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>>47803601
Put some clothes on

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>>47266484
No

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>>47137728
I wouldn't call it an aversion, they're just prime bully material

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>>35284563
I pretty much just don't register anything that isn't talking about cute monsters. Always disappointed in the autists here who take the bait

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>>33730718
>Shitpost with the intention of getting a nation corrupted
>Move right as the lilim and her hordes start to move in
>Get comfy in new nation after collecting Demon Lord bucks for furthering her goals
>shitpost about still virgin lim who can't stop my reign of terror on her board
Being a 50 cent party member for the demon lord sounds comfy

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>>21377908

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>>21334347
Imma bully lilim until she realizes I'm just slut for powerful monsters and bullies back

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>>21255637

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>>20994357
What's up?

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>>20692890
>D juice
I always knew Baphomet's had shit taste but I didn't think they actually drank Sunny-D

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>>20672946
I feel in danger

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>>20563735
Gave it a shot and rewrote chapter 1 of All's Fair in Love and War. With the knowledge of what happens later on in the story, I trimmed off unnecessary bits and had it begin later in the plot, ending up with under a tenth of the original chapter's size. I want to believe this makes for a better first chapter by not making it feel a chore to read and leaves some details incomplete so that it easily leads to the subsequent chapters.

Rewrite: https://pastebin.com/XChwcvG2
Original: https://pastebin.com/Raf2qHXL

Hopefully it makes the story more readable than it originally was, or wasn't.

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