/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>on a date at the bowling alley
>zombie dragon gf suggested it
>im not too experienced, but im guessing she isnt either
>walk into the building
>see her
>see her wearing a custom bowling shirt with the sleeves torn off because of her boney arms
>see her wearing bowling shoes that look like they belong to a giant clown
>see her give me a nasty grin
>gulp
>we start to bowl
>her fingers (claws) don't really fit into the holes right, but she still has a comfortable grip on the ball
>her strides are practiced and her form looks solid
>fuck me
>strikes half the time
>I didnt stand a chance
>eat pizza morosely as she jokes around about me losing
>she brings up the bet that the loser has to do what the winner wants for the day
>she says she has a few ideas in mind
>back at her place that is
>bowling has never made me this hard before

Imagine a story more tragic than a zombie Dragon's

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Cg8U3HFpA8

Ok so I finally finished my first story. I tried my best to take a writefag who's name I'm not going to say just because he might not respect that (I'm sorry I didn't say your name) advice into account when writing the 3rd part.

Should start on the 40th part. I think I went a bit over board with the mouth rape but I dunno, that stuff really turns me on. Would appreciate any feed back and criticism for my first lewd. Telling me it's shit or to fuck off is also respectable.

(Also sorry for phone post. Laptop ran out of charge and I couldn't find the charger just as I finished and published the story)

http://pastebin.com/XQy4j9z2