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Which flavor's better? Cute Patchy or sexy Patchy?

>>10504145
Patches seems really out of place in a "sexy" style. I think she's especially hard to reconcile with it because she's choinically ill, with ridiculously poor sleeping habits, rarely ever leaves the house, her hair is a mess, etc. Hell, when she does leave, she wears pajamas. It makes a jarring transition to turn that into something your average person would call "sexy" - and it definitely seems to lose something of the individual in question.

>>10504145
i'd fug cute patchy

>>10504145
It depends on the mood, but I'd take cute Patchy over sexy most of the time. Most.

>>10504153
The idea is that hidden underneath the PJs there's a sexy body. I agree it's jarring, but eh.

>>10504153
>>10504145
Well...define sexy.

>>10504166
That looks rather painful! I hope he doesn't apply any more force!

>>10504166
But that idea is no good. What makes her such a fun character is that she is some natural meeting place between two ideas, both of which work very well on their own, without sacrificing from either. Once you start shaping her into some sexual paradise below that, you begin to detract from both parts, and thus ruin her natural appeal.

>>10504178
He won't, but Patchy's fragile so it'll hurt anyway and she'll get mad, and then he guy'll apologize profusely and try to make it up to her and stuff.

>>10504188
Fair enough.
Patchy doesn't need some bombshell body to be sexy anyway.

Do this, though. >>10504171

>>10504208
Exercising Patchouli is, um, sexy.

Patchouli is always cute.

>>10504206
I don't know, exactly. It's a sort of nebulous idea taken from the preferences of the masses. Certain characteristics somewhat defined, like good health, a fit body, larger breasts, prior sexual experience. These are things that a lot of people prefer a mate to have, I think. Personally, I find value in something she already has, but that's just me.

>>10504220
I mean from your perspective. That's what we're talking about, right?
What Patchys in this thread are "sexy?"

>>10504247
I could point out which pictures I find entertaining, but "sexy" is a term I am not altogether fond of. It just doesn't seem to fit for whatever reason. Specifically, however, I mentioned prior that she was like an intersection between two ideas, something like "little girl" and "damaged goods," maybe. Not exactly what I'm going for, but close enough to get the idea across, I suppose.

>>10504238
This is the only picture I particularly like so far.

>>10504247
Very nice. Loving the unhooked front.

>>10504262
>damaged goods
Wha?

Fine, use whatever term you want.

>>10504274
I said it wasn't exactly what I was going for. She has an appearance that suggests shy and fragile, and it was the first term that came to mind.

>>10504280
Shoulda just used shy and fragile, then. I can agree with that very much.
Damaged goods sounds like a rape victim or something.

>>10504287
Damaged goods have their charm.

>>10504291
For sure. But I don't like thinking of Patchy as someone with some great past trauma or something. Maybe.

>>10504291
Romance is better when the guy is damaged goods, or both parties are.

>>10504309
I'm just the possessive sort, and mental or emotional scars that bring the other party to being dependent or obsessive are something I greatly appreciate.

>>10504309
>>10504315
I disagree. I'd rather it be love keeping them together, not dependance or fear or something.

>>10504330
It's more of the guy is restored to good mental health through the power of love.

What would the damage be with Patchy anyway?

What about drunk Patchy?

>>10504330
That's an opinion, man.

>>10504333
That sounds fine, I guess.

>>10504347
The converse is that the girl is damaged goods and the guy fails to fully reach her before she commits suicide, and he gets depressive and damaged after her death. (Speaking of things that make good stories, not things that are good in real life.)

>>10504389
That doesn't sound like a very good story.

>>10504397
Depressing stories are good, and I don't like to write happy ones.

>>10504400
Why? There's enough depression in the world already without you bumming people out.

>>10504400
It can still be a depressing/happy story and have a happy/depressing ending.

>>10504407
I find it difficult to be happy with my work when I conclude the story with things working out for everyone, it doesn't seem realistic and it detracts from the events of the story. Bad ends or ambiguous ends allow me to feel satisfied with my writing, because that is almost always what the characters' actions should lead to.

>>10504414
What a dour person you are.

>>10504419
I'll take that as a compliment.

>>10504425
You shouldn't.

>>10504425
I'm somewhat interested in your works.

>>10504432
I will post a draft of the story I'm currently working on, it's quite short.

http://pastebin.com/uHNeuG1e

>>10504337
Does Patchy get drunk?

>>10504441
I read it and thought it was very nice! Thanks for sharing! Keep it up!

>>10504451
>>10504337
Apparently, haha. Perhaps only on occasions.

>>10504134
Nice underwear there, Miss Knowledge.

>>10504334
She's from medieval europe, right? That place/time sucked hard; shouldn't be that difficult to come up with some trauma in that setting.

She's a witch. Something to do with witch hunts and inquisitors and stuff.

>>10504479
You were not supposed to see that.

>>10504483
How not? It's right there in my face

>>10504483
It's hot. Let's just take off all our clothes. Ladies first.

>>10504455
Thank you. I'll assume you're being genuine.

>>10504481
Who would get pleasure from drawing something like that?

>>10504486
...you still weren't supposed to see.

>>10504497
I like that one, it's drawn in a style very reminiscent of Final Fantasy Tactics art, even though it probably wasn't meant to be.

>>10504494
No, no stripping in the library when guests are about.

>>10504497
You are being a tease!

>>10504502
Never played that.
I like it for different reasons.

>>10504400
>>10504414
>>10504425
You remind me of Kuroneko from Oreimo

>>10504441
That was actually really good, writer-san.
Do you have a page or something with any of your other works on it? I'd be interested in reading them.

>>10504503
But. But it's just us.

I would fug Patche so hard, that shit would just flung out of her holes.

Called the police for roleplaying.

>>10504514
...you are a guest, anon.

>>10504495
Lots of people, and lots more would get pleasure from looking at it.
Is there a problem?

Well that puttered out suddenly.

>>10504529
Ya got me there.

Librarians don't have indecent thoughts

Is she, perhaps, unaware of how luscious her own body is?

>>10504553
Oh? Looks like it's mutual.

>>10504513
I'm considering making a blog to post stories on, since I am trying to compile a profile to apply to graduate school with. I don't have anything prepared currently, though. I may post in an OC thread if I decide to put anything else online. Thank you for the praise, though.

>>10504533
You realize she is going to drown, right?

my friend that i talk to some times got a patchy fumo a week or two ago

i'm so jealous

>>10504558
Oh, I would not be surprised. She doesn't meet many people, and I doubt books would clue her in to her own lusciousness.

>>10504553
Not the last guy.

>>10504562
Of course. She'll be slowly lowered under the surface, panicking more and more as the water comes closer to her face, then desperately struggling against her bonds as her weak lungs start to burn, eventually stopping her useless tugging and just trying to hold her breath for just a few seconds more...before a stream of bubbles bursts from her mouth and she writhes like never before, screaming inaudibly, before going very still.

Except that last bit doesn't happen, because the followup picture is after she's been hauled back above the surface. She's soaked to the bone and panting for breath, but alive. Nipples are exposed by her wet clothes, though, so no posting that.

So yeah, I realize that. Is there a problem?

>>10504562
I didn't read your story, but if it's Touhou, /thp/ would probably welcome you.

>>10504585

>>10504585
fukkin hardcore

>>10504414
That's great - as long as you're writing for yourself, and for like-minded people.

Most people consume entertainment and literature as a distraction from their everyday pains and punishments. I remember being the kitchen with my parents, while they were watching CSI Miami as Insp. Horatio Cool Shades solved another grisly murder through science and arm-twisting. I said that I would like to see the bad guys "win" for once. They were honestly surprised and quite taken aback by that.

I've had other experiences similar to that, but it has always taught me that my likes and desires are probably considered weird, strange, and anti-social by the rest of society.

>>10504586
i like her dick-shaped head without the silly hat

>>10504586
It's not Touhou. I could write some fanfiction for /jp/ though, it would be a fun exercise.

>>10504605
I'm trying to write literary fiction, which is not strictly entertainment for the masses. Writing books, and even more so 'literary' books, is not the same as writing for television.

>>10504614
Would /jp/ like you writing about depressing things happening to their Touhous? I dunno.

>>10504621
What kind of depressing? If it fits, it's probably good.

>>10504628
Maybe. I'd want some happy to counterbalance it afterwards, though, and depending on the subject Touhou that might not be easy to find.

>>10504621
I like Satori and Yuugi... it would be pretty easy to write something depressing about Satori.

>>10504558
Perhaps she is.

>>10504639
How could she be?

>>10504637
Oh boy, depressing Satori.
Woooo, new and exciting.

>>10504635
I seem to recall this one little piece that got stuck in my head where Yuuka was dying, and Marisa comes along for a duel, but because of the circumstances, kills her on accident, and then she walks off with her parasol. Is that something you would consider depressing?

>>10504645
Probably.

>>10504645
More like ridiculous. I also don't think anyone would be sad about Yuuka dying.

>>10504648
>>10504649
I laughed at that, just a little.

>>10504645
Maybe. Probably.

>>10504641
Here's a decent reason.
>>10504564

>>10504654
I thought you were saying she WAS aware of her attractiveness. My mistake.

>>10504662
Not at all. Nice pice!

>>10504662
That's a very small condom.

>>10504664
Or maybe she's just really, ya know, big.

>>10504662
Holy shit, that's hot.

>>10504668
whoa.

>>10504662
Not at all. Nice pic!

>>10504664
It stretches.

>>10504671
-if ya know what I mean, lol.

>>10504441
Just read it.

With the right query letter, you could probably get this published in a magazine or journal that goes for these kinds of short stories. Have you considered trying to get published?

>>10504614
It all depends on who you are writing for. Ultimately, you are writing for your readers.

The only writing I've ever seen on /jp/ that I actually liked were those short CYOAs Bern did when we got raided, back in the day.
And the erotic commentary that one guy did for some Monikano pictures in an abuse thread years ago, if that counts.
...and YWUiG, technically.

>>10504662
You know, looking at this picture, I can really see what you mean, >>10504153. That doesn't feel like Patchouli at all.

>>10504680
That's so backwards. Ultimately, you should be writing for yourself.

Pretty.

>>10504686
I suppose you are right. I must admit that my background is non-fiction; the demands are entirely different.

>>10504679
I may try when I make some revisions. I think that neither me nor my writing is ready to be published yet, though.

>>10504686
This is true on a certain level, but if you want to be a professional writer you have to write for others on some level.

>>10504699
I wish you the best of luck.

back to patchouli butts and anuses, please.

You guys just need a girlfriend.

>>10504710

You make it sound so easy...

>>10504707
But we weren't talking about that.

>>10504134
For someone who likes fatties, sure.

>>10504710
Women are poor substitutes for 2D perfection

>>10504710
I would like to, but that would require finding a girl who is also withdrawn from society.q

>>10504712
And yet you post patchy with her backed turned to us, displaying her edibles...

>>10504720
See, I think that's sexier than >>10504662

>>10504724
What?

If you like writing depressing stuff, why do you have a problem with the drowning picture?

>>10504730
I don't really picture Patchouli has having large melons. I also don't see her as being flat. In my mind, she is probably a b-cup.

>>10504765
These aren't that large, are they?

>>10504761
Not him, but torture is a mile away from depression and relationship issues.

>>10504773
Kind of. That's just my opinion, of course.

>>10504716
She is not f...fat!

>>10504775
see >>10504389

>>10504612
I saw that stack of books as a dick. Did anyone see two dicks?

>>10504793
I can't really see where torture fits in here. Can't it just be plain old depression?

Granted, it may be because of my own traumas that I only want happy stories and touchy feely fuzzy stuff. I don't really know.

id rub my cock between patchys wet and steamy puffy mons before ramming it deep into her uterus and filling her with my juices

>>10504814
They don't, but I question how you can have a problem with execution yet consider suicide good story. Seems two-faced, no?

>>10504836
What? No. There's a huge difference between someone taking their own life, and having one person forcibly drown another - possibly the worst form of death - against her will.

>>10504836
I have first-hand experience in dealing with the suicidal, so there's that.

Other than that I don't know. It is just how I react to the subject.

>>10504856
>possibly the worst form of death
Ha. No.

Someone taking their own life in spite of someone else trying to convince them not too, thus sending their would-be rescuer into bottomless depression is fine, but drowning someone is not? No way.

>>10504866
...fair enough. Maybe not as dour as I thought.

>>10504868
You have an odd sense of morality.

Also, I never said it was right, just that it makes an emotional and touching story.

>>10504868
It depends on the shock of the suicide and whether or not the other person comes to blame himself for the tragedy. Some are able to handle it better than others, and some would even react in anger to the act.

Such ambiguity does not exist to its fullest extent in the case of an execution, particularly a torturous one.

>>10504882
I wasn't saying one was more morally right than the other, I was saying it seemed odd to call one bad thing good for a story and not the other.

>>10504882
I wasn't saying one was more morally right than the other, I was saying it seemed odd to call one bad thing good for a story and not the other.

>You have an odd sense of morality.
...do I?

>>10504886
It sounded like it would go worst case to me. The suicide scenario, I mean.
I don't think I'm seeing your whole point, or I'm not properly expressing mine.

>>10504893
Point taken. I hope I didn't bully you.

She's fine, you wimps.

>>10504906
Not at all.

>>10504909
2lewd

I want to see how clumsy Patchy is without magic. I wonder how often she'd trip?

Is Patchouli ticklish?