/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>17058604
I think the problem with this one is what 4komas ARE pre-established as; as in a formula to deliver build-up and payoff/punchline. With what you're doing here, the format doesn't really make sense, though it's an interesting read as is. Also, I'd recommend going for more visual information. Rely less on text; drawings are not supposed to be mere placeholders in manga, after all.

>>17052553
>>17052594
Digging both. Really interesting composition and working values. Pls post progress.

>>17048568
It's far from good or even amateur level, but yea, hope is always there as long as you keep being dedicated.

>>17060748
The tits are way too huge for my taste but good job, man.

Also, have some sketches I did.