/jp/ - Otaku Culture

こっちです！

In before TLwiki shills

>>6284134
Ignore them and they'll leave.

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>those names

...and, have a bump!

Sky Noise is the obvious choice.

What if I were to just go and put in random bullshit for translations?

>>6286091
You're telling me that people do otherwise?

>>6286091

There's backups made to prevent such abuse.

>>6286065
Constipated Clothes is the most delicious choice.

>>6286941
I prefer the Cherry Master.

>>6287752
Incidentally, she has the longest route.

Continuing.

This project is proof that ENTERPRISE QUALITY LEADING EDGE LOCALIZATION TECHNOLOGY SOLUTION PRODUCT ARCHITECTURE PLATFORM FRAMEWORKS really work.

>>6289556
are you saying that the translations for this game is actually good?

are you saying that the translations for this game is not good?

>>6289564
It's on par with the majority of fan translations, and if the allegations that it's a machine translation are true, that's even more SUGOI.

I still remember the first time I tried to play a VN by reading with Babelfish and AGTH. This is nothing like that.

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>Keep honorifics.

You best be fucking joking, Weeaboo. Fuck that shit. I'm not translating then.

>>6289759
>calling someone a weeaboo on /jp/
0/10, too obvious.

>>6289769
Go back to /a/, weeaboo.

>>6289759
>>6289774

u mad

Alright, who's the fool that translated

晶くんに……ぎゅってされるの、気持ちいいよ……

to

"Shou-kun......doing it tightly, it feels good......"

Geez, guys, this is going to end up being a shitty translation...

>>6289814
You point out mistakes, don't fix them, and walk away? What do you want?

>>6289814
>..Aki -kun..  ....[tesareruno].. pleasant embrace tightly..
Here, fixed. Come on guys, don't use other web translators or I'll get jealous.

>>6289814
>Sun*3-kun is doing it quickly! It feels good~!! (゜-゜)

>>6289814
Are you just bitching about the change from passive voice to active voice? That seems like a passable translation to me. it's not artful or anything but it conveys the meaning perfectly well.

>>6289998
I think he's bitching about the verb being a gerund and not "do/is doing", or maybe he's just bored and needs to troll. Even if it's in gerund I also think it's still passable.

>>6290024

No, I'm bitching, because it's just bad English (but I'm doubting the translater is even aware how the passive voice works in Japanese). No English-speaking person is going to say "doing it tightly, it feels good".

>>6290099
Um, if you haven't noticed, he's translated nearly EVERYTHING HE'S DONE in passive voice like that so far. No need to pick out one example(there are much worse examples to point out, at that)

It'll probably be fixed up by the people editing the script. The first part of the script doesn't look that bad, English-wise, so when the same people get that far it'll probably be taken care of. Or maybe the people who did the first part of the script were just different people, I don't know.

>>6289652
Ok... I will admit that most fan translations are pretty bad, but that's really overstating it. At the least, the majority of fan translations that get completed are on a level far higher, and the ones at this level are generally thrown out somewhere in the middle.

Up up up!

>>6290099
Would you prefer "getting done by shou-kun tightly... feels good"? It's arguing shades of gray, and we'd need more context to determine if using the passive is really possible. "Doing it" and "getting done", while both can be used as sex terms, have very different connotations in English.

>>6290578

"Being [hugged] tightly by you... feels good"

Would be okay. But passive sucks, so just:

"It feels good... when you [hug] me tightly..."

Much better.

I like how the apologists for this project have gradually changed their tune from "So what if it's machine translated? It doesn't matter if the translation sucks because it's a moege" to "Nuh uh, the translation is fine... no, maybe even better than all others."
Is a little consistency so much to ask for?

Is the OP picture a joke?

>>6290723
Just like the project.

>>6290714
Hatsukoi got trolled more hard.

>>6290740
Seriously though, I'm confused. Are the names of the girls seriously just translated, not just romanized?

>>6290787
They thought it would be clever to find/replace the names with literal translations to identify the version. This is opposed to something intelligent like having a version number.

>>6290787
Wait till you see the beta names.

>>6291343
FUCK YEAH KEPLER-KUN!

>>6290687
>"Being [hugged] tightly by you... feels good"
>"It feels good... when you [hug] me tightly..."
>Much better.

Maybe it looks better to you, but one thing is pretty obvious --- you left out HIS FUCKING NAME. Everything else doesn't matter; if a concept like that is lost, the translation is a failure. The original line might as well have used 君, and there'd be no difference.

It should be standard protocol to replace the name with a pronoun in most cases. Japanese uses name address far, far, FAR more often than English. If you copy that you get something that reads like shit in English.

>>6293399
I would prefer proper nouns remain proper nouns and pronouns remain pronouns, since there's still a difference in English between calling someone by his/her name and just "you". Compare:

>Shou-kun......Shou-kun.....!
>You......you......!

>>6294427
Using names instead of second person pronouns in English only works for direct addresses and not predicates or objects.
I believe he meant something like this
晶君が好き
>I love Shou-kun
>I love you
>I love you, Shou-kun

The translation currently does stupid shit like the first one, which is technically correct.

>>6294460
>which is technically correct.
And that's good enough. The meaning is perfectly clear too. Stop trying to turn this project into a TLwiki-style one, we want nothing to do with you elitists.

>>6291343
I love these alpha and beta names.

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>>6293007
>It feels really good, Shou-kun... when you hug me tight...
Now all you trolls can shut up.

...and whoever was fucking around the 7600s in the 4th file is massively inaccurate. This is a translation, not a rewrite.

This is why I don't translate shit--
nobody's happy, and it's never right.

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Too busy with doing other shit. Will try to catch up tomorrow.

Have a bump Flyable Heart Translation Thread

>>6294986
A translation isn't a translation if it doesn't make sense in the target language. Translating is not a one-to-one mapping. Fuck, you're even keeping the Japanese sentence structure!

Someone translated 「なんか、ずっとこうしたいかも……」 as "I want to stay like this forever..." and then someone changed it to "Something like this, I may want to do it in this way continuously......?"

This... is a joke right? People bitch at people to help and when they do, they're lines get replaced by garbled gibberish? Why are you literally sabotaging this project?

Someone translated 「なんか、ずっとこうしたいかも……」 as "I want to stay like this forever..." and then someone changed it to "Something like this, I may want to do it in this way continuously......?"

This... is a joke right? People bitch at people to help and when they do, their lines get replaced by garbled gibberish? Why are you literally sabotaging this project?

>>6296854

It's this faggot (>>6294986) that's claiming we're "rewriting". Fuck this shit. One tries to come up with an honest good translation that reads well in English, and some fool comes and replaces shit with poor attempts at a one-to-one direct "translation" that makes fuckall sense, and ironically, actually loses meaning from the original Japanese!

Can we stop calling this a collaboration?
Because you guys obviously don't want any help.

Also, can we stop calling this a translation?
Because you guys obviously don't want to write English, but Japanese parsed English words.

>>6296915
Then what the fuck should it be called?

This project was a failure from the beginning ...
Why don't you play it in japanese, at least, it'll be accurate sentences ...

>>6296931
A dictionary circlefuck.

>>6296931
babelfish

ITT fucking trolls with symptoms of autism everywhere.