/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>14096752
Oh. I didn't even notice the other one.

This is entirely unrelated to OC. This is just a cover song I did with my new improved guitar sound.
I'll be getting to doing Touhou-arranges now.

https://soundcloud.com/sinsack/lifelover-expandera-cover

>>14096830
This is pretty nice, i like it.

https://clyp.it/yi3wnmmt
This is a WIP.
It's an arrange of Pandemonic Planet from Touhou 15, i wanted it to be a little more style.
I'm used to making original compositions, so i'm not very good at arranges yet.
Feedback is welcome.

>>14096874
Thanks.

Yours is also pretty good. Very close to the original, so I don't know if I would call it an arrange. Cover would be more fitting, I think?

digital drawing is so frustrating.

I drew something

>>14097349
I love the face, but i personally don't like the rest, especially those nipples

>>14097349
Head is too small.

>>14096830

First Touhou Metal-draft.
https://soundcloud.com/sinsack/touhou-metal-satori-maiden-demo

>>14097683
I got bored. canvas was too big
>>14097881
its made on purpose

>>14098070
>its made on purpose
Joke's on you, that's my fetish.

Head's still too small, though.

Got a color of this up on Pixiv.

>>14096830
Neat. I expected 0:05-0:18 and other similar tunes to be more powerful, tough, but still it's nice.

>>14097349
STEROIDS
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n0wqhdZn4v0
video very related

I fixed the way he turns so now it's a lot more free form. There's still an animation bug which has to do with how unity crossfades animations I guess. I still haven't figured it out but you can see it in this video a few times where he swims without moving.

>>14096752
We have now compiled enough for a mini-album (about half the size of the last) and we are now looking for an artist who would like to contribute an album cover.

You can contact through email at this address: jpmusicproject1@gmail.com if you want o submit a contribtion. We can still accept music contributions while looking ofr an artist.

>>14099134
Okay, that was mildly amusing

>>14099469

Was a bad idea, went back to the old way.

>>14100080
Glad you came to your senses.

Since you're a jellyfish, can you sting the shit out of some things? Do you have some sort of "get hurt and eat fish to heal" system or do things mostly just kill you outright if they can?

>>14100142

You will have 3 hits before dying. I have yet to think of a method for regaining health. eating things seems very E.V.O so maybe.

Updated 2hu-Metalsong.
Still only a draft, I'm going to record the guitars again and maybe add some melodies through Midi.
Anyone got some ideas on what to use? Techno synths or something like that?

https://soundcloud.com/sinsack/touhou-metal-satori-maiden-demo-280

Guy who drew Youmubutt in the last thread, do you have a Pixiv account?

>>14097185
this, it feels like using someone else's hand

>>14099477
At the end I never made it. Why am I such a lazy bastard?

>>14100624
Why I'm such an untalented donkey?

>>14100882
Because you believe in things like talent.

>>14101118
Actually I don't, I'm using untalented as "learning slower than a jellyfish"

>>14097185
>>14100402
Don't you use a mouse without a problem? Get your shit together.

>>14100080
I think he's deforming way too much, but, even if you want to keep it like this, could there be a separate animation for the eye?
Eyes don't vary in form - at least nos as much as the other parts -, so it'd be more convincing if it suffered less deformation.

>>14099477
Ripping off Crusader Helmet loli, since that anon abandoned us, how about a Diving Helmet loli?

She'd make a cute and attention-grabbing mascot for this.

Yeah, drawn like shit just for visual suggestion. Whaat does /jp/ think?

>>14101367
>crusader helmet loli
I kinda remember drawing something like that

>>14096830
>>14097935
>>14100206
Last update on the song before I finish it; this time, I improved the guitar sound some more.

https://soundcloud.com/sinsack/touhou-metal-iplot-demo

>>14101367
It reminds me of the swimsuit world idea that went nowhere.

>>14102552
It bothers me a little that the drums are so spread out.
This is about my preference, but the guitar could be a bit more rhythmical, because listening to 32nd notes or whatever that is all along gets a little tiring.

>>14099477
/jp/ -the soundtrack- 2?
maybe I'll submit something not halfassed like always

I finally got meshes rendering on z-levels and making the surface exactly how I wanted it. I am considering some sort of height map deformation but I wouldn't know how to do that. right now it will be a splash animation I work on.

>>14102745
Thanks for the feedback.
Know if only I knew what you meant by 32nd notes.
Do you mean the cut-off notes? I can see why one would be tired of them.

Hey /jp/, long time no see.

>>14099024
Also, exclusive /jp/ edition color (different from the one on Pixiv).

Minor adjustments as well, such as removal of unsightly shading lines, adjustment to her left hand to make her reverse grip look more like one, and a failed attempt to add perspective to the knife.

>>14104790
You were missed

>>14104651

Ecco_the_octopus.wemb

>>14105106
Psst: It's a 'jellyfish.'

>>14104790
Glad to see you man

>>14104663
That basically means that the guitar plays the same note very fast without rest.
You could five them some rest in between like this.
https://clyp.it/mctoqlph
But feel free to ignore me.

>>14100324
Its JADF, dude.

>>14105877
Oh, that's what you mean. You're right actually. I find it pretty boring myself so I'll try to make it a bit more interesting.

>>14104790
Damn nice work, man! I missed you too.

>>14104790
Welcome back.

Is the fellow who made Ariane and all these animations still around too?

>>14107087
reminds me of Van Gogh for some reason

>>14107087
This feels very refreshing, thanks.

>>14104790
back from the grave

>>14104790
Magister?

no way in hell you left /jp/ for good

The speck effect I made looks very calming against black. I may need to tweak it but it was a lot easier than I thought it would be.

>>14104978
>>14105290
>>14107040
>>14108234
>>14107048
Thanks, and yeah, silo is still around too. You'd have to find his stuff on nico, though. Also thanks for drawing my daughter.

http://imgur.com/a/PQLGA bunch of edits

I'm horrible at telling artists apart, so to settle this in my mind: between the artist who drew this, the artist who sometimes draws gay shotas, the one who draws the dog girl furry, the one who was doing some point and click adventure about a policeman, and the jellyfish game guy, which are the same? I think the point and click guy was doing another game too.

>>14109283
Oh and was the one who painted rocks and spaceships and shit related to the above?

>>14109173
>>14108234
>>14104790
Nicely drawn.

>>14109283
>>14109286

when you lay it all out like that you almost make it seem like I'm not lazy. but yes that is all one person, me. I suppose it's easy to spot if you know what to look for.

>>14109364

Although you may also, in regards to landscape and loli, also be referring to that one other person who used to post around here.

>>14109375
No, don't mean the bitch.jpg guy, who also did some weird cuboid landscapes sometimes.

Were you making a third game too? I might just be thinking about the guy with the maid game and/or the guy with the world where everyone was turned to lolis game though.

>>14109417

Maid game is a separate guy. Although I would be lying if there were only two game projects... for now I will focus on the jellyfish though.

>>14108234
Holy shit, that face and especially that hand is just great.

Did that Sleepy dude die?

Several things. The jellyfish now splashes, the jellyfish now goes full bright when out of water(may change this somehow or just add some lights in the sky), and figured out a simple way to add island backgrounds, which will be covered by background elements so they don't have to be complex.

Several issues towards the end are apparent (such as water particle specks that are on different z positions go out of the water (they work when not too far in front, but the point is I like having foreground specks)

>>14109758
>such as water particle specks that are on different z positions go out of the water
Isn't that just cause the water line doesn't come far enough forward

>>14109782

No it's because the 2D collision stuff work best with orthographic and I am using perspective for depth effects. I could tweak it a little perhaps.

>>14109758
Dude, that looks really nice. Custom engine?

>>14109915

No. it is unity. People say it's bad for 2D but it works fairly well once you get used to it. There are a bunch of weird shortcuts you need to do though.

>>14109173
We're playing with edits now?

>>14111113
This image is how I feel inside.

>>14109283
this guy went by ark-refrigerator or something
(think he's the same person as the jellyfish guy?)

had a tumblr but can't find it anywhere

Now there are effective layers and lighting out of the water. I think all I need to do now is make a nice few enemies and I can start making all the first set of levels.

>>14101367
Yeah, sure we can have that for the album cover. I'll stay tuned to these threads for you, and, as I said you can contact me through email if you need to.

There was a Yuugi drawing itt, but now it isn't!

Is the artist gonna make more?

>>14112407
faggot
thats actually looks nice damn
keep up the good work

>>14112352
This should be made a gif with hue shifting background

>>14099477
I'm no artist but contributing anyway. What is the general style of music on the album? That would help in creating a theme for a drawing.

>>14112407
Coming along so nicely.
Very comfy looking.

Why don't you stop trying to pinpoint people's identities? I like how things are faceless around here, stop dicklicking and post OC.

I'll be on another person's computer until Wednesday, so I can't draw shit.

Might do some Loomis.
Might try learning some basic php to implement pic related.
Might toss it all out the window and keep procrastinating.

Stay tuned!

>>14113598
Cool shitty blogpost.

> posted drawing in a /jp/ thread
> went sleep
> found I've posted in a wrong thread after wake up
> oh shi-

>>14115775
Oh, I was wondering what that was doing over in the Pochaco thread.

Good job as always.

>Finally start to draw again
>get offered a job that probably will leave me with eight free hours a day if I want to sleep at least six hours
god damn it

Sunday sure is boring here.

>>14115960
Are you me?
I got a job as well and I wanted to start drawing and get at last good at it.
And job is quite hard, at least for first days I had.

Hey /jp/! I finally got an artist!

How does this look? There's popups now when you talk to girls!

>>14119851
Would actually consider playing now/10

>>14119851
>got an artist
Tell me who it is, I may or not may send him a message filled with compliments or insults and pictures of my toilet after I've shitted in it

>>14119851

Looks depraved now.

I'm still not sure about how to implelement time stuff...

Right now it moves at like 4 minutes / second or something. But what about time-skip? Like you might not want to wait until the next day if you miss a loli on her way to school...

Or you might want to just skip to the weekend...

Or for when you knock up a 12yo and want her to give birth already...

The artist suggested to make the game progress when you're not playing as well. But then people are just going to alter their system clock, then what happens when they set the time to be before the last time recorded? Reverse time? And then you're kind of forcing players to play every day or two to feed/look after their lolis/etc...


So what should I do? Should I have a timeskip button? Should timeskip only happen on certain times? Should there be an "end-day" button that skips to he next morning? Or maybe sleeping in a bed could do this...

Should the player only play 1 day for each month? Or 2 days (1 weekend one weekday) each month? Or alternate between weekdays/weekends on different months?

>>14119922

What did it look like before then?

>>14119903

I don't know his name.

>>14119939
>I don't know his name
then how do you call him in your conversations? "you" "art person"?

>>14119939
I can agree with the go to bed idea. You can, in addition, add in that same point, the ability to "sleep" for multiple days.

In addition, you can also tweak a few things about reality. For instance, you may only need to feed a loli once every 3 days. Or that in the game, birth only takes 1 month, etc.

I drew fanart of fanart.
not very /jp/ but eh

>>14119952

Second person? It's not like you normally use someone's name often during conversations unless you're acting like a little kid and talking in third person. At leas tin English, which is what we communicate in.

>>14119972

What about raising? Should there be some time-distortion for aging from 0 to 4 years old? (since you can't fuck <4yos) They'll probably just crawl around with limited interaction, and I don't spawn them in the world, only get them through breeding.

As for feeding I was thinking of being able to leave some food in her cell kind of like pic related, although that would leave off some interacction with the girl if you just left food....

but maybe the food could be like that, then the interaction would come from giving her special treats, aside from the regular loli food she gets to survive.

>>14113598
>Might do some Loomis
Yes
He helped me so much

>>14119991
You can tweak the times to what matters for the game as a whole. I don't imagine waiting for a loli to grow up is an important aspect of the game, so you can cut that and directly spawn them at the minimum age of a visible loli, perhaps after a few days.

If interaction with food is an important action, then you should keep that.

Again, find what parts of the game are important and adjust the times to maximize the times for these, and minimize the times for the unimportant parts.

Or, that's what I suggest , at least. If you're going for realism, of course, then you're going to be stuck.

Goodnight /jp/, please wish me luck.

>>14119922
Now?

here's a song I made a while ago:
https://d.maxfile.ro/eudjkjhzzx.mp3

>>14120112
oh shit, sorry, I forgot to link this one as well:
https://d.maxfile.ro/shydbexqyc.mp3
another song, which I made a couple of weeks ago.

Hey, jay, pick some 2hus and I'll draw them over these mannequin studies for the giggles.

>>14120004
Heh, it's pretty nice, whenever I draw on my own characters tend to be 5 heads tall - going for 8 is making me sweat.

>>14114025
Cool lack of OC.

>>14115775
Cute and has a nice flow. Well done.

>>14119851
Will all charsets derive from the same drawing, varying in hue, like the original sprites?

>>14120112
Somewhat all over the place, was there harmony in mind? When the melody enters, though, it becomes a bit more organized, but that might be due how I instinctively listen to music.

>>14120901
lol what the heck are those? they're so creepy

>>14104651
That looks great. Keep up the good work.

>>14120901
Copying Loomis's shitty drawings isn't OC. Fuck that shit and go draw some naked real people. Just google up some nudes or something.

>>14121252

Thanks. Currently I have been trying to get my lighting to work better. Right now I have one big directional light with a mask over it. It'd be interesting if I could somehow get an entire level masked somehow but that seems like it would be such a huge file.

The video didn't render so well so here is an image http://i.imgur.com/7S2tig7.png

What does it mean when something disappears from a tag's search on pixiv, but the work is still on the artist's page with the tags?

>>14099477
>>14100624
>>14101367
>>14103339
>>14113467
I almost forgot - here is a link to the submitted works for the compilation. I plan on using everything the contributors sent, even the ones who sent multiple tracks, to pad the numbers a bit.

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/6lnmxfkfspb5p2g/AACNLrD6VVRnlgoXxOaTQ9uda?dl=0

Of course, if more people were to contribute their tracks...

>>14120112
Somehow reminds me of Donkey Kong.

I love it, it's energetic and full of action.

>>14120901

Yeah, but it's not just a hue-adjustment, it's a palette-swap. Once the artist gives me the colours to use for various skin tones/eye colours I'll put them into the old system and you'll have asian girls, little brown girls, redheads, green eyes, etc again.

Oh god Hiroyuki now owns 4chan. Guess the days of posting here have finally come to an end.

>>14122604
Kill yourself, subhuman.

>>14122604
Oh shit. its fucking over
I should had left with moot

>>14122945

Because my hand has been forced:
http://asmalljellyfish.tumblr.com/

if you wish to see progress you can keep track of and follow. Although I don't like tumblr.

>>14123156
Neither do I, but whatever. the important is always to keep away from facebook

>>14123156
There is always wordpress but tumblr is ok as artblog.
The site wont go under so keep posting here though.

>>14119975
really cool
>>14123156
do you post your landscapes anywhere anymore?

>>14125434

I do not. I suppose I could make a third blog for misc art but it would rarely be updated.

>>14126119
What's the other blog besides the jellyfish one?

>>14126474

Erotica.

>>14126539
I meant link/name

First real enemy of the game. It produces smaller fishes and shoots them at you.

>>14126725
http://asmallfridge.tumblr.com/

I have been using pixiv because of tumblr's bizarre users and the automated reporting process being abused.

>>14126796
Do you have to censor stuff on Pixiv? I mean is it required and risks takedown if not.

>>14126819

Yes but I link uncensored in the description.

>>14126796
>65 notes
>82 notes
>300 notes
I will never get how social networks work

>>14127786

If you want to be king the best way is daily content, which sadly I am not cut out for. I am too much of a perfectionist.

>>14127786
Tagging something does that. It also helps if it's a niche.

>>14127843
>If you want to be king
dude what
>>14128260
Yeah I can understand that much, but not how a finished drawing can get less votes than a sketch. if we were talking of popular artists I could get it, but this? same thing happens on pixiv sometimes.
well whatever

What do you think of my game, /jp/

>>14128660
Its kind of margatroidy

>>14128660
Looks cute in a stil screenshot. Except the blurry treestump.

>>14126796
The movement looks very nice now.

>>14126796
Looks really nice.
Though I gotta say, now the jellyfish looks a bit too squished while moving.
>>14121334
The lighting also makes it too bright near the surface. Otherwise very pretty.

>>14115775
Incredibly cute. The eyes are a tad different in size though, even with perspective in mind.

Made another song:
https://soundcloud.com/sinsack/post-mortem-integration

>>14130005
The arpeggiating piano sounds annoying, mainly because it sounds so robotic. 1:13 - 1:20 sounds pretty good though. I like how the piano parts changes after that, you should have done so sooner. The song gets much better after 1:55. If I were you, I'd cut a little of the beggining and make the piano range wider and the pattern a little bit more recognizable, for a lack of a better word. Something like this:
https://clyp.it/lmswtfla

>>14131491
Thanks for the feedback, I'll see to it.
Yeah, the piano sound rather static since there is not much dynamic in it.
Your example really sounds a lot better - And more realistic. I'm actually looking for a Vsti that emulates a real piano better than what I already use (DSK Acoustic Keys). Got any tips?

>>14131523
I'm not the person you quoted, but generally, people recommend Pianoteq, or Galaxy II. Having played both, they're okay from my point of view. Probably as good as you can get at this point in time.

>>14131523
Although I used http://www.imperfectsamples.com/website/Samples/fazioliconcertgrand/index.php in the example, I'd recommend Pianoteq for the versatility, just like the other anon recommended. As I don't have a midi keyboard I had to do a bit of midi programming to make it sound not so robotic.

>>14131764
I have this library as well, but I always feel like it sounds like shit. The samples themselves seem to be fine, but the driver is extremely poor. Velocity is all over the place, and occasionally sounds will switch to mono and alternate from one speaker to another when playing. Kind of regret paying money for it and not pirating it.

How do you deal with these sort of issues? Maybe not actually playing with a midi keyboard helps?

>>14131764
>>14131591
Thanks for your answers, I'll give it a try. As a rather poor fellow I am reliant on free or cheap software.
>>14131781
Well, as I play Midi-piano myself and am most of the time unhappy with the key dynamics, I always change the velocity afterwards. Most of the time, I just bring them to the same level, which is why they sound robotic, and tweaking on each of them at a time sound really tedious to me.

>>14131781
>Velocity is all over the place, and occasionally sounds will switch to mono and alternate from one speaker to another when playing. Kind of regret paying money for it and not pirating it.
The only problems I've noticed were that some layer transitions were too harsh and some samples had a bit of unwanted noise. I've never experienced something like what you describe. You could try feeding it some midi data recorded and played by a human to verify if is not your playing.
>>14131888
I rarely tweak the velocities one at a time. Most of the time I select the notes I want to edit, do pic related with a single click and then randomize the velocities a little. Messing with the tempo and timing is more tedious, but it's the key of realism.

>>14131926
Played a bit with velocity... do you mean like this?

https://clyp.it/5mb4xup0

>>14132251
Yes, that's much better. You could try messing with the notes duration too, or using the pedal.

this job is killing me, I'm too tired to draw

Made a thing

https://soundcloud.com/crinkles/crinkles-hydrangea

>>14133713
Nice. You must really like bgm soundtracks,
sadly I don't like leaving the music at the background.

To all music-/jp/s, let's play a game. One uploads a MIDI he made and the others arrange it!
I'll start. Some of you may recognize this.
Something simple at first.

>>14133779
>nothing
That's a rather hard start, m8.

>>14133713
Those synth patches are delicious, what did you use?

>>14133789
Sorry, dude.
midishrine.com/midi/54459.mid

I fucked up.

>>14133779
Arrange? What do you mean by that specifically?

>>14133764
Thanks. It makes up the majority of what I listen to.

>>14133802
Omnisphere, with lots of patches by The Unfinished.

http://www.theunfinished.co.uk/

>>14133843
Like, do what the fuck ever with it, but use the melodies in the file.
You could, for example, make a beat out of it and instrumentalize it to your liking, you could also take the chords and arpeggiate them, you can add more tracks to it to give it a personal touch... things like that.

>>14133860
Ah, I see what you mean, although I'd call that more of a cover. I'll dick around and see what I can do, but don't expect anything good or that I'll finish it today since it's pretty late here. Here's mine by the way
https://d.maxfile.ro/bjzhbyvnjh.mid

>>14133859
Nice, I use FM8 so I'm not too familiar with Omnisphere, but I've heard great things about it. Is Omnisphere particularly harder to use than any other synth?

>>14133882
The fun thing with arrangements that you can also change the structure of the song and customize it to your liking.

I'll give yours a shot as well, will post it tomorrow.

>>14133892
If you have knowledge of how synths work it should be pretty easy to use omnisphere, just gotta get used to where things are

>>14128660
It looks like it's running on GNU/Linux, that's nice. The colours and art style are nice and simple and Alice is one of my favourite Touhous, so I think I quite like it.
I would like to see a webm.

reisen wip ;3

>>14135251
Pretty cute. And dorky.
Cute'n'dorky.

>>14133713
Amazingly calming.
Really like the delay here. Works nicely.

>>14133882
https://clyp.it/wet4zblh

>>14135447
I want to make out with that rabbit!

>>14135642
thats a cute Okuu, I want to advise softening those edges, but they work for this style.

>>14135686
I wish, if only I have a tablet to afford.

>>14135453
That's fucking amazing! I don't know how I am gonna compete with that.

>>14135642
With background. Figured adding an angle made her look more like she's in flight than just standing still.

>>14135810
Damn these rotation artifacts to Hell, though.

>>14135797
Thanks, but the credit goes to yourself for delivering such a versatile raw song idea.

I'm sure you're going be fine even though my file is lacking in artistic latitude.
If anyone wants to give it a try, it's this one:
>>14133805

>>14136228
Very cute, saved.

>>14135969
I was more surprised that you managed to transform some unfinished scrap into something pleasant.
Alright, here's mine. I should warn you this is the first time I do something like this. I have never even finished a song before.
My headphones and my mouse broke so I won't bother more with this.
https://clyp.it/p0ap0tdu

>>14133779
>Some of you may recognize this.
What's the original from?

>>14137318
Wow, this turned out very funky. I wouldn't have even thought about doing it like this. Nice.

>>14137377
I don't about original, but there is a Monogatari Mad out there called "courage to tell a lie". It's very fucking beautiful.

Just in case you have no ideas and want to start drawing something immediately, how about something like this, only with Suika? She could be wearing a shrine maiden outfit, the guys could be wearing fundoshi, it'd be fun times.

You could do it in a couple of different ways, to suit your own tastes. Suika's clothes could be the same as Reimu's, or something more traditional. I like abubu's "basically transperent, nothing left to the imagination" fundoshi, but you could go with something more modest. And I think a smile suits Suika best, but she could just as easily be horrified at the situation, or licking her chops at the impending appearance of dongs.

Here's some reference material. - http://imgur.com/a/q1xrZ

>>14138779

>>14138903

That's the stuff.

>>14138779
Nice request. If I wanted "ideas" I'd go to /a/.

>>14140479

Does /a/ have fantastic ideas or something?

>>14138779
Fundoshi is a seriously underrated underwear.
I personally think that a woman with fundoshi is one of the lewdest things you can see.

>>14140821
But it's men's underwear...

>>14140974
That's what makes it great: male underwear that look sexy on females
its an irresistitible dichotomy

>>14115775
> finished

>>14143550
erocute

I am starting to get a nice feel for the textures of the walls. Although I need to work on the coral so i blends into it better.

>>14142692
Those weird colourclashes hurt my eyes but it looks nice as overall work.
That is a very good texture for stoney walls. Always missed such stuff in nifflas works while he did excell in moving nature backgrounds though.

>>14143550

Cute!

>>14144114

As an artist first I imagine the art would be one of the better parts of the game. However I do want he game to play well so I have been working on my programming too.

>>14142692
I like this a lot.

>>14142692
How do you do those cool colors? I want to make them too.

Just

Full drawing (nude):

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/CP45poTWcAALP5-.png:orig

>>14143550
wud smash her mochi

>>14148363
If you only had spent all these years in drawing different things instead than just progressively bigger dicks

>>14148363
>>14148964
I know right? it's honestly a shame cause I really think he could get better.

>>14148964
>>14149007
But I didn't even draw a dick...

nothing else seems to be working today. I guess I will keep drawing coral.

>>14144114
>>14145241
thanks
>>14147324
duplicate the colour layer, offset it, change the hue, and use blending modes.

>>14149824
If it wasn't for the accesories I would never have guessed who is she.

>>14149824
I tried

>>14133232
why not draw while working?

>>14135251
cute

>>14152316
What brush/tools did you use? I really like the look.

some oc of page 1 of a manga I'm working on

>>14153232
cute

>>14153232
what makes it a manga and not a comic?

http://imgur.com/a/RuoEP

does stuff like this count as OC?

>>14153232
Is this comic of yours written in Japanese?

If not then you're not making a manga you insufferable weeaboo faggot.

It looks cute though.

>>14153266
Literally no difference.
>>14153580
Someone writing in Jap doesn't make a comic a manga or not.

>>14153622

I'm sorry but that thing you made is not manga

>>14153677
I didn't make it, and you don't get to define what words mean.

>>14096752
Has /jp/ done a light novel collab before?

>>14153918
They tried, to say the least.
Many times.
I don't think anything ever came of it.

Hey /jp/,
I am set on working on a little Touhou-Album now, with around five tracks or so. It'll probably be metal as it's the only genre I can somehow confidently do.

Now what I need are two things:
Some test-listeners who would be willing to listen to the drafts throughtout the process until it's a finished song. I don't want to post every single step online since it'll take away from the "surprise" of listening to the song when it is finished, I think.
The second thing would be an artist to draw an album cover, because I want this to be a real deal. I would draw it myself if I could handle colours or had a tablet, but I don't.

To give you an idea what I can do - which is not that much, admittedly - I am the one who did >>14102552.

If you're interested, contact me please.
lunatic.sinsack@gmail.com

>>14153677
I don't know if its manga or not. But its in english though as my Japanese is hontoni mazui.

>>14152680
Mainly all the first default tools of the binary brush up to the 4th row (I use photoshop CS6), the biggest layer has a random filter on it that I forgot the name making the diagonal lines (the ones look kinda like chocolate coulis) slighty blurry, then I added some more shit on top of it, changed the property of some layers here and there... I will try to make more elaborated stuff looking like this later, not half-asleep this time!

>>14152359
Because I have boxes to deliver and vans to drive, so my hands are kinda full

>>14153962
Something came out of it.
many lives were sacrificed to push it back from where it came, and everything was covered up to avoid to put a burden on future generations.

>>14153232
>>14154013
looks cute dude
would read

>>14154659
I wish I could draw cute or cool things too.
why my drawings are all so bland damnit

>>14154631
Draw with your feet

>>14153232
>>14154013
didn't you make some comic before with really bad japanese? your stuff's cute and i'm looking forward to it.
>>14154673
you just gotta try! if you post some art i'm sure people will give you some pointers
>>14154794
driving uses feet anon

>>14154673
Post your stuff, when I want to draw something cute I try to draw it as a kid would.

The barracuda has been troublesome. 3D programs do not like smooth transparency. I suppose I will just model the fin's edges directly then.

tfw gonna be bullied again

>>14156263
You crashed my browser.

>>14156321
toaster confirmed

>>14156263
>5000x4000
do you want to kill someone?

>>14155790
i like the face, i wish the rest didn't feel as lazy though.
>>14156263
resize and crop out some of that dead space. the shadow isn't adding a whole lot to the image besides it not being in perspective. don't colour exclusively with a super soft brush.

>>14155275
That thing would be spooky in a dark cave.

Someday I'm going to contribute something to one of these OC threads. But not today.

>>14158651
then fuck off.

Time for bread!

>>14158419

I still have to fix the fin but it looks okay. The 3D stuff looks acceptable and it will really help with larger objects that have complex movements to make them 3D.

>>14112958
Been gone for a while and I thought I would come back to at least 5 more music compilations, are the other contributors gone?

>>14155275
I feel life when everything's situated your going to need a bunch of filters to set the mood. You making your own music?

Hey /jp/, any good sources for learning to write a light novel aside from just readin them? Hoping to submit to Dengeki one day.

>>14161092

I've tried but I don't really have any musical talent.

>>14160565
What tool did you use to make this? Looks slightly like crayon or a spraying can.

>>14162210
There are always free music libraries you can use. I see them referenced in rpgm doujin games all the time.

>>14155275
If you're looking for help with the music, I would like to.

>>14159129
This one's probably been going for a year. I've lost track. So, if you could submit an album art, the project could finally finish.

It seems not many people want to contribute to the compilation, but there are a lot of musicians here.

I am currently writing a bunch of stuff, setting a world I'm building that has magical girls, intrigue, guns and combat. Would /jp/ be interested in something like that?

>>14162487
Don't misunderstand dude, I think there are a lot willing to contribute, me included. But sometimes other things've got priority or, as in my case, I am not confident to finish something ssatisfactory as well ass jp-related in time.

>>14162491
We already had Madoka.

>>14162491

Only if it's as tacticool as possible.

I finally got around to fixing the camera, it adds a fraction of the velocity so now you can get a better idea of where you're going.

>>14162481
I think I will need help with the music.

>>14162373
The music I have been making isn't very good.
http://a.uguu.se/rcirdm.ogg

>>14162880
Alright. I'll trying doing some music and hope have something finished by the time the next thread comes. If you like it, maybe I can do more for you.

Is there a specific style you would like?

>>14162907

I would like strange instruments or midis. I think the idea of underwater is that it's a completely different world to anything above ground so I've been trying to reflect that in the music. Although it's hard to do that and also make it sound appealing at the same time but at the same time you need to reflect the underwaterness of it all by giving some reverb. It's very tricky.

>>14162919
Strange instruments, you say.
Alright, then I take it that your own songs instruments are kinda what you are looking for sound-wise?
I think I could manage something like that.

Until now, I always thought of String pizz when I thought of an underwater world.

>>14162880
Sounds like a character theme that'd come up when you talk to them in a game.

>>14162500
We're on the same boat, I am always dissatisfied with what I make.

>>14162976

I suppose that would make the most sense. I do like Star control 2's music a lot.

>>14162930
Yes but you can really do anything you'd like. I got another song from someone once that was nice.

>>14162985
It's just the bane of trying to get good. I feel like, until we really get on a certain level, we will never be statisfied, and even then, we will still want to get better. Which is, in itself, a good thing. We just have to get our work out there and not be afraid to do so.

>>14163100
Cool, but I'll try to somehow appeal to your tastes.

Friendly reminder that I am still looking for more test listeners that'll help me shape my Touhou-album.
If you're interested, contact me:
lunatic.sinsack@gmail.com

This is my first OC I am a beginner artist pls critique

Does anyone actually go to /jp/'s flockdraw anymore?

>>14163564
I don't, because my tablet broke... It was a lot of fun at the time.

>>14163564
I would but the time I waste there doesn't help me git gud.

>>14162368
crayon tool

>>14163527
I think it's missing the O from OC.

the beginnings of a puffer fish. I really need to figure out how big my jellyfish is in comparison to other animals soon. I think the puffer fish when it is small should be smaller than the jellyfish itself.

>>14163979
The animations look good on him but the lighting is off for how dark the surroundings are.

>>14163121
>looking for more
Has anyone contacted you yet? If not, I will.

>>14164164

It's just a testing area. I should put a backdrop in there though.

>>14164430
Yeah, so far I got two people.
If you're willing to nonetheless, you would be more than welcome.

>>14162502
I'm not really into the sort of stuff the Butcher likes to come up with, but I'm planning on getting a mash of realism with qt 3.14 girls and magic.

>>14162528
But I'm more a 1900 - 1945 fan...

>>14165440
Universally lewd.

Hello again /jp/. I haven't posted my stuff in a while, mostly because I took about a month break.
I'm the guy with the moon rabbit story from the summer. I aim to make it a novel length story when I am finished with it.

The full text so far is here, though there's a lot of stuff I want to change, particularly the dialogue in the earlier parts along with a few inconsistent details. http://pastebin.com/6dCrbF45

If you've read that before and just want to see the latest part, that's here: http://pastebin.com/isvGPN4m

Also, earlier this month I wrote a fanwork of a doujin. It's lewd, sorry. http://pastebin.com/GVJwnFuF

https://imgur.com/oMhCRr7

Do we have a download link for the second music compilation?

>>14168813
I'll upload it later.

I'll draw

>>14162919
waterphone/any metal-based nontonal stuff, its mostly used for horror sounds

>>14161843
what, in japanese?

Stay dry, /jp/.

>>14162502
>>14162528
>>14165110
If nothing else, I can guarantee that it will be very very autistic.

>>14170718
You're petting your lines too much.

I have been trying to paint the animals and trying to animate them in photoshop. I have a few methods I can use and they all have their benefits so it's hard to stick to just one.

>>14173389
Aya a best

I think people mentioning my main character looking somewhat out of place is correct. fortunately the jellyfish I based him off of has a lot of spots on it so I can work something out. I would like to keep him simple to contrast with the world though just so you can make out where you are at all times.

>>14173389
Thats one rude bird.

It almost feels like I have been productive.
>>14173526
Nice to see you working on it again!

>>14173526
You looking for stuff like this?
vocaroo.com/i/s1queLiVWnAy

>>14173719
Or like this? I feel like slow background music that builds up to something a little more peppy as you go on would fit your moods quite right, but I don't know if this is even the stuff you're looking for.

vocaroo.com/i/s1LpMEEPiBA7

hi

>>14173719
>>14173751

These are a few different songs I have that kind of show the difference between overall themes.

vocaroo.com/i/s0EeH0COB2Qm
vocaroo.com/i/s1PE9ysKcLUy
vocaroo.com/i/s0rcXaMHcWkp
vocaroo.com/i/s1ViCmjlqVrR
vocaroo.com/i/s1Kb1ALOMUME

some of them sound a little better than I remember but I don't know if they fit at all because I like adding drums to everything.

>>14170469
Yeah, of course.

>>14174603
cute shorts

>>14173719
>>14173751


>>14175024

also a game that had really nice music I think was the void, if it helps give any indication.
https://youtu.be/xRT5hyowX3k

>>14175130
>>14175024
I always imagined the game having Ecco music, but it seems like it's going to have more lively music.

>>14174603
cute tits

>>14173389
Fuck, saved.

>>14175088
They are comfy and easy to wear.

>>14175200
I imagined aquaria music but that would be too "epic" and full in all likely hood for the little squid. Either invironmental music or something cute like Ikachan by pixel.

>>14175553
Isn't it a jellyfish? Squids have those two big arms with the suckers on them.

Now with spots, and seahorses that shoot little seahorses at you.

>>14175678

Yes. it is a white-spotted jellyfish. I've been trying to find ways of making it look more like the real thing but it looks very bland without its eye. It is what gives it a little personality.

>>14175200
I would like something a little lively. There will be bosses that will have, I hope, some intense battles.

>>14176254
You said you like drums?
vocaroo.com/i/s0PyIRJH9oeD

>>14177313

Yes but personally I prefer the lower quality sample stuff. Star control 2 is a good example of it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F5ecN92n6qI

It just sounds more like a video game to me when it is like that. The drum loop you made was nice though.

>>14177332
I think I'm bad with drums, I feel like I can only make pop songs or ambient

loopable
vocaroo.com/i/s0TPJBlJtQbD

>>14176254
I think it looks strange as a ball on top of legs instead of a bell with tentacles coming out, but it does make it look cute the way it is. Those spots are kind of unbecoming though.

Are there going to be parts where it's so dark that you can only see his eye?

>>14173389
Is it okay if I try to draw this with actual Aya?

>>14133232
Those fingers are really the cherry on the cake... nice.

>>14136228
>>14151346
I don't know what's going on, but I'm saving these.

>>14135453
>>14137318
Guys, stop making music! I want to join, but can't. Not until my new PC arrives, this one is overheating.
I'll propose when I get the chance, so far you've done a pretty cool job with it.

>>14143550
Although it looks technically well-done, the lineart had a lot more personality. I believe the problem is with how you color it - it's too formulaic. Explore, I'm sure you can do it thrice as interesting.

>>14143805
>>14144810
>>14149557
The textures are well-done, but very ugly/unappealing. Can't we go for a less trypophobic look? Unless this is specific to a section of the game, or your intention is going with a disturbing atmosphere.
Also >>14162919
What do you think of Splatoon's OST?
>>14177332
This is too 80s sounding, I believe you could have one or other layer of chiptune/lowbitrate, but not overall - it won't fit the rather modern graphics.

>>14152135
Why dissolve, though?

>>14152316
Really cool composition, reminds me of (cute) Vocaloid PVs. Needs refining, but the essence is here.

>>14158960
Eyes are a tad too large. And detailed, making the rest look faint. But I like it nevertheless.

>>14160747
I love images that speak to the soul.

>>14170718
HOW UTTERLY SAD!

>>14174603
I really like this, it has volume but still finely contained within the lineart.

This crab might take a while.

>>14181746
What little I've heard of the splatoon music is okay but it is definitely not fitting. Can't help with the hole fear though there's a lot of holes in the ocean.

>>14180454
I've still been deliberating on changing the sprites. I hope to make it more detailed while keeping the appeal.

>>14177332
How do you feel about, for example, the Super Metroid OST?

>>14182198
This is pretty cool. Gives off some kind of Castlevania-villain-vibe.

>>14182292
Also pretty good. Though I feel like you are using the thick lines a bit too much. They don't really fit in with the otherwise well fone shadows.

>>14174603
Awesome. Those little breasts are a really nice tease. The hands are also pretty good. The legs, though, have some weird issues. They look way too plump.

>>14181746
Alright man, when will you get your new PC?

>>14182198
Now this looks good!
>>14181746
Overheating? I hope you get your new PC soon.

>>14181746
>Not until my new PC arrives, this one is overheating.

1. Unscrew the screws on your case
2. Open it up and clean the dust from the insides of your computer
3. Close the case and put the screws back in

There, fixed, unless your issue is with a dead fan or not enough power getting you your fans.

>>14119939
Timeskip via sleep works well.
Or through some other activity, like reading, watching TV, shitpost on the /jp/, etc.
You could make awake activities go at double speed or something like that, so it isn't entirely time-skipping, just passing the time.


As for game running "in background", you could simply make it an option to appease everyone.
Likewise with the timeskip if you wanted, could add a End Day option in the options.

As for the period during time-skip, you could calculate scenarios that would require your attention and wake you up for whatever reason. (and again, as an option)

You could roll these under various gameplay modes.
Stuff like "real, standard dating game progression, full sandbox" and shit like that.

>>14183489

It's okay although if I were to choose a more accurate game it would be the void:
https://youtu.be/YO0tM_3wCYQ

Its music is very good.

>>14183489
Thank you for your interest and I'll keep what you've said in mind. I feel like I've hit on a neat idea, but that there is a lot of work to be done before it can come into its own.

>>14183489
>>14183722
>>14183761
By the end of this month, hopefully.
I would attempt to fix it, but it's also pretty old now, so I'll format it and keep it just for simple tasks.

>>14182107
>Can't help with the hole fear though there's a lot of holes in the ocean.
Oh well... just thought I'd point it out.
How many paws will follow us in this crab fight? Full 10 would be pretty spoopy.