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This time, there's nothing between the two of us.
I lean my body and kiss her.
After a moment, we part. I pull her chin back a bit and open her mouth

Tomoyo
"Wait a minute..."

She backs off and covers her mouth with her hands.
Looks like she's making sure of how her breath smells.

Tomoya
"You worry too much."

As it is now, I'm hanging over Tomoyo, pushing her down.

Tomoyo
"A girl with no delicacy is disgusting, right?"

She glares at me, face up.

Tomoyo
"Besides, you hate using any kind of ... breath sprays.... and others things like lipcream..."

Tomoya
"Don't say that. You're fine just the way you are, though."

I grab her arm(s), and approach her lips/mouth

Tomoyo
"Oh... Fine.... I won't use any then."

The distance between us shrinks. Whenever Tomoyo talks, it's breath-consuming. Even that's lovely.

Tomoyo
"Even so, I'm a girl, take my mood int--"

I shut her mouth up.
I stretch out my tongue. I feel teeth. But she allows me entry and my tongue passes into her mouth.
In there, another hot and wet tongue was waiting for me.
Our tongues meet. We persistantly taste eachother.
The area under Tomoyo's tongue is wet with her saliva.
My tongue is between Tomoyo's lips.
And Tomoyo is sucking on it.
She's tasting my tongue, sucking on it often.
Sometimes, she swallows[salvia] so that she can do a strong suck.
My tongue's root is so stretched, that it's almost painful.

Tomoyo
"Mh..."

At the end, she strongly sucks on it. And, with a big slurping sound, my tongue is released.

>> No.598966

Tomoyo
"Huff... Puff..."

Tomoyo's hot breathing hits the tip of my nose.
My captive leg was released.
This time...

[x] Kiss normally
[ ] Focus on breathing
[ ] Focus on saliva

I bring her face near, making our lips meet.
The itention of the kiss was nothing more than that.
However, my lips were seperates and her hot tongue goes inside.
I close my teeth, and because of that, I keep her from entering completly.

>> No.598971

I shut her up.
This time, I put my tongue in, persistently opening her teeth, into her mouth.
In a daze, I indulged in Tomoyo's lips and tongue.
Eventually, Tomoyo also actively starts moving her tongue, beginning to violently intertwine.
My jaw becomes heavy. Finally, we part.
A straight thread[of saliva] is stretched out, before snapping and going down Tomoyo's chin.
She wiped it away with her finger.

Tomoyo
"Pervert..."

She looked away, sulking.
That behavior is so cute I can't stand it.(alt. "SO CUTE, I'M GONNA DIE")
Tomoyo at a time like this really seems like a girly kind of girl.
I'm really glad for having her as my girlfriend.

>> No.598965

Tomoyo
"Huff..."

She lets out a sigh.
We rest for a moment. And soon, it was inside the mouth again.

(Kissing sounds)

Tomoyo, in a daze, sucks on my tongue.
Doing that, my wanting thing is feeling greatly stimulated.
As it is now, the exicted part of the lower half of my body is rubbing against Tomoyo's thigh(s).

(Kissing, sucking)

And now, my tongue is greatly being strongly sucked on.

>> No.598972

Compile it into a text document so I can try patching.

>> No.599016

can't wait for the tomoyo after patch. Please translator guy, txt this shiznat!

>> No.599041
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>>598972
>>599016
I'll release both the .txt files with original script and translation.(I.E. Japanese and Engrish) soon.(Tomorrow maybe?)

>> No.599073

oh dear god i came.

>> No.599074

Thanks anon, a little progress is still something for this anon to hope for, thanks.

>> No.599096

>>599074
lol, redundancy.

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>>599073
You did? I think KEY's writing of H-scenes is horrible. I didn't have a boner at all... But then again, I don't really have a thing for making out.

Anyway, next H-scene is either(IIRC)
[ ] Handjob with panty
[ ] Footjob(with socks on)
Pick one.

>> No.599122

>>599115
>I don't really have a thing for making out.

Me either. Either hot dickings or go home.

>> No.599126

HOLD SHIFT FOR FOCUSED MOVEMENT

>> No.599131

>>599115
[X]Footjob if cumming on her feet will keep her from dying from toxemia.

>> No.599155

What kind of faggot doesn't like cuddly kissing?

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>>599131
BAD END

Only one vote? I guess it's footjob then.

>> No.599161

>>599157
Handjob scene was hotter.

>> No.599166

>>599155
Who said I don't like it? I just don't get turned on by it.

>>599161
Maybe, maybe not.

Note: I'll go back and translate both scenes at one point.

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