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wat

what is this i don't even

>googles

god damn you're a retard

name her Shithead

Amanita Mushroomtan

Can't you just leave her alone, mugen?

>>2791389
wait this project is actually starting?
Fuck yeah

>can you give her a name?...
Varg Vikernes.

Please... I'm not good with western names...

Setting is like waterworld (minus the water) so dust storm is everywhere... so Googles is now a necessity...

>>2791405
I give it two weeks before it's abandoned, and three before it's forgotten altogether.

Drusilla Massey
Laura Blundy
Orpha Redsmith
Chloe Heaton
Hermione Davenport
Rosamund Ramsbottom
Mercy Napper

For fuck's sake, you could at least not name most of your characters after shitty 80's pop acts.

Also, Americans is now one of the most powerful religious organization on the planet where they worship the grat wise and powerful Abraham Lincoln.

http://brassgoggles.co.uk/blog/steampunk-resources/steampunk-name-generator

>>2791408
Here's something I don't get. You clearly only come here to attention whore, but is negative attention really a good thing? Did you honestly not like the praise you got for the MechaRin picture you drew?

Give them all Brave New World style names.

Z'erruse'ket.

God this looks so shitty.

>>2791421
No my friend... a project is a project and I must finish it... it is a project that started here on /jp/ using input from people on /jp/... so I come here to let /jp/ name female virgin protagonist...

>>2791431
>Also, Americans is now one of the most powerful religious organization on the planet where they worship the grat wise and powerful Abraham Lincoln.
God this looks so awesome.

>/jp/ give me a very good music composer to work with:
>ZUNibar

Good joke, OP.

>>2791408
Waterworld is often considered one of the most spectacular flops ever. Funny you should mention it... foreshadowing the fate of this project?

>>2791433
4chan is a terrible place to come to if you seek opinions.
Go to either iiChan, 7chan or 99chan.

>>2791445
Might as well go to 420 and ask Kirtaner for ideas.

>>2791389
>still a virgin with her arm still intact...

...If she loses her virginity through rape, can you make it a non-guro rape?

Still making music! Is the deadline going to be the beginning of August or the end of August?

And I'm still going with the Mad Max/Fist of the North star post-apocalyptic setting. I'll have stuff to show soon. Polite sage.

Give everybody steampunk names or AMERIKKKAN names.

Lili Marleen.

Or Eileen. I like Eileen.

mugen make more porn. that arcade stick thing makes me hard as a rock.

>>2791440
Yes... everything is in ruins but a few structures from the acient past remains... one of them is the statue of the Acient God known as Abraham Lincoln...

>/jp/ give me a very good music composer to work with:
I can play guitar...

NEEDS MORE DRILLS

How about Mylene

>>2791457

And then the statue of liberty could be an opposing religion?

>>2791458
No way! I can play electric bass!

>>2791483
>>2791458

YOU SHOULD MAKE A BAND!

>>2791485
FUCK YEAH! WE'D BE THE KVLTEST SHIT EV4R.

>>2791453
Marleen belongs to Barret...
Eileen belongs to Pytom...

Any more names?

>>2791465
Is the statue still in New York, or did the French reclaim it?

>>2791488
KVLT AS FVCK!

>>2791454
You mean this?...

I'd say she looks like an Emily, maybe an Amelia. As for last names, you can never go wrong with a Harper or a White.

But hey, your project, your names.

>>2791490

What? What does that even mean?

Who is barret and pytom and why do they own names?

>>2791499
Eileen is the Ren'py demo mascot.

>>2791490

Are you also doing the writing for this project?

>>2791498
Amelia Cogwright sounds like a nice steampunk-esque name.

>>2791501

Oh... And Barret is the nigger from FF7 with Marleen being his daughter?

Well, then go for lily.

>>2791494
There is no more french nation... only warlords, religious organisations (cults) and factions controling land... keeping check of each other.

>>2791506
Amelia... that is a good name...

Maybe it should go with Mecha Mom...

>>2791503
Yes... I am writting this project, I also program and draw pictures for it and in charge of promotions... this is our little corner on /jp/ project...

http://jpproject.2ksite.com/razen-maiden-subject-to-change-without-prior-notice--p1373.html#p1373

Has any significant continental drift taken place?

Mugen, I hope you already have an editor nailed down for this.

Nope... Just global warming plus general pollution everywhere... terrain is now mostly desserts...

I hope this is better then the memespew shit that was TFQ.

>>2791407
This one is also good name...

I will give it to early villain... thank you...

>>2791534
I now am better in Ren'py... it is planned we cut it into tiny episodes and release it one episode at a time so we don't make people wait... when everything is over... we combine all of them into one big VN...

>>2791542
Episode>Feedback>Repeat

Any more names /jp/?... so far we have...

>Amelia Cogwright
Most Likely go to Mecha Mom

>Varg Vikernes
Definitelly well suited for Villain

>>2791550
No my friend... no repeat... that is what planning and preperation is for...

>>2791457
>>2791465
Giant Lincoln mech versus Liberty mech
DO IT

>>2791562

Stop spamming us, you dumb niggers: http://www.An69nTalk.com/ (replace "69" with "o")

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>>2791571
Hmm... If I use Obama for a name... will I get into trouble?

This some sort of Post-apocalyptic setting?
Where are the flesh beasts sewn together by mad scientists using recycled humans to perpetually bleed and procreate flesh to be shaped into other abominations?

Danna Scanner

>>2791591
Where are the flesh beasts sewn together with papery secretions of post-apocalyptic giant wasps to be used as mobile hives?

>>2791588
Get in trouble with who?

>>2791588

Yes, if you use any president's name, you will face legal trouble with the United States government. There have been cases where foreigners have even been dragged out of their country, sometimes given over by their own government, and shipped into off-shore prisons where traditional american law doesn't apply.

>Where are the flesh beasts sewn together by mad scientists using recycled humans to perpetually bleed and procreate flesh to be shaped into other abominations?

You mean, yukkuris?

>>2791591
But Mad Scientist might have difficulty doing that given how scarce everything is in the future... There will be however Doctors/Surgeons using crude devices (based on our standards) to save lives and limbs... and technicians to replace lost or damaged organs/limbs

>>2791550
Episode>Feedback>Quit

Rapture City!

Episode>Trolling>Quit

I'm 12yo wat is this

Margaret Cecili

>>2791630
This is Rasen Maiden... a VN project which we started here on /jp/ which is loosely based on an old Raita Comic Book page... So far, only team members is ZUNibar and Me... right now we are humbly asking /jp/ names to replace some of the earlier names with better ones... you can visit this page for more info...

http://jpproject.2ksite.com/razen-maiden-subject-to-change-without-prior-notice--p1521.html#p1521

>>2791610

Okay, so resources are scarce yet there are technicians who can replace entire limbs with mechanical parts? Somethings not making sense here.

>>2791408
I think you mean "goggles."

Or something. Jesus Christ, I don't know.

>>2791658
Yes... I already thought of that...

In future... it is easier to repair / heal / modify than to create... Mechanical Limbs used to replace lost or damaged ones are either recycled or gutted from other mechanical arms... creating a new beast on the other hand might require a few more additional equipment and skills which may not be readily available in the future...

>>2791652
All typical 4chan faggotry aside: I'm willing to help. Unless there is IRL shit involved.

>>2791692

You have to live in mugen's house and sleep with him while you work on it. ZUN is already there too.

>>2791700

Doesn't he live in the Philipines?

>>2791683
I wasn't speaking of a mechanical beast. I mean a horrid monstrosity made of flesh that is sewn together. For extra kicks, All the humans who are sewn into this creature still maintain their consciousness and suffer at the realization of what they have become.

>>2791408
>mugenjohncel
fuck you.

>>2791714

Can they still moan and wail?

>>2791692
Thank you for the offer friend... right now... we concentrate on the actual game... script is nearly done and needs proofreading... Virus Guy already voluntered to look at script since I am horroble in english... Good Old ZUNibar will handle music... I will handle programming, art, promotion... after we have enough stuff to show then we ask people for help on areas we need additional help... We have set deadline so not make people wait...

>>2791683

I don't think you have any idea of what you're talking about. In a post-apocalyptic land where people only have crude tools to save limbs, replacing them with scavenged mechanical ones that require constant maintenance, adjustments, a power source, being connected with nerves and muscles to function, and many other problems is a huge stretch that can't easily be waved away with the magical-future-land stick.

>>2791738
>>We have set deadline so not make people wait...

Who the fuck is waiting for this? I mean this seriously and not a "Oh, I just want to see how big of a trainwreck this can possible be". Who in their right mind is seriously looking forward to reading this as an enjoyable work of fiction?

>>2791743
We just have to give them small steam engines, duh.

>>2791757
If you don't set a deadline, how do you plan to fail to meet it.

>>2791757

Don't worry, anyone who tries to edit this garbage will go insane from the overuse of punctuation and it'll never get released. Their brave sacrifices will surely save us all. Not even Shiki can get rid of these dots.

>>2791763

Don't give him ideas. You know he'll do it and think it makes perfect sense.

>>2791779

I'll survive. Don't you worry.

>>2791743
Yes... that is why I now look at the script and review and patch certain holes in the story... you give good point in there...

Right now, I am thinking of a way to make a world where people are skilled enough to combine mechanical and flesh and yet still limited... so discussion is good... I can see what other people who might have more knowledge than me and integrate it and make the story better...

>>2791802
Hey, Virus Guy, have you come up with a character design for influenza yet?

>>2791799
Well, I don't think anyone is expecting this to be hard sci-fi.

>>2791818

Well, there are now two artists but no Influenza-tan yet. We've got two rabies, ebola, black plague, tuberculosis and white blood cell.

Anyway, since I don't want to hijack this thread, follow the link mugen gave and search in the forum the virus dating sim section.

>>2791802
Aren't you BR?

No offense, but shouldn't you guys get a native speaker to edit mugen's stuff?

>>2791829

But he scored over 9000 on the ESL test!

>>2791829

BR?

And well, if a native speaker offers his help to edit, then I'll step down. I'm just the "Guy chosen because no one better stepped up".

Still, I've got a pretty nice understanding of the english language. So, I don't really think I'd make a mess.

Oh, Brazilian... Nope, Mexican.

So, will this be a dating sim, an eroge, an ADVENTURE novel?

>>2791848
... or a text adventure with pictures?

So... any more names /jp/... so far we still have...

>Amelia Cogwright
Most Likely go to Mecha Mom

>Varg Vikernes
Definitelly well suited for Villain

>>2791844

Virus Guy, swine flu? Is this a joke?

>>2791848
First episode will be kinetic to tell story of Young Madonna's origins and give general setting...

Second episode will be interactive... with fight scenes...

DARICA STROTENHARTZ!

Z'erruse'ket.

Sierra Steamington.

>>2791822
Can't we ask for at least a consistent internal logic?

Like making that the intricate needs of scraping by in a post apocalyptic wasteland makes some level of improvement and modification to be more useful to the small, trawling community.
Old tools and remains are regarded as valuable, but debris and years of dust storms makes retrieving anything difficult. So a whole nomad tribe pitches in, collects enough iron and aluminum to cast a digger help arm to graft into a small, capable child.
It is considered a great honor, and Dust Girls are considered to be the representative member of any small tribe.

I don't expect much out of this, seeing that the writer can barely post in english, but a post apocalyptic setting is my fetish, it will warrant a play through at least.

>over 100 posts

posting to maintain the 100:1 boof post ratio

>>2791497
This would actually look pretty cool if it wasn't for the damaged looking finish on the woodwork.

>>2791842
I had a look at mugen's demo for another work. If I was editing, it would turn into a complete rewrite. I know in reality conversational English isn't grammar friendly, but when writing a story it needs to be.

>>2791896
Shut your damned mouth faggot. That is a work of art far beyond your level of appreciation.

>>2791879
>>digger help arm to graft into a small, capable child.

The problem with this, and it's a big problem, is that children grow. That arm won't fit and may even cause some severe issue in as little as a couple years. Even grafted onto an adult, they'll eventually grow old and a heavy metal graft is going to be hell for someone in their later years. This brings up another problem in that gathering scrap iron to melt down into a graft is going to result in really shitty and really heavy metal. Then there's the issue of disease. This operation can lead to some serious infection. This isn't including mundane day to day things, such as parts being overworked and rendered unusable, sand and grit building up in it, and a power source.

In summary: There kind of project is way out of his scope as a writer. Stick to crappy parodies.

>>2791910
>art
ok, now you are trying too hard

>>2791911
they could adjust to a body and bond perfectly with spiral power

>>2791911
You seem to take this shit way too seriously. Not necessarily a bad thing, but you just shouldn't be a prick about it.

>global warming
>dusty, desolate hellscape

Climate change does not work that way.

>>2791950

What's funny is that that anon already put more effort into it than mugen himself has.

>>2791911
All true. And making it that they have a limited life expectancy with it is not only cheap, but bad drama.
Plus, the always present fault of metal limbs. They can do a lot of work, but they are attached to soft flesh.

You're right, the setting in a hard science way can't work. Unless you add some magick runes or something that make it work as intended, and that's just bad.

But I like the idea of some level of specialization arising from a new set of needs. But without good technology to support it, it falls apart.
Perhaps a bloodline of augmented mutants. Nothing too phenotype noticeable, but a heightened sense of smell for metals. It could bring a factor of "stepping into the old traditions" of ignoring the elders and following fleeting love.
Plus, a tribe that has inbred their members with the trait to make it stronger. The results are not pretty, but savant.

>>2791966
Any feedback is appreciated... they say valid things which is eye opener and fill in additional holes and conflicts in the story... I am saving all of them and seriously try and integrate and edit story...

>>2791950
Fuck it, this is what scifi runs on. Running with ideas and trashing them until a believable setting stands.
Otherwise it's just pulpy schlock that is not worth the bandwidth or the time.

>>2791950

The entire thing seems to have the same thought put into it as the average self-jerk writing on fanfiction.net. If it's being advertised around as a project, I'll treat it with serious criticism that everything else is subject to. Criticism is harsh, but if it's listened to then something wonderful can come out of it. It takes tremendous pressure to produce diamonds.

>>2791991
You shouldn't ask /jp/ for feedback.
See >>2791445

>>2791995
>>2792000

You guys just realized now that mugen is a retard?

Stop spamming us, you dumb niggers: http://www.An69nTalk.com/ (replace "69" with "o")

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>>2791991
Don't go too far to try and please everybody; your vision comes first.

>>2792000
umm... GET?

>>2792000
I agree entirely with your post.

>>2792020
Yes... I have rough vision but additional info shoudn't hurt... Like what >>2791911 said... this is something I haven't anticipated when making rough draft... so with additional info and help from him... I enhance the story at the same time... which is good for everyone...

>>2792025
get out

>>2792006
that's the purpose of /jp/ projects... trying to prove that something substantial, no matter how shitty others may think, can come out of this cesspool

>>2792031
lolol i troll you!!111!!1!!1

GOD! THIS THREAD! MUGEN!!!

You managed to troll us using one cute image.

>>2792044
I'm weak against girls who look like that, what can I say?

>>2792044
then look wat i found on the forum

Those goggles wouldn't even cover her entire eyes;
they do nothing.

>>2792052
looks like shit

>>2792057
But the rubber side is large enough to cover her but very limited field of vision.

Seems like all of you have learned the hard way that you should never trust Mugen.

>>2792061
I'd cover her with my rubber, if you know what I mean.

>>2792058
ahahahaha!

>>2792069
.....

>>2792065
How so? He's usually been pretty trustworthy. If he says he's going to do something, he does it whether we like it or not.

Besides, there's a chance we'll get stuff like this out of it, so I'm not complaining.

>>2792065
As a person he's shit, but he delivers. If I recall, he already made several VN's. So far I only played The Fucking Question. Art is good but he needs to pair up with a good writer.

>>2792090
A good writer, or a good editor?

>>2792092
Both.

>>2792090
His drawing suck bro, I've seen far better drawfags here, and they're not faggots like him.

>>2792089
That's called attention whoring, he also has the worst coloring I've ever seen on a /jp/ drawfag.

Knowing Mugen, he'll do it no matter how hard we cried in pain and agony.

So any more names... only see two decent names so far...

>Amelia Cogwright
Most Likely go to Mecha Mom

>Varg Vikernes
Definitelly well suited for Villain

>>2792124
Get out

>>2792124

>>2792139
I see the image is named Varg... are you trying to tell me that Varg Vikernes is a real person in real life?...

>>2792153
I see you're an idiot

Mad Max/Fist of the North Star except with drill girls sounds pretty great.

Also, Manhattan Island in New York should be a maximum security prison. Maybe our heroine could pay a visit to there one day in a future episode.

>>2792171
ZUN, I haven't always seen eye to eye with you. This however, I throw my full support behind.

>>2792171
Hello ZUN friend... I have now free time this Friday and Saturday so I can draw a lot... I'll send you rough draft maybe early Saturday... you may want to register and drop by here...

http://jpproject.2ksite.com/razen-maiden-subject-to-change-without-prior-notice--p1373.html#p1373

>>2792171
Cheap post-apocalyptic sci-fi is cheap.

>>2792190
You mean, the best.

>>2792194
Sure, if you like shit.

I really like your drawings, good luck on this.

>>2792207
Thank you for the encouragement...

>>2792203
if by shit you mean, not shit, then sure.

>>2792203

I do!

>>2792213
Do you have any more? The one up top is really cute.

Your art would be 90% better if you stepped away from the fuzzy brush and looked up color theory. You can't mix soft tonal transitions with black lineart and expect it to work; both are methods of tricking the mind into seeing volume, and on their own, they're great. But when you mix them, everything looks like flat plastic.

Try redoing your coloring with the basic hard-round brush with opacity set to pressure at 50% flow. It'll give you clean, even shades (which go well with lines) but you'll still have the smooth transitions between colors (which you seem to be fond of).

As for the coloring itself... are they all constantly standing under gigantic, artificial tracklights? Then don't color them like they are. When I think of a desert wasteland, I think of a relentless sun in a cloudless sky. This amounts to one strong, direct white light as your primary source and a HUGE amount of blue backlighting. I'd go so far as to do all your underpainting in a desaturated blue before doing your coloring-- it'd really unify the portraits. If you're not into that, then the general scheme should be:

-white light: areas closest to light source, very sparse
-blue light: all over figure, but biased toward the light source (basically, everywhere that would have light from the sky bouncing off of it)
-brown shadows: everywhere opposite to the blue light, very prominent
-black shadows: SPARSE (nothing fucks up a drawing more than visible black shadows...), used only in areas where absolutely NO sun would be hitting. I would advise only using desaturated blacks to accent your brown shadows.

>>2792359
tl;dr: http://www.itchy-animation.co.uk/light.htm

I think your virgin Madonna is kinda cute.
Keep up the good work.