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Post drawings/jp-related OC here. All OC is welcome!

Old: >>45324103

>> No.45591284

>>45587763
thanks for making the thread

>> No.45591874
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(J)Ellyfish.

>> No.45592007
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Wolfy

Also I hope I manage to make a xmas themed drawing before the 25 ends

>> No.45592046

>>45591874
lmao I love this, good twist on your 2hu mermaid theme.

>> No.45592261

>>45592046
My buddy wants Yuuka Fish, but he prefers Windows version, so sadly Elly - sidekick got moved to separate pic.

Im still mad that i didnt draw Megumu Seagul on Tsukasa one.....

>> No.45595865
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Drew Marisa with a huge ass, how original.

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Merry christmas jaypee!

>> No.45601312

>>45587763
Always great to see HR art

>> No.45601553
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I tried following a reference, I want to learn how to draw

>> No.45601575
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And a cute maid

>> No.45601613
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No one asked for this crossover but here's Medicine and Shion.

>> No.45601623

>>45601613
There's a hole in the middle because I accidentally slip water on it.

>> No.45601707

>>45587763
That looks really good anon how long did it take you to draw?

>> No.45604296

>>45601613
Very nice. I hope Shion will be ok tho.

>> No.45608295

https://magma.com/d/rbP3yD3Yea
room for christmas

>> No.45610905
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Im' waiting for snow but there's none yet
Here's a Letty

>> No.45612601

>>45608295
I did my part
I hope more people join soon

>> No.45612914
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Finished this >>45599146 now proper. Merry christmas jaypee!

>>45612601
I'll try to do something during the week

>> No.45612995

>>45610905
Also btw lovely Letty. Incredible coloring as always!

I miss her so much, I'm literally melting at 36°C . Help me Letty, save from Okuu

>> No.45616239

>>45612914
>that Clowpiece
sex

>> No.45621440

>>45591874
Cute jellyfish Anon! My personal tip would be to not be afraid to be less symmetrical. Humans love asymmetry, which is why 3/4 poses are so popular.

>>45595865
The world needs more ass and titties. Don't feel bad if that's what you wanna draw. You are doing gods work

>>45601553
>>45601575
Your drawings are quite nice Anon. Please try to take photos of them with better illumination. Don't be shy, I unironically like them!

>>45601613
Are you the guy that has been drawing Medicine here and there these past months? You've improved quite a lot

>> No.45625272

>>45621440
>Cute jellyfish Anon! My personal tip would be to not be afraid to be less symmetrical. Humans love asymmetry, which is why 3/4 poses are so popular.

Unironically my new year resolution. I really need to take the gloves off and actually push myself this year.

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45625612

https://vocaroo.com/1gnbevwl1ylq
Musicanon here, NuDisco arrange of Kagome Kagome and some Invisible Full Moon. 5/9 done for my album.
I need to adjust the mix but it's pretty much done. My only gripe is the same as always, it doesn't sound as professional as some artists like Shibayan and Syrufit. I doubt I'll ever be satisfied until my stuff sounds like it's on par with Japanese doujin producers.

>>45610905
Really nice art! I love the colours and how fluffy her hair looks.

>> No.45631921

>>45612914
Both look lovely. Heca needed bigger "presents" tho.

>> No.45632039

>>45631921
Because the boxes couldn't fit the planets otherwise, right?

>> No.45632893

>>45608295
bumping this

>> No.45632961
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I drew kyrie from himouto umaru chan

>> No.45636606

>>45632961
Cute! Do you use MS Paint?

>> No.45639136

>>45608295
Did my civic duty and started something. Hopefully will end it before the year does lol

>> No.45643740
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I made this 2hu-like original a while ago. I'm not as happy with it now as I was at the time but I still think it came out nicely.
https://vocaroo.com/18jtuuy1eT6r

Also a more recent non-touhou track that's more of a bad part of town bgm thing
https://vocaroo.com/1fjgrnSETfXZ

>> No.45643826

>>45625612
>My only gripe is the same as always, it doesn't sound as professional
People usually say this because of mixing issues but I really don't think it's your case at all.
The only reason you don't think it sounds "professional" is probably that it's not as involved as the composers you admire, who use way more effects and more heavily designed sounds.
Your stuff doesn't sound amateurish at all, it's just not as good yet on a creative level.

Keep at it, you have parts of this down that some people never even get once they go pro for real.

>> No.45644310

>>45639136
good job

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Not exactly a drawing but what do you guys think?

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>>45643826
Thanks! It means a lot. I'm going back to touch up the track, add more effects, and give it a more unique sound and I won't stop until it sounds the way that I envision it in my head. I want to one day stand on-par with the JP producers I admire so giving up would be the worst thing I could do.

>> No.45647060

>>45646967
What's this? cute

>> No.45647091
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>>45647060
A 3D model

>> No.45648549
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>>45599146
Marisa looks like she's about to murder someone

>> No.45650766

>>45647091
Blender?

>> No.45651563

>>45608295
Let's keep the magma going! /jp/ is a slow board so it's fine if it takes us time to fill it up.

>> No.45651568

>>45650766
Yes

>> No.45657291

>>45647091
Cute model.
>>45651563
I will try to hot into magma tommorow.

>> No.45665957

I started drawing but I had to leave for a party.

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>>45665957
Same. I want to get it done by tomorrow for the start of the new year. Still have to put my album out too but after Anon's advice earlier in the thread I'm going back and remastering what I've done so far so that it's better on a creative level.

>> No.45667905

>>45667606
Gives me a lot of Disgaea vibes. it's incredible Anon, I shall root for you

>> No.45667925

>>45667905
Thank you! Harada Takehito is my main artistic inspiration. I feel like my style is too similar but at this point I don’t know how to differentiate it.

>> No.45667954

>>45667606
Album? This just reminds me that I want to sing for something, but there's basically nothing I can just sign up for.

>> No.45667979

>>45667954
Yeah, I’m the musicanon who’s been spamming my stuff recently. I’m hoping to get a 2hu album out by the end of the month.

>> No.45669611

>>45667606
>>45667925
blog?

>> No.45670692

Happy new year

>> No.45670701

>>45608295
I couldn't make it this time, but good to see it was still very active and people drew plenty of nice stuff.

>> No.45675603

>>45667606
Very cute dork.

>> No.45676281
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Happy new year, /jp/. Thanks for letting me shill my music here in recent weeks and thank you for the feedback given. I'm aiming to draw more and to make more arrangements so hopefully I'll have more to share in the future.

>>45675603
Thanks.

>> No.45676402

>>45676281
Very nice linework and colors
cheers

>> No.45679395
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I decided that my first drawing of the year was the fish

>> No.45679423

>>45679395
Nice. I always like how painting-like your stuff looks. How do you get it to be like that whilst keeping the lineart distinct?

>> No.45679455

>>45679423
I sketch first a pencil, then I apply colors over the lines, then lineart again the things I want to have more contrast

>> No.45679743
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not used to draw digitally

>> No.45679772

>>45679743
she needs eyebrows

>> No.45679779

>>45679455
I'll try and give it a shot sometime during the week. Sounds fun. Any tips for painting environments?

>> No.45680218

>>45679395
le fishe

>> No.45681774

>>45679779
The general idea that you should work big to small should work
Pay attention to how the colors work together

>> No.45687705

>>45679395
Super cute hime.

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Two week vacation over

>> No.45687826
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And a digital patche redraw

>> No.45689541

>>45646967
>>45647091
You guys think I need to change the eyes?

>> No.45690193

>>45689541
Depends a bit on what you want, but I would try to make the upper eye lines a bit longer to cover the closer to center of the face area.
If not most artist tend to make the upper eye lines thicker or avoid sanpaku eyes(irises not filling all the vertical space of the eye).
Honestly eyes have a lot of dam things you can change it's hard to get them right, but imo Marisa looks a bit surprised with those eyes.

>> No.45691782

>>45687812
sexxx wolf,I like that cleavage + eyes and slightly different hair

>> No.45694395
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>>45687826

>> No.45694469

Is there some kind of guidlines I can follow to draw loli characters? Every time I try I end up just drawing an adult body with a flat chest and a bigger head. Doesn't feel lolilike enough. It annoys me.

>> No.45694495

>>45694469
https://exhentai.org/g/1139944/79abd49230/

>> No.45694684 [SPOILER] 
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>>45694395
Could be bigger...

>> No.45694928

>>45694469
I don't draw Loli myself so my only advice is that imagine the complete opposite of what makes a woman sexy and maybe you'll get there

>> No.45695055

>>45694469
Depends if you want a sexy loli like Jack the Ripper or Clownpiece, or you want an innocent loli like Yotsuba. They are very different despite both being lolis

Personally I just drew them here and there until my brain kind of "got it" on intuition.

>> No.45695439

>>45694684
Go on...

>> No.45695549

>>45695439
How much more...

>> No.45696067 [SPOILER] 
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>>45695549
I tried going bigger but proportionally speaking, it was getting harder to maintain the shape, I would have to fundamentally draw chounyuu with the whole body in mind

>> No.45696734

>>45695055
I mean sexy lolis like Clownpi.

>> No.45696903
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>>45691782
Hopefully the digital version will turn up good, might do a big version that will be better than the last time I tried drawing kagu

>> No.45697532

>>45696734
Many artists draw Clowpiece differently

>> No.45698140
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Weird creature.

>> No.45699493
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happy belated new years, I hope everyone manages to make their wishes and goals come true
maybe I'll figure out how to draw ground one day

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https://vocaroo.com/1m9DmEJotsqv
Nu-Disco arrange of Deaf to all but the Song.
I'm really happy with this.
I think there are a few mixing issues, though. If anyone listens and picks up on something being too quiet/too loud/etc. I'd appreciate if you let me know.

>>45676402
I know it's late but thank you.

>>45698140
A very cute weird creature. She weirdly looks good as a Moomin.

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No hand drawing this time, need to go buy more pencil graphite, have a la rata

>> No.45704772
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>>45696903

>> No.45704919
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asslien

>> No.45706232

>>45704919
UFOPORNOOOO

>> No.45706639

>>45704919
10/10, I love teh Nueners so much....

>> No.45706984

>>45625612
>>45702943
I like the chill vibe of the Kagome one but the Mystia one clearly has more oomph
>something being too quiet/too loud/etc
I wanted to say at first that the main melody felt a bit too faint around the first minute but that only happened the first time I heard it, so it could be that actively searching for something being to quiet/loud gave me the wrong impression.
>>45643740
>2hu-like original
Might be because I'm a sucker for 2hu style but I really like this, makes me thing that your going through some sort of tunnel and ending up seeing a wide shot of the old capital or above the clouds when the song brightens up.
>a bad part of town bgm
Gives me pirate vibes for some reason, pretty catchy.
>>45511942
Also forgot to thank you for your post I started messing around with a few midis, even found a simple one for Two Worlds(underrated song imo). Probably should have started with this instead of composing from scratch without knowing shit and giving up.
Also qt Yachie btw.

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>>45706984
>makes me thing that your going through some sort of tunnel and ending up seeing a wide shot of the old capital
>pirate vibes
Who are you
Reveal your identity immediately or face DEATH

>> No.45709298

>>45702943
This sounds really good, keep at it.

>> No.45715384

>>45706984
>>45709298
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated. I'm going to add some more to the Kagome piece so that it sounds more full, I never realised it then but looking back, it's quite empty. I've only got a few more tracks to go then my album is all done, looking forward to resting after this.

>> No.45716449

>>45715384
The only thing I felt was a little weird in the Deaf to all but the song one was that it had bit buzz/bassy droning in the backgroundx, at around 04:21 is when I noticed it most clearly. I do notice though that it seems just be a thing with the mix itself, so if you mess enough with the frequencies it can be easened. Save for that, I don't really feel anything off.

>> No.45720514

>>45716449
Thanks for the feedback. The droning sound is from where the bass is so low that it sounds like it's dragging along, but you're right, I'll go back and edit the frequencies so it isn't as bad.

>> No.45724005

>>45708972
I just got curious due to your non touhou track, It somehow felt a bit like pirate like, felt like a stage inside wooden boat without context and with bad part of town I thought about pirates. I also thought that it sounds like action/platforming similar to Castlevania but not sure about that.
For the 2hu one I thought it had a SA stage1-3 and UM stage 4 feeling, had to listen to it a few times since at the first time I as more thinking of a PCB stage4 kinda level when listening.
Dunno maybe your just good at transmitting stuff with game ost?
Or maybe I live inside your walls

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the holidays have done terrible damage to my drawing muscle memory

>> No.45731064
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I wish I had a drawing tablet... Should I really start getting a part-time job? I feel like the cons outweigh the benefits though, since I seem to be doing well with just a pen and a paper anyway

>> No.45732314

>>45731064
Well, a drawing tablet is at most only a few hundred dollars if you really want a big decent one. If you don't need the money to pay for other stuff, saving that up won't really take long.

>> No.45732384

>>45731064
Just buy a $20 tablet and see if it works for you.
If not, you only lose 20 bucks and return to pen and paper, which is no big deal.

>> No.45732458

>>45731064
Are you a third worlder? most chink tablets are 70~150 usd pretty cheap, wacom tablets the pro line and cintiq are above 300 usd+ they are pretty good even their basic models.

70 usd is pocket change money unless you are a fellow third worlder.

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I found a retarded doodle I made a couple days ago at work.

>> No.45733252
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>>45702268
I know you tried really hard with the pose but honestly her upper body is quite fucked up. When the pose is hard like yours and you feel you are going to job uncontrollably if you attempt it, the best thing you can possibly do is look at references to see how other people do it, be it a drawing or an IRL pose. For example, I saw her pose and instantly thought of Yusuke from YYH since he also has a finger gun. I actually went found an image with a very similar pose to the one you were attempting, and I feel that could have been a good guide if I attempted a pose like this. Don't take it personal, no ones born knowing everything, but what you don't know, you must research.
Her legs also need some work but they aren't as bad as the torso. When you squat, your knees spread, instead those knees are both pointing forward. That leg pose is really hard to do also, maybe only 1 knee on the ground as support would look more natural. Also the knee that's further from the viewer is bigger when it should be smaller.

>>45703302
>>45704772
Personally I like the things you draw (big 2hu boobs) and I like that you draw so often. But I feel you need to take more time on each piece. Not every piece needs to be a 10 hour long task, but I feel your art would really start evolving if you tried to be more perfectionist once in a while. For example, every 3 drawings, you could try making one look as good as you possibly can, no matter how much time it takes. That's where you learn a lot, since you need to absorb a lot more information that you don't currently have to do that, and then when you go back to quick drawings, that information will start to appear there too. If you are just drawing for fun and not looking for improvement at the moment though, I won't say this again. This is just a random 4chan user's opinion, after all.

>>45704919
I want to grab it......

>>45730830
You draw quite good m8. Those lost braincells during the holidays aren't showing.

>>45731064
My first drawing tablet was an 80 bucks medium wacom without screen. It lasted me years. 10/10 investment.

>>45733196
Shouldn't have eaten those funny plants Raymoo

>> No.45740247

>>45733196
What do the runes say?

>> No.45742169

>>45740247
I wanted reimu to be scared of the pc-98 demons coming back to haunt her and write something like "but... It's from the past..." but my nihongo ga daijoubu janai so pls no bulli

>> No.45743268

>>45733252
Thanks for the feedback, I do these small busty drawings because I mainly want the practice for quickly putting something defined on paper in a short time, since I am usually doing these at work. I would like to do a larger more defined piece, but that will require more time that I wish I had. I will see about doing something this weekend perhaps.

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>>45743268
Less lewd cirno today, any ideas to draw?

>> No.45745174

>>45745154
Orin with aiming her huge and plump ass to (you)

>> No.45745188

>>45745174
Guess I will reference the Orin ass thread

>> No.45745334

>>45745188
based

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>>45745334
Damn son

>> No.45745570

>>45745543
Really hot, you should try to make a digital version too cuz this sketch is really damn good.

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>>45745570
Gato sexo

>> No.45745852

>>45745826
If you're going to paint this then consider adding black thighs too.

>> No.45745936

>>45745852
Like pantyhose?

>> No.45745947

>>45745936
Exactly like pantyhose

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>>45745947

>> No.45748571

>>45748542
funky

>> No.45749050

>>45748542
Imagine the smell.

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first thing i thought of when i read that this is the year of the dragon

>> No.45754560

>>45696067
that would cause so much back pain its unbelievable

>> No.45755214

>>45748542
hmm what to draw now...
>>45754560
Its a drawing, not like back pain is a problem unless you are a strength-let. I might draw some chounyuu today just for that.

>> No.45755230

>>45750903
why yukari... i want kasen, she tames dragons after all!

>> No.45755287

>>45755214
>hmm what to draw now...
Mizuchi with big boobs.

>> No.45755338

>>45755287
Ugh crap, I already startwd drawing kasen, I'll draw that after

>> No.45756205

>>45625612
Oh yeah baby Im grooving. Can't wait to see the album get released

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>>45755287
Kinda turned out thicker than busty

>> No.45757062
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45757062

>>45755287
Turned more thick than busty

>> No.45757072 [SPOILER] 
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45757072

>>45755338
Lol

>> No.45758558

>>45757062
Great stuff as usual from you. All ghosts need to be yuyuko level of bustiness.

>> No.45758952

>>45758558
I would give any 2hu a nice rack or more, I would draw yuyuko, but I had some requests for some other non-touhou characters I may try tomorrow

>> No.45759324

There was a drawfag who took requests in their own thread last year. Scribbly style they had. Did they vanish? Never saw them again and I assume they ditched the list of reqs they were working on.

>> No.45759460
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45759460

A deito with Chimata-chan!

>> No.45759543
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45759543

Bigger.....

>> No.45759927

>>45759543
just need to squish the boobs vertically to align that upper crease with her shoulders and under her arm or move her arm outward a bit more to get it to align better

>> No.45760001

>>45608295
Since when do I need to log in for this shit?

>> No.45760058

>>45759460
I’d let her buy my human rights

>> No.45760205

>>45759460
Very cute goddess!
>>45759543
Very lewd goddess!

>> No.45760267

>>45759543
Chimacoin on the rise....

>> No.45761447

>>45759543
Paizuri

>> No.45764355 [DELETED] 
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>>45758952
Based on request, face turned out great, body angle turned out wonky
>>45759324
I would do that but I would rather stay out of the spotlight of a single thread dedicated to my art

>> No.45764378
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45764378

I hate that kuroba ex is fucking up the captcha
>>45758952 #
Based on request, face turned out great, body angle turned out wonky
>>45759324 #
I would do that but I would rather stay out of the spotlight of a single thread dedicated to my art

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>>45764378
I tried drawing fern from sousou no frieren, but the side profile looked goofy and proportions looked wrong, so I drew yuyuko with a side profile face instead which turned out better

>> No.45765948
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>>45764378
I tried drawing fern from sousou no frieren, but the side profile looked goofy and proportions looked wrong, so I drew yuyuko with a side profile face instead which turned out better

>> No.45766593

>>45760001
Since the ponyfuckers who made it started marketing it to professional artists

>> No.45767726
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45767726

Letty but she childhood terror.
>>45702943
Thank you!
>>45704919
Nice butt.
>>45730830
Lovely Dai, can't wait to see finished (if you plan it).
>>45759543
Great, but not big enough. Make em even bigger.
>>45765948
Really nice angle, looks very dignified, even with her assest.

>> No.45768551
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45768551

I used to walk on the beach at night
I remember
The best time was when well, me and you...

>> No.45768606

>>45768551
kawaii and sugoi....

>> No.45768660

>>45768551
would give her my shekels/10

>> No.45768705

>>45676281
Extremely cute. I will now dedicate my year to her.

>> No.45769309
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>> No.45769892

>>45769309
Hot




Except the covered eyes I think it looks unappealing in anyone that isn't Hisami or Reisen

>> No.45771611
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45771611

Beedicine MELancholy

>> No.45771622

>>45771611
Boob?

>> No.45771624

>>45771622
Tit.

>> No.45771626

>>45771622
Boob-bees.

>> No.45771632

>>45771626
Honeymoons

>> No.45771641

>>45771632
Sweet big poison

>> No.45771935

>>45756205
Thank you! I plan to release it sometime either this month or next. I still have to finish some songs, draw the album artwork and make the XFD so there's a bit more to do but as gay as it sounds, I'm genuinely happy that someone is excited.

>> No.45772163
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45772163

So what do /jp/ think about this Alice? Any shortfall? Any tips and tricks I can improve?

>> No.45772173

>>45771626
>>45771632
>>45771641
fuck you

>> No.45772187

>>45772163
Long neck

>> No.45772680

>>45772163
Stop shading with the airbrush. Especially for anime-style Try doing more solid shades then blur when needed(for example, when the object casting the shadow is further, the shadow is more blurred). Theres a lot of nuance to shading so just take it easy and constant while taking steps to improve

>> No.45772712

>>45772163
The shading is alright, but the way the hair is placed makes me think it is a wig instead of free flowing hair, I would just make sure its more consistant

>> No.45772760

>>45772680
But I was doing exactly though. I just cant stand too much hard shadow so i blur them (especially when I need differentiate skin with other reflecting material such as satin)

>> No.45772840

>>45772163
The hair is fine, although you should remember that it follows the curve of the face, and comes to a point at the top. Her fringe looks a little too straight in other words.
What >>45772680 said is otherwise true though, the shading on the face is totally out of line with everything else. The highlights are pretty nice, but the shadows don't work.
If you're the guy I think you are I'd advise working on something as if you only had a pen for a while.
No colour, the shading you get by hatching / crosshatching / whatever.
It might sound boring / harsh, but I think it'd probably be the best thing for you. It's not that the airbrush tool doesn't have it's place, but the way you're using it isn't working and I can't put my finger on how exactly, without sounding overly critical.
The best way I can describe it is like if you took a photo of a mannequin and drew over it.

Other than that though, you've improved decently. Maybe just even drawing something other than character portraits would give room to develop without some of the habits I think you have.

>> No.45773122

>>45772840
What is difference you feel between mannequin and human? When I draw in moe style I never think as I am drawing a human. In fact I always thought the anime body, anime face is construct so they look inhuman beauty, like a doll.

>> No.45773210
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>>45772163
needs more loomis- i mean don't be afraid of edges if you fade the shadows everywhere it looks like pillow shading example on ties

also personally i would make the eyelashes ticcer and give her some emotions to her face and make some darker shadows too

>> No.45773290

>>45773122
It's subtle, but a skin-coloured mannequin has smoother features than a real human does.
Real humans have sharp brows, cheekbones, chins etc. but mannequins only have very soft contures that look vaguely like a human's features because they lack the context to dispel the illusion.
Of course, anime faces are well known for not following any law of proportion, or skull geometry, so take it with a pinch of salt, but what I'm trying to get at here is that the shading is too soft. I'm not saying it has to be razor sharp either, like a point source of light in vaccum, but using a lighter shadow and blurring it less might work out better.

If I look very closely I can see the flat colours where you've drawn in the shading deeply enough that it isn't affected by the blur. The only real thing I can tell you to do is try to use partially transparent layers instead of filling in block colours. Maybe try also quickly tracing a sketch of what her brow/nose would look like if you only had black and white.

All I can really say is that the linework is very nice. If I compare the shading on the hair to that of the face I can tell you the hair has been done quite well, and maybe you should try and keep that in mind for the next one. There's more detail in that that's benefitting of organic material, with steeper changes in colour.

Oh, and the direction of lighting might be funny. Actually if you fixed that all my earlier comments might be rendered invalid. The shadows from the hair on the right side of her face look like they're coming from the left of the camera and behind it, but the highlights on the left side of her face look as if there's a light somewhere to her left. If it's in front of her it'd light up the shadows on the right of her face more, but if it was behind or in line it'd have shadow coming from her nose and brow across her face more, and both positions would probably light up that patch over her left eye. That's something I just noticed, and it might have been what was bugging me.

I'm sorry if this isn't helpful for you, I'm not an expert by any means but I am confident enough in my own observational ability to make a comment. I hope I did help in any case, and you've piqued my interest enough that I want to help, even if it's not perfectly articulated what I mean. I'm just some internet stranger anyway, so it's up to you to figure out what to do with that advice, and it might even be nonsense from someone who doesn't know what they're talking about. In that case, try looking really hard at your art to figure out for yourself what you might need work on. If you can do that, anything else is just a matter of practice.

>> No.45773298

>>45773210
>>45773290
Just saw this, fixes pretty much everything I had to say.
A picture really is worth a thousand words.

>> No.45773372

>>45767726
Scary letty
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jHyR8kD2Uuw

>> No.45773440

>>45773210
>>45773290
Those are useful. Personally I dont think I capable of drawing that eyelashes nor that emotion either, but I will try that way of shading.
Though, I just notice you change the position of highlight on the eyes. Any meaningful reason behind that?

>> No.45773930
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POV: you are Zanmu about to be abducted
>>45773210
I like it much more

>> No.45773962
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>>45773930
Man I forgot to fix the orientation when I updated, such a pain :v

>> No.45773972

>>45773930
>>45773962
Pretty cool but what happened to her neck?

>> No.45774155
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>>45773972
5'12" zanmu vs 6' hisami, her neck is behind her collar

>> No.45774466

>>45774155
Man I wish that was me, still retaining my penis' current size

>> No.45774535
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>>45732458
Not only am I a third worlder, I also can't even save a single penny since I'm in a fucking primitive family where you can only keep shit you earned, anything else is confiscated except for this shitty phone
I did get a part-time "job" once though but that was just transporting water gallons and both the salary and the work is shit

Also, I'm apparently still studying and I'm in a journalism 'club' (it's fucking horrible, most useless club ever 0/10) so getting an actual part-time job that has a fixed schedule might be a bad choice

>> No.45774563

>>45774535
I didn't read your post, but I'm impressed by this art.

>> No.45774632
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>>45774563
Thanks anon, here's the digitalised version
Apparently, I'm not really good with coloring or shading since I mostly just draw with a pencil and paper so I keep it simple, and also I'm only using Ibis Paint on my phone lol

>> No.45774694
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Hisami face reveal real???

>> No.45774707

>>45774535
where are you from?

>> No.45774712

>>45774707
The Philippines (outermost layer of hell)

>> No.45774735

>>45774712
that sucks
hope things get better for you man

>> No.45774764
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>>45774735
Thanks, I need that today
Here's Eiki feet for You (I think I posted this in a similar /jp/ drawthread before I don't remember)

>> No.45774768

>>45774632
I thought it was Kosuzu...

>> No.45774823

>>45774768
Can't blame ZUN for having 180+ characters

>> No.45774895

>>45774535
>>45774632
Fuck, I'm basically in the same situation as you except that I can't draw THIS well on Ibis or frankly in any tool available in Mobile.

>> No.45774953
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45774953

Portable Zanmu
>>45774632
Dang I thought that was kosuzu too
>>45774694
cute~

>> No.45775020

>>45774953
Don't grope her like a doll schizo grape

>> No.45777548
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>>45774895
As long as you follow YouTube tutorials (the genuine ones, avoid autistic creators who only uploads tutorials to spoon feed their audience since they ran out of content) and apply it to your practice, literally everytime you draw you are improving
So instead of saying to youself "Wow, I drew something good!"
Tell to yourself "Wow, I improved than the last time I drew!" Even if it looks worse, since art is also partly muscle memory too you know
That's basically it. Any anon can draw well, you just have to never let your ass glue to that one comfort zone where you say "Nah, people are already praising me, I'm good enough. I'm lazy/depressed/retard anyway"

>> No.45777638
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45777638

did you forget about her?

>> No.45777663

>>45769309
thank you for drawing pretty much my favourite pose

>> No.45777702

>>45777548
Great advice also cute faerie! I might lewd her later

>> No.45777830

>>45690193
I tried to copy the eyes of Azumanga Daioh but im not good at drawing

>> No.45777941

>>45777548
>As long as you follow YouTube tutorials
Who would you recommend?

>> No.45781037
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45781037

anyone knows any good tutorials on how to understand colors and shading? I'm kinda lost here

>> No.45781195
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>>45777941
It might just be my opinion, but you don't need to stick to just one YouTuber or any art tutorial guy, you just need to find the most comprehensible video in a specific area you want to learn (clothes, head, anatomy)
Though I like oridays, he's a literal deity in art (apparently he doesn't have a tutorial for everything)
https://youtube.com/@oridays?si=5hQbMDTbHnVjEdjA

>>45781037
I think what you need to learn is how to draw clothes' wrinkles/creases, it basically teaches you how to shade. About coloring though, I guess learning how lighting and shadows work first will help

Very elegant Sakuya btw

>> No.45781342
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45781342

this is taking too long... how much time do you spend on drawing?

>> No.45781564
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>>45781037
painting isn't that hard, it is hard but not that much different from drawing, something really importat is to know the area you are painting on, knowing the volume/mass makes doing the shading,lighting and other stuff easier, color picking is kinda tricky, going darker or more saturated can be used as shading but the colors are different, then theres the style, you should start little by little instead of over polishing.

>> No.45781647

>>45781564
wtf you are a genius

>> No.45781797

>>45781342
about 100 faster then when i started drawing, the more practice you do the faster you get

>> No.45784398

>>45781797
should i stick to drawing full body?

>> No.45785235

>>45784398
practice what you want to draw

>> No.45785667
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45785667

I'm trying to get used to a tablet

>> No.45786099 [SPOILER] 
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>> No.45786272
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45786272

Valloside Majali from the Medice game

>> No.45789005

>>45786099
Overwhelmingly lewd and rude.
She looks familiar, was she one of the proposed official 4chan vtuber designs or am I totally imagining that?

>> No.45789991

>>45774535
>>45774895
This site went to shit the second you brownoids flooded in. Please go and stay go

>> No.45790065

>>45789005
What's being a bear implying?

>> No.45790153

>>45587763
Are requests allowed or accepted?

>> No.45792428

>>45790153
Personally I don't mind but also I don't want this thread to end up like other drawthreads that are 95% insane requesters. Just take your shot and see if someone does it

>> No.45793294

>>45790153
Why not, just post your request and hope any of the few drawfags still around likes it enough to draw it.

>> No.45794554
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45794554

Trying to draw in a more ZUN-y style.

>> No.45795265

>>45794554
Zunart + tits is good

>> No.45795398

>>45794554
I love this Reisin

>> No.45797544
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45797544

>>45789005
It’s glad to find out she was favourited by anons afterwards
And someone did discovers her reference with that bear

>> No.45799343
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45799343

Remimi

>> No.45799353
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45799353

silly smug baku

>> No.45799361
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45799361

smelly hell hikki

>> No.45799372
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45799372

aesthetic hell goddess

>> No.45799379
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45799379

the GOAT

>> No.45799387
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45799387

based human supremacist NPC

>> No.45799398
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hell's fertility goddess

also final drawing, end of spam :p

>> No.45799623

>>45799353
They all looks very 1920s

>> No.45800253
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45800253

Redid a drawing I did on january 2023. It was fucking terrible but if you want to see it https://files.catbox.moe/b6dgdu.png

We are all gonna make it jaypee. I fully believe it

>> No.45800595 [SPOILER] 
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>>45794554
Lewd edit before I start coloring
>>45800253
Truly amazing progress. You should feel proud!

>> No.45800978

>>45792428
>>45793294
Okay as long as you guys think it's okay.
I didn't want to impose.

Requesting a scared Remilia in her bed clutching the sheets close to her as she sees a vampire hunter in the closet or under her bed looking at her.

A follow up pic of Sakuya coming in and pulling the curtains back a bit to show a relieved Remilia it was just a pile of clothes.

>> No.45801106

>>45800595
What a huge carrot.

>> No.45801534
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45801534

>>45800978
And a third pic of a Belmont aggressively jumping at screaming and scared sakuya and remilia who are hugging each.

>> No.45801626

>>45786272
Glad to see Medicine's game getting recognition!

>> No.45803049
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45803049

Finished~

>> No.45803057

>>45803049
it's shit

>> No.45803074

>>45803049
Glorious ZUN greenish skin

>> No.45803127

>>45803057
meanie

>> No.45803141

>>45803049
where's the wiener? how am i supposed to enjoy this without her wiener?

>> No.45803143

>>45803049
can i mastubate to this

>> No.45803216

>>45803049
I think it's very good but to improve it I would change the skin color and put visible nipples under the clothes

>> No.45804355

>>45803049
very nice work. she's very pretty, and i hope she's not too cold.

some critique though:
- the sweater and kneesocks look somewhat pillow shaded, and the sweater contrast is a bit high for that kind of fabric
- the shine of the hair has a clear pattern for what i'd expect to be a bit more randomly distributed
- the transparent bamboo in front of the moon is annoying me
- the boobs are too small. you know how it is

good job anon

>> No.45804403
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45804403

>>45803049
Super cute bnnuy, for modern ZUN style you're on the right track.

>>45803216
>>45804355
>pillow shading
>plain hair shine
>skin tone
Pretty sure that's what the drawfriend was aiming for, pic related.

>> No.45804477

>>45804403
i'll give you the the plain hair shine is a good ZUN copy (it doesn't really extend into the hair like the nitori but then again the moon light is coming from the back), but ZUNart isn't pillow shaded, the dark edges are just more subtle. the pillow shading comes from overshading the other side of a dark edge, and i suspect here it's done for stuff like the sweater folds because they have a continuous curve, but it doesn't look right and doesn't feel like it'd be a quirk of the ZUN style.

>> No.45806681
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45806681

>>45803049
lmao

>> No.45806721

>>45806681
Based, OP didn't asked for any critique and autists still gave it. That's what killed the comfy low skill drawthreads we had about a year ago.

>> No.45806755

>>45806721
Please stop cheating on your husband

>> No.45806823
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45806823

https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm1939439
I tried singing this classic in mostly the official english lyrics, not sure how good I'm at mixing though. I'm also pretty sure I'm about to get a cold.
https://files.catbox.moe/tlwjic.flac
https://vocaroo.com/1f5lgXEju4xT

>> No.45806889
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45806889

lightly fidgeting fairy

>> No.45806917

>>45786099
Catbox uncensored?
Any blog, nice draw.
>>45797544
Could I get a qrd of this character?

>> No.45806930

>>45676281
I love this

>> No.45807083

>>45806681
>>>/v/663810854

>> No.45807090

>>45806823
Catchy

>> No.45807159

>>45803049
I like it, very nice.

>> No.45812141

>>45806889
Super cute. I really like double wings idea.

>> No.45812526

>>45807083
Gonna aggressively shit on and critique everyone's art from now on.

>> No.45812759
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I love evil women.

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>>45781564
thanks anon, sorry but I forgot to ask, what kind of brush do you use for coloring?

>> No.45820090

>>45817073
for skin painting use a solid color brush and the default blur brush and the spray tool
https://litter.catbox.moe/zhig3q.mp4

and for hair is the defaul water color with some minor tweaks to be darker to pressure sensitivity and the spray tool.
https://litter.catbox.moe/3w0ry9.mp4

for clotes is a mix of both, you also have to pick different colors depending on the are,light, shadows...etc.. i just used 2 colors to make it short.

>> No.45820880

I was in the middle of drawing an armored bunny suit kaguya (with oppai), but I ran out of lead... I'll try to finish it later

>> No.45821563

>>45812759
How could a cute little fox be evil? just look at her.

>> No.45824742
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https://files.catbox.moe/o09e3d.png

>> No.45827173

>>45821563
Her handjob grip is too loose. That's evil and cruel.

>> No.45828395

>>45824742
Now draw her giving birth.

>> No.45828404

>>45828395
He already did.

>> No.45828469

>>45828395
>>45828404
That was from a while ago
https://litter.catbox.moe/2b35xk.png

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Wall

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>> No.45829916

https://vocaroo.com/1i5kkr7f1JzA
About a month ago I did a NuDisco arrange of Flan's theme for my album but decided to redo it because I didn't think it was up to scratch.
Does anyone mind listening to this sample and seeing if it sounds alright? It's unmixed and cut in places just so it's not too long.
I think it sounds really amateur and not NuDisco-y enough. To me, it sounds more like 2000s electronic than what I'm going for, like BeatMario's style. I want my music to sound like it came from one of Shibayan's albums, obviously it's not as good but I still want it to be of a standard akin to that both in style and overall quality.
>>45824742
I really like your style. The thick eyes and small pupils are both cool and cute.
>>45829500
The colours here are really nice, it reminds me of an old painting. Have you considered using watercolour brushes?

>> No.45830353
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>>45820880
There we go, any other ideas?

>> No.45830384

>>45830353
Let Eirin join the fun, draw her with an equally erotic armor-suit.

>> No.45831424

>>45829500
I love this
Love the colors

>> No.45831574
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>>45830384
Maybe I should not have made a thread to go with it

>> No.45832862

>>45831574
The moon is lewd.

>> No.45834520

>>45829916
I have little to no knowledge on music theory, and zero clue about what goes into creating music, so my insights are only from the perspective of a listener.

The complexity is there, and I can tell there's several layers' worth of instruments, but it sounds too front-ended, if that makes any sense. Busy, in a way that makes it hard to appreciate each instrument's line. You mentioned it's unmixed, so I'm wondering if that's part of the process. Shibayan's stuff has an excellent sense of depth; the bassy synths are what I can only describe as fuzzy while still being prominent, and most every instrument is clearly distinguishable. Synths aren't always going at full blast, with plenty of pauses and muting, which I think helps add to that punchy feeling. When comparing this track, I don't quite hear that punchiness, though again I have no clue how much of that can be attributed to mixing (mastering?).

Taking 00:25 on your track, I was a little more reminded of something like hatsunetsumiko's On Fire. More funk or disco-feeling than nudisco, if that makes any sense. Closest thing I can think of to compare it to off the top of my head is 3:35 on Shibayan's Love: there's a lot of distinct rhythms going on, and they don't stick to constant eighth notes. The percussion has this groove to it that's really satisfying to tap along to. I guess you'd call that complexity? Now that I've listened to it a few times over, I'm wondering what that section in your sample sounds like without the... floaty-sounding synth going on in the back, or maybe just making it quieter. No idea how else to refer to it. I don't think it sounds particularly Shibayan-like.

Last thing, I think you're onto something with that very last part, with the intro notes to her theme. I don't know why it stuck out to me, but it did.

It's late, and I'm worried I've just vomited up a wall of text instead of giving you something tangible to work with. I may very well be completely off my rocker and should not be allowed to write half the things I do. Hope it helps somehow, though. I wanna listen to more.

>> No.45835018

>>45834520
No, don't worry about it, what you've said is really good feedback and I genuinely appreciate you taking time out of your day to listen and get back to me. Thank you very much!

>> No.45835051
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https://files.catbox.moe/4mtdy0.png

>> No.45835219

>>45834520
To go a bit further into detail (sorry, was rushed when writing >>45835018), I get what you're saying. It's like a blast of sound where everything mixes together, as you said, it lacks any kind of punch. That part was the most mixed so not much can be blamed on the mixing/mastering. I wanted it to sound full but it came out too crowded.

Yeah, you're making sense. I wanted to add a bit of funk influence to it but it sounds a bit out of place compared to the other parts of the track. The floaty-synth thing is a resampled 80s song, which, I'm not sure since it's from a sample pack, but I thought that the piece would sound less empty with it in. Here's it without the synth in the back https://vocaroo.com/19IjuL9zKmrK

Thank you. I wanted to stick some Flan influence in before her full leitmotif comes in by the final chorus. Maybe because it sounds slightly trance-like?

Again, thank you very much for the feedback, I honestly do appreciate how in-depth you went and it's very tangible. Though, it has made me realise that I rely too much on copying Shibayan and need to find my own style (lmao). I would like to try and branch out into other genres like Future Bass, Artcore and J-Core but I don't want my albums to be muddled messes of genres.

>> No.45838454

>>45835051
Sexo sukuna

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>>45831574
Bnuy

>> No.45842242

>>45835219
I'm genuinely glad I was able to provide some advice! About the full sound you're talking about, I 100% get what you're referring to, and it's a good thing to aim for, but at the same time, having some "emptiness" to contrast with helps a lot imo. Gives the listener some downtime and helps build anticipation for the fuller parts, or something of that sort.

I dig that section without the synth more for sure! At least, in a vacuum. I think it's a good example of how you don't necessarily need to fill things out to make them sound good, but it might just be a taste thing at the end of the day.

I went at it pretty much entirely focused on comparing it with Shibayan since you mentioned it and I do listen to his stuff a ton, which might've been a little too narrow-minded of me. Finding your own style is pretty important, and you're the one actually making the song so it makes sense to go for what you like and think sounds good. Easy for me to say since I don't make music, but still. For what it's worth, incorporating a few genres into albums doesn't feel out of place most of the time. Look at someone like Paradot, his albums have a ton of electronic and electronic adjacent subgenres that I swear sound made up half the time, but it all works together without a hitch. I'll be looking forward to hearing your album if you happen to post something about it here.

>> No.45845169
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what do you think?

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>> No.45845576

>>45845563
Fuck why did it get flipped

>> No.45845617

>>45845576
some phone pictures have metadata to "rotate" them, when you take photos and put them on 4chan therir metadata is wiped

>> No.45846114
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a lazy sketch of 3.1-tan
>>45806823
I also tried to refine the mix on this since the vocals were too buried.
https://vocaroo.com/1mZlfVyoFTnQ

>> No.45846260

>>45845617
I'll be more careful next time, thank you

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>>45845169
for a illustration type of drawing it looks too simple, for panel like pictures looks good.

>> No.45850379

>>45848598
thanks for the feedback. i like your drawing. i had no idea what to do with the clothes, the folds, the hair, the eyes, basically everything. it took way longer than i thought it would, but i picked up a few tricks to speed things up

>> No.45850498

>>45842242
Thank you again! It's really nice having some outsider insight, I don't have many others to share this with so I'm grateful for any feedback I can get. With that synth, I can definitely hear how much better it is without now. I thought it was an easy way to add a bit of an 80's touch but now that you've mentioned it it's just clutter.

It's alright, Shibayan is one of my biggest musical inspirations so the comparison to his works is appreciated, you're good! Even if you don't make music, what you've said isn't any less true and the Paradot comparison is very apt. I'll post all of the songs here once it's finished along with the album art I've drawn, though I'll remove the title from the cover and such because I don't want to be a shill. Are there any songs you'd like an arrangement of? I feel guilty for hogging so much attention here recently so if there's any song you want to see arranged, I'd be glad to stick it onto the album as an extra.

>> No.45850966
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Winter has always been my favorite season.

>> No.45850977

>>45850498
All good anon, thank you for taking the time to share! I don't often get to talk about music to begin with, so this is also pretty engaging for me.

Yea, I get that people don't always want to outright advertise their stuff for one reason or another. I appreciate the offer, but there really isn't any need for that, you asked for feedback and I just tried to give it my best shot. If it's truly going to keep you up at night, do something from PC98. Character, stage, title, credits theme, whatever you like or think would be cool. Everything from that era had a wildly different feel, and I always enjoy hearing arranges. More people should listen to it, anyway.

>> No.45852634

>>45732458
Anon how much is 5$ usd to your currency ?

You got talent, Draw,color and charge something like 5$ as you improve increase your prices.

>> No.45854715

>>45850966
Fuck you i want my comfy 30°C back.

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>>45855820
cute, I love this

>> No.45856403
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>>45856031

>> No.45856514

>>45856403
:)

>> No.45857323
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no thoughts, brain full of fairy

>> No.45857360
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>>45857323
>this better not be cunnypiece
>see filename

>> No.45857606

>>45857360
Hey man she's cute, sexy and fun to draw. I could draw her for days. If you want me to draw your 2hu then you could give me a good reason to

>> No.45857779
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>>45846114
I went above and beyond and got Windows 3.1 not to throw the cursor all over the place when using my tablet, allowing me to draw 3.1-tan on Win 3.1, which runs on DOS.
It doesn't even let you save in PNG, so the original file is this BMP.
https://files.catbox.moe/snldku.png
https://files.catbox.moe/mikg5l.BMP

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>>45857779
i tried drawing this in response to an anon saying I don't use Win3.1, but the mouse drivers on default Win3.1 were too fucked to use without extreme lag.
Switching them to someone's custom VMWare drivers helped me solve the problem, so I could actually use my tablet for the more detailed picture. Don't have the file anymore tho...

>> No.45858169

>>45858159
also installing them were a hassle, since they only work on VMware virtual machines, and you need to package them into .IMG floppy disk files and stuff.

>> No.45858408

>>45857779
How do get your drawwing tablet to work on old software?

>> No.45858443

>>45858408
Well it's obviously not using pressure or anything, but I loaded the VM into fullscreen on my drawing tablet (XP-Pen in this case) and just worked from there. Worked much better than using a mouse.
It was particularly AIDS about the tablet until I got the new VMware mouse drivers tho, cause the mouse pretended it was half a screen away from my pen, unlike the (hardware) mouse.

>> No.45858456

>>45858443
can u try to see if your tablet works with multipaint system on neko project

>> No.45858473

>>45858456
On PC98?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nIdFor2WOnw
Maybe, but then I'd have to set up an emulator first and foremost. I'll think about it.

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>> No.45859472

>>45859153
Cute rabbit.

>> No.45861572
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is there any way i can make this look better? i want to draw her holding her broom over her shoulder/back.

>> No.45861715
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>>45861572
at your level you should try do more gesture stuff, the pose is boring at the moment, dont worry too much about anatomy now, instead start with gesture then do your construction on top

>> No.45861770

>>45861715
I see, thanks. So far the thing that has fucked with me the most is finding the correct pose, as i lack the creativity and confidence for that

>> No.45861845

>>45861715
Very cute gesture kinda reminds me of Kana, guess I need to practice this too since I struggle with full bodies.

>> No.45861861
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My attempt at Marisa Kirisame in TH06 style. I hope you enjoy it :)

>> No.45861868
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And my first background ever

>> No.45866272

>>45861868
It looks cute, good job. I know people love drawing characters in white voids but I personally prefer backgrounds, no matter how simple. Really adds to it.
>>45861715
Sheesh, you're really good at that. I'm so bad at thinking of poses that I use references for every single thing I draw. At my level I really should be better at it, but I think there is some kind of disconnect in my brain because of autism or something idk.

>> No.45869243

what should be the op of the next thread

>> No.45869254

>>45869243
boobies

>> No.45869596

>>45869243
asses

>> No.45869670

>>45869243
Legs.

>> No.45869938

>>45806823
this is awesome

>> No.45870450

>>45807090
>>45869938
Thanks. I definitely should use a vocal warmup for the next one tho, and read a manual on mixing beforehand.

>> No.45870633

Someone make a newer thread, please.

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