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General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, cooking, and programming.

Previous thread >>12688690

>> No.12737807

Does anyone know if it's possible to draw a simple 2hu using something like pentool in photoshop?
I'm presuming it is, since it's possible even in paint, but I'm not really sure where to start, if there's any guides or anything I'd love to know

>> No.12737810
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The best thread on the jay is finally here!

>> No.12737836

>>12737685
woah. sexy cyclops girl. I wanna cum on her bangs.

>> No.12737848
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>>12737685
cute cyclops

>> No.12737864

>>12737685
How do you keep dust and particles out of an eye that big? Wouldn't the body lose a lot of fluids just from preventing the eye from drying up? She would also need a giant optic nerve to capture all that light. There also isn't that much room in skull, meaning she' lose half her nasal canal and frontal lobes. That means she's would have the intelligence of an animal.

>> No.12737874

>>12737864
It works for beholders, so it works for cyclopes too.

>> No.12737936

Anyone got some ideas for a background apart from just bones? Also any advice will be great.

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>>12737936
Forgot image

>> No.12737989

>>12737940
Desco would clearly have several portraits, stuffed dolls and merchandise of Fuuka in the background. She loves her big sis, after all.

>> No.12738050

>>12737807
It's possible to doodle simple things with the pentool in Photoshop. I mainly use paint tool SAI though, so I don't know that much about Photoshop.

>> No.12738081

Posted this already in another thread, but only because there was no OC thread around at the time.
(NSFW)
http://i.imgur.com/7Q2BMJw.png

>> No.12738106

>>12738081
At least draw some futa m8

>> No.12738298
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ocdns

>> No.12738310
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>> No.12738608
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Design rough will be used on Pixiv's "学生戦争っだー" contest.
Asking for advices on how to make the character moar attractive to viewers.

>> No.12738610

>>12738608
Good background.

>> No.12738611

>>12738608
You could try taking her clothes off.

>> No.12738613
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And now I'm struggling on how to design a school uniform that shows breast naturally and not lewd.

>> No.12738620

>>12738608
make boobies bigger

>> No.12738629

>>12738608
Remove the boobies

>> No.12738636

>>12738608
thinner legs, more loose strands of hair, and hair accessories of some kind

>> No.12738651
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>>12738613
maybe you can use this?

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>>12738298
fucking SICK dude

>> No.12738739
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Now there is crystals. I'm still putting the parts together but I imagine for the sake of keeping things interesting to break away from the theme of ocean life sometimes will be crystals you collect. They wont be in such meager locations though and will look slightly more majestic.

I found a unity add on called Ferr2D which has helped with making levels. I can get them done pretty fast to where making levels is going faster than I can design and lay them out.

>> No.12738742

>>12738739
Looking pretty great. Will it have cute girls?

>> No.12738750

>>12738742

Maybe there will be a goddess later on. I haven't planned on any humans. I was kind of torn between making it somewhat modern, which I suppose I am doing, as opposed to what I previously imagined which was on the edge, some time after the K-pg boundary.

>> No.12738753

>>12738750
Modern? Care to elaborate on that cause I can't think how underwater would have a modern theme.

>> No.12738754
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thoughts?

>> No.12738755

>>12738753

Modern compared to 65 million years ago. It just mostly affects what creatures would be a live. for a little while I considered making it during the Cambrian explosion or even during the Ordovician periods but that would be too bizarre and limited at the same time to make things. plus while I like those time periods I don't know them in depth enough to base the entire game's setting around them.

fortunately Nautilus survived and so have other living fossils.

>> No.12738756

>>12738755
Sounds like you know well how your game is going.

>> No.12738760

>>12738756

I've also been hiding things in the game even in my little test demo have a couple of things no so obvious for people to discover. Unfortunately it may be too obtuse so I may no bother in the final game. Perhaps one small thing.

>> No.12738770

>>12738754
I don't like her facial expression. Doesn't take a genius to figure out why.

>> No.12738772

>>12738750
What about mermaids?

>> No.12738775
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>> No.12738784

>>12738775
You never answered whether this is an ero-game or not.

>> No.12738786

>>12738754
I want to touch her.
>>12738770
Because you have autism and cant easily define facial expressions? #nobully

>> No.12738790

>>12738786
No. Its more like that pose and the facial expression is a stupid as fuck combination. Maybe you should try asking somewhere else if you get buttblasted by a one negative comment.

>> No.12738793

>>12738784
The main release, no. The plot is kinda serious and deals with humanity as a whole. I also live in Amurika and have no idea if making loli porn will get me sent to jail.

An ero patch will end up finding it's way into the wild though, just not an official release. You'll get to sex up each boss you beat and a complete re-write with new images, but same game play.

>> No.12738834

>>12738775
Here's the latest build if you guys want to play. The down attack is now a mana attack since it's almost too useful, enemies have interactions with players attack, and the store has been tweaked.

mediafire.com/?7immdz3a9197fs9

>> No.12738852

Fucking anatomy

http://i.imgur.com/bm1cM85.jpg

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>>12738852
Maybe this will help a bit.

>> No.12738905

>>12738754
I like your armor design, in the part that actually have it.

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>> No.12739163
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"haven't contributed anything in years, lets draw something for the jay!"
this came out.
I... I don't even know, man.

>> No.12739228

>>12739163
It looks pretty cool, but I think there's something not right with composition. I'm not sure what exactly is the case here, but I liked it more after I flipped it horizontally. Maybe it has something to do with positive/negative direction, I dunno man.

>>12739029
Want to say:
Love your hair.

>> No.12739292

>>12739029
honey kisaragi

>> No.12739370
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New song! I really ended up liking this one, especially the pre-chorus.

https://soundcloud.com/misakoisaqt/lovely-lovely-come-in-bloom

As always, please let me know what you think, and if there's anything I can improve.

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>> No.12739483

>>12739436
What's wrong with your faaaace?!

>> No.12739489
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>>12739436
Yep, forgot my image.

>> No.12739510

>>12739489
I can barely tell shes even looking at me in that version

>> No.12739518

>>12739436
>>12739489
The face is screwed up, those braids barely look like braids (not to mention the one on the right should be in front of her hand), and her hands are too big

>> No.12739532

>>12739510
Yeah, I probably shouldn't have posted it at all. I guess it was too messed up not to mess with some more. I'm sorry.

>>12739518
Her hands are actually fine if you assume the length of the palm is the same as the height of the face. But I agree, the guy obviously goes for kawaii uguu feel in this one, so yeah.

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Drew with a tablet, what can I do to improve?

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>> No.12739588

>>12739565
Get rid of the tumblr nose immediately

>> No.12739607

>>12739518
>The face is screwed up
can you be more specific? The face is the only thing I spent a decent amount of effort on and they always take me a long time to draw. All I can see is that both eyes do need to be shifted more to the left and her side bangs need to be more evened out.

>>12739518
Thanks for doing it anyway. Just looking at the two next to each other though, it mainly just looks like you shifted the angle of her face and where she's looking towards.

>> No.12739621

>>12739607
Orin's eyes are almost looking in opposite directions like a chameleon

>> No.12739659
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>>12739607
>>12739436
>I can see is that both eyes do need to be shifted more to the left and her side bangs need to be more evened out.
No, you guys are messing this up, that's not the problem here.

>> No.12739682

>>12739565
It's not just the nose, the whole thing has a tumblr feel, it's also has more artifacts than Egypt.
Outside of that, work on your anatomy a bit and find some individuality. The fact you got this far means you can make it over these hills if you really want to.

>> No.12739952

>>12739576
you should color with the same pixel tool you use for the lines. I think it would look better

>> No.12740060

Here's a song I made about a week ago:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/30614076/jarskisuchagreatguy_.mp3

>> No.12740176

>>12740060
I don't think I have heard something happier than this.

>> No.12740552
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/jp/ how do I draw smooth, clean lines?

>> No.12740595

>>12740552
Talent and practice.

>> No.12740596 [DELETED] 

>>>117592392

>> No.12740604

>>12740552
Practice, and working at super high resolutions

the pen/circle tool is a godsend (although it's technically cheating)

>> No.12740614

>>12740552
lots of practice, daily. I found that if I did linework on a daily basis, it quickly improved my pen control and I could draw 4px wide lines on top of one another easily very soon.

>> No.12740615

>>12740604
>practice
I try to make long continuous strokes but I have to ctrl+z 203 times per line or else it's not perfect, any tips?
Drawing circular shapes in one stroke is insanely hard to get right

>and working at super high resolutions
How high and what brush size?

>> No.12740624

>>12740615
Do you rotate your canvas so that you can easily make your strokes from upper left to lower right, assuming you are left handed? I have a much easier time drawing the kind of curves I want if I am able to draw my curves in that direction on the tablet.

>> No.12740625

>>12740615
>ctrl+z 203 times per line or else it's not perfect
You found the secret of good line control. All jokes aside it all comes to practicing drawing lines. Whether short, long, wide, or thin. Eventually you won't be ctrl+z'ing as much as you were when you were a beginner.

>> No.12740626

>>12740624
>left handed
I mean right handed.

>> No.12740627

>>12739952
Thank you for your advice. Typically, it's all done with the pencil and paint bucket tool, though I've probably been slavishly been relying on filling zones to make it easier to work with the sketch.

>> No.12740630

Friendly reminder to horizontal flip!

>> No.12740631

>>12740624
I've never tried rotating the canvas, only horizontal flip to find mistakes. I'll try that next time

>>12740625
Okay I'll work harder then

>> No.12740637

>>12740615
>How high and what brush size?
Canvas size around 2000~6000px, with whichever brush size you desire.

My pic posted earlier >>12738678 has a 5404 × 4576 canvas, made with a 1px brush

>> No.12740648

>>12740615
>I have to ctrl+z 203 times per line or else it's not perfect
Shit dude, it's okay to scratch a bit.

>> No.12740660

>>12740631
I find it incredibly important to rotate my canvas to draw my line correctly. Make a couple of keybinds right next to each other to rotate the canvas clockwise and counter-clockwise. D and F work perfectly for me.

>> No.12740846
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I'm trying to put seaweed into my game but it has so far been very painful. It requires a lot of little parts moving and they're all ordered in the sprite layer weirdly so I can't use the ones here for the background and foreground because they'd overlap plus they wouldn't cover the player in the foreground when needed.

Maybe I should simplify the way I make them. It's tedious.

>> No.12740851

>>12740846
This game looks cute, comfy, and fun to explore
I hope you get some comfy music in it too

>> No.12740852

>>12740846
This is really starting to look like a regular (as in: proper) indie-game that you see on the market today.

>> No.12740880

>>12740851

I hope people do like to explore. in my demo no one seemed to be able to realize that I put Morse code in the music.

I'm not very good at making music though so I may look for someone to help make it later on.

>>12740852
Like this? http://store.steampowered.com/app/331200/

Thanks for thinking so. I plan to add a lot to make sure it's fun. I also want to try and add some kind of mechanic to the game that makes it feel like it has something to it. Not in some gimmick way but something like yoshi island where the yoshi could make and throw eggs. I wouldn't just want to tack something on without though.

>> No.12740891

>>12740880
>Like this? http://store.steampowered.com/app/331200/
Not like that, that's just embarrassing outside ironic perspective.

>> No.12740893

>>12740846
Does the seaweed slow you down?

>> No.12740925

It takes me over 4 hours to do a fully drawn and coloured drawing of a character

Is it normal and should I just take it easy and be patient?
If not how do I become more efficient?

>> No.12740929

>>12740925
let's see the drawing first.
then we'll know if its a 4 hour drawing.

>> No.12741028

>>12740925
People who are shitty tend to waste a lot of time doing and thinking about whatnot. You just get faster the less shitty you are. Experienced artists who take the same length of time produce something of higher quality because they don't spend all day trying to get perspective or whatever right, it's been right the first 5 minutes and they moved on.

>> No.12741035

>>12740893

No, should it? I don't think it'd be fair to slow people down in seaweed.

>> No.12741058
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Now he can peak!

>> No.12741067

>>12741058
kawaii

>> No.12741143
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Would any background artist be willing to work on a VN project? We have a writer, a tachi-e/CG artist, and a programmer already and the prologue has been written. Pic related, tachi-e for the protagonist. If someone shows interest I guess I'll make a mail for the project or something.

>> No.12741145

>>12741143
For free?

>> No.12741154

>>12741145
I barely have any money with me, but ideally yes, it's more of something we're doing because we like it.

>> No.12741159

>>12738613
Blazers.

>> No.12741165
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I drew this last night. Trying to find a "cutesy" art style for myself.

>> No.12741290
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>>12741143
>VN
Just grab pics from google and pass them thru a filter.
NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW.

>> No.12741351

>>12741143

What kind and how complex?

>> No.12741379

>>12741351
A considerable amount will be rural background but in later chapters the setting might get a turn to a more urban, steampunk style. Complexity doesn't matter so much, I'd say if you can make it fit with the art posted, it should be fine.

>> No.12741384

Does this kind of thing fit for this thread?

http://imgur.com/a/4Q7c6

I used original illustrations for the characters and backgrounds I scavenged from gelbooru the best I could.

The story is an original idea though and this is what I've currently progressed to.

Up until the last few slides which introduce the newest girl(at that point of time), I am satisfied with the writing but the direction of the story could be improved and I am still thinking it through.

>> No.12741391

>>12741384

edit: while I say original illustrations I don't mean that I made them, just that they are original in themselves without any sort of backstory behind them(I think)

>> No.12741569
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What's a good thing to use to capture gifs? The one I used skips a lot of frames.

>> No.12741592

>>12741569

You can use OBS to make a video and upload it to pomf, or convert it to a webm. There's no need for gifs anymore unless it's pixel art I think.

>> No.12741603

>>12738613
You're so good at lines, im so jealous.
breasts look so lewd i love it.

>> No.12741639

>>12741165
Well, so far it looks really rough and not very cute. Maybe you should refine it a little bit more.

>> No.12741823
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Now there is 3 layers to the seaweed. I guess I didn't get a lot done today.

>> No.12741960

>>12741569
Noice nun dude

>> No.12742010
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>>12741823
Oooh as a water fan this looks promising. You should add something to the background to give it more depth like in aquaria.

>> No.12742021

>>12741823
The squid needs to rotate with player input. It looks extremely weird that his upward thrust is moving him laterally.

>> No.12742026
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>>12742021
Should made him move like Ikachan.

>> No.12742078

>>12741823
Can you make the bubbles grow? I feel like that's missing.

>> No.12742423

>>12741384
Decent premise (even if it takes place in a japanese highschool) but the writing is kind of shitty at some points. Stop trying to emulate the style of a poorly-TL'd VN and it should be passable.

>> No.12742556

>>12738755
Since you want the game to be heavy on exploration, why not add out-of-period animals as secrets? The enemies themselves could be modern, but you would have occasional cameos by extinct animals in hidden zones, or perhaps even in the background. You could even hide them in swarms of similar-looking modern animals, so the player can, for example, discover a sole Wiwaxia in a group of sea urchins, or notice a rudist on a rock encrusted with limpets and barnacles. This way, you would be able to add the animals you like without making the entire game be about them.

In any case, I'm very much looking forward to this game. It has this "fluffy" style that Kirby's Dreamland 3 had, and that's a very good thing. Keep up the good work!

>> No.12742569

>>12741035
It depends on what kind of game this will be.
If you're literally just swimming around and doing fetch quests, I guess not, but if there's an element of danger, it could make things a bit more interesting. It could even be used to hide in.

>> No.12742643

>>12742423

Thanks.

It doesn't have to take place in a japanese highschool, just thought it was better suited for this kind of work.

I'm probably going to scrap doing this as a VN and recycle my writing.

>> No.12742718

>>12742643
Good luck anon, I'm currently in the process of (re)writing my second VN.

On a side note, third person POV is so much easier to write than in first person POV. I have no idea why so many western VN writers are so afraid of it. Fucking weebs.

>> No.12742747

>>12742718

Do you have steam?

contact twentytwokilometres@gmail.com

I'd like to talk to you about writing and the creation of VNs.

>> No.12742793

>>12742021

I feel like that could make moving around in the game tedious. Someone mentioned having his sprite tiled based on his horizontal momentum so I will probably do that.

>>12742556
I could have portals that send you back in time.

>>12742569
I didn't really think about that but I guess it might be one big fetch quest in terms of a storyline. I hope I can combat that though.

>> No.12743054
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12-bar blues attempt.
https://soundcloud.com/ibuki-san/beware-v-bullets
Someone suggested I try some external tremolo filter on the trumpet, might give it a try somewhen.

>>12739370
Well, the vocals are gibberish to me, but the music is very cute and pleasing.

>>12740060
Wow, pretty cool! I wish this had a bit more dynamics, though.

>> No.12743153

>>12743054
You should work on quality. Try to make the sounds feel more spacious, add some effects, or accentuate the right notes to get a better flow of the beat, so the song doesn't feel two-dimensional.

>> No.12743371 [DELETED] 

another day
still no motivation to do anything

>> No.12743504

>>12743054
I haven't seen you post before. I listened to some of your stuff and I feel like you stick your melodies to one octave too much, so they sound static and not very dynamic. Also, I noticed that the counterpoint in your contrapuntal music implies awkward harmonies. In music like >>12739370, the harmony is defined clearly by the chords instead of being implied, so you don't hear those strange unintentional harmonies or those ugly note clashes.
Whenever I criticize someone's work like this I feel like I'm being some kind of arrogant asshole.

>> No.12743561 [DELETED] 

>>12743371
Draw a thing you liked when you were a kid

>> No.12743566

>>12743561
I just realized I don't remember shit about my childhood.

>> No.12743573

>>12743371
Fuck motivation. If you have some, it will go away after some time. Just force yourself to do something everyday.

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today i learn i hate trying to work clean

>> No.12743713

>>12743699
Is that klk?

>> No.12743729

>>12743699
The thickness of the lines is too unvarying.

>> No.12743744

>>12743713
Doesn't look like it.

>> No.12743748

>>12743713
no
>>12743729
yeah i know, but when i had size variable by pressure it was looking worse. lineart with digital seems to be so much harder and it makes me nervous

>> No.12743755

>>12743748
Just do it like you did before, unless you're trying to practice clean linework.

>> No.12743831

>>12743504
>one octave
I always thought I went too far, always jumping octaves and getting ultra high...

What would you recommend for improving the counterpoint harmony? Using only notes that are part of the underlying chord on clashing notes? If you can point which songs you're referring to about this dissonance, I would be thankful. Going by feeling, I'd say Oomizuao and Ballon Gun have well fit counterpoints, but the Blues and Low Budget Guitar have stuff to fix.

>I feel like I'm being some kind of arrogant asshole
Don't. Input is always appreciated, I don't know what I'm doing and having directions pointed is always refreshing.

>> No.12743889

>>12743831
>I always thought I went too far, always jumping octaves and getting ultra high...
You have to have a mix of both, if you're always jumping it sounds homogeneous.

>If you can point which songs you're referring to about this dissonance
It's not very much about dissonance it's more about the implied harmonies that make no sense. The worst offender of this is Merlon Whistle, which sounds like you were noodling around a scale.
>What would you recommend for improving the counterpoint harmony
http://www.calvin.edu/academic/music/pdf/Figuring%20Out%20Melody.pdf
I think this little book will help you, contains audio examples and everything.

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>>12743755
yeah i am, just wanted to give it a try

>> No.12743918

>>12743831
Also, there is nothing wrong with dissonance if it makes sense, as shown here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l6qLW-qsxyQ

>> No.12743992
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Coming along very well

>> No.12744007

>>12743914
try learning to make backgrounds too

>> No.12744013

>>12743054
>Well, the vocals are gibberish to me, but the music is very cute and pleasing.

Ah, thank you! I included lyrics in the song description if you click "more info". Unfortunately English vocaloid is very unintelligible.

>> No.12744023

>>12738739
Thanks for the tip about Ferr2D, been looking for something like that and it looks great.

Your game seems to be coming along nicely as well, will it be a free download or are you planning on selling it?

>> No.12744033

>>12744023
I'd like to be able to sell it but for right now I've been far more concerned about wanting to finish.

>> No.12744040

>>12744033
What happened to your other game?

>> No.12744055

>>12744040

Which one? There were 3 before this and I fully intend to try and go back to two of them when done with this.

>> No.12744101

>>12744040
The point and click adventure one.

>> No.12744109

>>12744101

It had trouble when I found out how limiting the program I was using is. I thought about using another one but that's what stopped it i its tracks, plus the high fidelity pixel art. I would rather draw it out better than what I was doing.

>> No.12744471
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12744471

I broke my enemies and learnt a lesson about why you do not delete test scenes until you're certain you don't need anything in it. But besides probably needing to rewrite some basic code for enemies level design is going okay.

I might make the terrain a lot better for now. It doesn't feel fitting right now.

>> No.12744960

>>12743699
Don't stress too much about working clean. Not yet anyway. Focus your time on churning out more stuff and the clean feel will come naturally.

>> No.12744987
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Winter calls for sweaters and butts.

>> No.12745086

>>12744987
What do butts have to do with sweaters? Jeans are also shit tier clothes.

>> No.12745168
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12745168

I made a new tile set and gave it a color overlay in unity it kind of brings it all together.. I also figured out how to solve unity's painful issue of gaps between tile sprites. you set the sprite to multiple and ave to edit the value so it's got an edge. So if your image is 256 wide it should be 254 with an x offset of 1 because unit tries to pool information from the edges when there's fractions of pixels or something which is why sometimes there's gaps. At least I think that's whats happening, thus far I haven't had any problems with that since doing it.

>> No.12745199

>>12745168
You're the best! Keep up the hard work!

>> No.12745318

>>12744987
Nice ass, lady!

>> No.12745367

>>12745168
Looks very nice now, I like the change.

>> No.12745558
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>>12743889 >>12743918
Delicious information. Thanks, anon!

>> No.12745568

>>12745558
I would have really liked to explain it myself instead of linking a book, but I'm not fluent in english at all, and the topic is somewhat extensive. I'm glad you found it useful.

>> No.12745984

>>12743992
I like this. It's nice.

>> No.12746594
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12746594

>>12739163
Here's another one.
What will you find in the mysterious castle fuckenstein?

>> No.12746655

>>12746594
P-please draw the castle's interior!

>> No.12746686

>>12746594
>>12739163
Your composition is terrible, almost as bad as a girl, and you don't seem to understand line weight at all. If you aren't going to bother putting in any effort into these drawings why would you bother posting them?

>> No.12746711

>>12746686
>almost as bad as a girl
Tee hee.
Am I a cute girl,anonymous?

>> No.12746720

>>12746711
It's kind of hard to tell without seeing a picture of you. Your personality is kind of gross though.

>> No.12746729

>>12746686
> If you aren't going to bother putting in any effort into these drawings why would you bother posting them?
What if that's the limit of his ability/ knowledge?

>> No.12746738

>>12739029
sugoi

>> No.12746740

>>12746729
Judging from his stroke confidence I don't think it is.

>> No.12746788

>>12746740
Lewd

>> No.12746844

>>12746686
>almost as bad as a girl
20 threads later, you are still mad

>> No.12746854

>>12746594
Oh I recognized you. this stuff is shitty just because you're not thinking hard enough. grab a picture of a cartoony background and try to figure out how it works
and you should concentrate on the stories, if those are good nobody gives a fuck about the rest and reads it

>> No.12746865

>>12746844
Hey buddy, it's not my fault girls have a notoriously horrible sense for composition.

>> No.12747012

How do you get over your insecurities and really start putting 100% effort into drawing? Whenever I push myself to improve I just revert to some shitty doodling that I'm more comfortable with.

>> No.12747022

>>12747012

I'm not sure. I just try to forget.

>> No.12747032
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12747032

Collab I've been keeping for 3 months, with no headphones to properly master:
https://soundcloud.com/ibuki-san/last-call-feat-turrn

It's featured in a compilation album by other anons, if anyone cares:
https://soundcloud.com/ibuki-san/xfd-55mu-neverachiever

>> No.12747299

>>12747012
You're already doing it, improving is a slow and painful process like when a caterpillar becomes a strong and beautiful stag beetle.

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12747336

>>12746854
>I recognized you
I think you are thinking about someone else, I haven't contributed anything in years.
Either that or you have a really good memory.
Also, you mentioned cartoony backgrounds, do you have anything particular in mind?
>>12746594
Here's another one. I really should've done the background first and the character last, not the other way around. Oh well, the more you know.

>> No.12747426

>>12741384
I looked over what you wrote and noted a few things that could be improved:

When his little sister starts getting angry about his comment of why she is a big sister I think you should seriously rewrite that. "take out pipsqueak, her adressing herself in third person isn't working here as it isn't cute.
Try to make conversation sound more natural.

In the beginning I don't think you need to describe air brushing on the protagnists skin to disperse into morning.

Does the girls he meet after he runs away go to the school? If so then why are they walking home- shouldn't they be in class?

I don't know why he suddenly felt really sick.
"A fortunately isolated bush catches a whiff of it and is lit" sounds pretty awkward it doesn't really sound like a normal person would think in such terms.
What I enjoyed: When you showed he wrote the love letter even though it sounded like he was nervous to read it for a first time,

I also liked the picture of the airplane- when and if you see to develop this concept more it would be cool to see it animated if you could do that.

>> No.12747545

>>12747426

Hey, I appreciate the critique and thoughts you shared.

And they're all valid too.

This project was kind of rushed because I decided a week ago or so that I'd do it by last Friday(due to personal circumstances that actually limit my ability to work on this) so there are certainly a lot of things that could've been done better and covered far more concisely.

I plan to recycle the writing and redo this in pure writing so that I'm not restricted to the few character illustrations I was able to find.

>Does the girls he meet after he runs away go to the school

Three girls(only one introduced so far) actually go to his school. Why they aren't in class, is deliberate but I haven't worked out the reasoning and motives behind why yet.

>I don't know why he suddenly felt sick

yet to be covered but I do have the reasoning behind it

thanks for the comments. a huge motivator for me

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I will try to make more secret things slightly more obvious like this one.

>> No.12748812

>>12748786

my only complaint is about how he's completely motionless moving left or right

but this may be autism on my part

>> No.12748864

>>12748812

I'll be fixing that soon. it's on my to do list

>> No.12748896

>>12748864

yeah shouldn't be too hard

just make his legs wiggle side to side

>> No.12749411

>>12747336
>>12746594
If this was /tg/ you would be one of the best drawfags on the board

>> No.12749514

>>12749411

>if this were africa you'd be one of the least hungry

>> No.12749578

>>12749514
It wasn't a compliment.
I hate how /tg/ has become with passion

>> No.12749642

>>12748786
I love how this is coming along

>> No.12749662

>>12748786
Wouldn't it be better to have collision detection on the sea's ground? It feels a bit strange for your character to disappear for a bit because it submerged.

>> No.12749703

>>12748786
Ha, now I'm enjoying it, the physics look pleasant to swim around.

I think there's something not right with his lightness. I take he fades to dark when he reaches too deep, and lightens up as he reaches the higher parts? The delay in this transition makes it seem quite random.

>> No.12749873

>>12749578
Are you trying to recruit? Why bring it up?

>> No.12749892

>>12749873
what. I brought it just because

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12750030

Boss 1 is dying, and she doesn't even have a name yet. I still can't draw for shit, but I'll keep trying.

>> No.12750044 [DELETED] 

>>12748786
Do you have a dev blog or website to keep track of your project?

>> No.12750054

>>12750030
The torso is way too short, try making it longer (her crotch can probably be where the sweater ends right now)

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>>12750054
And now I'm finding issues with clashing perspective. Fuck butts.

>> No.12750345 [DELETED] 

>>12750227
That's much better than the previous one in my opinion.

>> No.12750806

Hello, /jp/. Time for the irregular update on the current music project.

Well, about halfway through the supposed deadline now, but very little interest so far. Apart from a few questions, only one anon has actually mailed in to join the music compilation's dropbox.

Still, the rest of December to go (or something like that) and anyone is still welcome to join in to submit music or art. The place to mail is, again, jpmusicproject1@gmail.com.

Take it easy.

>> No.12750813

>>12750806
I was going to contribute, posted my synth progress earlier, but my amplifier broke. I can't record anything now and I'm too poor to be able to afford a new one in time. Sorry.

>> No.12750846

>>12750806
I would have contributed if you had appeared earlier.

>> No.12751044

>>12749703
He reacts to light sources.

>>12749662
That's adjustable in ferr2D I think. I can change it.

>>12749642
Thanks.

>>12750044
It' also where I post some art but I mostly put it here too http://afridge.tumblr.com/

>> No.12751052

>>12741384
I liked it, something about the atmosphere made it very relaxing to read.
Only thing that bothers me is the stolen art, I guess it's fine if you're using them as placeholders though.

>> No.12751083

>>12750806
is it compi 3 now? who is on it? art?

2nd was a huge shitfest so it's no wonder not a lot of people are excited about it. even compi 1 got a lot of backlash.

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Should I leave this in for the release game (but have using it set a flag in your save file or something? with a warning of course) or would that ruin it?

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>>12747336
It's me, drone.
Let's go mine some minerals, we require more minerals.
>>12751449
All the best games leave it. just put it in a key you wont push by mistake like "~".

>> No.12751596

>>12751449

You can BE the loli? Radical!

>> No.12751627

>>12751449

make the codes cryptic like "freecandy" gets you the van.

>> No.12751642

>>12751449
Keep it in.

>>12731854
>I thought they were usually pacific islanders since it's Japan.
No, he was traveling the world.
There's a photo of the Taj Mahal right next to the girl.

>> No.12751671
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12751671

I am the stroke of my brush.

White is my canvas and ink is my blood.

I have traced over a thousand images.

Unknown to the creators, Nor known to copyright.

Have withstood pain to trace cute girls.

Yet, those hands will never produce an original.

So as I pray, unlimited traced works.

its still shit

>> No.12751691

>>12750813
Hoping for the best for you, but the current interest seems too low for us to actually meet the deadline, so the project might just keep going until it gathers a respectable number of contributions, which means you might be able to catch it then.

>>12750846
But I've posted about the music compi project in every OC thread since it's conception two threads ago. Still, there's a reasonably long amount of time to go until the "deadline" (we don't even have to follow it anyway, just something to gun for)

>>12751083
Yes, compi 3. Unless, of course, the participants this time want to change the name, which is okay. Currently, there has only been one submission, 1 other person joined the dropbox and probably something like 1-2 other musicians who are "interested" but haven't joined the dropbox, and 1 artist who asked what art we want, but never contacted us again.

I agree with your assessment on our past notoriety, which is why I let it sleep for a long while before picking it back up again. Hope people forget, or at least forget how much they hated it.

>> No.12751747

I'm not sure what thread this goes in but it's "original" I guess so I'll put it here.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Kt1TjidR20

>> No.12751785 [DELETED] 

>>12738298
Do you have a pixiv so I can ask you to draw my stuff for me

>> No.12751798

>>12738298
Do you have a pixiv

sorry for previous post im high right now

>> No.12751886 [DELETED] 

>>12751449
Have you considered collaborating with one of /jp/'s various artist to get some proper sprites and CGI for your game. A sad truth about porn games is that the graphics and animation in many ways is more important than creativity. With proper sprites your project would be 100% more fappable.

You seem to be strictly a programmer which is both a blessing and a curse for game development.

>> No.12751911

I like these threads. I wish they'd appear more often, but I'm glad that they stay up for a while.

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>>12748786
Your game is pure. And by that I mean it is free from the current trend of indie developers putting memes and randomness into their games; hoping that youtubers like pewdiepie will review their game and make them rich overnight.

Have you played Holdover. It's a Metroidvania game involving water.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5M0RrdJyHxo

I think some of the level design and gameplay mechanics in Holdover would translate well into your game.

>> No.12751956

>>12740615
I find that taping notebook paper over my tablet helps with controlling the pen. I'm used to drawing on paper, so it makes switching to digital a little easier because the smooth tablet is just too smooth for me. I tend to slip and slide all over the place when drawing on the tablet, so the paper adds a bit of friction that helps me control the pen better.

>> No.12751981

>>12751954
>Your game is pure. And by that I mean it is free from the current trend of indie developers putting memes and randomness into their games; hoping that youtubers like pewdiepie will review their game and make them rich overnight.

I wouldn't ever do that.

>Holdover
I've seen it before. It seemed rather violent. I do intent on having puzzle solving that will unlock ways to progress on. I just need to think of some more, maybe switches.

>> No.12751986 [DELETED] 

>>12751671
>Using Linux.
There's the problem. The act of using Linux is only acceptable for programmers. If you're trying to take art seriously you have to use Mac or Windows.

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>>12751642

There I added both blacks, indians, AND tropical islanders.

Is that enough little brown girls now? I even added in some names and genetic probabilities (just basic ones I'll add more later) for them too.

>>12751487

~ is currently the key it's bound to.

>>12751627

But this way it's all automatic. I can just type "spawn X" and it looks into the list of things it can spawn by referring to the car model names.

>> No.12752535
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12752535

Working levers! haha!


>>12752497
>But this way it's all automatic.

Oh. I guess it's easier that when then.

>> No.12752910

>>12740552

Draw at 3x the size and then shrink it when you're done. Gets rid of those tiny fucking mistakes.

>> No.12753027

>>12751986
>mac
only if you're a self absorbed hipster who's more interested in flaunting the brand rather than doing actual work.

>> No.12753099

>>12753027
B-but all of the really cool artist all use Mac.

>> No.12753252

>>12751691
>>12750806
O snap, you're doing this again? Damn, I would gladly take part again if I didn't have a C87 release scheduled. Why right now of all times?!

>> No.12753271 [DELETED] 

>>12752497
Much better.

>> No.12753279

>>12743054
>>12743831
I think what >>12743504 is trying to say is that your phrasing is fucked up. And not the good, artsy kind either; it's the one that makes people go "whoa, what the FUCK was that?"

And if that's the case, I agree, even though you can string together decent melodies, your phrasing is awkward. You need to work on it more!

If you compare this to writing, this is like if a writer just tacks a bunch of pretty-sounding words together. Sure, you might get a sentence every now and then, but most of the time, it's gonna be meaningless and illogical, no matter how pretty the individual words are.

>> No.12753591
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12753591

I will add a bone yard area. I got to work on figuring out appropriate ways to give depth to the background while still having a "ground" it shouldn't be too difficult considering that I don't have to worry about gaps between images.

>> No.12753640

I'd like to make comics, but its like a minefield. or a knot. i'd like to do a doujin, but when I think of it every kind of original character start pulling to be in. how the fuck I deal with ideas?
jeez. I've even gained three kilos, and its not even christmas. my life is in shambles

>> No.12753650

>>12753640
Draw your outlines while drunk but be careful, it's a rough path. Once you start using alcohol to help lubricate your creative process you will almost certainly begin to depend on it.

>> No.12753652

>>12752497
You have more flavours than baskin robbins!

>> No.12753661

>>12753650
It can't work, I'm drunk 24/7

>> No.12753670

>>12753661
then your only option is heroin

>> No.12753675

>>12753670
I'm too of a pussy to hole myself.
you think acids are good?

>> No.12753685

>>12753675
why not try it yourself and report back?

>> No.12753688

>>12753591
very spoopy (and good work!)

>> No.12753689

>>12753675
yes

I'd recommend herb first though
but stay away from anything hard
if you get drunk a lot, or masturbate a lot, you have an addictive personality

asking your doctor for amphetamines might be an alternative though

>> No.12753695

>>12753685
I'm not your caviar dude
>>12753689
I have an addictive personality, true, but I can stop when I want

>> No.12753734

I am reading "Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain" to, hopefully, help patch up my inconsistent drawing ability.

Maybe, one day, I too may contribute something worth while.

>> No.12753735

>>12753734
I'm sure you will, if you don't use your own right side that is.

>> No.12753763

>>12753735

I don't understand this sentence.

>> No.12753790

>>12753763
If you draw on your own right brain you'll probably die.
my humor is too advanced for you

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>>12752535
http://vocaroo.com/i/s10XqOBnVvTJ
Here is a taste of the music you could play in the background. It's original and pretty easy to make in a music program. I recorded this with a crappy mic so don't expect top quality

>> No.12753850

>>12753790
That's one way to put it.

>> No.12753907

>>12753734
That's a pretty good start
I'd personally recommend that book

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>>12753652

While that's technically true due to the nature of permutations growing fast (eg technically there's 2^11 eg 2048 since there are 11 genes that affect appearance (for 12 in total since I have one that affects libido and vag size and stuff) there's a bit of over-counting going on since there's only 6 hair colours, not 2^5 (32) since certain combinations of hair genes express the same way.

I guess really there's 8*6*3 = 144 different ways to combine hair/eye/skin colours, but a lot won't be possible, or would only be possible with very controlled loli breeding. Which might add a fun dimension of gameplay to try to breed a blonde hawaiian or something. I kind of want to make it possible to breed lolis together so that I don't have to make shotas... but part of me feels that would break immersion. Or maybe invite other pedos to come over and impregnate your lolis for breeding purposes.
For this image I set every gene to have a 0.5 probability to be dominant vs recessive, so everything would have a uniform distribution.

Welp. I guess that's what happens when the red hair gene has a 50% probability. Maybe I should make it only get expressed when there's a low number of dark pigment genes. It is recessive though so I guess it shouldn't matter, so it only shows up when you give everyone a 50% chance of having it...

Oops. Looks like I was setting the expressed DNA to be uniformly random. I'll try setting the parents DNA to be uniformly random and see if that reduces the amount of redheads (since recessive gene).

>> No.12754006

>>12753985
>affects libido and vag size and stuff
Why do you have useless stats that affect something you can't even see?

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Alright well that certainly made it slightly better, and also cut down massively on the amount of light haired and light skinned people too since it takes recessive genes into account now.'

But considering that the only gene pools I have that have anything below 1.0 as the dominant probability for the melanocortin-1 gene (red hair) are Nordic, Caucasian, and Mediterranean so you'd have to have both parents from one of those groups to have red hair.

>>12754006

It affects your interactions with the girls. The vaginal size will affect if you hurt her (or if it's even possible to have) during intercourse.

Depending on what kind of sick fuck you are you might want to tear her pussy apart with your dick and leave her bleeding, or you might want to pay heed to that stat and avoid fucking ones with tiny pussies.

Or breed some lolis until you have a loli with the highest possible vag size and highest libido to get the ultimate nympho loli.

>> No.12754043

>>12751449
I like how the cop car is just slowly moving in the top right corner.

It's like he knows what you're doing, but is a pedo himself, so he's conflicted as to whether or not he should hop out and arrest you.

>> No.12754082

>>12752497
What kind of FPS do you get out of this? The gifs seem a bit jittery, maybe that's just the way you record?

>> No.12754089 [DELETED] 

>>12737685
You really need to draw a pic of her being cummed on. She's super cute.

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>>12754082

I have it capped but last time I checked I get about 1000fps if I uncap it.

I am recording at a lower framerate so it fits on 4chan though. (or it's possible I recorded it in debug mode - I get sub-30FPS if I run in debug mode with everything having debug symbols.) Also, even if I record at a high fps it seems to come out as worse than it looks when I'm recording it framerate-wise. Even when I record at the same framerate the game is running at...

>>12754043

It's actually a bug. But here, have a cop car that just does a U-turn when he sees you with a loli. Kidnapping a cute Italian girl with golden hair named Alice Costa from her room!

What ethnicities would you kidnap, /jp/? Would you try to get 1 of each? Maybe have themed rooms in your rape dungeon for each kind!

>> No.12754341

>>12753848
While I like Dire Dire Docks, a game with only this kind of music would be boring, something more synth-heavy could be present every now and then. Not the dev here.

>> No.12754358

>>12754134
>Would you try to get 1 of each?
No black or latinas to me, anon. Maybe an exotic Indian basement, but mostly caucasian.
Slavs and Japs would be for breeding.

>> No.12754404

>>12754089
>>12737836
She wasn't exactly meant to look sexy...

>> No.12754437

>>12753252
Ironically, because another anon suggested we do it for C87. Don't worry about it, though. At this pace, we'll probably keep going 'till after C87, so you can catch up.

>> No.12754490

>>12754404
Yea well she does and we want more.

>> No.12754491

>>12754404
Give her a dick next time man

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>>12754358

What about a tropical islander girl? Second from the right.

Make her wear a hula skirt! Hawaiian loli sex slave!

>> No.12754533

>>12754518
Will I be able to build a loli mansion with many slaves?
I want the dungeon to be for punishment only.

Also, I'm not sure if it has been asked already, but how will the game play out? Is it 100% sandbox, or will there be some sort of objective? Maybe stats which improve your rape abilities and what equipment you can use/acquire?

>> No.12754564 [DELETED] 

>>12753734
>Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain
Recent studies have debunked the whole right/left side of the brain arguments of the 80s. They've found out that both sides of the brain do a little bit of both. That book is new age garbage. If you're serious about learning how to draw then torrent Vilppu.

>> No.12754690

>>12753848

someone on /vg/ made a song for me once, this person https://soundcloud.com/happy-eighth-note and the song http://a.pomf.se/wxhdxr.mp3

I kind of like it so I may use it to influence the rest of the music but I'm not very good at making music.

>> No.12754709

>>12754564
That's interesting. did they formulated new theories on the reason on the two emispheres and cross-neural system? is actually just matter of integration due to the asymmetrical nature of mammal organ setup?

>> No.12754712

>>12754690
>someone made a song for me once
I don't think there's much people that can say this.

>> No.12754717 [DELETED] 
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>>12754533

Right now it's all in the basement. But you can dress the rooms up if you want.

When I actually work on the basement expansion stuff I'll also make the cell doors configurable and stuff so you can make it less jaily.

>> No.12754741

>>12754717
That's good enough for me.
Is that blood?

>> No.12754744 [DELETED] 
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12754744

You're surrounded by a bunch of tropical lolis in hula skirts and their queen comes up to talk to you.

What do you do, /jp/?

Their island doesn't seem to have any males right now. Maybe she wants to mate to preserve their tribe. She's a bit young though, 8 years old, but might as well start early, right? The island is in jeopardy!

>> No.12754746

>>12754744
Begin the ceremony!

>> No.12754750 [DELETED] 

>>12754746

You would have sex with a 8 year old queen of a tropical island? What about with the rest of the villagers? They're all 4-10 years old!

>>12754741

Yeah, it is. Please don't mistreat your lolis like that, /jp/!

>> No.12754814

>>12754744
Rape the queen in front of the citizens as a display for my dominance.

>> No.12754909 [DELETED] 
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>>12754814

You like raping 8 year old girls in public? Do you fill their tiny undeveloped wombs full of your hot pedophile cum too? What about the rest of the villagers, will you rape them too? Even the 6 year olds or 4 year olds?

Think about the tropical kindergarteners, /jp/!

Look at them! Would you really do such a thing?! You should not rape them then leave them with your cum overflowing out of their prepubescent vaginas and dripping down their smooth, tan legs!

>> No.12755030

>>12740880
I can help with music, but I don't know if it would be comfy enough.

As for a "gimick" I've learned the hard way that you should design it into the game at the beginning. I had to basically re-code half my game once I figured my shit out and it made me sad and angry to have to do that.

>> No.12755047

>>12755030
Here's something I whipped up. I think the leads reverb give a nice underwater feel, but the kick and the snare don't really fit well. I would have to work on those a bit.

http://a.pomf.se/mtzphp.mp3

>> No.12755115

>>12755047
that sounds kawaii as fuck nigga

>> No.12755118 [DELETED] 

Draw request. The cyclops in the OP's picture being sexually bullied in some way. Thanks.
>>12737685

>> No.12755138 [DELETED] 

>>12754717
Is that a dungeon. Dude you are a sick fuck. Keep it coming.

>> No.12755159

>>12754744
Reminds me of a doujin

>> No.12755164

>>12755118
Can't request this enough. I'm going to fap to her and cum on her later tonight.

>> No.12755189 [DELETED] 
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>>12755159

Is it the one where they sacrifice him after he has sex with the entire village?

Or do they send him to the moon?

There's probably several ero-manga that you could be thinking about though.

>>12755164

Try not to get any in her eye!

>>12755138

Well it doesn't have to be a dungeon. But it is in the player's basement.

Here's a really old gif of dungeon placement before I stopped working on it. I'll work on it again later on! The other image was just a mockup using the sprites I've made.

>> No.12755225

>>12755189
Don't worry, it's going all in her mouth and on those bangs

>> No.12755241 [DELETED] 

>>12755225

Why not in her fertile womb? That way you could have loli cyclops daughters and then have a threesome with them and your wife!

>> No.12755258
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12755258

i'll take some requests
not doing anything with op's cyclops

>> No.12755266

>>12755241
Nah, I just want to cum on a cyclops man.

>>12755258
:(

>> No.12755274 [DELETED] 

>>12755258
boo bitch.

>> No.12755311

>>12755258
What about for our own original the characters?

>> No.12755324
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>>12755266
cyclops man :)
>>12755311
whose characters? i don't understand

>> No.12755326 [DELETED] 
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>>12755258
>>12755324

Can you make a lewd drawing of this cute little girl?

>> No.12755334

>>12755324
nevermind

>> No.12755336

>>12755324
I-I literally didn't mean a cyclops man...

>> No.12755350 [DELETED] 

>>12755266
>>12755324
>>12755336
>Nah, I just want to cum on a cyclops man.
>I-I literally didn't mean a cyclops man...
I laughed out loud for some reason. Also, we still need a drawing of the OP's cyclops getting bullied. Surely there's a drawfriend among us who's up for the task.

>> No.12755367

>>12755350
>Surely there's a drawfriend among us who's up for the task.
2young2lewd

>> No.12755401

>>12755350
I hope there's lots of drawfriends up to the task...

>> No.12755418 [SPOILER] 
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>>12755274

>>12755336
i'm sorry i take any opportunity i can to draw men

>> No.12755422

>>12755418
>i take any opportunity i can to draw men
Are you a gay?

>> No.12755434

>>12755324
that's more of a cyclops boy

>> No.12755448

>>12755326
>>12755189
Not really lewd.
But I made this drawing about your game anon.

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12755456

>>12755448
Welp, forgot the image.

>> No.12755484

>>12755456
Not him, but looks perfect for a promotional poster or some shit

>> No.12755529

>>12754564
Don't be stupid, /ic/, the book is not about brain hemispheres, but about perception and symbol drawing, whatever part of your brain you may use. The author states she's no neuroscientist and just took the hemisphere concept as a starting point.

>> No.12755530
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I fixed the enemy script by rewriting it. Perhaps they attack too fast.

>> No.12755548

>>12755530
that's terrifying

>> No.12755552

>>12755530
Make it a dolphin and his attack takes you into its rape cave

>> No.12755553

>>12755530
Creepy. Fortunately this is just a double, and our squid boy is safe and sound watching from behind.

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>>12755326
she probably looks too old or the guy is too small
>>12755422
bisexual
>>12755530
cool and scary

>> No.12755592

>>12755578
>bisexual
Lucky you, twice as much lewd to enjoy

>> No.12755622 [DELETED] 

>>12755578
I always say this but you're not truly bisexual until you've actually experimented with a member of the same gender and enjoyed it. I've experimented in my younger years and I didn't enjoy it so I'm now 100% straight. Dicks are not fun.

>> No.12755625
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12755625

super saiyan ryuko and senkets about to be kill la kill'd (for real)

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>>12755622
Pic related. This is how I felt when I experienced a dick.

>> No.12755759

>>12755622
>>12755752
Please talk about this elsewhere.

>> No.12755905 [DELETED] 

>>12744471
>>12755189
Do you guys plan on releasing your source code?

>> No.12756023 [DELETED] 

I agree with most of what is said in this video.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hhx6IfKrvEQ

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>>12756023

So he's upset that sometimes you might not find exactly what you're looking for and sometimes find something you've never seen before?

He's exactly the kind of person Rose and Campbell were talking about at the end of MGS2, morons stuck in these bubbles that never come into contact with other societies and you end up with a civilization where everyone is happy being wrong and in their own clique. If he seriously cared about efficiency he'd just google image search every image he wants forever and cut out the inefficiency of needing a tumblr account. or even use gelbooru/sankaku's image hosting. What a liar.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eKl6WjfDqYA
>>12755905
My code doesn't seem like anything special but if someone wanted some of it I could put it in a pastebin.

>> No.12756112

>>12738636
Agreed. Some hair thing, apart from that everything' fine tho

>> No.12756130

>>12738608

wait, do you have a pixiv/blog?

>> No.12756133 [DELETED] 

>>12756085
I posted that in the wrong thread so I deleted it.

>> No.12756281

>>12755350
Make a vid of you cumming on OP's pic please?

>> No.12756430

>>12755456
Woah, did you actually just draw that? How long did that take?

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(Inception Noise)

Trying to learn how to better control the camera through making other scripts direct it.

I'll stop spamming webms in the thread. sorry.

>> No.12756723

>>12756697
The thread's hit its limit and isn't full of images. Post more webms.

>> No.12756874
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12756874

Anyone want to help and do the background art for a short animation?

There are 4 backgrounds needed. They are a cluttered room, an outdoor wooded area, 2 backgrounds in another room from different angles with a computer, and an alley way.

>> No.12756924

I don't know if its fault of the loli game faggot, but these threads have become a ball of shit.

>> No.12756929

>>12756874
You know, you could just borrow a background from a random CG set on Exhentai. There are plenty of backgrounds.

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>>12756929
Hmm... I could do that for the out door scene, but all the in door scenes and the alley all have very specific angles to fit with the animations.

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>>12756990
I think that's about it for this scene placeholder image.

>> No.12757090
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12757090

I liked cheerleader.

>> No.12757139

>>12757090

That cheerleader looks like she's packing heat.

>> No.12757169

>>12757090
Everything you draw looks so soft and warm. I feel happy looking at them.

Thank you.

>> No.12757178 [DELETED] 

A wise game developer once said to me that in the year 2014 all 2D games should be coded in HTML5. What's your excuse for not using it? Canvas has really developed to a point where you can do a lot of great things with it. The accessibility of Canvas is undeniably convenient. There's no need for your users to download a shady executable file and run it. With Canvas, you essentially just point users to a web page and they can play your game.

>> No.12757184 [DELETED] 

>>12756924
A thing that I've noticed over the years is that people who are open about their pedophilia tend to have the social skills of a wild monkey. They say some of the weirdest nonsense on 4chan. That loli game will attract a lot of them.

>> No.12757187

>>12757178
As a player, I prefer to download my shit, so I'm fine with non-HTML5.
That is, regarding serious games. For some little time killing I'm fine with browsers.

>> No.12757190

>>12757184
You seem to be under the impression that loli is some kind of fringe interest, here.

>> No.12757198 [DELETED] 

>>12757190
Well there's a difference between people who like loli for its art style and the people who fantasize over locking lolis up in basements. And again, we also must make the distinction between 2D loli and real little girls. That game will attract all forms of lolicons and pedophiles. The latter being some of the most anti social people on 4chan. I'm happy for the guy who's making the game but he has to realize who his audience is going to be. The only audience that is worse is the people who are into furrie stuff. Luckily none of us is making a furry game.

>> No.12757206

>>12757198

The game can move to /vg/ if it becomes a problem.

>> No.12757258

>>12757206
Its a problem already, and he came from /vg/ because they wanted him off. the author should make a blog about it and stop pestering people with his goosebumps inducing irony, or whatever it is. because no real lolicon would ever think a game focused on ludicizing the society demonization of pedophilia, with kidnapping, fucking and killing kids is anything but cringeworthy
>inb4 lolicons aren't normal functioning humans
they are, as guro fans, scat lovers and whoever have exotic fictional sexual fantasies and don't act like if its some sort of social quirk but something private to keep for themselves

>> No.12757269

>>12757258

I think fiction can be just fiction.

>> No.12757274

>>12757198
>>12757258
Loli is life

A mockup of the animation
http://a.pomf.se/ykuqyy.webm

>> No.12757310 [DELETED] 

>>12757258
The only people who are worse than the people you've described are the social justice warriors who bitch about them. I've yet to see the annoying pedophiles in any of the OC threads. If it becomes a problem then we can start having that discussion but until then we should kindly shut our faces.

>> No.12757341 [DELETED] 

The author of that loli game is definitely a polarizing figure, you can tell this just by the way he responds to certain questions. I don't know if this is a result of a personality disorder or if he's just a victim of 4chan's barbarian (echo chamber) culture. This is surprising to me seeing how good his Enterprise sepples code is. I just hope he doesn't think shock value alone will make his game successful. I'm personally bored with 4chan's culture of memes, randomness, and rudeness. If anything I'll be less likely to play a game that contains anything 4chan related. The project should remain on /jp/ though. Aside from this current conversation I've yet to see anything bad come from his game being in these OC threads. If one of us was developing a furry game then I'd only request the developer to leave if furries started yiffing up our threads.

>> No.12757350
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>>12757274
Sorry but this was bothering me

>> No.12757355

Guys, if you don't like the rape simulator, post your own OC and comment in other stuff being posted, it's not like we have limited slots for it.

I'm not interested in the game itself, but I'm always looking it evolve, how the pivot-following cars move, how the attention to map generation and genetic randomizer is put. It's so detailed it's funny, in a good way. An interesting project just like the jellyfish dude, except there is something "amoral" going on. We should be the last people to judge others' tastes, the entire board is about fucking 2hus and the like.

He was away for several threads and people would still post lewd loli drawings and describe their fantasies.

>>12757341
Kindly seconded.

>> No.12757366 [DELETED] 

>>12757350
If that's not supposed to be Hinata then she certainly looks a lot like her.

>>12757190
I don't think loli is a binary thing. It's more like a spectrum. On one side of the spectrum you have people who like loli for its cute art style and on the other you have people who want to lock lolis in basements. From what I've seen thus far the developer is building a game that caters to both types of lolicons. And if it doesn't, I'm putting in a request that you have the option to love your lolis tenderly.

>> No.12757398

Well, whatever then. if you force yourselves so hard into seeing something worthwhile into columbine simulator 2, then probably there's nothing left to salvage anyway.

>> No.12757410

>>12738608
there seems to be some awkward negative space underneath her umbrella to the left and above the bag. could try raising her right hand a bit higher to make the sleeves sway to fill in the space.

>> No.12757411

>>12757398
/jp/'s essence is indifference. As long as that fellow doesn't cause a ruckus, there's no need to get riled up about him. Take it easy.

I'd have preferred if he did the loli plant thing instead, though.

>> No.12757415

>>12738754
make her a bit more serious to accentuate the armor's presence

>> No.12757418

>>12757366

I've never distinguished loli from other pornography.

>I'm putting in a request that you have the option to love your lolis tenderly.

I considered asking that before.

>> No.12757419

I wish there was some kind of futuristic device you could hook up to your brain for the purpose of recording dreams

goddamn I dreamed up some really cool shit but now some of the details are fuzzy

>> No.12757421

>>12757419

I had a meta dream last night, where the solution to the "unescapable" problem situation in the dream was waking up in reality.

>> No.12757460
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>>12757421
My dream involved two princesses of space and time who tried to capture people inside their castle. The captives eventually found a way out since the princesses were easily distracted. Eventually the Dream World Gurus (three beings who looked like stuffed animals including one who looked like a shiny Audino) tried to challenge the princesses because the Gurus didn't approve of them capturing humans.

By the end of the dream the princesses had massacred several challengers until Choronzon (pic related) showed up and was about to go apeshit from smelling all the blood and guts strewn everywhere. Also, Propane Nightmares was playing in the background

>> No.12757473

How comes that the people with some skill in art or music never accomplish anything and the ones that can't do shit start and develop projects to a significant degree?

>> No.12757474

>>12757350
I don't think you guys understand how happy it makes me that this community, out of their own volition, points out things like this to help me become better.

I love you guys.

>> No.12757506

>>12757474
You're making me regret that. I'm not advancing in anything while you keep going with your games.
why should I want to help you? consider it just a compulsory thing

>> No.12757513

>>12756430
A couple o hours, why?

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>>12757473
>How comes that the people with some skill in art or music never accomplish anything and the ones that can't do shit start and develop projects to a significant degree?
That's because the shitty artist tend to have backgrounds in coding. The ability to program is a significant skill to have to complete a project.

Of course the most important skill will always be charisma. If someone has enough charisma they can attract all the skill sets needed to bring a project to fruition. A charismatic person like Steve Jobs could have lost his fortune a thousand times and would have found a way to get it back each time. He wasn't smart in a traditional sense but knew how to assemble a group of people much smarter than himself. And he would use these people like tools. I've never seen a charismatic leader on 4chan so I doubt we'll ever have group projects that goes anywhere. With that said it will be up to the individual to do all the work by themselves. Very few people have the ability to code, design, draw, write and compose music. I'll always be a fan of guys like ZUN and Pixel who made entire games from scratch by themselves.

>> No.12757528

>>12757473
Fear of failure.

>> No.12757554

>>12757473

Might be perfectionism.

I've never really completed anything creative I've started, as I endlessly restart because it is imperfect.

Those that are unskilled either can't see their problems, or don't care, and can shit out endlessly.

>> No.12757558 [DELETED] 

>>12757554
This.

>> No.12757565

>>12757528
That's fucking stupid. starting a complex project without being able to do jack shit is a shortcut to every imaginable fuckup
>>12757523
everything you said after charisma is fried air
>>12757554
That may be true for you, but its planty of people that despite avoiding repetition, never go past step 1anyway

>> No.12757581

>>12757565
>fried air
Not him, but I'm a bit confused as to what this means.

>> No.12757588

>>12757581
void small talk

>> No.12757637

>>12757178
JS is pure shit.
HTML5 runs differently on different browsers
Fuck you, I'm not using that botnet Chrome just to have better running 2D HTML5 games, I'll take flash/unity plugins any day over that piece of crap.

>> No.12757776 [DELETED] 

>>12757637
I'll agree that JS is a questionable language. It is one of the easiest languages to get into yet one of the hardest to master. Callback hell and hoisting are things that even senior programmers are not particularly good at dealing with. It's not that HTML5 runs differently on different browsers, it's that different browsers apply the HTML5 standards in different ways. Chrome's JS engine is superior to all in virtually all benchmarks. The popular language Node.js (server-side JS) is based on Chrome's superior JS engine. These days anybody who is serious about web development has switched to Chrome. And this is not just because of Chrome's superior default development tools. Chrome supports more cutting edge web standards and makes debugging easier. I'm not trying to start a browser war, so I'll say that all browsers are good in their own ways but when it comes to development nothing comes close to Chrome. If you don't already know this about Chrome then I can't take the rest of what you said seriously.

>> No.12757782

>>12757776
>I'm not trying to start a browser war
Yeah you are.

Fuck Chrome, if anything it's the new IE with it's non-standards breaking the web for anyone actually following the standards.

Yeah, it has a good rendering engine, but it's unnoticeable while browsing. Try CTRL+A on this page once and you'll see something worth using another browser for.

>> No.12757788 [DELETED] 

>>12757637
Flash is terrible for SEO and is the #1 cause for browser related crashes and security holes. It is also a dying format. Android and IOS have practically banned it. HTML5 can do pretty much everything Flash can do and is getting better with each year. If you actually read technology blogs most people predict the demise of Flash in the next 2 years. Youtube switching to HTML5 video was the last nail in the coffin for Flash.

https://www.apple.com/hotnews/thoughts-on-flash/

Shortly after Apple wrote this open letter to adobe (basically telling them that their product was shit) Adobe announced that they were no longer supporting Flash on mobile devices. The fact that you would even mention Flash shows your ignorance on the subject of HTML5.

>> No.12757792

>>12757776
Yes Google's V8 engine is great but fuck that.
>mastering JS
No one with sanity would want to master that.

The fact that you rely on HTML5 implementation so your game works well is already all kinds of trouble, at least with a plugin you're guaranteed consistency (even if it's shit).
Shit platform until they find a way to force all major browsers to implement the features in a consistent manner.

>> No.12757799 [DELETED] 

>>12757637
>botnet Chrome
This argument was valid 2 years ago. The folks at Google have released an open source edition of Chrome called Chromium. You guys are so out of touch with technology that you probably should stick to discussing Japanese cartoons.

>> No.12757814
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>>12755592
not really when you're picky
>>12757090
her belly button is too far to the side, probably shouldn't even be visible. still cute as ever though
>>12757473
never have any ideas for actual projects

>> No.12757892

>>12757473
>people with some skill in art or music never accomplish anything
Says who? Maybe you are not SEEING their achievements.

>> No.12757902 [DELETED] 

>>12757861
>her
I have bad news for you. If you look at its package, it's clearly packing heat. If you know what I mean. Vulvas can be puffy but not that puffy. You've fallen into his trap.

>> No.12757913

>>12757902
Don't be silly
Girls have a girl's penis

>> No.12757943

>>12757902
yeah i was just getting sidetracked by boobs. but it doesn't really matter

>> No.12757992

>>12757861
Nice cyclops fuckboy, dude.

>> No.12758006

>>12757861
I wish I could see his dick

>> No.12758059

>>12758006
I wish I could see his anus, I want to open it big like his eyesocket.

>> No.12758113

>>12757506
It still makes me feel tingly inside that you did that for me, thanks.

What are you working on? Maybe myself, or others, would be willing to lend a hand if they have the necessary skills.

>> No.12758194

>>12757902
Huge tits for a boy.
Futa and dickgirls are usually referred to as "her".

>> No.12758205

>>12758059
I think the lewdest thing about fuckboys is showing off their private parts and masturbating casually. active lewdness works better on girls, specially if there's a bit of pee and other cute fluids involved.

>> No.12758259 [DELETED] 

>>12758059
>I wish I could see his anus, I want to open it big like his eyesocket.
I have no problem with homosexuals, but something is wrong with this imageboard when gays can post openly yet lolicons are shunned by the moderators.

>>12758194
That is true but traps are referred to as "him". From that drawing alone we do not know if the artist was intending on it being futanari. All we know is that it's a person who looks like a girl but is hiding balls. Which is a trap to me. A guy dressing like a girl is very different from futanari (a girl who in someway ends up having a penis). Futanari is not considered gay because the person's gender was originally that of a female. I am not a huge faggot so I will never fap to guys dressed like girls (cross dressers). Futanari is not gay though.

>> No.12758277

I still fail to see any cute Cyclops girl art.

>> No.12758281

>>12758259
There is so much wrong implied in this whole post, that I seriously hope its a big joke

>> No.12758289 [DELETED] 

>>12758277
This.

I personally blame the blatant homosexuality in this thread for this. We stopped calling people out on their homosexuality and now they think they run the place.

>> No.12758300

>>12758289
I was also surprised how nobody called out how blatantly tumblrific this >>12755456 is. That's going on with /jp/ these days?

>> No.12758308

>>12758289
Yea I asked for one cute cyclops last night and I got a gay one. Not cool.

>> No.12758324

>>12737685
As a cyclops, why is her eyebrow the left eye brow?

Is there an agreed upon standard as to which (or what) brow to use on a cyclops?

>> No.12758343

Janitor, delete this samefag shit please

>> No.12758347
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12758347

I want to start drawing again after initially giving up

what kind of daily drawing exercises would you guys recommend, should I just churn out drawings to build experience, or does specific practice work better?

Also I want to get a bit more of a serious tablet after my cheap $40 bamboo tablet died, what is a good one in a higher price range?

>> No.12758354

>>12758347
Copy your pic and post the results. Then post another pic, then repeat.

>> No.12758357 [DELETED] 

If you do not discourage certain behavior it will run rampant. For instance, back when I first posted on /a/ many years ago I made a Naruto thread and was universally shunned by the community. I never made another thread about Naruto. Recently /a/ has stopped oppressing Naruto fans and now they run amok on the board. We need to start chasing out the gays like we used to.

Many of you guys probably weren't around long enough to recall the days when furries were in power (or heat as we called it). There was never any hatred for furries on the internet before they yiffed on every topic on 4chan and denied request for human characters. What the gays [>>12755418] have done [>>12755324] in this thread brings back memories of the days when the furries were in power.

tl;dr, we must bully these faggots.

>> No.12758359

>>12758347
I found these links to be useful.

hxxp://brandondayton.com/2013/06/how-to-practice-phase-1-warm-up/

hxxp://brandondayton.com/2013/06/how-to-practice-drawing-phase-2-study/

hxxp://brandondayton.com/2013/06/how-to-practice-drawing-phase-3-application/

>> No.12758366 [DELETED] 

>>12758357
b-but what about 'no bully pls'...?

>> No.12758397

>>12758354

I'm way below the level of the people here, I just wanted to know how the artists here reached the level where they are now

>>12758359
thanks, I will definitely use this

>> No.12758434 [DELETED] 

>>12758357
>chasing the gays
>/jp/
this instantly invalidates
>Many of you guys probably weren't around long enough to recall the days
*slurp*
there's not even need to quote the rest.

tl;dr, stop spitting flashy group behavioral dynamics, no one's going eat your leaf

>> No.12758454

Have a hug in .WAV format.

https://soundcloud.com/girlsick/hello

>> No.12758455
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12758455

Why can't we all just take it easy?

>> No.12758470 [DELETED] 

>>12758259
>I have no problem with homosexuals, but something is wrong with this imageboard when gays can post openly yet lolicons are shunned by the moderators.
i blame the sjw mods moot hired a while back. they're all pro gay/gay themselves, but everyone hates pedos to keep up their public appearances.

>> No.12758493

>>12758455
I can't draw so maybe I'm not the one to talk, but the eyes look kinda different in inclination

>> No.12758629

>>12758454
Pretty nice, but I never have liked those nes style drums.

>> No.12758642 [DELETED] 

>>12758454
>https://soundcloud.com/girlsick/hello
What did you use to make that?

>> No.12758722
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>>12758006
>>12758059
you guys are like vultures
>>12758277
maybe this is okay for you
>>12758347
most important part is to make a routine of drawing. /ic/'s sticky helped me out but some people don't like it.

>>12758289
i'll keep the homo stuff to myself in the future
>>12758308
sorry was just having fun

>> No.12758728

>>12758722
boy ass

>> No.12758737

>>12758722
>>12757861

Nice eyes. I've never been sure how to draw them myself.

>> No.12758741 [DELETED] 

I love it when lazy janitors/mods use their "delete all post in this thread by user" button. He deleted 4 off topic responses and deleted like 12 legitimate on topic responses. Back in my days 4chan's staff was more professional than this. I might take a screencap of this and complain to moot.

Meanwhile, these blatantly NSFW ecchi images remain untouched:
>>12757861
>>12758722

Back in my days the phrase "mods/janitors are fags" was just a figure of speech, now it seems to be literally true. Brb, I'm going to dig through my email for that one email moot actually responded to. If you guys are going to enforce the rules as least do it properly. I hope moot sets you straight for this.

>> No.12758743

>>12758722
I wish I could put my naked dick under her crotch and rub my body aganist her in an extremely vulgar manner, while disgusting EDM plays in the bakground

>> No.12758746

>>12758741
>Brb
orz

>> No.12758757 [DELETED] 

>>12758454
What did you use to make that song?

>> No.12758759
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12758759

And she looks like she has boy shoulders. Goddamnit. I guess I'll go back and edit these two later and continue on with the placehodler images.

>> No.12758762

>>12758324
It's always the eyebrow facing closest to the viewer, switching accordingly.
It's like Nanoha's hair bangs.

>> No.12758770

>>12758762
Eh? That can't be right. Are cyclops like the fantasy equivalent of quantum particles?

>> No.12758806
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>>12758737
eyes are spheres, if you look at a medical diagram it'll help too
>>12758741
how exactly are those two nsfw? all the important stuff is covered
i'm surprised >>12755578 is still up though
>>12758743
nice tastes dude

>> No.12758865

>>12758806
Why is /jp/ safe for work when nobody has a job!?

>> No.12758876

>>12757090
wait a minute that bulge...

>> No.12758929

>>12758865
It's to keep the crossies with jobs safe.

>> No.12759013

>>12758806
>censoring tits
Hello, American.

>> No.12759019

>>12759013
Welcome to an American website.

>> No.12759022

>>12759019
4chan has servers around the world. It's an Earthnese website.

>> No.12759065

>>12758806
What are your brush settings?

>> No.12759119
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>>12759013
http://i.imgur.com/bnXnumm.png

>> No.12759126
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>>12759065
usually resize the whole image by 75% or so

>> No.12759158

>>12741143
I guess no one showed up for background artist, but if anyone's interested in being the composer, send a mail to jaypeevnproject@gmail.com . I'll provide the prologue draft for those who are interested. It'd help to show one or two songs you've made, too.

>> No.12759163

>>12759158
Can I be the idea guy?

>> No.12759176 [DELETED] 

>>12759158
I have an idea for an epic VN. I'm going to need a programmer, writer, artist, background artist, musician, and designer. My job in the project will be directing the team towards my vision.

>> No.12759185 [DELETED] 

>>12759119
Fix her face dog. She looks chinkey and boyish.

>> No.12759189

>>12759185
He makes the boys pretty and the girls handsome, it's his style.

>> No.12759213

>>12759158
What kind of genre are you looking for? Any particular style/sound?

>> No.12759217

>>12759185
i was hoping for western mature and womanly
too lazy to fix it anyways
>>12759189
it's weird that i've never been told the girls i draw look handsome until recently. don't know how to fix it besides big kawaii eyes and small lower faces

>> No.12759226

>>12759217
>big kawaii eyes and small lower faces
Do it.

Also, they look very sharp, which lends more masculinity. Use more curves and less straight. Softer lines might also help.

>> No.12759234

>>12759158
How big do you think the project will be? I'm interested in composing for it.

I've posted in this thread before - >>12739370

You can check my other songs on that soundcloud as well.

>> No.12759250

>>12759226
aw but that feels like a copout. i only go for that when i'm fucking around anyways
i used to draw sharper. i'll keep the curves thing in mind though

>> No.12759262

>>12759158
You can use my music, if you find any that are useful. Since this is a VN, I assume you might need loops, so probably these may be useful https://soundcloud.com/vapor-hands/sets/loops-in-cobblespan.. Still, feel free to look around my other tracks.

I could also make edited version of them for you if you need them. A full composition though... I don't think I'll have that much free time to spare. At most I could probably do 1-2 tracks.

>> No.12759283

>>12759176
There's a writer, a programmer, and a sprite artist. All that is left is a background artist and a composer, and I could very well use a bunch of free tracks, but that wouldn't be very interesting.

>> No.12759294

>>12759213
I can't really think of an actual specific style, but it would be mostly tranquil and serene songs. Once in a while, more intense ones for the rare action sequences, but nothing that would go beyond that. As a reference, think of Yume Miru Kusuri's OST. Or Kitto, Sumiwataru Asairo Yori mo would be something closer, although not necessarily with the japanese touch. You can just throw these names on youtube and some tracks should pop up.

>>12759262
I'll take a look, and if necessary I'll ask. Thanks, anon.

>>12759234
I'll also give it a check.

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>>12751671

>Have withstood pain to trace many cute girls
>Yet, those hands will never produce an original

So as I pray, unlimited traced works.

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>>12758806

I tried practicing an eye by turning my jellyfish into a girl.

>> No.12759787
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12759787

My birthday is tomorrow. Please draw these OCs being lewd together. Keep in mind Aiwass-kun is supposed to be muscular underneath all those clothes, and Alice's profile was drawn roughly a year ago & I desperately need to draw a new one

>> No.12759802

>>12759787
I don't care about you or your birthday, dude.

>> No.12759804

>>12759802
No bullying on the jay

>> No.12759860

>>12759787
He's almost double her height so if alice was 5 ft he's about 8-9 ft tall in that comparison.

>> No.12759873

>>12759860
The picture is not meant to be an accurate scale, anon, just references

>> No.12759985

>>12758757
Just guitar pro for sequencing. I run the exported MIDI through GXSCC for no-effort chiptunes.

>>12758629
I will keep this in mind.

>> No.12760070

>>12759787
I'll draw you a lewd tomorrow
maybe

>> No.12760104

>>12759985
That explains why it sounds terrible. Go download the ReNoise demo and try sequencing in that, you can draw all your own waves and it comes stock with a bunch of ok sounding chip instruments.

>> No.12760182

>>12760104
Funny, I was playing around with renoise and then came back to see your comment. I'll keep at it then.

By the way, what in particular sounds terrible? Thanks for all the help.

>> No.12760201

>>12760182
Because you're bit crushing instead of making the correct synth for the job.

Upload the MIDI file and I'll show you, I'm not good with wording music terms.

>> No.12760230

>>12760201
Here.

https://mega.co.nz/#!kRBFQAbR!WQx5eqiGNorSNFkgL9Qpvy_9AW3n5Z23W1cHRN9DPjA

>> No.12760308

>>12759434
Ha! I wouldn't make her blonde, but nice one! The ear is too hollow, add more features (getting more realistic) or make it chubbier (cartoonier) so the lack of details won't make it look like megaman's helmet.

>>12759787
Yeah, keep hiding your hands.

>> No.12760414

>>12760230
http://a.pomf.se/kwgeew.mp3
About 5 minutes of work with some stock instruments. I went a little over board on the panning, but I think this is closer to chip than the bitcrushed stuff.

The file
pomf.se/wledni.xrns

To really get it sounding right I would have to take some different samples from my gameboy to get each inst sounding unique, but you get the idea.

>> No.12760414,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>12758434
Forced IRC memes.
Epic.

>> No.12760450

>>12759434
i dig those arms
the highlight on the eye white should be higher considering the light source

>> No.12760452

>>12760414
Oh, I see. I'll try doing that, thanks!

>> No.12760462

>>12757565
>starting a complex project without being able to do jack shit is a shortcut to every imaginable fuckup
That's the point they aren't aware of what failures might happen and they don't really compare themselves to people with higher skill thus it will make them less anxious

>> No.12760472

>>12760462
So this basically means that developing any skill is completely pointless except you're okay with just executing orders of someone else, since all your spirit of initiative is eaten by the short term objective of finishing a drawing or song?

>> No.12760480

>>12760472
Umm, I don't get it.
I'm just saying that people who studies more formally will tend to have feelings of inferiority and thus will be less confident in moving forward since they feel that they are not worthy yet.

>> No.12760489

>>12760480
Exactly. to accomplish something you have to avoid proper preparation.
that also explains why most successful people do things when they're very young. missing experience means not knowing and fearing what may happen

so basically, to win I need a lobotomy

>> No.12760697

>>12760489
Or you can just stand up and not lose to yourself or some phantom fears. That is the really tricky part, though.

>> No.12760914

>>12760697
yeah no, you don't gey it. basically, I'm looking at the credits roll of my life. I lost already, to win I have to reset

>> No.12760964

>>12760914
Yeah, you lost. To yourself. No one else is making excuses for you, it's all you mate.

Don't feel bad though, for most people, their own self is an insurmountable opponent. It's just part of being a normal person, s'all.

>> No.12761008

>>12760489
That's just one of those insidious quips that have just enough of a ring of truth about them to worm their way into your mind whilst being false. People have done things from the dawn till dusk of their lives and have started from all sorts of points in time. It's an issue of focus, not of assuredness in your success.

>> No.12761019

>>12760964
But I'm not a normal person, that's the funny part. and I feel bad, so bad I would kill every single one of you. so basically, I'm full of bugs and I need a reset, so things can go smoothly and I can have the success that should be mine according to the data contained inside.
>>12761008
yeh buts its too late now, every input I receive only leads to bigging dack more damaging rememories
the absurdeness of
success is that I need to win be cause I didn't wannnnt to

>> No.12761024

>>12761019
>and I can have the success that should be mine
Oh shut up you big fucking baby. Do something because you love doing it.

>> No.12761037

>>12761024 id="m12761024"><a href=
I love nothing, basically nothing there is that love

>> No.12761055

>>12761019
make something out of those edgy feelings man

>> No.12761066

>>12761019
Yeah, totally a normalfag, even the drama queen routine is spot on. O woe is you, edgelord highness.

Listen, only the truly abnormal people can surpass the fear, worries, bad thought, and whatever else bullshit their own mind tells them to stop them from advancing. If you can't do that, if you can't grab your own self, beat it into a pulp, stare it in the eye and say "I can do it", then you're just a normalfaglet. Because that's what normies do; they lose to their fears. They put their safety, their comfort zone first. Only the really abnormal people can escape such horrible fate.

>> No.12761082
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12761082

Musicians of /jp/, any free guitar VSTs you might recommend?
I'm also having a hard time to emulate that whole "fingering the chords" timing (random ex: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cSTQriaHo84 ).
How would that work in a DAW timeline, what is the metric of this?

>>12760489
> to accomplish something you have to avoid proper preparation
Maybe you don't get it because you don't fit this type of person. Once you know all the rules you have to learn but hasn't mastered them yet, you see how utter shit you really are. A person without any knowledge will just think "man, my drawings are pretty kawaii, lemme make a comic".
There can be in fact a "lack of confidence valley" throughout one's career, you start more or less confident, reach the deep pit of self-depreciation and, once you get truly skilled, you get out of this pit and get confident again.

But that is not true for everyone, mind you. Many will keep a comfortable level of confidence through their mediocrity, many will be self-pitying from the start. So the theory of that anon is partially incorrect.

>> No.12761090

>>12761082
Why not just use a real guitar?

>> No.12761095

>>12761090
Shitty mic, I don't play string instruments, just some keys and flute. Also to learn the theory behind all that random plucking.

>> No.12761133

>>12761095
Ah, I see. It's a very valuable skill to learn though, especially if you're going for a rock based sound. If you do learn, any stereo jack to USB cable should do fine. It'll record your guitar line-in and then you just run it through an amp modeling software. It's what I do.

I'm not knowledgeable in guitar VSTs but I do know they usually sound super artificial.

>> No.12761282

>>12761095
I thought guitar was one of the easiest instruments to learn

>> No.12761291

>>12761282
Only if you want to play chords.

>> No.12761747
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>>12758770
The 2D realm is not based on euclidean geometry. Objects are highly perspective-dependent.
Consider side-mouths or chins viewed from below.

You could say they live in r'lyeh

>>12758806
>eyes are spheres
Sometimes

>> No.12761833

>>12761037
Every time I look at my game I nearly put one of my guns in my mouth, but I know from previous experience that most turds can be polished enough to be passable. There will be at least one person who finds enjoyment from what you finish.

Case and point, this "noise" artist has 2500 people following him. I think it's absolute shit, but quite a bit of people out there love it.
soundcloud.com/osaka-noise-ensemble

There is no love for people like us. Get over it and do something about it.

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>> No.12762106

>>12762099
happy Usuka day Elemile aka otaku from Perfect Blue.

>> No.12762108

>>12762099
whoa, nice usaka dude

>> No.12762165 [DELETED] 

I can't believe I spent another full day doing almost nothing except fucking around 4chan. jeez

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I had to go earn money so I could eat today, so not much happened on my end. Time to eat some pills and pass out.

>> No.12762254 [DELETED] 

>>12762165
We will never escape this plane of torment

>> No.12762255 [DELETED] 

>>12762165
add 4chan to your host files and be productive.

>> No.12762401
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>>12762194
At least you got a job

>> No.12762451

>>12761833
You know, that actually makes me want to get off my ass and work. Thanks Anon. Keep on fightin the good fight.

>> No.12762923

>>12762401
What the HELL is that thing

>> No.12762956

>>12761133
Note that if you don't have a decent rig, the noise ratio will be off the wall if you do this. Also oh god the processing power

>>12761291
Hahahaha

Listen to some Joe Pass and try saying that again

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I wonder if that crinkles guy is around or will come back. He mentioned people being allowed to use his music and there is this one song of his called Sunken palace. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=65nBLhctZXo

I always thought his music if anything would be most fitting.

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>> No.12763659

>>12762956
What the fuck are you using Windows 95?

>> No.12763733

>>12763659
pls no bullying poor folks

>> No.12763817

>>12763328
Yep I'm still here

My newer tracks are definitely better production wise, though they might not fit what you are looking for. If you are happy with my older stuff then feel free to use it

>> No.12764162

>>12760070
please ;_;

>> No.12764165

>>12764162
Unhappy birthday, faggot.

>> No.12764177

>>12764165
S-stop bullying

>> No.12764285

>>12762401
I just bag leaves during this season. It's actually pretty comfy, listening to music while blowing and bagging leaves by yourself in some giant yard. The only downside is it's hard work, but I charge by the bag. I got 60, 50 gallon, bags filled yesterday.

>> No.12764309
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12764309

Do you like whales?

>> No.12764408

>>12764309
No. Fuck whales. I can't get far ahead on my cute girls mobages because of fucking whales.

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>>12764408

Oh.

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Quantity over quality? I'm so lost.

>>12764444
That's scary

>> No.12764459

>>12764444
is that supposed to be creepy

>> No.12764468

>>12764454
It is? I was expecting weird but not scary.

>>12764459
Is it? I've never been very good at drawing cute things and every time I try it ends up looking creepy. I guess that just means the deep sea area will be even weirder.

>> No.12764475

>>12764468
Scary because I would think he is out to eat me. I would steer clear of his mouth if I was playing for the first time and didn't know if he would agro me or not.

My suggestion, make it obvious that he's a gentle giant (example, audio "Hello friend"), or make him an insane boss level.

>> No.12764481

>>12764475

He is one of the few creatures you can talk to and it is alluded to beforehand.

>> No.12764488

>>12764481
Try to give him a gentler-looking eye. Maybe a bit rounder?

>> No.12764498

>>12764481
In that case, I love his design.

>> No.12764514

>>12764468
I think it's very cool! It's also very scary, but so are every other gigantic aquatic lifeforms. It's a majestic kind of scary, stemming naturally from its colossal size and habitat more than because of how it was drawn.

>> No.12764525
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>>12764309
Only 2D ones

>> No.12764606

can't this thread die faster? I want to attentionwhore my OC already

>> No.12764637

>>12764606
I swear I'll be the first one to say that is shit. are you happy friend?

>> No.12764746

>>12764637
y-yes...!

>> No.12764797

>>12764606
Post it, faggot

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It's almost starting to look like a real game.

>> No.12764858

>>12764454
You got neither (lmfao)

>> No.12764882

>>12764525
I'm still happy that Moby Dick is a Phantasmal Beast in the Nasuverse.

Best character in the novel, Ahab is a close second.

>> No.12764893

>>12764797
not enough people looking at this thread, sorry!!!

>> No.12765019

>>12764893
Then make a new thread, nerd

>> No.12765061

>>12765019
but i don't want people to think i'm an attention whore or anything like that...

>> No.12765070

>>12765061
but you are. you know it to be true.

>> No.12765083

>>12765061
too late, everyone knows now

>> No.12765322

>>12764882
That was a pretty cool book.

>> No.12765967

How the fuck is this thread still here?

>> No.12766033

Just to hit 450.
here. congrats thread, you got 450 hits.

>> No.12766035

>>12765967
Yeah, we're in page 10 for over 48 hours now.

I hope /jp/kun won't take a week to create a new one, I have no OC to make a cover for the next one.

>> No.12766050

>>12766035
Maybe something happened to the autodelete function, since 4chan broke while thread was in autosage?

>> No.12766067

>>12766050
Spoopy. But no. There are two thread besides this one. Once they're gone, we're next.

>> No.12766075

>>12766067
Hold me, I'm cold ;_;

>> No.12766076

>>12763328
http://crinklesmusic.com/jp/

I grabbed some of my other tracks that I felt are similar to sunken palace, so feel free to use any

>> No.12766086

>>12766067
So its really over eh?
see you in hell, mothercuter

>> No.12766118

>>12766067
>>12766075
>>12766086
See you in the next thread, anons.

>> No.12766151

>>12761082
yet to find an actual decent free guitar vst.

if you're willing to save up,
orange tree evolution acoustics is alright

>> No.12766171

>>12766151
I pirated RealGuitar, it's pretty neat!

And I also found the name for the chord playing, it's "strumming", so now I can find some tutorials on YouTube and figure out how it translates into metrics.

>> No.12766195
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12766195

>>12764858
Not yet, no. But I will continue to grind my way forward.

>> No.12766210

>>12766195
Looks like a KA trace, take it as you want it.

>> No.12766225

>>12766210
uhmu, Kalina Ann?

>> No.12766242

>>12766225
I think he meant KyoAni

>> No.12766259
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12766259

>>12766210
It is. These snippets are being used as background fodder, so I'm not caring much about them.

Here's a single frame as it's being used in the video. You can barely tell what it is, so I figured fuck it, crappily trace some stuff and move on to the meat and potatoes.

>> No.12766274

>>12766259
???????

>> No.12766276

>>12766195
Is that Kanie?

>> No.12766359

>>12766276
Kanie West?
WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU FAGGOTS TALKING ABOUT HOLY SHIT

>> No.12766427

>>12766359
Kanie West is a famous rapper!

He's also a crab!

>> No.12766538

Sayonara, jay pee

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