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Fuck "7th Expansion" as thread name edition.
Previous general >>18147865

>> No.18183371

The fate to befall upon all siestas:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O96AlBB9_HM

>> No.18183428
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>> No.18187354

UUUU UUUUU BEATRICE IS REAL UUUU!!!

>> No.18188019

Magic is real.

>> No.18188431
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What did she mean by this?

>> No.18188736

Hello umineko/seacats. What can you tell me about Beatrice?
Saw her in a saltybet match some time ago and then here in your last general.

>> No.18188744

>>18188736
beato did nothing wrong

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>>18188431
Not exactly sure.

>> No.18189056
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Rude and lewd.

>> No.18189279

beato

>> No.18189868

Hotarubi chapter 19 is out. Looks like it's ending soon
https://mega.nz/#F!OJU2HYgB!-lbNfZS31EUf2QXDKB8I2A

>> No.18190717

>news on wtc5 on the loose
>ryus making a huge deabutt
>miss your chance---
>cry the rest of your life!

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>>18188736
Yes yes, well done Beatrice, well done
HOWEVER

>> No.18190752

>>18190739
Am I the only one who just finds this funny and doesn't get upset over the power level faggots faggotry?

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>>18190739
They fucked up, they didn't list his special move

>> No.18193527

Was the Shannon vs. Gaap fic in this general ever finished?

>> No.18193947

DIE THE DEATH

>> No.18193984

>>18193527
I outlined the conclusion, but never wrote everything.

>> No.18195057

>>18193984
Which was the conclusion?

>> No.18195461

>>18195057
Gaap would continue tormenting Shannon as the maid tries desperately to keep her barrier up. The goats beyond it would keep attacking it hoping to join in on the action, egged on by Gaap as she teases the maid's breasts in all manner off ways Promising rewards to whoever makes it through. The offset from Shannon's barrier would whittle the goats down one by one until only a single one remained. To give this noble goat the last push he needs, Gaap would finally pull Shannon's pasties off, exposing her nipples to his hungry eyes. As her barrier falls and the goats outstreched hands reach for Shannon's boobs, she mourns to herself about how George wasn't the first to see them bare, before declaring her ultimatum. "That's right... I was ordered by George-sama earlier today... that the next time a man tries to touch my chest... I must respond with a slap!" At this her Barrier would suddenly spring back to life and slam into Gaap and the goat from point blank range, shattering on impact and destroying the later. It turns that Shannon had lowered it willingly right before it gave in and broke in a last-ditch attempt at a counterattack. Charging at Gaap before she can recover, Shannon tackles the demoness to the ground and wrestles with her. The two women writhe around on the muddy ground, their practically nude rain-soaked bodies intertwining in various ways as they each desperately try to pin their slippery opponent. Finally Shannon manages to trap Gaaps head between her massive boobs, angrily shouting at her to choke on them if she likes them so much. As Gaap struggles in vain to loosen Shannon's grip as she slowly suffocates, going so far as to violently finger the maids womanhood, but to no avail. In a last ditch attempt, she opens up one last portal beneath them and drops them both into the rose bushes.

From here I actually came up with two endings, one in which each girl wins.
Option 1 has Shannon endure the pain of the rose thorns scratching her all over until she succeeds in making the older woman pass out. She tearfully declares her victory while thinking of George.
Option 2 has Gaap blindly flailing about until one of her hands happens to discover the Winchester that was knocked there earlier on. Bringing it up, she declares her victory and blows half of Shannon's head off. Gasping for air, Gaap rises to her feet, her bare body, once more clad in red from a mixture of blood and rose petals.

>> No.18195478

>>18195461
Found the pastebins thanks to warosu.

Option 1 would be better if Gaap dies of suffocation between Shanno's breast, and then her body breaks up and turns into petals. Option 2 is good.

>> No.18195508

>>18195478
I can't even remember the pastebins honestly.

Here's the warosu link to the discussion of the climax.
>>/jp/thread/S16845880#p16856416
Which option do you think is better?

>> No.18195535

>>18195508
The spoilered texts? Shannon suffocating Gaap, as the conversation in that thread said seems better. Except I think that Gaap shouldn't make it out alive. Maybe add that after Shannon leaves her in the garden, her body starts to turn into petals. The drops of rain hitting her skin and acceleratig the process. In the end, the petals would be flown away by the wind, like her dress did earlier.

>> No.18195595

>>18195535
Oh, that sounds good. A nice little tie-in.

>> No.18195611

>>18195595
Read a while ago the part where Gaap removes her dress and shows if her wet body to Shannon. Always gave me the idea that Gaap should go down and end up turning into petals under the rain.

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>>18195611
It's been a while since I last wrote something like that here, but I remember that part.

>> No.18195672

>>18195670
Any other fics you may have? Might check them later.

>> No.18195726

>>18195672
Not really a fic, but here's something.
https://pastebin.com/0kfrxdv7

>> No.18198390

>>18195478
>>18195508
Where are the most updated pastebins, ending included? Vote for Ending 1, Shannon killing Gaap.

>> No.18200401

>>18198390
https://pastebin.com/6wFGBs6Q
https://pastebin.com/WCdaLnXg
As for the ending, see>>18195508

>> No.18205886

>>18183365
Kill yourself

>> No.18215266

>>18205886
not op here but here is your (You)

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