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Anonymous Wed May 6 07:49:15 2009 No.2544455 [Reply] [Original]

Come on guys, make up your mind.

I'm already disappointed in the way Shizune has turned out, I did like her Act 1 end but she could be so much better. Anyway, here the text doesn't match the rest of the path or the sprites, it's like you're taunting me with what Shizune should have been: a tall, busty, aloof authoritarian that gets to know and like you only because Misha strings you along all the time.

>Shizune, on the other hand, always seemed distant.
>I'd almost never see her smile.
What? A majority of the time you see Shizune smiling, the times she isn't smiling are scant. As for her personality, she talks to you a lot and seems pretty eager to want to get to know and be around you. She's far from distant.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 07:51:15 2009 No.2544461 There is a reason she is called Shitzune

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 07:51:15 2009 No.2544458 misha is retarded and a dickgirl

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 07:57:15 2009 No.2544480 How long till they finish this shit?

Anonymous Wed May 6 07:59:15 2009 No.2544487
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Shizune's path is weird as fuck, yes. That's why I'm not a big fan.

I'd play it just to get the scene where Misha tries to kill you, though. For Kenji's sake. He needs some kind of validation.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:00:15 2009 No.2544489 >>2544480 Eight months or so.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:09:15 2009 No.2544530 File: 127 KB, 808x1184, CHENJI.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2544487

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:12:15 2009 No.2544543 Who is translating this?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:14:15 2009 No.2544545 >>2544543 Who is translating this? >translating an English language VN into English >derp derp.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:14:15 2009 No.2544546 >>2544543 ...To what?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:14:15 2009 No.2544549 >>2544543 You mean to japanese? Go bother 2ch about it, we don't care.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:15:15 2009 No.2544550 File: 35 KB, 736x736, awesome.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2544545 The writting is so poor, it needs to be translated into English to be understood.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:17:15 2009 No.2544554 >>2544550 The writting is so poor >writting >poor You're really one to judge? The writing is pretty good but clearly the writers need to communicate.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:17:15 2009 No.2544555 >>2544549 馬鹿外人ｗｗｗ

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:20:15 2009 No.2544562 >>2544550 Oh? And you think you can "writte" better?

>>	Anonymous of the Wujiao Court Wed May 6 08:20:15 2009 No.2544563 So uh, Misha doesn't have a route?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:22:15 2009 No.2544566 >>2544562 >>2544550 Some people just can't get a joke.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:23:15 2009 No.2544573 >>2544566 They are new posters. You can't expect them to understand our sarcasm and wittiness in a few days right?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:23:15 2009 No.2544577 >>2544563 No, she doesn't. Misha and Shizune come as a pair so having a route for both would pretty much be the same route with a very slight variation, I.E. redundant. Isn't it sad, Misha?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:24:15 2009 No.2544579 File: 17 KB, 425x292, hjg.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] HEY, I have an idea. Let's make a VN about cripples and scarred girls. Of course, the most healthy-looking girl doesn't get a route.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:26:15 2009 No.2544586 >>2544566 It was a... a joke! Yeah! That's it. Haha, a joke. I really showed you fags. >>2544573 I agree. lol newfags. Not the same person, by the way. Is that so?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 08:27:15 2009 No.2544592 Rin is win.

Anonymous Wed May 6 08:27:15 2009 No.2544593

>>2544554
>>2544562
Obviously he wasn't insinuating he'd be a better choice as a writer compared to someone on their team, but as far as creating a cohesive piece goes the writers need to collaborate on the motivations and vernacular of the main character and the heroines to come up with something a bit more consistent. Scene by scene he changes; with Kenji he sounds like one of my friends from San Diego (not bad, but a drastic change from the rest), his internal dialogue is a bit too verbose, and the girls' interactions seem clunky and shallow. He's just saying it needs further work, which was probably why they put out this demo in the first place, to gauge reactions.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 6 09:07:15 2009 No.2544736 >>2544592 Rin is win. /jp/ sure does like Rin today. I suppose it's a change from Hanakofags.

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