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General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

Previous thread: >>10429878

>> No.10484764

This image is disappointing and way too lewd.

Fuck you, OP.

>> No.10484774
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10484774

>Magister will never draw your original character

>> No.10484778

>>10484774
ty god

>> No.10484810
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>>10484774
>sad frog dance.gif is not animated

>> No.10484811

>>10484751
OP's pic belongs to >>boards.4chan.org/jp/res/10383245

>> No.10484813

>>10484811
>>10383245

>> No.10484831
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10484831

i was going to ask a programming question but then i realized it was dumb

i drew this picture anyway

>> No.10484834

>>10484751
Original please, I want to stare at meaty tits and thighs.

thanks gfunk

>> No.10484835

2lewd

>> No.10484841
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10484841

>magister had to censor his drawing because /jp/ is too autistic too tolerate a sexy girl on their board

>> No.10484846

>>10484834
Nigga just use IQDB.

>> No.10484848

>>10484831
Looks cute, dont give up your dreams. Go to /g/ , they have daily programming threads.

>> No.10484853

>>10484835
Perfect healthiness.

>> No.10484862

Fuck you magister, I didn't finish my drawing yet!
well, maybe if I didn't pass the past two weeks playing with mspaint and colors...
>>10484774
but another 4chan celeb did mine. and guess what? its a 2hu!
...oh well.

>> No.10484878

>>10484848
>Go to /g/ , they have daily programming threads.

Isn't that like saying "go to /jp/, they have daily translation threads" if someone had a question about Japanese?

>> No.10484892

>>10484878
Not really.

>> No.10484896

People with talent live in a different world.

>> No.10484916

>>10484846
shit mang this internet stuff is hard and confusing, I tried but it's no good.

maybe if I try it using warosu or foolz

and that worked, DANG computers are wild

>> No.10484926

>>10484896
gensokyo?

>> No.10484964

I want to make a 2hu roguelike but I don't have any ideas.

Does any creative person want to help me? I will do the programming.

>> No.10484982

>>10484916
please assist

>> No.10484989

>>10484964
Are you the Mines of Moriya guy?

>> No.10485002

>>10484989
Yes. I'm glad you remembered.

>> No.10485022

/jp/ tell me what draw

>> No.10485025

>>10485022
yukari and ol' dirty bastard rapping together

>> No.10485027

>>10484989
>>10485002
wow you guys need a life

>> No.10485028

>>10484964
I'd help but I could just go ahead and make it myself. If you want to do danmaku, consider treating them like spawned creatures rather than direct attacks.


>>10484751
That picture is too lewd and too fat.

>> No.10485031

>>10485022
Draw Reimu and Marisa making out with ZUN.

>> No.10485036

>>10485025
o.k.

>> No.10485040

magister has strange tastes

>> No.10485104
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10485104

I drew this for Year of the Snake.

>> No.10485125

>>10485040
His fetishes hold no boundaries.

>> No.10485132

>>10485104
your style is pretty easy to remember
I wish my one had something unique too...

>> No.10485150

>>10485132
By ``style", do you mean it's consistently bad?

>> No.10485171

>>10485150
style is the way your draw

>> No.10485205

>>10485150
It's `` and '', not `` and ". Read up on your ASCII.

>> No.10485287

>>10485205
What is " for then?

>> No.10485315

Where can I find OP's pic god damn

>> No.10485327

>>10485287
Depending on your terminal/typewriter, it could be used for umlauts or double primes.

>> No.10485470
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>>10485025
sorry if it took so long, I was watching garfield
color it as you like

>> No.10485568

>>10485470
fucking dope man

>> No.10485648

The amount of stupid posts in here makes me desperate.

>> No.10485721

>>10485315
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1799194

>> No.10485945
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10485945

Happy Valentine's day, /jp/!

>> No.10486286
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10486286

Well she's a cat after all.

>> No.10486303

>>10486286
stop drawing forever

>> No.10486313

>>10486286
You really should practice faces, anon.

>> No.10486330

>>10486286
And a man.

>> No.10486338
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10486338

Happy Valentines!


i don't know what I'm doing on coloring . . .

>> No.10486345

>>10486330
Nah, just a ugly woman.

>> No.10486348

>>10486338
Nice work

>> No.10486377
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>>10485470
What is ODB's power?

>> No.10486399

>>10486377
His ability to combine tha powers of the Clan, and use spell cards like "Mystery of ChessBoxin" and "Protect Ya Neck"

>> No.10486403

>>10486377
He teaches the children, Wu-Tang is for the children.

>> No.10486401

>>10485945
for you too Yogurt

>> No.10486409

>>10486338
Super cute!

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10486432

>>10486403
This opens up so many Wu-Tang/Touhou related questions I want to ask. Does the RZA count as a taoist? Does ODB's dreads count as his silly hat?

>> No.10486575 [DELETED] 

I wish we had another drawfag. These generals should really be called Magister generals.

>> No.10486612 [DELETED] 

>>10486575
Way to invalidate everyone else in the thread over the guy that posts two drawings a thread.

>> No.10486630 [DELETED] 

>>10486612
There's nobody else, though.

>> No.10486659 [DELETED] 

>>10486575
I'll contribute one day. But I only draw lolis though, not titty-mutants, fatties, or dickgirls, so no one will probably care.

>> No.10486671

>>10485945
Ah.. ah... ha... HHHNNNNNNNGGGGG

>> No.10486701

Some trance(?) I made.

http://soundcloud.com/djcrinkles/bliss

I want to say it's influenced by ziki_7 - Transmition but there really isn't too much of a resemblance.

>> No.10486715
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10486715

Making more character designs for a future work.

>> No.10486719

>>10486715
Lovely

>> No.10486720
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10486720

The things of which these wooden blades, in the process of being made by me, cannot cut, are pretty much anything with a hardness value greater than 5.

>> No.10486722

>>10486715

You're decent but i'm going to say to get away from same facing, this looks like the last three girls you showed us, do a male character her age and then and older female they don't even have to be part of your "future work"

just do it and so help me kami-sama if you fucking sameface those two as well...

>> No.10486723

>>10486720
xD

>> No.10486725

>>10486722
Ah, the three girls from the previous threads were of the same person.
I was just tossing around some hair designs. I finally decided on a design.
But I'll take your advice and try not to "sameface"

>> No.10486731

>>10486701

If you're not going to do game music than i'd suggest taking it to >>>/mu/ /jp/ isn't going to listen to much besides k-pop,j-pop, and maybe some techno

It seems alright even if you don't like /mu/ you need to ask them as they'll have heard more music and be able to critique better

as far as the genre you pick yeah it works it's smooth and calming but beyond that there's not much I can say

>> No.10486735
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10486735

I burn the whole day playing FE and trying to figure out the right way to draw my little devil-girl's horns. I still can't figure out what I want to do with these things.

>> No.10486741

>>10486735

looks pretty good if you're trying to make the horns cute or moe or whatever you can try curling them

other than that keep it up

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>>10486722
>>10486725
Also sketched up a male version of the character from last week, but I don't see why you would ask me to do that.

>> No.10486784
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10486784

lecturer was talking shit and i was sleepy

>> No.10486798

>>10486784
very cute

>> No.10486803
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>>10486754

Look like less work was put into this one

>but I don't see why you would ask me to do that.

the same reason anyone would ask, it's to make sure you don't get complacent even >>10484751 admitted last thread he needs to work on expressions

I asked you to draw those because if I hadn't more than likely you'd continue doing the same thing redundantly never developing any more skill

Any real artist knows that you can always improve in some way only amateurs ignore that fact and are content repeating the same thing over and over

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>>10486803
You're projecting a lot there though.
I do my practices often: anatomy, gesture, expression, etc.
If you think I'm completely unaware of my faults and short-ends then you are making giant assumptions.

I guess I can see your concern for the sameface comment, but the reason the two are so similar is because the two of them are siblings that are one year apart. That's not your fault for not knowing, but I'm not going to spend 100% energy on character sheets when I can just take the skeleton and adjust what I needed to. In this case, face shape and hairstyle as well as height. Sure I can draw out each gesture from scratch each time, but that sounds like a lot of unneeded effort.

But if you really are that bothered by it, here's an example of just one character sheet to put into perspective why a bust picture would seem like monotonous work after awhile, especially if you have multiple characters to work on alone.

>> No.10486891

>>10486720
How the fuck did you do these smooth carvings?

>> No.10486924

/jp/, what programming language do I need to get started on to make standard rpg's?

I'm using C++

>> No.10487015 [DELETED] 

>>10486575
>>10486612
>>10486630
>>10486659
Every single time. You guys are so dumb, falling for the same shit.

>> No.10487023

>>10486338
I don't like these exaggerated valentine's day reaction pictures people make, but I'm glad you drew more Irisu. I think coloring is fine by the way.

>> No.10487070

>>10486924
Ruby, so you can just use RPG maker and be done with it.

>> No.10487142

>>10485721
Thanks!

>> No.10487150

>>10486844
I've been drawing for a while but I still can't really into anatomy/gesture. It's just that every time I try to leave my confort zone, things end up looking really, really bad.
Are there any good books/material on the subject you would recommend? Or is the key just to keep trying?

>> No.10487190

>>10487150
Whenever you try anything new, things will always look bad. A little research on methods never hurts. There are guides out there to get you started. Reading some books won't hurt either, Andrew Looomis wrote a book on gesture drawing and there are plenty of anatomy books floating around.

Try to find out the different types of ways people go about doing practice. For example some people use blocks, crystallization, simple stick figures with key points emphasized. And try to apply them next time you do your study.

Some are more suited for others as well as more enjoyable, I wouldn't say one is better than the other because I'm the end, whoever is still doing the studies is the one that pulls benefits.

>> No.10487192

>>10487190
My phone really botched some of my grammar there. Sorry.

>> No.10487197

>>10487150
Try to no just look at things but think of how do they work. Like take a look at your drawing that you think has a bad anatomy and think of it as a real person. is ti going to move properly? will it stand properly? draw the bones and the muscles from anatomy books and pictures. And remember that drawing is a long path, if you really want to one day draw good and enjoying the progress keep going, if it feels like a chore however and only pushing yourself to one day become perfect stop because that day will never come. You will never feel like you became perfect with drawing, you will always find better and better artist to envy.

>> No.10487206
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10487206

Happy Valentine jp.

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>>10486784
my nigger.

Happy Valentine's Day /jp/, you too anon.

>> No.10487238

>>10487190
>>10487197
Thanks. Then I'll just go with the Loomis book for now. It looks really nice and easy to understand.

>> No.10487242
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10487242

>>10486784
you, i like you

Happy Valentine's Day /jp/, you too anon.

>> No.10487251

>>10486720
>Tower shield - Hardness:5 Break DC: 20
>Treasure chest - Hardness:5 Break DC: 23
>Strong wooden door - Hardness:5 Break DC: 23

You must have quite the arm if you can get through the DC and HP with that thing!

>> No.10487332
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10487332

happy valenteen /jp/
remember to wash your teeth and use floss after eating chocolats

>> No.10487442
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>>10487332
>jpg

>> No.10487446

>>10486891
I designed them in Inkscape and used a CNC mill to cut.

>>10486924
C++ is fine if you use a decent library, or XNA if you don't mind windows-onry.

>>10487251
Well, both are wood so if you hit them hard enough it'd probably damage them a bit.

>> No.10487448

>>10486844
She looks like the type of girl that would get ntr'd a lot. It's not an ntr story is it? I hope it's not an ntr story.

>> No.10487476

>>10484751
But that lewd fatty is not /jp/ original content.

http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=33557021

>> No.10487486

>>10487476
are you dumb or what

>> No.10487491
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>> No.10487492

>>10487476
>mags artwork
>not /jp/ original content
silly anon, mags is a /jp/ poster

>> No.10487496
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10487496

>>10487476

>> No.10487509

>>10487476
That's... Magister.

And he's probably been here longer than you.

>> No.10487526

>>10487496
obviously that's just a japanese province

>> No.10487593

Happy valentines day, /jp/, I hope some of you will have a better time some the rest of us.

However, I got my new microphone yesterday by means of simple conversations and just put it to use. Wanted to test if I could also record some music with it and well, I'm not disappointed and quite surprised the sound ended up so well.
It's a cover of an arrangement of Hinas stage theme, played by Nanase.
Since I just did it on a whim, the there are also mistakes (Especially from 0:31 to 0:45). Like It's just a test.
But I'd like to know what you guys think, is it even enjoyable a little bit? In terms of quality.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z2e5MZoOXFs

>> No.10487607

Hey, will I get stoned to death if I post picture of anime characters here?
Before you ask, I've looked at /a/'s drawthreads. They're just too damn fast and the ratio of actual content and requests is about 1 to 100.

>> No.10487622

>>10487492
>>10487509
M/a/gister is a proud /a/ crossboarder, what the fuck are you on about?

>> No.10487633

>>10487593
...Are you sure your axe is in tune?

>> No.10487656

>>10487633
Well, it's more than possible the guitar is out of tune again. I put new strings on it just yesterday and it's tuned five semitunes lower, so it's a drop-d tuning. Therefore, the high tones sound kinda strange.

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10487668

Here's another one of mine. It's been too long since the last time I drew.
The only obstacles I really have are shadowing the hair and the hair lines.

>> No.10487694
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10487694

Would anyone here play a game that's essentially an eroge but set within a community of gorillas? You play as a male gorilla and try to fuck female gorillas, likely with piss and scat and maybe with some guro and necro elements. Who would pay for it? I'm trying to channel my interests into a game so that I can maintain interest in its development for longer. Who would be willing to pay for it in advance, preferably today?

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>>10487668
Woah, I did not mean to upload that upside-down.
Here is this.

>> No.10487695

>>10487668
>>10487692
what the fuck just happened

>> No.10487696
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10487696

>>10487668
>>10487692

>> No.10487698 [DELETED] 

>>10487692
Just screw it.

>> No.10487703 [DELETED] 

>>10487695
>>10487696
>>10487698
Yeah, this sucks. I tried to upload them via phone. Darn auto-rotation messed me up.

>> No.10487719

I was going to make something to post
but the thread is already this big
I am very slow, probably when I finished the thread will already die and no one will se my draw

so I gave up

>> No.10487748

>>10487719
That's a bad excuse, anon. You can always post in the next thread if the current thread is dying.

>> No.10487753
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10487753

This is at a very early stage but since there are not many content in this thread i might post it. As for the background its going to be a forest and the upper part of the picture that is divided by the spear is going to be on fire and the down green and bright, or the opposite. Thats the general idea anyways.

>> No.10487755

>>10484751
I still can't get over how deliciously lewd this girl's flabby body is.

I want to use her thighs to jerk off.

>> No.10487767

>>10487719
I used to make similar excuses to not write stuff for my friends.

Then I realized I was just cheating myself.
I would be very happy to see your work, anon.

>> No.10487769

someone tint her hair red so i can put it in my airi folder

>> No.10487776

>>10487719
I was going to upload something, but the thread is already so shitty I gave up.

>> No.10487780

>>10486784
Excellent, saved

>> No.10487785

>>10487776
please no
you are letting the terrorists win

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10487796

>>10487692
Okay. Last chance at this! Damn it, if this doesn't work I'm going to be pissed.

>> No.10487802

>>10487796
Wow, that's fucking shit.

Just construct criticism, though, so don't spray me with period blood.

>> No.10487821

>>10486701
Nice to listen to

>> No.10487824

>>10487802
Yeah, I agree. Not done, though. I had better feedback with my last one.
Any suggestions?

>> No.10487826

>>10487796
Wow, all that for this? Christ.

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>>10487802
>>10487826

>> No.10487837

>>10487826
Yeah, bro. I don't like unfinished business. Sorry I messed up this thread.

>> No.10487850

>>10487796
I like your lines, in my opnion the problem is the face
need more pretty eyes and better mouth

>> No.10487867

>>10487850
This. Eyes, mouth and ears need to be worked on. Everything else is bretty gud.

>> No.10487891

>>10487850
>>10487867
Thanks! Not sure about the other users on here, but sorry about uploading a few times.
Yeah, I'm not anywhere near done. Maybe this weekend.

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10487898

>>10487796
i think you should just make the nose smaller

i wish i could draw faces that well tho

>> No.10487917

You can always simply delete your failed posts, you know? There's a secret "Delete" button at the right bottom corner of the page.

>> No.10487947

>>10487898
Thanks! I usually do for my other ones. I like your version, lol.

>>10487917
Thanks. The mobile version didn't have it. Had to switch.

>> No.10487963
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10487963

I did it! call me Bahi JD!
next time I'll draw something decent and cute, I swear.
(its a lie)

>> No.10487975

>>10487963
And whose heart may that be?

>> No.10487981

>>10487963
This is very good and if it was in the vn the mc might actually see it as chocolate, very clever

>> No.10487989

>>10487963
>>10487981
It doesn't really make sense though. Is she giving him actual chocolate that looks like a heart to him? Then why the creepy-ass face? Is she giving him an actual heart? Then how does he see her as not-monster Saya at the same time as meat-heart?

>> No.10488014

>>10487989
yes you are right. She must giving him actual chocolate otherwise it wont work. But the creepy smile fooled me into thinking she were giving him a heart. I don't know what the artist want to say. Artist please explain.

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10488045

i added harvestasha vista this time. her skirt was supposed to be slightly transparent, but minecraft doesn't want to render a png with alpha channel mask right, so i guess no transparency.

also updated their heads to turn around like every other mob's, minus cirno. minecraft doesn't like having its cubes rotated on z axis i guess, and screws the whole thing up if it is. cirno's ribbon is rotated on z.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/62600417/cirno_1.4.7.zip

>> No.10488123

Is the image in the OP actually OC?

Pretty hot, man!

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10488169

QUESTION

What photoshop filters are used to give that cell look to anime?
I saw it on the futaba board once but I didn't saved the link

>> No.10488172

>>10488123
'Sup Magister.

>> No.10488211
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10488211

>>10487767
>>10487748
you guys right.. say this to myself is like an excuse to not draw

sorry for my lack of skill, I'll finish it later
I have more or less an idea of what is wrong on her

>> No.10488228

>>10488169
I found it but I don't understand it.

http://mar.2chan.net/zip/14/src/1345637547400.jpg

>> No.10488229

>>10488211
Its actually pretty cute. If you give the face a better shape so you can identify the cheeks and the chin it will be better.

>> No.10488245

>>10488228

They seem to be talking about diffused lighting and how light hits against a subject. They then use layers to add that soft light effect, edits channels and levels. I think they may have also duplicated their color layer, or a final image, and gave it a slight blur filter.

>> No.10488275
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10488275

>>10488245
>I think they may have also duplicated their color layer, or a final image, and gave it a slight blur filter.

like this?

>> No.10488293

>>10488275

In that one I think they have not only blurred a duplicate but also adjusted the levels, or even set the blending mode to multiply, to get those richer tones out of already existing colors. The blending mode may even be soft light because it is only affecting the lighter areas of the image.

>> No.10488295
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10488295

>>10488275
>>10488275
Testing this with OP's pic

>> No.10488306

>>10488169
>>10488228
>>10488275
I actually do this with a lot of my images. You duplicate the final image, change the levels on the duplicate to something much darker(around 200), set that layer to Screen, clip it to the original, then Gaussian blur it by several tens of pixels.

>>10488295
I actually didn't do it with this one because I believe it washed out her skin and made it less full, but looking at it after someone else has done it for me makes me think it's not so bad...

>> No.10488303

>>10488293
You're right
Here is the psd file of that Mio pic

http://sayappixiv.client.jp/dfs.html

>> No.10488315

>>10488295

Interesting results.

>>10488303
I was going based off my knowledge of photoshop and art, my knowledge of Japanese is far worse.

>> No.10488335

Gah, getting back into drawing after not doing it for 10 months fills me with regret. I have to make sure I don't lose focus this time around.

God, I feel so fucking retarded wasting that past year doing trivial shit.

>> No.10488370

>>10488014
ok.
...I thought that meatvision could reverse sincere facial expressions due to power of love, hence creepy ass in place of affection face.
its not that I did it like that just because and I'm making up things. yeah.

>> No.10488599

One day, Kyouko woke up and felt something poking her leg. Pushing herself up off the bed, she looked over and noticed that Sayaka was still fast asleep and they were going to be late for school. As Kyouko attempted to shake her awake, some of the covers fell off of Sayaka, exposing her massive morning wood, straining against her shorts. Kyouko let out a gasp of surprise as her eyes fell upon the bulge. Knowing that Sayaka won't wake up until her pressure valve was released, Kyouko reluctantly pulled down her friend's shorts. Now free from its cottony bondage, Sayaka's wang sproinged to life in all of its veiny glory. Sayaka continued to snore away as Kyouko gently reached over and grasped the penis, feeling its warmth flow into her hand. Now disgusted by the sight of the throbbing cock, Kyouko begin to stroke it up and down, wanting to get this over with so they can get ready for school. However, Sayaka simply mumbled happily in her sleep. Feeling annoyed, Kyouko straddled her sleeping friend, lowering her face to the teenage girl's enormous sausage. Holding it steady in one hand, Kyouko ran her tongue along the length of the shaft, feeling the throbbing veins with every tastebud. Finally, she wrapped her lips around the meat stick, sucking gently as her head bobbed up and down. The engorged bulb ticked the back of her throat as Sayaka's salty precum washed around her mouth. A torrent of magical cum sundered forth from the pink rod, crashing in tidal waves against Kyouko's teeth and cheeks. Unable to contain the unending torrent of spunk, Kyouko swallowed the chunky goo, lest she choke on her friend's juices. Sayaka woke up, opening her heavy eyelids to see Kyouko's cum-soaked lips and pained expression. Kyouko never ate yogurt again. The end.

>> No.10488617

>>10488295
NEEDS MORE BLOOM

>> No.10488777
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10488777

>> No.10488834

>>10488777
what is write in that 'seal' ?

>> No.10488856

>>10488777
The fuck is this?

>> No.10488861

>>10488777
Girls with long arms is my fetish.

>> No.10488871
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10488871

>>10488777
Cute image Lenfriend~♥

>> No.10488921

>>10488834
yamato damashii

>>10488861
i'm glad you like it

>>10488871
thank you

>> No.10488969
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10488969

>>10488045
fixed the cirno problem by redoing her ribbon, and also added a reimu. i had to remove the hostile versions for now, they waste entity id space.

i'll have to figure out how to make them switch into hostile mode if attacked, like wolves or pigmen.

same link as before.

>> No.10488988

>>10486701

Don't listen to >>10486731-kun, I want to hear more of your music on here.

Except, you probably will get better critique on /mu/. But don't leave us!

>> No.10489031

>>10488969
I haven't been keeping up, but have you seen LittleMaidMob? An anon did a voice pack for some threads we had sometime last year.

I don't think he has a source uploaded but those little guys are incredibly useful. I just wish he'd release a forge version because nothing uses modloader anymore.

>> No.10489071
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10489071

I've been really shy about posting in these threads since my drawings are pretty damn stale, but I'll throw something here.

>> No.10489072

>>10489071
Sooo cute!

>> No.10489077

>>10489071

Proportions are a bit off

>> No.10489083

>>10489071
I like it.

>> No.10489089

>>10489071
Dude what's up with her forehead and pose?

It looks retarded

>>10489077
Not a bit. Completely off. If you pat them on the back they'll never learn.

>> No.10489109

>>10489089
I like the pose, but yeah proportions are a bit off.

>> No.10489108

>>10489089

I know but if you tell them anything is wrong in the mist of >>10489083 and >>10489072 , they'll get butthurt and assume you're shitposting instead of trying to critique and just continue being bad anyway

sometimes I try to compromise from going full critical on people to suggesting they fix things depending on how much I see them post, that was the 1st post i've seen from that guy so I was light hearted if he post further and get's worse I won't hold back

>> No.10489116

>>10489108
>they'll get butthurt and assume you're shitposting
Most people are actually not this stupid, it's just that those who are leave a greater impression.

>> No.10489143

>>10489108
Nah, I'm not a fucking baby, I want to get better. I don't mind being hard criticized, as long as I can snail pace my way up there using other people's thoughts and opinions.

On a personal note, I fucking hate posts like >>10489072 mainly because they don't help worth shit other than make me slightly feel better about myself for a couple seconds.

>> No.10489153
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10489153

now makes more sense.
or not.

time to move on

>> No.10489230

>>10489143
I thought it was cute too.

>> No.10489255

>>10489031
yeah, there were few beta updates for them, so the main page was often not updated because it was unstable, but some dude started keeping up with the thread and linked the newest versions of the mod on the mc forum.

http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1588265-147-littlemaidmob-

they work fine in forge since it has support for modloader stuff. just make sure their id numbers don't conflict with anything else you added. i set mine to 127.

>> No.10489300

>>10489143
I didn't like your drawing but I like the way you think. I wish more people were like that.

>> No.10489314

fuck i want to learn how to draw now

>> No.10489345

>>10489230

He's not saying it bad per say just that it doesn't help a comment like that should be as so

>"It's so cute, I like the color and shape of her eyes face" etc.

if it's cute STATE SPECIFICALLY WHAT'S CUTE it's not that hard if it is then you don't really think it's cute you're just trying to say something nice and not stating why you feel that way, in that situation you're better off saying something like

>"I like it", "You did a good job on this picture" etc.

>> No.10489449

>>10489345
you're not cute

>> No.10489463
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10489463

Happy Valentines day!

>> No.10489473
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10489473

>>10489463

>> No.10489478

>>10484964
Is anyone interested in this?

>> No.10489481 [DELETED] 
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10489481

just drew this.

looking for constructive criticism, not trolls

>> No.10489491
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10489491

>>10489481
Suuuure you did.

>> No.10489493

>>10489481
Wow that's gr8 m8, I'd like to don8 somey ca$h, do ya've paypel m8? I'r lke ur work. N ice

>> No.10489499

>>10489491
Are you so dense that you need to give source on this retard antics?

>> No.10489509

>>10484964
i have the same intentions, i just finished sicp and i told /anus/ about it but they didn't particularly liked the idea

>> No.10489517

>>10486924
Scheme

>> No.10489525

>>10489481
No, you didn't.

>> No.10489536

>>10488306
How do you change the 'levels'? Are you talking about the Brightness?

>> No.10489545

>>10488228
Can anyone summarize this step by step? I want to try it on some of my works

>> No.10489549

>>10489517
The forced implementation of code unsuited for making video games.

>>10489509
Oh, huh, I totally forgot that I have a physical copy of that book. I should read it sometime.

>> No.10489551

>>10489536
Levels is an Image Adjustment in Photoshop and other programs. SAI doesn't have it, if you're looking for it there. You adjust the shadows or midtones bar towards 200, but leave the highlights alone.

>>10489545
I think this is about as simple as you can make it... >>10488306

>> No.10489558

>>10487656
B-but anon, wouldn't five semitones lower be some sort of B tuning? I'm confused about what's going on here!

Anyways. Are you using a heavy enough gauge? That might be the problem. Or you might be fretting too strongly, causing that slight shift in tone. Or maybe you're just fretting the wrong notes (I hope not!). I don't know, either way, there's some really nasty dissonance and out-of-tune-ness going on in there. This made the harmony part especially jarring. You should strive to fix this!

Playing wise, it's somewhat decent. You're not exactly perfectly in time all the time, but I guess there's some charm to that human-like approach. There are some sloppiness here and there, but you seem to be aware of them, so it's just a matter of practicing more.

Keep going, anon~ It's nice to see more people making music here!

>> No.10489746

>>10488211
I like, gj

Look forward to lewder artwork

>> No.10489924
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10489924

not valentine for a lot of people now but anyway.

>> No.10490120

>>10489478
What do you need people to do besides program?
Why don't you have a basic demo up?
What's your plan for making it? Language? Library? You gonna do it in a console or use graphics or what?

>> No.10490167

>>10487446
Windows a shit

>> No.10490322

>>10489924
herpes

>> No.10490437

>>10489558
Whoops, why the hell did I write drop-d... Sorry, of course you're right. It's drop-b. That mistake will haunt me all day.
About the gauge - You bet.
My string gauging is
011 - 014 - 018 - DY36 - DY52 - DY70; it's ultra heavy.
But you're probably right about the fretting. I usually play metal (hence the low tuning) and didn't want to set a standard tuning just for this test. However, since I'm probably going to keep on covering acoustic stuff (Or writing it myself), I might as well use an acoustic guitar sometime soon.
Thanks for pointing some things out, anon, feel yourself hugged. It's always great getting some serious critique.

It would be nice to hear more music made by /jp/sies.

>> No.10490582
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10490582

This is in no way /jp/ related but it's my first try, any comments would be appreciated.

It's a little loud so you might want to turn down your sound.

http://puu.sh/22Rwz

>> No.10490618

>>10490582
It's pretty, but quite short. Well, I know it's not easy to produce something long first.
But it's somehow minimalistic, right? Sounds like there are two tracks at the same time, at most.

>> No.10490648

Why continuing a drawing after long time is so hard? I can't remember anymore the original mental image...

>> No.10490651
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10490651

Just to let everyone know who's supported the project, given criticisms etc. Dizzy Hearts is out of beta and I'm going to be posting the demo later today, in roughly 12 hours or so.

So far the response has been amazing and I would have mentioned this earlier but I havn't been able to find an OC thread in a while now.

You can see my blogspot by googling Lupiesoft or Dizzy Hearts, there will be a blog post later on with the link.

>> No.10490658

>>10490648
That is where you use reference

>>10490582
It's pretty nice. A bit short though. I feel like you could remove the last five seconds and make something more awesome from there.

>> No.10490664
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10490664

>>10490618
>>10490658
Thanks guys. This is the first time I've done something from scratch so I was more experimenting and seeing what I could do with what I have available.

That said, a larger library of sounds would be nice. Any /jp/ recommended downloads?

>> No.10490671

>>10490658
How do you use reference? Do you get a bunch of pictures and use parts form each to from a whole? Do you just copy the entire thing but redraw it in your style? Something else?

>> No.10490686

>>10490651

>+18 erotic visual novel

proceed...

>> No.10490688
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10490688

it was funny in my head

>> No.10490697

>>10490664

Just keep doing that with some new VSTs. Get NI Massive and/or FM8.

>> No.10490712

>>10490658
Hey, its not that I planned to take a break of some week from it. anyway, I decided to use my usual strategy in this cases: I'll just drop it and let it rot in the hd since forever.
win-win situation.

>> No.10490717
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10490717

obligatory momiji-chocolate joke

>> No.10490726

>>10490717
Horrible you couldn't even use a nice font instead of drawing shitty letters.

>> No.10490735

>>10490664
Hum, well.
I can't really recommend anything in terms of that trance-sound you have there, since I use more traditional VSTs to make music.
But I'm quite sure you can find a lot of futuristic sets out there and adjust the frequences and stuff.

>> No.10490738

>>10490717
Ugly as HELL gun, very cute everything else. cute job. I mean, good.
>>10490726
YES EVEN THE HANDWRITING IS CUTE

>> No.10490740

>>10490717
Why would a bird girl give her chocolates? Nothing can eat chocolate and not die, except humans.

>> No.10490746

>>10490740
you guys use brain too much. are you computers or something?

>> No.10490748

>>10490664
Omnisphere

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zF8SYLjl07g

>> No.10490760

>>10490746
are you a tree or a monkey not to?

>> No.10490774

>>10490726
didn't have the time mang

>> No.10490834

>>10490760
I'm a tree monkey

>> No.10490954

>>10490760
I'm a monkey tree.

>> No.10490984

All those touhou minecraft mobs got me thinking. Does anybody do pixel art? I was thinking of starting up a minecraft server for people to do pixel art in. I've been using minecraft as my test stage for a while now and was just wondering if any other pixel art anons would enjoy something like that. If not, I'll just fade back into the nothing.

>>10489031
Anything that works with modloader works with forge because a few months ago forge added their own version of modloader into it.

>> No.10491028
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10491028

>>10490984
You're a bit late for those days.

>> No.10491029

>>10490717
Can someone explain me where that chocolate and momiji joke came from?

>> No.10491037

>>10491029
she's a dog, stupid

>> No.10491039

>>10491029
There's a cheerless story with Momiji eating some, then dying gruesomely from it during sex. Chocolate is at least toxic to dogs, I don't know about wolves though.

>> No.10491044

>>10491037
aya is a bird, then why she would eat chocolate?
birds don't eat chocolates!

>> No.10491061

>>10491028
>eins zwei drei ich zahlt dir
hehe

>> No.10491062

>>10491044
It only tastes like chocolate.

>> No.10491079
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10491079

>>10491044
jokes on you

>> No.10491104

>>10491061
"Eins, zwei, drei, ihr zählt d..."
Baumkuchen?

>> No.10491218

>>10491039
>>10491029
Chocolate is toxic. Humans have a higher tolerance for it than most animals. It will kill dogs, cats, birds, horses, etc in relatively small quantities.

>> No.10491251

No one said anything about my drawing ( ´;ω;`)

>> No.10491264

>>10491251
That means it is so bad or unattractive that no one cares.

>> No.10491268

>>10491218
Your face is toxic.

>> No.10491282

>>10491251
is >>10490688 your drawing?

>> No.10491291

>>10491282
That's not even a drawing. It's just a face pasted onto a drawing.

>> No.10491308

>>10491291
The name is "collage", you ignorant carrot

>> No.10491317

>>10491308
It's still shit and petty 'work' regardless of whatever the hell it is called. Actually, as far as I can remember of what actual collage is, that post is not even worthy of being called that.

>> No.10491325

>>10491282
It's not.

>> No.10491389

>>10491251
Not sure which is your drawing, but it probably just means you're neither awful nor are you hitting anyone's strike zone (or you are but they can't think of an eloquent response). I feel there's a fair precedent for reasonable contributions not getting any response, so I wouldn't worry about it.

>> No.10491497
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10491497

Hey guys please rate my new creation.

>> No.10491504

>>10491497
Get out.

>> No.10491538
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10491538

Tried to draw from a different angle. Criticism welcome.

>> No.10491563
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10491563

>>10491389
...you mean that if someone doesn't get any comment, it doesn't mean automatically that his drawing is shit?

>> No.10491560

>>10491538
Looks awesome but the eye looks out of place because of the thinner lines.

>> No.10491572

>>10491538
Beautiful. Would serve faithfully.

>> No.10491585
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10491585

>>10491560
Thanks.
I changed the eye a bit. I think it's a bit better.

>> No.10491591

>>10491585
I... see no difference...

>> No.10491835

>>10491585
>>10491591
Yeah, they're pretty similar.
I think its more the distance between shoulders and hips than face, though.
this is a very hard angle.

>> No.10492254
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10492254

>>10491585

It looks good to me. I don't notice anything wrong with the eye in my opinion.

>> No.10492358

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QI9WwfmXbtk

Yume Nikki ending theme
but different

Relevant to thread, right?

>> No.10492543 [DELETED] 

More music for you


chipmusic.org/phenomics/music/set-ee

>> No.10492555

>>10491585
>>10491538
she kind of looks like she's sliding on her knees at incredible speed.

>> No.10493745

>>10492555
Charisma slide

>> No.10494021

I heard one should learn drafting before they get into other parts of drawing.
Are there any tutorials and free drafting books?

>> No.10494626

Someday I'm going to contribute something to one of these OC threads. But not today.

>> No.10495337

Everybody out with partying with friends, uh?

>> No.10495981
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10495981

This gif is the loop of the first image in a video I'm constructing as tribute to pigmhall

Some of my chip music
chipmusic.org/phenomics

>> No.10496009

>>10495981
you're that same guy who kept drawing that hidamari smoking right?

>> No.10496026

>>10489143

Well fuck you then.

>> No.10496109

>>10495981
>>10496009
I would like to see more of both of these.

What is the Hidamari Smoking look like? Has it been uploaded>

>> No.10496157

>>10495981
Shit sucks, both music and gif.

>> No.10496373

>>10496157
i like his song "set free"
he's got some potential, it's just that his voice sucks

>> No.10496803

>>10495981
You're aware pigmhall can actually draw and color reasonably well, right?

Make sure you tell a good story with the video.
www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm16937508

>> No.10497663
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10497663

Winter is almost over (´・ω・`)

>> No.10497670

>>10497663
You should draw more flat lolis.

>> No.10497856

>>10497670
with dicks. either on or in them.

>> No.10497900

>>10497856
PLease don't try and make Magister do lewd things he is a gentle soul.

>> No.10497910

>>10497856
If I have to choose... In them, please.

>> No.10497914
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10497914

>>10497900
>>10497900
>>10497900

>> No.10497928

>>10497900
He wasn't so gentle when we played Melty.

>> No.10497938

Does anyone here entertain dreams of becoming a mainstream manga artist?

>> No.10497946

>>10497938
Used to. What a silly dream it was, ahaha.

;_;

>> No.10497958

>>10497938

You don't entertain dreams, you act on them. It won't just happen, you have to make it happen.

>> No.10497965

>>10497946
>folo ur dreams anon
>\JPN\ wil b wit u all da way

>> No.10497988

>>10490740
Hermit crabs can

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10498677

>>10487796
Well, here's an update. Blast away with "criticism" if you'd like.

>> No.10498683

I would draw, but I'm more unwanted than wanted here.

>> No.10498695

>>10498683
thanks for the update dude

>> No.10498730

>>10498695
Second that.
Thanks, bro.

>> No.10498749

>>10498683
Go away JADF. learn to draw before doing bestiality porn pics

>> No.10498767

>>10498677
"Update"? Guess you're not done. That's some major change there. Looks like the eyes aren't done yet.

>> No.10498796

>>10498677
Wow, that's fucking shit.

Just constructive criticism, though, so don't spray me with period blood. It's pretty funny how fucking "buttmad" you are.

>> No.10498800

>>10484834
I agree with this person.

>> No.10498810

Big deal, all you losers.

>> No.10498812

>>10498677
This.
>>10498796
But naw dude, just keep going. Looks aight.

>> No.10498824

>>10498796
Wow, that's fucking kuso.

Just constructive criticism, though, so don't spray me with period blood. It's pretty funny how fucking "baka" you are.

>> No.10498846

>>10487802
>>10498796
>>10498824
What the hell is going on here, guys.

>> No.10498880

>>10498846
Dumb people trying to be funny.

>> No.10499105

>>10498880
Agreed.

>> No.10499725

>>10499105
You're so tsundere, Anon-kun. ^_^

>> No.10500046

>>10497938
No but I do entertain practicing my art so I can draw lewd things all day every day.

And by entertain I mean grind through exercises.

>> No.10500234

>>10500046
>so I can draw lewd things all day every day
then i'm living the dream already

>> No.10500241

Is there any love for anything besides artwork anymore?

>> No.10500288

>>10500241
Like what?

To be honest, most music sucks. It honestly stinks, not just normal "Magister always draws ugly deformed titblobs that I don't like" stinks, but "Even if I liked this genre of music, it would still suck" stinks.

It's not hard to draw something kitsch though. Everything else takes more effort, particularly music which is probably the most inflammatory kind of media.

It'd be nice if people put forth the effort to make some sort of game. Even if it was shit, it's not hard to make a game that interests people. Especially because you can just make a "ripoff/parody of X with Y" type game, whereas if you tried that with art, you'd be hanged.

3D models or real works like carving (not shitty con props) would be nice too.

>> No.10500313
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>>10500288

I did make a game, I'm just being polite by not trying to post the demo here where it might considered url advertising

>>10490651

>> No.10500321

>>10500288
Not hard? Are you only saying that because a game is generally a meld of programming, art and music, so the individual components are not that difficult?

Because I think that's silly. All crafts have their difficulties.

>> No.10500447

>>10500313
That basically like pasting the url here.

>le merci face.png
Yeah, I was right to not give a fuck about your stuff.

>> No.10500460

>>10485648
Stay strong anon!

>> No.10500463

>>10500288
>(not shitty con props)
Just because I make them for cons doesn't mean I don't put a lot of time and effort into them, anon. Sorry if I'm not NEETcool enough for you.

>> No.10500479

>>10489143
You "fucking hate" positive feedback? Holy shit guys step the fuck back for a second we got a badass over here.

>> No.10500499

>>10500479
>positive feedback
Not that guy but I don't think you know what that actually is. There is a difference between something that adds nothing of actual value in terms of improvement and something that does.

Having someone telling you your picture is cute is nothing more than praise that low self-esteem, attention whores are sufficed with.

>> No.10500520
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10500520

I tried to draw casual clothing

but I feel like this is stupid

>> No.10500527 [SPOILER] 
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10500527

@magister, if you're here

i need this info for future referrence. does lily have a penis in canon, or was that picture of her with one and comments about her impregnating anon just trash talking?

this is important.

>> No.10500536

>>10500288
You didn't mention writing at all.

I'm not upset at all. In fact, that makes it much easier on me, thanks.

>> No.10500538

>>10500321
>>it's not hard to make a game that interests people

>Not hard? Are you only saying that because a game is generally a meld of programming, art and music, so the individual components are not that difficult?

No, I'm saying that because I could actually make a game where all you did was push a button and it would spit a line of text at you, and you would still play it for a little while so you be confident you'd seen most, if not all, of what it could say. A little more effort to make the text random and you could have a whole thread about it.

>> No.10500576

>>10500527
I have two separate versions in my head. I plan to make a manga out of the idea for Himari and Lily one day, and no, she wouldn't have a penis in that, but on the depraved other half, yes, she has a penis.

Also thank you for the fanart, it's really great to see that people like them enough to want to do that.

>> No.10500585

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>> No.10500604

>>10500536
>You didn't mention writing at all.
You suck at writing and even if you surpassed my expectations and it WASN'T some fanfiction level tripe, it would still be inane amateurish shit that couldn't hold anyone's attention beyond the first paragraph. It would be full of plotholes and typographical errors at best, and a nonsensical waste of time for everyone involved at worst.

More seriously though, if you think you can write, write a book. People will buy any kind of books about anything, why bother with this thread? If you don't want to write even a short novel then it should at least be a well constructed short story. Nothing that could be posted without taking up half the posts in this thread could possibly be worth reading(even if it isn't just Touhou fap fiction), unless it is a nice poem or song of some type, and even then, it'd be better off on a site along with longer works.

Not to discourage, I mean I don't know, maybe you could be like Penrobokai or something and make actually half-interesting stories that fit into a couple posts. (Which might actually be good practice; take an anime pic and write a short story about it)

Writing as a whole can be incorporated into anything else though, be it art as a comic or light novel, music as the lyrics, and game as the story. If you're going to write something that's pure text, ...actually I can't finish this because for all I know the thread would be accepting of short fanfiction "Mudo walked around the outside of the school building" type posts.

If you want to post writing, go for it. Just make sure you make it interesting enough that people will actually read the whole thing, unlike this post I just made.

>> No.10500640

ITT people pissing and complaining about what they get.
ITT entitlement faggots that do nothing but complain or demand.

>> No.10500722
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10500722

Some sketches I did.
Still learning ~ !

>> No.10500793

>>10500722
Have a loooooong way to go, son.

>> No.10500830

>>10500722
>おくぱい

>> No.10500877

>>10500830
Ahh, I wrote tsu backwards.

>> No.10500945

>>10486924
Super late response, but you should use Haskell. It might seem hard to write in it, but once you get used to it, it's wonderful.

>> No.10500958

>>10500945
Why aren't you writing your games in brainfuck? Once you see the light you will never go back.

>> No.10500965

>>10500958
Brainfuck is a hassle to write in, like assembly - you need too much to define and you're doing less actual work.

>> No.10501294

>>10500604
I always read everything.

You assumed far too little about me. That's okay, since we're on /jp/, where people think >>10500722 is acceptable to post for others to scar their eyes on. I would never, ever post any writing here. Especially not after that nightmare last year.

>> No.10501801

Aw, bump limit.

>> No.10502272

>>10501294

People who arn't that good who post their work under hostile conditions are much braver than people like you. Who's only source of happiness is to try and hurt others as much as you are hurting inside. Sad but true.

>> No.10502415

>>10502272
What are you even talking about? How am I trying to hurt others? You've made me sad now.

>> No.10502471

>>10502272
Your are talking nonsense.

>> No.10502515
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10502515

For Valentine's.

>> No.10502545

>>10502515
This is certainly the best post on the thread for me.

Is it intentional that the topmost strawberry looks like a vagina?

>> No.10502576

>>10502515
Strawberries are ugly, you're wasting your talent drawing them.

>> No.10502620
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10502620

>>10502545
>Is it intentional
You bet.

>>10502576
OK.

>> No.10502635

>>10489153
I like it.
What you use to make short gif animations?

>> No.10502642

>>10490651
You sure worked hard and improved a lot. Best of luck with the game.

>> No.10503581

>>10502642

Thanks, I appreciate all the /jp/ers who gave me their criticism along it's development. It really honed it into what it is now.

>> No.10503849

>>10490651
Is it good yet?

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