/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>12829336
I agree, it reads fine for the most part. Sure, it could use another editing pass, but few VN translations couldn't. Given the speed at which Aroduc works I think he did an admirable job.

>>12829373
The thing is, there were only a couple of lines like that in places that don't matter at all, so it might have just been that he thought it would read better that way or something. Regardless, it's not accurate so I'll report on it.

Here's another one. This one in particular reads kind of poorly in context in the Japanese script so it could have been an intentional change, but then again it doesn't read all that smoothly in English either.