/jp/ - Otaku Culture

I just tried to google "anorexic girls" to learn anatomy. Big mistake. These 3D pig disgusting attention-whores look like holocaust survivors. My eyes have been burned. I'm going back to drawing my Japanese kid cartoons.

>>12314747
I glimpsed through htat FPS and it looks pretty generic. I don't even see a gimmick or selling point. Perhaps I'm missing something.

another thread, another bord

>>12314821
You googled skeletons to learn about skeletons and got spooked?

>>12315037
very nice vulturehu

>>12314821
How can Yuyuko be so fat if she's dead?

http://clyp.it/dbldbzix
I was composing this but I realized it's such an unsalvageable piece of shit that there was no point in finishing it. Counterpoint is hard as heck; I wish I were like Bach. Well, at least I learned a lot. Sorry for the fucked up dynamics at the end.

I want to make my music more /jp/ related, so recommend to me a /jp/ related theme.

>>12315172
Being a coward.

>>12315177
What do you mean?

>>12315199
its a /jp/ related theme

>>12315206
Oh, sorry for not being clear. I meant something along the lines of this:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Theme_%28music%29
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Motif_%28music%29

>>12315214
Make something Touhou sounding based around https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ddbxFi3-UO4


Also I can't load or play that site with your music. How 2 work it?

>>12315241
Alright, I will. It shouldn't be too hard.
>Also I can't load or play that site with your music. How 2 work it?
I guess I'll use vocaroo instead.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0maIxOe5tDD

Finished the background.

>>12315284
Cute

1/2

>>12315384
2/2

>>12315385
>>12315384
I like the facial expressions

Does it look alright /jp/? (animooted etc.)

>>12315566
Left ear could move up and down
hair is too stiff, don't move each clump slightly, think of a wavy motion of wind

>>12315284
That's a good floor, how do you do that?

>>12315384
>>12315385
Why do westerners have some sort of disease where they have to draw characters making the most exaggerated expressions possible at all times? All those 3d trash movies do that too.

https://soundcloud.com/dekafumo/refresh-restart-repeat

I made a (not) cute song. Please enjoy warmly~

The mix might be too quiet, but with my inexperience, I couldn't say for sure.

>>12315915
Not sure if this is bait or not, but they do that a lot in manga too. Perhaps you've a disease that prevents you from enjoying exaggerated expressions.

>>12315924
They don't do it for every single thing. I think it's the looney tunes and spongebob influence.

hey /jp

I made you a burger

but I dropped it

>>12316034
NICE burgirl

>>12316034
>but I dropped it
is that a self portrait then? i always knew you were a cute grill, ham

>>12316034
HAMBAGAH!

>>12316034
Batman will save the patty?

>>12315922
Post your composition. I want to play that on all my real instruments.

I drew this to celebrate cyclops day, but I just discovered that opiliones actually have two eyes.
jeez.
>>12317168
Noice

>>12317183
Disgusting! But except the hairy legs, cute!

>>12317183
It's cyclops day?

>>12315937
I think its roots go deeper than that, but yeah I agree. I've noticed that as well.

>>12315937
I think it's that american cartoons aren't powerpoint presentations where only the mouth moves.

>>12318015
Yeah, they're flash animations where the characters blink in addition to their mouth moving.

>>12317459
Yup, every first of the month is mono eye day.

i will celebrate mono eye day

making that dumb touhou punk rock
https://soundcloud.com/vetobendover/20140731_alice/s-ozV7h
for once I put the source tune in the vocal melody though so you'll be disappointed for sure, sorry.

>>12318769
Also, someone give me a source tune (if they want) because I need a new arrangement for December. The 未知の花　魅知の旅 arrangement I did was no good.

>>12315922
This is good. Having denshuto tutor you was a good idea

The more serious I take my art the further what few online friends I have drift away from me. I guess I'm going to have to eventually accept this is what life is going to be like as an artist from now on.

>>12318932
If you're in a circlejerky group of amateur artists who have no will to improve, maybe it's for the best.
You may make some new friends on the way.

>>12318949
Would fug

>>12319004
No, none of my friends are actually artists. It's more accurate to say any and all artists I've ever tried to get to know are nothing more than acquaintances, because its impossible to bond with them anyway.

>>12318932
Hey, I'm an unpopular jay pee drawfag too and I just ended a friendship recently due to their secret clubhouse bullshit. Don't feel bad.

>>12318932
You have us
Post your art here

>>12319101
I do post it here, whenever I think of it. No offense, but this isn't the best place to make friends.

>>12319102
Forget friendship
Enjoy the company of anons and draw your heart away

Why is art so hard
Why is everything so hard
Why is life so hard

I drew a cyclops.

>>12318932
I also want to take art seriously.. maybe we can be draw-friends c:
I'm really bad at replying though..

Happy belated Cyclops day!

>>12318506
>>12319639
>>12319794
Eyewesome
>>12319409
one day you'll start appreciating the fact your life is shit. people with dull, easy lives will only grow inside the boundaries someone else estabilished for them.
if you suffer you're in a privileged category.
you're given the chance of understanding the hows and whys of humanity, with the enormous power that comes with them

>>12319639
You can tell this piece is very artistic by the giant black gash across the drawing. Only the artist elite will be able to appreciate and understand its intrinsic artistic value.

>>12319409

If art was easy everyone would be doing it. If programming was so easy everyone would be doing it. If running the track was easy everyone would be doing it. Etc.

>>12319794
Went back and animated it.
>>12319845
Thank you!

>>12320243
the only easy thing to do is getting drunk and taking drugs.

that's why all the rejects who can't do anything do it, because that's one thing they can.

>>12319794
Went back and animated it.
>>12319845
Thank you!

>>12320159
Don't be silly. Maybe it's a photo of a girl they once loved, but they ripped it in half for some reason...
>>12320255
Really cool.

>>12320329
The fact that you actually thought something of it as more than just a big meaningless gash makes you an artist elite. Congratulations.

>>12320717
Thanks, dude.

>>12320253
If it's so easy to take drugs, why aren't I having amazing LSD adventures right now?

>>12320937
because you're an apathetic neet who doesn't go outside his house to find a dealer and buy some.

>>12321014
So you admit it's hard. You gotta socialize, you gotta research to make sure you can trust the person or even find them, you gotta travel there. Alcohol is the only easy thing.

>>12321075
I dont know what it is about alcohol that does it but it actually makes me draw better most of the time. As long as I don't get shitfaced/dehydrated, that is.

>>12321082
you missed by an inch. getting drunk helps drawing better because it improves your mood and make you have fun whatever you're doing. I realized this last time I drank my ass out.
now for some reason drawing is really easier.

>>12317183
If you want to draw one-eyed girls, crustaceans are pretty good for this sort of thing. Copepods (and especially the genus Cyclops), barnacles, ostracods and cladocerans frequently retain the single, median eye of their nauplius larva, or else have the compound eyes of their adult stage fuse over. More advanced crustaceans usually develop two distinct eyes, though the one exception still has one of the weirdest single eyes among any animal: Having lost its compound eyes in the dark hydrothermal environment that it inhabits, the shrimp Rimicaris exoculata instead develops a gigantic, heat-seeking eye within its carapace - taking up to 0.5% of the animal's body volume (scaled to a human, that's about the size of two tennis balls embedded in your back, so it isn't that huge) and packed with the visual pigment rhodopsin, this single, dorsal eye allows the shrimp to "see" the temperature around it and distinguish the boiling-hot hydrothermal vent from the more benign waters in its periphery.

Rotifers, mites, lancelets, tunicate larvae and the nematode worm Mermis (which makes up for its lack of depth perception by rearing its head and moving its body from side to side, effectively "scanning" its surroundings) are other animals that may have single eyes or eyespots. As for harvestmen, while they aren't single-eyed, the genus Caddo has some really cute eyes. You should definitely check them out, they look like tiny squid with spindly legs instead of tentacles.

>>12317459
>>12318506
>>12319639
>>12319794
>>12320255
Happy belated cyclops day indeed. It's great to see so many talented folks drawing monster girls.

Amoeba

>>12316034

ham you trying some weird new perspective shit recently?

>>12320717
I like abstract art so I'm used to putting meaning into those gashes and what not.
>>12321526
Your posts give me a lot of inspiration.

>>12321526
I knew some crustaceans had single eyes, but I'm not very knowledgeable about aquatic life so I tried with something I know in person. later I discovered the order ricinulei, that have no eyes (except of light sensitive tissue) but as pic related shows, the marking on the cephalothorax area of that species seems kinda an eye, so I settled with calling her ricinoididae. its super stretched but eh...
those are very interesting things though, I had no idea nematodes and lancelets had eyes at all.
>>12321632
Amoeba moe

>>12321194

>>12321661
I find it very cute that their cephalothorax and abdomens conceal the genital openings and are locked together, so they have to detach their prosoma from the opisthosoma in order to mate (the male even assists in "unlocking" the female during mating). A ricinuleid girl would be so pure that she wouldn't have any idea what sex is, since her genitalia would be outside her reach and locked within her body.

They also cover their mouthparts with their characteristic hood when not in use, so they really seem like the sort of sheltered lady who covers her mouth with a fan while speaking and becomes flustered at the very mention of sex.

I always imagined them with glasses rather than a single eye, though. But to each their own - just seeing them receive the attention they deserve is nice enough.

>>12321799
you are one sick hentai

>>12321827
Could you please?

/jp/ I give up

I tried to make a horse conch but I don't think it went so well. Pixel art is difficult.

>>12322161
A suggestion for the horn. Also that's a very nice animation of the lower part thing, don't know what it's called. I find non pixel art more difficult.
>>12321526
>>12321799
Interesting stuff. Have this picture I took on some tiny jumping spider for your troubles. Was really cute, when she was walking over my window she would occasionally look up to me while I was shooting fotos. And don't destroy my fantasy and say it's a he.
http://a.pomf.se/wpmwnr.jpg
>>12320329
>>12321526
Thanks!

>>12321799
>>12321661
>>12321526
Entomologist Anon! You're still here!
Your posts are always a pleasure to read
Please stay in /jp/

>>12322085
I believe in you
Go to bed for tonight and awake tomorrow with even the slightest additional sliver of hope
That's what I do. Just do things one step at a time, actually doing things is in fact the hardest, sticking with things one of the second hardest.

I give up too many times, but eventually I manage to try again and fail. But that failure is better than not doing anything at all. I enjoy my failure almost!

>>12322416

I have trouble making things feel as though they should move a certain way when doing animations this small.

Coloring is fun

>>12322918
okuu does not wear bonemail around her arms

>>12322918
Looking at shoulders, orb between boobs and arms gives the impression of a sideway stance while her boobs look like she's standing parallel to the viewer.

>>12322941
...bonemail?

can we play a game with something like "telephone" only with drawings? like, someone starts with a word he has to draw, someone other tries to guess the word from the drawn picture and then the guessed word now must be drawn by a new guy and so on

>>12322471
I really like the movement in this.
>>12323009
Sounds kind of like doodle or die or whatever that thing was called.

>>12323009
I'm too stupid to understand that game but reading your post made me think of this

>>12322965
Thanks for pointing that out. I'll see if I can fix it.

>>12323039
elephone

>>12322997

>>12323067
WE HAVE A WINNER!!

>>12323072
"boner delivered"?

>>12323095
"background removed"

I want to learn to draw the human figure but when I practice with porn my ochinchin feels funny.

>>12323439
That's a sign you are doing something right.

>>12323137
"Okay but lets give it a funny name since now have reaction image potential"

>>12314747
http://strawpoll.me/2257466
Please vote and do your part to help the community.

>>12323494
If I vote no, you will be cropped away from my life togheter with the background?

When did this background meme start

>>12323798
yesterday

>>12314747

I thought for a moment that the image said "norifu"

Please can someone draw demons

>>12314747

>>12323848
Which semen demon?

>>12323900
Keep the semen for yourself you cumslut, I just want demons

Good night /jp/

>>12324723
Sleep tite. I'm having a real hard time sleeping.

>>12324723
Vampire Rapunzel?

being cyclops is suffering

>>12315566
maybe something like this?

I'm not sure how to make running animations so small look good.

>>12325339
That looks like powerwalking. While running people generally make small "jumps". I'm horrible at explaining it but I hope that it will be enough.
>>12323798
I already hate it. That's a new record!

Backgrounds are so hard

How do I git gud

>>12325462
Yeah, that is definitely powerwalking, not running. While running, there has to be a point where the the person is not touching the ground, or else it's just powerwalking.

>>12325517
You can start by not liking shitty series and gaining some good tastes.

does it look okay?

>>12325517
Copy images of real people and think of the underlying form when drawing and shading, repeat and eventually you won't be shit.

>>12325547
Very cute, nice and clean linework, I'm not sure about the colours though

>>12325545
Rude

>>12325568
Dude.

>>12325282
Tried your suggestion. Ignore the bottom of the vest, I'll fix it later. Does it look OK-ish now?

>>12325220
That's exactly what happened with my
HOLY SHIT THATS RAPECAT!
>>12325547
it looks anywhere near okay but somehow I like it

>>12325339
Once I tried to do animations too but it was too complcated...
maybe you should change the way the feet hit the ground or something

One day I'll contribute to one of these threads.
but not today

>>12321526
so, do you collect insects?
which ones you like most?

it's not really /jp/ related, but i made this some time ago.

>>12327258
whoops, posted the wrong version

>>12327258
>>12327261
sincerely I don't know how to deal with this

OC thread...I've always loved you.
You're the only reason why I keep coming to /jp/, day after day...

>>12327368
You're the sun of my days and the dark of my nights anon. I love you too.

>>12325547
Which 2hu is this

>>12327258
>>12327261
Was this for a game or something?

>>12327261
>>12327258
What the hell is this?

This turned out quite background-ish, but the mood change might make it unfit for that purpose.
Maybe this is the right kind of music to put a vocal track over?

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1KkFtMqNb2T

>>12325462

I have the legs on a separate layer so I can change that.

>>12327676
Do that if you want it to look like running. I know myself that this pseudo side view is wierd to work with but the face turns too wierdly. Maybe try to put the features a bit to the left depending on the frames and look if that looks better. I'm too lazy right now to check it for myself.

Also didn't you want to make that game 3D? Or is it just some sort of fan art? Or am I mixing things up?

>>12325220
funny, check
cute, check
now draw a vampire too you

>>12327688

This is a small project I am doing with someone else. I haven't ever done anything with another person before so I thought I would try.

>>12327650
>Maybe this is the right kind of music to put a vocal track over?
It sounds just like a piano accompaniment. It can't stand for itself, but that's ideal if you want put a lead melody over it.
Personally I think it sounds too hollow, mainly for the voicing of the chords. The perfect fifth happens to have that hollow kind of sound.

I removed two of the frames because I thought they were making it too slow.

>>12327784
Now it looks like she's running, but it looks worse.

>>12327784
It's not fluent enough anymore. Either add the frames back (you can try with just one more, of course) or edit the images in the frames itself. Also I think it could have more up and down movement. I think the arm movement is too extreme, too. But if you add more up and down movement it might be fitting. I don't know. I'm too tired to analize it any better. Hope that it still helps somewhat but take it with a grain of salt.

>>12327784
And since it's for a project it might be wise to not focus too much on that and focus on other things first. Only you can judge that. While that's pretty basic advice it also seems that many forget that in the heat of development.

>>12327376
Thank you.
I will keep you, all of you, in my thoughts as I drift off into some odd, hazy, cold future.

>>12327834
>It's not fluent enough anymore.

Ay dios mio!

>>12327650
Start makes me think of surrender by billy talent

>>12327834
>I think the arm movement is too extreme
This is, to a certain extent, the point. Rigid, exaggerated movements are quite cute; depending on the context in which this character exists (assuming there even is an explicit one), it may be optimal to have something like this.

Someone please give me feedback ;_;
>>12325671

>>12327968
Add more frames, still very stiff and every clump of hair moves the same way at the same speed
sakuga.yshi.org/post?tags=hair

>>12327968
its p good lol

but i do'nt like the specific movements of certain hairs for reasons I cannot even begin to comprehend or identify

>>12327978
Mind redlining which hairs annoy you? Are they still too stiff like >>12327971 said?

>>12328017
>>12327978 was meant to satirize >>12327971 and >>12327834. Sorry, I don't really believe conventions or technical merit have any relevance in the value of art.

>>12327722
You pretty much confirmed it for me, yes. I don't personally mind the lack of a distinct chord, as it leaves a little more to the rest of the piece - or even the listener - to interpret it in different ways.

>>12327873
I checked and you're right, it's the same chord. Might have to do with this originally being written on the guitar.
I don't think it's a problem though, the rest is pretty different.

Thank you for the input to the both of you, I'll see if I get around to adding a third part (second? The baseline is purposely minimalistic, I don't think I should count it...).
I usually don't like writing up something that can't be played. Let's see.


>>12325671
>>12327968
I'm not an animator by any means, so feel free to disregard my opinion, but what bothers me with this is that the wind tucks on each strand simultaneously.
I really like the look of the "waves" you sometimes get in cornfields on a windy day - I'm aware that an accurate depiction of that would cause the number of frames needed to skyrocket, but as I said. I don't really have an idea.

>>12325671
I don't have much experience with animation but it looks like someone (or something) is yanking her hair back and forth. I feel like the wind should push her hair to the side and then it naturally falls back in place.

I wanted to draw something music related, but I realized I have no idea how to propely draw someone playing an instrument. copying a photo feels weird , because I don't know what sound corresponds to that movement.
its kinda funny considering that my brother plays Bach on guitar, and I'm who introduced him to music years ago.
sorry for the blog moment

>>12328510
why is dog in washing machine

>>12314747
starting to git gud. thought i'd share. i try to participate in drawthreads.

>>12330002
Lineart seems much better than colored ones

>>12330002
Looks like that anime Muslim girl that used to get posted around 4chan.

Hey /jp/, this is the guy new to drawing tablets from a week or two ago

I've made another line-art of the same character like last time, how does it look?

I sadly didn't get to improve the last one though... since I had all of it on one layer, I couldn't be assed to redo it

I'm pretty sure this is a question that has been asked to death; but when did you start learning to draw, /jp/?

Did you copy any particular styles you liked? Did you take classes?

>>12330175
It misses wings
also check your brush settings, lines seems kinda too soft

>>12330229
Wings are intentionally left out yet, I avoid using black lines for them!

Also, the brush settings? I've intentionally made it much softer than before, as well as doubled the canvas size and increased the brush width to 8 pixels, since I figured it would give the pic less of an MSPaint feel to it.

Does it look this strange?

>>12330175
Hell, may as well just get over with it and post my last work's line-art, just to have a contrast.

To the anon who drew my fairy being greeted by Daiyousei, again, thank you very much (●´∀｀●)

>fanart tag got deleted
I know its just what I deserve, but still...

>>12330446
King Meidorah?

>>12327784
Look at walk cycles, it'll probably help the most. If she's running her upper body isn't showing it, she shouldn't be so upright and she should probably bob up and down more.
>>12330002
The art's very clean so the noise filter doesn't add anything to the picture.
>>12330070
It looks a lot more lively.
>>12330237
Blurry lines make it harder to focus on it, and generally lineart is done with sharp lines.
>>12330440
On pixiv or something?
>>12330446
The breats look lopsided and her feet too small. Your colouring is very nice though.

>>12330491
Haha, you can clearly tell I'm not an expert, right? Do you happen to know how you can edit brush size afterwards in SAI? I heard there was a way without having to retrace anything, but I can't figure it out by myself or perhaps I'll just go google it

>>12330491
Yes, the tag referring to that particular thing disappeared, so probably the original author edited it out

>>12316768
Sorry for taking so long to reply, here it is if you're still here. I hope GP is fine for you, if not, just tell me and I'll try not to take a week to respond. The fingering is pretty crappy, sorry.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ifts248uicymafa/pls%20donut%20steel.gp5

...but what are you going to do with it? I don't think this song is any fun to play...

>>12318769
>>12318824
You'll add vocals to this, right? This song feels rather incomplete without it.

>Having denshuto tutor you was a good idea
I-I don't think borrowing someone's amp settings count as tutoring, but thanks!

If you're looking for a tune, try and give DDC's stage 5 theme a shot.

>>12327650
I agree with >>12327722, fuller chords would certainly make the piece better, I think. It's too sterile and it lacks excitement, texturally, which seems odd when you also consider that there's the mood change there.

Alright, I hardened the strokes now! And as you see I gave her a plain paintjob. Part of me wants to take it one step further and try some shading though... thoughts? Any tips?

>>12330715
Yes. add two cubes of Cirno for maximum refreshment

>>12330518
I think this only applies when using a lineart layer, since that has a bunch of tools for editing the vector lines.
>>12330715
Cel-shading will be easier to start with. It doesn't hurt to try anyways.

>>12330756
Why do I see the porn writing itself

Thanks man, this got a real chuckle out of me! You guys never cease to amaze me.

>>12330760
Cel-shading? I have an idea of what you mean, though I am not exactly sure how it works different from the regular shading... I will read up on it in any case, thanks!

>>12330756
Why do I see the porn writing itself

Thanks man, this got a real chuckle out of me! You guys never cease to amaze me.

>>12330760
Cel-shading? I have an idea of what you mean, though I am not exactly sure how it works different from the regular shading... I will read up on it in any case, thanks!

>>12330816
cel shading's pretty much just simpler shading. 2-3 hues, sharp edges, no blurred edges etc.

the picture you posted has something like that.

regular shading's the one with blurry shading that fades seamlessly between hues.

>>12330820
Ahhh, I wasn't quite familiar with the right terminology - this kind of shading was what I thought of doing at first.

Thanks for clearing that up!

self portrait.

if i was a cute hikki girl

>>12331060
You didn't do that.

>>12331101
huh??? what do you mean

>>12331060
I'm going to fug your self insert hikki girl

The shading looks kinda off, but... This is much better than the first drawing I had posted here.

I decided to add in a little more litle things, and even though I feel there are still some parts that don't quite feel right, I'm pretty happy with what I got so far!

I'm having lots of fun experimenting in SAI for the time I've been experimenting with it!

System, this post is not spam, go home

>>12331060
I love dirty hikki girls

>>12331060
Thinking of ideas.
was originally supposed to be a weeby vampire, but ended up being a weeby imp in the end I think.

or maybe a devil? who knows anymore....

>>12331319
lotte ripoff

>>12331319
stop trying, your art sucks. no one wants you to post here anymore.

it's not original, this is /jp/'s ORIGINAL content thread. just stop posting and kill yourself.

>>12331319
If I could draw something like this, I would be so happy.

>>12331355
I like his art though. don't speak for me. fuck you. are you a girl?

>>12331355
calm down

>>12331369
stop giving him a reason to post here.

>are you a girl?
what is that even supposed to mean. just because I don't like his "art" means that I'm a girl?

>>12331401
you are very mean and only girls are that mean

are you a girl because you didn't confirm

>>12331408
i'm not.

>>12331401
>stop giving him a reason to post here.
What did he do?

>>12331060
Why does this have a danbooru file name but isnt on danbooru?

Monster girls.

>>12331482
Danbooru didn't invent md5 hash

>>12331319
She's very cute. Please continue drawing.

>>12331449
the guy's just bitter and angry he can't draw, so he takes it out on everyone else.

>>12315284
Fucking cute dude.

Monster girls.

>>12331601
Hey now, that's just a horse wearing a blow-up doll.

All he wanted was to keep his neck warm. Please don't sexualize him.

>>12331234
I wanted to try drawing her.

>>12331333
Oh. I actually was thinking Rachel Alucard when drawing this but I guess it could be Lotte rip-off.

>>12331355
Oh.... Well than. Not sure how to reply to this... But not really sure what I did wrong here.

Why are you so mad?

>>12331482
I just take screen caps of my drawings with gyazo and save them because I am too lazy to save my own files.

>>12331551
>>12331367
thanks atleast someone likes it.... that makes me happy

girls please leave

>>12331831
Can you remove the background?

>>12331895
Why? I deleted my file already....... Sorry...

>>12331902
>>12331895
I took the picture from here and deleted the bg. not sure why you want it but... here you go

>>12331902
Well j think it would look great transparent. Can you save that one in your post?

>>12331967
Looks great! Thank you!

>>12331831
>citrus-slice wings end up sticking with people
>they were not intended as anything remotely fruity

I didn't quite expect this, but I do like how I had at least two people here draw her just because they seem to like her looks... or maybe just because her exploitable wing shape?

While I've had thought up a reasoning for this particular shape, and could never get them right because I can't figure out how to properly draw their surface, I think I am going to spare you the long winded details and will just enjoy the juicy results for now. Having yet another giggle here.

Either way, good work on that picture, anon! I wish I could get on your level sometime soon.

>>12331319
>>12331831
>>12331967
>>12331902
Are you... Mugen... trying to reintegrate... into /jp/... ?

>>12332163
His art is too cute to be Mugen.

>>12331060
Cute. having hair is nice...
>>12331234
you seem pretty good at choosing tones already
>>12331319
Now draw a cute vampire.
>>12331483
>>12331601
I kinda want to see an harpy made like that
no wait, draw pegasus coming out from medusa blood. you're free to interpret it as you want
>>12331831
Cute, now draw a vampire

i'm sorry this looks nothing like marisa

i'm sorry this looks nothing like marisa

>>12333201
It's fine, but why the binary brush?

>>12333201
Her mouth is too far to her left and also not sucking on the mushroom.

I kind of want /co/ to leave.

>>12331355
I bet you're the same person who always hates on my art. And you know what if that's all you're going to do on this thread is bully then get out of /jp/. I've been on /jp/ for over 4 years now and you know nothing of taking it easy.
I bet you thought that was my new drawing.
Guess what? Stop trying no one wants you to post here anymore . Take your own advice i'm tired of this hate being in this thread. >>12331060
Almost looks a bit like Tomoko pretty cute dude.

>>12333301
I feel very comfortable with it for some reason.
>>12333330
I fixed it for you

>>12332587
Who the hell do you think you are giving off orders like that, you bald NEET loser?

Hey simloli guy, are you still alive?

A thing.

and nsfw things for those interested.
http://i.imgur.com/7BmcPbk.png
http://i.imgur.com/EifpRLe.png
http://i.imgur.com/V9pXDJ3.png

>>12315385
3/2

>>12333971
I enjoyed that.

>>12333971
You're kinda like a shittier Josh L.

>>12333835
Nice colours and tiles

Can someone draw me a monster girl? Thanks.

>>12327261
I remember you. You posted this on 10ch a long time ago.

>>12333835
Please tell me you are making a trap ryouna game.

>>12334477

>A fetish genre of (usually drawn) pornography which depicts a character physically hurt either in a sensual way, or in a sexual situation.

What?!

I think it will be more like Ice climber.

>>12334459
Thanks I was worried about it not looking very good.

>>12334526
If your character gets hurt and dies it will be called a ryona game. It's a genre founded by people who jack off to Tomb Raider and Resident Evil deaths.

>>12334477
>ryouna
Awful, simply awful.

>>12334538
you're referring to the use of the letter u, of course?

>>12334526
Why are you not okay with ryona but you're okay with hardcore shota buttrape?

>>12334612

I actually didn't know games like parasite in city had a genre of their own.

I was more perplexed at the hope my game would be one.

>>12333201
I find this extremely erotic
>>12333469
...okay now a little less
>>12333971
I don't like the way you end comics. now draw a proper final page for this you goddamn cunt, holy fucking shit
>>12333835
is that a brush that she's holding?

>>12332587
Looks like I fainted last night...
>you seem pretty good at choosing tones already

Hey, thanks! I wasn't putting too much thought into it yet, I just made sure that for the shading I selected a tone darker by a value of about 30-40 or so on the brightness scale. Is that how you usually do it?

I may draw something else next, though I am not sure what... either another OC of mine for this thread, or a Touhou (can you post fanart too, or is this meant to be strictly OC?)

>>12334833
Just try to avoid posting pics you didn't made yourself and draw whatever you want

>>12334838
Got that then!

I tried, but I can't figure out how I made pictures before and what made them interesting.
>>12334833
Shifting the hue of the shadow make it look more realistic/alive.
>>12334810
I still don't know how my pictures could be attractive but thank you.
>>12333835
Will you be making this into a game? I really like the colours. The only thing that bothers me is the barrels look like their perspective is off.

>>12334434

Ouch. Damn, this made more of an impact on me than it should have, I have never liked how sloppy his lines are and it's painful to hear that I'm like him. I need to fix this..

>>12334810
It's not the end don't worry, plenty of pages to go..

>>12335190
dont be discouraged. keep going.
Improving can be a fun challenge

>>12333835
I want to masturbate to traps now.

>>12335589
Of course.

>>12335190
I meant plot-wise, not art wise.

How does this guy look?

I'm trying not to make a fairy this time

>>12336634
Too many hair
men are more handsome without hair

>>12336634
Looks pretty slick. I like his hair.

>>12335167
You should draw the full figure. You're a bit too obsessed with lips (they are nice), but the hand and eyes say a lot about your understanding of anatomy.

>>12335167
>Will you be making this into a game? I really like the colours

Yes. Someone is helping me with it too so I only have to worry about front end stuff so it's going by fast.

You draw faces really well. I gotta learn how to do that.

>>12335657
so long as they're not real. 3DPD still applies.

>>12334810
a wand.

>>12336750
Anon, you manage to crack me up every time, thanks for the laugh

>>12336706
Well, I figured some hair would be nice... I didn't exactly want to make him manly or anything, really

>>12336752
his anatomy is fine it's his style

>>12336752
Those are the things I find erotic in his drawings.
wait, they really are? actually I think not.
maybe the lines? shit, I don't understand myself anymore

>>12336132
Oh oh ohhhhh. Hahaha, I'm so relieved.

I'll practice with stories more too then.

What a horrible night to draw a curse...

>>12337001
Your posts are annoying to read.

I failed at life and I'll never be able to bully again.

>>12337716
bullying girls is just like bullying a bike

you can do it

>>12337716
fuck off dan kim

>>12337716
You have a chance

Make a bully cate game and release it at C86
Bully one of the japs into letting you use their table
You can show the world who's the real bully

I realized this girl looked kind of slow after I drew her.

>>12337780
Saying you "drew" her might be a bit of an embellishment. It's more like you arranged some squiggles into roughly her shape.

I do commissions 500 dollars a pop
keep in mind my art is postmodernist ironic commentary and if you think you don't like it you need to just need to consider it more from different angles of thought

>>12337864
Please anon, both you and me knows that when it comes to drawing, not everything will look like a final product. You can easily get getsure and shape out of that.

>>12337780
Saitama, shou-shouldn't you be working on the Prject?

>>12337864

>draw: verb \ˈdrȯ\
>to make by making lines

he made it by making lines. you're not even really complaining about his image - you're just complaining about the words he used. has the oc thread always been this retarded or did I just never notice it?

>>12337864
Sorry I am lazy!

>>12337937
>>12337953
Thank you nice anons.

>>12337940
I think you have the wrong person.

>>12338017
Oh, I'm so- you're sure? Because your style looks like Saitama. Oh well, I love it!

>>12338023
Oh thank you, do you mind posting or linking something by him? Sounds interesting.

>>12338039
Your roughs looks like his a lot

http://bmsketch.tumblr.com/

>>12338045
Ohh I see! Very cool, I like his art style. If you don't mind I would be interested in seeing what project he's working on.

>>12336796
unevenly, non-symmetrically slanted/positioned eyes are hardly a style.

>>12338174
It's a style. I don't know if you noticed but he wasn't trying to make a photorealistic trace of a photo like you autists over at >>>/ic/ do. Speaking of which, go back there.

>>12338185
unless he's going for complete abstraction and cubism, making a skull have one eye socket above the other is an anatomical error.

you don't have to be from /ic/ to know that, but you have to be an amateur who doesn't understand anything, along with having deviantart-like apologist attitude, which your post reeks of, not to know that.

>>12338204
You're the one who's the amateur with your worthless tryhard anatomy worshiping opinion.

>>12338209
spoken like a true deviantart user. how about you drop your white knight attitude and let the artist reply?

people like you are what holds artists back, when instead of trying to fix any potential problems and getting better they're smothered with "style" apologisms and get complacent, never striving to improve, forever stagnating.

you're just as bad as the "your picture sucks, kill yourself. i won't tell you why it sucks though" nerds, whose sole purpose is to bully an artist and troll them into a deviantart like "it's my style, i can't hear you lalalala" attitude which stops improvement as well.

>>12338225
I'm 100% sure that all you do when you look at drawings of anime girls is you examine their anatomy under a microscope trying to nitpick insignificant minor faults (and describing them as "awkward", no less) so you look like you know what you're talking about for ``artist cred'' because you can't draw or paint for shit. You don't understand anything beyond "correct anatomy" so that's all you ever try to look for. Art is more than correct anatomy but since you're so closed minded and amateur as fuck you refuse to see. I bet your grasp on anatomy isn't even that good. I bet my fucking life you're either a plain bad artist or one that's been stuck in a rut for years with barely any improvement.

"muh anatomy" - What most wannabe amateur anime artists assume is their big obstacle to making good looking drawings. Try learning other fundamentals of art and stop jerking off all over your individual muscle fibers. It's pointless to argue with someone at your low level, you'll just have to discover it the hard way.

>>12338185
>>12338209
>>12338235
>餌に食らいつく

>>12338239
>get called the fuck out
>i-i-its bait guys he-hehe-heh...

Go back to copying medical textbooks, retard.

>>12338235
so i was right. you're one of the faggots who bullies artists into stopping any improvement, your last comment proved it beyond any shadow of a doubt.

your opinion is invalid. kill yourself out of here, your kind is not welcome around these parts.

>>12338241
he wasn't me, nerd. i can't speak jap.

>>12320329
>>12330446
>>12333201
>>12338017
>>12338077
not bad you all past, got to the thread late but expect severe critique next time, can't let your head swell too much

>>12338077
It's the /a/nimation project

>>12338246
>critique
Take yourself to /ic/, there are many a drawing that haven't been replied to yet. This is the /jp/ OC thread where people can post their original content for others to enjoy.

The only time you are allowed to critique is if they specifically ask for it. I don't know why you people have this god-given mission to rip apart every doodle with the motto of "IT'S FOR THEIR OWN GOOD". You're worse than religious fanatics.

>>12338252
The worst about /ic/ is that's beyond obvious most people hanging there castrates themselves in order to pursue this ideal of "success with hard work", wich may be true for many things but I doubt will bring to some result if the most important part is missing, aka enjoying what you're making. so boring, forgettable drawings are produced in industrial quantity.
I can say without shame of being proven wrong that /jp/, /v/ and /i/ are the most diverse and creative boards when it comes to drawings.

>>12338045
He's pretty good

>>12337738
Its not him, the drawings are too defined

>>12337780

While the Pokeball idea was cool, I was thinking of something else!

I've been following a small fire tutorial, and tried to make a fireball. How hot is it?

>>12338468
It's pretty good. It isn't burning though. It's just a ball of "fire material". If it was fire, there should be some sparks and fire there

I'm not sure what else would be needed. I was thinking timed platforms of some kind that would force speed in some areas. I think I may try to make an enemy that shoots projects of some kind

>>12338484
Sounds fair enough. Here's a second attempt, slightly larger, too!

I'm planning to shade the image like the last one as well, but this time I may even attempt giving lighter shades, since I have a lightsource right there.

>>12338492
>I think I may try to make an enemy that shoots projects of some kind
Wait, there's a game that has star shaped enemies that DON'T shoot shit in all directions?

>>12336752
I really should, but it's hard to build up the motivation. I've gotten so lazy.
>>12336796
Don't pull this shit seriously.
>>12336980
I still can't figure out what exactly you like about it.

I feel very bad that it turned into an argument over 'my style'. It's not, I understand I'm bad and have left my self stagnating, to see people try to argue it's somehow good is very upsetting. I like seeing actual criticism and not only comments of "it's good" or "it's bad".

>>12338809
>I feel very bad that it turned into an argument over 'my style'
No, it is, and you should be pretty happy about it. when backed by an at least decent tech skills, which you have, "style" is much more important than any stupid crap art nazis can pull out of their enourmous folders of motivators and references. just look at professionals and tell me if its technical skills the first thing people consider when they hit the bookmark button. no, paying companies don't care about technique either.
your stagnation is due to not following a precise theme, so your right brain ended up biting its own tail. try taking a break and doing something new. outside internet I mean
now draw me something with NICE amounts of pitch black blackness.

Thought I'd give the whole porn thing a try again.
Now I just feel bad. Sorry, Rumia. I'll stay with cute/pure from now on.

NSFW - http://i.imgur.com/0JQeCUD.jpg

>>12339830
cute not pedo

>>12339830
Jesus Christ in his golden heaven throne, what the heck happened to his legs?!

>>12339830

>that guy's body
lmao

>>12339830
that's because instead of drawing a normal looking guy, you drew a disgusting fatass.

you're only hurting yourself by drawing degenerate porn like that, with fat people. that's why you feel bad.

draw a trap next time.

>>12339868
Well said, from one degeneration to the other degeneration.
he should draw girls loving eachother. clearly its the only way out of this blaspheme stygian swamp

>>12339884
fuck off back to /u/, gaylord

>>12339865
>>12339853
I don't exactly specialize in disgustingly obese man anatomy. Sorry about that.

>>12339868
I wanted to give it a try at least once. Trap stuff is even worse in my opinion. It's the one fetish I will never understand, but I respect your freedom to like it.

>>12339888
>>>/hm/>>>/cm/>>>/lgbt/
There are multiple dicksuckers cesspools where you can choose to dive back and disappear in the shit that generated you
>>12339895
I respect his freedom of being a faggot too.

>>12339895
traps are basically kinda like futa, but without boobs and with balls. certainly much more pleasing to the eye than a fat pig.

if a girly guy makes you question your sexuality, draw a normal man, with normal, slender body, not a sack of gross fat.

>>12339830
more lewd Rumia, please

>>12339921
or hell, just draw a futa reimu/marisa/cirno/yuka/etc fucking rumia next time if drawing a man is a problem.

>>12339921
wow, rude, fat men are the preferred loli rapists. If I wanted my lolis raped I'd pick a bald fat man too.

>>12339903
you're the one who hates straight sex and wants to spread homosexuality in /jp/
fuck off literal faggot

>>12339940
but fat men are the virgins. the losers.

they can't score because they're fat so girls find them repulsive, and since they're fat, they're weak so even a loli could beat him up and bully him.

because he's fat.

>>12339921
I was hoping I wouldn't be drawing any men in the near future anyway.
By the way, please feel free to comment about the other person in the picture as well. That's what I'm more interested in.

>>12339945
Force = mass x (velocity / time)
Since fat men have a huge mass, they have the strength to subdue lolis and rape them easily.
Also being repulsive is important to keep the rape going. You don't want those lolis to enjoy it and transform a rape in consensual shit for normies.

>>12339947
I love the way you have drawn Rumia, anon

I like her thin like that, with her ribs showing a little

Oh, by the way, any comment on the fire in >>12338591 please? I tried to make it look more like fire and less than a ball, but I am not entirely sure whether it's accurate enough

>>12339962
this guy knows what he's talking about

>>12339962
fat is opposite to amount of exercise, which is directly proportional to muscle mass which equals force.

the less you exercise, the more fat you have, while having less muscle. the less muscle you have, the less force you can use, and your grip will weaken much faster.

without muscles you can't hold anyone down, because most likely she'll have bigger muscles than you, and can probably bench press more than you, which means she can wrestle herself out of your lard hands with ease.

so it'll end with the loli holding the fatass down, then raping his fat ass with a spiked dildo or a rusty rake.

>science

>>12339967
Looks quite fiery to me.

>>12339999
I think your post gave me a new fetish. Seeing fat people getting humiliated by the pray they tried to rape.
I like you.

>>12338817
I want to be better technically so I don't get what you're trying to push. What companies are you even talking about?
>NICE amounts of pitch black blackness.
What do you mean by this?

>>12340201
High fived!

Please be quiet jay pee

>>12340266
But I'm too excited!
Super cute!

>>12340266
お休み

>>12339999
except that's completely wrong
you could have huge muscles but be fat, because you just eat more than you spend

>>12340469
His post have more words, therefore he's right. checkfriend

>>12338711

I was thinking of that and I may change them to be that way.

Tried my hands at filling in the lighter shades, with the fireball as the lightsource.

I'm... not really sure, the hair doesn't look right with it, but other than that, thoughts?

>>12339830
Please do not sexualize little Rumia.

>>12340768
Two words when it comes to lighting:

Eyes
Glasses

also, you should post on /ic/ for critique

>>12341722
He might be too chickenshit for /ic/. They'll just tell him to fuck off and grind some fundamentals, which he should, but wouldn't accept.

>>12341744
yeah, his form and sillouhette is really weak.

>>12340768
since the light source is the fire, the lightened parts should show that in their color. It would probably be better if you add colored (red/orange + base color) highlights. I'm too lazy to think too much about that right now and not good enough myself to determine how's the best way to make it on just a whim so experiment with it.

>>12341722
I may need to pay them a visit sometime... Though yeah, I would be pretty much accept what >>12341744 implied, minus not accepting the part about the fundamentals - I'm aware that these look far from good, I have barely started out two weeks or so ago, and it's probably obvious from the linework and everything, too.

>>12341823
Haven't really thought of using an orange hue just yet, I had only considered toggling the brightness a bit for most of the colors - I'll try it next time and see how it looks, thanks for pointing that out!

>>12338017

I like this, good job.

>>12343260

oh wait, my monitor was set to theater mode and so It made the colors look better than it is....still it's cool.

>>12340768
To make the flame look brighter (presuming there isn't another light source), make the shadows darker on the figure. Also try making the shadows a "cool" colour (like a blue hint for example) since you have a "warm" coloured light source.

Today's the day, /jp/, I can feel it...

today's the day I do something I can contribute to the drawthread! Haha, yes!

>>12343750
You don't have to contribute today, but some day.

>>12343750
ｗｋｔｋ

Today's the day for me, too.
Even though it's sketchy as fuck, but I don't know how to do better. At best I could tweak the wings and add eyebrows.

>>12344081
Sparky4 would be proud

Where are the musicians and programmers
It's always drawings

>>12345575
>>>/mu/
>>>/prog/ or >>>/g/

primary otaku passion is drawing, secondary is music and programming is a distant third.

>>12345721
>>>>/prog/
;_;

>>12343783
>ｗｋｔｋ
I went outside with pen and paper, but sadly I couldn't write anything because of depression. Instead I ate bad food and lurked /jp/ for 8 hours.

I also forgot that this isn't a DRAWthread, but an original content thread. Maybe someday I will write more than a page before deleting.

Next day, though...next day for sure...!

>>12346104
If I write about being a depressed NEET, will /jp/ castrate me for being too meta?