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So I was just scribbling around and wondering: Would you guys play a VN with my art, if the story seems ok? Pic related.

>> No.5758481

Yes, better than some of the VN art I've seen
These faggots play umineko and umineko is fucking terrible

>> No.5758476

Sure, it'd be the first monochrome VN I've played.

>> No.5758487

looks better then some scenes in 'one kagayaku kisetsu e'

>> No.5758498

>>5758487
Sure, that was a QUALITY overdose

>> No.5758499

draw some ecchi stuff and we'll see if its any good

>> No.5758511

I know someone who doesn't draw hands because he can't draw hands.

>> No.5758516

>>5758511
OP?

>> No.5758573
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>>5758487
uguu please kill me

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>>5758573
I like this one better.

>> No.5758598

Hands are hard to draw, not OP

>> No.5758601

I think art doesn;t really matter in an eroge.
As long as the writing is awesome, super well drawn shit will flow from the fans.

>> No.5758606

Learn to draw hands.

>> No.5758616

>>5758606
How? ;_;

>> No.5758617

It's okay OP, even if you can't draw hands you can hide them in some way with every sprite and nobody will notice.

>> No.5758619

>>5758616
http://www.posemaniacs.com/tools/handviewer/

>> No.5758621

>>5758606
ZUN doesn't draw hands and you autists are always circlejerking over him in between meals, drinking grape juice and reading your free comics.

>> No.5758630

>>5758619
Thank you, this could help!

>> No.5758638

>>5758617
That doesn't work for CGs though.

>> No.5758646

>>5758601
Yeah, this too. Higurashi had objectively terrible art and it got an 88 on ErogameScape. But good art is what draws people in.

>> No.5758665

>>5758646
The thing is, if I would make a VN with my not so good art, I don't think anyone would even bother to take a closer look, since I'm not part of the japanese masterrace.

>> No.5758673

>>5758646
It's a SOUND NOVEL HUUUR

>> No.5758677

>>5758665

>> No.5758687

ive seen you post this stuff here before. just stop asking and do it. did you even pick a name after that thread?

>> No.5758692
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5758692

OP I will only play it if you make her less thinstick and skewed. Learn2 proportion. Learn2 balance (I rotated the image a little clockwise because the original leans too much to the left)

>> No.5758703

Fucking attention whore

>> No.5758705

>>5758687
That was ages ago, I'm surprised you even remember that, and I think I have improved since then (but maybe not)

>> No.5758712

>>5758705
well you should start posting some new content otherwise people will start saging. just saying

>> No.5758720

>>5758703
I just wanted some opinions and maybe some help, like >>5758619 and >>5758692

>> No.5758728

I cant draw for my life so personally I think it's awesome.

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>>5758705
Well, here's a colored sketch I drew yesterday.

>> No.5758747

Make her a bit shorter.

>> No.5758755

So what's the story? I can see she's wearing a school uniform

>> No.5758758

Holy disproportions Batman!

>> No.5758782
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5758782

I really like the way you draw faces. It reminds me a lot of Koyama Hirokazu's art (pic related).

>> No.5758786

>>5758739
hey that's not bad. Care to share more of the plot please?

>> No.5758791

>>5758755
Oh, that girl is just an example for what my art looks like. There is no story or idea at this point, but I just wanted to know if people would even consider to read whatever it will be with this kind of art.

>> No.5758810

>>5758791
i'd read it

>> No.5758824
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5758824

Also working on a Bridget pic but I messed up the perspetive and can't get that one arm right...

>> No.5758825

>>5758791
you have some self esteem issues. google one to the radiant season, MOON, kanon, or tsukihime, you'll see you have talent.

>> No.5758827

>>5758791
just go ahead and make the story, art is not the main problem. You will surely find someone with good art to draw for you if your story catches his attention.

>> No.5758835

if i knew how to code or write well i would help you out

>> No.5758849

just dream a weird story then write it

>> No.5758855

Higurashi and Umineko - crappy art, many players love it because it has a great story

>> No.5758862

>>5758791
Only porn games does high quality art matter. If you plan on making it less sex based then it's the story itself that will be the thing that wins people or not. Also in terms of art, the most important thing isn't detail but how well their expressions are delivered.

>> No.5758864

>>5758855
Yeah, but see >>5758665

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>>5758791
I like your art. It is good.

>> No.5758866

Make it a VN about a mini girl. I'm thinking about the girl being a classmate of the MC, then she just suddenly turned tiny one day in school, found by MC, and she's too ashamed to go home or see other people, so she goes live with MC.

>> No.5758880

>>5758619
>http://www.posemaniacs.com/tools/handviewer/
Maaan if only you can change the angle of lighting as well.

>> No.5758915

Well, there's been translated visual novels (mostly short ones) with worse art than yours, so I'm sure some people wouldn't mind.

>> No.5758929
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OK, thanks /jp/ for your kind words and help, especially >>5758619 this will help a lot, I hope.

>> No.5759002

>if the story seems ok?

Big IF.

>> No.5759261

Can't wait to the ero scenes.

>> No.5759275

OP you still haven't drawn her sucking a dick.

>> No.5759290

>>5759275
>>5759261
That won't happen, sorry.

>> No.5759299

>>5759290
so why are you wasting our time?

>> No.5759304

>>5759290
Why not?

>> No.5759308

>>5759290
Confirmed for female.

>> No.5759314

>>5759304
Because I can't draw it well enough to please you.

>> No.5760840

Someone make a new original content thread, this guy needs to come.

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