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Reposting the translated Metsu backstory because I can. Hopefully it will generate some discussion as /jp/'s rather dead at the moment.

The school had a cat. It was very popular among the kids. One day, someone found a bunny in the schoolyard, so they decided to keep it in a cage. The bunny, with one ear cut off, didn't get as much attention as the cat. Not only that, but those who were seen playing with the bunny were considered "lower class". The bunny seemed to be afraid of people.

Uuji worried about the bunny, and went to see it when people weren't looking, feeling relieved every time he saw it moving about just fine. He sometimes saw the cat and the bunny play together through the fence.

One day, on his way to see his bunny, he saw a girl already there outside the animal pen. She would sometimes talk to the bunny, and feed it. Uuji found out that girl was from another class, and had cat allergy. He just looked at her from afar, heart pounding.
He never tried to speak to her, afraid of causing her to get asthma as he also played with the cat. But in truth, he just didn't have the courage.
One day, the bunny was found dead, head torn apart from its body. They said a dog did it. The body was found hidden somewhere apart from where the head was found.

Ever since, the girl could no longer be found at school. And neither could the cat.

How the hell do you people get 500k in this game? The maximum I ever got was 20k.

Did I get true end, though? I got the whole surprise thing but you apparently only get true end at 500k or something.

Also, translation where

Uuji realized he has been drawing dying cats for some time. He wondered why it was cats...
The day before, a girl in a group behind where he sits, Ageha, was chatting with her friends enjoyably. She said "If I were an animal, I'd probably be a cat" "Yesterday's animal fortune said I was cat!".
Cat? Cat, Cat, Cat... Uuji was thinking about that when he was busy moving his hands.
The group behind him was always talking bad about him. He didn't care, for he had his suicide cat sketching to fill his time with. But one day Edogawa started complaining to the group, and they had a quarrel. Uuji didn't care, and the point of the quarrel never got to his memory.
It seemed that Edogawa had a crush on Ageha. Ageha didn’t seem to realize it, though.
Ah, there was this pale girl who was always alone. Sometimes her eyes met with Uuji's, and he would just smile back. It seemed the girl's name was Irisu Kyouko, and she would always be seen alone.
Uuji saw that Irisu took a peek at his notebook. "What a wonderful girl," he thought, and waited for her to go back to her seat before entering the class. She sat as if she didn't do anything suspicious.
"Ah, Irisu Kyouko. What words can describe her? Looking at her gives me joy. I feel like I want to be killed by her," he thought.
Kyouko seemed to be sitting closer to him lately.
"Would be better if she came even closer..."
There had been traces of someone touching his notebook, especially in the pages with the cats. "Would be better if she looked at it more..."
Drawing the cats had been his daily chore. Since he was using notebooks especially for drawing them, he already had ten notebooks filled with the drawings.
He had never once spoken to the girl. The notebook was sufficient as their means of communication.
It seemed that somewhere overseas, there was a similar picture book like his, but it has rabbits instead.

>>6354198

There's another ending at 50k. I think there might be one at 100k as well, but I never got that far. You just have to practice a bunch until you're good.

One day, he found Ageha, who wasn't feeling well, in the corridor. She seemed like an anemic cat. He brought her to somewhere where she could rest, and that, he thought, was the root of the mistake.
Some days afterwards, Edogawa called out to him, with Ageha smiling beside him. He wondered why. Nevertheless the three of them began talking to each other. He didn’t understand it, but they started to be together more often. Uuji couldn't find the time to draw cats.
Ageha had started becoming closer to Uuji. Before he knew it, she was calling him by his first name already. Since the appearance of the two, the chances of showing the notebook to Kyouko had greatly reduced. Uuji was troubled.
Ageha looked at his notebook without permission. Uuji didn't like it. Ageha seemed to be having fun. Uuji tried to find a good reply to her that would make her think he was crazy, so that she would keep away from him, thus giving him more chances to be with Kyouko. But he could only say "the pictures have no special meanings."
For some reason, the three decided to go for a trip. Why? He didn't get it. He didn't understand the purpose. He'd rather be sleeping at home. Ageha started becoming more intimate with him, and Edogawa was unnecessarily apprehensive.
Summer was coming. People started to wonder why Uuji was still wearing long sleeves. His wrist had something that couldn't be covered with a watch. Never mind. He just decided to go along with the two and make them think he was having a great time.

Uuji wanted to be connected with Irisu again, so he took a peek at her notebook. He found it interesting: written in it were details about a certain "plan". Also, it seemed that the two of them were considered to have steady relations in her writing; that made him happy. The fact that she had strong love for bunnies and hatred against cats left a deep impression inside him. He was very happy with the notebook; it kind of extinguished all those grudges against Edogawa and Ageha.
The "Plan" went like this: the four of them would go to the trip. And as they had fun, Irisu would kill the other two.
One day, in the library, Irisu spoke to the three. She seemed nervous, but got good reception. Uuji's heart began racing, not because it was the first time he heard Irisu's voice, but because he remembered this development from her notebook. The "plan" was to be executed on Ageha's birthday.
If the plan went well, Uuji would get to be together alone with Irisu.
But wait, if the other two do get killed, and Irisu disappears without trace, what would he answer to the police? No, it can't go like this. Hmm, couldn’t he have Irisu change the target to him instead? I get to be killed by Irisu, that'd be the best happy ending for him! Even better if she were to die together with him, but that was too much to ask for.

Irisu's plan would proceed well. Bunny-eared Irisu was wonderful!

Somehow he found himself alone with Ageha. She complained about the drawings. He replied "I’m just imitating a certain foreign work." And she said "Then draw it as it originally was!"
Drew lots of dying bunnies.
Drew lots and lots of dying bunnies. Ageha's idea was very splendid! Considering Irisu's love for bunnies, wouldn’t this be the correct solution?

If he drew bunnies.
If Irisu who's in the middle of her "plan" saw it.
What would she do to Uuji? He got excited just thinking of it

He drew more and more bunnies as the day for the trip drew closer. The night before the trip, he remembered a certain event from the past.
On a rainy day, the boy cut off the rabbit's head using a saw. Splatter. His hands got smeared with blood, fat, and unknown fluids.
The head was severed from the body, placed on the floor. The silent rabbit head seemed to be staring at him.
Getting out of the cage, poured on by rain, the boy brought the body to a certain corner of the schoolyard and hid it in the bushes. He went to clean his hands and the saw, making sure no traces were left.

He woke up. It had been such a long time since he saw that dream.
Uuji saw a dream where a pair of red eyes was saying something. It didn't get off his mind.
The day for the trip came. Uuji confirmed his current feelings. He believed Ageha and Edo were stupid. Ageha for being nice to him. Edo for leading her to him. Now if they were to know the reason why he kept concealing his wrist, how would they react? Would they still be in contact with him? Yes, they would. Stupid fellows.
Hmm, now that he considered it again, it wasn’t good to get the two involved in his plan. What was for sure was that Ageha shouldn't have had feelings for him in the first place. No matter how you looked at it, Ageha and Edo were better off together. If things worked out, the four of them might come out fine and dandy.
Now
If.
If Irisu's plan didn't work out, Uuji wanted to challenge something: getting the relationship of the four in the right place. That is, to change the small world they're in. Then Uuji could get rid of his past, and look for another ending.

Off they went for the trip.

It will be interesting to see what's revealed in Kai. Last part of what's been translated:

Early morning, he went to see the rabbit's condition, choosing the time carefully so he wouldn't bother the girl. As he peeked through the cage, he saw that it was dead. As if sleeping. He wondered if it got sick of living. And he wondered what was born through the death of the rabbit, and also of the future. The animal pen now had nothing. The death of the rabbit would not be cared for by anyone. And the girl would become alone again.

Such a future was unacceptable.

To change it, the boy ran to get the key to the cage. It was suddenly raining heavily. Exasperatingly, he continued running, trying all he could to change the future. So that the soon to be forgotten existence of the rabbit would remain in somebody. At least so someone would think how pitiable it was. At least, let the rabbit become a topic of talk. In any form. So that the girl, who was looking after the rabbit, would get to talk with everyone. Thus, surely she'd get to blend into them.

Was he correct in doing so?

Well, the rabbit did get some attention. "Scary..." "Gotta be careful from now on" Only those words are talked about regarding it. The cat which went missing was the center of everyone's discussion.
A couple of days later, the cat came back. Everyone was happy. No one remembered the rabbit anymore.
What happened to the girl? Unknown. After the incident, that girl was no longer seen.
The boy wondered, whether he did the right thing. He couldn't change the future.

At the very least, he would remember about the rabbit with the bruises.

How do you unlock Metsu? I still don't get it.

>>6354355

You need to hit 40k in the main game or hit up up up up right right down at the title screen

>>6354328
I hope it gets released soon. We don't need another Material Sniper in our list of frustrations.

The music's nice, but learning to play from trial and error is sort of frustrating.

>>6354363

Sorry, but I'm not getting how this works. I unpack metsu into the irisu folder, then hit 40k, then do the code? Because the game doesn't runs from the metsu shortcut, and unpacking the files but keeping the original irisu.exe doesn't comes up with metsu.

Hitting the code after 40k does nothing too.

>>6354564
Just download the game with both, first link on google if you search for Irisu Syndrome. After getting the score on the normal game you should unlock metsu.

>>6354581

http://www.facepunch.com/threads/623495-Irisu-syndrome-Freaky-ass-Japanese-puzzle-game

This one?

>>6354594
Yes. I just noticed it's the same link in OP's post.

Nevermind, I unlocked it.

So how does metsu differenciate from the original? Does it has the same endings or something or did only the gameplay change and everything's the same?

Or there's nothing left anymore but the gameplay? So many questions.

>>6354613
The endings just happen in normal mode. There are 4 endings I guess: Good, Bad, Best and another one.

Metsu explains the plot behind the game, as you score higher you unlock more fragments of Uuji's journal. You can see the translation of such fragments in this very thread on posts above.

>>6354613

I just noticed I was being stupid and the story from metsu was all over the thread all along, sorry.

But then... what's the story from the original?

Oh and, these balls are fucking my shit up. I've never tripped with so many balls before.

>>6354640
Like I said when we both posted at the same time: Metsu is the only mode with a story, normal mode is just the ending of such story.

>>6354640

The only story in the original is in the endings. They should all be fairly self explanatory. In the news report ending, Irisu kills everyone as planned. If you score higher and get the surprise party ending, Irisu changes her mind and doesn't kill, but it's implied that she kills Ageha anyway. If you score over 100k or something, Irisu decides not to kill anyone, but finds Uuji's drawing of dying bunnies. This causes her to snap and kill everyone.

There are also the text files that show up for the original game. I think those could do with a translation. They focus more on Irisu's character if I remember correctly.

>>6354882
> but it's implied that she kills Ageha anyway.
It is? Is that implied in the text that goes with that ending? Because I don't remember the visuals associated with that ending implying that.

>>6354915

If you open up the picture in the game folder after getting that ending, Ageha will still be scribbled out.

>>6354946
I thought the image reset to normal after you started the game back up to finish the ending... damn, I can't test it on this computer because the game crashes and fucks up the screen.

Any link to the porn flashgame?

>>6355308
No. Because it's wrong.

>>6355325
Come on dude, every link I google has some shitty PS2 game viral marketing going on.
Shit sucks.

>>6355332
No. You will not fap to my beloved Irisu.

>>6355354
I intend to fap to the heads.
You sick fuck.

>>6355354

just have :D

>>6355393
Learn grammar. Don't use emoticons.

>>6355397

why not ? (smile)

>>6355403
Because it's not welcome here. Please don't insist.

Really? :O

>>6355434

>>6354882

So it's true when they say that this game has no happy endings?

That's pretty... depressing, I guess.

Still, it's Irisu-chan. Can't complain.

>>6355354
Shut up!
Irisu is my waifu!

>>6355498
Lol...

It's funny how the porn game of it has Hizashi sounds.

I remember saving it somewhere I just can't find it anymore. I at least saved the flash save.

http://www.hongfire.com/cg/data/508/erosu_shoukougun_edited.swf

You can play it here, though you might want to hack the save so that you can jump straight to the good stuff. (seriously, the physics in this flash... are close to inexistant) After that, go to the gallery, toggle Usagi mode and WHOOOOOOWEE PUURE JOY.

I always feel bad when I fap to this flash, but the call is so alluring, I can't resist.

It's not worksafe so I'm probably gonna get banned for this, but I put the link on a spoiler tag so I'm a nice guy.

My score...

>>6355354


I fapped to your waifu.
Good end.

>>6355354


I fapped to your waifu.
Good end.

>>6355891

>>6355891
Are you the real Trollington? You will pay for that in November.

>>6355904
I imagine her to be tightening all the time.
Pity I ran out of lube,
Well, I thought Sanae to be your waifu but seems like I was mistaken.

>>6355917
Um.. You are probably mistaking me with someone else, this image should clear it up.


Anyways, to keep this on topic: Anyone else thinks Metsu mode is easier than the normal mode? I usually get higher scores on Metsu, but I think it's supposed to be the contrary?

>>6356012

Yeah, mostly because the life bar doesn't deplete as fast. I like metsu mode better, since the game over comes more with the blocks piling up so much you can't deal with them fast enough rather than just running out of life despite the screen being relatively clear.

Anon was here

Quality Control is a loser

>>6355895
Man, it sucks that you can caress her and stuff, but she doesnt give a happy expression during the sex

How about Irisu cosplay?

>>6356088
No.

>>6356088
Link to set?

>>6356099
No set! Just pics from Cure Cosplay.

More Irisu...

I am out... that's all!

Pics from:
http://en.curecos.com/search/?q=いりす症候群！

>>6356063
You are so cute Stalker-san.
>>6356099
I usually dislike cosplay but this one is not bad.

>>6356136
I found only these four pics with a Irisu cosplay.
I don't found western Irisu cosplay. No wonder... this is too unknown outside from Japan!
Western Irisu cosplay must be pig disgusting, right?

>>6356012
Oh it's the useless rabbit. <3

>>6356175
Send me materials to sew a costume.
I'll cosplay her for the heck of it.

>>6356216
Ask /cgl/ how to make a Irisu cosplay.
I am sure the most /cgl/ fags have no idea from what Irisu is. Typical /cgl/ fags play all the time Pokemon shit and looking stupid shounen and mainstream shit!

>>6356246
The costume itself isn't very hard to prepare.
I'd just have to get some similar clothes and sew patches and accessories onto them.
The problem is to get those clothes fitting on a 2 metre tall muscular guy.
And I'd have to dye my beard in the colour of the wig ;_;

But a huge guy cosplaying Ivis and smashing cats with a sock filled with rocks shoul'd be quite the eyecatcher.

>>6356263
>Ivis
I AM A HUGE FAGGOT PLEASE RAPE MY FACE

I'd wear an Irisu cosplay. Every time I see a picture of her I think of how comfortable her clothes look.

>>6355671

How to hack the save?

>>6356316
There is a thread on hongfire from some guy who removes censors from flashgames.
He linked a hacked Erosu and the save file.
Just google it.

>>6356324

Glorious. Being able to caress her face makes it a lot more enjoyable.

;_;

Irisu looks like a Touhou character... or not?

>>6358194
No shit, Sherlock.

>>6358194

Irisu is the best Touhou

>>6356494
Mind posting a link to the hongfire with the save?

Why is Irisu so lovely?

>>6358194
Irisu Syndrome was made by ZUN, you derp.

>>6355671
this game is bullshit

Is everything in the original game translated yet?

I like this game alot but I'm having troubles following the story since I don't have translations for everything.

I understand there's no way to put the translations in-game because of how the coding is, but It'd be nice to at least have the translated text somewhere...

>>6358813
http://www.hongfire.com/forum/showthread.php?t=41551&page=7

It's on that page.

>>6359420
There's never been a complete translation of either half of the game, and there never will be. Nobody wants to translate it.

FFFF I can't get 200k in Metsu ;_;
>High score's 189k
>GODDAMNIT

>>6359235
You're bullshit.

>>6359821
Then why was the backstory translated...?

>>6359821
Why? I want a english patch... ;_;

>>6361281

I don't care much for a game translation, really. Everything that happens in the first game is pretty straightforward if you just look at the images and the changes made to photo.jpg after each ending. I'd rather see a translation to all the text files.

That was uncalled for. Keine's ability is bullshit, she ';hid the history'; of the human village so ';no humans would have ever settled there'; but Reimu and Marisa clearly remembered the place and Sakuya even proves it's existance by telling about the mansion's furniture.

In the olden days, people would orgasm themselves when a translation was unveiled.

Bump~!

Fuck yes, I'm going to play this shit when I'm high.

I'm about to crack this game open, grab a translator and put the shit back inside.

Seriously, there's not a whole lot of text in this game. You could translate it in a day.

Bumpu~

>>6364660
1. Google DxLib.
2. Download and extract.
3. Grab DXADecode.exe and DXAEncode.exe from Tool\DXArchive\
4. Find the DXArchive key used by the game(in this case, the key is shine)
5. Unpack with "dxadecode -K:shine filename.dxa" and repack with "dxaencode -K:shine [directory you wish to pack] output.dxa". Make sure to use AppLocale or set your system locale to Japanese, as some of the stored filenames are in Japanese.

>>6365170

Thanks. I was actually useless and had no idea on how to do it.

No sarcasm. Seriously.

But I'm a man's man so I'm gonna do it. Because I like Irisu.

>trying to download DxLib for half an hour

OH COME ON

>>6364660

You are going to translate this ? you can have my ass everytome you want for your exclusive use

>>6365414

I'm going to try. But the DxLib download server is down and I can't find a replacement.

Though I'm not going to give up just yet. I'll just have to keep searching. I have like, a whole free week to do this.

>>6365394
I don't know what the hell DxLib that is. The correct one should be the first result on Google(.com or .co.jp).

Download page: http://homepage2.nifty.com/natupaji/DxLib/dxdload.html
Direct link(VC++ version): http://dxlib.o.oo7.jp/DxLib/DxLib_VC3_04b.exe

>>6365499

...oh. I was putting "DxLib download" on google and that japanese result wasn't coming up. Sorry.

Serves me right for not following instructions to the letter. Sorry again.

Stuck yet again. I don't know how to find the shinekey, much less unpack it.

Sorry to ask for help again, but yeah. I am worthless when it comes to any sort of programming.

>>6365584
I think "shine" IS the key.

>>6365675

I think I should have phrased myself better. I have no idea what to do after I get dxadecode and dxaencode.

>>6365584
The DXArchive key isn't a file; it's a string of text stored in the game's executable and used to decrypt the .dxa files. Sorry I didn't clarify that. Of course, I've already fished the key("shine") out of the exe because half of Japan uses DxLib in their games and I must unpack each and every DxLib-powered game I come across. No exceptions.

So just throw a copy of dxadecode.exe and dxaencode.exe into the same folder as Irisu Syndrome's .dxa files and open a command window there. Then enter the command "dxadecode.exe -K:shine dat.dxa" to unpack dat.dxa, "dxadecode.exe -K:shine img.dxa to unpack img.dxa, etc. And then to repack dat.dxa, for example, you'd do "dxaencode -K:shine dat dat.dxa". It would be wise to make backups of the original .dxa files before you do any repacking.

Is there an English version out?

>>6365794
read the fucking thread?

>>6365782

Thanks to you, I'm actually making progress. Thank you. No, seriously. I can't thank you enough.

I managed to unpack all the images from the game. Now I know why people like to unpack games so much. It's like christmas up on this shit.

For example, here's what I believe to be some concept art that was left behind in the folder. Or not.

Gonna try unpacking the .dat folder next. Fun times!

>>6365884
Doing that can be kind of spoilerish, too, even if the game is one you've played through/read through. For example, when people unpacked the later episodes of Umineko, several of the background images (the underground ones) had "sub" in the filename. A fair few people thought it was referring to a subway or something. Turns out it was referring to a submarine base.

MEANWHILE though, for you guys that aren't good at the game like me (friggin' balls be trippin'), here's an image of Irisu smiling, which is kinda creepy actually, considering she never smiles.

>>6365907
Come back when you hit the real deal image score.

And here's shy Irisu. Aww. That's her in her best.

>>6365910

I will. AFTER this short bathroom break.

Holy goat, look at all those script files.

Plus the fact that I'm gonna have to switch to japanese locale to even start translating them. However, this is pretty much half the job done.

>>6366012
I'm glad to see someone is actually working on it. Thanks anon.

So the japanese in all the files is pretty much broken (read:moonrunes) even with japanese locale and applocale.

Can anyone shed some light on this? Should I have unpacked the .dxa file in the japanese locale to begin with, like that kind anon told me to?

>>6366058

Thanks, man. Great to see support. Though I just want to understand what the hell is going on in the game.

>>6366098
You can understand if you search about it, some people already explained every bit of it. However, translating it would be much better.

Bump for progress

>>6366121

I guess I should have phrased myself better again. I want to understand what's going on in the game THROUGH the game.

Sincerely, I can piece the story through the translation you guys made, but I don't know where to piece where like that. Having the translated text show up in the unlocked pages is much better in my opinion.

>>6366143
Ah yes, we are both saying the same thing then.

>>6366098
> Should I have unpacked the .dxa file in the japanese locale to begin with, like that kind anon told me to?
Yeah, probably.

>>6366098
Unpacking with Japanese locale(or through AppLocale) is required to get the correct filenames for some of the files. For reading, Notepad should be able to open the files correctly with Japanese locale, but if it can't just drag and drop them onto Firefox or whatever and it should correctly autodetect display them as Shift-JIS text files.

IT WORKED! Look at all this beautiful, unbroken text! Brings a tear to my eye.

Time to get some coffee, I'll be up all night. Ahh, the joys of being young!

>>6366300
Lol, enjoy your formatting problems.

Things are never as easy as they seem.

Oh and, if any of you would like to help me with this, please, feel free to ask. I'll put all the files on a .rar file and link it here. However, if you don't plan on coding the english text back in the game, please give it back to me so I can pack it back into the game. I'll credit you properly... somehow.

Here, I'll give myself an identity for better identifications. Please don't hate me as I plan on getting rid of it as soon as this is done. Thanks!

>>6366330
Bro, we'd never hate you.

Someone doing something productive and worthwhile to the community? On my /jp/?

Hm... does anyone else have a problem where Irisu Syndrome (v2.03) crashes as soon as it starts up, also causing your video card driver to crash? I have an nVidia Geforce 9600 GT with current drivers.

>>6366389
There is a thread with posts about this game crashing with nvidia cards.Find it on the ghost board.

So I managed to code the first line of english text into the CG. At least this proves I'll have no problems, at least as far as this part's concerned.

Also, please keep in mind that my expertise in japanese is extremely limited. Most of the times, I'll be pulling from memory and from a translator. If it turns out wrong, I'll do my best to re-write it from the context, to make it as accurate as possible. Please bear with me here.

>>6366341
OSad-san is doing his best and getting ready.
Please watch warmly until he loses his motivation.

>>6366426

Even if I get demotivated halfway through it, I'm doing it because I love this board. Seeing you guys happy makes me happy, which in turn, makes me want to work harder.

So if I get demotivated, you can blame me. But that's not gonna make me hate you in any way.

I swear, the start of this conversation makes no freaking sense.

They start talking about how the sun is good, then the topic quickly jumps to CANNED FOOD.

>>6366605
Seems like standard VN fare to me.
One of the girls should be offering to cook meals for the protagonist any time noe.

I'm pretty stuck at a line here, even after consulting with a friend who knows all three alphabets fully.

It's the line right next to "Aah-". It's supposed to be what they're doing for dinner, but I just have no idea what it says.

I'll jump it and keep going, and come back on it later, been stuck long enough on it. If anyone knows what that means, please share. Thanks.

>>6366681

Oopsies, forgot image~

>>6366691

I'd just like to point out the bunny ears in the background.

I checked google, but it didn't have anything that would seem to fit in that context. It would probably be best to skip it for now and then come back once you know what the conversation is about.

>>6366750
Well damn, never noticed that before.

http://jisho.org/words?jap=%E3%81%95%E3%81%A3%E3%81%B1&eng=&dict=edict

さっぱり
1: (on-mim) feeling refreshed; feeling relieved;
2: neat; trimmed;
3: plain; simple;
4: completely; entirely;
5: not in the least (in sentence with negative verb); not at all;
6: (Noun) completely ignorant; not doing at all

>>6366839 here, feeling that I should probably be more helpful.
thinking about it, I think it's a comment on how simple-minded the previous speaker is to switch the conversation over to dinner. Just a hunch, and I've got no context either, but...
Also, I'd be willing to help with this in any way I can, though I doubt my vocabulary is much better than yours.

>>6366839

Thanks, this helped a lot!

So far, making rough progress, but still making progress. "Canned food" is just a placeholder for mystery food X I just can't figure out the name of, and the "I like it sticky" part makes absolutely no sense, but I'm pretty sure it's correct. It's more like the canned food isn't right and it's ruining the stickyness.

The food part goes like this:

「残念だね～。今日の夕ご飯は缶詰かな」

And these last four words (缶詰かな) are tripping me up.

>>6366901
I think さっぱりin this case is an abbreviation for さっぱり忘れた or さっぱり分らない, and that would explain why they're having canned food. But either way it works, I guess.

>>6366914

Well, I'll leave it canned food for now. Better than just leaving a japanese line in the middle of a bunch of english text.

The text literally calls it canned food, though, so what's the problem?
Additionally, on further thought
>>6366914
may have a valid point. Though it would be confusing why the entire expression was not included since さっぱり is a word on its own. Then again, now that I see the context the way it's translated now doesn't seem to make much sense.

Has anyone else ever wanted to join Irisu? I want to take a nailbat and murder people out in the woods. With that kind of power, I won't have to be considered human anymore.

>>6366948

You can murder me in your woods anytime, if you know what I'm saying.

>>6366948
Irisu doesn't kill with her bat it's made of bread. She uses her socks filled with rocks to kill people. That's explained in one of the endings.

>>6366973
I'm aware. It's the idea of ambushing and slaughtering people that I like. The state of mind required for it, the preparation, dealing every night with the fact I have plans to murder people. Consuming my thoughts every day, looking at people every day and thinking what it would be like if they were the target, or my heart skipping a beat when I lock eyes with the person I'm going to kill.

And, of course, the act itself. It's like anger being undone and everything wrong that's happened being made right.

Aww, what a heartwarming teenager conversation so far.

Considering how this game ends, this sarcasm makes me laugh some.

Anyway, the next lines go along like this, somewhat. The first line (ていうかこんなとこで釣れるわけないでしょ) is about fishing, alluring, catching something. At first, I thought it was fish, but I can't find the fish kanji in there. It's probably something like that, though.

The second line (あと缶詰なんか食べない！ちゃんと自炊するのよ) goes along like "And we still have to brew the tea and cook dinner!" but I removed the brew tea part, since I think that cooking dinner pretty much covers the tea part as well. I can change it, though.

The third part (材料持ってきてるんだから) goes along like "So bring me the ingredients!", but I decided to remove the exclamation point in the previous sentence, adding instead a comma, for better fluency.

So far, this is the most difficult line I've had to translate so far. It's probably all wrong in a right way inside the context.

Oops, spoke too soon. The hiragana in the next sentence is even more stupid.

I'm taking 5. Haven't eaten since dinner and it's like, 1:30AM here.

>>6366948
It's different for me.

I imagine myself feeding a rabbit alone while she observes me hidden somewhere and getting interested after seeing my tranquil face and kind smile as I watch the rabbit. Until I notice her one day and we become closer since I like rabbits. We end up together as I cover her sad and traumatic past while bringing a nice and pleasant present and happy end is achieved.

;_;

Well, the first CG is almost done. Except I can't figure out those two troublesome lines.

The first one is supposed to be about drawings, and I have no idea about the second one.

Apart from that, I made some alterations in the lines. I think they make more sense now.

All in all, this is mostly about food. Until I can figure out what those two lines are about, I'm coming for the next CG (or probably just start working on Metsu, the whole thing's already translated so I just need to add stuff).

And yes, the last line just literally says "Well done." No secret there. They did the fish well. They did not burn the fish. Well done for them.

>>6367212
uh, isn't あはは just laughing?

>>6367254

Really?

>>6367212
Also, めんどくせえなあ would probably be better translated as "that's too much trouble". Google translate's just choking on colloquialism there, probably translating the なあ as "hey".
In the same way, you're using ちゃんと as if it's modifying how the fish is made, when it's really modifying the "help me" part. The literal way would be to say "properly help me make it" But I think it's okay to just leave off that part altogether and just have it "Help me make them."
And "then shut up" should probably just be "shut up," because there's really no reason for that "then" to be there.

That's my fifteen cents anyway. I'm sorry in advance if I'm seeming critical, just trying to help.

>>6367270
And yes, really.

>>6367306

No, no, feel free to help me out (or critique, in your way) as much as you can. I'm pretty much just doing what you think I'm doing: pulling stuff from a bunch of online translators, and correcting it from the context of the scene as I go. It's really nothing professional, but I think it's shaping up nicely.

Well, I have a friend who's somewhat knowledgeable on Japanese on MSN, but he seems to have gone to sleep now, so it'll probably be a little more bothersome to translate until tomorrow. Here's the CG with the corrections you suggested. I was actually thinking the whole "Eh, you're troublesome" didn't made much sense there, but I left it like that in the lack of a better thing to put. Also laughter.

>>6367356
Can you zip the text files and toss them up on mf or something, like you were talking about?

So I've come to the conclusion that (そろそろぼく、イラストの続きを描かなきゃ) is "I need to draw more Kanakya illustrations soon..."

However, I'm not sure what Kanakya is. It's probably just an offspew of google, since I already had to adapt the 描 (which means draw) into the sentence.

>>6367432
I think it's just part of that "need to" clause.

>>6367406

http://www.mediafire.com/?496vepx9qld0rmb

Here. I didn't knew if you wanted the unedited or the edited ones, so I gave you the unedited ones for you to mess around to your heart's content. The folder is actually called just dat but that's a copy of my backup in case something backfires.

>>6367442
Agreement.

>>6367442
>>6367466

So the sentence is fine with just "I need to draw more illustrations soon..." ?

>>6367461
Thanks much. I'll try to tackle some of the rough bits, then.
>>6367470
yes.

>>6367493

Oh and, I forgot to tell you, the ptx files are the CG scripts, the Script files, I beliiieve they're from the endings, and I have... no idea where the Metsu files are.

Anyway, the last sentence I can't do is the (約2名は、戦力としてぜんぜん期待できないようね) one. Obviously, it's supposed to be something funny since there's laughter in the end, but I can't figure it out.

Phrase you're missing seems to be something along the lines of "For you two, with your skills I can't possibly have any expectations."

>>6367506

"... About part 2, you can't place all of your hopes on fighting ability after all."

Huh? Weren't they just talking about food?

>>6367520

Doesn't seems to be very coherent with the sentence right before it, but I'm pretty desperate so I'll add that.

So here's the first CG finished. Awe and behold, that's like, one tenth of the game in veautiful english!

It's 3:05AM here, I guess I'll stay awake for another hour then pick this up later today again.

>>6367541

...or rather, I guess I'll CHANGE that once a definitive meaning for that line comes up.

>>6367541
It uses "fighting ability", but I just translated it as skill since it's pretty obviously used metaphorically. I don't know why it's translating "part 2" because the kanji after the 2 is the counter for humans, so it's two people.

>>6367541
>>6367588

Derp. Yeah, I'm a retard. I read it as name and not a count.

Keep it up!

>>6367605

Counter even.

And with that, I'm going to bed.

So I got the last CG out of the way already. By the looks of it, the second one is going to be the worst one to do.

This one was pretty easy, though I decided to keep the direct google translation (...gone to where?) because I think it transmits the uneasiness and fear ahega is feeling right now quite well. I believe changing it to "Where have you gone?" or something would ruin it.

This actually made me realise something. How the hell am I gonna make the endings trigger so I can check if the translation in them went out alright?

>>6367623
If you copy your save.dat and delete the one in the irisu folder, it'll reset your stuff so you can unlock everything again.

Fourth CG. I'll do the third today still and the second when I wake up, then I'll spend the whole day doing the endings.

Also, I'm putting these things behind spoiler tags because I think they're pretty spoilerish in a spoilering kind of way.

(nah, just kidding, if you know the plot, there's nothing to spoil you here. I just want an excuse to use the spoiler image button)

Just did a quick once-over on the finished product for picture 1. The sixth line, about stickiness,
けっこう粘ったんだけどなあ、惜しいぜ
Is probably better translated... honestly, I'm not sure. Something like
"It's pretty sticky, though. I'm disappointed!"
"Even if it's pretty thick, I'm disappointed!"
though I came across the fact that 粘 can mean persevere, so it could even be
"You're pretty persistent about that, huh? I'm disappointed."
In this case, it's that, probably Agetha, insists on just eating canned food, while the speaker, probably Edogawa, wants to catch fish instead.

>>6367668

Oops. In my eternal bliss, I forgot to press the spoiler button! Silly me, silly me.

>>6367668
This baby looks good. only comment I'd have to make is that the 大丈夫 might be better-translated as "It's fine" than "alright."
Also in the line above that, she stutters on the "wait".

>>6367673

I like that persistence one better. Changed it. Looks better now.

Dude, I think you and me here are being the first to discover all the slimy secrets behind Irisu Syndrome.

I think... I could use a coke to celebrate.

>>6367698

Here ya go, buddeh. Starting CG3 now.

>>6367702
You and me.
I'll be watching for the continuation tomorrow, too.

I don't get how to translate (やっぱりカレーは一晩置くに限るね). There seems to be two different ways, "I knew to put the curry overnight~" and "Curry for me, limited to overnight~". I'm tripping because of the two slashes between the ーは一. It seems to be separating a single sentence, but I don't know how to piece it back together.

Fucking happy Uugi. Go sing about curry or whatever to yo mama.

>>6367735
two slashes? If you're talking about the lines, one of them is a kanji character. Anyhow, I'm pretty sure the gist of it is... well, that curry is either bad or better if left overnight.

Best I could manage for CG3. The curry line simply destroyed me and I'm way too tired to think about anything anymore.

See you later today, anon. I'm finishing this for sure.

>>6367787
Okay. I'll give you what I have for part 2.

They say that witch's strange experiments... huh? What's wrong, you've gotten quiet.

You really are bad with this sort of thing, aren't you?~

It's not that! I saw it just now. I saw some person with weird clothes!

What do you mean?

You know an apron dress? And that kind of odd skirt and clothes.

Wearing a hat like a witch's, with rabbit ears sprouting from it,

A person like that was standing and looking at me!

What's that, it's not like Edogawa's ghost story. It's a rabbit witch.

>>6367795

I'm writing this down on notepad for now. I already closed everything here.

I can see that it's way superior to mine, though. Thanks.

People working together ?
In my /jp/ ?

I love you guys

>>6367806
/jp/'s natural hivemind is actually something you can count on when it comes to potential nice things. We've in fact accomplished some pretty neat stuff somehow.

Is this translation only going to be for in-game text or will the text files that show up as you unlock stuff be translated as well?

>>6367850

Everything in the game that isn't an image has a script. Therefore, all scripts must be translated.

I'd say, the stuff you unlock will be in english too.

>>6367933

Why are you still up, man?

Go to sleep.

>>6367939

I refuse to talk with myself. YOU go to sleep. I can't let this beautiful thread die. I poured my BLOOD in it.

MY BLOOD.

>>6367940

OSad, you're a great guy. Thanks for taking the time to translate IS.

Allllright, let's keep pushing this thing along. It's 1:53 PM and I just woke up.

Here's edited CG2 with some of anon's kind words, with slight alterations made by me. Continuing to work on it.

>>6369418

Oops, I just noticed, the first line can't be too big or it won't make it into the window. I'm gonna have to adapt that into something similar, since splitting it into two lines isn't really an option.

>>6369418
Fix the first line. "You've gotten....."

Also, thanks a lot for doing this guys. I'm really happy that /jp/ will be able to claim the "title" of translating a game that everyone saw as "will never be translated ;_;".

Heeere we go. Though the japanese quotation symbol thingie (」) isn't showing at the end of the sentence. I'll find a way to fix it later.

Thanks for doing this, bro! I hope that you can keep yourself motivated to actually finish it.

Hm, is (あれ, ここ) just more laughing, or is it "well, you know,"? What a question.

So I believe I'm fairly accurate here, save for that one line left untranslated which I'll come back on later.

You can understand what's going on here. If you can't, there's something wrong with your head. Anyway, I'll try to find metsu's files now since I'll need to play Irisu over and over again to get all the endings in order to test the translation. While this game is addictive, that doesn't sounds very healthy for me, so I want to make sure it comes out right on my first try.

And here's the picture I forgot to post the moment I clicked submit.

>>6369717
You can upload it with the translated scripts and I'll help you to test it. It's pretty short after all.

Going away for a few minutes to lend a PS3 controller to a friend. brb

Back.

>>6369731

Can you pack the code back into the game? If not, I guess it's no problem since I can upload a version of the game that has the endings translated.

Either way, I still want to start on Metsu right now since I'm sure it won't take long.

>>6369888
>Can you pack the code back into the game?
I don't know

>>6365782
>>6365170

Well, the instructions are here.

>>6369727

Does it actually use the pronoun for "him" there? From what I gathered, they're talking about Irisu. Irisu's female.

>>6369939
They don't know that it's 'she' though. It's just a person in weird clothes.

>>6369949

But a few lines above that:
>a girl like that was standing and looking at me

>>6369939

I believe they were talking about the witch Irisu before, but then Edogawa mentions seeing "someone" in the woods close to him. At this point, I don't think they're reffering to Irisu anymore, but to "someone", so I left it as him instead of her.

>>6369972

Yeah, I'll revise this part. I'll start translating the script files too, since I'm having some wicked trouble finding the Metsu files.

>>6369977
Good morning again. Also, the one seeing something in the woods is Ageha. Edogawa's telling the ghost story.

You know, you see the untranslated endings this game has and you think it's not a big deal.

And then you translate them.

And then you start to cringe.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ia40r4ft04y554s

Here's the .dat file with the first ending... which I beliiiieve to be the 10k ending, translated. Simply put the .dat file into your irisu\dat folder and overwrite. I suggest you make a backup of your old .dat in case this doesn't works.

Also, I changed "girl" for "person" on the second CG.

I'm not going to test the ending right now, I want to translate the other ones first. Have fun reaching it if you want to help me out.

>>6369727
A bit of a correction on lines 12-15.

No! The distance was a bit far, and she quickly left,

But I definitely saw her!

I wondered if I was a bit strange in the head, and felt a bit bad, and tried to forget it,

and didn't say anything to anyone, but I really saw it!

Don't have to change everything, I just pasted everything I had for convenience and flow's sake. But there's some parts that are clearly different.

>>6370192
I actually like your translation of "I could see her clearly, I'm sure!" rather than "But I definitely saw her", looking at it.

So apparently nothing's appearing on the CG's from other computers. They only appear on my PC.

Can someone confirm the english text I've put on the CG's?

>>6370217
Odd. I'm getting the same thing. Oh well, press on.
>>6369727
I got your last untranslated bit there as best I could.
「ちょっと遠くに人影がみえて、あれ、ここ、あたし達の他にもひとがいた
んだ、
I saw a figure in the distance, uh,　here, someone besides us was here,
みたいに思っててよくみたらそんな変な格好の人で、こっちをじっと見て」

It seemed like that person in strange clothes was watching thoughtfully, silently staring at us.

>>6370217

Just checked. There's no text.

>>6370192

So I made your changes here, with some slight alterations. The sentences can't be very long or they won't appear on the window.

>>6370319
>IE
>MSN
why.jpg

>>6370314

Also, I forgot to press alt when I pressed printscreen. Whooray.

>>6370319

Oh no. We seem to have hit a brick wall here, gentleman. The text won't appear on other people's games.

Please try the game out with my save.dat to see if it'll work.

http://www.mediafire.com/?2j97pafgnfrrnu2

>>6370328

IE's working fine for now, and what's wrong with MSN?

>>6370342
by any chance are you European?
yangkis don't seem to understand that Euros tend to use MSN instead of AIM or whatever

>>6370336

Still no text. The game also crashed when I got the 10k ending.

>>6370336
initialization error.

>>6370359
Oh wait, no, that was just trying to open multiple instances of the program at once. Yeah, still nada. Try uploading your entire game folder?

Oh. My. God.

I'm uploading my entire game folder. If that doesn't works, I'll keep on translating, but we're gonna have to find a solution, folks.

>>6370352

In order to not get shitstormed, I'd rather not reveal from where I am. Please understand.

>>6370373
no worries, don't think anyone with an actual interest would care where you're from though

85%. Sorry, the game isn't big, but my net has like, a 30kbps upload speed.

Fun game. Try to guess where I'm from from this.

>>6370419
Australia?

>>6370419
Africa?

>>6370423
>>6370425
enough.

>>6370419
Hey, hey. Are we done with all the event CGs then? What's next, boss?

Nwope and nope.

http://www.mediafire.com/?jjfrgcfyf6j810u

Here she is.

>>6370434
Ireland or Greece?

>>6370431

The script files. They're the endings. However, editing them also seems to make the game crash at the respective endings.

For now, wait until someone tests out my game folder, then we'll figure out our next move.

I told you things would not be that easy as it seemed.

>>6370440
I don't really see how any country besides Japan would cause a 'shitstorm' though.

>>6370440
Are you going to try all countries?

>>6370440

Nope.

>>6370444

Holy triples, are you god?

>>6370451
Are you going to keep whining?

>>6370452
Oh wow, man. I didn't know you cared about post numbers.

Please just... just keep translating..

>>6370451
those were my only 2 guesses
just picked ones I know have terrible internet speeds

>>6370452
(last guess, is it BR? I guess people might raise an eye at that but I've known some pretty cool BRs in my time)

>>6370470

Oh please, don't get the wrong impression. I don't care about post numbers either, I'm just wasting time until someone tests the game folder.

>>6370468
Yes, I'm Brazilian.

>>6370463
Yes.

>>6370478
And it doesn't work, even with your folder. The hell? What's your regional settings?

>>6370470
There are many bad BRs, but I've seen good BRs post many times too, who also didn't like those idiots. There's morons in every country. I think everyone here can acknowledge that fact.

>>6370478
Eh what a coincidence, I wonder how many br regulars /jp/ has.

Downloading your folder now. I hope it works.

>>6370492

I think I figured out what's wrong. Here, put this dat folder inside your data folder.

http://www.mediafire.com/?4up998mvl9yvs64

It worked for me.

>>6370516
Great success!

>>6370516

More on this...

I believe the game is no longer using dat.dxa to pull up the script data. It's using the dat folder. However, I believe you still need the modified dat.dxa from my folder for this to work.

>>6370516
didn't worked for me. Does it has to be YOUR folder too?

>>6370560

Try to put it in my folder. However, like I said, all you might need is the modified dat.dxa from my folder.

>>6370568

...in addition to my dat folder, IN the data folder. Putting it in the irisu root folder isn't going to work.

>>6370568
Er.. this is not working at all. I noticed my folder has 2 data folders also.

>>6370585

Well, the game is only supposed to have one. Care taking a screenshot of your folder?

This is an interesting predicament; apparently, it'll use a folder called "dat" if the "dat.dxa" file is non-existant in the .\data\ folder. But if the dxa is present, then it will ignore the dat folder completely.

Hm...

>>6370516
Some slight changes, then we're good.
Picture 1:
Line 10, I think the line is just "Shut up and help me make it," Since the way it's phrased now is awkward, like suggesting that they do have sea bream. But dinner is curry, as suggested in picture 3.

There's also a typo in the bottom line, it should be "skills".

Picture 2:
Still an untranslated line. See >>6370306
for my take on it.

Line 5: minor change. It's my words, but I forgot to check the phrasing and that "And" doesn't flow right. Nixing it might be good.

Picture 3:
Untranslated line. That one's a bitch.

Otherwise, it's good work!

>>6370568

It works for me even without using your game folder. Looks good so far.

Just one typo caught my eye. On the fourth CG "I didn't heard anything" should be "I didn't hear anything"

>>6370595
It's 3 folders actually.


I also tried to delete the dat.dxa file but now there is no text instead.

>>6370657

You're doing it completely wrong. You're doing the stuff inside the data folder that's INSIDE the data folder. Delete the data folder that's inside the data folder, then make the changes to the data folder that's in the root folder.

Alright, since this seems to be working for most people (though I still need confirmation that the endings work) I'll start corrections that you guys pointed out and then I'll start on the second ending.

>>6370677
Bleh, forgot to add. Picture 2, line 18, another minor change. Should be "Let's sleep".

>>6370677
When you're finished, just put up your whole game (without the save file).

>>6370677
Got it now, it's working. Thanks.

10k ending works. Working on the 20k end now.

>>6370306

It seemed like that person in strange clothes was watching thoughtfully, silently staring at us.

There's NO WAY this line will fit here. The first one already didn't fit, and this one is bigger than my altered one. I had to alter it a lot, sorry. Please, if you have any smaller suggestion for it, I'll take it.

Here's the CG with all the changes. Looking pretty now!

>>6370677
By the way, I found the Metsu files. script 3-1 onward are all the metsu stuff. You were looking for them earlier, dunno if you already noticed or not.

>>6370734

Are you my super duper co-worker? Did the ending sound alright?

By what I've seen, it's supposed to be a broken up news report from a TV, but I'm not sure. I can send you the translated Script 0-1 file if you want.

And I fixed the 18th line.

>>6370751

Oh, thanks. I thought the script things were all from Irisu.

Also thanks for posting that Okuu. I go baww from that picture always.

>>6370755
No problem. Also I checked your script for the ending in the folder you uploaded...
"college students have gone missing"
"From the teeth... Edogawa and Ken..."
also, should be "whereabouts"
that's my twenty cents.

>>6370788
>Ken

hm?

>>6370788

I'm not sure in which line "college students have gone missing" is supposed to go?

>>6370808
it was the "so, more on the university students whereabouts" line, but I think here yours may be better.

>>6370867

I belive mine sounds better since it's the beginning of the report.

Also, halfway done with chapter 2.

20k ending works even though it's untranslated. Looks like everything's fine now.

>>6370881

Chapter, what are you even saying, dork. It's ending.

Wait, the characters are university students? Or does this mean Irisu is a serial killer?

>>6370881
Excellent. I will begin work on chapter 3. Also, what's image limit here? Don't want to kill the thread because of touhou spam.

>>6370917
Yeah, they're college students. I was surprised too, almost everyone in Japanese fiction are highschoolers.

>>6370931

Image limit is 150. Don't worry about it. We'll be hitting autosage in about 30 posts anyway.

>>6370931

I'm not sure, I... actually rarely post. But it's whatever. If the thread dies, we just have to make a new one.

Though, I don't want to lose the translations on top of the thread. I believe that's pretty much Metsu translated for us, and I just need to put the correct lines in the correct places.

Also, I like touhou, so posting touhou images can't possibly be bad.

>>6370960
it's not a big deal. If the thread hits bump limit just leave a tab with it open to see the translation or copy the text and save it in .txt file

>>6370931
150. Also OP, good job. Keep up the good work bro.

>>6370960
Don't worry about the stuff in this thread.

http://archive.easymodo.net/cgi-board.pl/jp/thread/6354180

>>6370960

easymodo archives every thread on /jp/. You can use that if the thread dies.

>>6370974
Sans images, but he can save any he needs now if he hasn't.

How can I interpret "Being full of harmony with everyone?"

とりあえず初日は、みんなで和気藹々と

This line seems to be a piece of journal, but I'm not really sure how to interpret it.

>>6370960
You might find this helpful: http://archive.easymodo.net/cgi-board.pl/jp/thread/6354180

>>6370987
"Being in complete harmony with everyone"?

I dunno, the first thing that popped into my head was Robot Unicorn Attack.

>>6370960
That's the story of Metsu translated, yes. But that's really just a summary, rather than the exact stuff. Metsu is told from Uuji's perspective. So, we've still got our work cut out for us.

"Unnatural attitude as earnestly Misenai"

THIS FREAKING JOURNAL MAKES NO SENSE.

>>6370987
I think it can just be "everyone got along" or "everyone is getting along".

Script 3-0

I remember a story from a while ago
About a popular cat.
And the misery of a sad rabbit.
And from it, that of a single girl.
...
Why did those thing happen?
That's surely...

『くれぐれも不自然な態度をみせないように』

『怪談を適当にでっちあげてください』

So these are quotations from a journal in the 1-1 script. They're the last ones and then this ending's done.

I cannot grasp them, yet I don't want to code them in until I translate them. CO-WORKER, your opinion on this?

I'll add that 3-0 script (thanks by the way, whoever did that) and then I'll start on the event that happens when you turn the game back on.

>>6371040

Irisu 3-0 is fully translated. However, that's the event that happens in transition when you punch in the code at the main screen if Irisu, so it's not very possible to see it now.

>>6371102
『くれぐれも不自然な態度をみせないように』
"Often, for the sake of not showing an unnatual attitude"
『怪談を適当にでっちあげてください』
"Please make up some X ghost stories on the spot.
On this one, X seems to be able to mean suitable/appropriate or halfhearted/on-the-spot.
It's anyone's guess which it is. And there's really only one person spamming the thread with girls.

>>6371178

Thank you~

http://www.mediafire.com/?7ln1doxc88c6c61

Here, I made a tidy nice, easy to use .rar file with instructions.

This version has everything up to the second ending translated.

Starting work on script 1-2, since kind girl image anon-kun is working on 3-0 forward.

>>6371224

Alright, actually, you should take 5. Browse /jp/ some. Your doctor recommended it to you.

>>6371254

Oh. Alright.

I'm taking 5.

>>6371224
>>6371254
>>6371259
youdon'tseesnake.jpg

script3-1

A story from when I was in elementary school.
One cat was kept at the school.
That cat was cute and friendly.
It was truly everyone's favorite.
One day, a rabbit became its partner at the school.
Sombody had picked it up in the schoolyard,
And they decided to keep it in a cage at school.
The rabbit was pitiable because
It was wounded and ragged.
It was missing an ear on one side,
So people were concerned about what had happened to it.
The rabbit wasn't well-liked by the stdents,
And so it was always alone.

>>6371175

After the line "And the misery of a sad rabbit" I get this. The next line is "...". I don't know if there's supposed to be a line here or what, but it should probably be looked into.

>>6371293

The text looks fine. I don't know why it's happening.

>>6371293
Weird. I'll check it out.

>>6371293
Oh, it's the damned comma. Thanks, I'll need to keep that in mind. I can't use commas in these scripts...

So the translation isn't quite working out when I punch it in Metsu.

I mean, it works fine until a certain line, then the game crashes with the following error.

I'll keep translating Irisu, but Metsu is being stubborn.

>>6371357

It happens a couple times in the 2nd ending and once in the first as well. There's also a problem in the endings where the next line begins before the previous one ends, causing text to be cut off.

>>6371437

It's probably because of the script transition timer. I'll try messing with the formatting to see if it helps.

Also, 1-2 is a bitch to translate. It might take a little longer.

>>6371457

I mean these things. That, or it's the romaj font. I believe the game was never made to support that.

>>6371461
I thought most Japanese fonts do have romaji support.

script3-2

The cat seemed to enjoy always being surrounded by people.
On the rabbit's part, the number of students that came to see it fell,
That's how it was treated.
Well, childen have a tendency to be cruel.
But I came to feel sorry for the rabbit.
Being careful that nobody would see, I sometimes went to see it.
I was really relieved every time I saw that the rabbit was alive and well.
...
The cat and the rabbit would play with each other through the fence,
I saw it many times.
The favorite and the unpopular one were different(?),
Their relationship was good, right?
I thought things like that.

>>6371480

Well... I guess it's not about the font itself.

Put it like this: The devs made this game with one, fixed resolution, and packed a bunch of text that just barely fits in it.

We open up the game and add our own text. Obviously, things aren't gonna be like riding a unicorn through a meadow.

>>6371506
Oh yeah. We might as well do that curry line that killed us last night.
...The best I can get out of it is that "As expected, curry should be left overnight."

>>6371506
>>6371529
Would it be possible to do line breaks and then just move the excess text to an additional page? I'm assuming the "delete, 0" command clears all text from the screen.

(I'd be doing testing of this too, but I have an nVidia graphics card and the game crashes whenever I try to run it, so...)

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>>6371578