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So, he's doing full comics now...

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keep on dreamin' erika

Transkations please

Rifyu really likes to ship Battler with everyone, doesn't he?

Also I like the idea of Erika in the "Sherlock Holmes" costume. Maybe someone on Pixiv will draw it.

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Translation, please.

I translated some of the Rifyu comics on Danbooru, maybe I'll give this a shot.

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Random anon bump because I daww'd.

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BURINK WINKERU, I SUMMON THEE.

The master does it again

>>4850323
1. Monthly Mystery... is the name of a detective story magazine.
A serialization started by famous authors like Hachijou Touya, it has also become popular for its grand prize for reader submitted short stories.
2. Authors contribute Question Arcs or Answer Arcs (Where a solution to another author's work is chosen.)
Particularly excellent works are published in the magazine, but highly valued ones are in turn presented the awards "Grand Prize," "Excellent Prize," "Winner," and "Honorable Mention."
3. One such contributor, Furudo Erika (Pen Name: Erii)
\Thank You-!/
Honorable Mentions: 15-
4. Another honorable mention, huh... Ah...!
5. This guy solved my work again... (And it's even a winner)
Answer Arc
~Winner~
White Tiger
"The Unvanishing Secret Room" by Erii
Answer Arc

>>4850324
1. Pen Name: "White Tiger"------
Ever since Erika's work started to get published,
He was one who would contribute an Answer Arc to each one,
And would sure enough be awarded.
2. Someday I'll write something so difficult to understand...
That neither this guy, nor Hachijou-sensei can solve!
3. Riiiiing, I'm a fucking telephone!
4. -----Hello, this is Furudo... eh!?
"Monthly Mystery"
Publisher's Head Office Building-

>>4858594

>>4858828
Er... could you make the text a bit bigger for some of the bubbles? Or at least space it out a bit more, please?

>>4850335
1. Okay everyone, Welcome!
Hat: Editor in Chief
I am Monthly Mystery Editor in Chief Virgilia.
2. Today we have gathered all of you wonderful people to get along, of course,
Warmly talking about your works is also fine, as is creating motives for your. Please use these facilities however you please.
[dasuo] [monk] [Pnyo]
3. I came here to meet that "White Tiger" guy...!
There's no way he wouldn't come, right?
4. Will "White Tiger"-san come?
Dunno...
[Editing Member]
5. Sorry we're late!
I'm "Demon King" Ushiromiya George.
I'm "White Tiger" Ushiromiya Battler.
6. He is...!
[Why did you call that fully naked man?]
His nude photographs became the motif to my works of corpses of unnatural deaths.

>>4858860
>>4858594
Did it over, I hope it isn't too squished.

>>4858749

>>4850338
1. Me, a motif?
...You pervert!
No, a corpse of unnatural death. (You are.)
2. Nice to meet you, White Tiger-san, I'm Erii.
Hm? Aah, "Truth is, I need no one" was interesting.
3. "Truth is, I need no one" was Erika's first work to be published in the magazine.
Wait... Doesn't that make it sound like my debut title was the only interesting one!?
4. Well, it's like, recently they've been concluding too skillfully, or
The roughness of the old days is gone!
5. Dramatically writing the Answer Arcs has also become troublesome!
What's with this guy-!!?
6. My first impression was that he was the worst
7. But, as our encounters piled up,
I knew that he would also come to really like mystery novels again.

>>4859264
>mystery novels
Replace with "detective stories" for consistency's sake.

>>4859076

Are there any Ep6 spoilers in these ones?

>>4850341
1. I had completely lowered my guard around him,
Hey, Battler-san, this Sunday,
Would you go watch a movie with me?
...and thus, invited him on a date.
2. I watched a mystery B-movie with him-
Ecstasy to your eyes-
3. \They showed it threw the culprit's perspective.../
\Nah, that trick should instead be.../
After that, we critiqued it-
It wasn't exactly the most orthodox date between a man and a woman.
4. ----but
Huh?
5. Erii-san, it's starting to seem like you're writing a lovely romance.
Have you perhaps fallen in love? Teehee
6. People have begun to notice
Hey, what did sensei say?
All except for one thickheaded idiot...

In hindsight, "corpse of unnatural death" looks stupid.
Make it "victim corpse" or just "corpse."

>>4850343
1. Battler! I'm halfway done writing my new work!
2. \Hey, I told you to stop/
Hey, Father, haven't you been cold recently?
3. PAPER NOISES
4. DASHING NOISES
MORE PAPER NOISES
5. Ever since then, Erika suddenly stopped contributing to the magazine.
If it's come to this, then I don't get to read White Tiger-kun's works either...
SOB SOB
E~h
Shirt: DORA
6. ... ...
7. \I'M A TELEPHONE/

>>4859395
>>4859264
Haven't noticed any so far. There's one, but it's very subtle unless you're already read EP6.

>>4850345
1. Erika? Hey, you're... halfway done with your new work, right?
If that's the case, then I can't send in an Answer Arc, ya know?
2. Just shut up, okay? This has nothing to do with you.
Will you please stop calling me? [TL note: MOTHERFUCKING KAKERU, this sentence could mean anything out of context]
3. No way! Don't you love detective stories!?
Wasn't that your passion!?
4. That's right...
Those stories might not have been what I loved...
5. Now I realized-
Because, every month, he'd "answer"...
That was the reason I was able to keep writing.
6. Anyway, aren't you satisfied with that boobie blondie!?
Hah? What the hell are you talking about?

>>4859449

>>4859083
>RIIIIIIIIIING! I'M A FUCKING TELEPHONE!

I loled.

Whats with that hair?

That's actually a pretty cool idea for a magazine.

>>4859660

I actually might buy magazines if they had one like it.

>>4850348
1. Huh? That blonde girl from before wasn't your girlfriend?
Father ♥
No! That bitch just started stalking me on her own.
2. Well, I'm an admirer of your work, so I'm looking forward to your comeback.
3. That night, I finished writing the uncompleted story.
Yeah... sorry.
Just what sort of "answer" would he give?
4. I'm not worried about him at all.
Because I'm sure he will guide us to an unexpected, mysterious, cute, wonderful happy ending. Of this I am certain.

Rifyu is Ryukishi's alternate personality. Ryukishi couldn't handle knowing that he had to get rid of Erika so he gave his love for Erika to Rifyu.

>>4859632
Panel three's bubbles are reversed.

>>4859708
I see what you did.

>>4859720

You mean the dialogue between Erika and Battler?

>>4859522

>>4859782
Yeah, also,
>threw
should be
>through
My fault.

>>4859796
Fixed.

I'M A FUCKING TELEPHONE

SUCK MY RECEIVER

>>4859791

The telephone is the only interesting character.

I'M A FUCKING TELEPHONE

IT'S ME, JESSICA

>>4859842
But then who was phone?

>>4859613

>>4859881
Kyrie.

>>4859791

Is the blonde Beatrice?

>>4859911
Jessica's always been blonde, dude.

>>4859891
>Because, every month, he'd "answer"
You're missing
>That was the reason I was able to keep writing.

While you're fixing that, maybe cut off the "because."
And I was joking about that TL note.
And the telephone.
But whatever.

>>4859613
>>4859952

Fixed. The telephone makes it a bit more interesting too.

Great story, good job translating/editing.

[good]

>>4860013
You're still missing
>That was the reason I was able to keep writing.

>>4860159

>>4859814
>4.png
>>4860013
>6.png
What happened to numero quinto?

>>4860032
>No that bitch just started stalking me on her own.

Why is the text in some of the dialog boxes kind of blurry?

thank you Blick Winkel!

Blick is a bro, as always. Also whoever edited, good job as well.

>>4860032
>No that bitch just started stalking me on her own.
Dohoho. BatterXAnyoneButBeato is my OTP.

>>4860527
Amen.

>>4860552
I think Rifyu did a really cute BatterXRosa comic. I really wish I had saved it...

>>4860579

>>4860590
?

umineko needs more spin offs. can't get enough

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Wait, don't let this thread die until i come back from classes, I still didn't read it!

>>4869206
>until i come back from classes
(≖_≖)

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