/jp/ - Otaku Culture

Hi guys, I'm back. After posting >>11608752 and >>11608997 I realized something must be very, very wrong with my art style. After all, I even got banned for it. Don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining about the policies or the moderation staff. It seems I'm only a little bit too slow to understand why original content based on a subject that has been deemed acceptable by the moderation team constitutes as a bannable offense. It took me a while to realise I wasn't banned for those reasons. While I did improve from one post to another, there were still a couple of flaws that some friendly people were able to point me out via channels outside the board, since my original content wasn't on the thread long enough to even get any replies:

- While the character is a little more fleshed out, the outfit seems too dull. It needed to be better worked on.
- I did make the main character more human, but it's not relatable enough, to anyone at all.
- I should focus a little more on the main character's personal life.

The third point isn't completely developed in this new attempt (I do show some glimpses of what's to come, a sneak peek so to speak), but I feel I dealt with the other two points well enough to try my luck one more time. I had to divide the strip in two, because the resolution was too large. I hope you don't hold that against me. As usual, thank you for all the input and I am open to input on how to improve my work.