
"You were always throwing side glances at school" though the チラチラチラチラ
part probably proves me wrong.

いちいちバレバレなのよ
Nooo idea either. Ugh. This might take a while.

>>6376322
あたし知ってるんだからね
Something along the lines of "Because I knew it"

あんたいっつも、智のこと見てたでしょ
You were always watching Satoru, weren't you?

授業中に横目でチラチラチラチラ
You were casting sidelong glances in class.

いちいちバレバレなのよ
Something like "One-by-one, I figured it out."

Random question; do you plan to translate the names of the letters?

This is so awesome,
and makes me very happy.
I will play it soon.

>>6376372
>いちいちバレバレなのよ
More like: "You're so obvious every time."

>>6376394
You mean the names of the .txts? Yeah.

>>6376405

Cool.

>>6376404
Ah, thanks much.

OSad + other translation people., I love you.

>>6376394

I don't think translating the name of the letters is a good idea. The game has a separate text file for associating all the letters with events in the game, so if we change the names of the letters, the game won't be able to tell anymore where the letters are.

>>6376432
Aww, we love you too.

>>6376468
I already tested it out. If we change the names in the text too, it's all good.

あげは.txt

What with the strange person I saw and Edogawa's ghost story, it already seemed like they were preparing for something.

I knew it.

I think that it was too absurd. Yeah. Really.

Anyhow, what a tactless surprise party!

Well, but, they did work to that extent for my sake.

That makes me a little happy.

Incidentally, I said some terrible things to Kyoko, huh?

Though it didn't seem like she was listening.

Sorry.

But really, that girl, though she has some strange points, she's not a bad girl.

Since she seems to always be coughing and her throat seems bad, I had to notice.

This time it's not this lively,
Alone with Satoru、I want to go somewhere quiet.

Speaking of Satoru, he's still drawing those creepy pictures.

Pictures in a cute design of endless suicidal cats.

Geez, I really wish you'd stop that! (sweat drop)

I tried asking that, but it seems he didn't care.

Recently, he seems to be imitating the style of some foreign cartoonist called something-or-other.

"In that case, draw rabbits like the original material!" I said,
This time around it really seems to be suicidal rabbits.

On this recent trip he also seemed to bring an illustration notebook,
Oh how I love you!

Well, since I'm a cat lover, it's better than cats. Just kidding.

I think Kyouko is a more accurate romanization of her name

god damn, I must be doing something wrong, I can't get over 5000 points in this game.

>>6376676
Oops, yeah, typo. What would I do without you guys?

>>6376676

I was thinking the same thing, but I just left it Kyoko since I believe it's more accurate.

In the end though, it's just a 'u'. I guess I can fix it if I remember which files have her name.

>>6376722

I used to be like this. The trick is to keep your bar full. Forget about huge combos and stuff, just focus on keeping your bar as high as possible.

The little flashing balls are a godsend. When you see one, stop EVERYTHING you're aiming for and toss a block at it. It'll fill your bar really fast and give you a nice chance to keep going for a while.

After that, the points come naturally. Just focus on making small combos instead of huge ones. That helps too.

>>6376773
memo.txt. It is Kyouko.
入巣京子（いりす・きょうこ/いりす）

1-2 is surprisingly difficult to interpret with my limited knowledge. Soo many difficult sentences. It is way too complicated for my underdeveloped brain.

Here's a new version with the above text coded in, and some of the 20k ending as well.

http://www.mediafire.com/?vet9o1gf8hhna3g

>>6376949

...that picture sure came out wrong.

Also, Pyonta-kun is a pretty cool guy. A pretty cool guy indeed.

>>6376967
see
>>6376404
for a more educated translation of that last line.
You want me to take a swing at it, too?

>>6377058

Uh, you know, this started out with me trying to do the translations, but I'm actually a lot more comfortable with you doing them. I can focus on coding the scenes properly that way.

I mean, it's fine if you want to do everything, translation-wise. Though I'm feeling a little bad for dumping all the work on you. You already translated Metsu and most of the letters.

>>6377086
I don't mind at all.

>>6377091

Ohh, alright then. You can be the main translator, and I'll focus on coding stuff.

I believe we make quite a team.

script1-2

Hey、answer me!
Where did they go, Kyouko?
Say something, Kyouko!
I knew it
You were always watching Satoru, right?!
You were always glancing at him in class,
It was obvious every time!
Besides, I saw you.
You were peeking at Satoru's notebook as you pleased!
What were you thinking? You're not in elementary school!
You were smiling while looking at the notebook.
To be excited over our Satoru's drawings,
Were you that jealous,
That just saying "let me see" wasn't okay?
You were always sneakily lurking about.
It's disgusting!

script1-3

.....You know?
Even now, I think some things are weird.
You were sneaking around in unseen places, right?
Where did you take Satoru? Edogawa?
........
They're somewhere, right? Where?! Kyouko!
Irisu Kyouko!

script1-4

Kyouko...?
What's...with that...look?...

>>6377271

SLAM. Hahahaha.

script1-5


Happy birthday!
Uujima「Happy birthday to you~」
Edogawa「What're you doing sitting on the floor?」
Uujima「Isn't that bad manners?」
Age「...」
Age「...huh?」
Edogawa「Are you so happy you're about to cry?」
Uuji「It's all good.」
Irisu「Ageha.」
Age「...huh?」
Irisu「Happy birthday.」
Age「...」
Age「...Thanks.」

>>6377324
1-5? 2-1.

http://www.mediafire.com/?8ezcedfa1af76cc

Everything up to where you translated is here. However, there's still some more to script 2-1. Don't know if you have realised it or not.

After this, just a couple more files, rename the letters, iron out the bugs and we're pretty much done!

Until Kai comes out, I mean.

>>6377593
The script after that is credits, but I can do it easily enough.

Planning：てつ
Graphics：桐 御陵
Music：Watson
Testers：大谷 きむら 下林 土屋
Testers：つとう 星猫 真諏 ミラ みれ
E N D

>>6377612

Ugh, wait, hold on. I think I screwed up my 2-1.

Here, check it for me, please. There's some stuff ABOVE the credits, but BELOW of your translations.

http://www.mediafire.com/?8ezcedfa1af76cc

>>6377612
260/776 lines translated... these last three text files are a full 66% of Irisu Syndrome's text. Maybe more like 70% when we count in that the average line length is longer. Well, just means I'd better get started.

>>6377700
you cut out some lines by accident. Check
>>6377324
again.

This is a great justice upon justices.

>>6377700
> these last three text files are a full 66% of Irisu Syndrome's text.
That's stuff that still hasn't been translated? What about the stuff that was posted at the beginning of the first thread in this chain?

>>6377821
That's all a plot summary. Verbatim none of that appears anywhere in the game. Those summaries are all third-person, while the story is all told in game by first-person accounts.

So there's a little problem with 1-3 script I might not be able to solve.

Kyouko herself, or rather, her sprite and animation, are making the game skip ahead on script 1-3. Basically, when she reaches the window, that's it. The game interprets that as the time to trigger the next script, interrupting 1-3 abruptly and beginning 1-4.

Thing is, I have NO idea on how to modify Kyouko's walking animation, imposing a serious problem on 1-3.

However, the rest of the ending should be working fine with this version I'm uploading (turns out, there was a broken line that made the game crash on 1-2, which I fixed). Still waiting for those untranslated lines on 2-1, though.

http://www.mediafire.com/?8ezcedfa1af76cc

Next, I'll fix the timer on 3-0.

thank you so much for your work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>6377929
see
>>6377726
All the lines are there, you just accidentally skipped some.

Also goddamnit Irisu, even killing our translations.

>>6377929
How'd it go in the original script?

>>6378115

Well, like I said earlier, the devs made this game VERY TIGHTLY LOCKED in a japanese font timer. Events flow one after the other with no time in between them.

The developers simply made the text end when Kyouko reaches the screen. Our text takes longer because the sentences are longer, so they need more time to appear. However, we can't afford that time because Kyouko comes in and murders it.

>>6378153
The only thing I can think of is that we need to speed up the rate that the text appears. We can do that, right? There's a speed option in the code.

>>6378221

Yes, but well, it could be any of those numbers. It's definetely not the third ones from left to right, since I used those to change the positioning of the second lines of text I added. And it's not the sleep ones either, since that just changes the time the text stays on the screen.

I'll test them, but right now I'm surprisingly tired. And tomorrow (I mean, today), I have to wake up at 6AM, so please excuse me for today.

>>6378287
I'm betting it wouldn't be the x-values, because normally when y indicates one axis x indicates the other. So those two on the far right are the most likely.

For those following along at home, what I've gotten so far from Irisu's diary.


Those two seemed to have fun talking again today.
It's annoying.
-------------
Noisy.
Those two next to me are noisy.
What in the world is so much fun?

I wish everyone would just die.
-------------
Today my eyes met with a lone boy's.
He gave me a nod with a bit of an embarassed smile.
He was a cute kid.
----
Uujima Satoshi-kun.
That was the kid with the cute smile.
The gentle kid who even gave a kind smile to someone like me.
He's always alone.
Just like me.
----
One day, I peeked at Edogawa-kun's notebook.
There, a strange world was spread before me.
Many pencil drawings.
A cat, grilling in an earthen brazier behind closed doors.
A cat, flying a kite in a thunderstorm.
A cat, performing a slow suicide with a lot of tobacco smoke.
猫が真上に発砲して自由落下してきた弾丸に脳天を打ちぬかれていたり、
Illustrations expressing such hatred toward cats were lined up.
He was like me, a person with the same feelings.
That time that our eyes met was fate.
And.
From that day, Uujima-kun and I began to get along.
---
During lectures is a happy time where I can be togther with Uujima-kun.
There are always four vacant seats between us.
Somehow or another this was the decided placement.
He felt that I liked this incomplete sense of distance.
--------
Recently, I have been referring to him as Uuji.
Uuji. Uuji.
Uuji. Uuji. Uuji. Uuji.
...Uuji?
Is this fate?

>>6378316
Ah... I wish to be loved like that.

>>6378347

Don't we all?

Also,
>One day, I peeked at Edogawa-kun's notebook.

Should be Uuji's

>>6378379
>>6378347

I don't know if you guys realised, but this type of love kills.

>>6378439
"Ah.. I wish she would kill me" -Uuji

That kind of love only 'killed' because Uuji wanted so actually, if he didn't draw the bunnies suiciding things would be different.

>>6378439
The problem wasn't so much that Irisu is mentally fucked up as that both Irisu AND Uuji are. If Uuji had actually stated to Ageha that he had feelings for Irisu (as he knew she liked him due to peeking into her diary), this whole incident might have been avoidable. Well, unless Ageha is the overly jealous type and/or went yandere herself.

>>6378379
Oh damn, thanks. This is what happens when your translator is an airhead.

>>6378456

Like I said.

This type of love kills willingly.

You guys are loving her willingly.

>>6378312
Also this anon is right. The two far right selections are the "speed," though I haven't played around with it enough to know what exactly they do.

>>6378480
No, no. I'm not fucked up like Uuji.

I'm sure I could make things different.

>>6378511
The main problem is that Uuji being fucked up is what caused him and Irisu to become close in the first place.

Okay, got it. The first number to the right of the text controls time delay between printing letters. The second number just controls font size.

>>6378511

I can't think of any better way to die than being killed by Irisu. Uuji's not that messed up when you think about it.

325/776 lines finished. 40% completion.

>>6379882
Keep up the good work!

stealth burnp

So why does the thread get bumped so lowly every time I go to sleep for a few hours? I demand an explanation here, people.

Is it the Mortal Kombat spam? Or is it the Railgun spam? Surely it's not the freaking Chie spam.

Alrighty, first thing to do today is try to get the 1-3 script sorted out, then I'll start coding Irisu's diary into the game~

>>6380105
:V

>>6380635
Yeah, it's more than likely the spam and people paying more attention to it rather than this thread. Don't worry though, /jp/'s a really slow board, so it'll take a lot for this thread to be bumped off.

I'm being assailed by a stupidly big wave of headackes. Hold on, I need to get my thoughts in place with some aspirin.

Protip: never wake up at 6AM without going back to sleep right after. It's bad for your health.

...also my tripcode slipped off for some reason. I think I woke up the wrong way today.

She's dying without her hat. ;_;

So I changed all the text timers from 7 to 2. This SHOULD make the text appear faster, though I'm still testing.

http://www.mediafire.com/?kgwqhhgomclklvj

This version is mainly for fixing the 2-1 script (the lines that I've had skipped, sorry!~), though the changes I made on 1-3 are still here. If someone can help me test it, I'd appreciate, since I'll probably have to change the the sleep timer as well, multiple playthroughs will be required to fine-tune this part.

>>6381211

Oh, and, Kyouko fucks up the script around the "you were always watching Satoru, right?" line, for a point of reference if someone is actually gonna help me test it.

If the text appears faster or the game gets past this line, it's already progress.

>>6381217
Play testing is hard. I hate to see Irisu cry.

>>6381174
;_;

>>6381229

She doesn't cries on the 20k ending. Only on the 10k one.

>>6381235
she cries if you lose quickly a lot, which is the easiest way to unlock the CGs.

>>6381261

Why would you DO that? Making Irisu unhappy on purpose...

That's the worst kind of person.

>>6381265

You can't say SHIT. You did that when you were testing the CG's.

>>6381268

Oh, you're right.

Whatever.

>>6381265
>>6381268
>>6381269

protip: samefagging doesn't work when you use a tripcode.

>>6381367
Schizophrenia

Bumping from the depths.

Status report?

Haha. Wow.

bump to counter spam

Bumping to counter spam.

>>6381550
Yeah, it's amazing.

>>6381541

I'm talking with myself through an image board. If I wanted to samefag, I would actually take off my tripcode. I'm not THAT stupid.

So whatever.

>>6381367

Back from sleep. I'm coding what my co-worker's translated from the diary into the game. Since he is the one translating it, I'll hold off from picking it up for a while. If he doesn't shows up, I'll pick up from where he left off.

Cheering for completion of the project~

>>6381773
If you haven't noticed, I'm here already.

>>6381773
Also for these last text files, I'll just throw the completed ones in a rar on mf or something, so don't bother doing anything with them.

>>6381839

Oh, there you are. Didn't see you coming, sorry. You image posting people all sort of look the same.

Then I'll wait for your files. Thanks for your hard work, by the way.

>>6381906
No problem. It's quite long, though, and there's some sticky bits, so it'll probably be a couple days.

>>6381928

That just means I'll have time to make sure every event in this game looks it's best.

Not even Kyouko is gonna stop me. I am omnipotent when it comes to this game, goddammit.

>>6381939
try out just shifting the lines over rather than breaking them up, if possible. Should be second number from the left in the scripts.

>>6381976

Care to elaborate? I don't get your line of thought here.

>>6382152
Instead of having to break long lines in two, maybe try just shifting the lines to the left, so that there's room enough. If not, are you still having trouble with the two lines of text appearing simultaneously? If so, are you sticking a wait command between the two lines?

Hey, you guys are doing a pretty awesome job, and I wanna thank you guys for it. Again. Even though so many (I think, uh, five) people already have.

Also, are you guys planning to translate the non-script text? Like, the images and stuff?

>>6382212

Ohh, ooh! That image looks nice! Well, we don't really have an artist to draw new menu thingies, but the plan was on translating EVERYTHING so...

yeah.

>>6382219

That's a pretty good idea! I never actually thought about shifting some of the text to the left.

Though, I'd rather leave everything as it is now and instead try to get the simultaneous appearance out of the way. I think having two lines appear one on top of the other is quite nice.

I believe sticking a wait command between lines just makes it so that the next line of text only appears when you left click. Or is it that a next command?

>I think having two lines appear one on top of the other is quite nice.

In most cases, yes. In the 2nd ending there are was at least one instance where the text went below the screen.

>>6382261

Figures that would happen. What line was it?

I beleive I have reached godlike skill levels on this game. I can score 20k points with my eyes closed.

I'm slooowly fine tuning the 20k ending. However, it should be ready by tonight.

>>6382628
Talk about skill again when you can get 100k scores.

http://www.mediafire.com/?xwj0pz7p4a5fzxl

Here's the new version, with the 20k ending properly edited. The timers have been HEAVILY hacked, so you'll have to be a fast reader. I tried making it look as normal as possible, because once I changed all the script timers to 1, Ageha started to look like a hagger speaking at the speed of light.

>>6382659

No way, dude. I'm good but I'm modest. 100k is for the rich boys who have too much time on their hands.

>>6382983

Oh, also, please put the window as far right as possible while watching. Kyouko has to walk more because of that, giving the script just enough time to play fully.

And coming back on the translated menus, any artists out there willing to draw english icons for the menus separately, like the one on the picture?

It doesn't needs to be anything complicated, for example, >>6382219 icons cover that quite well, but they're all glued together and I can't use that, so they need to be drawn separately for me to put them in the game.

>>6383006

>>6383006
..or this

>>6383451
Can't we have the letters to be a little more curvy? Just a little though.

>>6383456
here
Haha that was fast.

>>6383454 is much better than >>6383451

Ohh, ohh, thanks!

Though, you guys vote on something. We can't have both.

(well, actually, we CAN put both. One for the static image, and one for the retracting image that triggers when you hover the mouse over the icon)

How about this?

>>6383464
Hmm.. sounds like a good idea. But we should use >>6383454 and then work on another model for it when you put the mouse over.

>>6383469
I think Start2.png is better.

Testing out a few fonts. My font sense is kinda off so just tell me which looks fine.

and this~

(damn flood detection)

Round fonts look better with the game, but I think >>6383469 looks pretty good in a journal kind of way.

so far start2 was the most similar to the original. one complaint i have about it is that the outline's too uniform, while in the original it was shifted down.

you could probably simulate an effect like that by putting 2 fonts on top of each other, one being the color, other the outline effect.

>>6383493
Yeah, I was planning to do that once we know what font to use.

>>6383493

So we're having another slight problem. So you need both dat and dat.dxa in your Irisu folder for it to work. That's because once the files are decrypted, the game starts to inquire for both sources to load the scripts. One doesn't works without the other.

Unfortunately, re-encrypting the files doesn't seems to work. You still need both sources even with dat.dxa re-encrypted. So what we're facing here is a similar problem with img.dxa. You'll need both sources in your folder for it to work, but the img folder sums up to a whopping 64 mb's.

So that's not cool. I'm trying to re-encode img.dxa in a way that you won't need the img folder, but I'm not sure it'll work out.

At least the replacement worked.

>>6383597
I don't think the extra size is much of a problem

>>6383657

Yeah well, my upload speed sucks. If I'm gonna have to upload 60+ mb's everytime I want to make an update, you guys might as well give me all the modified icons so I only need to upload it ONCE.

>>6383670
Oh didn't thought about it.

I wish I could help with that.

>>6383670
How many icons need to be modified?

About this much.

>>6383709

Oh, actually, I should be apologising. I realised that the problem we're having is mainly due to my lazyness.

If I don't find a way to repackage everything, I'll upload the whole file. It's no problem.

>>6383745
20.

a lot of them are repeats though, like, 4 differently colored versions of each menu entry and 4 title versions.

then there are 3 unique ranking text images and one cg with text in it.

if the scribbles/concept art ones count, there's few more.

>>6383819
There are some pictures I never saw before in your folder.

>>6383829

The devs left a bunch of concept art or something just lying around on the img folder. I believe these never made into the game.

I'm sorry, this is taking a while. I'll try to work on it as much as I am able, but translation will probably be the last thing to get done. Even so, don't expect anything spectacular. Thank you very much for your collective patience. And please, have a nice day.

>>6383845

Take as much time as you want. You're our backbone here, it's only fair you take your time to make something we can all enjoy.

And don't worry so much. We're all rooting for you here!

The game is using an older version of DxLib which can't read archives packed by newer versions. Try the older encoder from DxLib 2.25b; it appears to work.

Download page: http://homepage2.nifty.com/natupaji/DxLib/dxdload.html
Direct link(VC++ version): http://homepage2.nifty.com/natupaji/DxLib/DxLib_VC2_25b.exe

Note that while the encoder from 2.25b seems to work for packing, the 2.25b decoder does NOT appear to work for unpacking the game's original archives.

>>6383886

Strange, still doesn't seems to be working for me.

Am I using the correct command?

>>6383927

...one day I'll learn to post my images along with my messages.

If you could probably upload the images as well as the translations to them, I could probably edit them it when I have time.

>>6383944

http://www.mediafire.com/?s2n9yar55rylrec

Here's what I believe to be every icon in japanese we're missing. All the files are named so it's fairly obvious of what is what.

If you have any questions on something though, please, do ask. Thanks for taking your time!

>>6383929
Yeah, that's the right command.

For what it's worth, my method of testing was this:
1) Unpacked a fresh dat.dxa with DxLib 3.04b's DxaDecode.exe
2) Modified some text
3) Renamed dat.dxa to _dat.dxa
4) Repacked dat.dxa with DxLib 2.25b's DxaEncode.exe
5) Renamed the "dat" folder to "_dat".
6) Fired up the game and confirmed that my changes showed up.

>>6383967
Editing the buttons wouldn't be a problem except for the logo; I would like to leave it as is, since it looks nice.

Opinions?

>>6383973

It's working for me now! Turns out I didn't even noticed my own stupidity, I was actually repacking dat.dxa instead of img.dxa.

So now the game works straight without the dat folder and img folder. Double win?

>>6384018

I also vote to keep the logo as it is. I believe it looks mystical and mesmerizing.

It just looks so good with the game, the english one kinda makes it look shitty.

>>6384018
I'm fine with the original logo.

eh if the logo really has to stay, would it be possible to include a small translated version under it or something?

i'm not a fan of leaving logos in moonrunes.

>>6384032
Me too!
I want only "Start", "Ranking" and "Gallery" no more in moonspeak but the logo in moonspeak is fantastic!

Alright, I'm not touching the logo; I'll just place a small translated text under it.
Finished in editing all "ranking" and "start" buttons, will edit the rest later since I need to do stuff first.

>>6384200

Boom.

>>6384238
And what is in the middle?
"Gallery"?

>>6384275
Obviously

>>6384275

The name under the icon states that it is "menu_story", but yes, it is essencially the gallery.

>>6384298
Going by the translation convention so far, it'll be "album"

>>6384335

I guess that's fine, though something like Gallery really would be more fitting.

At least, that's what I think. Anyway, I'm going to sleep. It's like, 2AM here.

>>6384385
But it's a holiday for us. Stay up some more~

>>6384388

Oh, alright.

Laptop's battery ends in one hour anyway,- wait a second, you're BR too?

>>6384411
Yep. It's pretty surprising to see a BR in here, even more translating Irisu.

>>6384458

Heh. I would love to have that honor. All I did was CG's 1, 3, 4 and 5. My awesome co-worker just popped out of nowhere and started helping me out since then.

Heck, I'm probably the person who's least doing things now.

>>6384475
To be fair, you did help me with half of CG 2 as well.

>>6384507

I'm pretty sure you posted the first five lines from it before you went to sleep, and then you posted the other twelve when you woke up.

I literally translated a single line from that CG. That doesn't compares to what you did, man.

Tonight's status:
375/776 lines completed, 48% completion

I know this isn't necessary every night, but please bear with me. Having to report my progress makes me feel bad if I don't put forth some effort, so it ensures that I keep my work ethic.

>>6385176
Good job :3

>>6385271
>:3
Please don't do this.

>>6385301
Oh, I thought :3 was an acceptable smiley on /jp/. Times have changed~

>>6385435
As always, only ironically.

>>6385301
>>6385435
>>6385448
Who cares!

>>6385456
People who care about /jp/ care. Go back to Gaia.

>>6385458
Find something worthwhile to complain about instead. A colon and three is not worthwhile. It's just being pedantic.

>>6385466
Pretty much this. Anyways, we're going off topic. I can't wait for the translation to be done.

Back awake.

http://www.mediafire.com/?f1ydaavvfoy7avo

Here's the version with the two englis buttons, if you care for actual progress. When you hover your mouse over the icons, they're gonna pop back into japanese because there's no replacement for the expanding icons yet.

Oh, also, I'm fairly sure you can delete the dat folder from your Irisu directory now.

This is great because sincerely, that dat folder is like a huge bomb full of spoilers if you never played the game.

Hmmm, I was thinking, maybe it'd be nice if there were names before the text? Since it'd be a lot easier to read then. Like in the pic I posted, I have no idea who's talking.

>>6385725

I can make it happen, but it's not happening for that CG. No space to put the names.

Though, I'll try.

>>6385730
Ah, I see. Good luck bro.

Here's the version with english names for most of the CG's, except the last one because it's pretty obvious who's talking on it. And I think it's more gloomy and impending with no names on it.

And since you didn't knew who was talking on the second CG, I took my liberty to write it down for you:

Ageha「They say that witch's strange experiments... huh, you're quiet, what's wrong?」
Edogawa「You really are bad with this sort of thing, aren't you?~」
Ageha「...it's not that! I saw it just now! I saw some person with weird clothes!」
Edogawa「What do you mean?」
Ageha「You know, like an apron dress? That kind of odd skirt and clothes.
wearing a hat like a witch's, with rabbit ears sprouting from it,
a person like that was standing and looking at me!」
Uuji「What's that, it's not like Edogawa's ghost story. It's a rabbit witch.」
Ageha「I saw a figure in the distance, uh, here, someone besides us was here,
It seemed like that person was watching throughly, silently staring at us.」
Uuji「Maybe you were just seeing things?」
Ageha「...No! She was a bit far, and she left quickly...
But I definetely saw her, I'm sure!
I wondered if I was seeing things, so I felt bad and tried to forget it
and didn't say anything to anyone, but I really saw someone!」
Edogawa「We'll all be materials for the witch's experiment, then~」
Ageha「Aah, stop it, stop it!!」
Edogawa「Ahh, I'm sorry, it was too funny. Let's sleep.」
Edogawa「If you sleep for a night, you can forget about unpleasant things.」

And that's the last we ever heard from Edogawa. Poor, poor Edo-kun. Destined to dissapear at the mercy of a bread nailbat. Oh, the horrors of this game!

...also, here's the link I forgot again. I swear, it's always something.

http://www.mediafire.com/?f1ydaavvfoy7avo

Editor here, finally I got free time time and I'm wondering if we are going for "album" or "gallery"

>>6385812

Whichever one you prefer. I was thinking Gallery because it's the most common choice, but Album doesn't sounds so bad either.

>>6385831
Come to think of it, the japanese word does say "album" so I guess I'll stick to that.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ddpcai63k7vdo4e
Here you go. Translated menus except for the Irisu logo.

>>6385886

I'm gonna wait until you finish the Album icon before I put it all in the game.

>>6385886
The files here includes all icons/menus except for the title. (yes, it has the album and the other icons)

Here is a sample for the title logo by the way, opinions please.

>>6385924

...oh, wait. I didn't see the album ones right on top. I was unconsiously looking for Gallery so I missed it.

Silly me.

>>6385924
looks good to me

>>6385924

I would substitute the little text below the actual logo with Irisu Syndrome.

Also, all the images are here and they're looking pretty. Good job.

>>6385939
What does the little text say anyway?

>>6385951

That's a pretty damn good question. I can only guess the top text says Irisu Syndrome, so the bottom is a mystery.

>>6385955
I think it says しょうこうぐん (Shoukougun?) or something. What the hell does that mean?

>>6385961

Shokogun means literally "a cluster of symptoms".

...maaaaybe we shouldn't get rid of that. It sounds important.

>>6385972

Oh, wait. Wrong word. I think shoukougun means "burned out" or something.

>>6385977
Okay whatever. Let's just keep that there.

The letter on the blood in title_logo_ex.png means "metsu", right?
Also, can you make a test screenie again of what the title screen looks like with >>6385924 applied

>>6385991

Yes and bloop.

>>6385977
Shoukougun is "Syndrome". It's the furigana for the title.
>>6385725
I don't like this. Shouldn't we try to stick as closely to the source material as possible?

>>6386062

As much as I'd like to comply with you, I do admit, it's sort of hard to identify who's saying what, at least in the first and second CG's.

I don't like the names either, but we need to put SOMETHING in there to make it easier. Maybe change the font color?

About the space for names: You can make them short like "Edo, Age, Uuj" and insert those short names AFTER the line.

I think that should do, like "*text* (Edo)"

>>6385766
Also, these are wrong. Edo's the one telling the ghost story, and I'd expect Uuji gets the last line.

>>6386097

I thought you said Ageha was telling the ghost story? I must have mistaken it.

>>6386116
Nah. You can tell because

Edogawa was told to make up ghost stories as part of the plan for the "surprise party"

In respect for my co-worker, I've taken out the names. I believe his wish takes weight over mine, and part of me wants to keep the source material intact as well.

http://www.mediafire.com/?f1ydaavvfoy7avo

Here's the version without the names, and with all menus translated.

>>6386149
i tried adding it, but it only translated 2 of the options (start and ranking) and they still turn into moon when you hover over them. unpacking the img.dxa file showed they're unchanged there too.

you sure you uploaded/linked the right files?

>>6386291

That's weird... here. I uploaded it again.

http://www.mediafire.com/?f1ydaavvfoy7avo

Also did slight optimization to 1-3 since it still wasn't playable. Now it SHOULD be playable.

>>6386149
>I've taken out the names.
Aw damn, but people other than us will get confused. Hell some /jp/ers might get confused too. Oh well, I guess.

>>6386298
you linked to the same file as before. the link is identical.

>>6386149
>>6385660
>>6385772
they all link to the same thing, not the updated stuff.

What the hell, I'm sure it's the right files. Hold on.

So mediafire's being stoopad (I'M NOT UPLOADING DUPES, MEDIAFIRE) so I've gotten this version on 2shared.

http://www.2shared.com/file/6uSDXqhm/Irisu_ENv098.html

The english text works great!
But not this... (see pic)

The english text works great!
But not here... (see pic)

>>6386916

http://www.mediafire.com/?dptkepnpj72anf4

Fix'd.

So this thread's gonna autosage soon too. For the next thread, I want christmas decorations.

Christmas decorations, thousands of them. Everywere.

>>6387194

But I don't have any Christmas related Irisu pictures.

>>6387182
Contains all the most recent updates, correct?

>>6388165

I believe every translation/image up to now has been added. The only thing we seem to be missing is the three untranslated files.

I made the mistake of making 20k points right away. It seems it's impossible to get the 10k ending now. I'll check it out later. I made a list of nitpicks and suggestions as I was playing.

-かいまく.txt

>○Ageha（♀）
Her role is to remain until the end。

The name should be Irisu

-4th album CG

5th line: "I didn't heard anything" should be "I didn't hear anything"

-2nd ending
I don't remember exact lines because I was paying attention to the game, but this should be clear enough

"Please make up some X ghost stories" X probably shouldn't be there
Ageha asks if Irisu was jealous. After the question mark there is a comma that shouldn't be there. Other sentences in this ending should be checked for this error as well.
The line right before Ageha says "Irisu Kyouko!" cuts off early
I didn't have time to check, but all cases of Irisu's name should be romanized the same way for consistency. Kyouko is the correct way.

"Isn't that bad manners?" Awkward grammar here. Consider rephrasing.

-あげは.txt

Romanization of Kyouko's name is off.

>>6388382

Made all the changes [?] you wanted. Mediafire insists I want to make batch uploads and is jamming the whole thing up. I'm uploading to 2shared again.

http://www.2shared.com/file/koV9krFs/Irisu_ENv0991.html

Is there any filehost you guys prefer other than mediafire? I'm just posting it on 2shared because it's the first that comes to mind.

>>6388382
Thank you for your hard work. It's hard for me to update the script since the official stuff is what OSad is uploading, and I don't want to constantly nag him every time I change something.

Bah. I noticed at least one punctuation error in the 10k ending. Went to type it down and missed the next line. Then I went back to the game to finish reading and completely forgot where the error was. As far as the timing for the text goes though, it all looked okay. Though did you still want the two rows of text to appear at the same time? I noticed that was fixed for some parts in the 20k ending, so I figured it might be able to be fixed for the 10k end.

More stuff I noticed on this playthrough:

-1st CG

Last line. I think the "everyone" is left over from when you were putting the names in front of the text. I'm not sure if you wanted to keep it or not, so I figured I'd point it out.

-2nd ending

Typo: "unnatual attitude" should be "unnatural attitude"
Kyouko's name is romanized as Kyoko in the line before "What's with that look"

-あげは.txt

Romanization of Kyouko's name is off. To be more specific, it's in the 7th line.

If we're not at autosage with this post, I won't be able to make the next thread. I ask that whoever does make the next thread includes both the download link to the game and the latest translation in the OP.

I'll have a look at Metsu and replay the endings tomorrow.

>>6388630
i dunno how to download it.

Also enjoy a drawing of Irisu-chan

>>6389760
Well... we are indeed at bump limit, I believe.

New thread:
>>6389799